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How does the inner world 's time dilation affect physics? If you throw something into the inner world, will it appear to accelerate faster as it crosses the portal from the perspective of someone who is outside? Or will it appear to be slower from the perspective of someone inside the inner world? My physics knowledge is way too rudimentary to answer these questions myself 😅
 
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Going by past behaviour, it seems that the time dilation only happens when the entrance is "closed", and that the inner world adopts outside time rates while it's open.
 
You would struggle to even die; you would simply stop being biology and start being physics.
I wouldn't go that far. You'd just have blood vessels pushing blood faster than the next segment can receive them and organs' activity being disrupted and nerves behaving weirdly. If you passed through quickly (and the time dilation was mild enough that you passed through quickly on both sides), you probably wouldn't even die. I have no idea what differential time dilation would do to your nervous system, but I doubt it would be directly lethal.

Of course, this assumes that there aren't any other physicksy things going on. In reality, you wouldn't die to the time dilation; whatever was causing time to dilate so drastically would turn you into physics first.
 
She should buy a bunch of empty crates so whenever she buys a bunch of stuff she can make a show of having a previously prepared crate full of junk shipped to that warehouse.

Heck, it could have made for a simpler solution to the septic tank issue than the worm heist.
 
I wouldn't go that far. You'd just have blood vessels pushing blood faster than the next segment can receive them and organs' activity being disrupted and nerves behaving weirdly. If you passed through quickly (and the time dilation was mild enough that you passed through quickly on both sides), you probably wouldn't even die. I have no idea what differential time dilation would do to your nervous system, but I doubt it would be directly lethal.

Of course, this assumes that there aren't any other physicksy things going on. In reality, you wouldn't die to the time dilation; whatever was causing time to dilate so drastically would turn you into physics first.
Depends on how sharp the transition is; if it's fast enough it could effect the way atoms maintain structure.
 
Depends on how sharp the transition is; if it's fast enough it could effect the way atoms maintain structure.
Maybe. I don't think any physicist worth their salt would want to give you a straight answer about how that works, any more than they'd want to explain what would happen if a bomb with infinite energy went off in the Pacific Ocean. The question doesn't make sense with physics as we know it, and trying to force it into real physics equations is going to start throwing errors sooner rather than later.

And that's assuming that we don't run facefirst into the question of how to reconcile general relativity and quantum mechanics.
 
Maybe. I don't think any physicist worth their salt would want to give you a straight answer about how that works, any more than they'd want to explain what would happen if a bomb with infinite energy went off in the Pacific Ocean. The question doesn't make sense with physics as we know it, and trying to force it into real physics equations is going to start throwing errors sooner rather than later.

And that's assuming that we don't run facefirst into the question of how to reconcile general relativity and quantum mechanics.
From what I've heard of Academics they'd apparently probably love to answer it actually; apparently they normally get much more flavorless questions to chew on.
 
And since they need to be registered someone might go check (with their heavenly luck someone surely would) and then no such registration would be found and suddenly massive scrutiny.

Even if no one bothered to check, something requiring registration is surely expensive and flashing around something that shiny is dangerous when your powerful organization backing you a) isn't here b) is 'known' to be not that powerful and c) doesn't actually exist. Someone deciding to take the risk of stealing the shiny is a matter of luck and well...
 
Chapter 77: Act Your Lines Through Masks Of Lies
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Qian Shanyi poked her head around the edge of the unfinished fence surrounding the soon-to-be rabbit coop. It was only about four feet tall, and she could have simply hopped over it - but she wanted Linghui Mei to see her from a distance, in case she was still too mad to talk. She gave her fifteen minutes to calm down, but it was hard to judge how deep that fury went.

As it turned out, it was still a little deep. Angry, wet eyes greeted her, glaring over the top of Linghui Mei's plush crow. She was sitting down with her back to the fence, the crow clasped tightly in her arms.

"Are you hungry?" Qian Shanyi said, pulling a plate from behind her back. "I made snacks."

Linghui Mei didn't acknowledge the gesture, but neither did she tell Qian Shanyi to go away, so she decided to risk an approach. She sat down on the grass a meter away, setting the plate down in between them.

"Rabbit, on shards of heavenly horse bone," Qian Shanyi explained, presenting the plate. It was filled with a dozen little meat spits. "You seemed to like these two the best, so I wanted to try a combination."

"This is stupid," Linghui Mei grumbled, picking up one of the spits with one hand. "One animal on another? Stupid."

Qian Shanyi raised one eyebrow at her. Linghui Mei bit into the spit, crunching through the bone. "And the meat is too cold," she grumbled more.

"Thank you," Qian Shanyi said.

Linghui Mei squinted at her suspiciously, then sniffled, ruining the image. "Why are you thanking me? I'm insulting your food."

"Because then I can make it better in the future," Qian Shanyi said calmly. "I also came to apologize for laughing at you. I didn't think it would strike you quite this deeply."

Linghui Mei snorted haughtily, and bit into the meat again. She ate one spit, and then picked up another in silence. "I guess it's nice that I don't have to clean my fingers," she mumbled quietly, defiance slowly leaking out of her shoulders like water out of a cracked jug. "I can hold it by the spit. It's convenient."

"That was the intention."

Linghui Mei continued eating in silence. Qian Shanyi observed her much the same, making mental notes about how the bone shards cracked and the meat shifted around. Next time, she would nick the spits - it should make the meat stay in one place a bit better, and would make the breaks a bit more controlled.

"It's my eldest," Linghui Mei said once she finished, her voice a little distant. Qian Shanyi listened patiently. "He reads these novels of yours, talks about them every time when I visit. I tried to read them as well, but… I can't. Even a little taste of them was too much."

"I get it," Qian Shanyi said after a brief moment. "Reading about your own hunters being happy and funny, that must have tasted like bile."

Linghui mei shook her head furiously. Not denying, despondent. "I just can't…" She sniffled again. "I can't. I love him, but there are some things that are beyond me, as a mother."

So that is where she learned it. Qian Shanyi did wonder how she could recall such a minor quote, yet be furious at being accused of liking the books.

A minor question, all things considered. But it also made another thing more likely.

"He's human?"

Linghui Mei snorted sadly. "Of course you'd put it together," she said, wiping her eyes with the tail of her plush crow. "Yes. I love him, I love all of them, but with humans, it is not the same. He'd never have to fear the chase, never have to look behind his shoulder, imagine the pain of an arrow through his chest. And I am glad for that, knowing that he will always be safe, I would give anything to keep the others as well, but it's not the same. It's just not the same."

"I see," Qian Shanyi said. There was clearly an old wound there - distance between the two of them that Linghui Mei couldn't cross, and her child perhaps couldn't be bothered to, if he even recognized it. Time must have played into it as well - if she had to travel around, she could hardly spend that much with each individual child.

They sat together in silence for a minute. "I do also apologize for accidentally misleading you about how grueling the process of cultivation is," Qian Shanyi said finally, deciding to move the discussion towards a lighter topic. "Normally, when an inner disciple joins a sect, they learn these things slowly. They can see others cultivating every day, so the misconceptions they have dissolve pretty quickly. With us, you are getting a very skewed picture. I'll work harder to help you through it."

Linghui Mei smiled ruefully. "No training so grueling that only one out of a dozen dozens will see the dawn, then?"

Qian Shanyi smiled back. "No. At least, not in general - I am sure some elders still abuse their own disciples. It's just training, you push yourself as far as your own soul takes you."

Qian Shanyi rose, dusting off her robes from sitting down on the grass. "It's not an uncommon misconception, for what it's worth," she continued casually. "Many ordinary people think that we have to pass tests that are so difficult that only a small fraction can even survive them, but what sense would that make? Any sect has far more use out of a weakly trained cultivator than out of a dead one. The only deadly tests come from the Heavens."

Linghui Mei closed her eyes and sighed. "So I am a common fool, then."

Qian Shanyi laughed, and turned around to leave. "I have to get going, meet with Jian Wei. See you in the evening."

"Wait."

Qian Shanyi turned back, and saw Linghui Mei staring up at her, biting her lip, an agonized expression on her face. "Once again I have cracked an egg on my face due to my own foolishness," Linghui Mei said.

