Obito-Sensei (A Sakura-Centric Naruto AU)

Honestly this was a really amazing chapter, well worth the wait @Ser_Serendipity , you definitely brought your A game here with so many different perspectives and plotlines weaving together into a tapestry of tragedy.

I loved all the little touches and twists, Kushina being back in the sealing facility from the Minato prequel manga, Sakura's father being out on a comparatively normal mission and coming back to all this and just not being in the right frame of mind of offer Sakura the comfort she really could use. Naruto's horror at the idea his Yang release boosted healing has been shaving away the lifespan's of the people he heals. Obito being on the verge of a great revelation about the system he's stuck in but that insight only making things worse. Sakura with exactly no fucks left to give.

Minato and Kushina, Naruto and Tsunade, Obito and RIn. Team 7 and their sensei, Gaara and Sakura. So many amazing interactions and fascinating things to do with the characters.

People have already talked about it but yeah I do love what was done with these two deeply broken teenage weapons. Gaara - Sand being on the Leaf's side was a twisted touch, worked wonderfully thanks to that sense of denied validation as seen in Naruto just hating him, but war has no time for morals. On the personal level Gaara's confession to Sakura and her response were fascinating because of what it said about the characters.

Gaara is alone except for the demon feeding him power. He's been denied love to the point he has no understanding of what it's even supposed to feel like, there's no one but himself he would fight to protect. The only way he can frame a meaningful connection to another person is in the pain they inflict upon each other and as a obsession that consumes a person's whole world.

Gaara says he loves Sakura, because he hurt her and she hurt him and clearly she should want more of that. They should kill and hurt each other until every line between them is erased. It's pitiful and sad because on some level this really is a abused lonely kid clinging to the first connection he's had since he's uncle died. But it is also genuinely monstrous, the only way he can contextualize a person as mattering is via inflicting and receiving suffering and he on some level wants that. He'd murder every person Sakura cares about and throw their bodies in Sakura's face to make her hate and hurt him more, It has a very the Joker and Batman kind of energy.

Sakura is alone except for the demon feeding her power. As Naruto diagnoses she's stuck unable to move on from her place of trauma and emotional numbness with only grim resolve and a belief in the power of violence, she can't-won't let anyone past her defenses, all she has suffered and had to do has just plain burned away any ability to stop.

Sakura looks at this person who has done great evil and who was clearly a victim once and who is clearly insane now and then calmly cruelly takes the metaphorical safety blanket away from Gaara. His obession and desire to hurt her and be hurt by her is meaningless to Sakura. She'd gut him in a heartbeat but she doesn't get anything from his existence, her hate of him doesn't drive her and the pain he can give her isn't something she wants. She tells him the bleakest possible truth, he's nothing but a weapon and an unstable one that no one will mourn or want to remember. She has a bigger fish to fry.

I commented earlier in the story that Gaara might get exactly what he thinks he wants in a showdown with a rejecting her humanity Sakura who really buys what he's selling and that he might not like it. This is infinitely worse for Gaara, hardened murder mode Sakura hunting Gaara down and tearing things up in a bloody battle would validate Gaara on some level. This by contrast takes a jackhammer to every single insecurity Gaara has and leaves him with nothing but Sakura telling him to fuck off and die in a moment of pure savagery.

I'm pretty sure there are going to be consequences for this, Gaara having all the illusions and justifications stripped away, having it hit home that his feelings do not matter and that's it simply to late to change, seems like its going to set him up to go totally off the deep end during the Rain attack. Whether he decides to embrace being the Monster via deliberately gunning for civilians in one last explosion of spite or whether he outright lets someone kill him because what has he got to live for now, I think Gaara's response to this is going to play a part in events going tits up.

I never thought I would read a story where Sakura telling Gaara she doesn't return his feelings would fill me with such dark awe and sell me on her being in a truly scary place but here we are.
 
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She pulled out a small vial of yellow liquid with a sealed plastic cap and handed it to Sasuke, and he took it with the reverence of a small child receiving a birthday present. "A poison?" he asked, as Naruto and Obito craned to look at the vial.

"A topical neurotoxin," Shizune confirmed, and Naruto whistled. "My hobby," she continued with a shy grin. "This is one of my deadlier ones. Please don't get any on your skin, and only use it if the circumstances justify it. It's very painful."
If there is ever a need to make Sakura's water cutter even deadlier... I'm surprised no one suggested this to her so far.
 
Gaara's love confession was the most unexpected part of this chapter.
Hit me like a rock at first but in hindsight totally should have seen this coming. Makes full sense with Gaara's damaged worldview. I can only imagine what repercussions this will have down the line.
Sakura's Talk-no-Jutsu may be as powerful as Naruto's in the original timeline, but I think she got the polarity reversed.

I honestly wouldn't be entirely surprised if Gaara killed himself, if that was even possible. He might do a 'suicide by ninja' in the assault on Rain.
Man I wasn't expecting the Gaara love confession, but hey at least Gaara and Sakura are having an explosive downwards spiral together as another straw is added to the metaphorical backs of their straining sanity.
Gaara is so very strange, but that confession was sorta the endpoint of what he and Sakura have endured since the beginning, so it's always felt right to me. Sakura's brushed it off, but it's going to have dramatic implications for him going forward; more on that later.
When I first got to this part I winced. I know this was all meant with good intentions but given where Sakura is at right now I feel like a young girl talking about how she inspired her to become a Ninja would inflict yet another blow to Sakura's tattered sanity.
Well spotted. I originally gave that scene more focus, but I liked it better as a sort of background event; not being from Sakura's POV makes it seem more mundane than it is, and lends well to that sense of disassociation she's suffering.
Well I see no way sending a traumatised woman who may be drawing upon an god of evil/ a Millenia old embodiment of a alien gods will for power and believes the path to peace is through overwhelming force to a war zone could end poorly!
I bet it'll mellow her out!
Hate how everyone seemingly recognizes, on some level, that they're not acting completely rationally towards Rain thanks to the grief and betrayal following the sneak attack, but are also expecting Nagato and Konan to be totally fine and normal about Konoha offing their boyfriend.
It's such a messy confluence of personal ideologies and friendships and national strategic considerations that I can't personally fault them for it. Yahiko was the one to start this; in a just world, it would end with him.

Kushina being back in the sealing facility from the Minato prequel manga
Nicely spotted on this in particular. There's a lot of ideas from the one-shot that I wish I could have stolen, but that's the danger of writing for a multimedia juggernaut I guess. The spiral building and its implications for sealing was just too cool not to incorporate, and it lets Kushina be alive and aware without being able to be active; important for this part of the story.
Sakura is alone except for the demon feeding her power. As Naruto diagnoses she's stuck unable to move on from her place of trauma and emotional numbness with only grim resolve and a belief in the power of violence, she can't-won't let anyone past her defenses, all she has suffered and had to do has just plain burned away any ability to stop.
She's got little enough left now that its plain to her she has to keep moving forward; doing anything else has just resulted in people getting killed.
 
Chapter 79: Ouroboros
Meets Their Match
On the 27th of April, Konoha went to war.

Seven-hundred and thirty ninja departed the village on a mission of revenge, leaving with the sky still dark. They marched west, a rapid movement towards the Nation of Rain that would see them arrive at around noon with the sun high in the sky, though it would be concealed behind light rain. The mass movement of shinobi was a frightening thing, almost like a plague of locusts; hundreds of men and women spread out in a spearhead several kilometers long, leaping through the trees and then creeping amidst the slush-filled swamps and plateaus that defined the border between the Nation of Rain and the Land of Fire.

They moved quickly and quietly; just as Rain had sent over a thousand shinobi to assault Konoha with none the wiser, so too did the ninja of Leaf and Sand traverse the countryside out of sight of anyone but the animals. This was the particularly deadly thing about shinobi wars: the speed and stealth of competent ninja made the mass movement of forces efficient, and in a case like this where the assault was meant to be undertaken with surgical precision and not devolve into a siege supply lines were immaterial; each ninja carried enough personal supplies for two days, and nothing more.

However, being at full war footing, the borders of the Nation of Rain were lightly defended. The Leaf assault force came into contact with a half dozen roaming scout patrols, groups of two ninja who were watching the hundreds kilometer long border from concealed positions. Two of the scout patrols were destroyed without a chance of response, one was captured, but the other three managed to flee and spread word of the invasion. The unparalleled mobility of shinobi made this eventuality a well-understood fact of ninja warfare: in fact, Konoha's scout patrols being so comprehensively eluded or destroyed had been the mark of how highly unusual and coordinated Rain's initial assault against the village had been.

Minato Namikaze and Rasa of the Desert had supposed that Rain would send harrying forces after the invasion as it closed in on Amegakure in the final hours of the march, but in a surprise that one took as unsettling and the other as pleasant, no such forces materialized. They theorized that having already committed ninja to Frost and suffered grievous casualties in their attack on Konoha, Rain had decided to centralize their defenses around Amegakure; this theory was close enough to the truth to be accurate for the assault's purposes, with the caveat that Amegakure itself was also home to only two-thousand and some ninja at the moment. The rest of Rain's shinobi had spread out across the country so as to prevent a decapitating strike, though they had been assigned with care, kept out of the way of any likely marching path from the Land of Firee.

The sum of all this came to the situation that both sides of the conflict found themselves faced with when the Leaf/Sand invasion force reached Amegakure at around 11:20 AM, with most of its ninja requiring a brief rest before the battle after their forced march. The capital of the Nation of Rain was alert and expecting an assault. Its defenders did not have a severe numerical advantage as would be ideal, merely three to one, but were confident in the quality of their ninja, and especially their Amekage, to carry the day and rebuke Konoha.

The invasion force, on the other hand, was not concerned that their enemy knew they were coming. In fact, that was necessary for the assassination squad, as Jiraiya and Minato both were confident that Yahiko, the First Vanguard, would place himself at the forefront of any defense, and thus make himself vulnerable. His death was the main priority of the invasion; the destruction of Rain's infrastructure and the killing of its shinobi was considered a secondary objective, a backup in case the impossible happened and Minato Namikaze wasn't able to kill him.

The battle of Amegakure began at 11:40, and as was usual for shinobi, everything was over quickly. By noon, the future course of the war was decided.

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Sasuke had never been a part of a mass assault before, and he found seeing how everyone else prepared themselves for it interesting. Some prayed, some spoke to one another like nothing was about to happen, and others went through katas and stretched, steadying their bodies.

Rin was one of the second. As they lurked in the treeline beyond Kakō Lake, she leaned back against a tree and did her best to hold a conversation with him.

