Reach Heaven Via Feng Shui Engineering, Drug Trade And Tax Evasion

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Mei for instance, could almost certainly form a hand the exact size, shape and smell as Shanyi's but with different fingerprints at which point it's a matter of letting him get hold of a suitably prepared used teacup.
Honestly, it wouldn't surprise me if Mei's shapeshifted forms don't have fingerprints, or have bizarre fingerprints that look abnormal and 'glitchy' the way the patterns in AI-generated art often look strange when you look at them up close.

Also, there's probably some truth to what Colombo says: that they're generally amateur killers who overlook certain details that any experienced detective will pick up on. This applies to Shanyi particularly, because smart as she is, we've already seen she's not as world-wide as she thinks she is.

Case example: because Fang Jiugui did this a while ago (in RL time):
Ahh, I'd completely forgotten that Fang had actually appeared in an interlude! I was deducing him as a character from scratch, I suppose, which is why I mentioned the bit about "what if he's a real spirit hunter pretending to be a retired spirit hunter by not going after every little thing until he's got enough clues out of you to sink a ship?"

I don't think Columbo really says that in the show; usually the police has no clue and he's the only one who spots some small detail that all other detectives explain away.
I wouldn't sum it up that way. First, he's rarely dealing with other detectives who "explain away" details of the situation; it's not unheard of but in most episodes he's not having to argue with his co-workers.

He's not purely the lone genius. On the contrary, Columbo working as part of a team is often a big part of the plot of an episode, in that he relies heavily on work done by the forensics lab and on the rest of the police force to do the legwork on some of his theories ("check every car dealership in town and see if any of them sold a 1978 Chevy Impala with green and purple polka dots last week," to make up a phony example).

Only occasionally is he paired off with other cops who are actively naysaying his theories, and a nontrivial fraction of the time when a police force member is arguing with Columbo, it's because the cop is himself the killer (this happens at least twice), or because the killer has so much political leverage that he can pull strings and interfere with the investigation (I'm pretty sure this happens at least 3-4 times).
 
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If she fully figures out that it's fingerprints he's after, Qian Shanyi might be able to cast doubt in his mind about her identity.
Yeah, but she'd need to learn about fingerprints first. Fang Jiugui certainly isn't going to tell her about them, though given her existing concerns about scents - for all she's concluded that's probably not what happened - she's probably going to try to avoid giving him access to stuff she's handled.

Honestly, it wouldn't surprise me if Mei's shapeshifted forms don't have fingerprints, or have bizarre fingerprints that look abnormal and 'glitchy' the way the patterns in AI-generated art often look strange when you look at them up close.
This seems like a very plausible possibility, and one unfortunately likely to explode in Shanyi's face. The Imperial Spirit Hunters do know there's a kitsune in the area, and Fang Jiugui personally might actually recognize kitsune shapeshifting weirdness if he sees it. He might not be an official spirit hunter now, but we also know he was one.

(Though why he no longer is, and is drunk all the time, might be a plot point we're going to hear more about very soon.)
 
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Yeah, but she'd need to learn about fingerprints first. Fang Jiugui certainly isn't going to tell her about them, though given her existing concerns about scents, for all she's concluded that's probably not what happened, she's probably going to try to avoid giving him access to stuff she's handled.
Yeah, but she's on the right track of "something on her hands might be uniquely identifiable", she just hasn't made the jump to fingerprints yet (or that fingerprints might not normally be visible but still present).

But now she has a lot of fine glassware to leave (and spot) oily fingerprints on. Now it will take just a stroke of luck to make that connection, and maybe a little bit of powder coincidentally blown onto those fingerprints.
 
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But now she has a lot of fine glassware to leave (and spot) oily fingerprints on. Now it will take just a stroke of luck to make that connection, and maybe a little bit of powder coincidentally blown onto those fingerprints.
Hmm.

On the one hand, very good point about the glassware. On the other hand, I don't think she's going to get lucky about this until everything's safely in Wang Yonghao's inner world - where the Heavens can no longer put weight on the scales.
 
But now she has a lot of fine glassware to leave (and spot) oily fingerprints on. Now it will take just a stroke of luck to make that connection, and maybe a little bit of powder coincidentally blown onto those fingerprints.

How would he see fingerprints on the glassware though? She's only handling them enough to put them into Yonghao's inner world. I don't think she's going to take them out again for any reason. Especially not where he might see them.
 
How would he see fingerprints on the glassware though? She's only handling them enough to put them into Yonghao's inner world. I don't think she's going to take them out again for any reason. Especially not where he might see them.
No, the idea is that she would see her own fingerprints (or perhaps Wang Yonghao's) on them, and perhaps observe how they become more visible when coated with dust. Fingerprints are much more visible on smooth surfaces like glass.

Almost everything's set up for her to realize that she could have been tracked via fingerprints.
 
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What is she being chased for anyway? Just abandoning her sect? That hardly seems like something worth sending an ex spirit hunter of that rank after her for
 
What is she being chased for anyway? Just abandoning her sect? That hardly seems like something worth sending an ex spirit hunter of that rank after her for

It's about sending a message. Sure, shanyi isn't worth that much. Everyone else in her position, thinking about pulling a runner and maybe stealing a lil something for themselves from the sect, or selling sect secrets, are going to have to plan around having a guy on this level hunting them down. An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure, as they say, and spending an ounce on this spirit hunter prevents another 16 runners when they see how well this worked out for shanyi.
 
Yeah, but she's on the right track of "something on her hands might be uniquely identifiable", she just hasn't made the jump to fingerprints yet (or that fingerprints might not normally be visible but still present).
Technically, she has actually clued in on fingerprints - or at least the part where the pattern of the whorls on fingers the palm can be unique enough to be an identifier.
She turned it over, and the lines on her palm caught her eye. Was that it? There was an old superstition that they could foretell your future, so perhaps they were unique enough to be a hint to her identity. But how could this help Fang Jiugui? It's not like she had left any palm prints around her sect. No, it must have been something else.
 
Chapter 79: Entangle Beasts For Richer Hands
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Gravel crunched softly under her feet. Moon shone above, framed by the branches of a neatly trimmed peach tree. The air smelled of earth, wet after a short rain, of flowers and fruits, and just a hint of smoke.

Qian Shanyi breathed in the relaxing, fresh garden air, smiling as she followed an outer disciple from the Northern Scarlet Stream sect. It was a good night to be out and about, or perhaps to relax with a book and a cup of warm tea - but she wasn't here to read.

She was here to educate Jian Shizhe, and that her planning and research took all the way until midnight was his problem, not hers. Jian Wei gave her free range of the sect, and no mention was made of it being restricted to the daylight hours.

She could even argue that it would spare Jian Shizhe some face, to not school him when there were too many other disciples snooping around through the hallways. She didn't actually care about his face, but she could certainly argue it.

As they were passing through the center of the gardens, she thought back to the appearance of Fang Jiugui, and stopped for a moment next to the same tree he studied so closely. It appeared to be… a ginkgo tree. An ordinary one, at least as far as Qian Shanyi could tell.

What in the Netherworld's name was he looking at here?

She met him briefly for the second time this evening, when she was leaving the library. She wisely requested a private room to study the books, and stuffed her ears with small balls of silk when heading out, to avoid any chance of conversation. He was talking to the postmaster when she left - though what about, she couldn't guess, as she could barely hear anything. Her own precaution working against her.

There shouldn't have been much that the postmaster could tell him about her, but that was just her guess. As long as she didn't know how he tracked her, she couldn't even begin to imagine what might or might not be important. But getting involved would have been a definite mistake - she had no time to spare for distractions.

"Honorable immortal?" the disciple called after her. He was giving her what just barely passed for a respectful stare, even with all the deep suspicion bubbling forth.

When she arrived, the sect gates were already locked - but this very disciple was on guard. He recognized her, and let her in, but such was his distrust that he did not even tell her his name. Jian Wei may have given her a dispensation - but that didn't make his whole sect trust her.