Qian Shanyi shrugged. "It's just growing pains, Mei -"

"Nonsense," Linghui Mei cut her off. "You've put your faith in me as your student, and yet I've failed it once again. Got so tangled up in my own secrets I didn't think to ask." She shook her head sadly. "Did not even speak a good word about the victory of my own master. I'd like to make it up, somehow."

"How?" Qian Shanyi asked, raising one eyebrow. "You are already helping us with everything."

Linghui Mei bit her lip harder, and Qian Shanyi patiently waited for her answer. She was heading over with time to spare, and the Northern Scarlet Stream sect compound was only five minutes away, if she hurried.

She didn't really have it in her heart to blame the jiuweihu. This whole thing must have been a lot of stress for her, and she couldn't even really leave, not without putting herself at danger of the spirit hunters once again. A bit of snapping in response was completely understandable.

"No, I can't continue like this," Linghui Mei finally said, shaking her head. "I have to share something. You've said before that you've wanted to hear our songs. Perhaps that? Ones we sing to our children. Few enough secrets there."

"A celebration, then." Qian Shanyi grinned. "A marvelous idea. I'll buy some spirit wine on the way back."

Linghui Mei nodded. "I would also need to sew some implements," she said, "but they are easy to make."

Qian Shanyi turned around, heading back into the warehouse. "But now I really must leave," she said, "I do not want to keep Jian Wei waiting."

All the better that she had something to look forward to in the evening. Meeting Jian Shizhe again was going to be a tense affair.

The main compound of the Northern Scarlet Stream sect was built in the shape of a symmetrical cross encased in a square - four courtyards at the corners, framed by the walls of the main building. At the center of this cross was a large garden, where disciples grew herbs and fruits for the sect's own cooking. It was filled with nooks and crannies for private conversations or meditation, and at the exact center of that garden stood four large gazebos, where Jian Wei had summoned Qian Shanyi.

Qian Shanyi arrived a bit early, and found a secluded bench with a small table beneath a lychee tree, deciding to spend her free time on some writing. She could watch the center of the garden through a gap in the greenery, and Jian Wei could sense her easily whenever he arrived: there was no real need to announce her presence.

The gazebos were built to be private enough for a conversation, but still very open - anyone who passed through the gardens would see who sat in them. That Jian Wei planned his talk with the disciples to take place here meant he wanted the rest of the sect to know exactly what happened. A good sign, if it went well, and a bad one, if it went poorly.

Jian Wei's direct disciples began to arrive soon after. There were four of them, all dressed in prim and perfectly ironed robes, carrying identical folders - likely with their reports about the activities of the sect. To Qian Shanyi's mild surprise, one of them was a woman - tall, her hair pinned up into a bun that turned into a ponytail, hanging down to about her lower back.

Though perhaps she shouldn't have been that surprised. If Jian Wei really participated in the last imperial succession, his views might be a bit more meritocratic than those of his peers.

Belatedly, she even recognised her. She had been directed to her shortly when asking around about Jian Shizhe this very morning. Obviously, Qian Shanyi didn't tell her about any of her big plans. At the time, Liu Yufei said she was very busy, told her nothing, and sent her off to bother someone else.

Jian Shizhe was the last to arrive. Swordless, his face steeled into an emotionless mask. The other three disciples averted their eyes when he sat down, and one shifted a fraction away - no doubt wanting nothing to do with the inevitable chastisement that would come from Jian Wei.

The Elder himself appeared ten minutes later, fashionably late. Qian Shanyi sensed him coming from the direction opposite to the gazebos, perhaps seeking to avoid the senses of his own disciples, or perhaps simply by accident. Qian Shanyi raised her eyes from her work exactly as he rounded the corner of a long, sculpted bush, and rose from her seat, giving him a curt bow in greeting.

Jian Wei looked about the same as when she last saw him - so calm that it seemed as if he would sooner make the world bend around him than step aside. His eyes, looking her over, were filled with calculation - and just the barest hint of regret.

"Fellow cultivator Qian," Jian Wei said quietly, before she had a chance to greet him verbally - as would have been the norm. "How fortunate that I could meet you before we begin."

He looked out through the same gap in the greenery, and nodded decisively. "If you would not mind, please suppress your spiritual energy," he said, turning back to her. "I would prefer Jian Shizhe to remain unaware of your presence until it is required. I will ring a bell to summon you."

"Of course," she said after a momentary pause, lowering her own voice to match his.

The request was a little worrying. With the shrubs and the trees in the way, their talk would not be heard over at the gazebo, and they should have been too far away for the disciples' spiritual senses - or else Jian Shizhe would have already reacted to her presence - but perhaps Jian Wei simply wanted to be extra careful.

There was a second possibility, of course - that this was a trap. Certainly Jian Wei had agreed on her plan, and it should have been in his best interests - but he could have reconsidered it, for whatever reason. Until he spoke his part aloud in front of others, gave it the weight of his honor as a sect elder, it was only words in the wind.

But she was committed now. She could no more turn back than make the sands of time fall upwards.

Keeping her concerns to herself, she picked up the sheet of paper she wrote out and handed it to Jian Wei. "The first draft of my instruction plan for Jian Shizhe," she explained. "I could start as early as this evening."

"Prideful death or death to pride?" Jian Wei read out the title at the top of her notes, raising a curious eyebrow at her.

"I thought it was appropriate," Qian Shanyi said dryly.

"Some would say this to be a bad omen."

Qian Shanyi matched Jian Wei's expression with a questioning eyebrow of her own. Was he leading her on? "Some would say that having four disciples meet among the four gazebos at the center of a four-pointed cross is a bad omen."

Jian Wei smiled slightly. "Ah, but it is," he said, looking back down on her notes. "One must only ask: who is the target of this omen?"

Qian Shanyi thought his words over in silence. Four was an omen of death, one of those that did not survive careful scientific scrutiny during the reformation, yet still persisted in the minds of many. If Jian Wei built his sect compound to evoke it deliberately - and he must have, no blueprint could be agreed upon without passing through his desk - then presumably he did not want to bring death upon his own disciples. That left many other meanings - death to weakness, to falsity, or the reverse - resistance in the face of death.

Death to enemies. Another subtle threat, if she stepped too far out of line.

Perhaps Jian Wei intended to put her on edge, but it made her relax instead. If he was choosing to threaten her, it meant he had no trap planned.

"You are not a superstitious woman, fellow cultivator Qian?" Jian Wei asked, not looking up. Perhaps he spotted a change in her body language out of the corner of his eye. "It seems your new robes gave me a false impression."

Qian Shanyi looked down on herself. White robes, the color of mourning, but also metal, her own constitution. She didn't pick the robes for the auspicious match - they were simply the second-best fitting among the ones Wang Yonghao already had - but she could see how someone might think otherwise.

"I am not," she said dryly, "Sometimes white robes are simply white robes."

Jian Wei chuckled slightly, nodding along as he read. She didn't have enough time to write much - only key points, goals, objectives, steps to take to achieve each one - but she still did her best to make it comprehensive. "It's acceptable," he finally said, handing the paper back to her. "If quite ambitious."

Qian Shanyi took the paper, and folded it up, hiding it within her robes. "To cultivate is to rebel against the heavens, so how could I not be ambitious? A cultivator that accepts their station is hardly different from a salted fish."

Jian Wei chuckled again, and waved a hand over the table. Jian Shizhe's sword appeared out of thin air a millimeter above the wood, dropping down with a slight thunk.

Qian Shanyi's greedy eyes snapped to the plain steel ring - a cosmos ring - on Jian Wei's finger. It only took her a fraction of a second to pull her gaze away, but Jian Wei still noticed it, giving her a knowing look.

Show-off, Qian Shanyi thought, knowing she would have done the exact same thing if she could. She did wonder where his own sword was and why he did not carry it, but assumed he simply elected not to do so within the walls of his own sect. It seems she was mistaken.

"Ambition is only to be rewarded," Jian Wei said, folding his hands behind his back. Out of sight. "Remember the bell, and present the sword to me when I ring it."

Qian Shanyi nodded in understanding, and settled back down to wait, while Jian Wei headed over towards the gazebo.

Even with the greenery in the way, she could still hear him speak, though she had to guess at some words that were a bit hard to make out. After the customary greetings, Jian Wei made the disciples give their reports one after the other, concerning the last few weeks - their progress in cultivation, the problems they were having, their sect duties, and what happened while Jian Wei was gone on his trip.

