Obito-Sensei (A Sakura-Centric Naruto AU)

And I don't think the First's shadow ever came alive." He paused. "Unless, well, it did, and no one ever learned about it?"

"A White Zetsu to the Black?"
This is insane, this is cracked, I'm going to steal this. I have no idea how it's going to work, but I'm taking this concept :p. It's going to be a while so I have time to work it out. Still this is a weird idea even if it's just a theory here and I love it. Much better than soulless alien husks.

The cruel words brought pause to them all, but Shikaku continued without any mercy. "The Minato we know could have won that battle, Obito. You know that. Even if Nagato stole the Flying Thunder God, even if he used it to kill many of our ninja, Minato would have won. He had the Kazekage: he had a Jinchuriki, and Jiraiya, and hundreds of skilled ninja at his side. The cost would have been steep, but he would have won, and Rain would no longer be a threat."
I feel like if the situation became truly unwinnable for Rain, Nagato would have whipped out one of the trump cards he has yet to use. Either flattening Ame completely or turning Konoha into a moon.

Edit: meant to touch on Minato's softness. That's something I don't think has really been touched on in a lot of 'Minato (and Kushina) lives' fanfics, is that being a family man would dull the edge he built up during the Third War. It's something that really puts a lens on the tragedy of him as a canon character, that despite everything he did and who he was, what he really wanted was a domestic life where Kushina could be happy (he probably has the least sweeping dream out of all of the "I want to be Hokage" characters, besides maybe Kiba, but does anyone really count Kiba?). On the other hand, in a world where he survives though, him not only calling off an attack but engaging in a full-blown retreat to save the lives of his support squad and seeing someone like Kushina on the battlefield giving him pause are definitely not things he would have done were he in the mindset he was in during the War. It's easy to forget, but he didn't come to his team's aid for hours after they were in danger, he completed his mission first.

In their eyes, you killed a lot of perfectly good Leaf ninja when you helped rip up ROOT
This is one of the best depictions of Koharu and Homura I've seen. They're usually portrayed as one-note curmudgeons who do bad things because they're old and they hang out with Danzo, but this is a good justification for why they're treating Obito the way they are. But they're still, well, not cordial, but tactful, maybe, because they've been advisors to the Hokage for maybe as long as Hiruzen was Hokage. Which, no matter your take on the timeline, is still a really long time. A lot of writers don't realize they're the middle ground between Hiruzen and Danzo, and are probably closer in ideology and methodology to Hiruzen before her retired.

I'm not telling them that
Can you tell us? Just OOC. You've open a can of worms here.

But that was because he'd lost hope. I mean, obviously it's messed up, but he can't die, y'know
Kurama has done a lot of bad things, even for a Tailed Beast though. He only sort of (I still don't like it) gets a pass in canon because he helped save the world along with Gyuki (who's also particularly violent for a Tailed Beast), but he has gone out of his way to kill a lot of people. At least say, Kokuo or Saiken tried to stay away from people.

Weirdly I think I enjoy the slow scenes more than the action ones here, even though I take to writing action better. Especially when the dialogue scenes are in the Hidden Leaf (Rin for Hokage btw) I need another injection of Madara directly into my veins, maybe they can stick him in an orange crate and bring him to the spiral house. That could get Kurama talking. Or killing everyone. Either way, seeing the two of them, brought low, coming together, would be one of the few things that could top a chapter like this or the ones between Team Obito coming back to the Hidden Leaf and the Konoha... Smash? Seems apt, it was bigger than the Konoha Crush after all.

To make a long ramble short, another banger of a chapter.
 
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A very powerful and well written chapter @Ser_Serendipity , thank you for writing this and I look forward to seeing where this story goes.

(Into fire, suffering and rivers of blood is where this story is going and I am here for it).

The Sakura - Tenten conversation was great, I liked the outside perspective of Tenten who can perceive how not okay Sakura is without the rose tinted googles Naruto himself wears towards her. Both Tenten and Naruto grasp that Sakura is in a bad place but Naruto doesn't get that she's diving off a cliff and Tenten kind of does.

I thought it was a really nice touch to have Tenten as a Leaf ninja spell out to Sakura that what Rain did isn't going to magically go away even if her mission in Frost is a success. Like seeking peace and diplomacy are obliviously noble motives and something to strive for and the the likes of Minato-Obito-Jiraiya can see the argument for the Frost plan but this discussion and Sakura just refusing to actually process or engage with what Tenten is saying shows where Sakura is at.

Sakura is hard dissociating from the actual people she claims to be undertaking the mission for and is aggressively invested in this not realistic image of a absolute perfect solution rather than engage with the bitter reality that Leaf is not going to forgive the unprovoked attack on their home that saw friends-family dead and that their are people in Hidden Rain who will think trying to raze Hidden Leaf was perfectly justified.

Honestly after this conversation I wouldn't be surprised if Sakura and co do establish some degree of goodwill or uneasy truce with Rain's leadership but Sakura freaks out-radicalises even further enough to consider Ten Tails grade bad choices when it sinks in that the goodwill might delay outright war but it won't erase the bad feeling on both sides and there's a strong possibility the next war big will be Rain vs Leaf or even something as mundane as both sides never being allies after what's happened.

It's a very 'Eren doesn't want to deal with a world where hatred of Eldians is the norm so wipe it all away with the Rumbling' kind of thinking. No where near the same scale but still alarming and unlikely to get better through exposure to an active war zone.

Obito talking with the Elders and Shikaku was unexpected but really well handled, from the perspectives put forward and the emotions on display and what Obito thinks and feels about the situation. I have said before that one of the things this story does an amazing job of communicating is that Minato is not Canon Naruto, he was ultimately chosen to become Hokage because he was the sublime killer in warfare, the leader and role model of a village fighting for its survival against enemies who showed no quarter , the village knew they could rely on him to serve the Hidden Leaf before anything else and solve its problems via diplomacy or at the edge of a blade.

Minato as Hokage brought prosperity, founded alliances and worked towards his own (Konoha centric) idea of peace but under it all there was always the expectation that if war were to break out then he'd win it by filling graveyards with Konoha's enemies, that he would always make the most pragmatic choice to serve the village.

It really communicates the Shinobi mindset that when Minato even in small ways deviates from the no other priorities mindset and fails to deliver victories he's seen as having fallen short of what a Hokage must be. Admittedly Shikaku and Minato make a convincing argument as to why this is a legit concern.
 
I thought it was a really nice touch to have Tenten as a Leaf ninja spell out to Sakura that what Rain did isn't going to magically go away even if her mission in Frost is a success. Like seeking peace and diplomacy are obliviously noble motives and something to strive for and the the likes of Minato-Obito-Jiraiya can see the argument for the Frost plan but this discussion and Sakura just refusing to actually process or engage with what Tenten is saying shows where Sakura is at.

Sakura is hard dissociating from the actual people she claims to be undertaking the mission for and is aggressively invested in this not realistic image of a absolute perfect solution rather than engage with the bitter reality that Leaf is not going to forgive the unprovoked attack on their home that saw friends-family dead and that their are people in Hidden Rain who will think trying to raze Hidden Leaf was perfectly justified.
Yeah, she's really determined to see Rain in the best possible light, even as it gets harder. It reminds me a little bit of how Minato was like like "what did you find out while you were in Rain" and Sakura glossed straight over/past the fact that they did in fact hire Itachi to say "Rain doesn't have a Bijuu and has never done anything wrong in their life ever"
 
Hmm, hear me out - Kurama for hokage.

He's got the will of fire. The heart of fire. The ears of fire. Actually, pretty much everything is fire.
 
I desperately need more of Kushina doling out heart attacks to her gaurds, visitors, her son, her husband the Hokage, and the the chakra beast sealed in her stomach. Because I'm positive even Kurama was at least a bit freaked out when she marched out the door.
 
This is insane, this is cracked, I'm going to steal this. I have no idea how it's going to work, but I'm taking this concept . It's going to be a while so I have time to work it out. Still this is a weird idea even if it's just a theory here and I love it. Much better than soulless alien husks.
lol, good luck, I just threw it out there not intending to make anything of it but idle chatter. It would certainly go the extra mile towards explaining why White Zetsu were so goofy and irreverent, like Hashirama himself.
I feel like if the situation became truly unwinnable for Rain, Nagato would have whipped out one of the trump cards he has yet to use. Either flattening Ame completely or turning Konoha into a moon.

Edit: meant to touch on Minato's softness. That's something I don't think has really been touched on in a lot of 'Minato (and Kushina) lives' fanfics, is that being a family man would dull the edge he built up during the Third War. It's something that really puts a lens on the tragedy of him as a canon character, that despite everything he did and who he was, what he really wanted was a domestic life where Kushina could be happy (he probably has the least sweeping dream out of all of the "I want to be Hokage" characters, besides maybe Kiba, but does anyone really count Kiba?). On the other hand, in a world where he survives though, him not only calling off an attack but engaging in a full-blown retreat to save the lives of his support squad and seeing someone like Kushina on the battlefield giving him pause are definitely not things he would have done were he in the mindset he was in during the War. It's easy to forget, but he didn't come to his team's aid for hours after they were in danger, he completed his mission first.
I think you're probably right about Nagato, but even with that Konoha just doesn't have the vocabulary to just... let someone be, even if they're dangerous to provoke. Nagato's a powerful enemy, so obviously they can't just let him do as he will, even if he's pinky promised that he won't let his ninja attack them again. After being attacked at a peace summit they're not willing to take that first step, as Kushina phrased it.

Which is stupid, but understandably so, I think. Very much like the whole thing with Minato, who let his feelings guide him instead of Konoha's strategic needs. An excellent decision, imo, the moral decision and one that preserved the most lives... but not the decision the village actually wanted, because Minato's contract with the village is that of a merciless killer, not a thoughtful family man.
This is one of the best depictions of Koharu and Homura I've seen. They're usually portrayed as one-note curmudgeons who do bad things because they're old and they hang out with Danzo, but this is a good justification for why they're treating Obito the way they are. But they're still, well, not cordial, but tactful, maybe, because they've been advisors to the Hokage for maybe as long as Hiruzen was Hokage. Which, no matter your take on the timeline, is still a really long time. A lot of writers don't realize they're the middle ground between Hiruzen and Danzo, and are probably closer in ideology and methodology to Hiruzen before her retired.
I think Koharu and Homura are definitely bad people, lol, even more so than most ninja probably having done bad things (whether personally or just by consequence of living in such a toxic society) but I do find most depictions of them very flat. They're just the living embodiment of realpolitik, but that can swing both ways; now that Obito is more useful than ever (and they've had a personal cooperative encounter) they have no bones against trusting him, even if he doesn't return the favor.
Can you tell us? Just OOC. You've open a can of worms here.
Kurama is constantly making needling comments throughout his conversation with Kushina, which is why she eventually flips her shit, but that one was probably an insult to Minato. Something along the lines of TELL HIM THAT THE SEAL CANNOT BE REBUILT; HE'S TOO CLUMSY FOR SUCH WORK. As you pointed out, Kurama is still like, a ginormous, murderous asshole who sees very little wrong with violently seizing his freedom or threatening people to throw Kushina off balance, but she's handling it pretty well, enough to genuinely throw him off balance and call his bluff about immediately killing her without hesitation.
Weirdly I think I enjoy the slow scenes more than the action ones here, even though I take to writing action better. Especially when the dialogue scenes are in the Hidden Leaf (Rin for Hokage btw) I need another injection of Madara directly into my veins, maybe they can stick him in an orange crate and bring him to the spiral house. That could get Kurama talking. Or killing everyone. Either way, seeing the two of them, brought low, coming together, would be one of the few things that could top a chapter like this or the ones between Team Obito coming back to the Hidden Leaf and the Konoha... Smash? Seems apt, it was bigger than the Konoha Crush after all.
lmao, Konoha Smash, that's awesome, I'm making that the unofficial name. Though unfortunately I don't think we'll have a chance to bring Kurama and Madara together: I'm trying to take a brisk pace on things (really, I've been doing that the whole story, at least by my normal standards, which makes the existing length all the more terrifying), and everything's quickly coming to a head.
The Sakura - Tenten conversation was great, I liked the outside perspective of Tenten who can perceive how not okay Sakura is without the rose tinted googles Naruto himself wears towards her. Both Tenten and Naruto grasp that Sakura is in a bad place but Naruto doesn't get that she's diving off a cliff and Tenten kind of does.
Tenten is definitely harsher on Sakura because like, she doesn't have the shared experiences with her that Naruto does, but I think to his credit Naruto does know that Sakura is diving off a cliff, even if he's not explicitly thinking about it. But he made a sort of promise to himself about that a long time ago.
He shook his head, trying to wake up and remember the dream at the same time, but it slipped away like sand through his fingers. The only thing that was clear to him was Sakura jumping off a cliff. His heart skipped a beat, but it quickly fell back into its relaxed post-nap tempo.

Should have stretched before sleeping, dumbass, Naruto realized. You were already sore. He rolled off the couch and winced as he stretched, popping something in his shoulder. He yawned, a little disgruntled at the dream, and how rudely it had woken him up. Dreams were stupid.

After all, if it hadn't been a dream he would have just jumped after her.
I thought it was a really nice touch to have Tenten as a Leaf ninja spell out to Sakura that what Rain did isn't going to magically go away even if her mission in Frost is a success. Like seeking peace and diplomacy are obliviously noble motives and something to strive for and the the likes of Minato-Obito-Jiraiya can see the argument for the Frost plan but this discussion and Sakura just refusing to actually process or engage with what Tenten is saying shows where Sakura is at.

Sakura is hard dissociating from the actual people she claims to be undertaking the mission for and is aggressively invested in this not realistic image of a absolute perfect solution rather than engage with the bitter reality that Leaf is not going to forgive the unprovoked attack on their home that saw friends-family dead and that their are people in Hidden Rain who will think trying to raze Hidden Leaf was perfectly justified.

Honestly after this conversation I wouldn't be surprised if Sakura and co do establish some degree of goodwill or uneasy truce with Rain's leadership but Sakura freaks out-radicalises even further enough to consider Ten Tails grade bad choices when it sinks in that the goodwill might delay outright war but it won't erase the bad feeling on both sides and there's a strong possibility the next war big will be Rain vs Leaf or even something as mundane as both sides never being allies after what's happened.

It's a very 'Eren doesn't want to deal with a world where hatred of Eldians is the norm so wipe it all away with the Rumbling' kind of thinking. No where near the same scale but still alarming and unlikely to get better through exposure to an active war zone.

Obito talking with the Elders and Shikaku was unexpected but really well handled, from the perspectives put forward and the emotions on display and what Obito thinks and feels about the situation. I have said before that one of the things this story does an amazing job of communicating is that Minato is not Canon Naruto, he was ultimately chosen to become Hokage because he was the sublime killer in warfare, the leader and role model of a village fighting for its survival against enemies who showed no quarter , the village knew they could rely on him to serve the Hidden Leaf before anything else and solve its problems via diplomacy or at the edge of a blade.

Minato as Hokage brought prosperity, founded alliances and worked towards his own (Konoha centric) idea of peace but under it all there was always the expectation that if war were to break out then he'd win it by filling graveyards with Konoha's enemies, that he would always make the most pragmatic choice to serve the village.

It really communicates the Shinobi mindset that when Minato even in small ways deviates from the no other priorities mindset and fails to deliver victories he's seen as having fallen short of what a Hokage must be. Admittedly Shikaku and Minato make a convincing argument as to why this is a legit concern.
Everything else here is so well observed I legitimately don't have much to contribute, lmao, at least not without spoiling future events. The only thing I can add on is an apology for my update speed, because I'm sure it's the only reason you missed one interesting thing about how Sakura is going about things. When she first proposes the expedition to Frost, she caps it off by saying:
"Don't thank me," Sakura said with a shake of her head. Naruto watched her carefully, trying to get another glimpse into her heart, but she was frozen up, implacable and unreadable again; all he could see was her certainty. "This is just for me."
And that's a chapter about people being honest, so it's probably true. But now, when Tenten points out that Sakura isn't on a divine mission or something, she's just coping and doing it for herself:
"It's not," Tenten said. "You can do whatever you want in Frost, Sakura. I hope it makes you feel better. But even if you do convince Rain to sue for peace once and for all, everyone here is going to remember what they did." She gestured to the forest of bones that surrounded them. "They left a mark that couldn't be scrubbed off. Whatever you're doing, you're doing for yourself, not for some idea of peace. If you keep thinking this is some sort of mission that only you and your team can do, you're just going to keep isolating yourself. I can't follow you to Frost, and I wouldn't be able to forgive Ame alongside you."

This time, Sakura didn't freeze. It was then that Tenten knew that for now she'd lost her friend to something deeper and darker than she could understand.

"If I have to do it alone," she said, cold as Haku had been, "then I'll do it alone. It's important enough that there can't be another answer."
Sakura shuts down, rejecting that premise and claiming that the impossible quest she's assigned for herself is more important than anything else. This isn't me being bad at characterization, I promise: it's just more context that whatever is going on with Sakura (which you, and several others, have already correctly guessed at) is deeply messing her up and making her actions and motivations fundamentally incoherent, just like another character who suffered the same fate.
Yeah, she's really determined to see Rain in the best possible light, even as it gets harder. It reminds me a little bit of how Minato was like like "what did you find out while you were in Rain" and Sakura glossed straight over/past the fact that they did in fact hire Itachi to say "Rain doesn't have a Bijuu and has never done anything wrong in their life ever"
Teenagers and radical ideologies are like powder and water, lol. It's like they're designed to mix.
Hmm, hear me out - Kurama for hokage.

He's got the will of fire. The heart of fire. The ears of fire. Actually, pretty much everything is fire.
Damn, and they've never have to vote for a new one again! Really, I'm not seeing any issue tbqh.
I desperately need more of Kushina doling out heart attacks to her gaurds, visitors, her son, her husband the Hokage, and the the chakra beast sealed in her stomach. Because I'm positive even Kurama was at least a bit freaked out when she marched out the door.
Haha, yeah, I adore Kushina. It's a bummer she wasn't like, the main character, but I think she's made every scene count. She's a big part of where things are going, for obvious reasons, so at least she'll get to end the story on a high note!
 
