It was a dark, rainy night in Hoozuki City.
Kyubey had been aware that Homura had restarted...
Kyubey had been aware that Homura had restarted...
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1 - The Wish I Will Make
Shiranui
The Yakuza's Golden Dragon
- Location
- Schroedinger's Box
It was a dark, rainy night in Hoozuki City.
Kyubey had been aware that Homura had restarted the cycle. And yes, he was highly observant of her anomaly-like existence. Incubators like himself were a hive mind, and had very distinctive memory capabilities. Their memories were like of a photographic type, as humans would call it. But theirs had infinite more potential than these humans. Incubators remembered key events. Even if that Homura girl thought he didn't remember, he had full entire awareness. He was just putting up a front, like all humans themselves did. Lying must be a very key attribute in this species survival tactics.
Besides, didn't she see how useless it was, anyways? No matter how she changed the story, she was destined to fail anyways. Because of this, he knew that regardless of the outcome, it was just a waste of everyone's time. Humans were so oddly attached. If Madoka Kaname truly meant somebody to Homura Akemi, she should just let her die and let him win. Simple. Rudimentary. No strings attached.
There was no point in Homura's struggle in the end, really.
The more she rewound time, the more threads of fate wrapped around Madoka's existence, further entangling her to the point of no return. Humans could never let go of anything, and it burdened their existence. And even if they did let go, well... it took time. Time was something that Kyubey didn't have at the moment, considering he wanted to save the universe from dying.
He had to work even harder considering of Suzune Amano had come into play now. It wasn't like Kyubey was a fool. He allowed her wish, although he didn't expect for her to become a magical girl hunter. The poor girl probably thought she was actually saving them from their pain by killing them off.
As Kyubey recalled, after he told her about the magical girl system and how the magical girls became witches for them to hunt, she immediately rejected it. Suzune told him that she will kill the magical girls to prevent more witches being born into the world. Then again, had that girl considered the possibility that it would force his hand to make more of them to compensate for the losses? Kyubey cared not really if she knew or not. The important point was that the more she killed, the more would be created in retaliation.
Those who were in deep despair, clinging onto a shred of hope... there were plenty of girls who suffered this inclination. Why not make a wish to make their troubles go away? Sure, he didn't specify what it meant to be a magical girl. Then again, do they ever have the time to ask that question?
So here Kyubey was, out on the hunt to create more magical girls or to keep in contact with those he had already contracted with. The town that Suzune currently resided in had been practically decimated in their magical girl count. She surely would come here and stir up trouble. If he really had to commend Suzune on one thing, she did a bang up job in trying to break the system. He'll give some credit in that regard.
Yet like Homura, she too will keep on failing. An endless cycle of failure, regret, bad decisions, and despair will surely teach them the folly of their ways. How could they break a system that has been in place for countless years? In fact, they should thank the Incubators for even existing. Without them, the human race was nothing. Then again, it wasn't even a race to begin with. Considering all the fallacies of humanity, how they make stupid decisions and communicated poorly, their deaths seemed so very insignificant in return.
Hope and despair, if Kyubey would have to describe it, it's like a coin. They were inevitably the same. It would be a fifty-fifty that one would land on either hope or despair. Although it was a one hundred percent guarantee that the coin existed and would torment humanity for many lifetimes to come.
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Stopping for a moment, he felt the power of a magical girl not too far from him. So. There was a girl destined to become a magical girl within this city. That was unexpected. There weren't many magical girls in Hoozuki City yet, considering that there were few magical signatures. He had to make more, and that would be a lot of work. He would have to do it before Suzune came into this town and convince these kids that Suzune was their enemy, which should be easy, considering most were within the ranges of eight years old to eighteen, susceptible to honeyed words.
Following the trail, he had noticed that he wound up at a school. It was an odd location for the magical girl to be. The rain weighted down Kyubey's fur. He briefly looked up to see the sign to see the school name, however the rain made it difficult to read. Whatever. It was a school, that was where the potential candidate was. Not like the school even mattered, in the long run. Of course, it wasn't going to be that simple to get in. The front doors were apparently locked, since school was closed up for the day and the faculty had gone home. He had to think for a moment. Circling around the area would be the best option, he had quickly found a back door, slightly ajar. Whoever wanted to get in here must had taken the keys out of the faculty office, got in and forgot to shut the door behind them.