None of them mentioned the duel, until Jian Shizhe. He was last. In fairness, he went straight to it.

"Uncle, this here cultivator must humbly bow my head and ask for forgiveness," Jian Shizhe said. "While you have been away, I have lost a duel, and with it, lost my sword."

Even from this far away she could hear the raw anguish in his voice. Served him right.

"That would explain why you have arrived without it," Jian Wei said neutrally. "Please continue."

Jian Shizhe did. He talked about the kitsune hunt, about his taming of the glass shambler, and about the duel. He stuck to the facts, answering curt questions throughout, and mostly avoided any embarrassing parts. Qian Shanyi felt he was robbing her of quite a bit of credit by not describing her insult in detail, but such was life.

"I swear," Jian Shizhe concluded with fierceness that could rival a lion, "I will get it back!"

"Hm," Jian Wei said coldly, and finally rang his bell. "That won't be necessary."

Qian Shanyi breathed out, picked up Jian Shizhe's sword, hefted it onto her shoulder, and headed to the gazebo, humming a little tune. Perhaps she was overdoing it, but she just couldn't help herself, and it helped to steady her nerves.

It was time to play her part.

It won't be necessary?

Jian Shizhe kept quiet, thinking over what his uncle said. He wasn't about to question his Elder, and yet, it made no sense.

That witch Qian Shanyi had insulted him, insulted their entire sect by taking his sword. They had to get it back, even a weakling like Jian Wei should have understood that. So what did he mean?

Jian Shizhe would have paid in blood for the opportunity to see a building foundation cultivator destroy Qian Shanyi, but Jian Wei would never dare to go through with it. What did this leave? Surely he wasn't going to suggest buying the sword back, like a ransom from a kidnapper -

He heard steps approaching the gazebo, a slight creak of gravel beneath wooden sandals. Idly, he looked over, and his blood froze in his veins.

No!

Qian Shanyi, strolling towards the gazebo, his sword gripped in her disgusting hands.

Why is she here?!

She was grinning. Laughing at him!

His blood turned from ice to boiling fury.

How dare she so much as step into my sect!

Qian Shanyi walked into the gazebo, quickly glancing over the five occupants one last time. There was Jian Wei, sitting with his back to her, on top of a thick pillow. He had some notes laid out on top of a small tea table in front of him. His disciples were sitting in a neat little row opposite him, each on their own - smaller - pillow. The two men among them seemed confused at her appearance - she had not met them before, and so perhaps they simply didn't recognise her. The woman, at least, had an inkling of some realization, and bit her lip, as if bracing for a crystal bomb explosion. Her worried eyes snapped to the side, towards the third man in their row - towards Jian Shizhe.

Oh, Jian Shizhe was deliciously furious, teeth grinding, face blood red, eyes sparkling. It was a wonder that he managed to remain seated.

Qian Shanyi smugly winked at him, and he finally snapped. He rose up from his knees, snarling at her, hands already balling up into fists -

"Disciple Jian," Jian Wei said coldly, and for a brief moment, Qian Shanyi felt his terrifying pressure brush up against her.

Just the edge. Aimed at someone else. Her heart still skipped a beat.

Jian Shizhe slammed back onto his knees with a crack of the wooden floorboards beneath, his back buckling under the pressure. And then it was gone, just as soon as it appeared.

"Have I given you permission to leave?" Jian Wei continued calmly.

Jian Shizhe grimaced, shut his eyes, but shook his head. "I apologize, Elder Jian," he muttered, voice dead, emotionless.

"Very well," Jian Wei said, and motioned to Qian Shanyi.

Qian Shanyi breathed out some tension she was holding. There were many ways this first moment could have gone, and this was one of the best.

There was a sixth pillow at Jian Wei's side, a half step behind him. Intended for her, no doubt. She knelt on it, and offered Jian Wei Jian Shizhe's sword, both hands outstretched, head bowed deferentially. He took it, and put it at his other side, before turning back to his disciples.

It was all theater, of course, for appearances. The sect disciples had to see this exchange to know who really was in control here. Subtly glancing around, Qian Shanyi saw a couple of outer disciples watching the gazebo from where they were doing work on the garden. An audience would tell tales - and rumors will do the rest.

"This is fellow cultivator Qian from the Sky Void Island sect," Jian Wei continued. Also committed now. No turning back. "Before I left, I asked her to serve as a test for you four - and I am afraid all of you have failed it."

"A test?" Jian Shizhe croaked. His lips trembled, as if he was hit with a stick and had just barely held himself back from pleading for mercy. He glanced at Jian Wei, the other disciples, and even out into the gardens. Little kitten stuck in a trap.

When his eyes briefly passed over Qian Shanyi, she winked at him again. His face flushed with renewed fury, before he shut his eyes.

"Yes, a test," Jian Wei said, giving his disciples a very severe look. His eyes softened a fraction when they passed over Jian Shizhe, before hardening again. "I have long held to the principle that an education must be based on true challenges, not merely direct instruction. Fellow cultivator Qian's goal was simple: to find a weakness that could pull our sect into a war. I am saddened to know that it only took her a couple days to do so."

Jian Wei's cold eyes focused back on Jian Shizhe. "Jian Shizhe," he said, pointing to the sword at his side. "This sword will be returned to you when you prove you are once again deserving of it. To that end, I have requested fellow cultivator Qian to tutor you personally -"

"Uncle -" Jian Shzihe protested, face screwed up in indignation.

Jian Wei's pressure slammed down again, and Qian Shanyi flinched. In the back of her mind, she was pleased to see she wasn't the only one: the other three disciples edged a bit further away from Jian Shizhe as well. The man himself was forced down, into a deep bow.

"Elder," Jian Shizhe ground out, his voice catching, "I do not believe -"

"The decision is final," Jian Wei cut him off. "If you require an explanation, address it to your new tutor." His pressure cut off, and he glanced around at his other disciples, before stopping on the one woman among them. "Shizhe's failure may be the greatest of you four, but I am afraid none of you have passed the test. Liu Yufei. You are responsible for my mail. Why was I not informed of the identity of the duelist as soon as I returned?"

Liu Yufei did not answer right away, her throat working through a nervous swallow. Qian Shanyi felt a bit of kinship with her. Same job, different sects. Same bullshit dripping down from the Elders. "Most honorable elder, this here humble cultivator begs forgiveness," she finally said with a slight bow. "But you yourself have requested the report about the duel to be postponed until the evening."

"I did not ask about the duel, I asked about the identity of the duelist," Jian Wei explained patiently. "Mail had been left for me from the fellow cultivator Qian. Had you informed me of her relation to the duel, I would not have postponed the report. If this was not merely a test - you would have put me in a very awkward position."

"I did not want to make the fellow cultivator Jian Shizhe lose face," Liu Yufei said evasively. "I felt it was best for him to be the one to break the news."

It really was a confluence of circumstances. If Qian Shanyi didn't plan to meet with Jian Wei right after her duel, almost as soon as he returned - there would have been more time for this gap of knowledge to resolve itself.

"And had this been an ordinary duel, you would have been correct," Jian Wei said, "But it was not. It was a duel with an ambassador of a fellow sect. Was this fact known to you?"

"I am - I am afraid not, Elder," Liu Yufei said. She swallowed again. "If I may speak freely -"

"You may."

"I did not believe the duel would occur at all," Liu Yufei spoke quickly. "Fellow cultivator Jian had vanished just before it, with no notice, and it had never even been registered - I thought it was simply another rumor."

Jian Shizhe looked about ready to cry, hearing his word obliquely questioned. Qian Shanyi felt a small spike of pity for the man - he really was starting to remind her of a kitten that had been beaten half to death with sticks.

A very small spike. About the size of a fingertip.

"And once it was over, it was too late to gather information, and the rumors had only increased," Liu Yufei continued. She raised her eyes slightly, and glanced at Qian Shanyi. "More people spoke of the… unorthodox techniques allegedly used by fellow cultivator Qian, than that she was from any sect. There simply was not enough time."

"I see," Jian Wei said neutrally, in the same way that a bolt of natural lightning was neutral on the question of your life or death, "and you believe this to be an excuse?"