Seeing as how the feeling was mutual, she had little to complain about.

She decided to call this disciple Scar. He had one, running across his eye, though thankfully leaving it unharmed. She wondered why he didn't have it removed - not being a cultivator, the treatment would have certainly cost him, but as an outer disciple in a prestigious sect, he could surely afford it. Perhaps he thought it looked dashing, as some people did, even if Qian Shanyi didn't really agree.

Scar also informed her that Liu Yufei wanted to see her as soon as she arrived, and offered - or really, insisted - on accompanying her towards her office. Which brought them to the gardens.

Qian Shanyi turned away from the tree, shaking her head. "Nothing, Scar," she said, "Just lost in my own thoughts. Lead the way."

They reached the chambers of Liu Yufei, Jian Wei's disciple responsible for his post, only a couple minutes later. They were situated at the end of a short corridor branching off one of the main paths through the sect compound, with five beautiful doors - two on each side, and one at the very end. Each of the side doors carried a small silver name plate, one for each of Jian Wei's disciples. The one at the end seemed to belong to Jian Wei himself.

Unfortunately for them, Liu Yufei's door was locked shut, and Qian Shanyi did not feel Yufei's spiritual energy inside.

"Honorable immortal Liu asked me to bring you to her as soon as you arrived," Scar said uncertainly. He was clearly split between needing to return to his post at the gates, and feeling like he still had to keep an eye on her. Qian Shanyi just barely managed to keep herself from making a joke that perhaps she was the one who planned for Liu Yufei to be absent. "If she is not here…"

"Perhaps we should check the kitchens?" Qian Shanyi said neutrally.

"The kitchens? Why?"

"I presume the honorable cultivator Liu still requires earthly sustenance?"

It was the obvious choice, really. When she worked late, she always got a little peckish.

Fortunately for both of them, the kitchens were in the same quadrant of the sect compound, so it was a short walk. Qian Shanyi led the way this time - she already knew where they were, having asked well in advance, and Scar seemed to want to keep her in his sight at all times. Her shadow, illuminated by the light cast from his small lamp, danced across the walls of the sect, but she had more than enough to see by.

Sect kitchens were far from a single room, but rather took up an entire section of the building. Fit to cook for all the disciples at the same time, they could easily fit twenty cooks all working side by side, and had specialized rooms for baking and roasting, drying and fermenting, and extensive pantries to boot. There were hundreds of places to hide, intentionally or not - but fortunately, she heard Liu Yufei's voice as soon as they entered the outermost room.

"Dumpling, please," her quiet voice pleaded with someone, just on the edge of Qian Shanyi's hearing, "please get out of there? You'll break something."

Without the cultivator's senses, Scar had no chance of hearing it at all, and so Qian Shanyi once again led the way, headed straight for the voice. It seemed to be coming from one of the pantry rooms, way in the back.

She gave an enormous baking oven a greedy glance as she passed. What she wouldn't give to steal some of this equipment for their world fragment. Making dumplings for the two spirit hunters took her so many hours of futzing around with a fire node of the chiclotron, because it wasn't built to task.

"Fellow cultivator Liu," Qian Shanyi called out loudly just before entering the pantry, to announce her presence. "I have been informed you wanted to see me?"

She just barely caught sight of Liu Yufei swiftly rising up from her knees, before the disciple turned towards the doors, looking as if she was merely inspecting this pantry for cleanliness. Her face was a carefully sculpted mask as she looked Qian Shanyi over, with coldness in her eyes.

The pantry was, in all fairness, pristine. It was a long room, with closed cupboards covering all four walls, and nothing left out in the open except for a short ladder in one corner, and the bottom cupboard behind Liu Yufei, which was slightly ajar.

"Thank you, disciple Zhe," Liu Yufei said to Scar, who entered the room just behind Qian Shanyi. "I'll take it from here."

Scar bowed, and finally left, throwing one last suspicious glance at Qian Shanyi. Qian Shanyi returned it with a light smile and a wink. Give him something to think about during his long shift.

Returning her gaze to Liu Yufei, she was met with those cold eyes again. Not suspicious, nor outright hostile, but with a definite antipathy. Eyes of a woman crossed.

She could empathize. When she last spoke with Liu Yufei, it was only very briefly, while asking around about Jian Shizhe - and Qian Shanyi said nothing about her plans. Liu Yufei told her little, and probably put this strange loose cultivator out of her mind entirely.

And then it turned out this loose cultivator was not loose at all, and she ended up getting a talking to from Jian Wei over it. Qian Shanyi would have also been bitter, if it were to happen to her.

"Let's go to my office," Liu Yufei said, ignorant of Qian Shanyi's thoughts, and headed towards the doors.

"Are you not forgetting your dumplings?" Qian Shanyi asked, angling her head curiously. The corners of her lips twitched upwards. She noticed Liu Yufei sneak a glance at the cupboard behind her when Scar left.

Liu Yufei stopped, and narrowed her eyes at Qian Shanyi. Her lips turned into a thin line.

So much suspicion in the air these days. What happened to the trust shared between fellow cultivators?

"You heard me," Liu Yufei finally concluded, her voice flat.

Qian Shanyi nodded lightly. "I did not want to mention it in front of our junior," she said, "Perhaps I could offer my help?"

Liu Yufei sighed in exasperation, and made a vague gesture towards the back of the room. "Can you speak to cats?"

Qian Shanyi shook her head. "Not anymore than anyone else," she chuckled, heading to the cupboard. "But I may still have a trick or two up my sleeve."

Qian Shanyi kneeled in front of the cupboard, helped by Liu Yufei shining her own small lantern inside. The cupboard was completely filled with preserves in sealed clay pots, resting on top of a wide wooden slate with a handle that was meant to roll out of the cupboard on rails. Way in the back, she could see the glint of a cat's eyes, staring back at them.

Circulating her rope control technique, she slowly unspooled her rope from her waist, linked it to her glove, and made it quietly slither into the cupboard.

"Would you kindly come out?" she addressed the cat, keeping it distracted as her rope sneaked past all the pots, coming in from the side. "It's awfully late, and I doubt you'd make a good cook. How could you even hold a pan with your paws?"

The cat stayed put, up until her rope sprung at him. He tried to flee, but a mere animal was no match for spiritual energy guided by the skill of a cultivator, and the only exit out of the cupboard was blocked. In seconds, Qian Shanyi had it hogtied like a sausage, and slowly pulled it out, to the cat's muffled protests.

"Your cat," she said, handing the animal over to Liu Yufei. She kept the rope control technique going, lest it decide to flee at an opportune moment.

"It's not my cat," Liu Yufei said automatically, taking the cat from her, and turning it around to stare it in the face from up close. "The sect bought this beast to catch mice, but he instead spends more of his time sneaking into the pantries, hoping to find an open pot."

Qian Shanyi smiled. "Of course."

Liu Yufei frowned, turning back to Qian Shanyi. "You do not believe me," she stated.

"No," Qian Shanyi admitted after a momentary hesitation. "If it was merely a sect cat, I doubt you would have known his name, or been trying to get him to come out on your own. This isn't a job for an inner disciple, let alone a direct disciple of an Elder."

Liu Yufei's lips twitched downwards slightly. "I was the one who proposed we get the cats for the mice," she said haughtily. "Of course it falls to me to control them."

"Of course."

Liu Yufei pursed her lips, looking back at her cat. "You are here for Jian Shizhe?" She said, "Elder Jian asked me to observe the lesson."

Qian Shanyi nodded. She expected as much, once she heard that the woman wanted to talk. "I see," she said, "That would not be a problem, but may I ask you to do so in secret? I would prefer it if Jian Shizhe thought we were alone."

"There is a study room where I could remain behind a screen, with my spiritual energy suppressed. Is that acceptable?"

"Certainly."

"Very well." Liu Yufei said, then decisively put the hogtied cat under her arm, and headed for the doors. "But first, let me put this beast back in his den."