The stance of the Hokage's electors amuses me. "The Hokage is biased towards Rain because of his mentor. LET'S PICK THE OTHER GUY SAID MENTOR TAUGHT." Granted, Obito isn't particularly supportive of Jiraiya's philosophy compared to Minato, but still.
 
Obito is literally the hokage's pupil. Which does mean we're continuing the team-7 line yet further, as is appropriate.

Honestly - and this is a sign of me reading too much fanfiction probably - but every now and then I get so engaged reading this I go "I wonder what Kakashi is doing" and then I remember the premise of the story and am kinda sad. I would have loved to see Kakashi get a glow-up like so many characters have here.
 
Sakura shuts down, rejecting that premise and claiming that the impossible quest she's assigned for herself is more important than anything else. This isn't me being bad at characterization, I promise: it's just more context that whatever is going on with Sakura (which you, and several others, have already correctly guessed at) is deeply messing her up and making her actions and motivations fundamentally incoherent, just like another character who suffered the same fate.

I think this is the most genuinely chilling thing I have read in a long while, made my hairs stand straight up. So massive kudos for that and oh, oh no.

You really have to be credited for making the existential horror of something foreign taking root in a person and altering who they are and how they think subtle and all the more disturbing for it. Like most such cases it's really obvious via something like surges of sudden rage-bloodlust or outright takeover where the alien thing is wearing your face and speaking with your voice but it isn't you.

This? This is so much worse, the idea a person's views and thoughts can be edited and altered just enough that even the people that know them really well can think this just that person reacting badly to a situation even as they slowly lose sight of who that person is and what they even want anymore? Superb horror.

We saw the end result of this shit with Itachi where it's been going on so long that what was in him just forgoes subtly and takes his body for joy rides and despite freaking the fuck out over what's happening Itachi can't let go of his goals or actually look at his motives or past actions critically because touching say the idea something as life changing as the massacre might not have been his idea would open a existential crisis can of worms.
 
The stance of the Hokage's electors amuses me. "The Hokage is biased towards Rain because of his mentor. LET'S PICK THE OTHER GUY SAID MENTOR TAUGHT." Granted, Obito isn't particularly supportive of Jiraiya's philosophy compared to Minato, but still.
Yeah, a plot point that loses a little flavor since I cut all the "Obito's Past" flashback arcs to make the story more manageable. Obito learned from Jiraiya, but pretty much solely how to be a ninja, and thought Ninshu was a bunch of nonsense when he was younger (understandable, given his experiences). So he's not seen as nearly as compromised as Minato.
Obito is literally the hokage's pupil. Which does mean we're continuing the team-7 line yet further, as is appropriate.

Honestly - and this is a sign of me reading too much fanfiction probably - but every now and then I get so engaged reading this I go "I wonder what Kakashi is doing" and then I remember the premise of the story and am kinda sad. I would have loved to see Kakashi get a glow-up like so many characters have here.
Feels bad 😞 Though if it's any consolation, I do have two projects to finish up after this before I probably retire from fanfiction, and Kakashi is one of Remedy's main protagonists. So maybe that'll be something to check out in like, a year.

I think this is the most genuinely chilling thing I have read in a long while, made my hairs stand straight up. So massive kudos for that and oh, oh no.

You really have to be credited for making the existential horror of something foreign taking root in a person and altering who they are and how they think subtle and all the more disturbing for it. Like most such cases it's really obvious via something like surges of sudden rage-bloodlust or outright takeover where the alien thing is wearing your face and speaking with your voice but it isn't you.

This? This is so much worse, the idea a person's views and thoughts can be edited and altered just enough that even the people that know them really well can think this just that person reacting badly to a situation even as they slowly lose sight of who that person is and what they even want anymore? Superb horror.

We saw the end result of this shit with Itachi where it's been going on so long that what was in him just forgoes subtly and takes his body for joy rides and despite freaking the fuck out over what's happening Itachi can't let go of his goals or actually look at his motives or past actions critically because touching say the idea something as life changing as the massacre might not have been his idea would open a existential crisis can of worms.
Yeah, it's incredibly awful, lol. And it's just going to get worse! Look forward to the eventual dramatic moment where people realize that Sakura might not quite be herself anymore.

Though I do have some qualms about this, tbh. I mean, it was inevitable that the story would become more of an ensemble piece as it went on, and I'm content that like, more than half of it is still from Sakura's perspective, but I have my doubts about this setup the more I get into it. I think it's gonna be a good narrative payoff, but we'll see how things go.
 
Chapter 82: Towards War
Runs Towards The Storm

It was barely past midnight when Team Seven and Jiraiya departed Konohagakure. The world was quiet and lightless, the moon like a dim lidded eye behind thick clouds. Naruto and Sasuke said goodbye to their parents and friends, and all of them to their sensei, but neither of them were sure if Sakura spoke to anyone else before they left; she said nothing one way or the other.

Jiraiya met them at the gates, as had been agreed upon beforehand, and led the way, moving silently through the forests that surrounded the village. None of them had much to say for the first leg of the journey; rising early and jogging relentlessly didn't really lend itself to good conversation, even if the travel was effortless to all of them. The borders of the Land of Frost lay nearly five-hundred miles to the north of Konohagakure, and they all set a mild pace, arriving just after the sun rose around seven.

It was a nice way to start the day, Naruto thought, even if what they were doing was kind of morbid. Running right towards a war zone with only a vague plan of where they were going and what they were doing was against both his instincts and what his parents and the academy had trained into him for as long as he could remember, but they were all filled with a sense of confidence nonetheless. Maybe it was naive, but they were all on the same mission for the first time in a long time, maybe since the Land of Waves… which really wasn't that long ago, now that he thought about it. Time had been stretched out by everything they'd seen and done; it was just like when he'd healed someone for the first time.

He didn't want to think about Kagami, so he chose not to. The closer they got to the Land of Frost, the more Jiraiya veered east.

"Should we go over the ocean?" Sasuke eventually asked shortly before the sun rose, but Jiraiya shook his head.

"My gut says near the coast, but not through the ocean," he said. "We don't want to go through the Land of Springs unless we can't help it, since Cloud's probably sent ninja to watch that border for Rain's reinforcements. But the ocean can be even more dangerous than land during a war: summons, submerged shinobi, mines, it's probably a mess. The coast will be our sweet spot, even if it's probably swarming with Mist ninja."

"They're not Rain's enemy though, right?" Naruto asked, fingering his headband. They'd all retrieved their old hitai-ates, but it felt weird to wear it once more. His Leaf headband was in his pack, but he'd been told not to put it on unless there was no choice; the whole point of the mission was them not being Leaf ninja, after all.

"They're allies of convenience at the moment," Jiraiya said. "But ninja don't fight fair, and even though it's taboo to wear false symbols, that doesn't mean it doesn't happen." He stroked his beard. "In a country at war, most ninja will attack first and ask questions later, if ever. It's just too dangerous to try and talk with someone you don't know most times."

"Then how will we find Konan?" Sakura asked. She didn't say it rudely, but something in her tone still made Naruto narrow his eyes. No one else seemed to notice: Jiraiya shrugged.

"We'll find someone who knows where Rain's leadership might be," he said with a grin. "It'll be boring work; we'll probably get ambushed. Hope you're ready for that."

"Why don't we just ambush someone instead?" Sakura said.

"If you want to, be my guest. But I'm here to keep you safe, not to spook some mooks we happen across," Jiraiya said lazily. "Trust me, my way will be safer. People are a lot more willing to talk when they think they have the advantage."

Sakura seemed satisfied with the answer, and it made enough sense to Naruto that he didn't have anything clever to say. Konan was made of paper, after all; wherever she was, there would be stories. Even if ninja tried to be stealthy, stories always spread around them quicker than fire. He'd learned that for himself in the Land of Rain, and again in Konoha after the invasion.

The forests and the air grew thinner the farther they went north, and eventually Naruto started to hear the steady rhythm of the sea. The grass and ferns gave way to rocks and dirt, and before long the trees opened up fully and the ocean stretched out beyond the horizon to the east, the rising sun painting the churning waters red and gold. He glanced over and saw it and Sakura running beside him and for a moment forgot how to breathe as they skimmed along the seashore, bounding down and across craggy black cliffs and heavy dark sand that the ocean constantly beat against.

"Oho," Jiraiya said suddenly, holding a hand up. "Let's head in a little," he said, gesturing west. "Don't want any of that."

"Any of what?" Naruto asked, craning his head and scanning the beach. He couldn't see anyone lying in ambush, no signs of traps: just a half dozen huge, smooth and round rocks about a hundred feet away, covered in sand and bird poop and lying scattered along the coast. His teammates were equally confused.

"You don't see them?" Jiraiya asked, cocking an eyebrow; he wasn't making any attempt to conceal himself, so whatever had worried him wasn't an active danger. He jerked his head towards the rocks, and Naruto frowned.

"The rocks?" he said, but as Jiraiya turned and started making his way away from the beach he and his teammates followed, pushing into the rocky dunes and grasslands that surrounded them.

"There's a reason this place is less developed than the north coast," Jiraiya said as the sound of the ocean receded and whispering grass and shuddering trees replaced it; the wind blowing in off the ocean was fast and cold. "No resorts down here; too dangerous, obviously."

"Too dangerous?" Now it was Sasuke that was asking; he'd always been just as curious, but Naruto knew he didn't like to show it. "Because of the rocks? Are they some kind of creature?"

"You're close." Jiraiya smiled. "The Uchiha still do their hunts, right?"

"Only for animals that get too close to the village," Sasuke said, Naruto nodding along. He remembered this from when they'd been kids; how Sasuke had been brought on hunts for wild animals, the kind that chakra had made huge. Dealing with that sort of thing was one of the main reasons ninja had even started existing in the first place, as far as he knew.

"Well, boars and tigers are small fry compared to some of what's out there," Jiraiya explained, an amused gleam in his eye. "Those were eggs: island turtle eggs, unless my eye's wrong. Normal turtles will just lay a hundred or so and hope that a couple of the kids make it, but island turtles are as big as you'd guess, and territorial. If anyone touched those things, they'd make it everyone's problem."

"Like whales?" Naruto asked, remembering an old conversation from a simpler time, and Jiraiya gave him an impressed look. "Like the whales that learned to use chakra."

"Hey, look at you. You really are your father's son. Yeah, like whales," the Toad Sage said with a grin. "But island turtles don't even need that; they're proper monsters, can grow miles long." He sobered up a little. "It's just as well we stumbled across them and not someone else. If those eggs are messed with, well, it wouldn't help Frost much. Though, I've heard that both Water and Lightning have contracts with some island turtles, so maybe they're safer than you'd think."

"They're intelligent, then?" Sasuke asked, and Jiraiya nodded.

"Very. The line between chakra-infused animals and what people call "summons" is a lot thinner than most ninja would admit," he said. Despite his dad's contract with Myoboku, summons weren't a thing Naruto had ever put much thought into; he'd just accepted that sometimes his dad talked to toads, but never asked why it was just those ones and not any other animal (or other toads, for that matter). Because of that, and because he could tell Sakura was quietly but intensely absorbing everything Jiraiya was saying, Naruto paid full attention as they marched deeper into Frost.

"Summons," as Jiraiya put it, were creatures that had grown to understand human culture and speak their language, like the toads of Mount Myoboku, the snakes of Ryuchi Cave, or the slugs of Shikkotsu forest. Those were the summons that the Sannin had chosen and grown famous with, but there were dozens of others, all species that had been given sapience by chakra and intermingled with humans through communal living, worship, ritual sacrifice, or simple symbiosis. But they weren't the only animals who were intelligent and had learned ninjutsu: there were creatures like the island turtles, the blue whales of the southern seas, or the feared Baku from the Land of Demons. However, those creatures wouldn't form contracts with ninja, either because of ancestral grudges or their own pride, and so were mostly ignored with few daring to try and contact them.

"So…" Naruto eventually said, after Jiraiya had lapsed into a thoughtful silence when he'd finished regaling them with tales of how the Sarutobi clan had lived alongside monkeys and their warrior kings for decades before Konoha had been established. "Isn't that, just like, Ninshu?"

"Precisely," Jiraiya said. Sakura gave Naruto an admiring look, the first real expression he'd seen out of her all day, and he blushed. "The Sage taught all manner of creatures how to use chakra, is how the legend went. The history of Myoboku goes far enough back that their ancestors may even have been uplifted by him, for lack of a better word."

"Well, it didn't work out in the same way ninjutsu did then," Sakura noted. "Considering how many dangerous animals there are out there."

"They were infected in the same way humans were," Jiraiya said, "though maybe in a more primal sense. An animal glutted on chakra could grow to huge size, and outcompete their neighbors. So you're right that they had the same principles as ninja in that way, Sakura."

"But humans don't get big because of chakra. How come animals do?" Naruto asked, and Jiraiya shrugged.

"Some humans can, though they're uncommon, obviously. Others can use it as a technique, like the Akimichi. It's definitely not as often seen as it is among other animals. If you could figure out why, you'd be solving a question that's been asked for a thousand years," he said. "Anyway, the Ninshu comparison is good. Harmony with others comes from understanding, and being able to speak to animals makes dealing equitably with them beyond husbandry possible. It's no wonder the Sage tried it out, even if it ended up being an even more incomplete experiment than the rest."

"Were there a lot of those?" Sakura asked. "Incomplete experiments?"

"Tons," Jiraiya confirmed. "There's traces of the Six Paths all across the world; old legends, tools and half-finished work left behind, temples erected in his wake. That may be part of why we're here, actually."

"In Frost?" Sakura asked. "Does it have many temples?"

"No, not quite like that. But the Land of Lightning does," Jiraiya said. His tone was mild, but Naruto could detect a bit of derision under it. "Part of why Lightning has expanded so aggressively over the last century is because there's a significant number of people, ninja or not, that believe the country was a direct inheritor of the Six Paths. Most people may not know exactly what that is, but people will believe in anything if it justifies giving them more power."

"Are they?" Naruto asked.

"No. But a lot of relics of the Sage have made their way into the government or Cloud's hands," Jiraiya said. "Due to those old cults, or probably as war trophies. Lightning revanchists will look at that and claim that obviously, Lightning always had such things, even before the country proper formed, but in this world nothing stays in the same place for millenia. Things get lost, found, or stolen. I mean, that even applies to the Tailed Beasts, and if there's anything that could determine the Sage's real legacy it's them."

Naruto pondered that, wondering what exactly Jiraiya meant by 'relics' but not quite sure how to ask without sounding ignorant and wanting to hold onto the bit of praise he'd already gotten. That was another thing he'd never really had a reason to think about, but was suddenly deadly important considering where they were. Countries inevitably expanded and contracted as they gained or lost territory; the Land of Fire "growing" had always been a good thing as far as he was concerned, but of course there wasn't a lot of land left anywhere on the continent that was truly unexplored or unowned, even if some of it was by, say, giant territorial turtles. So whatever Fire gained, it took from someone else.

Then again, what was the difference between a giant turtle and a government, Naruto wondered? They'd both smash your home apart if you messed with them.

He wandered off on that line of thought for some time, listening but not speaking as Jiraiya, Sasuke, and Sakura talked about Lightning's expansions and what it meant for Frost. However, as the sun rose higher and they made their way deeper into the country, their voices grew quieter, and their pace much slower.

The Land of Frost was being devastated. Naruto had assumed that would be the case, but it was another thing to see. They found forests stripped of leaves, sand dunes blasted into glass, artificial fissures where the earth had been split apart or raised up. The country was more mountainous than the Land of Fire, and there were signs of rockslides covering the sides of many hills, obviously leftover from Earth jutsu. There was no birdsong; here at least, the wildlife had long since fled.

They passed smaller towns as the day dragged on, but Jiraiya didn't lead the group near them. It didn't take much thought for Naruto to realize why. This was what Obito had told him about long ago; ninja were a sign of danger, and people didn't care what village they were from. The one time someone in one of the towns noticed them bounding across the ridge nearby, he turned and ran, hiding in a nearby shack.

At one point, Sakura stopped at the entrance to a valley, looking down on the town within. Jiraiya stopped as well, giving her a curious look as Naruto came to her side.

"There was a fight here recently," she said, staring down at the long half-paved street with buildings and warehouses on either side that ran about a mile through the valley alongside a wide river. There was a dock, but it had been smashed to pieces, and several of the buildings were smoking or collapsed.

"Yeah, but it's over now," Jiraiya said.

"We should go help them." There were people down there, cleaning up rubble. Naruto saw one digging through the ruins of a home with frantic energy, their desperation obvious despite the distance.

"If we do, we'll just make them a target again," Jiraiya said. "Battles like this don't happen because one side felt like picking on civilians; there were ninja here, from Mist or Cloud or Rain or somewhere else, and someone found them and attacked before they could get away. If we try to help… in all likelihood we'll just make it worse."

They were terrible and cynical words, but Naruto couldn't help but think Jiraiya was speaking from personal experience. It was easy for him to see that exact thing happening in the Land of Rain in the Second War, before the Akatsuki, before Jiraiya had found the kids who would become the Amekage. It only took one person to start a disaster, and the help they could offer could be far outweighed by the harm they could cause.

Still, he didn't want to walk away. Sakura had to turn away first for it to be okay, and eventually she did, grinding her teeth as water flickered around her hands.

"We should find them," she muttered, so quiet that he was sure it was meant only for him. "We should kill whoever did this. It's horrible."

"If we do, we will," he promised, finding it easy at that moment to say he'd kill people whose names he didn't even know.

They traveled north for about another hour, moving slowly and keeping an eye out for any shinobi, before Sasuke stopped. They were in the midst of a white woods, surrounded by pale yellow trees and bright green lichen that had overcome everything on the ground level.

"You feel that?" he asked, and Naruto gave him a confused look. Sakura looked just as perplexed, but after a moment she slowly removed a knife from her vest. Jiraiya stood up straight, nipping his wrist and summoning a toad in the blink of an eye. It was a little yellow thing the same color as the trees, and it sat in his hand smoking a cigar that was way too big for it.

"Ayup," it said after a moment, as if it could read Jiraiya's mind. "They're coming fast. You should probably run."

"Thanks," he said, and dismissed it in a puff of smoke just as quickly as he'd summoned it. He sighed and sat down. "You've got good instincts, Sasuke. Wanna make yourself look non-threatening?"