"N-not as such, Elder -"

"Enough," Jian Wei cut her off with a sharp gesture. His face was flat like that of a man watching his own house disintegrate before his very eyes because he was too lazy to replace a couple nails just last night - though Qian Shanyi was the only one with the context to know why. "I do not seek to find a scapegoat, seeing as how I have organized this test in the first place. I want to know what you should do in the future, to avoid a tragic repeat."

Qian Shanyi tuned out the rest of the meeting, turning her thoughts inwards. Hearing Jian Wei lecture the other three was of little interest to her - she had heard similar lectures many times, and even though Jian Wei seemed better than average, the subject tended to get repetitive. Instead, she thought more about Jian Shizhe, and what she had to teach him.

How did one turn a prideful cockroach into an actual human being? It really was quite a challenge.

Two hours of discussion passed quickly - for Jian Wei and his disciples - or slowly - for Qian Shanyi. Just as they seemed about ready to wrap up, an outer disciple hurried into the gazebo, bowing deeply. The interruption snapped Qian Shanyi out of her half-meditation, which was really for the best - she was already growing bored.

"Elder, if this here humble disciple may disturb you," the outer disciple said, "there is a loose building foundation stage cultivator that is asking to be introduced."

This brought pause to everyone present. A building foundation cultivator without an institution to fall back on was about as rare as a fish that could walk on land.

"From the empire?" Jian Wei asked.

"He did not mention any affiliation," the disciple said, "the honorable immortal introduced himself as simply Fang Jiugui." The disciple paused, clearly hesitating whether to say more. "His dress is also… somewhat unconventional, as is his aroma."

Qian Shanyi's eyes sparkled, and she leaned towards Jian Wei. What an opportunity to find out more about their mysterious visitor. "Elder," she whispered close to his ear, "just before a duel, a cultivator wearing a strange leather cloak flew into the central square on top of a flying sword from the direction of Reflection Ridge. As far as I have seen, he simply headed into one of the restaurants."

Jian Wei didn't give any sign he heard her, and simply nodded to the outer disciple. "Please tell the honorable cultivator Fang I would be glad to take his introductions now."

Qian Shanyi leaned back, her eyes following the outer disciple as he hurried away. This Fang Jiugui was quite a mystery: another complication thrown in by the Heavens, or a coincidence with no real meaning? In either case, it would be a piece of the puzzle around Wang Yonghao's mysterious luck.

"Please bring us some more tea while we wait," Jian Wei said, gesturing to Liu Yufei, and the cultivator rose, bowed, and left in a hurry. With another gesture, he summoned another pillow out of his cosmos ring - for this Fang Jiugui - and made the other disciples shift around, forming a triangle. Jian Wei and Qian Shanyi on one side, his disciples on another, and the petitioner on the third.

Building foundation cultivators were not like those of the refinement stage, free to roam around with only their sword for company. Their powers were greater, yet also more restricted. A building foundation cultivator could not duel a refinement stage one, and so had to find other ways to resolve conflict - such as by introducing themselves directly to all the major sects in the area as soon as they arrived.

This wasn't Qian Shanyi's first time seeing it play out. Luminous Lotus Pavilion was far from a major sect, but it still saw its fair share of traffic. Having the direct disciples present was likewise common - it was a good teaching moment, and let them meet well-connected cultivators in a controlled manner.

The sect compound was only so large, and yet it took Fang Jiugui three times as long as it should have to get over to the gardens. Qian Shanyi saw him following after the same outer disciple along one of the wide pathways, strolling casually as if passing through a park - and not heading to a meeting with a fellow building foundation cultivator.

He stopped next to a flowerbed and crouched, looking at the flowers, before getting up and following, only to stop again and poke at a tree. Even from a good distance away she could see the outer disciple growing exasperated.

And then Fang Jiugui turned his head and looked straight at Qian Shanyi, and his lips split in a wide grin.

A shiver ran down Qian Shanyi's back, though she didn't let it show on her face. What was that supposed to mean?

Fang Jiugui headed straight for the gazebo after that. Up close, she could better make out his garment: a long, dark brown leather robe with many pockets, coming up to about his mid thigh, that was probably intended to be buttoned up at the front - if half the buttons weren't already missing. Beneath it, he wore a pair of pants, and some kind of dark shirt, his sword hanging loosely off his belt. His hair was still unkempt - not simply due to the wind, then, if he hadn't fixed it in the many hours since.

Overall, he looked like a man chewed out by life and spit out like a bit of tobacco. And yet he was a building foundation cultivator that rode a flying sword. These pieces were not fitting together well.

When Fang Jiugui entered the gazebo, Jian Wei inclined his head in greeting. "Honorable cultivator Fang, I presume?" he said, gesturing to Liu Yufei, who started to pour them both some tea. "The Northern Scarlet Stream sect welcomes you. What brings you to our small and insignificant town?"

"A wind of change and wind of chase," Fang Jiugui said cryptically, lips split in a bright grin. He glanced at the pillow presented to him, but remained standing. "Tailing a bird that fell out of her nest, nothing more."

Jian Wei raised a silent eyebrow at that. Fang Jiugui stopped, breathing in deeply. He grimaced, as if fighting with himself. "I am a hunter, tailing a fugitive," he finally said with great difficulty. "I won't be long."

"And what fugitive would that be?" Jian Wei asked curiously.

"How could one talk of a bird that is not yet caught?" Fang Jiugui laughed. "A secret to be kept, for a better time, once everything could fit together like lines of a poem."

He glanced at Qian Shanyi again when he said "bird". It was subtle, as if he was merely looking around. Entirely innocuous, if one didn't already know who she truly was.

"A cultivator's secrets are their own," Jian Wei said lightly. "But of course I would expect to be briefed on it, before you make any arrests."

"How could I do anything less?" Fang Jiugui said. Another glance at Qian Shanyi, this time at her gloved hands - and then the slightest hint of a frown.

What?

"Perhaps we should talk of something lighter?" Jian Wei offered, gesturing to a cup of tea already prepared. "I always seek to learn the stories of cultivators who pass through my town."

"Impossible. The rains of tragedy whip me ever onwards," Fang Jiugui said, shaking his head. "And the grief I drink is for me alone."

Fang Jiugui pulled out a steel flask from one of his many pockets, and took a sip - and even from a few meters away, Qian Shanyi was struck by the powerful stench of hard liquor. What was in that flask?

"Meeting you had been like a lonely ray of sunshine through the dark clouds of destiny, Elder Jian," Fang Jiugui said, bowing deeply. "Yet my work waits not. The birds one chases… they may always take wing."

Qian Shanyi's eyes followed Fang Jiugui as he left, a feeling of doom slowly squeezing her heart.

Was he really here for her? It seemed impossible - and yet…

And if he was here for her…

How much did he know?
 
Oof. I'm too achy and tired to write much r.n., but I just wanted to say that did hit right in the feels (in a good way! just, intense)
 
Oh no, plot agar! I suppose fluffy sitcom shenanigans between Jian Shizhe and Qian Shanyi were too much to hope for.
 
This guy... The only reason he'd introduce himself so openly to a sect that Shanyi is known to be associated with is because, to use his own metaphor, he's beating the bushes and hoping the bird flies out. That means he's not yet sure of his target, or he doesn't think his proof is strong enough to apprehend her, so he's hoping she'll incriminate herself or her compatriot.

He saw what happened to Shizhe. So he knows that if you come at her with wild accusations and insufficient proof, it'll end with your public humiliation. Hence this attempt to rattle her cage and needle her into making a mistake.
 
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Qian Shanyi left the meeting with the disciples soon after, thoughts boiling in her mind and spilling over the edge like noodles out of an overheated pot.

The mysterious spirit hunter had been a crystal bomb planted at the base of a tower of lies, one she had been building ever since she arrived in this town. She had been counting on being a mystery, an untraceable unknown - but if he could prove who she was…

If he had any evidence, he would have shown it to Jian Wei already.

Not necessarily. He might be simply waiting for a better moment.


He had to be dealt with before he would ruin everything.

How did he even find me?

This was the core question at the heart of this whole mystery. If he found her, others could do so as well. She needed to know what mistake she made, what trace she left behind, or else she would always remain on the run.