The room Liu Yufei led her to was one of the lecture rooms for the sect. It was square, about ten meters long, and something of a dais, a quarter of a meter tall going all the way across the room in the back, where the teacher was supposed to sit, elevated above the students. There was a short table as well, and two dozen pillows, arranged in rough rows.

The dais was framed by two paper screens, hiding entrances to a pair of side rooms. They were painted with murals of birds flying through a peach grove, which was just about the only spot of decoration in the entire room. Everything else was plain wood. Utilitarian, but boring.

It's good to keep the students focused, I suppose.

Qian Shanyi strolled right in, put the tea tray she brought from the kitchens down on the ground, and headed for the small table, lifting it up. Annoyingly, its legs were asymmetric - shorter on one side, built to fit the dais the teacher was supposed to sit at. She pulled it into the middle of the room, and stuffed a pair of pillows under the legs until it seemed just about even to her. Fortunately, the pillows seemed fairly tough, and so the table did not wobble too much.

Jian Shizhe was proud to a fault, and would never truly respect her no matter what she did. Sitting physically above him on top of it would just annoy him all the more. Better to put them on an even level, at least to start with.

Kicking the rest of the pillows towards the walls, she dropped one on each side of the table, and turned back to Liu Yufei, who was watching her from the doorway. "This will do," Qian Shanyi said. "I am ready for the lesson."

"Should we head back to Jian Shizhe's quarters?"

Quarters. What a word. I only had a small room.

"Please."

The woman stayed cold, distant and perfectly professional throughout, even if Qian Shanyi could tell she appreciated her help with extracting the cat. No smalltalk, with curt responses to her questions - only as much information as she requested, and no more. Any other time, Qian Shanyi couldn't have held herself back from poking a bit of fun - but today, she had other things on her mind.

Jian Shizhe. Fang Jiugui. Stuck between a demon beast and a demonic cultivator, truly.

Whether Liu Yufei picked this room deliberately because of its closeness, Qian Shanyi couldn't say - but the quarters of Jian Wei's disciples were only a short walk away. Liu Yufei went into her own "quarters" briefly to drop off the "sect" cat, just before showing Qian Shanyi the study room. Now they stopped in front of the door just opposite hers - that of Jian Shizhe. Instead of knocking, Liu Yufei reached for one of a few red tassels hanging next to the door, and Qian Shanyi heard a bell ring somewhere inside.

A minute passed in silence, before Qian Shanyi heard quiet shuffling, the click of the lock, and saw an unfamiliar face open the door. A man in his fifties, squinting at them in the light of a small oil lantern. He was dressed in the robes of an outer sect disciple, though the ornamental pattern on them was subtly different.

"Disciple Lai, this is fellow cultivator Qian Shanyi," Liu Yufei said, motioning to her. "She is here at elder Jian's orders, as an instructor for Jian Shizhe."

The little prick even has live-in servants…

Liu Yufei surely had some servants as well. Part and parcel of being a direct disciple to a sect Elder, Qian Shanyi supposed.

The servant's name, at least, was familiar. Wang Yonghao spoke to him before the duel, though he said little about the man himself.

"The young master had already retired for the night," Lai said uncertainly, looking between the two of them. "I am not sure -"

"I am afraid this training cannot wait," Qian Shanyi cut him off. "Please wake junior Shizhe up."

She savored the words as she said them. Junior Shizhe. Unquestionably correct, since she was to be the teacher, yet also subtly deprecating to him, because her realm was lower. Just perfect.

Lai bowed after a short pause. "Of course, honorable immortals. I will do so right away."

"And I will take my leave," Liu Yufei said, bowing to Qian Shanyi. "I am sure honorable cultivator Qian could find her way back."

She handed Qian Shanyi her lantern and left, without waiting for a reply. Heading to their lecture room, to hide and observe their lesson.

At least this one trusts me enough to leave me alone.

Qian Shanyi hung the small oil lantern off her belt. "May I come in?" she asked Lai. "I would prefer not to wait in the corridors."

Lai nodded, opening the door wider, and stepped aside.

The room beyond was a small guest room. There were two other doors - one for Jian Shizhe's bedroom, where Lai headed right away, and the other perhaps for his own. A collection of taxidermied demon beast heads hung on one of the walls, an impressive head of a river dragon at the top framing the set like a crown of a king. Just below it was a tea table, different teas sitting in a disgustingly beautiful redwood box, surrounded by expensive china. The floor was covered in a carpet so thick that the pillows next to the table sunk fully into it.

Why do you even need pillows? This is excessive.

Qian Shanyi stepped around the room, looking it over. She pulled the curtain on one of the windows aside - it led into the gardens. The view was like something out of a fable.

Of course.

If she was being frank, she simply felt jealous. Her entire room, back at her sect, was half the size of just this guestroom.

A small surprise came from a small shelf next to the tea table. Among the various trinkets, there was a row of books, about two dozen altogether.

I wouldn't have taken Jian Shizhe for a reader.

Out of curiosity, she stepped over to it, and glanced over the titles. Imperial History, a shortened volume - a common enough sight. Demon Beast Index, of course. Dueling Codex, even more obviously.

It all seemed very conventional, but one of the tomes caught her eye, and she pulled it out. It had a few scuff marks, and creases on the spine - and wasn't standing in the row of other books, but rather was simply placed on top.

"Immortal Cultivation And The Collapse Of Imperial Virtue". Some daoist text? It doesn't look like a cultivation manual.

It was a little improper to be snooping around, but she doubted Jian Wei would mind, so… Qian Shanyi opened it, took a seat, and started to skim. It seemed to be a collection of articles, probably compiled together from a letter journal, talking about the reign of emperor Li. Each one was a rambly mixture of references to various scholars, citations from the late emperor, and strange hypotheticals.

Reading between the lines, the author claimed that cultivation in general and Empire specifically had been declining ever since, due to something having to do with the Shui Gui, reformation, and sword-carrying women turning all cultivators into wimps.

What utter schlock.

Qian Shanyi slipped the book into her bag. Shlock it might be, but it was useful schlock. Just another piece to the frustrating puzzle that was Jian Shizhe.

The man himself did not leave her to wait much longer. Soon, the door to his bedroom flew open, and he stepped through. He looked better than the last time she saw him - fresh set of robes, clean hair, hands no longer twitching randomly from a stimulant overdose. Rested enough, after his sleep.

His eyes immediately snapped to her, and his face, already set into a perpetual scowl, started to grow red. She heard his teeth grind together, right hand clutching tightly into a fist, fingers going white. The rest of his body even shook slightly. All the fury he showed in the duel, all the rage that got temporarily slapped out of him by Jian Wei was right back.

But there was more. At this point, Jian Shizhe was like an open book to her. The fury was partly a mask, worn over his wounded pride and disappointment. Sharp thorns of humiliation grew straight through it, competing for space with the choking vines of betrayal and the false flowers of self-righteousness.

And self-hatred, bubbling deep within, like sap within a demonic pitcher.

But was it there all along, or is it new? This is the real question.

She could guess at the lines of thought his mind had taken. After the duel, once he awoke, he would have tried to find excuses for his clear failure. He would have thought of Jian Wei, who took her side. And then he would have turned inwards.
It was a common enough pattern, after a traumatic loss. Within a week, his thoughts would have begun to settle, to crystallize into a jaded picture. She caught him at a perfect moment - still early on to change the way they settled. With any hope, into a more productive pattern.

Jian Shizhe said nothing, even if etiquette called for him to greet her. Jian Wei ordered him to take instruction, and he knew better than to disobey directly, but that was all she'd get. If she tried to teach him like this - it would be no use.

Qian Shanyi rose, and greeted him first, with a short formal bow. The student was supposed to greet the teacher - but if she had to wait for him to do so, they'd be here all night. "Junior Shizhe," she said. He returned the bow, pain written all across his face.

"Please follow," Qian Shanyi said, and headed for the doors, not looking back.

She heard footsteps, which was the important part.