"You're used to getting teleported, right?" she asked, and he nodded as he checked over his vest, his pouches, his knives, his shuriken, and circulated chakra throughout his system for the fifth time, making sure that everything was ready, that he was ready. "With Obito, that's no surprise. You should see how depressed he gets when he realizes he actually has to walk to the store, it's hilarious. He said he hasn't seen any of you much?"

"We've been busy," Sasuke said, scanning the treeline. The first assault squads were about to be dispatched. He understood the principle of an attack against a larger fortified position like Amegakure in practice, and Konoha's tactics were pragmatic above everything else. Squads of three to six ninja were spread at intervals of about one-hundred feet, far enough apart that a single jutsu wouldn't be able to wipe out two squads with a lucky hit. In addition, since the assault would be made across the lake, shrapnel and fragmentation was less of a concern, though obviously once they were in the city it would become more dangerous than ever. They would charge, intending to penetrate the city proper as quickly as possible, and engage the defenders in close combat, spreading chaos while the assassination squad went to work.

If the Amekage had a bit of sense, the civilian population would have been evacuated to the bunkers that festooned the city, and the streets and buildings filled with traps, explosives, and ninja hiding in the dense urban jungle. The lake itself was a danger in that sense as well; underwater mines, shinobi lying in wait with water-breathing techniques, and other dangers were just some of what the assault squads had been briefed on, and Sasuke could imagine plenty more.

Sasuke had a flare gun at his hip, and he knew that across the rim of the lake other ninja were carrying them as well, but it was only a backup for communication. The signal that would kick everything off was more subtle.

'Alright everyone.' A pleasant female voice echoed through Sasuke's head, the voice of Fukuro Yamanka, the leading Intelligence Division ninja in the invasion. She was situated about a mile behind him guarded by several of her clansmen wielding the Yondaime's kunai and hooked up to a mysterious device the Yamanaka clan had dragged along on the march. Yamanaka techniques were none of Sasuke's business, and he barely knew more than he'd learned in a conversation with Ino long ago, but he knew enough to suppose the device made it possible for Fukuro and other ninja to connect to people telepathically across long distances, the same way Ino's father Inoichi had been capable of without apparent help. 'Good luck. Begin the assault.'

Telepathic coordination was one of the secrets to Konoha's greater successes, and Sasuke could see the fruits of it almost immediately. Across the rim of the lake, ninja began moving; Amegakure was suddenly at the confluence of several hundred shinobi rushing towards it from every direction.

"Yeah, that guy doesn't know how to do anything but train," Rin said with a laugh, paying the battle little mind. "He feels left out with all you racing ahead, you know. You should make it up to him after this." She pushed herself off the tree and turned, raising her voice. "Sensei, you ready?"

The other members of the assassination team were all there, including both the Hokage and Kazekage. So was Gaara of the Desert, whom the Kazekage was quietly speaking with. Sasuke had heard that something had happened between Gaara and Sakura, but neither had been hurt so he hadn't cared to find out more; what was more interesting to him was that right now Gaara had both arms, the missing one replaced by a construct of sand that his chakra had bound to the stump.

Minato nodded at Rin with a thumbs-up, and a second later Sasuke saw flashes of light and heat in his peripheral vision. He turned his head slightly and saw Amegakure light up; long-range jutsu were being flung from its spiraling rooftops, and parts of the lake began to boil and explode from unknown sources. He saw two ninja in the distance flung away from a sudden burst of steam, one moving, the other limp.

"Go now," Rasa said in the commanding tone of an owner talking to its disobedient pet, and Gaara took off in a flash, sand pouring out around him and carrying him forward in a wave of dust. He burst across the lake, blowing aside a wake of water before him, and reached Amegakure in the blink of an eye. He was fast; even faster than he'd been in Waves.

If he survived this battle, Sasuke didn't know what he would do.

'Jinchuriki is in. Heaviest resistance on south-east side of the city,' Fukuro's voice echoed, slightly strained.

"Hizashi," Minato said as the assassination squad drew closer to one another, gathering in the small clearing between the trees. "You've located him?"

"I have, Lord Hokage," Hinata's uncle said, his face screwed up in concentration. He had been scanning the city with his Byakugan all the while; Sasuke had learned from Hinata that while his range wasn't as impressive as her own, both Neji and his father Hizashi had an incredible skill for perceiving detail with their Bloodline, which is probably why her uncle had been selected instead of another clan member, or her father.

Or perhaps it was because he was a Branch Clan member. Because he was disposable. Hinata had said that, so quietly but so certainly, and remembering it now, Sasuke's hands curled into fists.

"Unfortunately, it's as you feared," Hizashi continued, and Minato nodded, not looking surprised. "The Amekage are side by side. It looks like they're waiting."

"They're expecting us," Jiraiya grunted. Both he and the Hokage were in Sage Mode, and had been quiet and still up until this moment as they gathered the chakra necessary for it. "Let's not disappoint them."

Minato smiled, looking out towards the city and seemingly gauging the distance. A kunai slipped into his hand, and he weighed it, tossing it in the air once and breathing out. He drew another, and threw it into the ground where it stuck fast. "We'll try to deal with this as quickly as possible," he said, not for the first time. "Muta, Suzaku, pin down any interference. Sasuke, you deal with the Nibi if it shows up." He looked over at the Kazekage. "Rasa?"

"Ready," the Kazekage said, all of his gold dust suddenly clinging tightly to his body as armor. "At your discretion, Yondaime."

"Alright. Gather up. Hizashi, guide me," the Hokage said. He stepped forward and took the Hyuuga's hand like he was greeting an old friend and then looked back to the city, his placid face hardening with concentration.

Sasuke breathed out, readying himself. He and all the others gathered around the kunai stuck in the ground, and he raised one hand, confident he'd be able to react first with his Sharingan but taking no chances. His eyes activated, the pleasant burning of the Sharingan spreading out throughout his head and radiating down to his toes.

The Hokage flung his kunai, waited for a moment, and then both he and Hizashi vanished.

Sasuke gave it two heartbeats, and then began to slowly reach out. On the third beat, the Hokage reappeared in the middle of the group.

All of the ninja lashed out, taking hold of some part of the Hokage's body, grabbing his shoulders and arms or pressing their hands to his back. Then, there was a tear; the Hokage's chakra grabbed hold of theirs, and they were flung an infinite distance to a finite destination in an instant, emerging on the other side with so little transition that even Sasuke's Sharingan couldn't predict the movement.

The Hokage had flung the same knife twice; once into the air, and then again deeply into the city at Hizashi's direction. The assassination squad appeared on a rooftop next to a huge air conditioning unit which filled the air with a loud buzz, the rain pattering down around them drowned out by it.

Not next to, Sasuke realized. Behind. His every instinct was screaming at him that on the other side of the air conditioner, something terrible was waiting.

"Scatter." The Hokage didn't say it loudly, but the command was irresistible nonetheless.

The shinobi all jumped in different directions. For all but one, they were fast enough.

Sasuke watched as a distortion in space tore through the space he'd occupied just a moment before, a gravitational tear that his Sharingan could only see the outline of which pushed through the AC unit and crumpled it like paper. There was no moment of resistance; the metal just broke apart and was flung forward as an irresistible force rolled it over. The impossible gravity caught Suzaku Nara by the foot and carried her off; she had been just a heartbeat slower than everyone else.

Suzaku broke the speed of sound instantly and crashed through a solid concrete wall a block away. Sasuke didn't see her again after that.

He turned in midair back towards the source of the blast, and took in the situation in an instant.

Eight shinobi, four wearing the garb of the Akatsuki, were spread across three nearby rooftops and already leaping into action. Sasuke's brain started analyzing, but it was an unconscious process that he contributed very little actual thought to. Both the Amekage were there, Yahiko and Nagato. Nagato was the one who had produced the gravitational blast, a lesser mirror of the technique he'd used to divert Cloud's Tailed Beast Cannon. With one exception, Sasuke did not know the other ninja, but they had obviously been selected as the Amekage's bodyguards which spoke to their strength. There was a mix of men and women, including a boy with a shock of spiky orange hair who was Sasuke's age.

The ninja he did know was the most shocking. Orochimaru of the Sannin leered at the assassination squad, his hands already going through the motions for a Wind jutsu. That the Sannin was still in Rain after Sasuke's warning was a surprise; that he was a part of the Amekage's defense team beggared belief. Had Yahiko seriously put a known traitor at his back? Or-

"Welcome, Hokage!" Yahiko called out. Orochimaru unleashed his Wind jutsu, tearing the roof to pieces as the assassination squad scattered. Yahiko too was in Sage Mode, his face marked with its golden colors and his pupils distended. Sasuke narrowed his eyes, taking in the full odds arrayed against them. "I hope-!"

In the blink of an eye, Minato was at Yahiko's side; he'd thrown his kunai so fast that Sasuke hadn't been able to keep up with what his Sharingan had already seen. The Hokage spun, a blade in hand set to pierce the Amekage's eye.

In the time it took Sasuke to land on a nearby wall and blink, Nagato had intercepted the attack, an iron arm shooting out of his shoulder and knocking the blade off mark. It scored across Yahiko's cheek, sparks flying as it chipped against the man's iron-hard skin, and the Amekage's expression shifted from spiteful to shocked in an instant.

"Kill them all." Once again, Minato's voice carried across the battlefield with irresistible import, and Sasuke's body started moving before his mind did.

He leapt at the nearest shinobi, a woman with short brown hair and a long scarf covered in jutsu formula; he could see the chakra imbued in it begin to respond to her command as she moved as well, about to throw up some kind of barrier jutsu that he would smash into.

But the distance between them was too short; the other ninja must have thought one-hundred feet would be enough, but Sasuke covered it in slightly less than a tenth of a second, shattering the sound barrier and leading with a flaming fist. The woman had enough time to look surprised before he punched her in the chest, shattering her solar plexus and sending her catapulting backwards as blue fire raced across her body. She slammed into a wall and fell into one of the alleys below, and all around Sasuke the world exploded into pandemonium.