She had been spinning this problem in her mind when she reached the entrance to the Northern Scarlet Stream sect and felt him again. Fang Jiugui, hiding behind the gate, away from the sight of her eyes but not of her spirit. Waiting for her.

She didn't slow down her step. That he was here made it all but certain he really was here for her, but she already expected the possibility. This was the closest gate to the warehouse and to her tavern - an obvious place to wait for her to leave, if he already knew her rough movements.

Concealing her intentions, she casually glanced around the square in front of the gates. It was only just past the sunset, and she saw six different disciples all around her, and more people still on the street beyond. Even if the spirit hunter already knew who she was - she still had to appear completely unaffected by his presence. The last thing she needed was rumors getting back to Jian Wei before she even had an inkling of a solid plan.

Very well. You want a confrontation? I can do a confrontation.

Focusing on her chest, she felt her own heartbeat resonate all through her body, the bright flows of recirculating spiritual energy pulsing alongside it. With great care, she wove a dense lattice of spiritual energy around her heart, suffusing every last fiber of the muscle, and synchronizing it to the same rhythm.

Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Powerful, alive.

Then, she stopped it.

Her heart stuttered, before the lattice took over the work. Still beating, but only as long as she kept the spiritual energy flowing. The flesh inert, relaxed, if still living.

Tick-tock. Tick-tock. A clock of her own making.

This was the most dangerous gambling technique she had ever experimented with, one she had only used twice before. Even with her control over spiritual energy just on the cusp of the high refinement stage, it still took up some of her concentration, and if it slipped… she would probably fall unconscious faster than she could restart her own heart.

Then she might die. But there was no other choice.

She could school her face, control her breathing, and prepare herself mentally, but an unexpected surprise could still spike her heartbeat before she could control it. In most cases, this was for the best - not reacting could be just as much of a tell. Covering up surprise with another emotion - anger, disappointment, lust - was far simpler, but in exceptional cases…

Few people could even hear the change. But a building foundation cultivator just might. She had originally came up with this trick when playing against one. She won, and put it away for a darker day.

It seemed that day had come. If she was going to speak to Fang Jiugui, she needed every advantage she could get.

The stench hit her nostrils just before she reached the gates. Alcoholic, but unnatural, sharp and burrowing down into the base of your skull, as if distilled from the ashes of an entire burnt-down alchemical laboratory. Qian Shanyi let her lips freely curl in disgust as she rounded the corner, and gave a single passing glance to Fang Jiugui, where he leaned against one of the gate pillars.

He seemed… asleep. Head rolled back, a bit of drool dripping out of the corner of his mouth and staining the edge of his collar. He held his flask loosely in his right hand, the lid unscrewed and hanging by a crimson thread, just barely kept from dropping down onto the ground by the crook of his other elbow. Yet when Qian Shanyi passed a step away from him, he snapped awake, a wide grin stretching across his stubbled face.

"Ah, fellow cultivator Qian, was it?" Fang Jiugui said, pausing for a hacked cough, and wiping his mouth with his sleeve. "Would you grace this old hunter with a minute of your time?"

Qian Shanyi slowed down, turning her head slowly towards Fang Jiugui. Her lips curled further, into a disgusted grimace. "What possible business would I have," she said slowly, dropping one word after another like stones down a mountain. "with a drooling alcoholic?"

She expected anger. She tossed the insult directly into his face, and for all that he couldn't duel her himself, such blatant disrespect must have been rare for a building foundation cultivator.

She'd have settled for annoyance. Instead Fang Jiugui laughed as if she had just played into some long-forgotten private joke. Joyful, unbothered.

Tch.

So much for trying to provoke him in public. She hoped he would make a scene right at the sect gates over the insult, and she'd find a way to get him thrown out of town for his trouble.

Even as he laughed, his eyes were focused, attentive, scanning her like she was but a bird seen over the tip of a notched arrow. Surprising, for someone who seemed to be fast asleep just a minute ago.

Without a drop of lust, at least - small mercies. She had more than enough experience to tell right away.

His gaze flickered to her gloved hands, and that same hint of a frown passed over his face, before vanishing. Just like in that gazebo. Definitely not a coincidence. What Qian Shanyi wouldn't have given for a way to hide them entirely, to keep whatever it was he tried to see far away from his eyes, but instead she kept her hands still at her sides, one resting comfortably on the pommel of her sword.

Her heart beat in an even rhythm, cut off from all of her emotions.

"Oh, jade beauty, but it's barely even a trifle. I only have a few questions," Fang Jiugui chuckled, coming down from his laughter. With his free hand, he ruffled through his pockets, and pulled out a small metal clip of papers, together with the stub of a coal pencil. There was something written on the top page, though in such horrible handwriting that Qian Shanyi had no chance of parsing it. "I was just establishing a… timeline, as Fates would have it. Standard procedure."

Qian Shanyi turned to face Fang Jiugui fully. If she couldn't get rid of him easily, then she at least needed information. She very much doubted he would volunteer something she could use directly - but she needed something to work with, a foundation to build on. "A timeline?" she said. "A timeline of what?"

"Oh, but of this town, the comings and goings," Fang Jiugui said. As he got talking, he really seemed to come alive, the last signs of weariness leaving him. "A drunk artist leaves a sketch on a napkin, but I must put one together from rumors and gossip. But the full picture can only be seen from the outside - and you are an out of towner, just like me."

Qian Shanyi's eyes narrowed slightly. If she could only get him talking of what he did between the duel and now… "I do not believe I mentioned my origins, fellow cultivator Fang. To what do I owe this impression?"

"Is it a false one?"

"That is not what I asked."

"It's simplicity itself," Fang Jiugui said, gesturing with his flask. He took a sip, and then finally screwed the cap back on, and put it into his pocket. The wind was light, but it already made standing next to the man more bearable. "I have seen your duel. It was as if the humble mantis brought down an entire oriole. Very, very impressive. How could I resist asking about the duelists? Nothing untoward, you understand."

Nothing beyond the bare minimum. She couldn't even tell if he was lying or not, even if it was all entirely plausible.

"I saw you land," she said, relaxing her face a fraction. "I hope the town has been to your satisfaction so far? If you wish, I could suggest a good place to spend the night. With a bath, perhaps."

If she could only put him into a place she could control, she could find a way to sneak into his rooms -

"How could I accept such generosity when I have nothing to give in return?" Fang Jiugui denied her with a light grin. He knew exactly what she was doing. He glanced down on the small clip of papers in his hand. "But perhaps there is one thing that had been spinning in my mind. The air is thick with tales of the honorable Jian Shizhe, of course, but of you, there is scarcely a drop. Even where you call home - it is all shrouded in mystery."

She hated dealing with competent people. But that last question - it was something she could use.

"I come from the north," she said, mirroring his manner. "But now I am afraid you have me at a disadvantage."

"A fellow northerner!" Fang Jiugui said, flashing his teeth. "I come from the great city of the Golden Rabbit Bay myself. Have you ever been?"

"Once or twice."

Tick-tock went her heart, but in her mind, Qian Shanyi felt something relax. If he was from her city, then at the very least, he was almost certainly sent by her sect. Not a case of mistaken identity, brought about by Wang Yonghao's luck.

"There is one other mystery that I just can't seem to place," Fang Jiugui continued casually, "The crystal bombs. Where did you get them? Just as a professional curiosity."

Qian Shanyi arched an eyebrow at him. A trap, but one she prepared for. "Why, I made them myself," she said calmly. "Is there something wrong with that?"

"Ah, so it was that way," Fang Jiugui said, marking down something on his papers. "Their sale is prohibited, you see, so I was wondering…" He made a dismissive gesture.

Qian Shanyi arched her eyebrow further. "I would have expected a full test from a spirit hunter. Is it not… standard procedure?"

Fang Jiugui waved her off. "The duel took place before my very eyes. There is no point in testing if a fish can swim."

Bullshit. If he could have called her on basic details of assembling a crystal bomb he would, just on the off chance she'd fail, which meant he couldn't, which meant he wasn't a real spirit hunter. So what then?

He introduced himself as simply a hunter. Perhaps a retired one? It might explain his realm, at least. Her adventure novels were full of such characters, taking on one last job for a wealth of spirit stones. And if he was, then he wouldn't be allowed to test her. At least, not legally.