Wouldn't a human describe this as a very curious situation, then?
Going through the building, it was eerily silent, except for the rain going on outside. Most humans wouldn't be here after hours. Something was off. Kyubey had been through his share of abandoned buildings. There was no logic in emotions. He didn't fear them. They could be harnessed and controlled, which it seemed like for some species, it was entirely impossible to do so.
The hallways were barren and devoid of laughter of students, and he didn't mind much of that. Humans were loud, prattling creatures, who often cried even over the littlest things. He remembered a magical girl that he contracted at a young age, about ten who had made a mundane, simple wish. He didn't remember the wish. Not like he genuinely cared. She had been a crybaby, always had been. It was the worst when she faced a witch. Kyubey had always assisted, asides from the fact when he told her to run away when that witch kidnapped her friend, both she and her friend died at the hands of the witch.
Her screams would have haunted anyone. On the other hand, Kyubey didn't show remorse for a stupid action. He told her to run. She didn't listen. Life was simply unfair, especially to those who had gentle and weak hearts. She made her choice and life dealt with her choice accordingly and logically.
Rounding a few corners, he also found the door to the roof left ajar. He didn't feel like he had to mentally take note of all the appearance of the school. Schools were a hindrance, considering it left students in there and not making contracts with him. Unless a tragedy happened, then that was a different story. Probably due to the same person rushing to get to the roof. Although the roof was quite a specific place. It took a bit more effort, since this door wasn't as ajar as the last one, and had to squeeze himself through, which was plenty
difficult enough.
As soon as Kyubey outside, he witnessed a girl sitting on the ledge, completely drenched by the rain. He could barely see within the rain of her figure. It was hard to determine that. It brought intrigue to Kyubey though. Who was this girl and why did she, of all people, had the potential to become a magical girl?
Heading up to where the girl was, he had gotten onto her lap, and looked up at her. "I have come to you with a contract. A contract to become a magical girl. When you sign it, you will gain magical powers to fight the beings known as Witches in exchange for your wish. Sort of a give and take process, really. I'll explain more once we get started. By the way, I'm Kyubey. So, won't you make a contract with me and become a magical girl?"
"..." The girl was silent. Kyubey wondered if she was deaf or mute. Then again, he spoke to her telepathically, so maybe she was working on a response. Her mouth opened, and the words tumbled from her lips, telling the magical messenger of her desire...
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The Wish That Binds You...
[] What is your first and last name? The story revolves around you, so you at least deserve a proper name, at least that much.
[] Your appearance and your age? After all, image is everything in this world. Hair color, eye color, normal outfit, so on and so forth.
[] What is your personality and backstory like? How did you reach to this point? It couldn't be for no reason entirely, considering the efforts you had taken to get up to the school roof... Although it seems that you are now sitting on the ledge out in the rain. You didn't simply choose the life you had, you are born to it.
[] Make your wish.
- [] The shape of your Soul Gem, your color theme, and your magical costume, then?
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Hello again, Sufficient Velocity. It is me, Shiranui. I'm giving another shot at doing a PMMM Quest - this time, it is a reboot of the first one I did. Now that I have a better grasp on questing considering that I have experience of running one successful Quest - being the JoJo's Bizarre Adventure one, which is still running by the way, I feel I can re-roll my chances on this and get this Quest to work out this time. I'm going to note that yes, this character is a blank slate. However, this time around I have a better idea of what is going to go down.
Being that, there's not many rules that I am going to have going on this time around, as long as we have fun and get along, I see no need to get really picky here.
Of course, as you have already noted, there is a free-form wish. That being said, you have quite a bit of potential, but not completely universe shattering. Sort of a build your own character and build your own wish sort of theme going here which might be a big theme and feature in these sorts of Quests. I will give you a couple of days, or depending how it goes. Making a wish is certainly going to be an important factor how things turn out here.