It's time to get my tools and weed out this little mental garden.
 
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It all seemed very conventional, but one of the tomes caught her eye, and she pulled it out. It had a few scuff marks, and creases on the spine - and wasn't standing in the row of other books, but rather was simply placed on top.

"Immortal Cultivation And The Collapse Of Imperial Virtue". Some daoist text? It doesn't look like a cultivation manual.

It was a little improper to be snooping around, but she doubted Jian Wei would mind, so… Qian Shanyi opened it, took a seat, and started to skim. It seemed to be a collection of articles, probably compiled together from a letter journal, talking about the reign of emperor Li. Each one was a rambly mixture of references to various scholars, citations from the late emperor, and strange hypotheticals.

Reading between the lines, the author claimed that cultivation in general and Empire specifically had been declining ever since, due to something having to do with the Shui Gui, reformation, and sword-carrying women turning all cultivators into wimps.

What utter schlock.

Qian Shanyi slipped the book into her bag. Shlock it might be, but it was useful schlock. Just another piece to the frustrating puzzle that was Jian Shizhe.
...Is this motherfucker listening to what is essentially Andrew Tate?
 
Reading between the lines, the author claimed that cultivation in general and Empire specifically had been declining ever since, due to something having to do with the Shui Gui, reformation, and sword-carrying women turning all cultivators into wimps.
That is a shocking level of cowardice for a cultivator. "Only a weak and unmanly man would be defeated by a woman, so it is all these women wandering around beating up men that is making them unmanly and weak. Clearly the only solution is to ban women from cultivating so they won't be able to beat us up anymore and we'll be able to defend the empire with our restored manliness and manly strength."
 
That is a shocking level of cowardice for a cultivator. "Only a weak and unmanly man would be defeated by a woman, so it is all these women wandering around beating up men that is making them unmanly and weak. Clearly the only solution is to ban women from cultivating so they won't be able to beat us up anymore and we'll be able to defend the empire with our restored manliness and manly strength."
We do know from Qian's lovely "housewifery useful notes" cultivation manual that this seems to have been a fairly common view in certain historical times and places, which... hooray, fantasy sexism.
 
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The lecture room was exactly as she had left it. A table in the middle, two cushions, a simple tea set, and everything else kicked off to the wayside, where it belonged.

Qian Shanyi glanced at the paper screens - but if Liu Yufei was here, she couldn't feel her. As expected, if she suppressed her spiritual energy. She couldn't check, not without tipping off Jian Shizhe - she simply had to trust her.

"Sit", she ordered, gesturing to the pillow on one side of the table. Without looking back, she sat down herself, put her bag at her side, unclipped her sword and placed it on her right. She set the small lantern down on the table, took out her writing set, and started to quietly grind up ink.

Jian Shizhe stopped at the doors instead of entering. She couldn't look up, not without undermining her confident image - but she saw his reflection in the edge of her ink plate, warped by the curved surface. One of his hands was gripping the doorframe, and she heard the wood groan slightly.

But he knew she was acting with Jian Wei's full authority. He couldn't defy it, not this openly. And so, dragging his feet like they were made of lead, he did just as he was ordered.

"You may read, write, listen or talk," she said neutrally, not raising her eyes from grinding up ink, once he sat down across from her. "That is all."

"Talk?" Jian Shizhe spat out. "Talk about what, you witch?"

"Whatever you like, or nothing at all." she replied indifferently, still not looking up.

Jian Shizhe glared at her, but resorted to simply sitting in silence. She did not mind this - this was, in fact, her true goal all along.

She couldn't teach the man while he was this furious. Anything she said would simply bounce right off his broad forehead, no matter how true it was. But the brighter the fury, the faster it burned out, the mind itself growing tired from the tension. She would give him an hour to cool off, before proceeding further.

Having finished with the ink, she placed the ink plate so that she could observe Jian Shizhe's expression without looking up, if she needed to - and reached into her bag, pulling out the same novel she was reading in the morning. She still had a good two thirds to get through.

The minutes passed quickly - for her - but must have felt agonizingly slow for Jian Shizhe. He fumed much like an old, rusted furnace, his flame sputtering out before he forced the scowl back on his face through sheer force of will. He stayed silent all throughout, but for an occasional quiet groan.

And then he closed his eyes, and Qian Shanyi felt a subtle change in the recirculation of spiritual energy around his body.

Well, that just won't do.

She needed Jian Shizhe to be bored and a little bit frustrated, not calm and self-assured. A bored person would talk with just about anyone, if only to have something to do. Having him enjoy his meditation was simply not an option.

With a pair of fingers, she reached into a small pocket she sewed on the inside of her sleeve, and drew out a small stone. Flicking her fingers, she sent it flying at Jian Shizhe's forehead.

The stone bounced off his spiritual shield, and Jian Shizhe's eyes snapped open in confusion, tracing its path down to the table, where it bounced twice with a quiet tink-tink before coming to a stop. The eyes turned back to her, his face once again flushed red, teeth bared.

She calmly turned over a page. Halfway through, and the novel had finally reached the city of eels. This author really liked to take things slow.

"How dare -"

"I don't recall ordering you to meditate," Qian Shanyi cut him off, not looking up from her book.

"You have not ordered me anything!"

"No," Qian Shanyi said patiently. "I said that you may read, write, listen or talk." She looked up, meeting Jian Shizhe's eyes. "Is meditation talking?"

He glared at her, lips twitching. She kept her gaze level, simply waiting for an answer. Jian Shizhe was stuck with her, with no way to get out of his obligations. He couldn't even challenge her to a duel, now that his sword was taken away. She could sit here all night.

"No," he finally spat out the word as if it was a poisoned pill.

"Well there you go," she said, going back to her reading. "Please continue with your assignment."

Another half an hour passed in relative silence. Qian Shanyi kept eyeing Jian Shizhe through her ink plate, just in case he started to meditate again - and it was a good thing that she did. This time, the change in the circulation of his spiritual energy was so slight it would have escaped her notice, but his eyes had closed all the same.

Quite talented, are we?

Another stone sailed directly into his forehead. This time, he didn't flinch, and simply let it bounce off. Didn't even react, kept his eyes closed. Challenging her.

Qian Shanyi sighed. Oh well, she tried to be kind. There was only one response to a cultivator's challenge.

She reached over to her sword, and unsheathed it in a single motion, slashing at Jian Shizhe's neck, spiritual energy pouring freely off its surface.

Jian Shizhe's eyes flew open and he rolled backwards, leaping up onto his feet and backing up against the wall. His hands were raised in a guarded stance in front of him, feet planted securely, eyes darting around the room.

Ready for the fight that would never come.

"Did I order you to get up?" Qian Shanyi asked lazily, sheathing her sword back at her side. She didn't even move from where she sat.

"You -" Jian Shizhe blanched at her words. "You tried to kill me!"

"I do not try to kill, I succeed," she noted lazily, picking her book back up, and gesturing with it towards him. "Unlike you, junior Shizhe. No, I merely woke you up, since you seem to have dozed off again. Now once more - what did I order you to do?"

Jian Shizhe glared at her, but slowly lowered his hands. Perhaps he finally realized that if she wanted to kill him, she wouldn't have made her sword shine like the sun to his spiritual energy senses. "To read, write, listen or talk," he admitted grudgingly.

"He remembers," Qian Shanyi said, lowering her eyes to the page. "Now please continue with your assignment without any more distractions."

"Will you prohibit me from breathing too?"

"You may breathe. But I will not force you, if you would prefer to stop."

"This - this is nonsense!" Jian Shizhe burst out. "What assignment is this?!"

"One even a child can manage, and yet you are failing. I suppose I shouldn't be surprised that Jian Wei had to ask for my help, if the problem is this advanced."

"You are just trying to humiliate me again!" Jian Shizhe said, stalking back over to the table. He didn't sit down, glaring at her from up high. "Read what? Talk about what? I will not waste my time sitting in a dark room for hours!"