This one realization was worth this entire discussion. If he was not a true spirit hunter, there would be a wealth of other things he wouldn't be allowed to do.

"Still, there are more mysteries that grace my notes," Fang Jiugui continued just a bit too quickly, perhaps already realizing what he let slip. "Is it not a little strange to get into a duel so quickly after arriving in town?"

"It was an internal matter between me, Jian Shizhe and his sect," Qian Shanyi said tersely. Time to make her retreat, before she made a mistake herself. "Was the duel all you wanted to talk about? I am afraid I am a busy woman, and do not have time for idle chit-chat."

"Well… There was just one more thing," Fang Jiugui said casually just as she was turning away. "It's the strangest thing, but… this fugitive, the bird fleeing on the winds of fortune?" He leaned forwards, lowering his voice. "Her name is also Qian Shanyi. Now isn't that a coincidence?"

Tick-tock, tick-tock. Her heart was calm, even as Qian Shanyi lifted her lip in disdain. "Are you accusing me, Fang Jiugui?" she said, voice dripping with quiet poison. "I have been known to have quite a temper."

Fang Jiugui raised his hands defensively, stepping back. "Oh but of course I wouldn't accuse a fellow cultivator with no evidence. But it's interesting, don't you think? The blood and sweat it takes to find this bird can never be unspent. And those of her family - why, the sights I've seen at their house, the nightmares of demonic cultivators…"

And there it was. A stab straight at her soul, that would have made her crack.

Are they safe? Did you threaten them, you demon?

But her heart could not be made to waver. Tick-tock, tick-tock it went. And so she held his stare unflinching.

"Are you implying they are my parents?" She calmly answered, raising one eyebrow curiously. "In Golden Rabbit Bay? That would be quite the trick. I recommend staying off the drink, fellow cultivator Fang. Good day."

She turned around and left, feeling Fang Jiugui's eyes boring into the back of her head all the way down the street.

And still her heart kept beating.

Qian Shanyi slipped inside the warehouse, quiet like a dormouse. Fang Jiugui did not follow her - or at least, she didn't see him, which meant little. With his senses of a building foundation cultivator, he could have easily kept track of her from the next street over.

Wang Yonghao was there, stacking the crates back up, and smiled at her as she came in. "How did the meeting go?" he said.

Qian Shanyi kept her face impassive, and motioned to their sound muffling formation. Wang Yonghao quirked an eyebrow, but followed after.

Once inside, Qian Shanyi took a deep breath, calmly sat down on the ground next to the entrance portal, calmly closed her eyes, buried her face in her hair, and finally let herself scream in terror.

They are fine they have to be fine they have to be that bastard what did he DO how DARE he -

Wang Yonghao was shouting something, but she wasn't listening, her thoughts spinning in place. Her mind's eye was filled with the faces of her father and mother, and a thousand thousand brutal images of their deaths, helpfully supplied by her imagination.

He had to be lying. He didn't say it explicitly. He didn't. Just a misdirection, it had to be -

She screamed again. It helped a little bit.

Slowly, she pulled her face out of her hair, her breathing panicked and choppy. Wang Yonghao was sitting in front of her, one hand on her shoulder.

"What's wrong?" Wang Yonghao asked. His face was white, terrified.

"I'll - I'll explain," she stuttered in between ragged breaths. She was shivering now, all the built up emotions coursing through her body at once. "But first I need - do you know how to restart a heart, in case of a dantian failure?"

"What?" Wang Yonghao said, his eyes growing to the size of saucers. "Your heart dantian -"

"No," Qian Shanyi cut him off. "I had to stop my own heart. I can restart it -"

"Why would you -"

"Do you know or not?!" she snapped.

Wang Yonghao swallowed. "I - yes. I know how to do it."

Qian Shanyi breathed out, clenching her teeth tightly to stop them from chattering. "Good," she said, laying flat on the ground, just in case. "I'll restart it. If I pass out and stop breathing, you know what to do."

She closed her eyes, and focused on her heart. Stopping it was far easier than restarting - the muscles wanted to beat together, and had to all be brought into motion all at once, while she pulled the spiritual energy lattice out at the exact same time. The first time she did this, she made a mistake. Fortunately she never experimented alone, and a fellow disciple saved her life with an appropriate talisman.

She did this twice before already. That her emotions were flying off the handle had to be partly down to the flow of spiritual energy through her heart meridian being affected by what she did.

Last time I kept it going for almost half an hour and it was fine -

She pushed the errant thoughts off to the side, and got to work. With six out of seven of her dantians open, her control over spiritual energy was far better than before. She got it done within a minute, and soon, her heart started to beat the same as always. Given her continuing panic, it meant a mile a minute.

It still hurt as if she was punched in the chest, and she hissed through her clenched teeth. These muscles weren't meant to ever fully relax.

She'd need a better plan if - when - she met Fang Jiugui again. She couldn't just walk around town like this.

Qian Shanyi opened her eyes and sat up, massaging her chest. She gave a brief nod to Wang Yonghao, whose services were thankfully not required. "The man we saw fly into the square is a rat-fucking spirit hunter, and he's after me," she spat out, trying to get her breathing and natural heartbeat to slow again. "We had a conversation. Had to stop my heart so my heartbeat wouldn't give my lies away, keep it beating with pure spiritual energy."

"What?!"

"Calm down," she said to him as much as herself. She looked over the warehouse room. "How many crates are left?"

"Maybe - maybe about a third? We were just finishing up -"

"Good," Qian Shanyi said decisively, finally feeling her usual calm start to come back to her, an outline of a plan forming in her mind. "Let's get this over with. I want us out of this fucking warehouse as soon as possible. As it is, we are like a dozen demon beasts all lined up for a flying sword out here."

Yep, definitely the meridian at fault. If Fang Jiugui so much as touched a hair on her parent's heads, she'd skin him alive and use his ligaments for shoelaces.

"But -"

"The crates, Yonghao," she snapped, getting up off the ground. "Get to it. I'll explain as we work. Only talk in the formation, that fucker might be lurking right by our door."

She stopped just at the edge, smoothing out her hair, wiping an errant tear out of the corner of her eye. Breathe in, breathe out. Mask back on.

She stepped through.

They worked quickly. All the crates have already been packed and nailed shut, they simply had to pull them back out. They didn't even need to stack them neatly - the warehouse workers could figure it all out later.

"If he is after you," Wang Yonghao asked, "why are we still taking the glass?"

"I am not going to fold completely just because some hunter joined the table with a hand he claims is good," Qian Shanyi blanched. "We worked hard to get this glassware. Even if we have to cut and run, we take it with us."

"But if he could check the warehouse, look in the crates, see the stones - isn't it leaving a loophole for him to find?"

"What a stupid question," Qian Shanyi snapped. "Everything is leaving some kind of loophole. It's a question of which one is larger. For now, he has no reason to even consider wasting his time on these crates. But if he is nearby now, which is likely, and right after I return, he senses us go through all the crates a second time, what will he think? That there is something worth looking into. I think our current deception can pass a casual examination - but can you vouch that an intense look could not find a single sign the crates were put into your inner world, that the glass wasn't laid out on the grass, or touched by a jiuweihu? I cannot."

Two crates were pulled out in silence.

"I am sorry for calling you stupid, it was actually a good question," Qian Shanyi said. "I am not thinking straight."

Wang Yonghao gave her a careful look. "And why not?"

Qian Shanyi stayed quiet for a bit. "He mentioned my parents," she finally said, pausing again to recall Fang Jiugui's exact words. "'The blood and sweat it takes to find this bird can never be unspent. And those of her family - why, the sights I've seen at their house, the nightmares of demonic cultivators…'"

"Oh."

"Yeah," she said grimly, "he speaks in a strange manner. It feels familiar somehow, but I can't quite place it. It's hard to tell what he means literally and what is just a fanciful saying. And yet."

Another crate came out, and both of them stayed quiet.

"Even if you aren't thinking completely straight, I still think you are mostly right. Let's take the glass."

"Thanks."

Good, simple work quickly calmed down Qian Shanyi, and by the time they were done with the warehouse, sheets of canvas torn off the windows and the tools put back where they belonged, double-checked against the inventory lists to make sure they did not forget anything, the last traces of her panic were gone.

They quickly headed back to the tavern, to plan and prepare for the future. Their room was much more secure than the one in a warehouse. If nothing else, nobody else had the key to it.