The goal is to ensure that she survives against the trials and tribulations that will come to her, such as the witches, Suzune Amano, Homura Akemi, and many more obstacles who can and will try to snuff out your life. As well as try to break the never-ending time loop of Walpurgisnacht and open the gateway to a new future. Good luck!
Fate can still fuck you over anyways.
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Character Profile
Shiranui
The Yakuza's Golden Dragon
- Location
- Schroedinger's Box
CHARACTER PROFILE
Ueda Tomoko
Title: ???
Status: Depressed
Grief: 2000/3000
Sanity: Normal
Reputation: Caring/Quiet
Affiliates:
- Kyubey
- Irie Shirokage
- Mami Tomoe
- Madoka Kaname
- Sayaka Miki
Convert (Turns Mental Energy into Physical. Can be used 3 times. Use with caution.
Cost: 30 Grief
Restriction (Non-Lethal Bind, Lethal Eradication.)
Cost: 150 Grief
Nullification (Disables Enchantment and Magical Abilities within a ten meter radius.)
Cost: 500 Grief
Frigid Spiral (Attack that generates vortexes of ice.)
Cost: 300 Grief
Sub-Zero Infusion (Attack that infuses ice onto the spear. Can potentially freeze foes.)
Cost: 250 Grief
Cost: 30 Grief
Restriction (Non-Lethal Bind, Lethal Eradication.)
Cost: 150 Grief
Nullification (Disables Enchantment and Magical Abilities within a ten meter radius.)
Cost: 500 Grief
Frigid Spiral (Attack that generates vortexes of ice.)
Cost: 300 Grief
Sub-Zero Infusion (Attack that infuses ice onto the spear. Can potentially freeze foes.)
Cost: 250 Grief
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Crucial Info & Mechanics
Shiranui
The Yakuza's Golden Dragon
- Location
- Schroedinger's Box
CRUCIAL INFO
- Hoozuki City is doing fine... for now.
- I have a penchant of wanting to curl up into a ball whenever I'm home.
- I like flowers. They smell nice. Plus flowers are pretty...
- I hate the smell of alcohol. It disgusts me. How could anyone drink this and not feel sick?
- Kyubey is really my only friend right now in terms of interaction. I'm unsure if I should like him or not yet...
- Relationship with my parents are falling apart. It depresses me that I'm losing the people I care about.
- You're a magical girl now! Hip-hip hooray.
- The Magical Girls in Hoozuki City, you aren't positive about how many more are there. You want to be friends with them though.
- You have hunted your first Witch - Alice, the Witch of Puppetry. Good thing that you had Irie and Mami to assist you! ...And Kyubey, as well.
- A fire has happened at your house, flames consuming what once was your residence. Your mom is critical condition and your dad is nowhere to be found.
- Everything hurts.
MECHANICS
- Grief. The more Grief you have, the more potential of witching out. You don't want to witch out.
- Your Skills cost Grief. That means your Soul Gem darkens depending on how much you use during the duration of the Quest. Spend those skills when you really need them the most!
- The more Sanity you lose, the more untrustworthy/dangerous you will be to other Magical Girls and higher potential of witching out due to losing your mind.
- Reputation can change on the dime of hat. It also depends on how what choices you make. It can make you popular in some circles, unpopular in others.
- Affiliates are those whom you've made contact with and have a connection to at the moment in time. Affiliations also change depending on the choices that you make within the Quest.
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Murderhobo of Nod
The Antisocial Alpaca
I'm assuming we are not going for more antagonistic wishes/personalities this time around? ;_;
Edit: I'll make a attempt at something convincing when I have more time to think it through.
Edit: I'll make a attempt at something convincing when I have more time to think it through.
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Murderhobo of Nod
The Antisocial Alpaca
Okay then. MC isn't suicidal, now, is she?
