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And now mild anxiety sets in as I worry about whether we have made the right choice.
Its more about the flavor, i think.

Aggressive would have, as we were told, attacked the reputation of the person acting as a proxy. Flinging Nid on them for every possible reason, probably taunting them to attack us. with a focus on baiting the box (and its content) to be destroyed.

Defensive will dismantle each and every claim, hitting the facts and making it clair there is really no real ground for them to stand on, in this trial.

At most, the only thing i could see biting us is some Nid for not challenging them to a duel but then, we just got here.

Though, we probably have some chances to hit the paid judges with Nid in both choices, but we will see.
 
Act 1: The Outlawing Final
Historical Disclaimer: The legal proceedings as portrayed are not entirely accurate to the period.
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Thing-Mound, South Quarter, Iceland, Early Summer of 9007

Nine chairs sit in a semi-circle surrounding a central point while crowds of onlookers gather beyond them. In the center, equidistant from each chair, is a severed stump of an ash tree positioned so that the light may fall on it from any angle. Inset vertically into the polished, smooth-top surface of the stump is a ring of shining gold.

Nine judges occupy each of the nine chairs, as chosen by Sterki Godi in accordance with the law. None of the men share blood relation with either prosecutor or the defendant, for such a thing would be to break the law. Each of the judges have blooded themselves on the oath-ring and sworn to uphold the law in their time as judge.

Sterki Godi stands in the center of the semi-circle, just behind the oath-ring. Just as the sun reaches its zenith and the gleam of gold turns blinding, he spreads his arms and begins to orate, "Judges, we are gathered here today to hear the lawsuit of Barki Gunnvaldsson as prepared by Modolfr Jarnsson, who serves as proxy for an unnamed party. The reason for the lawsuit is an accusation of theft against Barki. Prosecution," Sterki gestures to where Modolfr stands on the right of the semi-circle, "you have the floor."

Sterki Godi steps back beyond the semi-circle as Modolfr steps forward. Drawing his work-knife—the only sharp implement allowed on the hallowed grounds of the Thing-mound—he opens his thumb to the bone and presses the bleeding wound to the oath-ring, "On my honor, I, Modolfr Jarnsson, swear to uphold the law in my time as lawyer." Withdrawing his hand, he turns to address the judges as he lifts his voice, "Judges, Barki has stolen a comb of great value from my client."

Dumvald leans in, eyes glinting with anger as his fingers fold beneath his chin, "What proof have you of this claim?"

"Contained within this box," Modolfr says as he swiftly retrieves the box from where he left it just beyond the semi-circle, "entrusted to me by my client, is the set of grooming tools to which the comb belongs." Opening the box and passing the contents to the judges, four items reveal themselves to the light of the court. All made of deep-sea shell and carved from a mighty beast's ivory, the judges handle an earwax scraper, a toothpick, a pair of tweezers, and a nail clipper as they examine each closely. "As you can see," Modolfr continues as the judges observe, "the materials are identical and all bear the same work-patterns, meaning that the same craftsman made them all."

Helgi Thorfastisson—one of the men who followed Sterki Godi to Iceland—leans forward with a question of his own, "You are saying that the comb of Bestla Red-cheeks was made as a part of this set?"

"I am, yes," Modolfr confirms as Helgi nods.

"In that case," Helgi turns now to Barki, "Barki, would you present the comb for examination?"

Barki now steps forward, work-knife in hand, as he carves open his thumb and bloods the reddened oath-ring while swearing the oath of law. Wetting his lips, he retrieves the comb from its silk-wrappings on his belt and presents it to the judges, "Judges, this is the comb of Bestla Red-cheeks, my wife."

Barki's jaw clenches as a low murmur rises from the judges. The materials, the make, the comb is identical to the rest of the supposed set. Barki takes a moment to steady himself as the judges turn their attention to him. He's only going to get one shot at finding the flaws in Modolfr's words, so he has to make it count.

But... But where is the flaw? There has to be one, his instincts scream it so, but where? It's a damning piece of evidence without a doubt. To have the rest of a set would certainly win Modolfr the case, but...

Barki's eyes snap wide as realization strikes. That's it, the set!

"Judges," Barki quickly turns to the judges, cutting Modolfr off just as he begins to speak, "while the comb was clearly made by the same craftsman from the same materials, who is to say that they belong to the same set? What evidence is there that this is the case?"

The judges nod at that, Dumvald sporting a broad smile as Sterki Godi speaks, "This is a good point. Modolfr, do you have evidence that the comb was made as part of the same set?"

Barki smiles as Modolfr frowns, lips pressing tight in silence. There are only two ways Modolfr could prove such a thing, and neither are an option. One, he could call the craftsman himself to the stand as a witness. If he had the craftsman as a witness, then he would have already called him up. Two, the owner could come forward and claim the comb as part of his set, but, as Modolfr is acting as proxy, that isn't an option for him either.