"I'm good," Sasuke said shortly, and now Naruto could feel what his friend had. His neck prickled and his hair stood on end as the overwhelming feeling of being watched coursing through him, and he smelled distant ozone. Someone, or a couple of someone's, was channeling chakra and coming right for them at speed. Some kind of sensor had picked them up and was going to check them out.

Naruto decided he was good too and stayed standing, putting his back to Sakura and Sasuke as they formed a triangle around Jiraiya. His hands itched, chakra rushing to them in preparation for ninjutsu, but he tried to keep his breathing even and calm. They were hoping to talk, not fight.

He spared a glance for his friends. Sasuke was tense, but not too much. But Sakura… she was calm, he saw. Calm like an undisturbed pond; he couldn't sense a hint of chakra or intent from her. Of them all, even Jiraiya, she was by the far the best at controlling herself.

All at once, the sensation stopped; the forest went still. Whoever had been approaching had suddenly concealed their presence. It probably would have worked on ninja who had been through less, Naruto thought. Whoever had found them out was good, and dangerous for it.

Jiraiya called out from his seated position, leaning back on both his hands in a supremely unconcerned pose. "We're not looking for trouble," he said, his booming voice projecting throughout the forest. "So if you are, I recommend you just turn around and save yourself the hassle."

There wasn't an immediate response, and Team Seven tightened their formation. Naruto scanned the treeline, but couldn't pick out anything in particular.

Then a man stepped out of a tree about twenty feet away, melting out of it without a sound. It was a pretty cool jutsu, Naruto had to admit, but he was mostly too busy shifting to put himself between Jiraiya and the ninja to admire it.

"That seems unlikely," the ninja called out. He was a severe looking man with spiky gray hair and a blue turtleneck, and wore a headband of the Hidden Mist. One of his eyes was covered by a utilitarian black eyepatch, a coincidental mirroring of Jiraiya. As he revealed himself, Naruto became aware of other shinobi; five or six, he was pretty sure, in the trees and the ground around them. The Mist team had surrounded them, but were waiting to move in until their apparent leader made the decision. "It's not every day a Sannin wanders into a contested country."

"Oh my," Jiraiya drawled. "But what are the chances that two celebrities like us meet? It's no wonder you found us, Eyestealer Ao."

It wasn't a name Naruto or his friends had ever heard, but Ao frowned and tensed up. The atmosphere grew thicker, and Naruto got ready for a fight.

"C'mon now," Jiraiya said, still completely unconcerned. "I'm not with Konoha anymore, and neither are these cute little ninja." He sat up straighter, gesturing at them with one hand. "Look closely. Does that look like a Leaf hitai-ate to you?"

The man glared at them, veins crawling out around his temple near his eyepatch. It only took Naruto a second to realize what was happening, and what exactly the man's name meant. There was an eye under that eyepatch; it just wasn't originally his.

"Rain," he muttered. "You three… you're the Hokage's son, and his teammates, aren't you?" He stared at Naruto, who did his best to meet the older man's terrifically intimidating gaze. "Naruto Namikaze. What are you doing here?"

"We're here to join the war," Naruto called back, doing his best to keep his cool. "We know Rain's here somewhere, but when everything started we were recaptured by the Leaf. We're here to help our village."

Ao raised an eyebrow. "You're helping them escape the Leaf?" he asked Jiraiya, who shrugged.

"I have friends on every side of this war… except Cloud's. If Konoha's not going to contribute, I figured I'd help whoever would." He stood up, dusting himself off, and Naruto couldn't help but find it funny that that innocuous action was what made Ao tense up the most. Jiraiya really was a legend, even if most of their experience with him discussing strange ancient philosophies made it easy to forget. "So I'm shepherding them to their allies. I figured it was the least I could do. This is some good fortune for the both of us, you know."

"How would you imagine that?" Ao asked, crossing his arms. Jiraiya smiled magnanimously.

"You're a well informed guy, I'm sure. You probably have a clue where Rain's main force is active right now," he said, spreading his arms in the opposite of Ao's pose. "And for giving away that, frankly, to you, mostly useless information, you get to report to the Mizukage about the location of one of the Sannin, and the Hokage's son and his team, not to mention you get my extremely long-lasting and generous gratitude."

Ao took a moment to think it over, his brow furrowed. The Byakugan's veins crept away, leaving his face unmarred. "You're serious?"

"Dead," Jiraiya said, his whimsy vanishing instantly. Ao sighed.

"Rain's been trying to liberate a couple cities to the north, mainly Kushiro," he said, and Jiraiya nodded, like he knew exactly where that was. Maybe he did, Naruto thought. Memorizing major cities of the various countries wasn't exactly a bad idea. "If they're looking to make themselves useful, that'll be the place to stick them."

"And how's the rest of the country doing?" Jiraiya asked. Ao grunted.

"Tch. You've seen it, you probably know. Cloud's got the numbers, and their chakra weapons make things tough. Even the most gormless ninja can make a mess with one of those Iron Wrists." He gestured, and one of his subordinates made themselves known, a willowy woman with long blue hair. She held up her arm, revealing the spider-like metal contraption affixed to her wrist.

"Don't trifle with them if you can help it," Ao said with a grimace. "It fires a bolt of chakra, like a bomb. Don't think there's many shinobi who could take a direct hit and survive."

"But I'm sure the Hidden Mist is giving all they can," Jiraiya said, sounding just sincere enough that Naruto felt sure it was sarcasm, but Ao didn't challenge him on it.

"We're bleeding them. But there's only so many of us," he said after a moment, which Naruto figured was shockingly honest. "Right now, they're massing forces in Hakoda, on the eastern coast. The Mizukage believes they may be preparing to attack the Hidden Mist directly." He cupped his chin with a frown. "We were planning to send word to Rain, to see if they could provide support to the counterattack. It's a fool's errand, but maybe you could save us a messenger."

"Seems fair," Jiraiya said to Ao's obvious surprise, and from his still bleeding hand he produced another summoned toad fast enough that the Mist ninja flinched. He whispered to it, and then it hopped from his hands towards Ao. "Give him the Mizukage's exact words, and he'll see they find the Amekage's ears," he said, and Ao bent down and picked up the toad with a vaguely disgusted frown. "Though of course, I'll pass on the message myself as well."

"That's… appreciated," Ao said, so obviously off balance that Naruto almost laughed. He seemed ready to vanish into the woods, but Sakura spoke up before he could disappear.

"Cloud hasn't used their weapon again, have they?" she asked, and Ao paused mid-movement. Naruto was surprised too; her tone was decisive, and she sounded twice her age. "The thing they attacked Rain with."

Did Ao know about the cannon? Judging by how he shifted, he must have.

"There's been no sign," Ao said after a moment, seemingly compelled to answer despite his better judgment. "Though it's obviously a concern."

"They're preparing to attack your village," Sakura pointed out. "Instead of using it. Why?"

That was a good point, Naruto thought, and something he hadn't thought of. The cannon had been devastating, and nearly leveled Rain. Why hadn't Cloud just used it to obliterate the Hidden Mist, if they were giving Cloud so much trouble?

"Who's to say," Ao said, and Naruto couldn't help but think he was being annoyingly cagey. "Now that we know it's a possibility, it can be defended against. Maybe they just don't want their wonder weapon to fail twice." He sneered. "At this rate, Cloud will die an embarrassment before the world. Let that be your takeaway."

"Mist could defend against it?" Naruto asked, and Ao gave him a pitying look. "How? It's-?"

"That's enough," Ao said shortly. "Quick and quiet journeys. Let's hope we don't meet again."

And then he left without another word, leaving Naruto kicking lichen with a huff of frustration.

"Seriously though, how would they?" he asked, looking back at Jiraiya, who shrugged.

"Every village has secrets," he said, which was even more annoyingly vague. "But more likely, Mist has a well-trained Jinchuriki of their own, and your father did go through with returning the Sanbi to them before the assault on Rain. I'm sure they have something planned."

"That guy had a Byakugan," Sasuke said, and Jiraiya nodded. Sasuke looked angry: he must have been thinking of Hinata.

"Stole it in the Third War," Jiraiya said. "Not common knowledge. If you guys were here as ninja of Konoha, you'd probably be obligated to try and take it back."

How many obligations like that were there, Naruto thought? Thefts that had to be recovered, or murders that had to be avenged, across all the villages? Was that why war kept happening, and if so, how could you ever stop it? But here, now, they were bucking that trend, coming to Rain's aid even after their home had been savaged by it.

"The Hidden Leaf has done terrible things to Mist," Sakura said quietly. "Nonō told me that. I guess it goes both ways."

"Everyone has done terrible things to each other," Jiraiya said bluntly. "There's not a village or country in the world that hasn't committed a crime against Konoha at this point, or vice versa. No point in dwelling on it here."

Sakura didn't seem to have an answer to that despite her cold confidence, and so Team Seven continued north in quiet contemplation.

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When the sun set, they made camp in an empty creek that had been dammed by explosives. In the night, there were distant crashes, and a scream, but no one approached. Team Seven slept in shifts, Naruto taking the last, and it was difficult for him to accept both the beautiful sunrise that peered over the mountains to the east and the surety that people had died nearby in the middle of the night.

They had a breakfast of jerky and vitamins and stale water from their canteens, and then were off again. The farther north they went, the thicker the air grew, filled with the smell of ozone and blood. Battles had been fought across the Land of Frost, but they were the hardest fought in the north, and the signs of it were everywhere; devastated landscapes, gutted towns, and the occasional corpse. The bodies were usually not ninja; Naruto wasn't a stranger to that by now, but he still didn't like to look at them. Jiraiya steered them around most, warning them that if they had been left out in the open and ignored by scavengers, they were probably trapped. Once, Naruto spotted a glint of wire and a muddied explosive tag that proved him right.

Whether it was by luck or Jiraiya's superb instincts, they didn't wander into any active battlefields. The lack of life made the whole country seem dead or abandoned, but being creeped out was definitely better than being attacked by Cloud ninja. They crossed a high mountain ridge and a wide raging river, ate a short lunch on the go, and the sun was past its apex and heading west when Jiraiya stopped and pointed up.

"That's new," he said, and Naruto squinted, following Jiraiya's finger. There was something up in the sky, he saw after a second, concealed by the setting sun and the low dark clouds that drifted across Frost on the chill wind. Some sort of huge bird with a stubby tail was his first thought, but it was too pale against the red sky to be an animal, even if it was circling like a hawk.

"A summon?" Sakura asked, but Sasuke shook his head. They had all stopped, taking cover in the shrubs and short trees that dotted the mountainside.

His Sharingan was active, locked on the circling bird. "It's a construct," he said. "Looks like we found Rain."

"Well, that's some good luck then," Jiraiya said. "Someone worth signaling?"

"His name is Deidara," Sasuke said. "S-ranked ninja. If he doesn't recognize us right away, it could be trouble." They watched the bird circle a while longer while Sasuke mulled it over. "He's patrolling. There must have been some Cloud ninja here recently. It's dangerous."

"He knows you?" Jiraiya asked, and Sasuke nodded. "Send a clone, then. We'll see how it goes."

Sakura and Naruto both nodded in agreement, and Sasuke ran through several hand-signs, producing a shadow clone in a burst of smoke. The clone moved slowly at first, until it was about a hundred feet away, and then without care, obviously trying to get Deidara's attention as Team Seven and Jiraiya patiently watched and waited.

The bird locked onto Sasuke's clone almost immediately, but to Naruto's relief it didn't attack. Its patrol shifted slightly, but Deidara obviously wasn't stupid; making a decoy to reveal the enemy's capabilities was a basic shinobi trick, and the Rain ninja took time to observe Sasuke's clone from a distance as the bird circled the wide ravine that Naruto and his team had concealed themselves along the side of. After a long two minutes, it swooped down, staying about twenty feet above the ground and out of the clone's reach. The Rain ninja spoke, but he was too far away for any of them to hear; the clone responded, and gestured in their direction, with Deidara turning towards them. The bird landed and the ninja dismounted, and Sasuke's clone disappeared in another puff of smoke.

"We'll meet him halfway," Sasuke decided, standing up and moving out of cover. Naruto and Sakura followed after him, and Jiraiya stayed in the back, his face unreadable. They skidded down the ridge and made their way through the mountain brush as Deidara moved towards them, and met the man under a pale tree as he gave them all a wide smirk.

"What a surprise," he said, and Naruto couldn't help but roll his eyes. "The lost kids, and a Sannin." He crossed his arms, and Naruto couldn't help but notice that it put his hands right next to the obvious bulges of hidden packages beneath his vest; weapons of some sort that he could grab in an instant. "You're seriously wanting to come back?"

"If you didn't think we were serious," Sakura said without hesitating, "you wouldn't have come down."

"Maybe." Deidara was wearing an eyepiece, obviously made to enhance his vision, and it whirled a little as he looked between each of them. "Maybe. But it's hard to believe you show up and offer help after what happened to Konoha."

"Rain's on the verge of splitting," Jiraiya said, and Deidara refocused on him with a faint frown. "Konan wasn't aware of the attack; we're here to speak to her, not to the village as a whole."

"She didn't know?" Deidara said, sounding faintly impressed. "She didn't know?"

"No," Jiraiya said. "And you know that's how they liked to operate from the beginning, I'm sure."

"Yeah, but not knowing about that is a different kind of thing," Deidara said, uncrossing his arms and growing a bit more relaxed. "So what? You're just here to kill Cloud?"

"We're here to fix what Yahiko broke," Sakura said bluntly. "Do you know where Konan is?"

"Sure," Deidara said lazily, scratching the back of his head. "Want me to take you there?"

"Simple as that?" Sasuke asked, obviously wary and right to be. Deidara smirked.

"Simple as that," he said. "I'm not gonna turn down the help, and if you guys are assassins, well…" he shrugged. "We'll just kill you. But you've all been in Amegakure before; this reads to me as a stupid plan instead of a dangerous one." He gestured back towards the bird, an enormous pigeon made of clay. "Get on. It was time I headed back anyway."

The clay bird was soft, but not soft enough to sink into, and Naruto could see how cautiously Sasuke regarded it; it was obviously a weapon of some sort, but with Deidara riding it too they all felt confident enough to board it. It took flight with supernatural lightness, pushing up into the sky on massive wings.

Naruto had only flown twice before; once on top of Fuu in Waterfall, and again when they'd first arrived in Amegakure. Those had both been before big changes in his life, so it was easy to believe he was about to experience another once as the ground fell away. In moments they were tracing among the clouds, doubtlessly blending in with them as Deidara pushed them west.

"You were there for it, huh?" he asked after a minute, looking at Sasuke. Naruto was happy to let his friend take the lead; he'd been a Jonin in Rain, after all. "The attack on Konoha, I mean."

"We were," Sasuke confirmed without emotion. Naruto tried to suppress the surge of hatred he felt in his gut for the nation. That wasn't going to be helpful here, and it might have been what Deidara was poking at.

"What a mess," Deidara said with a little grin. "You're not wrong that Rain's on the edge of splitting, Toad Sage. Konan told us to consider any Konoha ninja that showed up potential enemies, but she didn't tell us that she hadn't given the go-ahead on the attack. We all figured she must have known something we didn't…"

"We're not your enemies," Jiraiya said patiently. "Konoha may be; the village is filled with hatred after getting sucker punched. But we all came here precisely because none of us are shinobi of Konoha." He gestured at Team Seven's Rain hitai-ate, and his own custom one.

"Hmm." Deidara frowned, and Naruto realized this was another test. Judging by Sasuke's tension, they were maybe in a lot of danger all the way up here on a bird of Deidara's creation, but after a second the man shrugged and turned back towards the head of the bird, focusing on guiding it. Whether his suspicions had been dealt with or not, he seemed happy to leave it alone for now.

They flew in silence for nearly twenty minutes; a glacial pace as far as it went for ninja, but Deidara was obviously taking his time, circling to throw off any potential observers and changing altitude frequently. When they reached their destination, he threw the bird into a sudden dive, plummeting into the woods on the side of a mountain in seconds and stopping just before slamming into the ground. It might have been a final stupid test, but Team Seven all clung to the bird without issue despite the lack of warning, locked in place by their chakra.

"Nice," Deidara said with a laugh. He hopped off the bird and it began to melt; Naruto felt a twinge of disgust and fascination and two small mouths on Deidara's hands devoured the compressed clay and chakra and stuffed it into his pockets. "Now the funny part."

As if one cue a half dozen ninja had surrounded them, a patrol of Rain ninja that had obviously been expecting Deidara's return. Naruto didn't recognize any of them, but they obviously did him; there were uncertain looks and incredulous mutters as the leader, a Jonin with long red hair spoke to Deidara.

"You can't be serious," she said, and he laughed.

"He's here to speak to Konan," he said, gesturing to Jiraiya. "What, do you want to fight him instead?"

There was a brief internal struggle, but the woman backed down, narrowing her eyes at Jiraiya. "What do you need to say to her?" she said, and Jiraiya shrugged.

"We're here to offer our services," he said, gesturing to Team Seven and himself. "As allies and ninja of Rain. You wanna run that back to her?"

The Jonin blinked. "No," she decided after a moment, and for a second Naruto's heart sank. "You can tell her yourself, Sage."

It wasn't resignation, Naruto realized; just trust. Jiraiya had built a reliable reputation in Rain, visiting the Amekage as much as he did and having trained them in the first place. They couldn't have known he'd been in Amegakure just a few days before helping his dad try to kill Yahiko. To them, Jiraiya visiting his students was normal.

"Lead the way, then," Jiriaya said with a mock bow, and Team Seven followed silently behind him as the Jonin did just that. They wound through the woods and into a concealed cave, burrowing under the mountain. It wasn't the best location for a camp, Naruto thought. A decent earth jutsu could bring down a chunk of the mountain on top of it and bury everyone alive. But making camp anywhere in a ninja war was treacherous; in the open, near water, under or above the ground, there were ninjutsu that could make any location a death trap. Concealment was king, and this place was definitely well concealed.

