Petals of Titanium -- My Life as a Mecha Setting Bridge Bunny Quest

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That's a good title, considering that the United Solar Empire Navy uses silver, and the Divine Navy uses gold.

Only the best for you. :V
Gold of course also represents nobility, wealth and divinity, while silver represents persistence, inner strength and change, like phases of the moon.

Look at me, trying to sell you on the name for your third season while you haven't even started the second yet.

So in sequel, we could be actual mecha pilot not bridge bunny? :V

I think we are up to a perspective change, which is why I jokingly suggested Amani's sister for our next protag.

There's also a possibility of playing someone higher-ranking, like (G)Lori(ana), Her Imperial Princesshood Daystar Helios... Anja, so that we can continue being a bridge bunny.

Maybe someone different. Someone... Jovial?
I'll be here all night.
 
So in sequel, we could be actual mecha pilot not bridge bunny? :V
I'm not sure a series about a mecha pilot would have much success. There's a reason this story went with the tried and true trope of taking the point of view of a bridge scans officer; it gives you an easy way to give you a broad view of the battle all at once. If you tried to make a mecha pilot the protagonist, it'd be too small scope and chaotic.
 
I mean, if Gazzeteer really wants to wrench some hearts (that's how that expression works, right?), they could put us on the side of the Divine Empire.
 
I mean, if Gazzeteer really wants to wrench some hearts (that's how that expression works, right?), they could put us on the side of the Divine Empire.

That's for Season 3, Petals of Gold and Silver (TM)

Well, it's not like we won't try to defect at the earliest opportunity, since the Divine Empire are unambiguously assholes, and the Loyalist Empire are at least trying-to-be-better assholes.

Well, since we are in an anachronistic setting and all
With a balance of power slowly shifting from the old circles and into the commoners' hands
There might be a point some time in the future, when our protag raises a flag and shouts "Viva la Revolution!"

Anyway, I'm pretty excited.
 
Well, it's not like we won't try to defect at the earliest opportunity, since the Divine Empire are unambiguously assholes, and the Loyalist Empire are at least trying-to-be-better assholes.
The GM is capable. They could easily cast the viewpoint characters as a loyal reformists, or someone else with reasons to stay.
 
The GM is capable. They could easily cast the viewpoint characters as a loyal reformists, or someone else with reasons to stay.

Good luck with that. Coming up with a sympathetic character that won't desert from this thisness if given an opportunity is going to be tough.

Two words: ping-pong balls.
 
Huh nice.....hoping to see an what-if chapter of Amani and J6 together after the war won so I can accept this pairing.

Anyway its bit surprising using deflectors then again mercy and boldness if Daystar personally going around asking the enemy to side with her one by one or by groups, was expecting more recruits from our own side who lost their jobs or everything due to the invasion.
 
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Acknowledgements & Future Plans
Acknowledgements

I'm a little surprised myself to finally be at this point. It's just three months shy of two full years since I started — that's nine months longer than my original projections for how long I wanted to take at this. Not so bad, all considered.

I'm extremely grateful to all of my readers, both the ones who have stuck it out over the long term, and the relative newcomers who worked their way through what eventually became a fairly massive backlog. I've greatly enjoyed seeing all of you react to my work update to update, and I think that I've learned a lot about this format and grown as a writer. The quest doesn't happen without all of you. I know that this hasn't always been the most uplifting of journeys, but I hope most can at least be satisfied in the end.

In particular, I would like to give a special thanks to @Kei. Without your encouragement, support, and willingness to be a sounding board for all my ideas — good or terrible — I definitely would not all be here, wrapping this thing up. Certain parts of the quest definitely would be far worse without you pointing me in the right direction. The two of us have been writing together for a very long time now, and I'm so lucky to have you.

I also need to thank @VagueZ and @Donn for being so willing to help me sift through typo-ridden final drafts... which I will then edit again, and promptly make new typos in. Vague in particular has been extremely helpful whenever I need help figuring out something like "how big is Saturn when viewed from Titan".

Anyone who has told me that they enjoyed my work or expanded on their thoughts about it has helped keep me motivated more than I can say.