Ninja fell on each other with abandon, trying to tear each other apart with jutsu and break their enemy's bodies with their own. The orange-haired boy slammed into Rin and carried her out of Sasuke's sight; Muta Aburame struck one of the Akatsuki members in the side and a huge beetle burst out of their throat a moment later; Hizashi was mobbed by two shinobi at once, brought one of them down with a strike to the throat, and was stabbed twice and struck with a Lightning jutsu that burned a hole in his arm in return; the Kazekage sent a spear of gold chasing after Yahiko, who retaliated with a fire jutsu that bounced off Rasa's golden armor as they both raced across the rooftops; one of the men in an Akatsuki cloak grappled with Jiraiya, using a jutsu that grew earthen spikes out of his body as the Toad Sage strangled him with his animated hair; the Hokage pursued Nagato, trying to keep the man off balance as he periodically hurled knives at Yahiko that resulted in three near fatal attacks in just a couple of seconds.

But among all those ninja, it was Orochimaru that charged directly at Sasuke, his pale face pulled back into a wide sneer.

Sasuke didn't have time to dodge and braced instead, and the impact smashed them through the wall he'd landed on, leaving them in a small apartment hall lined with doors. He rolled and kicked the larger man off him, and Orochimaru coiled on the ceiling like the world's largest spider.

That brief exchange told Sasuke two things as he rolled back to his feet and looked up, only a couple of feet between them. The first was that his foot hurt. The Sannin's body was diamond-hard. Sage Mode, body modifications, an unknown jutsu: the means didn't matter, only that he couldn't hurt Orochimaru with taijutsu alone.

The second was that Orochimaru had a Sharingan. He was looking up into a pair of three-tomoe eyes, red and black and swirling, and Sasuke felt his gut churn.

"Sasuke Uchiha," the man said with a sick grin. "You may not know it, but-"

"We've met before?" Sasuke said, and took advantage of the miniscule moment of surprise to analyze the chakra boiling off Orochimaru. Ridiculously thick and heavy, so much that he barely seemed human. It was just as he, his mother, the Hokage, and Obito had feared; with access to Madara's body and experiments, the Sannin had obviously modified his body using ancient secrets of both the Uchiha and Senju clans. Of anyone in the world, even more so than Nagato with his transplanted eyes, this man was the closest anyone had ever been to the Sage of the Six Paths.

A Senju body, so probably regeneration, at least according to what Naruto had told him. Uchiha eyes, and their acuity… but not, Sasuke noted, a Mangekyo Sharingan. That was his ace in the hole here, as much as he hated it. Sasuke had abilities that even Orochimaru hadn't managed to figure out yet. That, and the Lightning Rasengan, were probably his only hope of victory.

"You broke the jutsu," Orochimaru said after a moment, the battle still raging outside. He stroked his chin, looking impressed. "Well, that's unexpected."

He moved, and Sasuke found himself in the strange quick-draw that resulted from fighting another Sharingan user: the moment of delayed feedback as both acted on what was going to happen instead of what was actually happening. He was clearly more used to it than Orochimaru, but the man was faster than him. Even though Sasuke dodged and counterattacked with Orochimaru's precognitive movement in mind, his kick missed; the Sannin ducked back at the last second as he crashed into the floor and then struck, a small white snake launching from the sleeve of his robes and nearly fixing itself in Sasuke's throat.

Sasuke caught and crushed the snake's head in his bare hand, and Orochimaru laughed.

"Do you have any idea where your ancestor may have run off to?" he asked, and he and Sasuke became embroiled in a hand to hand duel without any further fanfare. Sasuke didn't have time to answer: his whole world became strike, feint, counterstrike, everything else washing away and leaving only his footwork, the recoil of his strikes, the way his body rattled whenever he redirected one of Orochimaru's monstrously powerful punches and kicks.

He needed time to create the Lightning Rasengan, but there was no way he'd be able to escape now. Orochimaru was just too fast and too strong; it was all Sasuke could do to keep up, accruing bruises and small cuts from near misses with every exchange.

"Not talkative today?" Orochimaru laughed. "You were usually terse, but this is a new low, Sasuke." He swept Sasuke's legs, but Sasuke managed to just barely jump the attack, the concrete floor of the hall torn up by the force of the strike. He slammed into the ceiling, not wanting to be stuck in the air, but Orochimaru was already running through hand-signs: another Wind jutsu, more focused than the first one. A spear that would impale Sasuke through the lung and then expand like a blender's blades.

The future spooled out, almost against Sasuke's will. He saw what he had to do if he didn't want to be split into five pieces. The only thing that would save him now was a clash of jutsu.

No time to think, and from this range no time to dodge. Sasuke ran through hand-signs of his own, seeing Orochimaru's eyebrow come up in the future as the man reacted to his jutsu before it emerged. He clapped his hands together, praying the technique would save him for a second time. Blood dripped from his eye, and Orochimaru's curiosity transformed into something entirely more menacing.

Katon: Mekkyaku Eiso.

The laser burst from beneath his hands and collided with Orochimaru's invisible javelin in the same instant it emerged.

The whole hallway exploded, the laser supercharged by the complimentary jutsu. Sasuke felt the beam carve through the building and emerge from the other side, keeping his aim steady despite the flames scorching his arms and setting his hair alight. He watched as the laser pierced directly through Orochimaru's heart, burning a hole in the man's chest, and then he whipped it to the side, carving an arc through the man's torso, vaporizing most of his internal organs and slashing across his left arm, removing it.

Sasuke fell from the ceiling, landing gracelessly and feebly batting out the flames whipping across his body. He looked up, expecting his opponent to collapse. Even with regeneration, having your heart incinerated and half your upper body torn apart should be enough to finish off anyone.

Instead, he watched through the flames filling the hallway as Orochimaru caught his arm before it could fall away from his body, glaring down at Sasuke the whole time. Smoke was filling the air, and there was suddenly steam accompanying it; with a counterclockwise whirling, flesh and bone appeared from nowhere and sealed Orochimaru's wounds, grafting his arm back in place without a sign of its separation and instantly regrowing his heart, lungs, spine, and ribs.

"Oh…" Sasuke had time to say before the Sannin laughed and kicked him in the face.

"What a heroic move!" he said, slamming a fist into Sasuke's side as he stumbled back, feeling blood fill his mouth. He slammed into the wall and began to collapse, but Orochimaru wouldn't let him, striking him so furiously and constantly that Sasuke was simply forced back, unable to fall. "Almost sacrificing yourself like that? You know, on anyone else it would have worked! I didn't think someone like you had that kind of foresight, Sasuke!" He laughed again, cuffing both of Sasuke's ears and sending his head ringing as he threw him back with another kick to the gut. "How unfortunate it means nothing."

The kick sent Sasuke to the edge of the hallway, back to the break in the wall. Distantly, he could hear that the fighting was continuing. He groggily looked back, and found that Jiraiya, Minato, Rasa, and the Amekage were still fighting. The other ninja were gone or down; Hinata's uncle was the closest, bleeding on the ground.

Sasuke's heart was beating so fast he thought it might burst. It was obvious now that didn't have a chance in hell of beating Orochimaru. He had to run away, but with his ears ringing and at least two of his ribs broken, there wasn't much chance of that either.

"What do you think, Sasuke?" Orochimaru said, standing over him. "Would it be better to kill you in front of the Hokage, or just throw your corpse at him?" He paused, thinking. "Or perhaps send you against him as a Reanimation. That would probably distract him, wouldn't you think? I had thought-"

It was only thanks to his Sharingan that Sasuke saw the slight narrowing of Minato Namikaze's eyes as the man took a fraction of a second, in the midst of fighting two of the most dangerous ninja in the world, to glance in his direction.

As Orochimaru reached down, the Hokage flung another kunai out; it buried itself in the wall beside Sasuke, and Orochimaru glanced over at it, his eyes going wide in anticipation. He twitched, anticipating Minato's teleportation; as Jiraiya leapt forward, taking on the burden of fighting both his students at once for a moment, the Hokage vanished.

Sasuke didn't see the moment of impact. One moment, Orochimaru was reaching out; the next, he had a knife through his head. He stopped, reached up, and carefully removed it as the Hokage knelt over Sasuke, the Hokage's hand pressed lightly against his chest.

"Still so fast, Minato," Orochimaru said with a laugh. "And yet, lacking in imagination. Did you really think that a knife would be enough?"

The moment stretched, and the battle fell away. Sasuke watched the flare of chakra between the two men rebound off their steely auras and crack the concrete around them, shaking the whole building as the Hokage's hand pressed more firmly into his chest.

"You gave up your humanity, huh?" Minato said, his tone light despite the physical murder boiling off him. "I guess that's to be expected."

"I've been preparing for this day, Yondaime," Orochimaru spat, his Sharingan whirling. "I know everything you have, but I have become something more. Ignore the rest; let's have our battle. I'll show you the mistake sensei made."

Minato smiled, and it somehow looked genuine despite the horrible situation. Somewhere behind him, Jiraiya let out a grunt of pain, and Sasuke felt the attention of the Amekage return to him like someone was positioning a block of stone over his head. "You always liked novelty, Orochimaru." The gravity wave was coming, he could feel it; the only reason it hadn't already been thrown was because Orochimaru was in the way.

"So why don't I show you something you haven't seen?"

The world ripped as Sasuke was torn away, teleported to another rooftop in a disorienting instant. The Hokage pulled his hand back, and as three S-rank ninja hurled themselves at him, glanced back at Sasuke.

"Sasuke," he said, his hands coming together in something like a prayer. "Get everyone off the roofs."

In the blink of an eye he was engaged in a fight for his life against three remorseless opponents, the battle drawing away from Sasuke instantly. Nagato, Yahiko, and Orochimaru all pursued Minato like men possessed, hurling deadly jutsu, ninja tools, and flares of gravity that threatened to pin down and destroy the Hokage with every moment. But Minato wasn't known as the fastest man in the world for no reason, and he stayed just ahead of the relentless assault with both his own speed and the Hiraishin, blinking out of existence moments before he was struck again and again.

But his opponents were catching on, destroying his kunai before he could deploy them and sending them off course when he did. The Hokage was steadily being pushed into a corner that would force him to retreat or die, but he didn't seem to care; he just kept running and dodging, and began to rub his hands together, generating friction.

Sasuke was moving the whole time, the terrifying battle kept in his peripheral vision. Rin had returned and was tending to Hizashi, but it only took a look for her to understand his intentions; she scuttled over the roof and took her patient with her, bound for the alleys below. Rasa did the same, flying away in a glittering sphere of gold. Sasuke raced towards the Toad Sage; the man had been left alone, but a pitch black rod had been stabbed through his forearm, and Sasuke could see it was draining his chakra away with tremendous speed. The older ninja's Sage Mode had faded, and he was struggling to stay conscious, calling out ferocious curses.

"Sorry," Sasuke said matter of factly as he skidded to a stop at Jiraiya's side and ripped out the rod, the man coughing with pain as he did. "We've gotta go."