Shiranui
The Yakuza's Golden Dragon
- Location
- Schroedinger's Box
In regards to that, I can say MC has suicidal thoughts but never goes through with them, all due to out of fear, and also it depends what is formed from the vote, too. It would depend more on the vote of how MC got to this point where she decides to make a wish.
Shiranui
The Yakuza's Golden Dragon
- Location
- Schroedinger's Box
Oh no! The best senpai is down, I repeat, the best senpai is down! Medic! MEDIC! 
I should add as long as it isn't like attempting to change the magical girl system in any way or the like, anything that would just override the whole meaning behind MC's struggles, it can be done.
I should add as long as it isn't like attempting to change the magical girl system in any way or the like, anything that would just override the whole meaning behind MC's struggles, it can be done.
- Location
- Elsewhere
Time to go through with the gladiator.
The arena awaits us. Ave, Imperator, morituri te salutant!
[X] Nae Mori (奈緒 森)
[X] 17 years old. Beautiful long wavy lavender hair that reaches to the chest. B-cup breasts.
[X] A complete attention whore. She once had many eyes on her and was praised for her skill at arts, but at one point, she found out that everyone was actually making fun of her. Desperate for approval, she did many things to draw the spotlights onto her, but only got more insincere praise and laughs, driving her onto this position.
[X] I wish that everyone who wants to betray me or hurt me stabs me from the front, not the back. That if no one likes me, then they be forced to tell that to my face. What I mean to say is: I wish everyone around me tells me what they think of me, without lying or hiding things.
[X] A sharp long shape, almost like a small sword or dagger. The colors of glorious crimson and gold. An armor of dubious utility, but magnificent aesthetics with a cape that doubles as a Matador's capote.
The arena awaits us. Ave, Imperator, morituri te salutant!
[X] Nae Mori (奈緒 森)
[X] 17 years old. Beautiful long wavy lavender hair that reaches to the chest. B-cup breasts.
[X] A complete attention whore. She once had many eyes on her and was praised for her skill at arts, but at one point, she found out that everyone was actually making fun of her. Desperate for approval, she did many things to draw the spotlights onto her, but only got more insincere praise and laughs, driving her onto this position.
[X] I wish that everyone who wants to betray me or hurt me stabs me from the front, not the back. That if no one likes me, then they be forced to tell that to my face. What I mean to say is: I wish everyone around me tells me what they think of me, without lying or hiding things.
[X] A sharp long shape, almost like a small sword or dagger. The colors of glorious crimson and gold. An armor of dubious utility, but magnificent aesthetics with a cape that doubles as a Matador's capote.
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DON'T SCARY
Hope is the road to disappointment....
[X] Satsuki Naegi
[X]
[X] Age: 14
[X] Personality: Rebellious, cynical,ruthless,prideful,cunning,and ambitious.
And her backstory: Satsuki was raised in poor household with a overworked father and younger brother. So she decided to join a small time gang to help make ends meet and she loathe to admit,but she do enjoy the freedom and the thrill of what's she do. But she does think she's a dangerous burden to her family, and worse a disappoint to her Father. Which bring us to this current situation.
[X] I wish I had the power to be much more than some dumb girl who can barely help the people she loves.
-[X] A flat shape,almost like a tattoo. The color is a greyish white. Fierce and animalistic yet noble looking armour. A strange alien and deadly looking saber and equally strange shield.
Let's rule the world...for our family of course.
[X]
[X] Personality: Rebellious, cynical,ruthless,prideful,cunning,and ambitious.
And her backstory: Satsuki was raised in poor household with a overworked father and younger brother. So she decided to join a small time gang to help make ends meet and she loathe to admit,but she do enjoy the freedom and the thrill of what's she do. But she does think she's a dangerous burden to her family, and worse a disappoint to her Father. Which bring us to this current situation.
[X] I wish I had the power to be much more than some dumb girl who can barely help the people she loves.
-[X] A flat shape,almost like a tattoo. The color is a greyish white. Fierce and animalistic yet noble looking armour. A strange alien and deadly looking saber and equally strange shield.
Let's rule the world...for our family of course.
