- Location
- hell
Fight scenes where the character goes off thinking on tangents completely unrelated to the fight, to the point of complete distraction and losing track of time and what is happening directly in front of them for an indefinite period of time. Especially in a fight where they are barely staying alive. There's no free actions in a fight, it screws up pacing and tension, and honestly, if that trait ever existed in a species evolution would have weeded it out millions of years ago. Because they died. Your character should die from this, in any fight that matters.