I hope you enjoy what I do next.

Future Plans

Petals of Carbon Steel: As announced at the end of the epilogue, early in the new year, I will be starting a new quest continuing the larger story where it left off in Petals of Titanium. I'll be spending the coming months getting some additional things finalised and planned. Some early details of that are:

- Told from the perspective of a new protagonist, an ordinary pilot operating a mass produced mecha.

- ... meaning another round of character generation, which I have some ideas for how to handle a bit better than I have in the past.

- Takes place largely in the Jupiter System

- Will feature a number of returning characters

Discord Server: I've been waffling on the idea for a while, but I've got enough people following my quest(s) that it's worth having a shot at, at least. If no one wants to use it, then there's no actual loss there. There are some things where it's just useful to have one over just a forum thread.

Patreon for Carbon Steel: This I've been waffling on even harder, and it's kind of embarrassing to have to broach the topic at all. At the end of the day, though, my financial situation has been getting progressively worse, and at some point I'll have to make some drastic changes, like getting an additional job which would necessarily eat into a lot of the time I spend writing, or cutting back on expenses that help me work on things like quests. I'd definitely never expect anyone to contribute to something like that, but if it worked out, even a few tens of dollars a month would be a pretty substantial help. It's definitely something where I'd have to very carefully consider how I handled it, I'd never want to let something like that make the experience worse for anyone who is just reading/voting.

Interim Projects

Between now and getting a topic up for Carbon Steel, I've got a few things I'm going to be working on, less seriously than I pursue main Petals updates.

- Petals of Titanium "what if" side stories — these are more or less what they sound like. Essentially short stories that explore how things could have looked with different protagonist backgrounds, decisions along the way, and romantic interests. I've got two in mind, at present.

- I've started a short, casual Star Wars fan quest called Fallen Empires. Just for fun, to keep me writing between now and Carbon Steel. Just plugging it here in case it sounds interesting to anyone.
 
The best thing about graduating uni and getting a job is that I now have a little money to throw at the artists whose stuff I enjoy, so I say go for the Patreon!
 
God what an ending. Truly magnificent What a wild ride overall.

And there's gonna be a sequel that I'll actually be able to be around for from the start? Sign me the heck up!
 
I had to drop this story a while back, so now that it's finished I've come back to pick up where I left off. A great ending to a great story. I'm definitely excited for the sequel.
 
Gonna be honest, I'm not sure how I feel about not playing as a familiar face for the sequel, but Gaz has always delivered and I'll put my trust in them still!

2020 can't come soon enough!
 
Thanks for writing this quest and congrats on finishing (this installment)! I've throughly enjoyed your story and am looking forward to its continuation :D
 
In particular, I would like to give a special thanks to @Kei. Without your encouragement, support, and willingness to be a sounding board for all my ideas — good or terrible — I definitely would not all be here, wrapping this thing up. Certain parts of the quest definitely would be far worse without you pointing me in the right direction. The two of us have been writing together for a very long time now, and I'm so lucky to have you.

Given how much you've ended up helping me - if not writing significant portions of my updates in On the Road to Elspar - your thanks seem a little misplaced.

But it's fine. I'll punish you later as a reward.

Patreon for Carbon Steel: This I've been waffling on even harder, and it's kind of embarrassing to have to broach the topic at all. At the end of the day, though, my financial situation has been getting progressively worse, and at some point I'll have to make some drastic changes, like getting an additional job which would necessarily eat into a lot of the time I spend writing, or cutting back on expenses that help me work on things like quests. I'd definitely never expect anyone to contribute to something like that, but if it worked out, even a few tens of dollars a month would be a pretty substantial help. It's definitely something where I'd have to very carefully consider how I handled it, I'd never want to let something like that make the experience worse for anyone who is just reading/voting.

You people have no idea how hard I had to work to extract a promise from @Gazetteer to start her own Patreon. If she's going to be hilariously more popular than me, she may as well improve her standards of living out of it.
 
So, a question. Does this mean that now there's more than one they are part of the 'Petals of Metal' universe?
 
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