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Murderhobo of Nod
The Antisocial Alpaca
[X] Age: 14, Pic
[X] It would've been fine if you had jumped, now, wouldn't it? From this height; you were quite certain. The funny thing is, however, that despite yourself, you couldn't bring a finality to your own misery. Wanting to die so badly, but not being able enough to bring yourself to do the deed? Cowardice, pure and unadulterated cowardice. The release you sought is right in front of you, yet, the utter idea of death has stirred up certain emotions within you. Fear, fear of everything coming to a abrupt and sudden end; resentment and hatred for those who pushed you to the brink; but worst of all is the feeling of defeat hanging you like a noose. Thankfully, fortunate or not, a little furry animal offers you a wish, any wish. Maybe this is what you really needed? A chance to start anew?
[X] "I wish to never be this pathetic and weak. Ever!"
- [X] Teardrop, Silver, Gothic-Lolita dress with lots ribbons, basking in our newfound confidence and ego?
TL;DR: Mindfuck ourselves into (false) emotional stability. Can't break a goddamn mountain.
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AnonymousRabbit
Rabbit Faced
Oh shit!
*scrambles the jets*
I need to get home!
*scrambles the jets*
I need to get home!
AnonymousRabbit
Rabbit Faced
[X] Tomoko Ueda
[X] A youthful girl not even in her second decade. Has a plain, boyish looking bobcut hair colored dark blue bordering black and stormy gray eyes. Currently 16 yrs old.
[X] A girl driven to do what's 'right'. Soft hearted and normally goes with the flow of the situation. She has the capability to adapt but can be easily overwhelmed. The pressures of school and signs of her family falling apart has been becoming too much for her. She's left isolated by her family due to them attempting to keep her out of their affairs, leaving her helpless to mend things between her parents. She simply feels that she's aburden at this point.
[X] I wish I was strong enough so that I won't reach this point again. I want to have a will of steel that'll let me trample down my problems.
-[x] The Star. She'll wear a long open, dark blue long coat with a hood. She'll also be wearing a long pair of boots extending up to her knees with a dark skirt to match the tank top she has underneath her coat. Her theme will be deep blue with the theme of cobalt lights. She'll wield a a star shaped spear with the tip extended into a fine blade.
[X] A youthful girl not even in her second decade. Has a plain, boyish looking bobcut hair colored dark blue bordering black and stormy gray eyes. Currently 16 yrs old.
[X] A girl driven to do what's 'right'. Soft hearted and normally goes with the flow of the situation. She has the capability to adapt but can be easily overwhelmed. The pressures of school and signs of her family falling apart has been becoming too much for her. She's left isolated by her family due to them attempting to keep her out of their affairs, leaving her helpless to mend things between her parents. She simply feels that she's aburden at this point.
[X] I wish I was strong enough so that I won't reach this point again. I want to have a will of steel that'll let me trample down my problems.
-[x] The Star. She'll wear a long open, dark blue long coat with a hood. She'll also be wearing a long pair of boots extending up to her knees with a dark skirt to match the tank top she has underneath her coat. Her theme will be deep blue with the theme of cobalt lights. She'll wield a a star shaped spear with the tip extended into a fine blade.
Murderhobo of Nod
The Antisocial Alpaca
[X] Plan Rabbit
I can dig it.
I can dig it.
Shiranui
The Yakuza's Golden Dragon
- Location
- Schroedinger's Box
Quite lovely! It shall certainly be time for magical girls. There's so many magical things to be had with a magical girl! It so totally won't go wrong later on, no way, no how... Because magical girls are cute and must remain cute forever.
AnonymousRabbit
Rabbit Faced
Complete Global Saturation
DON'T SCARY
Hope is the road to disappointment....
Personally,I'm sick of these main characters in madoka quests,because they all starting to sound the same. I want a madoka quest!protagonist who is not afraid to do the dirty shit in the magical girl buiness,and crack a few skulls along the way. Besides the criminal background and experience will be a big advantage for us.
And besides, I want to sit in a throne inside an abandoned warehouse sending our lackeys (magical girl or otherwise) to do our dirty work while plotting to take overing the city(gotta start from sonewhere).