Which brought Qian Shanyi, Linghui Mei and Wang Yonghao together, huddled around a single itemized sheet of paper.

"This doesn't make any sense."

Qian Shanyi looked over the list she made a second time. They needed to know how Fang Jiugui could have found them, and went through every tracking method they could think of.

And none of them fit.

Fang Jiugui mentioned he was chasing after a fugitive. He said he was from Golden Rabbit Bay himself. Her sect had the means, motive and opportunity to hire a retired spirit hunter to chase her down. So take this as a given. How did he find them?

First, the obvious. On the date of her kidnapping, Wang Yonghao fell into a teleportation formation. This should have cut off any conventional methods of tracking - following footprints, scent trails, and so on.

The next thing to check for were tracking talismans. They were rare, and tended to be highly limited in range, but hypothetically, if one was hidden in Qian Shanyi's robes… But no. Qian Shanyi wore all new clothes now, and her old ones were torn to scraps. Wang Yonghao meticulously checked over his, and also found nothing. And of course as cultivators, if one was to be somehow implanted in their bodies, they would have known right away.

Qian Shanyi even considered that her sword might have had a talisman built into it, but a careful examination discarded that possibility too.

Long-range techniques were even more of a dead-end. There were some that could detect human beings from far away, with various limitations - but without a talisman to anchor the technique to, they lost their power extremely quickly. Even in the best of circumstances, someone managing to detect her from more than ten kilometers away would beggar belief - and she had never come closer than five hundred kilometers to the Golden Rabbit Bay.

If she was on the run from the imperial palace - perhaps she could imagine some rare artifact or technique that could manage it. But her sect had no such resources.

Next: rumors. Could her sect have simply known of her tribulation, heard her name mentioned by some traveler, perhaps with a bit of helping hand from the Heavens?

All but impossible. From Glass Ridge, Golden Rabbit Bay was a good twelve days of travel away by ship, and her tribulation was less than a week ago. The rumors couldn't have possibly reached them, not unless someone decided to pay for a voidbird. The only reason for such an expense would be to, perhaps, discuss her tribulation with an expert - but in such a case, they would have obviously included her report, signed as Lan Yishan, not Qian Shanyi.

This brought her to her next idea. Traitors. Her sect should have had no way of knowing where she was. So who did?

Wu Lanhua did, as did Liu Fakuang - she told them where she was heading. If either of them sent a message to her sect - either after she left their ship, or just before - it was possible for it to reach Golden Rabbit Bay in time, and for Fang Jiugui to speed over here on top of a flying sword. Just barely.

It fit the facts, but it still made no sense. What reason would Wu Lanhua have to betray her? They parted on very friendly terms, and her fiance was too oblivious to plan this. She felt, in her heart of hearts, that she had a good read on the pair.

So what was left? Confusing betrayal, or were they missing something?

Qian Shanyi sighed, leaning away from the list they wrote. Idly, she took one of her gloves off, to take a look at her hand. Fang Jiugui was trying to see something, after all… Or was he?

Clean, smooth skin, neither blemish nor hair sticking out. Very conventional style, for a female cultivator, but she never saw the point in going against the fashion on this particular question. Long fingers, nails kept short. Nothing that would have made her hand stand out all that much from the hands of a thousand other women, really.

She turned it over, and the lines on her palm caught her eye. Was that it? There was an old superstition that they could foretell your future, so perhaps they were unique enough to be a hint to her identity. But how could this help Fang Jiugui? It's not like she had left any palm prints around her sect. No, it must have been something else.

"Mei, tell me," Qian Shanyi said, still looking her hand over with suspicion she usually reserved for junior disciples caught stealing snacks from the kitchens. "Could you smell the difference between the sweat from my hands and…my neck, let's say?"

The jiuweihu nodded. "Yes, from up close. Why?"

"The spirit hunter wanted to take a look at my hands, I think," Qian Shanyi said, pursing her lips. Nothing conclusive. She pulled her glove back on. "I sent a letter to my sect some time ago. I was wondering if he could… track it back, somehow, by scent, and then prove I was myself."

"If he could," Linghui Mei said reasonably, "he wouldn't have needed you to take your gloves off. I could tell it from a step away, at least. But I couldn't follow the scent of a letter through… boats and dozens of couriers. There is nothing for the scent to catch on. I don't think anyone could."

Qian Shanyi sighed in frustration. "Yeah, I expected as much," she said, then shook her head. "Perhaps I simply made a mistake, and there is nothing there."

"Why do you even need to know?" Linghui Mei grumbled. "Let's just flee. He can't stop us."

"No," Qian Shanyi said immediately. "Fleeing is exactly what he wants."

She ruffled her hair, meeting the confused looks of the others head on. "Think through it carefully," she said, "why confront me at all, tell me he is looking for me, why mention my parents? I think he was trying to scare me. It makes sense, too - Jian Wei told him off from arresting me in his town, but his jurisdiction only extends so far. If I flee outside of it, Fang Jiugui could just grab me by the throat and drag me right back to Golden Rabbit Bay. No evidence necessary. On foot, we'd never outrun him."

"Alright," Linghui Mei said after a moment. "How about -" she made a cutting gesture across her throat. "One cultivator less and the world is better off."

"No. Building foundation? He'll kill you faster than you could even get your tails out," Qian Shanyi said, then turned to Wang Yonghao with a questioning look.

Wang Yonghao got a pained look on his face. "I mean - If I caught him sleeping, maybe?" he said, laughing slightly, looking back at Qian Shanyi. "But we aren't going to just kill people, right?"

Qian Shanyi chewed on her lip, brows furrowed in concentration.

"Shanyi?" Wang Yonghao asked uncertainly. "Shanyi, please -"

"I wasn't going to suggest it," Qian Shanyi snapped. "I was just - considering it." She shook her head. "It's a bad idea, in any case. It would be a mess to hide, I think. No, I only see one solution, in the short term."

She pointed one finger upwards, where the entrance to their world fragment laid closed. "Right now, Fang Jiugui won't dare touch me because I am under Jian Wei's protection," she said, "he will try to gather evidence about me, and then put together a case proving I am his runaway. Before he can manage that - we need a case of our own. Something that would cast doubt on all his assertions."

She turned to Linghui Mei. "If you can - please find where he stopped for the night. He stonewalled me about it, which means there might be some leverage there. He reeks of some truly disgusting alcohol - his trail won't be a hard one to follow." Turning to Wang Yonghao, she continued, "Yonghao. Could you visit that restaurant he landed at, ask the waitresses about the man? Feel free to tell them he seemed to be disturbingly focused on me, and you are a bit worried. In fact, tell them I sent you, but ask to keep my name out of it. It's always best to get ahead of the rumor mill."

"I can do that, yeah," Wang Yonghao said, frowning. "But Mei - it's too dangerous for her to go out, right? If he spots a third person with us -"

"He won't," Qian Shanyi said, shaking her head. "Because I will be heading to the library in Reflection Ridge. Fang Jiugui can't afford to let me out of his sight for long, lest I slip through the forest and flee, and so he will surely follow. Glaze Ridge should be safe from him in the meantime."

"And if he comes to talk to me?" Wang Yonghao grumbled. "I can't lie like you do. I still can't believe you stopped your own heart."

"Then vomit on his shoes," Qian Shanyi suggested casually.

Linghui Mei snorted down a laugh, and Wang Yonghao covered his face in his hands. Qian Shanyi frowned at both of them. "What?" She asked defensively. "It will end the conversation permanently. You can't talk to him because of his smell, questions over."

"Nothing, Shanyi. It's nothing."

Qian Shanyi snorted. Typical. "And don't forget to buy some spirit wine for our little late night celebration, while you are at it," she added.

Wang Yonghao gave her a strange look. "Is now really the time?"

"Now is exactly the perfect time," she countered, "We do not even know what we are dealing with, so we need a bit of relaxation to get new ideas flowing." She pursed her lips. "In the meantime, I will head to the library, work on the research for my Jian Shizhe education plan. I can no longer afford to slack off on it. I need some results I could show Jian Wei, and I need them fast. By morning, if I can manage it - or else he'd throw me to the wolves."