Two things happened at that moment. The first was that the Hokage jumped, Orochimaru clawing at his heels with an Earth jutsu that raised a golem out of the concrete which nearly smashed Minato into paste.

The second was that it stopped raining.

All the moisture in the air instantly evaporated; Sasuke's mouth went dry. He looked back, his instincts howling, and found Minato's opponents scattered below him as they moved to pursue him into the air.

The Hokage was holding something; it couldn't be described as anything less than a small sun, wisps of plasma arcing off it and orbiting around it in vicious rings of incineration.

Sasuke's Sharingan took it in as he scrambled to drag Jiraiya away towards the edge of one of the buildings. He was entranced by it: there couldn't be any doubt that it was the most beautiful jutsu he'd ever seen. A Rasengan, but only in the same way a tent and a skyscraper were both buildings. The core structure of the jutsu had been augmented by two different elemental chakras whirling about each other in perfect harmony; Fire and Wind, somehow kept separate enough to intensify the other without combining and detonating in a conflagration that would vaporize Minato.

The Hokage had turned the Rasengan into a jutsu of unmitigated devastation; Sasuke was more than eighty feet away, but he was still sure he wasn't close to out of the blast radius.

At the same time Sasuke dove over the edge of the roof carrying Jiraiya after him, the future spooled out, showing him exactly what happened as he fled.

The Hokage's opponents were fleeing; Nagato backed up, raising his arms and bracing himself. Whether he intended to try and deflect the jutsu or absorb it, Sasuke wasn't sure, but Yahiko and Orochimaru both ran to his side, seeking shelter from the holocaust that was about to rain down on them.

"Burn away," the Hokage declared, still soaring up but surely not high enough to escape his own jutsu. He cocked his arm back for a perfect throw, and the trails of plasma around the Rasengan began to spin more wildly, the chakra natures finally allowed to touch and intensify one another beyond the point of no return. "Goen Bakufu Rasenshuriken."

He threw the Rasenshuriken down like a god swatting the sun out of the sky and immediately vanished, teleporting somewhere far away. The scorching sphere, bright enough that looking directly at it was impossible, left an afterimage across Sasuke's future-sight of twisting, eye watering colors, slammed into the roof, and detonated.

It happened in three stages, and Sasuke was sure that no one but he and Nagato had ever been able to observe the Hokage's Scorch Release Rasengan in such detail for fear of being reduced to a shadow on the nearest wall. The shell of the Rasenshuriken burst, releasing its deadly payload; raw chakra burst out, enough to tear a building apart by itself, followed by the Wind chakra.

It came as a storm of razors, ten-trillion invisible knives that sundered the air and slashed apart whatever they made contact with so comprehensively that in many places the rooftop was reduced to less than dust. An undodgeable, unsurvivable attack, making everything that came after overkill. And yet, all three shinobi remaining on the rooftops survived it.

From Nagato's hands a shimmering energy field expanded, devouring every bit of chakra that came in contact with it and leaving everything behind him unscarred. The bearer of the Rinnegan turned aside Minato's annihilation: behind him, Yahiko stood firm, trusting in his friend to protect him.

Orochimaru had been far from either of them, too consumed in his pursuit of the Hokage to possibly take shelter behind Nagato. A field similar to Nagato's burst out of his body, but it faltered and shattered after absorbing only half of the Rasenshuriken.

Nonetheless, despite taking much of the deadly wind head on, he did not die; even as his body and chakra system were shredded apart by trillions of blades that tore into even his cells, the rogue ninja stood, glaring up at where Minato had been in fury as steam exploded off of him and the roof disintegrated under his feet. His clothes were torn away, revealing an inhuman pale body as sleek and featureless as a snake's.

Then, the second stage. The Fire chakra expanded, greedily feeding on the Wind.

The ten-trillion invisible knives caught fire, transformed into a field of lasers that stood superimposed against Sasuke's future-sight for a moment before they detonated in a tremendous explosion. The building was blown away, sending all the Hokage's opponents spiraling through the air like errant confetti. So were all the neighboring buildings, with Sasuke only barely outpacing the blast wave and debris in the present. It was a force comparable to the Tailed Beast Bomb Sasuke had witnessed, but compressed and limited to such a small space that it was almost comical.

The blast tore Orochimaru in half, and it was then that his rampant regeneration stopped. With everything below the chest shorn away steam kept blowing off the man's body, but no new limbs accompanied it. The Hokage's jutsu had shattered the limits of his regeneration, killing him ten-thousand times over. Despite that, there was no indication of pain on the Sannin's face, just hatred.

Then, the third stage. The pressure wave.

The origin point of the explosion became a complete vacuum, the blast wave of the jutsu rolling back on it as the Wind and Fire consumed absolutely every bit of the local atmosphere. It literally sucked the tossed bodies of both Orochimaru and the Amekage back towards it, a reversal that only Sasuke could have seen. Perhaps because he was weakened, the vacuum burst Orochimaru's still intact eyes and pulled something up into his throat, likely his lungs; still, he squirmed and feebly fought all the while, crashing into a nearby wall and falling out of sight.

It was this final stage that finally had an effect on Nagato; despite having weathered the razor winds, the lasers, and the explosion without difficulty, he vomited up a great gout of blood as the vacuum tore at his insides, his face growing white as paper. Yahiko shouted something, lost against the blast; perhaps because of Sage Mode, the vacuum didn't have as dramatic an effect on him, and he spun in the air, changing his trajectory with invisible energy and throwing his friend to safety.

There was more, but none as important. Sasuke was drawn back to the present as the Hokage instantly appeared at his side, knocking away a couple errant pieces of debris without looking as he checked Sasuke and his master over.

"Good job," he said, touching Jiraiya and teleporting him away instantly. His master had been carrying a knife, but he left it in the air and returned to catch it before Sasuke could blink. When he returned, Rin was with him.

"Rin, work on him," he said, but she already was, running glowing golden hands over Sasuke's wounds and mending his ribs. "Rasa and I will finish Yahiko," he said, looking up. "The others have already been evacuated."

"Orochimaru's still alive," Sasuke gasped, his mouth still dry, and the Hokage grunted.

"Then you two finish him," he said, and Rin nodded. "The Nibi and Gaara are fighting; you're off Tailed Beast duty, Sasuke. We're almost done here."

He vanished for the final time, and Rin looked over Sasuke; she had a heavily bleeding shallow scalp wound, but seemed fine otherwise, and she gave him a vicious grin.

"Let's go then," she said. "He's hurt, right?"

"He was torn in half," Sasuke confirmed as he looked around, orienting himself. He knew this street; the buildings the Hokage had just obliterated concealed the exact address, but if Sasuke recalled correctly (and the Sharingan meant that he did), Orochimaru had fallen only a couple of blocks away. He took off, the rain starting up again with a soft patter as Rin dashed after him. The distant sounds of conflict rang through the city and there were towering blue flames in the distance visible over the western high rises, but the ferocity of the Kage's battle had chased off any nearby ninja. For the moment, he and Rin could move with impunity.

Past two toppled buildings, through an exploded sandwich shop, and Sasuke skidded into an alley past two fallen ninja, one from Rain and the other from Konoha, united in death.

If it weren't for the Sharingan, the Earth jutsu that roared down the alley would have drawn him down and suffocated him. Sasuke leapt over it, sticking to the wall and calling out a warning to Rin.

"He's here!" he called, and Rin altered her trajectory, smashing right through the wall of the building instead of coming out into the alley as she beelined towards Orochimaru. Still, even as Sasuke called out the warning his throat was closing up, revulsion pinching it shut.

The thing at the end of the alley no longer resembled a human being. What had been Orochimaru bled thick white fluids copiously across the ground, chakra sparking and crashing into the world around it as it manifested as random elemental jutsu that tore apart everything close to it. His body was misshapen and obloid, spikes of greenery pushing themselves out of the swelling, corpulent flesh, and eyes were opening across it: dozens of them, each glaring out with a three-tomoe Sharingan. The Sannin's head was visible in the center of the abomination, glaring down the alley with hatred plain on his face; despite everything, he was still conscious.

"You!" it spat, and Sasuke found himself racing towards the thing rather than away, like any sane person should. He had no idea if Orochimaru could recover from the damage he'd taken, but the fact it seemed possible made it clear to him he had to kill the thing now. "Bastard little Uchiha! Stay away!"

Sasuke hurled a kunai with an explosive tag down the alley, and a fleshy projectile that was half wood and half bone fired itself out of Orochimaru's side, striking the knife aside; it detonated and knocked down a wall, filling the alley with fire, but didn't touch the abomination. "This isn't meant for you!" Orochimaru raged, more grotesque growths forming across his body and firing themselves at Sasuke as he drew closer. "You're wasting my time!"

Sasuke dodged past the hypersonic projectiles, one barely skimming his arm but the rest missing as his Sharingan perfectly predicted their paths. His arm stung, and on instinct he ran his hand across it, feeling something in the wound and plucking it out in an instant. The glancing attack had left behind tiny sprouts that were piercing into his skin and drinking his blood; after being torn out their little roots wriggled, searching for something to dig into.

Two elemental Rasengan in one battle, Sasuke decided in that instant. Whatever Orochimaru had become didn't merit any less. He started running through the hand signs for the Rasenyarinage, not caring as his eye stung; what he'd suddenly found himself a part of wasn't just a dirty political conflict like the rest of the war, it was something far deeper and more important.

Another wave of projectiles, another near miss; Orochimaru was squirming, the head shifting as the corpulent body rolled away from Sasuke like a deflating ball. "You don't understand!" it laughed. "I know too much: I'm too important! Sasuke, if the Hokage learns what I know-!"

At that moment, Rin burst through the wall next to Orochimaru, leading with her fists. The ball of flesh spun, but too slow: with a primal roar, the Hokage's student slammed into the abomination's side with a full-body haymaker.

Orochimaru was launched like a bowling ball, slamming through the other alley wall and continuing on for at least a hundred feet, obliterating everything in his path and leaving behind a trail of pale, squirming flesh that sprouted grasping roots as it looked for something to attach itself to. Sasuke was right behind him, picking up his pace as he followed the mutant through the holes he was blasting in the iron and brick construction of Amegakure.

The Lightning Rasengan in his hand started screaming, a high pitched wail of sparking lightning as his control of the bomb was stretched to its limit. He heard Rin gasp behind him, but he didn't have even a second to consider why; everything in Sasuke's existence was focused on Orochimaru, the Rasenyarinage, and the distance between them.