This wasn't quite what she was aiming for, but she'd take it. He was asking questions now, which meant he already accepted her implicit framing, if subconsciously. That was the first and most crucial step. If he wanted to know what the assignment was, he could no longer argue that it had to be completed at all.

"Aaaah, so you merely want me to pick a topic?" she said, and put down her book, looking up at him with faked interest. "Very well. Answer me this: why did you lose our duel?"

Jian Shizhe's scowl faltered at the reminder, his defiant posture sagging. His breathing deepened, as he fought with himself - but then he stood up straight and lifted his head up high.

Qian Shanyi would have had to crane her neck to look into his face. Instead, she busied herself with pouring herself a cup of tea.

"To cultivate is to ascend into Heavens through our strength and tenacity," Jian Shizhe said, "You won because -" his voice faltered for a moment, before he forged on ahead, "because you were stronger than me, and -"

Surprising, that he would state it openly, but also encouraging, in some sense. If his belief truly was deep, it gave her something to work with.

Even if it was all nonsense.

Qian Shanyi sighed in exasperation, giving him her most disappointed look. Like a mother whose fully-grown son had just shat himself in public. "Childish nonsense of the highest caliber," she said coldly. "In terms of overall capability, you are obviously stronger than me. Try again."

Jian Shizhe stepped back in shock. "What?!"

"Sit down if you want to ask me questions," Qian Shanyi snapped. The last thing she needed was for the idiot to start walking around and see Liu Yufei hidden behind one of the paper screens. "Did you not hear me, or are you deaf as well as childish? I said I am weaker than you. You are in the peak refinement stage, while I am just barely in the high refinement stage, if that, with an unstable foundation. I had severe injuries, less resources, and I won't even speak about your impressive skill with that demon beast. It is idiotic to look at the two of us and conclude I was actually stronger than you. So try. Again."

She went back to her book. He tried glaring at her, to get his rage back up, but as soon as he engaged with her question, he was already caught in her trap. For someone who worshiped strength, having her admit her weakness so openly and without hesitation must have been incomprehensible.

Confusion. A poisoned needle stuck in his mind, one that would scratch and scratch until he got it out. Stuck there by his own hand, in response to his own question, it would be even more effective.

He sat down. A small confession, to get his answers, surely. Yet in doing so, he was ceding yet more control to her.

"Fine," Jian Shizhe said bitterly after a couple of minutes. "You only won because you cheated. Is this what you wanted to hear? That I am forced to swallow this injustice because of my uncle?"

Qian Shanyi put her book down again, boggling at him. "Cheated? Sweet mercy, this is even more idiotic than thinking I am stronger than you."

"You dare deny it? You planted that rope in advance."

"Of course I did. Just the evening before, in fact."

Jian Shizhe's hands curled into fists again. "So you do admit it? If not for it, I would have won!"

"Admit what?" Qian Shanyi asked, shrugging performatively.

To his credit, it seems that after getting infuriated by her for two dozen times in a row, Jian Shizhe had finally learned how to manage a fraction of his anger. "That you cheated by planting the rope!" he said, definitely not screaming, even if his voice was high.

"Cheated?" Qian Shanyi snorted dismissively. "Preposterous. The very sentiment is nonsensical. Junior Shizhe, you have fought in well over sixty duels - how could you possibly claim such a thing?"

Perhaps she was too quick in giving him credit for finally learning control. His face was getting red again.

"Oh very well, I will explain," she said, relenting. "To say that I cheated would mean that I have violated some rule, or at least an informal agreement between the two of us. So what rule did I violate?"

Jian Shizhe breathed in deeply, his red receding to a mere pink. "It was a dishonorable trap -" he began.

"Nonsense," Qian Shanyi cut him off sharply. "There is no rule against preparing the grounds of the duel, nor could there be, because there are no standard grounds. It is completely acceptable for the challenged duelist to pick a spot that is better suited to their abilities. This is, indeed, intentional, as you are well aware - after all, they are generally the weaker party. You will not find a word against it - not in that pathetic Dueling Codex, nor anywhere else." She ran a hand through her hair, to let her words hang a bit. "Of course, there are limits, and both duelists can inspect the field before the duel starts, adjust it how they'd like, perhaps change location entirely, or at least plan around the problems. Or do I speak falsely?"

Qian Shanyi stared Jian Shizhe down until he was forced to shake his head. "No, but -"

"But nothing," she cut him off again. Another skill he lacked - how to keep talking even as the other person did, until they would shut up. "You could have done so and found my rope - but you rejected the offer. This is not 'cheating' - this is your own foolishness. By rejecting it you have clearly stated that whatever was in the square at the start of the duel was completely fine with you. You, of course, had no way of knowing the rope was there. Nor was it there by accident, or due to bad weather. I put it there deliberately in order to, yes, trap you. But so what? You have nobody to blame but yourself."

She was bending the truth a bit. Even if there were no strict rules, there was still an unstated understanding, and what she did was well in the gray zone. If they were normal cultivators, then it would have made the others look askance at her. But as it was, he'd have to swallow it.

Qian Shanyi lowered her eyes, going back to her book. Bad answers deserved none of her attention. "Of course, the same goes in reverse," she continued in a bored tone, as if discussing the weather. "It was entirely possible that you had planted a hundred crystal bombs all over the square, but I decided to be gracious and to give you some face, and did not inspect it either. But it seems you were too cocky to plant any traps. Which brings me back to my question. Why did you lose the duel?"

"Then what do you want me to say?" Jian Shizhe burst out again, but she could see that his tone had changed. For all that he was quick to anger, he wasn't truly stupid. Once she grabbed him by the neck and rubbed him in his own failures, he mostly didn't deny reality - and she just shattered a pillar beneath the house of lies, justifications, rationalizations and self-deceptions he had doubtlessly been building in his mind ever since he woke up. "That I should have seen through your lies? That I should have known you were sent by my uncle?"

"What do I want you to say?" Qian Shanyi said, raising her eyes and mirroring his confusion back at him. "My, my, junior, that is a different question entirely." She scratched her head, pretending to be in deep thought, even if she had already planned this all well in advance. "Well, thanking me for saving your life would be a good start."

"What?!"

More confusion. A second needle in his mind, this one primed to explode.

Qian Shanyi gave him a flat, emotionless stare. "I see that you still do not truly comprehend your situation," she said, pursing her lips. "Perhaps this will help clear things up."

Qian Shanyi reached into her bag, and brought out a large tome, one and a half fists thick and as long as her entire forearm. Its cover was wooden, with thick metal bands going around the outside rim. A grim book, with an aura of blood to those who knew of it.

Some said the metal was there to resist some punishment, should the book be brought out in the grimmest weather. But Qian Shanyi thought it was just there to remind any hand that held it of the sheer weight of what it represented.

Most cultivators hoped to never see this book in their entire life. Large metal letters on the cover glinted slightly in the lamplight, blunt and unquestionable, like the sword of an executioner that tended to accompany it.

It was the Demonic Cultivator Act.

She tossed it lightly onto the table, making sure the title faced Jian Shizhe, and in the silence of the room it landed like a clap of thunder, spilling some of her ink. For all of Jian Shizhe's bluster, for all his rage at her, he still pulled back, eyeing the book as if it was a snake with vilest venom.

"I left several bookmarks for you," Qian Shanyi said casually, going back to her book. "Make sure to study them carefully."

"Is that your plan?" Jian Shizhe said warily, "To try and scare me?"

"I was hired to educate you and that is exactly what I am planning to do," Qian Shanyi responded patiently, finally flipping onto the next page. With all the distractions Jian Shizhe kept giving her, she had to re-read each paragraph twice.

Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Jian Shizhe pick up the tome, and open it, slowly flipping to her first bookmark. He read it slowly, and for the briefest of moments, she held some faint hope.

Then he scowled. "What does this -" he said, pushing the book back towards her. "I had it under control!"

"Really now," she said, not looking up.

"Of course I did!"