She shared a look with the other two. They both nodded. Wang Yonghao was right, way back then - she didn't have to do this alone. Even the heaviest boulder could be carried easily by a thousand hands working together.

Qian Shanyi turned away from the table, heading to where her rope harness was laying out on the grass. It was time to get to work.

"There's just one question," she muttered to herself, "With only a single night to work with, how do I transform a cockroach into a human being?"
 
He seemed… asleep. Head rolled back, a bit of drool dripping out of the corner of his mouth and staining the edge of his collar. He held his flask loosely in his right hand, the lid unscrewed and hanging by a crimson thread, just barely kept from dropping down onto the ground by the crook of his other elbow. Yet when Qian Shanyi passed a step away from him, he snapped awake, a wide grin stretching across his stubbled face.

"Ah, fellow cultivator Qian, was it?" Fang Jiugui said, pausing for a hacked cough, and wiping his mouth with his sleeve. "Would you grace this old hunter with a minute of your time?"

Qian Shanyi slowed down, turning her head slowly towards Fang Jiugui. Her lips curled further, into a disgusted grimace. "What possible business would I have," she said slowly, dropping one word after another like stones down a mountain. "with a drooling alcoholic?"

She expected anger. She tossed the insult directly into his face, and for all that he couldn't duel her himself, such blatant disrespect must have been rare for a building foundation cultivator. She'd have settled for annoyance. Instead Fang Jiugui laughed as if she had just played into some long-forgotten private joke. Joyful, unbothered.

Tch.

So much for trying to provoke him in public. She hoped he would make a scene right at the sect gates over the insult, and she'd find a way to get him thrown out of town for his trouble.

Even as he laughed, his eyes were focused, attentive, scanning her like she was but a bird seen over the tip of a notched arrow. Surprising, for someone who seemed to be fast asleep just a minute ago.

Without a drop of lust, at least - small mercies. She had more than enough experience to tell right away.

His gaze flickered to her gloved hands, and that same hint of a frown passed over his face, before vanishing. Just like in that gazebo. Definitely not a coincidence. What Qian Shanyi wouldn't have given for a way to hide them entirely, to keep whatever it was he tried to see far away from his eyes, but instead she kept her hands still at her sides, one resting comfortably on the pommel of her sword.

Her heart beat in an even rhythm, cut off from all of her emotions.

"Oh, jade beauty, but it's barely even a trifle. I only have a few questions," Fang Jiugui chuckled, coming down from his laughter. With his free hand, he ruffled through his pockets, and pulled out a small metal clip of papers, together with the stub of a coal pencil. There was something written on the top page, though in such horrible handwriting that Qian Shanyi had no chance of parsing it. "I was just establishing a… timeline, as Fates would have it. Standard procedure."
It may be just me since I've watched the show in the past several months, but...

Is it just me, or is our protagonist up against the cultivation equivalent of Columbo? :D

He introduced himself as simply a hunter. Perhaps a retired one? It might explain his realm, at least. Her adventure novels were full of such characters, taking on one last job for a wealth of spirit stones. And if he was, then he wouldn't be allowed to test her. At least, not legally.

This one realization was worth this entire discussion. If he was not a true spirit hunter, there would be a wealth of other things he wouldn't be allowed to do.
Ahh, not quite.

Though of course, Our Heroine may be getting a little too high on her own supply of ability to deduce other people's motivations. After all, it's always possible that the spirit hunter knows your reputation as an extremely confident woman with great faith in her own deductive power to Sherlock Holmes her way through other people's motivations, is playing the game at one level higher than you, and is willingly passing up the opportunity to quiz you on crystal bombs (at least for now) to fool you into a false sense of security.

"Well… There was just one more thing," Fang Jiugui said casually just as she was turning away.
My God, he IS the cultivation equivalent of Columbo!

Jeez, a Columbo-type is a terrible opponent for someone like Qian Shanyi. Columbo's entire methodology revolves around taking down people who are genuinely clever and fairly in-cntrol of their own situations, through a combination of dogged persistence, convincing them that they're much smarter than he is, and maneuvering them into screwing up.

Qian Shanyi already believes she's smarter than virtually everyone around her. She's half-caught already! :D

"I am not going to fold completely just because some hunter joined the table with a hand he claims is good," Qian Shanyi blanched. "We worked hard to get this glassware. Even if we have to cut and run, we take it with us."

"But if he could check the warehouse, look in the crates, see the stones - isn't it leaving a loophole for him to find?"

"What a stupid question," Qian Shanyi snapped. "Everything is leaving some kind of loophole. It's a question of which one is larger. For now, he has no reason to even consider wasting his time on these crates. But if he is nearby now, which is likely, and right after I return, he senses us go through all the crates a second time, what will he think? That there is something worth looking into. I think our current deception can pass a casual examination - but can you vouch that an intense look could not find a single sign the crates were put into your inner world, that the glass wasn't laid out on the grass, or touched by a jiuweihu? I cannot."
Yes, you are up against a Columbo and all of this is entirely realistic, but...

"I am sorry for calling you stupid, it was actually a good question," Qian Shanyi said. "I am not thinking straight."
This.

Damn. Shanyi apologized. That proves she's in rough shape.
 
Jeez, a Columbo-type is a terrible opponent for someone like Qian Shanyi. Columbo's entire methodology revolves around taking down people who are genuinely clever and fairly in-cntrol of their own situations, through a combination of dogged persistence, convincing them that they're much smarter than he is, and maneuvering them into screwing up.
Also, there's probably some truth to what Colombo says: that they're generally amateur killers who overlook certain details that any experienced detective will pick up on. This applies to Shanyi particularly, because smart as she is, we've already seen she's not as world-wide as she thinks she is.

Case example: because Fang Jiugui did this a while ago (in RL time):
He returned to his bureau, and laid the letter down in a metal tray, taking out one of the many unlabeled bottles from his shelves and spraying the liquid within onto the paper. He waited for the alchemical substance to be absorbed, then locked the paper in between a pair of steel sheets, and heated it over a candle. Once the letter popped out, it was covered in purple fingerprints, standing out against the yellow paper.

This substance was something from back in his days as an imperial spirit hunter, and he avoided using it as much as he could - getting his hands on more would be a pain and a half. The empire kept the recipe quite secret, as well as what it was actually used for - if all cultivators learned how easily they could leave evidence behind, they would lose one of their best tracking tools. After all, not many people knew that fingerprints tended to be unique.
 
This applies to Shanyi particularly, because smart as she is, we've already seen she's not as world-wide as she thinks she is.

Case example: because Fang Jiugui did this a while ago (in RL time):
Note that one of the implications here is that Mr. (not-a-spirit-)Hunter is probably going to know she's his target soon enough, but he's not going to want to provide the evidence why; it's a secret Imperial Spirit Hunters would like to remain a secret, and Fang Jiugui wants to stay on good terms with them. He needs something on her that he can actually admit.
 
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Note that one of the implications here is that Mr. (not-a-spirit-)Hunter is probably going to know she's his target soon enough, but he's not going to want to provide the evidence why; it's a secret Imperial Spirit Hunters would like to remain a secret, and Fang Jiugui wants to stay on good terms with them. He needs something on her that he can actually admit.
AFAIK he also hasn't gotten that evidence yet, because Qian Shanyi was wearing gloves in this chapter. Unless there's some sort of complicated bluff going on and he meant to tip her off about the fingerprints, I think this means that he doesn't even have that evidence.

If she fully figures out that it's fingerprints he's after, Qian Shanyi might be able to cast doubt in his mind about her identity.
 
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Also, there's probably some truth to what Colombo says: that they're generally amateur killers who overlook certain details that any experienced detective will pick up on.
I don't think Columbo really says that in the show; usually the police has no clue and he's the only one who spots some small detail that all other detectives explain away.
 
AFAIK he also hasn't gotten that evidence yet, because Qian Shanyi was wearing gloves in this chapter. Unless there's some sort of complicated bluff going on and he meant to tip her off about the fingerprints, I think this means that he doesn't even have that evidence.

If she fully figures out that it's fingerprints he's after, Qian Shanyi might be able to cast doubt in his mind about her identity.

Mei for instance, could almost certainly form a hand the exact size, shape and smell as Shanyi's but with different fingerprints at which point it's a matter of letting him get hold of a suitably prepared used teacup.
 
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