And besides, I want to sit in a throne inside an abandoned warehouse sending our lackeys (magical girl or otherwise) to do our dirty work while plotting to take overing the city(gotta start from sonewhere).
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AnonymousRabbit
Rabbit Faced
Who's more appropriate than not!Black Rock Shooter?
Murderhobo of Nod
The Antisocial Alpaca
Its kinda hard for me justify the dickery angle when MC is confirmed to be suicidal. Unless we go vengeance route.
For that, we need to be initially callous and dig the pit ever deeper. Then set everything on fire, with napalm, lots and lots of napalm.
However, personally, I just want Magical Girl with absolutely no moral fiber in her being, that believes she's always right, despite being very, very wrong.
- Location
- St. Petersburg
Not very good at 'design your own protagonist' business, sorry.
However...
Because there is no way that can go wrong.
I'll go with @The Oldman, but leave a quetion of appearance out.
And the wish is shortened to a more manageable size.
[X] Nae Mori (奈緒 森)
[X] 17 years old
-[X] Appearance: Beautiful long wavy lavender hair that reaches to the chest.
[X] A complete attention whore. She once had many eyes on her and was praised for her skill at arts, but at one point, she found out that everyone was actually making fun of her. Desperate for approval, she did many things to draw the spotlights onto her, but only got more insincere praise and laughs, driving her onto this position.
[X] I wish people would never lie to me or hide things from me.
[X] A sharp, elongated shape, almost like a small dagger. The colors of glorious crimson and gold. An armor of dubious utility, but magnificent aesthetics with a cape that doubles as a Matador's capote.
Edit: actually, let's add the appearance too. I know just the pic. There!
The character is flawed, but not overly so as to make her unlikeable. Vain and prideful, yes, but the rest of the characteristics are for us to flesh out. We are doing to be the most fashionable magical detective there is!
She also reminds me of the original Nae Mori from before the reboot.
However...
makes me want for a protagonist that would wish that people never lie to her, ever.
Because there is no way that can go wrong.
I'll go with @The Oldman, but leave a quetion of appearance out.
...probably because I don't want to be defined by the size of our cups.
And the wish is shortened to a more manageable size.
[X] Nae Mori (奈緒 森)
[X] 17 years old
-[X] Appearance: Beautiful long wavy lavender hair that reaches to the chest.
[X] I wish people would never lie to me or hide things from me.
[X] A sharp, elongated shape, almost like a small dagger. The colors of glorious crimson and gold. An armor of dubious utility, but magnificent aesthetics with a cape that doubles as a Matador's capote.
Edit: actually, let's add the appearance too. I know just the pic. There!
The character is flawed, but not overly so as to make her unlikeable. Vain and prideful, yes, but the rest of the characteristics are for us to flesh out. We are doing to be the most fashionable magical detective there is!
She also reminds me of the original Nae Mori from before the reboot.
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LucidProp
Pocky Eating MafiaDoka
[X] Nae Mori (奈緒 森)
[X] A complete attention whore. She once had many eyes on her and was praised for her skill at arts, but at one point, she found out that everyone was actually making fun of her. Desperate for approval, she did many things to draw the spotlights onto her, but only got more insincere praise and laughs, driving her onto this position.
[X] I wish people would never lie to me or hide things from me.
[X] A sharp, elongated shape, almost like a small dagger. The colors of glorious crimson and gold. An armor of dubious utility, but magnificent aesthetics with a cape that doubles as a Matador's capote.
[X] A complete attention whore. She once had many eyes on her and was praised for her skill at arts, but at one point, she found out that everyone was actually making fun of her. Desperate for approval, she did many things to draw the spotlights onto her, but only got more insincere praise and laughs, driving her onto this position.
[X] I wish people would never lie to me or hide things from me.
[X] A sharp, elongated shape, almost like a small dagger. The colors of glorious crimson and gold. An armor of dubious utility, but magnificent aesthetics with a cape that doubles as a Matador's capote.