"Raiton!" he shouted, focusing himself as his vision blurred. Some blood fell from his cheek and into the lightning, vaporizing instantly with a bizarrely strong smell of smoke. "Rasenyarinage!"

He hurled the jutsu forward, following the trail of the lightning lead as it quested out towards the enemy. Orochimaru was slowing down, vestigial limbs grasping at the ground and walls he was plowing through, chakra sparking and warping the environment with flames and stone as he tried to slow himself down.

"Another?!" he roared, dozens of eyes focusing on the lightning lead. "No… imagination!"

Orochimaru pushed himself up, the ground beneath him suddenly sprouting into a pillar, and Sasuke's heart stopped as the last of his chakra raced past Orochimaru, piercing through nothing as the abomination embedded itself in the ceiling of the building. Orochimaru leered down at Sasuke from around his writhing flesh, more bones and wood poking out of his flesh.

"You-" he hissed, and then Sasuke snapped back to the present.

He detonated the jutsu.

The ball of lightning was right below Orochimaru and it burst so quickly that all the Sharingan could see was the afterimage, the globe of lightning that carved out the lower half of Orochimaru's body, leaving it an eclipse. Orochimaru's head was untouched, and for a moment Sasuke feared it had been for nothing.

Then the man vomited, a great torrent of pale blood pouring out of his mouth as he detached from the ceiling and collapsed, crashing to the ground with a scream of frustration.

Sasuke fell to his knees, every breath hurting, his eyes burning; he'd pushed himself as hard as he could dodging everything, forming the jutsu on the go, and abusing both his eyes, and now he was completely spent. He watched as Orochimaru rolled and roared like a wounded animal, flesh regenerating and falling away from his body with every second. The monster began to shrivel up like a stone worn away by a river current, and Sasuke hacked, spitting up a gob of phlegm and blood as he took in the grotesque sight.

"Nice one." From nowhere, Rin patted him on the back, and Sasuke wheezed and gave her a thumbs up without looking, too tired to even turn his head. "I've got it from here."

"Stop!" Orochimaru rasped, but Rin just kicked him, rolling him over as he continued to sputter and leak. "You… Rin!" A dozen eyes focused on her, and the woman broke her pinky finger without blinking, shaking off a half-formed genjutsu. "Listen! You mustn't! There's too much undone!"

"Feel free to keep talking," Rin said, looking the heaving flesh over. "I'm not even sure how to kill something like you."

"I'm more than you know," Orochimaru said, his words interspersed with a broken cackle. "This body… it's full of ancient secrets now. You're a medic, Rin; you must be curious how the regeneration is so efficient."

"It's similar to the Kaguya, that's for sure," Rin said, finally laying her hands on Orochimaru as his flesh continued to melt away. Sasuke tensed, waiting for a weapon to emerge, but the man seemed truly spent; he just continued to diminish as Rin's medical jutsu probed him. "Inspired by Kimimaro, maybe?"

"You're close," Orochimaru grumbled, "but you cannot know how. Save me, bind me in whatever way you wish; I'll be happy to answer your questions." He grimaced at Sasuke, his face twitching as the muscles in it threatened to fail. "Wouldn't that be appropriate karma, Sasuke? Imprisoned and sworn to answer, just as your ancestor was? You couldn't come up with a better fate."

"Regeneration is neat," Rin said blandly, "but it's not worth becoming a monster like you." Her hands pressed into the flesh, piercing Orochimaru's body. "If it's like the Kaguya's, it can be driven out of control like theirs, right? I just need to find the right node…"

"Don't you dare!" Orochimaru spat. "There's more!" He was growing desperate now, thrashing and trying to escape Rin despite his body resembling melted clay more than anything else. "However impossible it may be, try to understand the consequences of your actions! The Rinnegan is within my reach! Save me, and it could be Konoha's!"

That made Rin pause, and Sasuke too. Orochimaru gave them both greedy looks as he tried to prop himself up on stubby, shaking arms. "Madara doesn't know," he said, and Sasuke narrowed his eyes. "The idiot believes creating such a thing was as simple as combining the material of both Senju and Uchiha. But if it were that easy, I'd have a thousand of them by now." He chewed and spat out a chunk of white flesh; the roiling in his body was growing calmer, and so was his chakra. Even with most of his body vaporized twice over, the thing Orochimaru had become was still capable of stabilizing.

"There was something unique about Madara and Hashirama," the Sannin continued. "A divergent chakra, unlike anything else in the world; that was the focus of my studies. Return me to Konoha, and even if it's under Namikaze, I'll continue that work." The fervor in his eyes and his voice hit Sasuke like a physical force. "It's a chakra that transcends death. In this age of uncertainty, you cannot afford to kill me, either of you. You would be murdering an era of immortality."

Rin stood there for several seconds, clearly deep in thought; there wasn't much Sasuke could do but sit and try to catch his breath, his heart hammering as he considered Orochimaru's ultimatum. But eventually, Rin seemed to come to a decision. She looked back over her shoulder at Sasuke with an earnestly curious expression.

"Hey Sasuke," she asked, and Sasuke wondered if there was half as much clarity in his own eyes.

"Yeah?" he grunted, feeling like his chakra system was trying to tear its way out of his skin.

"Do you think something like the Rinnegan needs to exist?" Rin asked. Sasuke blinked. He saw all of Orochimaru's eyes do the same.

Everything he'd seen the Rinnegan was capable of flashed through Sasuke's mind: replacing his arm, binding peoples' souls, deflecting Cloud's cannon, withstanding the Yondaime's ultimate jutsu. The Rinnegan placed the power to alter fate in the hands of a single person; in a way, it was almost the perfect representation of Ninjutsu, but with equal capacity to heal as harm. Even if Rin didn't intend it, the question took on massive dimensions to Sasuke.

Should one person have the power to change the world?

"No," he decided, sure enough that the shaking in his body stopped. "I think we'd get along fine without it."

"Yeah," Rin said, and Sasuke had no idea if her line of thought resembled his in the slightest. "Same here."

"Wait!" Orochimaru demanded. Rin didn't. She pressed her fist deeper into the soggy flesh, her bright blue chakra racing over her arms as she searched the monstrous body for something. "Wait, you fraud! You must not-!"

"Here we go," Rin muttered, and pushed.

Orochimaru started to swell up again, his body twisting and mangling his vestigial limbs as his face was stretched out beyond human limits. He howled like a mad beast, spare bones dribbling out of his body, but his control was destroyed; Rin had found something inside of him and driven it wild, shattering his equilibrium.

Rin stood back and crossed her arms, and as Sasuke stumbled to his feet Orochimaru grew. His body sprouted thick roots that burrowed through the concrete around him, his chakra raging out of control like river rapids as branches and leaves burst from his flesh, Sharingan eyes curling up and becoming gooey flowers. The Sannin babbled, incomprehensible words pushed out through crushed lungs and a mouth distended several feet as he twisted, grew, and hardened.

In less than a minute, where Orochimaru had once lain there was a towering tree, nearly a hundred feet high, of wood as pale as bone. It punched up through the building, breaking through the concrete effortlessly, and was covered in fruit-like flowers of black and red. It was the most beautiful and disgusting thing Sasuke had ever seen.

"Gross," Rin muttered, shaking her hand out. It was covered in chakra burns, the skin ripped away and raw from the energy she'd forced into Orochimaru. "I doubt Tsunade would approve, but at least it worked…"

"What happened?" Sasuke asked, surprised at the hoarseness in his voice, and Rin shrugged.

"He's still alive," she said. Sasuke blanched, glancing at the tree. "In a manner of speaking. I don't think what he'd turned himself into could die. But he was so messed up… it wasn't hard to find the tenketsu that were keeping him shaped like a person." She let out a dry laugh. "If he learns how to move like that, it'll be Rain's problem, I guess."

A distant rumble, low and loud enough that it made Sasuke's bones shake, put a stop to both their musings. To the west, blue fires were raging across the horizon, and Sasuke realized that the air was full of tiny particles of sand. The Tailed Beasts were still fighting, which meant that the Hokage probably was as well; if he had won, he would have taken care of the Nibi by now.

"We should keep pushing in," Rin said, and then, as if talking to the air, "Fukuro?" Sasuke started to nod, ready to receive the telepathic instructions, but then a second, more unexpected sound came.

There was a voice in his head. But it wasn't the soothing, directed tone of Fukuro Yamanaka, who had been coordinating various ninja across the city.

'I recommend you surrender, Hokage,' Nagato Uzumaki said through the telepathic link, and Sasuke was sure that this broadcast was audible to everyone in all of Amegakure. Not just Konoha's ninja; the Amekage's voice was so loud that there wasn't a chance of it discriminating.

'Or all your ninja will die.'

AN: The entire battle in Amegakure was originally intended to be one chapter, but things sprawled out. I intended to just do a double update so the experience would be the same, but then things got busy and now I don't know what the ETA on the second half is, so I figured I'd just publish what I have. Don't worry, we will be swinging around for Kushina, Minato, Naruto, and Obito's conversation, just not right away. Hope you enjoyed it!
 
Absolute banger of a fight scene. Wasn't expecting Orochimaru to fully throw in with Rain but in retrospect in makes perfect sense, and I love his grotesque biomancy powers.

"It's similar to the Kaguya, that's for sure," Rin said, finally laying her hands on Orochimaru as his flesh continued to melt away. Sasuke tensed, waiting for a weapon to emerge, but the man seemed truly spent; he just continued to diminish as Rin's medical jutsu probed him. "Inspired by Kimimaro, maybe?"

"You're close," Orochimaru grumbled, "but you cannot know how. Save me, bind me in whatever way you wish; I'll be happy to answer your questions." He grimaced at Sasuke, his face twitching as the muscles in it threatened to fail. "Wouldn't that be appropriate karma, Sasuke? Imprisoned and sworn to answer, just as your ancestor was? You couldn't come up with a better fate."

Very interested to see how Space Rabbit Mommy ties into all of this. It feels like Konoha's getting hints at some of the details regarding Ashura and Indra's reincarnations, so maybe they'll start digging deeper and following up on Orochimaru's hints here.
 
Okay that was an amazing update @Ser_Serendipity !

Very big Gojo Satoru energy to Minato cutting loose, you really showed off just how damn lethal and insanely powerful the guy is, with a collection of the most powerful ninja alive throwing everything at him and it not being enough to bring the Yellow Flash down. The Scorch Release Rasengan was very inline the Minato of this story, insane skill and power crafting something beautiful in scope of power/control that is all consuming efficient at murder to the point Orochimaru on the brink of Sage of Six Paths status has his regeneration run out and a healthy can curbstomp Bjuu Nagato is left puking blood.