"It didn't seem controlled when I blew out half its carapace."

"Oh what would you know about glass shamblers?" he sneered. "This is my legacy, the manual of my sect, written by my father -"

Father, huh. Should have expected as much.

Qian Shanyi raised her eyes to the heavens. "Alright," she interrupted him. "I believe you."

Confusion, again, plain in his eyes. It was important to keep this dance, keep him just frustrated enough that he would keep thinking, keep biting more of her bait, but not so frustrated he would blow her off completely.

"What?" she said, raising an eyebrow at him. "I do believe you. As far as people in your sect have told me, it was the largest glass shambler your sect had ever captured. Clearly you possess great talent at rearing demon beasts. I have already admitted you were stronger than me, have I not? Why should I doubt your words when you say it was under control?"

"Then why -"

"Why bring the DCA? Because you didn't finish reading my bookmark." She pushed the tome back towards him with one finger. "Tell me -," she said, speaking slowly and clearly, "if an untrained demon beast escapes from your control due to the actions of another cultivator, and this leads to the deaths of ordinary people, which of you is at fault?"

"It was -"

Qian Shanyi nodded quickly. Stop him before he gets going. "Controlled, yes. But not trained. It couldn't be, not in three days, and you know this as well as anyone else. Your control, as far as I understand, rested on those talismans stapled to the demon beast's body. It stands to reason that if I were to remove those talismans, the control would vanish no matter your talent. Is this correct?"

Jian Shizhe scoffed at her. "This is semantics."

Qian Shanyi responded with one of her gravest stares. "Answer the question, junior."

"Yes. But -"

"But nothing, again," she cut him off, leaning across the table. "If I were to remove those talismans through any means, and the beast were to go on a rampage, who would be at fault, according to the law, junior Shizhe?"

She tapped the open tome with a pair of fingers. She would have slapped the table, but with the pillows under it, it would have looked a bit pathetic.

More scowling, more denial. "I had spares -"

"How many?"

He leaned forward too, still defiant. Their faces came quite close. "Enough."

Deny, deny, deny…

Qian Shanyi exhaled in exasperation. Still he didn't see what she was pointing at. Perhaps she was wrong, and he really was just plain old stupid.

She leaned back, picked up her tea cup, and took a quiet sip, to clear her throat. "Junior Shizhe," she began quietly, her voice cold, twinkling like clear ice on a sunny day. "Let me be clear. That you are still alive at all is frankly a minor miracle, and is down to your immense, Heaven-defying luck, and Jian Wei's incredible influence."

She briefly wondered what Liu Yufei would think of her after this speech. She planned it before she knew the woman would be listening, and she wasn't about to change her point, but still, she wondered. When she blew her off - was it because she didn't see the problems with Jian Shizhe, or because she didn't want to speak of them to an outsider?

"Your humiliating loss in this duel was not a coincidence," Qian Shanyi continued. "It was not an accident. It was not due to me cheating, or you having a bad day. It was a statistical inevitability caused by your behavior, just as inevitable as the fact that a man who keeps bashing his head into a wall will get a concussion. However, because of sheer bloody luck, you happened to insult me, instead of a particularly cranky spirit hunter. And because of my immense respect for Jian Wei, I chose not to kill you even if I had a dozen different opportunities to do so."

Jian Shizhe folded his hands on his chest, but she could see that her words shook him, if only a fraction.

"I'll drop the pretense and speak clearly," Qian Shanyi continued, "As your senior sister, I think that when you say you had 'enough' spares, you are lying. I think that when you went into the glass fields, you brought enough talismans to train a normal glass shambler, but couldn't resist your greed - and as a result, you almost ran out. And I think that you are fully aware that had I targeted your talismans, it would not have been enough."

This was a guess, but one she felt confident in making. The talismans had to be expensive, and would have been rationed carefully - and of course, the shambler breaking out was just the sort of thing Wang Yonghao's luck would orchestrate.

Qian Shanyi put down her tea cup, and leaned forwards, poking Jian Shizhe in his chest from across the table. "You brought an untrained spirit beast to a duel," she hissed. "I would have been well within my rights to do whatever it took to win - and if that resulted in you being declared a demonic cultivator, then neither the empire nor your sect could have said a word crosswise! I could have set you up, Jian Shizhe. I chose not to."

"Of course a dishonorable wretch like you would -"

"And if I did," Qian Shanyi cut him off, continuing her point, "then at best Jian Wei would have executed you himself. At worst, you would have been slaughtered like a mongrel, a rabid dog, and exiled from your sect - if only in spirit. Your body would have been burned, bones packed up into a crate like so much pottery and shipped off to an imperial catacomb, where a hole would be your final resting spot. Not even a grave, nothing to remember you by. Just a number in a rarely consulted catalog, no different from a pot of pickles."

She brought her hands together in a begging gesture, putting them up against her nose. "I need you to understand this, junior Shizhe," she pleaded. "I am not here to humiliate you, even if you may feel humiliated. You are dangling over the very edge of the abyss by a single bloody finger, and I am the last person in this entire town who is still willing to offer you a hand to pull you back up. You can take my hand and survive, or you can slap it away and fall right in. It's your choice."

That was, of course, a lie. Humiliating the prick was the highlight of her day, but the point stood.

Yet Jian Shizhe did not believe her. She could see it even before she finished speaking - he had nothing to argue with, but he still didn't believe her.

He felt safe, after all. He always felt safe, comfortable, cared for. Sure, she painted dreadful images of slaughter - but what did that matter to him? Young masters didn't get declared demonic cultivators. It wasn't real, it couldn't be.

"Are you done congratulating yourself?" he said, echoing her thoughts. "Last person in the city? You humiliated me, and you dare try to pretend to be my friend?"

Friend? Ha! You wish.

She had to show him how exposed he truly was.

Qian Shanyi nodded, pursing her lips. "Very well," she said, "Name one other person who would willingly help you."

"Rui Bao."

Qian Shanyi couldn't help but laugh. She didn't expect that. "Honorable cultivator Rui Bao was the one who told me how to kill your glass shambler as soon as we saw it," she said, shaking her head sadly. "He told me to target the brain, and without his advice, I do not think I would have won."

Jian Shizhe reeled back as if she slapped him. "You - you lie."

This, too, she didn't expect. This much of a reaction - was he his only lasting friend?

Qian Shanyi shrugged again. "You can ask him yourself if you do not believe my word. Wang Yonghao was there as well. He saw the danger immediately, and tried to plead with me to abort the duel entirely, or at least stall, to let the people evacuate."

"This is impossible," Jian Shizhe said, disbelief flooding his voice. "He was my second. He asked to be my second."

"Did he tell you that your glass shambler was a danger to civilians, or that I had a plan for how to kill it?"

Jian Shizhe's stared off into space. "He - he asked if I could contain it."

"Junior Shizhe," Qian Shanyi said, each word a stamp, a verdict. "That is not what I asked, so let me rephrase it. Did or did not honorable cultivator Rui Bao warn you that you were a hair's breadth away from violating the Demonic Cultivator Act?"

"No."

"Perhaps honorable cultivator Rui Bao simply didn't know the exactitude of the law, yet the danger was still obvious to anyone with a pair of eyes to see. It was certainly obvious to him. Did he explicitly warn you of the danger to the crowds, of the possibility of me sabotaging your talismans?"

Jian Shizhe looked away, not answering. He seemed to be slowly folding in on himself, like a punctured paper balloon leaking air, all his previous defiance simply vanishing.

Qian Shanyi gave him a moment, then cleared her throat. "Junior Shizhe -"

"No," he replied, glaring at her again, but with only a fraction of his previous anger. Step by step, she guided him to the inevitable conclusion.

"Then it seems Rui Bao doesn't really care if you live or die," Qian Shanyi concluded. "Who else?"

This one sentence cracked something in Jian Shizhe. He took a shaky breath, and started to pour a cup of tea of his own. His face was graying, eyes hollow. Finally, he started to see.