The cave had obviously been expanded by jutsu, worming off into several other passages. It was dimly lit by electric torches that filled the air with a quiet hum, and most of the caverns were filled with supplies; food, weapons, medical equipment, beds. Ninja had to be self-reliant, but this was obviously Konan's main camp, and there were quite a few people here, Naruto estimated. Maybe two-hundred, though he only saw a fraction of that. There was only so much scavenging even shinobi could do, and it would risk betraying their position to the enemy anyway. Still, the camp was obviously temporary; Naruto knew from his lessons that staying in one place for more than a couple days would be tempting fate.

They eventually came into a large main chamber that had several pits dug in it, small dugouts that granted privacy for important conversations. Most had a stone table in the center, and several familiar faces were gathered around one of them near the entrance, speaking quietly to one another. They all looked over at their unmasked footsteps, and despite thinking he was prepared for the moment, Naruto stopped and stared.

Konan, he had expected. The Amekage looked as flawless as ever, no doubt or exhaustion obvious on her severe face. She didn't give any sort of readable reaction to her master's entrance, nor Team Seven's; her amber eyes just flitted between each of them in turn, assessing them. To Naruto, it looked like a purely utilitarian calculation.

Nonō, he had dreaded. He'd wondered if she'd been at Konoha or not: the answer was obviously no. She was seated at Konan's side, her obvious right hand, and though her gaze drifted past Sasuke and Sakura her eyes locked on Naruto. It was obvious neither of them knew quite how to react; what were you supposed to do when the person your son had died for walked into the room?

There were three other shinobi, but Naruto only knew one of them. She was the one he'd never expected to see again.

"Hey!" Fuu said, jumping to her feet and rushing over. "Naruto, Sakura, Sasuke! What're you doing here?"

"Fuu," Konan said mildly, and she stopped short of jumping the three of them. "Hold on for a moment." She stood up, followed by everyone else at the table, and stepped out of the pit. "Sensei. Good to see you."

"And you, Konan," Jiraiya said respectfully. "Quite the setup you've got here."

"It's enough," Konan said. "Why are you here?"

"To help." Fuu was starting to hop from one foot to the other, but Jiraiya barely seemed to notice her. "We're here to do as individuals what the villages cannot."

Konan frowned. "Even after what Yahiko did?" she said, brutally straightforward.

Sakura stepped forward, all of her razor focus falling on the Amekage, and Naruto saw her stiffen. "That doesn't matter right now," Sakura said, and Konan turned all her attention to her. "We're here to deal with the real enemy: Cloud. If we let ourselves get pulled in circles like everyone else, they'll get away with what they did; I can't accept that."

Konan looked at Naruto and Sasuke. "And you two, too?" she said, and they both nodded. Sasuke didn't feel the need to justify himself, but Naruto spoke up.

"My mom got really hurt," he said, and Konan grimaced. "She might still die. But we all figured that if Rain and Leaf keep fighting, more people important to all of us are just going to keep dying for no good reason." He forced out something between a sigh and a laugh. "So, the best thing we can do is come here. Cloud's the one that…"

He grunted, unable to quite get it out, but he saw that Nonō understood what he was trying to say. "So that's that," he finished, and Konan nodded.

"That's that," she said quietly. "Okay. Well, you're all welcome here, then." She gestured to the table. "You can join if you'd like, sensei. We're discussing an upcoming operation."

"That's appreciated," Jiraiya said. As he stepped forward, Fuu rushed past him. She threw her arms wide and jumped onto Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura, drawing them all into a crushing hug in the same movement.

"I can't believe you're here!" she said, grinning from ear to ear. She looked healthy and happy and whole, and Naruto felt a bit of the hatred that had gunked up his insides for the last few weeks dissolve and melt away. "And you guys are all okay! I was worried when I heard what happened with Waterfall and Amegakure! That must have been crazy!"

"It wasn't great," he said. "We can't believe you're here either. After what happened with Itachi…"

"Oh, yeah!" Fuu said, pulling back with a laugh. "Don't worry, I barely remember that year; it's all a blur!" She stuck her tongue out. "I missed my birthday, but it was never that exciting anyway. But ever since Waterfall agreed I could fight with the Nation, it's been great! I've seen so much, you guys! New towns and mountains and the ocean!" Her eyes were sparkling. "It's huge! People told me it was big, but it goes way beyond the horizon! And it's deep! I swam for like, ten minutes and still didn't find the bottom!"

Naruto couldn't help but laugh, and he heard Sasuke let out a chuckle as well. Sakura was the only one who still seemed stuck, staring at Fuu like she couldn't understand why she was here. The bubbly girl didn't seem to mind, just grinning at each of them and obviously delighted to have found her first friends once more. It felt like they had grown up and she hadn't, and that might have been the case if she really had missed a whole year of her life.

"So you've been helping out here?" Sasuke asked, and Fuu nodded enthusiastically. She headed back towards the pit, grabbing by the seat by the corner as the adults discussed the war. "How has it been?"

"It's been interesting," Fuu said, her demeanor getting a little more sober but still overflowing with brightness. "I've never been in a war before; it's scary sometimes, but Konan's a genius. We've been fighting Cloud up and down the country. There's a lot more of them then there are of us, but she's always picked out their weak points every time. Right now-" She gestured back at Konan, who gave her a polite smile. "We're figuring out how to take out one of their big supply depots. It's over in this town called Kushiro; it's as big as Waterfall, but there are tons of them throughout the country! It's crazy!"

"A supply depot?" Sakura asked, and Fuu grinned at her.

"Yeah, like this one really," she said. "But Cloud has some crazy technique that's been a real pain to deal with. We've gotta carry or fly our food and stuff in the old fashion way, or use summoning, but they can just teleport stuff anywhere they need. Weapons, tools, food: pop." She clapped her hands together. "It just appears where they need it. We wanna get into the depot and get a look at the place before Cloud can clean it up to get an idea of what kinda jutsu it is, so we can maybe counter it. That place has been keeping basically the whole northern part of the country supplied for them, so it'd be a big deal if we could pull it off."

"Sounds like a turning point," Sakura said.

"Exactly!" Fuu said, humming for a moment. "It's a big turning point, so you guys turned up at the perfect time. You're all really strong: I bet Konan would love to have you along."

Naruto took that as a given, but Sasuke raised an eyebrow. "What makes you say that?" he said, but Fuu just giggled.

"I can tell, duh," she said. "I mean, maybe other people couldn't, but I've always been good at judging people, y'know. When we first met you all knew what you were doing, but you're top-class ninja now." She smirked and stuck out her fist. "Like me! You might not be Jinchuriki, but it looks like you don't need it!"

Naruto laughed and bumped Fuu's fist, and there was a small shock between them; she jerked back with a look of surprise, and then joy. "Told ya!" she said, fist-bumping Sasuke and Sakura as well. They apparently felt the same shock; Sasuke looked at his hand suspiciously. "This is gonna be great."

They sat and chatted for some time, catching up and eavesdropping on the conversation between Jiraiya and the others, before Naruto said something that surprised him.

"Did I tell you my mom is a Jinchuriki too?" he said, and Fuu looked like she was going to jump out of her skin.

"For real?" she asked breathlessly. "No, you didn't! Or if you did, I forgot! She's the Jinchuriki of the Nine Tails? That's the one Konoha has, right?"

"Yeah," Naruto said. "Did Waterfall tell you that?" Fuu nodded vigorously.

"They always said I might have to fight the Nine-Tails one day," she said, "but that's obviously not gonna happen now, since we're teaming up and all. It's super strong, right? Your mom must be amazing to hold it!"

"She is," Naruto said quietly, wondering why he was going down this road. He glanced back at Nonō and Konan took a deep breath, making his decision. "She started talking to it recently. Her seal got really damaged in the invasion, badly enough that it basically took over her body for a bit. Since then…"

"Wow, that's pretty bad," Fuu said. "Though I guess that basically happened to me with Itachi and Kakuzu: they messed up my seal a lot during that invasion."

"It wasn't great," Naruto said frankly. "But Fuu… the Nine-Tails told her all sorts of things, her and our sensei. It told my mom it had a name, and that it had been created by the Sage of Six Paths. All kinds of crazy things."

Fuu paused, watching him but seeming like she wasn't paying attention for a moment. "What name did it say?" she eventually asked, seemingly honestly curious.

"Kurama."

"Huh!" she leaned back, pondering for a second. "So it's like Chomei, then?"

A second passed. Two.

Naruto blinked. "Huh?"

"Oh, yeah, I never told you Chomei's name," Fuu said after a second, looking embarrassed. They were all staring at her, and for the first time she fidgeted under the attention. "That's the Nanabi. She told me her name like, a couple years ago, when I was figuring out how to use her chakra better. We talk sometimes."

"You talk sometimes?" Naruto furiously whispered, and Fuu nodded, bending in to hear him.

"Yeah. I mean, my seal wasn't messed up, but Waterfall really wanted me to start pulling out more Bijuu chakra a couple years ago. So I did, but I kinda went into a coma for a while because there was too much of it. They were worried I was gonna die: they probably would have made another Jinchuriki if I'd been out too long!" she whispered cheerfully. "But while I was asleep, I met Chomei for real for the first time. We talked about what I was doing, and I thought she was just gonna eat me or something, but she said she wanted to see how much I could handle. So like, since then…" She scratched her chin. "I dunno if we're friends, cause she lives inside me and everything. The way I see it, it's our body, not just mine. That's how I can grow wings so easily and stuff, because we're pretty compatible. That's what she said, anyway."

'Chomei! It'll be okay!'

The last words Naruto had heard from Fuu before she'd been kidnapped crashed into him, and if he hadn't been seated he would have fallen over. He'd never wondered what Fuu had meant; the events of the rest of the day, and the truth of the Uchiha Massacre, had completely driven the desperate declaration from his mind. But his friend had done in no time at all what had taken his mother decades. Because of how unbelievably friendly and trustworthy she was, she'd approached her Bijuu as an equal instead of an enemy, and been given so much of its power as her own thanks to her trust.

"One second," Fuu said, listening to something he couldn't hear. "Chomei says Kurama's never told anyone his name before," she eventually said. "Because he's a huge asshole."

"She can hear us?" Sasuke asked, and Fuu nodded, obviously overjoyed that she was allowed to swear.

"I don't tell people about that normally," she said frankly. "Not even the Elders, or Konan. But the seal was always the kind that let her access my senses." The Amekage hadn't noticed their conversation, Naruto saw. Fuu was being unbelievably quiet considering her normal volume. "Chomei said people wouldn't trust me if I did, which made sense to me. The Tailed Beasts are demons, after all. No one trusts them."

"But you trust her," Sakura said. Fuu nodded again.

"She's helped me a lot," she said. "Kept me company. Her voice is quiet, but it's always there. By now I don't remember living without it." She shifted her suddenly intense gaze to Naruto. "I guess that's what it's like for your mom now. But if she's been living without that connection before…"

"She's doing her best," Naruto said, desperately missing her. "She's even trying to befriend the Kyuubi- Kurama. But even if I can't hear what he says, I can tell that…" he laughed. "Like you said, he's a huge asshole."

"Chomei said that," she said, and Naruto wondered what it must be like to talk to such an ancient creature that still used phrases like that. "But maybe your mom can do something about that. If she's anything like you, Naruto, I'd bet she could."

Naruto didn't know how to take that compliment, so he sat quietly for some time. Eventually, he started to catch Fuu up on everything his mom had learned about the Tailed Beast and their origin. She was a good listener, sitting with wide eyes for the duration of the conversation and only cutting in with enthusiastic questions when they were necessary. As they spoke, Naruto noticed Sasuke checking under his cloak.

A crow's head peaked out, and he snorted, having forgotten about the little bird. It was the crow that Itachi had left Sasuke outside of Amegakure; it had followed them into the Land of Frost, and Sasuke had hidden it before their meeting with Deidara. The bird shuffled out with an indignant chirp, settling on the floor and staring around the room.

It might have been observing, Naruto thought, and Sasuke was definitely thinking the same thing. But right now he didn't care too much about that. Let Itachi see all he wanted; if Itachi was really Sasuke's ally now, it might even be a help.

What they needed, what all the world needed right now, was more allies instead of enemies, and so Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura stayed and spoke with Fuu for another couple hours, until the war council broke up and Jiraiya approached them with a serious demeanor.

"Get some rest," he told them. "We're hitting Kushiro tomorrow."
 
This chapter felt like more of a breather than the last one, somehow.

I can't even begin to rationalize why.

EDIT: Ah, no wonder: less interpersonal conflict and fewer scenes of internal village politics.
 
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This was a nice respite, and I always appreciate a good bit of Deidara. But the tension I don't think has abated, just held steady. Something's going to break, violently, within team 7 soon.
 
This chapter felt like more of a breather than the last one, somehow.

I can't even begin to rationalize why.

EDIT: Ah, no wonder: less interpersonal conflict and fewer scenes of internal village politics.
Yeah, originally there was a big fight against Cloud ninja in the middle (with that scene where they stumble on the aftermath of a battle; Sakura would have ignored Jiraiya's wisdom and descended into the town, where Cloud ninja were waiting to ambush anyone who came to investigate the site), but it was just way, way too much, though it took me three weeks of perseverating to realize that. The story and Team Seven both needed more time to breathe, but they're in the eye of the storm now; from here on out, whichever way they go, mayhem is inevitable.
This was a nice respite, and I always appreciate a good bit of Deidara. But the tension I don't think has abated, just held steady. Something's going to break, violently, within team 7 soon.
They're united for now, at least, so even if something does break hopefully they'll be able to tightly keep hold of one another, as they always have :)
 
Chapter 83: History Is A Story Told By Bones
Beyond Frost: Konoha's Prisoner
Kagami Kaguya had lost track of time.

It had never been a particular skill of hers, but it had also never happened before. She had lived a life run through with strife, but she'd never been locked away in a secret bunker for what must have been weeks, unable to sleep, plagued by the persistent pain of a half-missing arm as her mind was peeled apart day after day. What she was enduring was torture, but it wasn't as crass as peeling off her fingernails or poking out her eyes. She would have preferred that, even, since she could regenerate now.

But instead, it was questions. Constant questions, and a lack of sleep as she was interrupted at seemingly random with further interrogations about Rain's strengths and weaknesses, the Akatsuki's secrets, her Kekkei Genkai, and a hundred other subjects that Konoha clearly believed important. Her interrogators weren't the same every time. Sometimes their faces were concealed by painted masks, sometimes not. She was pretty sure there were five or six of them, two with long blond hair, the rest without much in the way of distinguishing features, men and women both.

Her chakra had been sealed away on what had definitely been the very first day; it was a brutal feeling jutsu formula that had been laid over her spine and locked up her body. Kagami felt sure that on anyone else, it would have slowly killed them, but on her strange body it had just halted her Dead Bone Pulse and her regeneration, leaving her missing arm a half-formed stub, nascent fingers poking out from what should have been the elbow. Aside from the seal, she was at least not physically restrained, just confined to a featureless square room. Ten paces by ten paces, a distance she had measured a thousand times over by now. There was nothing within except a pillowless bed and a toilet. Both were probably a measure of mercy, but Kagami found it difficult to be grateful given her present circumstances.

Even with her chakra sealed, her senses had remained acute, and she had started to recognize the different sounds that came from outside her prison. Part of that was memorizing the different walking rhythms of her captors, the presence of her three perpetual guards (though they too rotated through different shifts), and the various muffled voices that emerged. Ever since her body had been repaired by Nagato Uzumaki, everything had been like this, all her senses driven to an incredible extreme by the influx of chakra that her body seemed to endlessly produce. Even months later the memory of the glorious feeling of being set right, of invisible things within her body and soul finally aligning instead of grinding against one another, made her shiver.

Now, whether it was day or night, a new set of footsteps approached. Murmured voices emerged from outside the steel hatch that served as her door, and the guards shifted. Someone was going to enter.

The panel at the bottom of the door that her food was slid through opened, and she heard the voice of one of her guards clearly. "Back away from the door," she said, words that held no kindness or sympathy whatsoever. "Face the wall."

It was a rote tradition by this point, and Kagami had learned by now that not following the orders was pointless; disobeying just ended up hurting, and without chakra she was as helpless as a newborn baby against trained ninja. So she obeyed, raising her arms above her head and pressing her forehead to the cool metal wall. The door slid open with just the faintest sound, and two people entered before it closed.

"Turn around." The same voice. When she did, Kagami hiccuped in surprise.

One of the ninja that had entered was one of her guards, a woman with purple hair whose face was concealed by a Black Ops mask.

The other was Obito Uchiha.

She had never seen the famous ninja face to face, but every member of the assault force had been shown pictures of him when they'd been given instructions to radio to his designated assassination squad if he appeared. A stolid man with short dark hair and a long straight scar from below his left eye to his chin; he was unmistakable, though one of his eyes was covered by a medical patch. He did not look like the living legend that he was, but Kagami still felt an instinctive shiver run down her spine.

He glanced over at the guard. "You can leave," he said, and the ninja bowed. "I'm sure I'll be fine."

The guard left without a word, and Kagami stood there without a clue why the famous Uchiha could have come to visit her.

"Take a seat," he said, gesturing at the bed before he crossed his arms and leaned back against the wall. "I'm not here to interrogate you."

"I find that hard to believe," she said, trying to stay neutral but feeling some of her old bitterness rearing up. This man was the polar opposite of her, blessed from birth with power beyond human understanding; the Uchiha Clan's Sharingan certainly didn't bring the kind of madness that the Kaguya's Shikotsumyaku had. Nonetheless, she sat down, resting her half-formed arm against her side.

Obito eyed it with some curiosity, but didn't comment on it. "We have people for that," he said, and Kagami huffed. "I'm sure you're well acquainted with them by now. I'm just here to have a conversation with you."

"And if I don't want to talk?" Kagami asked, and Obito shrugged.

"Then I'll leave. It's a personal curiosity, nothing more."

Only someone as high up as him in the village hierarchy could speak with a prisoner like her out of personal curiosity. Kagami felt a spiteful yearning to throw the offer in his face, but the feeling was fleeting and buried by a crushing loneliness. She hadn't spoken to someone for a long time: she'd answered questions and had her mind probed, but that wasn't the same as a conversation. And beyond that, her family was dead: even Kimimaro was gone, and in all likelihood she would never return to her spacious new home in Rain. After a taste of power, she had returned to being nothing and no-one, a curiosity to be bandied between the villages.