Given the narrative comparison for Minato in this Vinnland Saga - Attack on Titan homage seems to be Askeladd and or Erwin Smith I was half suspecting for Orochimaru + Nagato + Yahiko to set up a situation where he dies but that hasn't happened yet. Though given Nagato's threat at the end this could change.

Orochimaru with access to Madara's accumulated knowledge, melding of Senju and Uchiha bloodlines and implicitly Black Zetsu whispering secrets in his ear has been a long standing sword of Damocles hanging over the casts head that and I think this worked off the payoff for that that, Orochimaru was a monster, regenerating from destroy the body scale attacks in a blink, fixated on his imagined death match with Minato, warping himself into a grotesque abomination that only loses because Sasuke and Rin jump him while pulling himself back together.

How Rin ultimately dealt with him works thematically. If he manages to work out how to move Rain and the world will have a Orochimaru flavored pseudo-Juubi to deal with and that could be fun but if he is out of the story now this is a good way to do it, have it be representative of this world's Sasuke rejecting the idea one person can/should have the power to change the world.

I must admit I am very curious both as to how the Battle in Rain is going to unfold next chapter and what is going to happen with Gaara's rattled mental state. Best of luck writing and thanks for the high quality work we readers can enjoy.
 
Very interested to see how Space Rabbit Mommy ties into all of this. It feels like Konoha's getting hints at some of the details regarding Ashura and Indra's reincarnations, so maybe they'll start digging deeper and following up on Orochimaru's hints here.
There's definitively a corkboard being filled up somewhere between this, Madara, Kushina and Kurama, and the Uchiha's old rock, but time will tell how exactly it gets filled out.
Should be 'complementary'. The meaning is rather different.
Ah, thanks for catching that, something always gets through.
Orochimaru with access to Madara's accumulated knowledge, melding of Senju and Uchiha bloodlines and implicitly Black Zetsu whispering secrets in his ear has been a long standing sword of Damocles hanging over the casts head that and I think this worked off the payoff for that that, Orochimaru was a monster, regenerating from destroy the body scale attacks in a blink, fixated on his imagined death match with Minato, warping himself into a grotesque abomination that only loses because Sasuke and Rin jump him while pulling himself back together.
It's a petty sort of joy to enjoy something just because it's powerful, but man, even if his presence in the story was brief I really enjoyed just how busted Orochimaru was (before he made the fatal mistake of stepping to Minato, lol). Unwittingly backporting himself into a mini-Kaguya is a fascinating story for another time, but at least it lent this chapter a sort of disgusting desperation that I was pretty happy with.
 
I'm sure there's no way having Orochimaru still alive and trapped, likely willing to spill the beans to whoever helps him could backfire.
Not like there's say a pink haired ninja who's going to be running around practically unsupervised or a disgustingly strong Uchiha with interest in empowering one person to crush all conflict or anything.
I'm also certain nothing bad can come from Sasuke resolving himself as fundamentally opposed to Sakura's ideas.
 
Very interested to see how Space Rabbit Mommy ties into all of this. It feels like Konoha's getting hints at some of the details regarding Ashura and Indra's reincarnations, so maybe they'll start digging deeper and following up on Orochimaru's hints here.

I think "Kaguya" was a reference to the bone-user clan Kimimaro was from, not to Space Rabbit Mommy.

Anyhow, crazy fight. The description of Minato's Rasenshuriken was...mesmerizing and grotesque all at once, if that makes any sense.
 
I loved how Orochimaru's final form is colored similarly to the Akatsuki's robes' colors. Very thematic, especially with the pale bone wood.
 
I'm pretty sure the author confirmed Kaguya and Black Zatsu as canon to the story

I get that, but in the context of the section, the Kaguya under discussion is explicitly Kimimaro's clan:

"It's similar to the Kaguya, that's for sure," Rin said, finally laying her hands on Orochimaru as his flesh continued to melt away. Sasuke tensed, waiting for a weapon to emerge, but the man seemed truly spent; he just continued to diminish as Rin's medical jutsu probed him. "Inspired by Kimimaro, maybe?"
 
Chapter 80: Gods
Knows Their Limits

Once he had Yahiko alone, it only took Minato thirty-two seconds to remove his fellow student's eyes.

Yahiko was still in Sage Mode, and Minato's had faded; that was the price of the Scorch Rasenshuriken, which was an enormous expenditure of chakra. Initially, that gave the Amekage who had ruined everything unearned confidence. When Minato returned to face him, Yahiko wasted no time in trying to seize the perceived advantage. The man was a master of Wind and Water jutsu, and he used both with equal skill as deadly projectiles and zoning tools to counter the mobility of the Hiraishin.

He talked. Minato had come to understand that Yahiko enjoyed talking. He used it to throw his opponent off-balance, and to embolden himself and his allies. He boasted about Nagato deflecting the Rasenshuriken, and about Minato's foolishness in trying to oppose that power. But at this point, Minato was beyond listening.

"Here's the problem," he said quietly, twenty-three seconds in. "Sage Mode doesn't make everything equally tough."

They met in the air, Yahiko trying to impale him with a Wind blade as Minato feinted from one building to another, giving the impression that for just a moment he'd lost track of the Amekage and didn't know where to teleport next. The blade scraped past his side, puncturing his flak jacket but missing his body. Minato spun, and drove his blade towards Yahiko's face.

The man caught it, ready to shatter Minato's hand with invisible energy. He was an incredible shinobi, so of course he caught it. Minato wasn't so far beyond someone who had learned the secrets of Myoboku that he could stab them before they could react.

But Yahiko hadn't yet seen the Flying Thunder God Slice, because Minato hadn't used it yet.

In the same millisecond that the kunai stopped and Yahiko counterattacked with a blow that would cut Minato in half, he teleported. Using the Hiraishin had become something that had more in common with breathing than a Ninjutsu; Minato had trained himself long ago to teleport purely by reflex, to bring himself from here to there no matter how impossible the transposition was, before he could consciously make the decision. All shinobi fought with trained reflexes, but Minato had learned that his ability to train reflexes for senses and reactions that couldn't naturally exist was what set him apart from others.

The secret to his impossible speed was an ignorance that it was impossible in the first place.

The Flying Thunder God Slice was a fancy name for a simple technique created by the Second Hokage. You attacked and teleported at the same time, like the old comparison of patting your belly while rubbing your head but several million times more difficult. Keeping oriented during instant teleportation by itself was challenging; coordinating a complex and powerful motion like an attack that could injure a shinobi was stunning.

Over the course of the battle, Yahiko had adapted to Minato's fighting style, which he felt some admiration for. The Amekage was a battle genius who had conquered a country thanks in no small part to his own strength and force of will. With Sage Mode and his sensory skills, he had begun to anticipate where Minato would appear and reliably counterattack over the course of the battle, and with Nagato he had brought down Jiraiya, one of the top ten ninja in the world by Minato's reckoning.

It was the same here. As Minato appeared and reappeared at Yahiko's side instead of in front of him, Yahiko was already readjusting the course of his vacuum blade. If Minato hadn't been expecting it, his head would have been split in half and he would have died in that instant.

But he was expecting it.

Hiraishin: Yūdōdan.

Returning Thunder Step was a simple technique, though no one but Minato had ever called it that. It was essentially a dimensional ricochet between two anchors, executed with such speed that even Minato couldn't perceive the transposition. All it did was remove him from his current position by sending him to another Hiraishin marker and bounce him back an instant later in the exact same placement. Its one and only use could be dodging attacks too fast for Minato himself to block or redirect without making him vulnerable to the same danger of counterattack upon his return.

Functionally, what it meant was that Yahiko's supersonic precognitive counterattack passed through the space Minato occupied, but through ill-fortune only while he was no longer there.

It had been inspired by the Kamui. But Minato wasn't thinking about that. In battle, he was single-minded, and spared no thoughts but for what was in front of him.

His steel-hard fingers formed into a wedge and before Yahiko could understand why his attack had missed, Minato scooped out his left eye.

Yahiko grunted, moving faster than the pain, and lashed out with an invisible fist that could shatter Minato's ribs and pulp his heart. But the sudden blind spot made him sloppy.

Sloppy enough that his grip was loose enough for Minato to teleport back to the knife still clutched in Yahiko's hand and drive it forward. Yahiko jerked, trying to drive the blade off-target, and succeeded. The long blade missed his eye and failed to pierce his brain, scraping along his cheek instead.

But Minato had decided on pronged kunai for more reasons beyond their obvious style. The secondary blade at the side of the knife slipped forward and jabbed into Yahiko's eye, hooking on the side of the socket and bursting it.

This time, Yahiko screamed. He detonated in a storm of razor sharp and invisible blades, an armor of wind that acted as both offense and defense, but Minato was already gone. He abandoned the kunai to be shredded by Yahiko's instinctual defense and reappeared on the side of a nearby building where he'd placed his mark by hand, watching his enemy and waiting to see what opening his attack had made.

Yahiko wasn't blind; he could see with Sage Mode's extrasensory perception, so long as he maintained it. Minato didn't know what the time limit on that might be. Between Yahiko's ability to instantly activate it at Myoboku and his ridiculous stamina in this battle, Minato had a theory that the Amekage must be storing pre-prepared Sage chakra somewhere and accessing it mid-battle. Perhaps with Shadow Clones, which was a brilliant concept that Minato likely never would have considered. But with blood dribbling from his sockets and pain clouding his reason, the man who had betrayed Jiraiya's dream was vulnerable.

"Hokage." Rasa's voice didn't distract Minato, but he and Yahiko both stopped to consider the arrival of the Kazekage. The man was observing the battle from above on a cloud of gold dust, arms crossed and eyes disdainful. "You have this in hand?"

Minato looked to the west, where the blue flames of the Nibi were only growing fiercer. He was rather sure that Rasa only cared for his son as a military asset, not as a child, but there was a kind of concern there nonetheless. Yugito Nii was like Gaara, a host that had mastered their beast, but older and more experienced for it. The battle could be turning against him.

Yahiko snarled, preparing to attack again, but Minato wasn't concerned. He'd felt the anticipation of defeating a strong opponent enough before that he was one-hundred-percent sure of his victory.

"I-" he started to say, and then Nagato returned.