"Is it truly nobody?" Qian Shanyi said after a couple minutes of sullen silence, "How sad."

"What does that matter?" Jian Shizhe suddenly burst out, all his previous fury coming back with a vengeance. "I do not need Rui Bao! I do not need the help of weaklings and worthless degenerates. The road of cultivation is a lonely one! The others are jealous of my position, and they are scared of my skills - as they should be! How could you expect a pack of pathetic hyenas to help a human being?"

It was to be expected. Any animal, finding itself in a corner, would try to find some way out - and for a human, that often meant fooling themselves, grasping at the last vestiges of self-assurance.

"In fact," Jian Shizhe grinned madly. "You are much the same. You are afraid of my uncle, aren't you? That is all that respect of yours amounts to, in the end. Fear. You wouldn't have dared kill me, or you would have been killed yourself!"

Qian Shanyi raised an eyebrow in surprise. She didn't expect Jian Shizhe to bring up Jian Wei, for he clearly did not respect the building foundation cultivator. Admitting that he relied on someone else's strength - it would be a crack in his previous beliefs. Even the very thing he said was already contradictory - if the others were really scared of Jian Wei, then they weren't scared of Jian Shizhe.

But it was only a small crack. She had to widen it.

"I admit that your uncle also cares about your life," she said, reaching into her bag again.

"So you admit it!"

"- but it doesn't matter," she continued, drawing a second book, and sliding it across the table. A plainer tome - dark brown cover, with a bright red title. Imperial History, tome thirty-one. "You said that respect is simply fear? Junior Shizhe, in that case, you have forgotten to respect the Empire."

His arrogant smile faltered slightly.

"In the tenth year of Zhang," she explained, gesturing to the book, even if she doubted he would open it. "There was a similar incident with the Black Still Pools Divination sect. If you would have read my bookmarks in the Demonic Cultivator Act until the end, you would have found the case reference - but Imperial History has a fuller story, as usual. Young Master of a sect had been playing with his new demon beast, a three-headed lion, when he had been asked for a spar by a fellow disciple. While they were busy, the demon beast broke out, and killed twenty six ordinary people, wounding another five dozen."

She saw him realize where she was going. But he did not speak up, and so she simply forged ahead.

"In the investigation afterwards," she continued, "the young master was found culpable, and not only culpable, but so incredibly negligent that he was declared a demonic cultivator on the spot. Even if he did not order the demon beast to slaughter innocents, he still brought it into the sect compound, into the middle of a populated town, and left it without supervision - this is no different to leaving a primed crystal bomb in the city square. Unfortunately, his Elder refused to execute him. What do you suppose happened next?"

She was giving the driest possible retelling, a summary of a summary. Perhaps she should have read some passages from the history book out loud, descriptions of the victims. It was an important case, though rarely known - she herself didn't recall it without the reference.

Jian Shizhe didn't answer her, and after giving him a moment, she shrugged lightly. "The sect was declared to be a demonic sect, of course," she said, "and slaughtered, as it should have been. One quarter of the disciples foolishly stood together with the Elder and died, while three quarters have scattered to the winds, forswearing any association with it. At the time, the Black Still Pools Divination sect had well over two hundred inner disciples - three times what your sect has. Now tell me this, Junior Shizhe: if Jian Wei had to choose between you and the life of his entire sect, what would he choose?"

Jian Shizhe swallowed. He didn't speak, but his answer was clear, even if he wouldn't admit it out loud. His own disrespect of the man would dictate the answer.

Another pillar in his mind, shattered to pieces.

"But it is curious to me that you say respect is nothing but fear," Qian Shanyi said, deciding to move to a different topic. Let those thoughts of his stew for a while. She reached into her bag one final time, and drew out the Immortal Cultivation And The Collapse Of Imperial Virtue she had taken from his room. "I happened to peruse your books while you were getting dressed," she explained. "This is based on the philosophy of the Li era, is it not?"

Some of the fury returned. Like waves, coming and going, pushed around by the winds of her rhetoric - but this time, it was different. Too fast to come, too shallow in its depth, but at least familiar. Covering him like a child hiding under an old, comfortable blanket, scared of the nightmares in the dark.

Only this time, the nightmares were here to stay.

"So you are a thief as well as a cheat?" he said, his scowl already fading. It came out as more of a question than an accusation.

Qian Shanyi snorted. If only he knew. "I will take it as an agreement," she said instead. "I suppose I should apologize for the intrusion, but this one caught my eye. It seems to me that you've read it quite a lot."

Jian Shizhe jerked his nose upwards. "What of it?"

She gestured towards his false armor, worn over his robes. "And that -" Qian Shanyi paused, sorting through half a dozen insults that immediately floated to mind in search of something neutral. "That, mmm, costume of yours. I admit I had to look up the style, but it is cut to resemble the armor of the forces of, once again, late emperor Li - unless I am mistaken?"

"What are you leading to?"

"Leading to?" Qian Shanyi flapped her eyelashes innocently. "I am simply making conversation. I figured you would find talking about your views less stressful than further discussing the duel."

Jian Shizhe stayed silent for a moment, shocked she would lie so blatantly. "Yes," he finally said. "I respect his philosophy."

"Why?"

"What?"

"It's a simple question, I should think. Why do you respect it?"

"Because it makes sense."

Qian Shanyi angled her head curiously. "Does it? Very few people follow it these days. I do not, myself."

"Of course I wouldn't expect a rube like you to understand," Jian Shizhe scoffed at her, crossing his arms on his chest.

Qian Shanyi rolled her eyes. "A coward's answer."

Another shallow spike of fury. "You dare -"

"To cultivate is to dare," she cut him off sharply. "Are you a daoist or a mongrel dog? Speak of your beliefs, or admit you stand for nothing."

He fumed for a while, grasping for an answer. She simply waited. He had already taken so many of her baits his mouth had more fishing hooks than teeth.

"To cultivate is to rebel against the Heavens, and rebellion is based on strength," he finally pronounced. Words stilted, without feeling - a quote. "Without it, what good are cultivators?"

"Strength to do what?"

Jian Shizhe stopped, brought out of the recitation. "To slaughter the demon beasts, the celestials, the real demonic cultivators," he finally answered, growing more frustrated. "Without cultivators to defend the ordinary people, what would we have? Gu Lingtian had slaughtered the Heavens, and got his way. If a cultivator does not strive to do likewise, are they not trash? If they cannot even help transcend a tribulation, repel an errant Zhuque, or slash apart a comet, what good was all the time they've wasted? A weakling can only build a sect of weaklings, and teach them to be weaker still."

He said Zhuque a bit too quickly. If she did not already know what she did - she might have missed it. It seemed his father's death was still somewhere in the back of his mind - buried deep, perhaps, yet still present. A hundred layers of beliefs all built on top, until it was obscured, hidden within the emotional core of his entire soul.

"You are saying that a cultivator that does not seek strength with all their means, with all their time, through blood and sweat, is nothing more than trash."

"Of course."

Qian Shanyi nodded lightly. "And what of the refiners, alchemists? Your own sect spends most of its time producing glassware."

Jian Shizhe scoffed dismissively. "A hand that forges the sword is nothing without the one to wield it."

"Yet what sword will there be to wield, with nobody to forge it?" Qian Shanyi asked, projecting a curiosity she did not truly feel.

"A hand without a sword is still a fist," Jian Shizhe said, still scoffing. As if she was merely making a joke that wasn't worth his time. "A refiner without their head can refine nothing."

"I see."

Spiritual cultivation, refining, and alchemy. Three pillars of cultivation, a triangle, where each vertex supported each other. But what Jian Shizhe saw instead was a pyramid, with a singular peak. A common enough view, in ages past.

But also one that was full of holes.

"It does seem to make some sense," Qian Shanyi said slowly, scratching her head. "There's just one thing that doesn't quite fit for me. Would you remind me, what happened to the late emperor Li?"

Jian Shizhe gave her a strange stare. "He died. What of it?"