In that reality, getting on the good side of someone like Obito Uchiha wasn't a bad idea.

"Fine. But if you're going to ask questions, I want to ask questions too," she said. The Uchiha shrugged once more.

"That's fine; I can answer within reason," he said, and they both knew what he meant. Still, Kagami found herself struggling to find what she should say next. She ended up going with her first, and probably not best, instinct.

"You're Naruto's sensei, right?" she said, and the question surprised him. "Or were, before he went to Amegakure."

"I was and am," he said, eyeing her suspiciously. "He and his team were my first students. Them running off wasn't exactly what I had planned, but it worked out for the best."

"So it was a mission for them to defect?" Kagami asked, remembering everything she'd said to Naruto when they'd first met. "He was a Leaf ninja the whole time?"

"It's complicated for them all," Obito said bluntly. "Naruto said he knew you, but he didn't elaborate much."

"He saved my life," Kagami said, meeting bluntness with bluntness. "Even after I had given up on living." She clutched at her incomplete arm. "I don't regret joining up with Rain; Nagato fixed me: fully awakened the clan's power within me. Becoming one of his ninja was the least I could do to show my gratitude. But coming here to kill Naruto's mother… I feel like I should apologize to him. It wasn't fair."

"I'll pass that along," Obito said. She couldn't tell if he was being sarcastic. "If it's any consolation, you didn't succeed."

"He really does have good luck then," Kagami said. "I didn't think anyone could kill Kimimaro. Kushina Uzumaki… she really was some kind of monster."

"Kushina's lovely. The Kyuubi's not," Obito said, and Kagami sensed that she'd hit a nerve and instinctively retreated from the topic. "I don't know if Naruto would agree with you about his luck, considering how many disasters he's been at the center of."

"He's survived every one of them," Kagami said quietly. "It's a curse to be struck by so much ill fortune, and a blessing to be made stronger by them, like he has been. I saw that when we first met, when he fought Yui Tono. I know the difference between good luck and bad."

"I'll take your word for it," Obito said with a quiet laugh, pushing off the wall a little. "Are you getting at something?"

"Nothing in particular," Kagami admitted. "I've just been thinking about it, in my time here. He's alright?"

"He's alright. Now, a question for you," Obito said, and Kagami straightened up, expecting an interrogation despite his apparently kind words. "Do you know much of the history of your clan?"

Kagami frowned, a thousand unpleasant memories and feelings dug up in a single stroke. "Why?" she asked in reflex, her tone far more biting than she intended. However, Obito didn't back away or chastise her, and so she continued. "They're all dead now, even Kimimaro. Once I'm gone, the Kaguya will be extinct." She felt her lip curl against her will. "And good riddance."

"They didn't treat you well," Obito noted. Kagami let out a bark of laughter.

"I was a princess, until they realized I was defective. Then, I barely escaped with my life." She grit her teeth, trying to forget the pain, the humiliation, the terror. Being forced to shred her own skin and break her own bones, again and again, until they were convinced she truly could not master it.

"Sounds nasty," Obito said, sounding sympathetic but not overly concerned. "But being the last one puts you in a unique position, since the Kaguya clan and their history has suddenly become interesting to me."

"Why?" Kagami asked again. "They were a bunch of losers and maniacs. There's nothing worth learning about them."

Obito sighed, scratching at the back of his head. "I won't bore you with a bunch of ancient history," he said after a moment, "since you don't seem like you'd be interested. But I've been investigating my clan's ancestors lately, and they've dug up credible evidence that the Uchiha, and other clans including yours, may have a direct line going all the way back to the Sage of the Six Paths. You've heard of him?"

She had, and from her own clan even. What he was saying just made Kagami's sneer wider. "So, what? You want to use me to justify the Uchiha's success?" she said, continuing even as Obito shook his head. "Give the Leaf even more of a historical mandate?"

"Couldn't care less," Obito said, his voice a bit colder. Kagami couldn't help but believe him; the contempt in his tone was too real, and too familiar. "We're similar, you and I: I wasn't exactly the Uchiha's golden boy until my eyes came into their own, so I think I understand you, if even just a little. I don't expect you to care about that, and frankly, you shouldn't. But if the Kaguya and the Uchiha and other clans are bound by history, then I think I can at least keep history from repeating itself by learning it."

Kagami cut down on her initial biting response, taking a moment to consider Obito's words. "You're saying the Kaguya clan may have been descended from the Sage as well," she eventually said, the words burning. She remembered countless midnight candlelit lessons, the oral history of the clan passed down to her by frantic old men desperate to see her as their messiah and not a broken and bleeding girl that couldn't overpower a child, let alone a ninja.

"I'm saying I suspect it. The Uchiha records name the Sage's mother as a princess named Kaguya, and other circumstances have shown me a connection between your Shikotsumyaku and the Sage's power." Obito uncrossed his arms, raising one hand. "But it's precisely that, circumstantial. You inherited the Bloodline, even if it was defective until Nagato got his hands on you. Did your clan pass down any stories before they went and got themselves killed by the Hidden Mist?"

Kagami didn't answer right away; she sat there thinking, her heart burning, and her sense of time returned for that period of contemplation. A minute passed, and then two, and Obito Uchiha continued to patiently wait, regarding her without judgment or disgust.

"I didn't get much history," she eventually said after taking a deep breath. "We were given legends; the clan's mythology. Their history was so pathetic that it rarely was spoken about."

"Then tell me the legends," Obito said, his tone mild.

"The Kaguya were the world's inheritors." Obito shifted, but did not interrupt as she continued. "That's what we were always taught. The Sage stole chakra from the heavens and lost control of it, leaving it spread throughout the world as everyone learned how to use it. The clan's elders called other ninja thieves that had stolen the heavenly bounty without understanding its power. They considered the Shikotsumyaku a divine right that had survived in Kaguya blood, despite the impurities of humanity. So anyone that was born with it, even me at first, was venerated as a living god, and proof of the mandate to reclaim the world from thieves and vermin."

When Obito still did not interrupt, Kagami continued, the old unspoken words rushing out of her like bile. "The Sage didn't have a mother in any of those stories; the only role of Kaguya women was to bear children in the hopes that one of them would manifest the bloodline. If you didn't, your blood was obviously too impure. My mother died giving birth to me, but that was taken as an omen when I showed the signs of the Shikotsumyaku, that her blood had been sacrificed to empower me. I had been blessed by the Sage, given holy bones and sacred blood, and avoided the curse of the Shodai Kage, but of course…" She trembled, feeling like she was going to throw up. "When it became clear I was defective, that all reversed. I was an abomination; they demanded that I stay and breed more children, or be executed. If it hadn't been for Kimimaro's Bloodline, I…"

She found herself unable to continue speaking, and so stopped. Sitting there and trying to control her breathing, to push the memories away, Kagami felt humiliated and weak. Still controlled by her childhood fears, still gripped by phantom agony a decade gone now. She wasn't a ninja; she was just a woman with a body twisted by whatever insane experiments the Kaguya had done to themselves for generations, a superhuman physicality without the mentality to match.

It was pathetic.

But if Obito shared any of those thoughts, he gave no sign. He was deep in thought, leaning against the wall with his visible eye closed, and he did not speak until she had gotten her breathing under control.

"You said something there," he said, and she looked up at him, embarrassment heavy in her chest. "A weird turn of phrase. The Shodai Kage?"

"Yeah," Kagami said, managing to laugh. "Ridiculous. It was a story with the original meaning of the term; a shadow, not a leader."

"Tell me about it." Was there a sudden intensity there, or was she imagining it?

"It was part of the whole…" she choked, waving her hand as she tried to decide what she meant. "Original sin bullshit. The shadow came before the Hidden Villages, which made the modern Kage just another kind of thief, since they were stealing its thing. That was how the Kaguya saw everything. It was the personification of people being unable to control chakra, a darkness that stole anyone that tried to master the heaven's powers without permission. Anything bad that ever happened to the clan, a raid gone wrong, a disease outbreak, a hangover, they blamed the First Shadow. It was…" She paused again, blowing out a breath. "You know, an excuse. An excuse for bad luck or bad behavior or just plain stupidity. The Sage ascended into the heavens after humanity failed, but the light he cast left behind an everlasting shadow. That kind of nonsense. When I started traveling, I realized that everyone has something like that; a demon or a spirit or a people or a nation to blame all their troubles on."

Obito didn't say anything, and Kagami looked over at him, truly trying to read him for the first time since her emotions had carried her away. He was standing stock still, eye staring straight ahead. His face was pale.

"What?" she asked, and he blew out a short breath. "You look… what, there's not something like that in your clan shit too, is there?"

"No," he said abruptly, pushing off the wall. "I might come back to talk to you later. Thanks for your time."

"Wait!" Kagami said, and Obito actually stopped. "Wait. I don't…" She hesitated. "I don't want to be alone anymore. Can you get me out of here?"

Obito stared at her. "You tried to unleash the Nine-Tails on the village," he said, and Kagami suddenly understood how personal that was to him. "Frankly, it's a miracle you're still alive."

She wilted. "I understand," she muttered after a moment. "My apologies."

The Uchiha stared at her for a moment longer, before he rapped his knuckles against the door twice. He turned away as it started to slide open, but spoke as he left.

"I'll see if we can get you a window," he said, and then the door closed and Kagami was left alone in a timeless steel void once more.

She lay down, closed her eyes, and let herself cry.
 
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This is a fascinating and high, high quality story because of how much time and effort it pours into both the characters and the world they inhabit.

I've seen few to none stories that really engage with the implications and legacy of Black Zetsu in all its facets so this project doing so and mixing in a character study piece about an original character like Kagami at the same time is all the more amazing for it.

It was a fascinating choice to have the reveal of Black Zetsu be this gradual almost horror movie energy style unveiling via Itachi's circumstances, then Madara's biased account -Sakura's infection and then via Kagami recounting old stories she doesn't believe. You can see the moment things start to click for Obito and it's a very, the killer was already inside your house sort of realisation.

Kagami's characterisation was fun, her feelings about Naruto and her part in the latest tragedy, her bitterness and trauma from her clan and her not understanding what motivates Obito's questions. I like the element of her under the power and trauma being something of a scared lonely kid who doesn't really truly grasp just how deep a hole she's dug for herself as evidenced by that final irrational request to Obito.

Amazing work as ever @Ser_Serendipity
 
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Stop stealing my notes about the Kaguya, thanks. Seriously though, two really good chapters, my only regret is noy waiting for the next one to catch up because now I have to wait for it.

Probably analyze them more in depth when I get home.
 
Stray apostrophe in "heavens".
Thanks for catching this!
Stop stealing my notes about the Kaguya, thanks. Seriously though, two really good chapters, my only regret is noy waiting for the next one to catch up because now I have to wait for it.

Probably analyze them more in depth when I get home.
Fret not, it's already done and undergoing revisions, I'll have it up on Friday. I actually managed to be productive over the weekend, which was a refreshing change of pace. I don't want to know for sure how many thousands words of this story were just written during my lunch breaks at work.
This is a fascinating and high, high quality story because of how much time and effort it pours into both the characters and the world they inhabit.

I've seen few to none stories that really engage with the implications and legacy of Black Zetsu in all its facets so this project doing so and mixing in a character study piece about an original character like Kagami at the same time is all the more amazing for it.

It was a fascinating choice to have the reveal of Black Zetsu be this gradual almost horror movie energy style unveiling via Itachi's circumstances, then Madara's biased account -Sakura's infection and then via Kagami recounting old stories she doesn't believe. You can see the moment things start to click for Obito and it's a very, the killer was already inside your house sort of realisation.

Kagami's characterisation was fun, her feelings about Naruto and her part in the latest tragedy, her bitterness and trauma from her clan and her not understanding what motivates Obito's questions. I like the element of her under the power and trauma being something of a scared lonely kid who doesn't really truly grasp just how deep a hole she's dug for herself as evidenced by that final irrational request to Obito.

Amazing work as ever @Ser_Serendipity
Thanks Toxin 😊 It's been a lot of fun to drip Black Zetsu in throughout the fic, and knowing I wanted to from the start made it really easy to figure out good character beats for it. Kagami really only exists to give this tip-off to Obito, narrative wise, but once she existed it was simple to roll in other story beats like Yui Tono (who will become important again soonish, which is why I figured this was a good place to remind people she existed), Stone's experiments with Bloodlines, and Rain's collecting of unique and powerful ninja. It feels amazing to see it all come to a head now, can't lie.

As for Kagami and her feelings about all this, she's kinda like, the perfect example of how the ninja system creates victims, because she was an outsider to it until very recently. She's pretty much one of the only characters in the fic that would be naive enough to ask Obito something like that, because she has no real ideology beyond gratitude for personal favors; in a cast filled with people who'd die for intangible beliefs she stands alone. And thanks to that sense of gratitude, Rain used her as a weapon even through she lacked the training and mentality to be a ninja, just because she was genetically predisposed to being a killing machine. It's messed up in a way I can't fully articulate, but hopefully it helps reinforce the themes woven throughout without being too heavy-handed.
 
Chapter 84: Deeper Shadows
Needs To Be Precise With Their Rage

Kushiro was a beautiful town, though it would soon be scarred by war.

Sitting on the coast of the Dark Sea on the Land of Frost's northern coast and bisected by a mountain-born river that flowed right through it, the town had been a center of trade before the war. It was thanks to that critical location, with access to the sea, the river, and multiple roads that made their way both south and west towards the center of the Land of Frost, that Kushiro had been selected by Kumogakure and the Land of Lightning as an important distribution center and supply depot out of which all the necessities for making war constantly flowed. Its lovely port markets had been torn down, and hasty stockhouses erected in their place.

On the first of May, Kushiro was hosting precisely four-hundred and seventy-eight ninja, as well as just over two-thousand of the Land of Lightning's professional soldiers. By the end of the day, the number of ninja would shrink to ninety-three. It was a similar culling to what the original population of nearly twenty-five thousand civilians had endured, more than fifteen-thousand of which had been driven out of the town over the course of April, leaving behind critical labor for the docks and daily running of the town that had been press-ganged by soldiers from the Land of Lightning.

Nearly ten thousand non-combatants was an uncomfortably large number for the Nation of Rain, who had come to the Land of Frost both to punish the Hidden Cloud's arrogance and to assist in building their reputation among the minor nations. Completely leveling Kushiro was well within the capabilities of the Rain forces, but went against their strategic objectives; it was the threat of collateral damage that forced Konan and her lieutenants to settle on the assault plan that they did.

It was a battle plan not unknown among ninja; a low altitude airdrop, intended to compensate for Rain's inferior numbers, since their ninja were outnumbered more than three to one. The difference was in its scale. Ninja that could fly were a rarity, but Rain had brought three of them, and both Konan and Deidara had the capability to carry a good number of ninja themselves. As such, the attack on the heart of Kushiro would deposit fifty ninja directly into the center of town, a sudden and violent assault that would rely on shock and awe to drive the Cloud defenders to the outskirts, where they would be sandwiched between the other ninety-five assaulting Rain ninja to break, surrender, flee, or die.

Because of their skills, both Team Seven and Jiraiya were made a part of the drop force despite their abrupt arrival. So to prove their sincerity to Rain's cause, at six-forty seven in the morning they were immediately thrown into the heat of battle.

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If Sasuke had been a little bit more prideful, he would have been embarrassed by his undignified delivery to the town.

The air assault consisted of three flights. The largest contingent of Rain ninja were with Deidara, who had conjured a tremendous clay dragon large enough to seat thirty of them. It soared through the air with an ungainly grace, Deidara commanding it from the front with a delighted grin as they all broke from the cover of the low clouds and dived on the town of Kushiro as one. The dragon led the way, and shouts of alarm and commands could be very faintly heard from the buildings far below.

The second contingent were ninja who had been gifted paper wings by Konan. They included Jiraiya and Sakura, and they were more gliders than anything, though they occasionally flapped with wills of their own as they controlled the fall of Rain's ninja into Kushiro. It was a surreal and surely terrifying sight, and Sasuke was sure that stories of winged ninja would spread far and wide after this battle.

The last group was himself and Naruto. Fuu had her arms wrapped about both their waists, holding them into a death grip as her wings beat faster and faster, escalating to a deafening tempo as they dove on the city and the ninja below began to respond. Thanks to his Sharingan, he could see the defenders scrambling into place, leaping up to rooftops and preparing jutsu and weapons; several began to charge the Iron Wrists he had been warned about, channeling chakra to the metal gauntlets as they prepared to fire.

"Get ready!" Fuu yelled. Sasuke could picture her wide grin. Another second passed, and then they were only fifty feet above the highest buildings; most in Kushiro were two or three stories, classically constructed of stone and wood to evoke a more peaceful time. He glanced over at Naruto, who was wearing a grin that certainly matched Fuu's. Despite being catapulted into a war zone, his friend was having the time of his life.

"Go!" Fuu released them, pushing them out as her wings stopped beating and she transitioned into a free fall herself. Ninja fell from the sky all across Kushiro, and Sasuke caught Sakura landing on a rooftop nearby out of the corner of his eye. Her Akatsuki uniform fluttered in the wind, pushing her hood back, and her paper wings crumbled away as she landed with a flying kick that sent a Cloud ninja tumbling off the roof. Jiraiya was right at her side, tossing out a fireball that warded off the other enemies as Sakura threw herself towards them. The Toad Sage was already running through the hand-signs for a summoning jutsu, and as he struck the roof, there was an explosion of smoke and blood.

Sasuke landed in a courtyard alongside Naruto, tumbled, and started running. There were screams everywhere, chaos reigning as the battle suddenly kicked off. Desperate shouts, ninjutsu declarations, and the high pitched whine and crash of Iron Wrists filled the air, and he set himself south, intent on their objective. They'd been told to push into the center of Kushiro and take out any Cloud ninja they came across; it was a hunt and kill mission, simple as that.

From the roof Sakura had landed on came a flood of toads, hundreds of the things of every color. Most of them were only the size of Sasuke's hand, but as he leapt down into the streets they began charging forward. This close to the docks there were many workers in the streets who had been heading towards their shifts at the warehouses, and all of them were fleeing or freezing up as ninja landed around or on top of them.