The Uzumaki had been flung away by Yahiko, Minato had gathered upon his return. At a guess, the vacuum effect of the Great Flame Exploding Winds Spiral Shuriken had damaged him internally, an effect that Yahiko's Sage Mode had prevented. Minato had been sure that Nagato and the Rinnegan would have been taken out of the fight for at least a couple minutes by consequence; no matter how superhuman shinobi were, internal damage couldn't just be toughed out.

But maybe Nagato was more than superhuman; simply not human. Because despite blood dribbling from his mouth and eyes, he re-entered the battlefield as a storm of chakra, a cannon bursting from his shoulder and firing a coherent purple laser up at both Minato and Rasa as he rushed to Yahiko's side.

Minato dodged; Rasa blocked. The Kazekage swirled overhead like a beautiful but deadly storm and Minato gained more distance, trying to ascertain the new situation. Two on two was still to their advantage with the Amekage's injuries, but it wasn't ideal. The rest of the assassination squad was still occupied, injured, or dead. Orochimaru was a lingering threat.

He had promised Jiraiya he wouldn't kill Nagato unless he had no other choice. Minato wondered if that point of no return was approaching, and if his sensei would forgive him.

"Yahiko," Nagato rasped, standing between his friend and the men who were trying to kill him. "Your eyes-"

"It's fine!" Yahiko snapped. "I can still see just fine!" He laid a hand on Nagato's shoulder. "You're-?!"

"Fine," Nagato said, obviously lying as Minato watched with interest. Rasa's gold dust was beginning to coalesce into a storm of needles, but he must have known that such techniques were useless against Nagato. The golden rain of blades was a means to occupy the Rinnegan with defense instead of attack, and a way to open the way for Minato. He understood what he had to do immediately.

"We have to kill them now," Yahiko said, and Minato felt a grin tug at the corner of his lips for just a second. "While the rest are gone."

"Unlikely," Rasa declared, and glittering blades began to rain down.

While Nagato was here, focusing on Yahiko was too dangerous; he had to be removed from the field first. Minato leapt off the building, ripping the brick he'd marked with the Hiraishin away with his foot as he did and hefting it in his hand. The man was pale, shaking; he raised one hand and a gleaming sphere absorbed most of Rasa's attack, draining away the Kazekage's chakra and leaving his gold dust inert. Some color returned to Nagato's cheeks, and in the back of his mind Minato was fascinated by the implications that the Rinnegan's technique didn't just nullify jutsu, it transformed the chakra into more of Nagato's and reinvigorated him.

He flipped head over heels and hurled the brick, breaking the sound barrier. Yahiko was watching him, his bloody face twisted in a snarl as his Wind blade grew longer and he lashed out, probably both to strike the brick out of the air and to break the Hiraishin marker.

Minato wasn't deterred. He flashed to the ad-hoc projectile's side with a Rasengan already in hand and redirected the invisible blade with his own screaming chakra. At the same time, Rasa launched another wave of golden attacks, confident that none of them would hit his ally.

The brick flew straight and true, right to the edge of Nagato's chakra absorbing technique, and then Minato teleported again.

It brought him to within five feet of Nagato, who whirled towards him. Slower than he'd been, and so far, far slower than he needed to be. The Rasengan guttered out, devoured by Nagato's bottomless appetite, and Minato felt the Rinnegan tug at his own body, ready to greedily devour his chakra. Almost out of knives, unable to perform jutsu, and probably, he realized with some tension, unable to teleport away. By all means, Nagato and Yahiko had him dead to rights.

Unfortunately, in his weakened state Nagato didn't have a mystical technique to prevent Minato from seizing the brick he'd thrown and, as the Hiraishin mark on it wilted away, smashing it into Nagato's ribs.

Minato felt several of them break. Nagato fell back with a wheeze, blood pouring from his mouth. The chakra absorbing field vanished, and golden blades began to rain down once more, digging into Nagato and Yahiko from every angle.

"Good," Minato grunted, not bothering to teleport away this time. He hurled himself at Yahiko with another Rasengan already forming, dancing through the blades as the Amekage spun towards the new threat. The blade flung out in a horizontal bisecting slice but Minato slipped past it, not bothering to teleport again; Yahiko, like Nagato, was slowing down.

He slammed into his fellow student and buried the Rasengan in his chest. Even with Sage Mode, a direct hit would tear Yahiko's insides apart and doom him, but Yahiko was still just quick enough to turn with the blow; the Rasengan ground away at his side but didn't make solid contact, only blowing a hole in his cloak and scouring the skin his abdomen.

But he was there, and Yahiko was off balance. Minato finally took the moment he'd needed from the start, and gently placed his hand fully against Yahiko's side.

The Hiraishin burned its way in, becoming a permanent tattoo, and then Minato was gone before Yahiko could counterattack.

He paused again, calling out to Rasa. "Go," he said. "I'll handle the rest."

The Kazekage didn't wait to confirm; he flew across the sky like a golden cloud towards the rampaging blue flames in the distance, and Minato refocused on his opponents. He'd expected Yahiko to either charge or wait, and his opponent was waiting. He understood that if he made the wrong move, Minato would pierce his brain; he also understood that his only hope was for Nagato to remove the seal, as he had done for Sakura.

But Nagato wasn't moving either. He was frozen, eyes wide and full of terror, blood dribbling from his mouth. He knew the moment he moved, Yahiko would die.

"Minato," he said. "This isn't necessary."

Minato frowned. "You know it is," he said, and Nagato closed his eyes, stricken by grief. "Anyway, you're not in a position to negotiate. The best thing you can do now is nothing."

"Hit us both, Nagato," Yahiko said. Minato cocked an eyebrow. "When he attacks, throw everything you've got. I can take it."

It wasn't a terrible idea, but it wouldn't work. The Amekage were running on fumes, but Minato estimated he'd only burned through fifty-three percent of his chakra, give or take five percent. His reflexes were still sufficient to dodge Nagato's ninjutsu.

"Even now, Yahiko?" Nagato said, not opening his eyes. "Even now, like this, you're still doing this?"

"There's no choice," Yahiko said with bared teeth. "I knew this could be the cost-"

Minato chose that moment to attack.

He appeared at Yahiko's side, Rasengan in hand, and slammed it into the man's spine as he started to turn. It made solid contact, and he felt one of Yahiko's vertebrae crack even through the protection of Sage Mode.

But hesitant or not, Nagato counterattacked, following Yahiko's wish. It wasn't the gravity wave that Minato had expected; rather, it was an attractive force that ripped Nagato and Minato off their feet and sent them hurtling directly into Nagato.

He teleported out with the Rinnegan's hungry chakra nipping at his heels, but realized Nagato's intent in the same moment.

So Minato returned, lashing out with the same Rasengan and trying to crush Yahiko's skull. The jutsu didn't make contact, devoured by Nagato's jutsu, but Minato was still able to dodge Yahiko's counterattack and slam his palm into the man's jaw, nearly dislocating it. His Sage Mode was finally fading, but-

Nagato had reached out and yanked the Hiraishin marker off his fellow Kage's side, like a man ripping off an inky bandaid.

With his mind working at several hundred thoughts per minute, Minato saw Nagato make an irrational decision. Instead of the ink whipping away in Nagato's hands, the Amekage stared down at it, melding it into his own chakra system.

Minato didn't hesitate.

'Nagato,' he thought.

'You must have known that if you tried that, I'd have to kill you.'

He had one marked knife left, an emergency backup, but there were plenty of completely ordinary kunai in the various pouches across his vest and pants, and it was one of those he pulled. Minato dashed in and drove it up with enough strength to pierce the heavens.

He was no longer worrying about what Jiraiya would think if he killed Nagato. The man hadn't given him a choice.

Unfortunately, Nagato did not die.

His opponent moved so fast that Minato almost laughed. A jet of flame burst from Nagato's hand and jerked it into a collision course with Minato's attack, and he didn't have time to alter its trajectory. The knife pierced straight through Nagato's palm and jabbed a half-inch into the Amekage's throat before Nagato's fingers closed around it.

There was an infinitely long moment where they stood there making eye contact as Minato tried to push the blade in far enough to finish the job, knowing both that having Nagato's hands on him could mean death and also that he couldn't afford to retreat an inch in this moment. The Rinnegan burned into him, a bottomless pool that threatened to crush him beneath an unfathomable weight, but his chakra wasn't drained. Nagato was focusing on something else, wheezing and pushing back as Minato poured every ounce of his strength into driving the kunai fully through Nagato's hand and into his throat.

Minato saw a spark of desperation and brilliance in Nagato's eyes, and realized he'd made a mistake.

Putting the man a half-inch from death, maybe for the first time in his life, had given him the push he'd needed.

Nagato's other hand came up, shakily running through four hand signs. Then, he disappeared.

Minato spun, acting entirely on instinct as Yahiko charged in. The man was now truly blind, and it was child's play to sweep his legs from under him and lash out with the now blood-stained knife to try and catch him in the skull on the way down.

But Nagato's hand caught Minato's before he could make contact, and for the first time in the fight, the Hokage cursed.

"Nagato!" Yahiko coughed out as he hit the ground and bounced, leaving a bloody mark. "Kill him!"

"No," Nagato said, his grip iron around Minato's wrist.

"What?!" Yahiko snarled, trying to pull himself back to his feet. Anyone else would have been paralyzed; Minato had to admire his endurance, if literally nothing else. "But-!"

"Yahiko," Nagato said, blood trickling from his throat as he glared down at the both of them. "Shut up."

Minato didn't care for their little spat. He was too busy considering the cold reality of the situation.

His greatest fear had come to pass. Right now, his priority should be killing Nagato as quickly as possible.

No, wait. That was selfish thinking. First, he needed to make sure that the Amekage didn't gather more advantages, and get more assistance for the fight. He needed Rasa, and probably Gaara too.

He teleported away to a nearby knife and broke into a sprint, heading towards the blue flames across the rooftops and spiraling pipes that made up Amegakure's skyscape. He heard a pop of air a moment later, and found Nagato chasing after him; space warped, pushed aside, and the Amekage flew through the air with impossible speed, rapidly gaining.

Nagato may have figured out the secrets of the Hiraishin, Minato mused as he fled, but not all of them. He still required hand-signs to execute the jutsu, and his teleportation wasn't instant. Obviously, he wasn't present in the border space from his perspective for more than the blink of an eye, but there was a delay in his arrival of about a second; a potentially fatal amount of time in battle between shinobi.

Still, that didn't change the nature of the catastrophe. The Flying Thunder God was one of the core pillars of Konoha's strength, and through Minato's own sloppiness and Nagato's genius an enemy had taken it.