Murmurs rise as Modolfr's silence finally breaks, "I do not, no."

Sterki Godi nods and turns to the gathered court, "In that case, I declare that this lawsuit is invali-"

"Wait!" Modolfr cries as he finds his footing, a finger pointing at Barki as his eyes flash with heat, "While Barki may not have stolen the comb from this set, that doesn't mean he didn't steal it all! How is it that he came into possession of the comb?"

Thraki Horn-setter—another of the judges on the case, one known for how skilled he is with working horn—leans forward with brows furrowing and lips pursing, "That story is a well-known one in this land. Barki was given the comb to give to Bestla Red-cheeks, but I do not see how that relates to this case at all."

Modolfr shakes his head and plants his hands on the oath-stump, a fervor entering his voice as he near-shouts, "It is relevant because nobody knows who gave Barki the comb, not even Barki himself!"

Thraki's brows lift as he turns to Barki, "Is this true, Barki? Can you not name the man who gave you the comb?"

Barki thins his lips, eyes narrowing into a tight squint as he forces words through clenching jaw, "I... I cannot, no. The man who gave it to me did not reveal his name, refusing each time I asked it of him."

"Is there anyone here who saw this old man give Barki the comb?" Modolfr turns to the audience as he waits for an answer that never arrives. Lifting his hands to the sky, he carries on with a feral grin, "In that case, what proof is there that this supposed comb-giver ever existed?"

"And what proof is there that your unnamed client exists?" Barki counters as he plants his hands on his hips, his shadow falling over the shorter Modolfr who offers a severe frown as murmurs rise once more.

"Hm, that is a good point," Sterki Godi strokes his beard as he thinks over the issue. Eventually coming to a conclusion, he turns to Bark and says, "I was paid three pounds of gold, as is the requirement under the law, for an unnamed party to be involved in this case. Barki, I extend to you the opportunity to do likewise, for that seems fair to me."

Barki opens his mouth to protest the ridiculous price—how could he hope to afford three pounds of gold?—only to pause as realization strikes. Disparate parts click into place as Barki's mouth snaps shut with a sharp click!

Three pounds of gold is a high price to pay for any matter and, as Barki assumed, was put in place to prevent an abuse of the ridiculous law allowing unknown parties to use proxies. But it was never to prevent use of that law, was it?

No, it was put in place to keep Barki from leveling the playing field.

"Sterki Godi, I must decline this opportunity," the bite in Barki's voice is gone as his shoulders fall and his posture weakens, the vim and vigor replaced with the foul taste of defeat, "for I do not have the funds to do such a thing."

The only men here who might are Sterki Godi and Dumvald Strong-rider—both barred from doing so by their positions in the court.

Sterki Godi nods, lips thin, and turns to address the court, "Unless there are any arguments left to be made," he waits a beat for a response that never comes, "then I shall convene with the judges to determine guilt and punishment."

Dumvald, Helgi, Thraki, and all the other judges rise from their seats as they follow Sterki to a secluded spot on the Thing-mound. The sun travels a hand's length across the sky by the time Sterki returns to the court.

Sterki's face grim, his fingers twist together as he addresses the court and all those in attendance, "The lawsuit of Modolfr Jarnsson against Barki Gunnvaldsson has ended. Barki was found guilty of the theft of the comb and is sentenced with lesser outlawry. For a period of three years, Barki shall be banished from Iceland. He is allowed three places of immunity where he cannot be killed, which includes the roads to and from those places. Barki shall keep this immunity as long as Barki asks three ships for passage from Iceland each summer. He is stripped of his lands and property, which will be held by his wife, Bestla Red-cheeks, until such time as his outlawing is lifted or news of his death is delivered."

Even as Sterki's words meet his ears, Barki can't focus on anything but the thought ringing around his head. Over and over again it echoes, filling his mind with nothing but a burning desire for vengeance.

This? This was personal. All this legal chicanery? It was targeted at him and him alone. It was devised, planned, and executed all for the express purpose of fucking him over. And the worst part? The part that really makes Barki's blood boil?

The bastard didn't even have the balls to show his face.

End of Act 1
(Character Sheet Updated)
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First things first;
[ ] Write-in three places of immunity

Second things second; what is Barki's next step?
[ ] Write-in Barki's first step in his new life as an Outlaw

Current Status
You are currently uninjured, pray that it stays this way.
You are currently well-fed, praise be the Gods!
-You have 2 Days of Rations Remaining
The time is early evening.

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AN: And there we go, Act 1 is over! Tomorrow, we shall embark on Act 2: The Pursuit.

No moratorium, I'll call the vote tomorrow.

How has Outlaw been so far? What was your favorite moment from Act 1?
 
Wow

That is Not Okay.