The toads weren't targeting the defending ninja; rather, they went after the panicking civilians. Whenever one drew close their mouths swelled beyond physical possibility, and they swallowed them whole.

It probably wasn't helping the panic, Sasuke thought, but sealing the Frost's citizens away was definitely better than leaving them out in the middle of a warzone. They'd be returned unharmed after the battle, probably in better shape than their home; Jiraiya had taken pains to convince the Rain ninja not to unleash their more destructive techniques until at least part of the town had been cleared. Sasuke had no idea if it would work, but he had to pray that it would.

There was no time for much thought or much prayer though; Kushiro exploded into activity, Cloud ninja and Lightning's soldiers filling the streets, attacking from the rooftops and trying to repulse the sudden assault. A beam of energy fired by an Iron Wrist missed him by inches, and Sasuke's conscious thoughts shut down as he devoted himself entirely to the battle. The ninja that had fired at him cursed as Sasuke burst through the roof, seizing his arm and ripping the metal apparatus off it. He started to counterattack, but compared to Sasuke, he was painfully slow; before his Lightning Clone could manifest, Sasuke had already driven a kunai through the man's hand.

His other hand came up holding a knife of his own and a paper bird slammed into it, driving it back and wrapping around it to bind his fingers together. Konan was everywhere in the battle, making small moves like that to protect her shinobi. It was the most ridiculous force multiplier Sasuke had ever seen.

As the Cloud ninja screamed and cursed, trying to kick Sasuke off the roof, he swept the man's legs and caught him with a stomp to the skull. The ninja broke through the wood paneling, smashed face-first down to the first floor. After pausing to make sure he wasn't moving, Sasuke moved on.

He found Naruto down on the street, sending Shadow Clones off to where other Rain ninja seemed to be struggling. A dozen soldiers attacked him, perhaps mistaking him for an easy target by his age, and Naruto knocked three of them out with a single attack each; the rest turned and ran. He looked up at Sasuke and gave a thumbs-up, and Sasuke returned it, scanning the town. Explosions blossomed across nearby streets; Deidara's dragon had returned to the sky and rained down small clay creatures that went off with the force of massive bombs, leveling whole buildings and flattening some of the trees that lined the streets with pressure waves.

"Sasuke!" Sakura was behind him now, Fuu at her side, her fists stained with blood. Two long sparkling blades of sinuous water and ice flowed from Sakura's hands like an extension of her body, and she jerked her head towards the explosions as Jiraiya raced past them all, pushing south and kicking a Cloud ninja that leapt to intercept him clean through a nearby wall. "Let's go!"

It was information overload as they pushed south. So much was happening that Sasuke was sure if he hadn't been born to his Sharingan all the information it was capturing would have knocked him out. The Rain strike force spread out, their initial drop almost a complete success. Mayhem reigned in Kushiro; Cloud ninja were retreating, letting off constant suppressive fire from their Iron Wrists. The blasts weren't deterring their pursuers, especially when most of them were clumsily telegraphing their shots and the ones that weren't had their aim thrown off by swarms of paper birds that blocked their vision and jostled their arms. Sasuke realized in the span of a mere minute that the more experienced Cloud ninja were not relying on the technology; it was a potent weapon, but not reliable enough to replace ninjutsu, which the older ninja universally fought with.

In the sky above, he saw something bizarre. Deidara was being chased by a woman: a Cloud ninja that wore a long black cloak and ran on the air like it was solid ground. Deidara was peppering her with explosives, but she was firing darts back, small bursts of Lightning chakra that neutralized his bombs and kept them from going off. It seemed like a nearly even battle, especially when she managed to leap onto his dragon and spear its head with a lightning blade with one hand while she fought Deidara off with the other.

That immediately changed when Konan arrived.

The Amekage swooped to Deidara's rescue like a paper angel: the Cloud ninja was tackled off the dragon, but Konan melted away into loose sheets just seconds later and Deidara was able to attack. The Cloud ninja survived a barrage of explosives, shielded by a wall of chakra-infused dust, the same material that she had been walking on to enable her impossible flight. But with Konan there, Sasuke knew the ninja was out of the fight. He shifted his attention as she was surrounded by gleaming sharp paper birds, torn back to the brutal street to street fighting as they stabbed, punched, blasted, and stomped their way through the Cloud ninja, their enemy desperately trying to reorganize.

It was effortless to him. Even without using his Mangekyo, these ninja from Cloud could not stand against him. He was faster, stronger, more decisive.

Was this how Itachi felt? Was this where he had gotten the confidence to turn on the clan, or had that come from Madara's shadow? Sasuke knew he wasn't invincible, but this was the first battle he'd participated in where he felt the delusion drift by. The gulf between him and Itachi might not be a cliff anymore, merely a hill.

But would Itachi even think about this sort of thing? Was that what separated them: a self-awareness that would always hold him back? Drawn into his inner world with his body moving on its own, Sasuke's assault continued for another two minutes before he was rudely yanked back to reality.

A torrent of tan liquid suddenly burst from a nearby building, pouring out over the street. Two nearby Rain ninja were sucked down into the muck and suffocated in an instant, struggling beneath the thick goop; Sasuke and his team were quick enough to get out of the way, leaping up onto nearby walls and roofs as they scanned for the threat.

Stupid. Itachi never would have been distracted like that. He would have been able to warn his comrades that the attack was coming. Sasuke's Sharingan was already analyzing the jutsu; a mix of Fire and Earth, almost surely a Kekkei Genkai. As more Cloud ninja arrived from every direction, his eyes were drawn to the one leading them: a tall man with spiky black hair, sporting an eyepatch to match Jiraiya's own.

"Toad Sage," the Cloud ninja, an obvious leader, maybe the leader of the Kushiro contingent, called out. "You and your ninja have one chance to surrender. This isn't Konoha's war."

"We're not ninja of Konoha," Jiraiya called back without hesitation. For a second, both sides froze, waiting for orders as the buildings that had been submerged in the bizarre rubbery liquid the Cloud commander had created began to sink and melt, heated by the boiling tar they were suddenly surrounded by.

"Very well," the commander decided, throwing out two quick hand signs at his subordinates: hidden commands. "Then die."

Sasuke charged forward, set on assassinating the man, and the battlefield was thrown into chaos once more.

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When things got going in earnest, Naruto was surprised at how well he was handling himself.

He'd already taken out a bunch of soldiers and several Cloud ninja, all older than him. He'd known from experience that he was good at being ninja, but something about an open warzone had been more intimidating. When Konoha had been invaded, he'd been almost helpless against the Akatsuki team sent after his mother, despite all his growth. He had expected that the ninja here would be on another level, and that he'd be fighting for his life.

And he was: as he dodged a lightning bolt that blew a hole in the wall behind him and slammed a Rasengan into a Cloud ninja's side, sending him spinning down the street with a scream, it wasn't like he wasn't having to try his best. But he wasn't panicking, and no one who'd attacked him yet felt like they were moving too fast or too skillfully for him to handle. It hadn't been that long ago, really, that he couldn't see his dad move, but that wasn't the case anymore. He was old enough, experienced enough, to be a real ninja in a real battle.

It helped that the Cloud ninja were obviously freaking out. They clearly hadn't expected a bunch of enemies to basically appear in the middle of the town, or for the Rain ninja to be as skilled as they were. Naruto's shadow clones had spread out throughout the town, and through their returned memories he could tell that Rain's casualties so far hadn't been bad, with very few fatalities. Here, with his team and Jiraiya plus a couple others against what seemed to be Cloud's leadership corp, that could change.

Sasuke and Jiraiya charged the leader, trying to bury him in the rubber goop he'd sprayed everywhere, but he was doing a good job of holding them off with his subordinate's help. Seeing that, Naruto decided to focus on the other Cloud ninja. The less enemies, the better. Sakura had made the same decision, and now they were fighting across the street from one another, beating back squads of Cloud ninja that called down elemental jutsu and threw blasts of energy from their Iron Wrists with abandon.

Naruto saw how the Iron Wrists could be an issue, but so long as he stayed close to Cloud ninja, they couldn't shoot him without risking their friends. He leapt from roof to roof, smashing aside anyone who got in his way. One older ninja with a bushy mustache charged directly at him and Naruto met him head-on; the man had some kind of Earth jutsu that he led with like a battering ram, creating a shield of stone in front of him that transformed him into a juggernaut. Naruto felt sure from the man's confidence the shield could shrug off most ninjutsu, and at the speed he was moving even a ninja would be pasted by a direct hit. Just a couple weeks ago, he would have had to run away, or overwhelm the man with clones.

But today, he just sucked in a deep breath, chakra burning up and down his arm like the most intense lactic acid in existence, and pushed it all out in a single punch with a roar of effort.

The punch shattered the stone ram and the arm behind it. The Cloud ninja flew back, skipping across the roof like a stone over water and vanishing over the edge, still coordinated enough to catch the ledge with his intact hand and swing out of sight. Naruto saw his eyes before he vanished; the man was in shock, mentally and medically. Out of the fight, at least for now.

He glanced around, trying to take in the situation. Most of the other Cloud ninja were gone, but so were many of the Rain ninja, some buried in the tar and others bleeding out across the rooftops. Naruto started rushing from body to body, applying triage where he could. One woman grasped at him, and he caught her arm and settled it down by her side, barely sparing a word as he closed the hole that exposed her ribs.

"Stay still," was all he told her. By this point, he barely noticed how gruesome his job was. At least he'd gotten really good at it. He lost track of Sakura in the chaos, but he wasn't worried about her. Since they'd dropped, she'd been fighting so quickly and cleanly that it had surprised even him. Sakura had been the one to want to come here in the first place, and she was clearly prepared for it.

Jiraiya and Sasuke were still fighting. One of Sasuke's arms was coated in rubber, stuck to his side like a weird tan cast, but he wasn't moving like he was in pain; it wasn't boiling like the stuff on the ground. Maybe it couldn't be hot and sticky at the same time. He and Jiraiya chased after the Cloud commander, who slid across the rooftops on rapidly forming paths created by his Bloodline as he hurled ninja tools and barked orders into his radio. Naruto started heading in that direction, looking to cut him off, but Jiraiya gestured him away. He wasn't sure why.

"Now it's your turn to surrender!" Ah, that was why. Jiraiya delivered the ultimatum with so much confidence, but the Cloud commander just looked bemused. "Before more of your men die."

"That's impossible," the man said with a shake of his head. "Sorry. I can't hold a grudge against you all when we fired the first shot, but the Raikage himself gave me this assignment. I couldn't betray him or Lightning." Another torrent of tar emerged, submerging an entire building as Sasuke and Jiraiya leapt away. "Maybe in another-"

Naruto felt a flash of deja vu as Sakura appeared behind the man, leaping silently to flank him. Nonetheless, the ninja had great instincts. He drew a rubber wall behind him before he'd finished turning, and as Sakura's blade flashed out like a spear, the wall caught the attack. It distended and pushed towards the ninja's heart before he counterattacked, the wall leaping forward and wrapping around Sakura. Naruto couldn't see if she made it out or not before it closed.

"Hey!" Naruto shouted. They were all charging now; even a ninja as skilled as this man couldn't fight them all at once. He threw a kunai, adding a touch of super strength; the knife let out a sonic boom, but once more the commander drew his hand across the air, leaving behind a rubber barrier.

The knife slammed into the wall and, to Naruto's shock, bounced back with twice as much force. He didn't have time to dodge; it smashed into his shoulder and sent him spinning to the ground with a grunt of pain, piercing clean through his vest and scraping off the bone. A nasty hit, but nothing he couldn't fix.

Sasuke arrived, and the commander moved like a man possessed, blocking a flurry of attacks and a fireball before locking Sasuke's other arm to his side with more rubber as they leapt from building to building like violent pinballs. Sasuke ducked and weaved, continuing to fight with just his legs until the commander threw him off balance; he used a normal Earth jutsu, raising a wall between the two of them, and kicked right through it. At close range even the Sharingan couldn't keep Sasuke untouched, and he took a rock to the face and was driven back.

But then Jiraiya arrived and the Cloud commander was finally overwhelmed, barely dodging a Rasengan the size of his body and taking a razor sharp strand of hair clean through the arm. He stumbled off the roof and drew a dome of rubber over him, keeping Jiraiya from following for a brief second. By this point, Naruto was finally back on his feet and trying to pull the knife from his shoulder: it was so deep that he could barely grab the hilt. The commander looked over at him, calculating; Naruto could tell he was weighing his chances of going after the most injured target, and he grimaced.

"I wouldn't-" he said, before the man launched at him, throwing himself over the alley separating the two buildings.

At that moment, three things happened.

First, Naruto pulled the knife out with a surge of adrenaline, preparing to defend himself but feeling slower than he needed to be.

Second, the commander created a rubber whip between his hands and threw it out to snare Naruto. Most likely, he was going to take him hostage to try and negotiate with Jiraiya. Not a bad idea, though Naruto wouldn't make it easy for him.

Last, Sakura appeared like an angry black and crimson ghost. She leapt up from the alley, having silently retreated and relocated. She was at the commander's side in less than a heartbeat, and he jerked, having just enough time to look over at her with obvious shock.

She placed her hand to his chest, and a blade of water and ice burst forth. It punched directly through his heart, and then vanished in welter of red and white.

There were no last words or surprised declarations. The Cloud commander hit the roof, rolled, and lay still at Naruto's feet, his mouth opening and closing as he tried to take a final breath. When he looked up, there was no malice in his eyes as Naruto had seen in many other ninja's. Rather, there was only a look of resignation and, after a second, acceptance.

The Cloud ninja closed his eyes for good, and Sakura landed beside the body, looking it over before glancing up at Naruto. "You okay?" she asked, and he mutely nodded, laying a hand over his pierced shoulder and starting to mend the wound. The arm would be out of commission for the day at least, but the bleeding was easy enough to manage.

"Yeah," he said, grimacing at how hoarse his voice was. "Didn't think he could bounce it back like that. Thanks."

His eyes were drawn to the body once more, and despite all his senses buzzing and pain throbbing through his shoulder Naruto found himself staring at it instead of getting a move on.

It hadn't been the wrong thing to do. The man had been trying to kill them, and had killed a couple of the Rain ninja they'd been fighting alongside, people whose names Naruto hadn't even a chance to learn. He'd been leading an invading force that had taken over this town, taken over the country really, and despite being matter of fact about his job, that didn't excuse doing something so obviously wrong. So why did he feel like this? Where was the hesitation coming from?

It wasn't the dead man, Naruto realized. It was Sakura. Even if it had been justified, there'd been something about the way she'd done it that rubbed him wrong. She'd killed him so quickly, so easily. It had almost been dismissive. That was the ninja ideal for a lot of people, but it had never really been Sakura's. She wasn't the kind of person to kill a man without thinking about it before and after.

But now, she suddenly was. Was that why she had wanted to come to Frost? Had she realized she could kill like that now? Plenty had changed and they'd been through so much. Killing Haku especially had changed her. But was this part of that, or was it another thing about her that had been fundamentally altered without Naruto noticing?

He was still missing something, and he needed to find out what.

"Naruto." He looked up, finding her still there. "Are you hurt?"

He shook his head. "Well, a little," he amended, pulling his hand away from his shoulder. "But I'll be fine." He cocked an ear, looking and listening. "It's gotten quiet."

"Yeah." Sakura looked up, where Deidara, Fuu, and Konan were sweeping through the sky and descending on pockets of resistance. "I think that was their main force. We should start clearing buildings; they'll have left behind some traps and assassins. You're good?"

"I'm good," he lied, looking for Sasuke. Jiraiya was fussing over him, and Naruto called over. "Need help?"

"Do you have any Lightning jutsu?" Sasuke called out, sounding frustrated, and Naruto couldn't help but snigger at the image of him standing there looking pissed with his arms glued to his sides. "Cause that's all that's going to get this off."

"Well now hold on," Jiraiya said thoughtfully. "What if-"

He pressed a hand glowing with elemental chakra to the rubber, and it convulsed and doubled in size. Sasuke wheezed, his upper body being crushed.

"Ah shit," Jiraiya muttered, looking embarrassed. He waved at the two of them, pasting on a carefree grin. "You two go on! I'll get him to someone that can help."

Jiraiya was doing his best to keep them all safe, but he understood the reality that Sasuke was more vulnerable than the rest of them now: Naruto could see that instantly. He threw a two finger salute as the Toad Sage picked Sasuke up like a piece of ungainly luggage and leapt away across the rooftops. Sakura was watching with a small grin when Naruto turned to her. His heart skipped a beat.

It was fine. If she could still smile like that, everything was fine.

"Alright," he said, catching himself before he said something stupid. "Let's go, and take it slow. They're probably pissed after getting blitzed like this."

"I'll take the lead," she said, leaping down off the roof, and Naruto followed, determined to watch her back.

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House, door, entryway, kitchen, dining room, back porch, clear.

Repeat.

Sakura's mind had been like this for a couple weeks, mechanical and straightforward. She'd embraced it. In her opinion, she'd always thought too much anyway. What was important right now was the mission, taking peace in her own two hands.

But something had changed. Maybe it had been Fuu. Seeing her had been a shock.

'Another Jinchuriki. You're close to so many Tailed Beasts: the necessary tools of peace.'

And that was true. The Tailed Beasts were the ultimate violence, and it was useful knowing so many of their hosts. Fuu, Kushina, even Gaara, if he was still alive.

But Fuu was such a bubble of light that Sakura couldn't help but feel guilty thinking of her in such a utilitarian way. Maybe that guilt was what had broken her machine mind, at least for now. Fuu and the Beast she held, Chomei. They were cooperating. Did that mean the Kyuubi, Kurama, could do the same with Kushina? A person and a Tailed Beast working together were probably stronger than just one or the other. That was how cooperation went. Maybe that would be an even better deterrent than massing the Tailed Beasts?

She felt a hand on her shoulder, and stopped. Everything in her stopped. Naruto was touching her; the feelings that inspired couldn't be neatly categorized. When she'd seen that knife go into his shoulder, she'd wanted to burn down the world. Any world that let him get hurt wasn't the right kind.

She could not lose anyone else. If she did, it would be her fault.

'All your fault, because you were too weak. Strength is everything; peace is the quiet created by destruction.'