"And how did he die?" Qian Shanyi said, inclining her head curiously once again.

"What does it matter?" Jian Shizhe scoffed again, crossing his arms on his chest. "This is a waste of time."

"Hm. A waste of time, huh." Qian Shanyi paused, taking a sip of her tea. "No, I think this is rather important," she continued with a light shake of her head. "See, I seem to recall him being slaughtered like a pathetic pig above his very palace, his forces scattered to all four cardinal directions. A group of six golden core powerhouses and two nascent soul cultivators joining hands, if my memory still serves me well." She put her cup down on the table, and leaned forwards, looking into his eyes. "So tell me, junior Shizhe: what good is a philosophy of strength from a weakling who lost the only fight that ever matters?"

"You truly have nothing more than insults."

"A coward's words. Again."

"This isn't about him," Jian Shizhe said, raising his nose. "It's about the principle."

"I see. Very well, let's think this through. Your constitution is that of wood, correct?"

Jian Shizhe froze. Did he really never think this through, for her to surprise him that easily?

Perhaps he truly hadn't. If nobody dared challenge him on his beliefs, then what would move him to do so?

"I will once again take that as an agreement," Qian Shanyi continued. "Yet you practice the same sword art as the rest of your sect - one made for those of metal. Is this not a glaring weakness?"

Jian Shizhe's slammed his fist down onto the table, cracking it. Qian Shanyi had to snap her own hands out, to catch the tea kettle and her cup out of the air, before they spilled all across the books. She caught them just in time.

She couldn't catch the ink plate, but it flew in the other direction entirely. A black blotch, all across the floor. But the books were safe.

"You pathetic streetwhore, you dare speak of my legacy this way?!" Jian Shizhe screamed. This was a much, much deeper fury than before - but she had to provoke him here, for the point to stick.

"I speak the truth," Qian Shanyi said calmly, putting the tea kettle far away from this emotional lunatic. "Your art is incomplete - it was never intended to be used in isolation. Your talent with it is great, yes. Perhaps the best in generations. But it matters not. I saw your fellow disciples practice - the longer sword is meant to strike from behind a cloud of flowing glass, one you cannot control with a wooden constitution. You might as well attempt to dance with one leg tied to the other! So tell me: why are you a weakling that practices an art unsuited to your constitution?"

Would he strike her? He was still not recovered from his spiritual energy exhaustion, and without his sword, she could beat him easily, especially since Liu Yufei would interfere. But it would slow the lesson down.

"You -," Jian Shizhe hissed, pure hatred coming out instead of mere air. His hands were clenched into fists again. "Oh, if only I had my sword -"

"Silence," Qian Shanyi cut him off, raising her tone to match his. "Insults I can tolerate. I will not tolerate my student speaking nonsense. You claimed a cultivator that does not strive for strength in all their actions is nothing more than trash. Yet you do not do so yourself. So which is it? Are you trash, or are you a human being?"

Now that she dismantled the excuses in his mind - the fury didn't matter. She just had to push him over the edge of realization, and he'd be done.

Jian Shizhe had stayed silent, his whole body tense. His eyes bored into hers.

"What? Nothing more to say?" She mocked him. "I asked you: why did you lose the duel? A simple question, yet you could not even answer that. So here is one answer: you lost it because you practice a bad law, and refuse to change. If you had any techniques at all to build on, you would not have lost."

If he had any techniques to build on, she wouldn't have challenged him in the first place.

"Bad law?" Jian Shizhe screamed again. "You -"

Even still he could surprise her. "Are you a child?" She boggled up at him. "I mean it's bad for you."

Some fury had receded. A tenth, no more. "A true cultivator does not need techniques," he said, "A sword, a shield, it has to be enough -"

Qian Shanyi's lips curled in disgust again. "You say that a cultivator must strive for strength, yet abhor techniques?" she said. "Admit it - your belief is simply false. Whatever it is you cultivate, it is not the rule of strength."

Their gazes crossed once again. She pushed him to the very limit - any more, and he would snap. It was time to offer him a way out.

"I do not share your so-called philosophy," she said, backing off. "To me, and many others, to practice a sword art passed down within your sect is admirable loyalty, even if - especially if - it does not suit you. But if you wish to do so, then pick your beliefs to match. And if you do wish to be loyal to your sect, then you have harmed it greatly."

Massage his pride a bit. He needs it.

"You are a cultivator with enormous talent, much greater than mine," Qian Shanyi continued with false admiration. "Your realm is high. But so what? You are a laughingstock, so much so that I heard about you within minutes of my arrival. How many young loose cultivators chose to seek another sect, simply because they were afraid of you? How many of them could have advanced your sect's techniques further? Even the Heavens may never know."

She saw his fury fade, bit by little bit. Without her stoking the flames, it was inevitable. And just like metal solidifies once it cools, so would his mindset - into a mold of her choosing, if she had done this right.

"I said that blaming your cultivation for your loss was one answer to my question," Qian Shanyi said, picking up the books, and packing them back into her bag. Just in case this outburst repeated. "It is not my answer. My answer is that you lost because you fought alone, where I had a dozen helpers. Wang Yonghao helped me train, taught me how to fight a crippled enemy. Rui Bao told me how to kill your shambler. A dozen disciples in your sect told me how you think. Junming had given me the cultivator almanac, and it had told me how you fight. There were others, too. A dozen swords will always slaughter one - but you chose to stand alone. And so you lost, and only through my mercy had you kept your life."

She pushed at the table, testing the crack. It held, if a bit unsteadily. The pillows she put under the legs had absorbed much of the impact.

"Why do you think the Empire stands?" Qian Shanyi continued. "It's not because the strongest lead it. It is because we work together. If you had even a single person to confide in, they would have talked you out of your insane, bizarre plan, even before you walked off to seek a glass shambler. But you did not."

She glanced up at Jian Shizhe. He still had his teeth bared, defensive, just on the edge of fury - but she could see the gears clicking in his mind.

He'd never admit she was right, of course. Nor would he thank her for the advice. He'd hate her for the many years to come, even as he accepted her conclusions, even as he invented his own reasons to believe them.

There was a reason why Jian Wei agreed to let her do this - a loose cultivator, or one from another sect, would leave the town, and take the fury with them. A sacrificial goat, unlike disciples from his own sect.

"But that is merely my answer," Qian Shanyi concluded. "Seek your own, Junior Shizhe."

She sighed, motioning to where the ink plate had rolled away. "I spoke my part," she said, "Pick up the ink plate, brush and paper. To help you think, we will go over the entire duel - from start to finish, beginning with the challenge - and you will write out everything you did wrong, and what you should have done instead to win. Then you will hammer this list above your bed and stare at it as you sleep. And then, you might, just might, see something of your future."

He stood up slowly, and went to pick up the scattered items. Perhaps she mollified him enough - or perhaps he simply wanted to get it over with.

"Or stick to your nonsense about strength," Qian Shanyi said, giving him one last disgusted glare. "But then you might as well just die, for you quite clearly have none to speak of."
 
Strike me down without logic and my argument will become more powerful then you can possibly imagine.

(Because your inability to imagine is your defining flaw).
 
I loved this chapter. It's just another example of how goddamn smart Shanyi is, especially since it's show rather than tell, and it's empirically demonstrating the fact rather than just saying "the protagonist was very smart" like way too many cultivation stories try and fail to do.
 
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I loved this chapter. It's just another example of how goddamn smart Shanyi is, especially since it's show rather than tell, and it's empirically demonstrating the fact rather than just saying "the protagonist was very smart" like way too many cultivation stories try and fail to do.
It is also not "the protagonist knew stuff the other side didn't that there was no reason they should know".
 
The parts where Shanyi gets kicked in the face by her own mistakes really do help sell the overall narrative of her being actually intelligent.

Because real smart people don't have some kind of weird plot armor that grants them immunity to making mistakes or overlooking things; they just do a somewhat better job of making good choices or mastering difficult skills.
 
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