The Precedent this sets... It's unbelievable.

The entire point of Iceland was to get away from Kings dictating everyone's moves. Being able to basically go "If you are Rich enough, you can say whatever shit you like and the other side can't contest it legally unless they can match your money"

Seven years, it took Seven fucking years for them to throw out the great dream. Absolutely shameful display from the Judges, I'm surprised we didn't smell the stink of nid from here.
 
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@I.F. Ister Are we still allowed to speak at the Thing in response to the sentencing?

Also, can we get suggestions on what would be considered appropriate places for immunity?
 
The entire point of Iceland was to get away from Kings dictating everyone's moves. Being able to basically go "If you are Rich enough, you can say whatever shit you like and the other side can't contest it legally unless they can match your money"
Yeah, IRL it at least took a few hundred years for this to get to this level.

My vote would be:

[x] Our farm
[x] The farm of Dumvald
 
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@I.F. Ister Are we still allowed to speak at the Thing in response to the sentencing?

Also, can we get suggestions on what would be considered appropriate places for immunity?
I imagine you could, yes.

So, you can pick three buildings in which to dwell. You are allowed safe passage to a harbor as long as you stay off the roads, so you don't need to pick a harbor as one of your three spots. As long as you stay within a bowshot of your selected buildings, you are safe. If you are found beyond that range, you can be killed without penalty.

I recommend selecting buildings that will allow you to accomplish your current notes without being stabbed to death.
 
Barki's eyes narrow at the name, his memories drawing what little knowledge he has on it. From what he recalls, Modolfr Jarnsson is a relatively new arrival to Iceland and, in return for aid in helping him find a place of residence, joined Sterki Godi's godord. It is said that Modolfr is privy to the secrets of hidework, for he is able to tan fine furs even in the height of summer.
It's not really clear where Modolfr lives/works; actually, @I.F. Ister do we have a map of the reigon or at least a list of notable locations? I'm not sure what places are near each other.
 
So what method will Barki use to find the truth?

1) Asking Around
2) Skaldspeech
3) Seersight
4) Seidr (Divination) - AKA ask a Seer
5) Runes
6) Twists
7) I Just Developed A Trick For This
8) Gods Help (Literally)
9) An Enemy of Your Enemy Just Tells You

Also, I'm gonna repost my theory of why the person wants Barki rekt so much:

1) Get Barki Outlawed
2) Get Barki Killed
3) Somehow marry Bestla

I believe they want to get laid with Bestla. Bestla has been consistently described as like the hottest lady on Iceland thus far. A pair of brothers wanted to marry her together. Barki's brother in law wanted Bestla to marry his friend. Bestla is just that desirable.
 
It's not really clear where Modolfr lives/works; actually, @I.F. Ister do we have a map of the reigon or at least a list of notable locations? I'm not sure what places are near each other.
I am in the process of making a map for Iceland, but, for the time being, you are allowed to just say 'Wherever Modolfr lives' as one of your dwellings.
 
So speaking of our Notes:
An Outlaw's Vengeance
Somebody has it out for you in particular. Their name, motives, and reasoning behind it are all a mystery. What you do know is that they won't rest until they have something. As long as they live, you won't be able to ever get a good night's rest again.

Clues
-Sterki Godi was paid three pounds of gold to let this mockery of the law occur. Surely, he must know the name of the man who paid him.
-Modolfr Jarnsson was the proxy the unknown party used in the case. He must know who is behind this!


The Comb's Craftsman
Someone must have made the comb that started this all, but who? Would they be able to help you in your quest?

Clues
-Modolfr Jarnsson produced a box full of very similar pieces, claiming that they were made by the same man. Would he know who made them?


Coming Clean (Time Limited)
One way or another, Bestla is going to learn of your outlawing. She's going to be very angry with you, but if you tell her of it yourself, perhaps she'll forgive you of it?

Besides, you're going to need food, tools, and other useful supplies and Sunningskeld is a good source for them.
Definitely gonna want to come clean to Bestla ourselves rather than letting her learn the news from someone else. In fact, I wonder if it's best to set about that immediately. Barki has enough people who have it out personally for him that they'd want to try and drive a knife between him and Bestla by making sure to be the ones to tell her the news before Barki can get his story in.

Especially if theories that Bestla is the goal are correct.
 
Either we corner Modolfr and get him to spill who he was proxy too and who the craftsmen for the comb was, or we hightail it out of Iceland and convince a Seer or a Skald to use their powers to find out who was behind Barki's outlawing. Im leaning towards Modolfr but he's probably expecting it and probably has a bunch of security with him, plus being in Iceland is dangerous since it will be way easier to hunt Barki there. So I think our immunity location should either be a place Modolfr frequents, or some location outside of Iceland where we can try to contact a Seer/Skald.
 