She looked back at him and his earnest blue eyes, feeling words behind her lips but not sure what they would be if she ended up spitting them out. He looked concerned.

"I heard something in the next room," he whispered, and all at once she understood they were in another building surrounded by handsome wooden paneling and fine furniture. A home, and an expensive one.

She'd heard it too. She just hadn't consciously registered it. She knew because chakra was circulating throughout her body, and her steps were silent. She had already been ready to respond.

Sakura nodded, eyeing the door, and she and Naruto took up positions on either side of it. She reached out, feeling the handle, and slowly turned it.

Someone burst through, and once more Sakura reacted before she consciously registered it. It was a young man, a Cloud ninja with their headband wrapped around their arm and a desperate look in his eyes. He was holding a fizzling explosive tag, and Naruto let out a curse as he realized the danger.

'But you're a great ninja now, aren't you?'

She was already acting. Her Flowing Hail Blade flickered out, cutting the tag in half and destroying it before it could detonate. The Cloud ninja started a hand-sign, but Sakura didn't care to find out what jutsu it would be. Her other hand lashed out, and the man fell, cut from hip to shoulder as blood gushed out across the hardwood.

She heard a scuffle in the room beyond, and once more her body moved before her mind did. She whirled through the door, spinning and preparing to unleash a volley of slashes that would shred anything in the room. She'd made this jutsu for fighting Jinchuriki; normal ninja stood no chance. There hadn't been someone she couldn't cut down with her bare hands yet, not since she'd had her epiphany after Waves.

Even Haku-

"Sakura!"

Naruto caught her arm, and Sakura froze; her blade was thrown off, cutting clean through the ceiling and bisecting the room above. For a second, she had the insane urge to whirl on him, to unleash the Hyouryusuiken on him for getting in her way. But the urge was so alien, so absurd, that it vanished instantly, and Sakura was left confused, feeling like the world was moving in jerks and starts.

"Naruto, what-?!" she demanded, pulling away and looking into the room. She expected there to be an attack coming at any moment; the sound had obviously been a ninja preparing to follow his fellow, and now they were exposed.

Instead, she found three people cowering against the back wall. A man and a woman and a young girl, all staring at her in abject terror, too fearful to move.

Sakura's brain short-circuited, and her body locked down. She stared at them, trying to understand where the enemy ninja must have gone. Was it an illusion? No, and if Naruto hadn't stopped her, she would have torn them all to shreds. Bothering with an illusion or disguise in that case would be pointless, since they'd still be dead. Why were they here? Was this their home?

Had she almost just killed this family as they cowered in their home, held hostage by a Cloud ninja?

"Sorry," Naruto said, taking the door and slowly closing it. "Stay put, alright? It's dangerous out there."

The woman nodded, eyes full of horror. Sakura couldn't look away until the door was fully closed and she couldn't see them anymore.

"It's okay," Naruto said. He was seeing through her. "They're fine. You didn't touch them."

"I…" The bubble of reality that Fuu had created was expanding. For the first time in weeks, Sakura felt fully in control of her body, her mind racing without redirection. The Tailed Beasts, Haku's death, her plan to create the ultimate weapon, every long term consideration she'd made her entire existence since the attack on Konoha melted away. All that was left was regret and fear, relief and forgiveness. "Naruto, if you hadn't been here…"

"Don't think about it," Naruto said quietly, leading her away from the door. They stepped over the body of the Cloud ninja and out into the street, looking around. Kushiro was getting quieter; the battle was almost over. "There's a lot of stuff that coulda happened. But it didn't."

Her heart moved her without permission; Sakura threw her arms around him, pressing her body against his and taking a shuddering breath. She felt Naruto stiffen up before his arms came up and wrapped around her as well, the two of them crushing against each other for several long seconds.

"Thank you," she whispered to him. She pulled back, not caring how red his face was, and kissed him.

It didn't have any thought put into it. There was no calculation; it was just the only way she could possibly express her gratitude, the feelings that had been bubbling beneath her skin for years. She didn't know how to kiss someone and probably wasn't very good at it, but to her delight Naruto didn't freeze up; after a second he kissed her back, and they drew away a moment later, both as red as tomatoes.

"Uh…" he stuttered, at a loss for words. They disentangled, and Sakura took a deep breath, feeling alive and whole for the moment. "Sakura, I'm…"

"It's okay," she said, feeling flush and somehow enjoying it. "Naruto, I don't know what I'd do without you. I'm sorry I've been so out of it lately. I just… everything seems so important, every second of every day. Like I'm the only one who can fix this. But if it weren't for you, I'd just be a murderer now. I almost made a horrible mistake; maybe not the first." It felt so beautiful, so freeing to speak so matter of factly, that Sakura thought she might get addicted to it. "You saved me from myself. I'll never be able to make that up to you."

"You don't…" Naruto rubbed the back of his head, obviously embarrassed and probably having some extremely hormonal thoughts. "You don't have to make it up to me. And that wasn't you. You're not… Sakura, you're not a murderer. You never will be."

'What did you do to Haku, then?'

The poisonous inner voice, blacker than midnight, tried to drag her down, but for once Sakura was able to stomp it down. Standing here in the midst of war, luxuriating in Naruto's light and the faint aftershocks of the kiss rippling through her body, she felt both empty and free. She had doubts, but they were the petty doubts of a teenage girl; she had forgotten her mission, her troubles, and her pain.

"Thanks, Naruto," she said, and his smile was a second sun. "Let's go; we should meet back up with everyone else. It sounds like things are wrapping up."

They moved cautiously down the street, falling in side by side as they looked around for enemies or allies. Naruto's hand bumped hers, but before Sakura could move it away he reached out with more purpose, taking her hand in his.

They walked hand in hand, quietly scanning while their hearts beat out of their chests, until they were reunited with the rest.

###

That evening, there was a celebration in the town of Kushiro. While much of the town had suffered, Rain's strategy had worked to keep casualties to a minimum, and the citizens of Frost, for the most part, saw the newly arrived Rain ninja as liberators. Sakura wasn't there to see it, but she could hear the distant sounds and see the light of the town through the trees. They had departed the town as swiftly as they'd arrived, stealing a substantial amount of Cloud's supplies in the process: the rest had been destroyed. Staying in a liberated town would be inviting a counterattack, though several Rain ninja had stayed behind to assassinate any Cloud ninja that tried to return to salvage the depot.

It was easy for her to picture things going the other way, and for the citizens of Kushiro to have fallen into an even deeper despair. But riding high from the thrill of victory and her first kiss, the morbid thoughts were kept at bay. The Rain contingent had a celebration of their own hidden away in the thick mountain woods, feasting on stolen supplies, drinking, laughing, and telling stories.

"God was with us today," Nonō said emphatically, and Sakura felt compelled to nod along. Her, Naruto, Sasuke, Nonō, and several other ninja had gathered around an impromptu table on a tree stump, passing around chocolate and discussing the battle. Every once and a while, she and Naruto were sharing awkward glances, and she was sure Sasuke noticed. Thankfully, he wasn't saying anything, but Sakura could picture his infuriating smirk nonetheless. "He delivered a great victory, and-" she gestured at Sakura and her teammates, "have returned some great ninja to the fold."

They were toasted; on another day, it would have made Sakura uncomfortable, but today it was easy to smile and return it, clinking her canteen against Nonō's. They and the other ninja spoke, recounting what they had seen and Rain's successes, and gradually people drifted away and joined other groups, leaving Nonō and Team Seven alone.

"I wish Kabuto could have been here for this," she said quite suddenly, and Sakura saw Naruto's heart drop out of his stomach. She reached for his hand to comfort him on instinct, and Nonō observed it with a wry smile. "He would have enjoyed seeing you all again."

"Nonō," Naruto said, steadying himself. Sakura could see that touching him had helped, and that realization made her feel more certain and powerful than any amount of chakra could. "I never got to apologize to you. Everything happened so fast-"

"It's okay," Nonō said quietly, leaning back in the grass. "I've accepted it, Naruto. Kabuto's life was his to spend; I can't begrudge him deciding to save you." She sighed. "I taught him everything I could about being both a man and a ninja, but there were some lessons he just couldn't learn. He always put others over himself, ever since he was a child. I'm proud of him, and I'm proud of you."

Naruto didn't seem to know what to say, but to Sakura's surprise, Sasuke did. "We all owe the Nation a debt," he said seriously. "Suigetsu, Kabuto, Karin…" He glanced at Sakura, and she was even more shocked to find herself nodding. "Haku. Without them, Cloud would have killed us. Even if Rain made a mistake in attacking Konoha, that doesn't void that debt. It's why we all came here."

"Not for revenge?" Nonō said. "That's why most of us are here, after all. I certainly am."

"There's a bit of that," Sasuke admitted. "I can't speak for us all; I think we all made the decision for our own reasons, even if some were shared. But things have gotten too complicated to be solved by just revenge. You lost your son; that makes it simpler for you, maybe." He took a sip of water, looking off into the darkness. Sakura wondered if his vision had gotten worse, and just how much he could see at night now. "But it's not for me. Suigetsu told me not to die, so that's all I have to worry about for now."

Nonō stayed with them for a while longer, quietly speaking with Naruto about his medical jutsu and his discovery of his Yang Release, before the conversation shifted again. Three people approached, breaking their circle: Konan, Fuu, and Jiraiya.

"Hey!" Fuu seemed drunk on the atmosphere, smiling so widely her cheeks were threatening to split. "You all did awesome!"

"You did too, Fuu," Sakura said, getting met with a brilliant grin. "I saw you fighting; you've gotten even faster."

"Ah, thanks! I've been training my butt off since I woke up!" she said, looking like she was about to settle in next to them before she remembered she wasn't alone. "Oh, sorry!" She stepped aside, letting Konan move past her with a small bow. "Lady Konan wanted to speak to you guys!"

Sakura took them all in, noticing Jiraiya's mild expression and Konan's focus. They'd proven themselves again, she thought. Maybe this really would work out.

"Sakura, Naruto, Sasuke," Konan said, and Sakura almost gasped when she gave them a small bow. "Congratulations on your work. You all performed superbly." She singled Sakura out in particular, her gaze intense but not intimidating. "I was told you finished off Dodai, Sakura?"

"Cloud's commander?" she asked. She barely remembered it; everything had gone so fast that somehow the man's death had left almost no impression on her. She couldn't even picture his face. "Yes. I had everyone's help though."

"It's still impressive," Konan said frankly. "He'd been stymying our efforts in Frost for weeks: one of the Raikage's direct subordinates. Even Deidara and I hadn't been able to finish him off on two occasions. You've killed one of Cloud's most valuable ninja."

Sakura didn't know how to feel about that, and was fundamentally uncomfortable with people being categorized by value, but recognized that this wasn't the time or place to have such doubts. She bowed her head, accepting the recognition. "I'm glad I could help," she said. "Even if I'm not a member of the Nation anymore-" she plucked at her hoodie, pinching one of the red clouds. "I'm still a ninja of the Akatsuki."

Konan gave her a lingering look, one that Sakura couldn't read. "It seems so," she eventually said, turning to the rest of them. "We'll be moving east tomorrow; Jiraiya's informed us that Kumo is preparing an attack from Hakoda, which likely means they'll be assaulting the Hidden Mist directly. We cannot allow them to be knocked out of the war, so we'll do everything we can to assist with their inevitable counterattack." She straightened up. "Fuu, you're free for the evening."

"Awesome! I'll hang out with these guys then!" she said, immediately plopping down next to Naruto. Sakura wondered for a second if she should be jealous, but then shook it off; Naruto was still watching her, a faint grin on his face, and for a second she got lost in his look.

"Sakura," Konan said, knocking her out of her trance. "I'd like to speak to you privately."

"Of course," she said, looking back at everyone to make sure they didn't have anything to say. Naruto gave her a thumbs up, Sasuke nodded, and Fuu was barely paying attention, chattering about how exciting the battle had been. She glanced at Jiraiya, and he shrugged; he wasn't privy to whatever Konan wanted to discuss.

Leaving her friends behind, Sakura followed Konan through the woods as the Amekage checked in with different groups of ninja, acting a silent retainer as Konan informed other groups of their plans, consoled the injured, and took stock of their supplies. Konan didn't say a word to her until about twenty minutes into the process, when they stopped between two groups; she had just chastised a young ninja (though still older than Sakura) for lighting a fire and potentially giving away their position, putting it out with a wave of her hands.

"Sakura," she said, taking a seat on a pile of stones and gesturing for Sakura to do the same. "I truly can't believe that you're here."

"Because of what Yahiko did?" she asked, and Konan mutely nodded. "I can understand that. But I already told you why I came."

"And I believe you," Konan said, leaning forward and cupping her chin in her palm. "I'll be frank with you; the war has gone well, but I have lost hope." She sighed, looking tired for the first time Sakura had ever seen. "The dream of the Akatsuki is in a shallow grave: Yahiko ensured that. He's being held prisoner back in Amegakure, but Nagato cannot be fully rid of him, and neither can I."

Sakura sat there, an uncomfortable feeling worming its way through her body. The shadows here seemed deeper, Konan's eyes devoid of light.

'She is just as lost as you.'

"What would you do," she asked, "if Naruto betrayed you?"

"He wouldn't," was Sakura's knee-jerk reaction, but Konan didn't stir at it. "But… that's not helpful, is it."

"No."

"Are you really asking me? Is there no one else?"

"You've proven yourself insightful," Konan said, and Sakura realized just how hopeless the Amekage's voice was. Here, alone, she had revealed herself to her, and sympathy for the woman bubbled up like a warm spring inside her. Konan had been the one to take her to Rain; Konan had been the one to recognize her potential. And now here she was alone and betrayed, leading a war host for a cause that she believed already doomed, fighting the most dangerous nation in the world to try and avenge one-hundred thousand deaths.

"I don't know what I'd do," she said, the question making her feel sicker the more she considered it. "But I had to…" She choked, and Konan gave her a worried look.

"Haku," Sakura grunted, her eyes burning. The lightness she'd felt at Naruto's side seemed like a distant, half-remembered dream. Konan's eyes widened in understanding, and her head fell.

"I'm sorry," she said, her fists clenching in her lap. "That's… horrific."

"Yeah." The darkness swallowed up the word, but Sakura struggled to push forward. "But I kept going. I'm here. If I… if that could happen… even if Yahiko stabbed you in the back, you can keep going too, Konan." She stood up, driven by her inner flame. "Cloud can't get away with this, and that's what you're here for. The Akatsuki isn't dead, and even if it was, it could be reborn. So long as people want an end to war, the Akatsuki can still exist."

'You would make it real.'

She took a deep breath of mountain air, so cold it hurt her lungs. "The Yondaime always told us that a shinobi is one who sacrifices. Jiraiya said it's one that endures. Naruto thinks it's someone who protects people. They're all right. You know that. I won't let the Hidden Leaf destroy the Nation of Rain; it's too important to the world. No matter what I have to sacrifice or endure to protect it, I won't stop, and neither should you."

Konan looked up at her, and while Sakura had hoped her words would inspire the Amekage, she was surprised to see Konan's sorrowful expression. "You shouldn't say that," she said, and Sakura rocked back. "You've already endured too much, Sakura."

"That makes me the best choice," Sakura argued, suddenly feeling the gap in age and experience between them. Konan stood up.

'She doesn't understand you.'

"What would you sacrifice for peace, Sakura?" she asked, not as a demand but as a plea. "Your parents? Your honor? Your friends? Your village?"

"If it would prevent another war, absolutely," Sakura shot back. "Something needs to be created to keep this from ever happening again; the world just can't keep having these wars. Haku said the very same thing, back when I first met him, that every shinobi war was getting more and more destructive. He even knew that Frost would be where the next war was fought!" She gestured around them, feeling her furnace stoke.

"Your own life?" Konan said, looking heartbroken, and Sakura gave her a determined nod.

"If I had to fall on my sword to prevent another war, I'd do it without hesitation. After everything I've seen, everything I've done, I can't picture it any other way," she said, and Konan sighed, wiping her hand across her face.

"What about Naruto?" she said quietly, and Sakura froze.

"What?"

"Would you sacrifice Naruto?" Konan said clearly. "If you had to make your ideals real, if that was the only way; if Naruto had to die."

She couldn't move forward; she had stopped as if inertia didn't exist.

"That's what it's like for me," Konan eventually said, when Sakura hadn't spoken for about ten seconds. "Yahiko was everything to me; I built the Akatsuki with him and Nagato. I thought we had built it for each other." She started moving again. "But now, if we want to move forward, I'll probably have to be rid of him. Think about that, Sakura, before you continue down this path."

She was mute.

"We'll welcome your help here in Frost. But I think you should go home when we're done, Sakura." Konan looked back with so much sympathy that it hurt. "You should go back to Konoha, and try to not ever sacrifice anything in your life ever again. Even if that means giving up on being a ninja, it would be better than the alternative."

She departed without another word, and Sakura was left confused and hurt and alone.

'She doesn't understand what needs to be done. She's not as strong as you. Has she even had to kill anyone important to her? She just couldn't endure what you could.'

It was true, Sakura thought. She couldn't say why, but Konan had disappointed her. She should have been stronger; she should have seen that getting rid of Yahiko and Naruto weren't the same thing at all. Naruto would never betray her like Yahiko had them, like Haku had, so there was no point in thinking about it. She was on the right path: she just had to keep moving forward until she had the ultimate weapon that could protect him.

Sakura silently slipped into the darkness of the night.

###

When Sakura had been gone for about ten minutes, Sasuke decided it was time to take a walk.

"Oh, that sounds awesome," Fuu decided, leaping to her feet with so much energy that it made him feel like an old man. "I love taking walks."

He looked down at Naruto, bemused at how out of it his friend was. "Coming?"

"Yeah, sure," Naruto said, pushing himself to his feet. "Jiraiya?"

"I've got some stuff to catch up on," Jiraiya said, which was so comically vague that Sasuke couldn't help but wonder if he was lying. "Go on ahead, I'll find you tomorrow."

They set off into the night with no particular destination in mind, enjoying the soft crunch of grass and stones under their feet and navigating a dry creek. The night was cool, the murmur of other Rain ninja everywhere, and Sasuke found that walking through the dark brought him a measure of peace.