So, you can pick three buildings in which to dwell. You are allowed safe passage to a harbor as long as you stay off the roads, so you don't need to pick a harbor as one of your three spots. As long as you stay within a bowshot of your selected buildings, you are safe. If you are found beyond that range, you can be killed without penalty.
Is it our bow shot or someone else's?
Because now i can't help but chuckle as an archer shots so far the whole island/jarldom is included in his safe places :p

Joke aside, we will need food. as well as a place to survive the winters....
Also, can we build said houses quickly or can we just say there was a house here and here?
Because getting one near some geyser might be good for winter.
I am in the process of making a map for Iceland, but, for the time being, you are allowed to just say 'Wherever Modolfr lives' as one of your dwellings.
Imagine if we chose our brother in law's house as another one :V
 
It's usually understood as an Ordstirrless bowshot.

Though given cultivation the NQ Norse may have been more specific and may even have included clauses like 'unmagical bow' and 'unmagical arrow' and 'shouldn't be trying too hard'...
 
Wow

That is Not Okay.

The Precedent this sets... It's unbelievable.

The entire point of Iceland was to get away from Kings dictating everyone's moves. Being able to basically go "If you are Rich enough, you can say whatever shit you like and the other side can't contest it legally unless they can match your money"

Seven years, it took Seven fucking years for them to throw out the great dream. Absolutely shameful display from the Judges, I'm surprised we didn't smell the stink of nid from here.

Yeah, that is how Iceland fell in real life. The King of Norway simply buyed the favor of all the rich people and institutions, and then invaded almost without opposition.

It took way more than seven years to get there trough, this guys are fucking up so badly.
 
"I am indeed," Dumvald's lips thin as he speaks, "and I promise to do my best to convince the other judges of your obvious innocence, but I must confess that I fear some of them may have been bought off by your law-foe, for their pockets bulge with silver and they boast of good fortunes on the morrow."

[...]

Dumvald sighs, fingers pausing their drumming to weave together, "I know you pay little attention to the dealings of the Logretta, the law council of the Althing, but just last summer they decided it legal to wield a proxy as long as one's name goes unattached, to prevent the earning of ordstirr, and they pay a hefty fine of three pounds of gold to the relevant Godi." Licking his lips, he leans in closer as his voice drops an octave, "I have my suspicions that our mystery foe had a hand in that dealing."
"Hm, that is a good point," Sterki Godi strokes his beard as he thinks over the issue. Eventually coming to a conclusion, he turns to Bark and says, "I was paid three pounds of gold, as is the requirement under the law, for an unnamed party to be involved in this case. Barki, I extend to you the opportunity to do likewise, for that seems fair to me."

Barki opens his mouth to protest the ridiculous price—how could he hope to afford three pounds of gold?—only to pause as realization strikes. Disparate parts click into place as Barki's mouth snaps shut with a sharp click!

Three pounds of gold is a high price to pay for any matter and, as Barki assumed, was put in place to prevent an abuse of the ridiculous law allowing unknown parties to use proxies. But it was never to prevent use of that law, was it?

No, it was put in place to keep Barki from leveling the playing field.

"Sterki Godi, I must decline this opportunity," the bite in Barki's voice is gone as his shoulders fall and his posture weakens, the vim and vigor replaced with the foul taste of defeat, "for I do not have the funds to do such a thing."

The only men here who might are Sterki Godi and Dumvald Strong-rider—both barred from doing so by their positions in the court.
So, just for the sake of getting this out here. Whoever has it out for Barki is massively wealthy, and that this has been a plan they've been working on for some time.

Alongside the payment of three pounds of gold, there were bribes to multiple other judges. And furthermore, there was also making the prior law last summer so they could pull this trick for the Outlawry trial. And then there's what seems to have been hiring of thugs to stop Barki from reaching his trial in the first place.

This was a plan not only done at great expense, an expense that would have been impossible for all but the most wealthy in Iceland to even try to pay, but it's also a plan that they were working on for months at minimum, more depending on how long it took to influence the Logretta to pass that earlier law in the first place. They went through a lot of effort to make this work.
 
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Well, beyond having these as safe locations, I dunno what to pick.

[x] Our farm
[x] The farm of Dumvald

That said, for action, I think our first step needs to be the following:

[x] Return home to the farm, taking all due precautions, and inform Bestla of what has occurred and see if she has any ideas of why or how to resolve the situation.

Bestla is our best bet for figuring out anything about what's going on without knocking people's teeth out (she can ask around without being stabbed, for one thing) and she has a right to know.

And then there's what seems to have been hiring of thugs to stop Barki from reaching his trial in the first place.

The people we actually met who tried to stop us had a personal reason to do so. I agree with the rest of your conclusions entirely, but we don't actually know they hired thugs for this.

Doesn't really change anything, but worth keeping in mind.
 
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