"It was kinda fun to fight with you guys," Fuu said. "I didn't really get a chance in Waterfall, so it was really cool."

"Same," Naruto agreed. "Thanks for flying us in. That was awesome."

"We can fly more if you want," Fuu said with a mischievous grin. "No one here to tell me not to."

"We should keep to the ground for now," Sasuke noted. "There probably are Cloud ninja out and about. They won't take Kushiro's liberation lying down."

"Yeah, okay," Fuu said, sulking. "Chomei's been talking more to me, by the way."

"Really?" Sasuke asked, wondering if he was going through the motions or actually curious. He was exhausted; it had taken hours for both his arms to be freed from the rubber, and he'd barely been able to breathe the whole time. It wasn't the worst day he'd had, not by a long shot, but it had definitely been uncomfortable. "What about?"

"You guys," Fuu said, and Sasuke almost missed a step. "She thinks you're cool. I told her what happened with Ame and Konoha and everything and she says you're exceptional humans."

"Well, tell her thanks for us," Naruto said, filling in for Sasuke, who wasn't quite sure how to respond to being called an 'exceptional human.' It wasn't a familiar label.

"I will," Fuu promised, and they chattered about meaningless things for a while longer before Sasuke asked what had been lingering on his mind.

"Is Sakura okay, Naruto?" he said, and felt a spike of mean amusement when Naruto blushed. "You two kept looking at each other."

"She's okay," Naruto declared. "Something… bad almost happened after she killed Dodai, but it turned out alright."

"What do you mean?" Sasuke asked, Fuu looking back and forth between them like a curious child. Naruto sighed.

"There was a family, hiding in one of the houses. A Cloud ninja had taken them hostage, I think. But he panicked and ran for it. Sakura took him down, no problem, but…" He hesitated. "She almost went after them all too. I think she would have, if I hadn't been there. I had to grab her."

Sasuke came to a stop, looking back. Fuu looked a little perturbed as well. "She didn't realize they weren't ninja?"

"I guess," Naruto said, shuffling his feet. "I'm not sure how though. They weren't letting off any chakra, just hiding there. I realized what was going on right away, but she didn't seem to. It was like she was just moving automatically. But that seemed to snap her out of it. After that, she… seemed a lot better." The blush was back, and brighter than ever.

"Did something else happen?" Sasuke asked, feeling an impish urge to push, and Naruto's eyes went wide. He was basically a picture book, even without the Sharingan. What had happened with Sakura was concerning, but it hadn't happened, so Sasuke did his best to put it out of mind and focus on what was in front of him for now.

"N-no," Naruto muttered, averting his eyes.

"Huh?" Fuu said innocently. "That makes it sound like something totally happened, though."

"A little," Sasuke said with a mean grin. "You sure, Naruto?"

"I mean…" Naruto said, a little grin of his own slipping out. "Maybe… we might have… kissed… a little."

"Whoa!" Fuu exclaimed. Sasuke couldn't help but let a chuckle slip. "You guys kissed?! Who started it?"

"She did!" Naruto admitted, looking equally embarrassed and relieved, like he couldn't have believed it until he told someone. "I was surprised, but it was nice! I wanna do it again!"

"You should probably tell her that, not us," Sasuke said wryly, and Naruto stuck out his tongue at him.

"Shut up. You don't think it's weird, though?" he asked, and Sasuke shrugged.

"You said that you loved her, right? All the way back before Waves," he said, and Naruto nodded hesitantly. Fuu's eyes were as wide as dinner plates. "So if she kissed you, maybe she feels the same way. That's good, right?"

"I guess. Yes? I don't know." Naruto sat down. "It's confusing. I'm worried that it'll mess things up, so I haven't talked to her about it."

"Naruto, you guys love each other? That's so cool!" Fuu said, once again bringing a grin to Sasuke's face. "I knew she liked you, it was obvious, but you must have brought her out of her funk!"

"It was obvious? Wait, her funk?" Naruto asked, and Fuu nodded enthusiastically.

"You know what I'm talking about. She was all moody and quiet when you showed up yesterday. But you said she was better afterwards; I bet you pulled her out of it." She clapped her hands on Naruto's shoulders, staring earnestly at him. "You should stick by her; she needs your help. Did she tell you anything like that?"

"Something like that, yeah," Naruto said quietly, and Fuu kept nodding so vigorously that Sasuke thought her head might wobble off.

"It's not that she's weak or anything, it's just that what you all are going through is hard," she said brightly. "But I've heard that love is, like, all you need for that! I mean, I've never loved anyone, I think, but that's how it goes in all the stories. You should go find her! I bet she's bummed out with just Konan for company; she probably misses you!"

Naruto looked shocked at the concept, and glanced over at Sasuke, who sighed. "She's right," he said. "You don't have to tell her everything, not right now. But Sakura needs you, more than she does anyone else. If you love her, you should be there for her."

"Umm." Naruto blinked, and came to his decision as visibly as a light switch flipping on. "Okay! I'll see you both later!"

He ran off leaving them in the dark, and Sasuke laughed. Fuu looked over at him mischievously.

"Has it been a while?" she said, and Sasuke shook his head, glad to find a grin that wasn't fading like a fuelless fire.

"It's been a while," he confirmed, and Fuu laughed.

"That's so cool," she said, looking off towards where Naruto had run. "It really seemed to make him happy. Do you wanna kiss?"

Sasuke blinked, remembering the kind of life Fuu had lived, and smiled. "No, thanks. I've got a girlfriend." He wondered how Hinata was doing. She'd been recovering well when he'd left, but he'd gotten the sense she was disappointed not to be going with him. He couldn't blame her. It might have been terrifying, but the feeling of side by side with her during the invasion had been like nothing else in his life. If she'd been here, maybe he wouldn't have been surprised by Dodai.

"Ah, makes sense," Fuu said, not sounding disappointed. She pondered for a second, looking down. "Should I get a boyfriend?"

"If you think it would make you happy," Sasuke said with a shrug. "But considering how things have gone, I wouldn't worry about that right now. You should probably make more friends before you decide whether you like any of them that way."

"You give really good advice, Sasuke," Fuu said thoughtfully. "I dunno. I never thought about it until just now, to be honest. I guess I'll think more about it, even if it's kinda gross-"

She paused, suddenly cocking her head. Sasuke did the same, following her instinct. The woods were quiet but for distant murmurs and the occasional scuttle of wildlife, a soft breeze ruffling the trees.

But he suddenly felt the same way Fuu did. Even if there was no sign, no sound, not even any feeling of chakra, they both felt like they were being watched. They silently shifted, putting themselves back to back and rotating, scanning the forest.

"Please don't shout." The voice came from directly above them, a conversational whisper that only they could hear drifting down from a tree branch. "It would be pretty problematic."

Sasuke and Fuu slowly looked up, and found Itachi Uchiha staring down at them.

Sasuke reached up and grabbed Fuu's shoulder; the girl had frozen solid, whether from fear or hatred he couldn't immediately tell. "Wait," he whispered, and thankfully she nodded. If Itachi was there to hurt him, Sasuke knew he was fast enough to do it before they could raise the alarm.

But Sasuke didn't think that was why he was there. He hadn't seen the summoned crow all day; it must have led his brother to him.

"Itachi," he said, keeping his voice a whisper. "You should leave."

"Yeah, sorry. I was trying to wait until you were alone, but I got impatient," Itachi said, perched in the tree like a giant black bird. "Fuu, do you mind if I speak with my brother alone?"

"Uh, no?" Fuu said, matching their volume. "That's definitely not happening."

Itachi sighed. "Fine. Well, let me start off by apologizing to you. I'm very sorry for the kidnapping and brainwashing. And the murders."

"Thanks, I guess?" Fuu clearly had no idea what to do, and Sasuke barely did either. "But I still hate you."

"Understandable," Itachi noted. "Anyway, Sasuke, congratulations on getting a girlfriend, that's great."

"You didn't come here to say that," Sasuke said flatly, and Itachi smiled.

"True. I'm just here to let you know you can call it off. What I told you last time, I mean."

Ah, so Itachi was still insane then. Sasuke didn't know why he was disappointed. It belatedly occurred to him that if his brother was here, Madara's Will was as well. In the darkness, it was impossible to see Itachi's shadow; Black Zetsu was probably lingering on both him and Fuu, ready to trip or strangle them if things went the wrong way. They weren't the only participants in the conversation.

But maybe he could turn that to his advantage; Sasuke decided to go for the decisive blow. "Itachi, I learned more about that. I think I can help you."

Itachi raised an eyebrow. "Really? What do you mean exactly?"

"What you described, what's happened in the past, I talked to someone that helped it all make sense," Sasuke said, trying not to let his voice falter. Would Black Zetsu attack if it was revealed? Could they fight a living shadow? Madara had said only the Rinnegan could destroy it, and the Rinnegan was far away. It didn't matter: Itachi had to know the truth. "Madara Uchiha."

"You spoke with Madara?" Itachi said, genuinely surprised. "How?"

"He had been brought back by the Edo Tensei technique," Sasuke said, not surprised to see that Itachi clearly knew of it. "By Orochimaru, in the Nation of Rain. He told mother and Obito and I about his plans, about what he'd done after the first Hokage defeated him. He wasn't killed; he lingered for decades, trying to make things go his way. And before he died, his shadow came alive and left him. He said it was his Will; it acted on its own, trying to guide people to undertake his plans for him." His hands curled into fists. "Itachi, the way he talked… we're certain that his Will went to you. That it helped you kill Father and Shisui and the rest. You're not crazy; you have some of Madara's chakra attached to you."

Itachi didn't speak for nearly a minute, and Sasuke and Fuu waited with bated breath for him to act.

"That doesn't make sense," Itachi finally said. "I would have noticed something like that."

"It does. Your shadow's helped you before, even," Sasuke said, a bit of desperation leaking into his voice. "Remember? It tripped Obito that night. It held me down in the Forest of Death, and when you kidnapped Fuu. You don't know any Nara jutsu, do you? Did you even notice that had happened, back then? We think it must be able to alter your perception, at least a little. You weren't aware for a whole year, weren't you?"

Itachi was silent once more, staring down at them with a Sharingan that seemed painted on.

"You said your eyes recovered during that year," Sasuke said, just now realizing the connection. "If anyone would know how to cause that, it would be Madara Uchiha. His shadow knew everything he did; he called it Black Zetsu."

Itachi started to speak, and then stopped. Fuu was fidgeting, obviously fighting the urge to fight or flee; it was anathema to any ninja to just stand there with a potential enemy right above them.

"If that is what happened," Itachi eventually decided, "then Black Zetsu is gone. I came here to tell you I'm cured, Sasuke." He leaned back on the tree, shifting into a more relaxed position. "I couldn't tell until it happened, but my head is clear. My mind is my own. It's like a curtain got pulled back; everything is much clearer than it's ever been."

That, Sasuke decided, was exactly what someone who had been possessed by Black Zetsu would say. The thought came like a bolt of lightning: that was why Itachi had come here. The shadow had realized Sasuke was onto it, and had directed Itachi to try and dissuade him. Maybe Black Zetsu was still connected to Madara in some way, and had understood that someone had caught onto it somehow. Sasuke couldn't claim to understand how living shadows perceived the world, or what they could or could not be capable of.

But right now, what mattered is that he wasn't talking to Itachi; he was talking to Black Zetsu, and he had no idea how to rip him off Itachi's soul.

"That's great," he said. "But you can understand if I don't believe you right away."

"I'd be disappointed if you did," Itachi said with a small laugh that perfectly mimicked his true laugh. "But I know I put a burden on you, and I didn't want you carrying it without cause. Maybe Madara's Will understood I had noticed it, and so fled. Shadows abhor the light, right? We'll have to track it down once this is over; it sounds dangerous."

"Makes perfect sense," Sasuke said. "So, is that it?"

"I'm here to help with the war," Itachi said, and Sasuke grunted. "You can tell Konan that, though obviously I'm going to stay out of her way. Our last conversation made it clear she doesn't enjoy my company."

"I thought you hated war, Itachi," Sasuke said, and Itachi shrugged.

"I do. But there are good wars and bad wars, and defending Frost from Cloud's insanity is a good war, as far as I see it. Maybe we'll see each other around."

That was rich coming from him, but Sasuke let it go without comment. "Stay safe, then," he said instead. "Thanks for letting me know."

"Anytime. Love you, Sasuke," Itachi said, and then he was gone like smoke in the wind.

Fuu finally let out the breath she'd been holding. "What the fuck?" she muttered, the 'fuck' much louder than the rest of her words, and Sasuke started nervously giggling.

"Sorry. He's insane," he said, wondering why he felt the need to apologize on Itachi's behalf. "But believe it or not, this is good. He's strong; Cloud's in even more trouble."

And more than that, Sasuke thought, they were making progress now. They could free Itachi from Madara's Will. Even if he couldn't picture how they would pin down a shadow, there had to be a way. If Itachi thought Black Zetsu was gone, they would have an opportunity.

So long as they played it perfectly, he could still save his brother.

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AN: I got put in a good mood, so I'm updating early, lol. Hope you enjoyed it.
 
I think the real tragedy with Itachi-Sasuke in this story is that Sasuke desperately wants the horrible choices Itachi makes to be someone other than his brother's fault.

For Itachi to have been forced, for Itachi to not be Itachi anymore but as spelled out in the Hidden Waterfall encounter Itachi wasn't forced, he saw a situation with the clan developing that he personally despised and decided lethal action towards the Uchiha was not just required but good and right.

But the universe and Sasuke's family keep giving Sasuke reasons to doubt that truth: Mikoto told him Itachi was dead-not to think of him as the brother they knew only for Itachi's Waterfall spiel to puncture that, the collateral damage Rain suffered as a result of Itachi's antics half way convinced Sasuke that Itachi was unsolvable crazy only Itachi breaking down confessing the Black Zetsu influence was reaching actually scaring him levels got Sasuke concerned for his brother again.

Madara revealing Black Zetsu's existence to the Uchiha Clan is a good thing in universe for the knowledge that a threat exists but honestly it might have been the worst thing possible for Sasuke to hear. Because it gives Sasuke the perfect excuse: Itachi is being controlled he thinks, Itachi has a madman's chakra ghost-monster feeding him crazy thoughts and ideas-taking over his body if they can destroy it Itachi the brother he loved once will come back.

Sadly for Sasuke hopes and Itachi's future its looking more like save at the very end where the mask came off that sure Black Zetsu influenced and goaded Itachi on, it put ideas into his head and had him kill Shisui when Itachi normally would have left him alive but Itachi was still a moral actor who could make choices. Sakura's whole thing this chapter where she doesn't 100% act in accordance with Black Zetsu's prodding is pretty important on that front.

Sasuke thinks he's found the panacea, the magic bullet that will solve the problem of Itachi. And this chapter's kind of shows the hollowness of that while setting up Sasuke for mistakes. Black Zetsu has moved on but Itachi is still several massive shades of fucked up in the head, he's still described as having eyes painted on, he's eerily casual about the harm he's done and notably isn't saying that the 'gather the Bjuu and force peace at Nuclear gunpoint" plan should be called off. If anything he's more certain about the plan than before because when the Black Zetsu hold was getting increasingly blantant he started thinking Sasuke might have to stop him, but now? Now he feels fine, Sasuke doesn't have worry about stopping him.

And Sasuke is just ...... locking himself into thinking that nothing Itachi says is really coming from Itachi because clearly this is just Black Zetsu speaking through a puppet. I suspect we are eventually going to get a truly ugly confrontation where Sasuke tries to exorcise Itachi and Shit hits the fan as it sinks in that Itachi isn't infected by Black Zetsu anymore, that Itachi is making his own choices and he's choosing to do this.
 
Jiraiya's informed us that Kumo is preparing an attack from Hakoda, which likely means they'll be assaulting the Hidden Mist directly. We cannot allow them to be knocked out of the war, so we'll do everything we can to assist with their inevitable counterattack.
Oh boy, my favorite Jinchuuriki could appear soon, how exciting! Unless something happened to his Tailed Beast that I forgot, but with how different Mist's recent history is, I don't think that happened.

'She doesn't understand what needs to be done. She's not as strong as you. Has she even had to kill anyone important to her? She just couldn't endure what you could.'
It's weird how Black Zetsu is simultaneously extremely on-point and completely wrong here. Konan isn't quite as calculating as she is in canon, but she's also not naive in the slightest, and she's definitely had to deal with betrayal and similar hardship in the past. Her problem is that it's Yahiko, and not anyone else. Since he lived so much longer than in canon, their romance has actually developed. It's messed up to say, but I think she would have an easier time cutting Nagato out of the troika, if it came to that.

The iconic Uchiha line, practically their clan motto *chef's kiss* the perfect homage.

That, Sasuke decided, was exactly what someone who had been possessed by Black Zetsu would say.
Oh the irony. The dripping, seething irony. I wonder if the Mangekyo can pick up on Black Zetsu if only the Rinnegan can destroy it, or if that might be the realm of the Byakugan, which is why we're only hearing it more frequently in Sakura's head now that she's away from Konoha.

Cloud's in even more trouble.
It's a shame Itachi gave up Shisui's eye, but part of why he did that was probably so that he couldn't use it on Gyuki to use the cannon to nuke Kumo. I'm kind of surprised he showed up to offer his services to Konan instead of simply infiltrating Kumo, but maybe traveling like that is harder for him now that he's lost Black Zetsu. Itachi is still clearly extremely mentally fragile, much worse off than he was in canon (not that his judgment was much better there) but Sasuke should have been tipped off to his brother coming around by the fact that he didn't mention eyes once. Sasuke's interactions with Madara definitely changed his perspective and expectations when it came to Itachi though.
 
"Sorry. He's insane," he said, wondering why he felt the need to apologize on Itachi's behalf. "But believe it or not, this is
Sasuke, when the super-powerful insane ninja possessed by an evil shadow announces that he is going to fight by your side, that is not 'good' it is 'worrying'.

Of course maybe there is no Black Zetsu with him now. When the super-powerful insane ninja no-longer possessed by an evil shadow wants to fight on your side that's just Tuesday.
 
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It's impressive, really, that we are once again reminded, decades down the line and in an entirely different series of its simplicity and its power.

Bungee Gum has the properties of both rubber and Gum
 
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