Nagato clearly wanted to negotiate; he wasn't attacking. Right now, Minato couldn't tell if opening those talks or killing the man would be the right move. He'd have to take things moment by moment for the time.

The farther west he went, the hotter the air got; it was full of particulate, melted steel and shards of glass, and Minato held his breath and channeled chakra to his lungs to clear any debris that had snuck by before he'd noticed. Normal humans couldn't survive this sort of environment, but it wasn't quite severe enough for shinobi to require equipment. Not yet, anyway. Blue flames raged all around now, buildings slagged and buried in sand, and the roaring of great beasts echoed through the streets. Minato slung himself past a sagging skyscraper, catching himself and looking down one of the wide artery-like streets that ran the length of the city.

Despite being prepared for the sight, his heart still caught in his throat.

Creatures as large as Tailed Beasts weren't really meant to wrestle, but that was definitely what was happening. The Nibi, a cat made of incandescent blue flames, and the Ichibi, a tanuki of sand, clashed against each other again and again, crushing buildings beneath their bulk. There was a constant, deafening crackling of sand fusing into glass, but more and more pushed out and replaced it, Gaara launching attacks from somewhere within the Tailed Beast that hissed like fire of their own as the Nibi was pummeled with massive melting limbs.

Gaara was winning, Minato noted. Even though Yugito Nii had mastered her Tailed Beast, Gaara was winning. Did that mean he had made even more progress than her despite his young age, or was she impaired in some way? He had no way to know, and at the moment it was immaterial. The Kazekage was here as well, ensuring his son's victory. Golden loops restrained the Nibi, keeping it vulnerable as Gaara's Bijuu form pounded it with ever more vicious attacks, but thankfully Rasa stayed at a safe distance high above all the while.

Nagato was only a second behind him, but a second could be all he needed. The Nibi was in a position for a knockout blow; a large enough Rasengan could get the job done. Minato steadied himself, channeling chakra and preparing to leap.

But in that moment, Minato saw something that made his heart stop.

He was a rational man, a quick thinker who could adapt to almost any situation, but having two impossibilities stacked on top of one another proved too much for him. Because when golden chains burst out of a building behind Gaara and wrapped around him, dragging the tanuki to the ground and stilling its sand, Minato blinked, and froze.

He saw the flash of red through a window, a pale, terrified face lit by blue fire and golden light.

'Kushina?'

It wasn't Kushina. He knew that, of course. It had to be Karin Uzumaki, one of the many of Kushina's clan who'd been scattered across the world in their exodus from Uzushiogakure. Team Seven's report had mentioned her, but there had been nothing about her awakening the clan's Adamantine Chains. That had to be a recent development.

It was easy for Minato to analyze the situation, but impossible for him to act on it. He shifted his focus, but found himself unable to complete his leap. Crashing down on one of Kushina's clansmen and killing her in an instant was unthinkable; even though she was dooming the assault with her actions, killing one of Naruto's friends made Minato twitch violently enough that the bloody knife fell from his hand.

He heard a pop, and spun; Nagato had vanished from behind him. He'd been distracted, but the Amekage hadn't taken advantage of his lapse. As the Beasts raged and the Nibi fell on a prone Gaara while Rasa furiously rained down golden lances from the sky and Karin ran for more solid cover, Minato heard Nagato's voice echo through his mind and across the city.

'I recommend you surrender, Hokage, or all your ninja will die.'

He could feel Nagato's regret and determination through the telepathic link, and though Minato wasn't in Sage Mode he didn't need to be to instantly understand where Nagato had gone.

He sighed and teleported away, leaving Rasa and his son to their fate. Now, he was back across the lake, with the Yamanaka contingent and the Hiraishin kunai he'd left as a safety consideration.

A plan that had completely and totally backfired. Nagato was standing behind Fukuro, his impaled hand placed firmly on the top of her head. Invisible energy danced around it as blood dripped down her face but the Yamanaka was unharmed despite being obviously terrified. The chakra of the Rinnegan shone in her own eyes; Nagato had hijacked her jutsu, wired his chakra network into hers, and despite Nagato still being pale, sagging with his broken ribs, and covered in blood, Minato was very sure there was no way he'd be able to knock him off his subordinate before he crushed her skull or ripped out every drop of her chakra.

"Hokage," Nagato said, his voice whistling slightly through the hole in his neck. "I implore you." He looked around, obviously taking in the other Yamanaka members surrounding him. "I'd prefer to end this as quickly as possible."

"Every moment we talk, more of my ninja die," Minato said shortly, and Nagato nodded.

"So tell them to retreat," he said. Minato narrowed his eyes. Nagato was weakened, so this…

He was at a terrible crossroad. Before him were the responsibilities of the Hokage and the responsibilities of Jiraiya's inheritors. Here now was one of his peer students offering an impossible olive branch, a cease fire. But the Hokage couldn't afford to take that peace offering, not when he could push the advantage and decapitate the Hidden Rain that had so grievously betrayed him and Konoha. From a military perspective, Nagato could not be allowed to live.

But the man hadn't been speaking lightly. If Minato didn't surrender, the cost would be grotesque. Most likely, the entire assault force would die or be captured thanks to Nagato's newfound mobility. Minato was not so arrogant to believe he could kill the man without a fight, even in his weakened state. His mind was unfocused; his heart was at war. There was no correct solution to this dreadful problem.

'Today,' Minato thought, 'I'll save lives. Tomorrow, I'll face the consequences.'

He slowly moved forward, one step at a time as the other ninja watched in disbelief. To them, seeing the Yellow Flash give up had to be an experience of transcendent terror. The flame of Nagato's legend would rage out of control after this, but Minato's prestige did not matter nearly as much as the lives of Konoha's ninja.

He pressed his hand to Fukuro's forehead and found it slick with sweat. She made eye contact with him, and he gave a single firm nod.

Nagato's burning chakra bound them all together, and Minato sent out a short command with all the intensity he could manage, hoping to sear it into the minds of every ninja within a hundred miles.

'Shinobi of Konoha and Suna, retreat. Kill any that pursue you.'

He let his hand drop, and refused to let an interminable silence prosper. "Now what?"

Nagato sighed, refusing to drop his guard but obviously relieved. "Thank you," he said, gingerly releasing Fukuro's head. She stayed still, like a rabbit playing dead in the den of a wolf. "I'm not sure," he said.

"You're not sure?" Minato said, quiet and calm. He was running through every possibility he could think of, and Nagato voiced one of them.

"This has been a tremendous waste," Nagato said simply. "Against my wishes, against Konan's wishes. You were justified in this assault, Hokage. What my village did to yours can't be forgiven." He paused with a wheeze, and carefully wiped some blood from his lips. It was a sign of weakness, but not enough; Minato had no illusions that for now, the detente had to hold. "But there's no reason for it to continue."

"Give me Yahiko," Minato said. "And I'll consider that close to true."

Nagato hesitated.

"You won't," Minato confirmed.

"I won't," Nagato said. The Yamanaka were spreading out, anticipating an attack, but Minato held up a hand to stop them as Nagato continued speaking. He didn't want them to die. "Despite what he's done… Yahiko's important to me. I couldn't turn him over to be executed." He gave Minato a sad smile. "You've blinded him. His hatred literally blinded him. Can that be enough for now?"

"No." Minato shook his head. "Jiraiya told me that Yahiko launched the attack by himself."

"That's true."

"Then he's still dangerous," Minato said, feeling an indescribable cold settle over his mind and pour from his lips. "Even if you made a show of stripping his power, he'd maintain loyalists. He's a charismatic man."

"If you kill him," Nagato said, and Minato was surprised to find the same cold, the same power, in his peer, "you'll make him a martyr. The voice of a martyr can't be controlled; if he's alive, I can manage him. Consider that, Minato."

And Minato did consider it. It was a tempting fantasy: the firebrand brought to heel, rationality prevailing and peace prevailing as Rain and Leaf laid down their arms.

'But it is a fantasy,' he thought. 'The cycle has started now; there will always be those in Rain who hate Leaf, and those in the Leaf who hate Rain. Surrendering here will be seen as weakness, and so long as Nagato lives, my replacement is inevitable. Then, the conflict will begin again with a fresh generation, as it has time and time again.'

But the situation was fragile, his ninja in danger, and he was faced with a god crushed into the body of a man, and so Minato decided to lie.

"I won't pursue him," he said, and Nagato nodded. "For today, we'll bring this to an end."

Minato gestured to Fukoro and the rest of the Yamanaka. "Give a general retreat order," he said, and they obeyed without questioning, understanding the gravity of the situation. As a storm of telepathic commands began to pulse out, Minato drew closer to Nagato, who regarded him cautiously.

"How will you control him?" he asked, and Nagato understood that their negotiation had shifted. He lowered his voice, keeping himself far enough away to have a buffer from Minato's speed but respecting his wishes for privacy.

"He'll be imprisoned," he said. "Even with Konan out of the village, I have enough ninja for that. No one will question-"

"It will be questioned," Minato said. "That's the weakness of your trinity. It has not yet been challenged by a fractured front."

Nagato narrowed his eyes, but after a moment he nodded. "You're right. But regardless, I don't intend for Amegakure to continue this war. Our ninja won't enter the Land of Fire; we will focus on our true enemy."

"The Hidden Cloud."

"Yes." A tremor of anger ran through Nagato, and Minato crushed the impulse to take a step back. "Even with Yahiko's mistake, punishing Cloud should still be well within our power."

"You will return Gaara," Minato said, moving on, and Nagato paused, obviously pushing his senses out as he looked past the Hokage towards the city. Perhaps that was the moment Minato should have attacked, but it passed so quickly that even he would have been pressed to take advantage of it.

"He's been captured. His father was driven off," he said. Minato was torn between surprise and acceptance. That Gaara had been captured by the Adamantine Chains wasn't shocking, but he would have thought Rasa would have fought harder to save him. Karin Uzumaki must have received assistance after he'd departed; the Kazekage was strong, but he wasn't the kind of man who could fight an army on his own, not when the Nibi had been there too.

Nagato shook his head. "We won't release him," he said, truly surprising Minato for the second time.

"It will be difficult to justify a truce with you holding our ally's Jinchuriki hostage," Minato said shortly, but Nagato laughed.

"He's a mass murderer. That he was still walking free at all is a testament to the Land of Wind's complete amorality," Nagato said, a bit of fire creeping back into his voice as the cold rationality which threatened to overwhelm the negotiation melted away. "He was sent to the Land of Waves as an agent of the Daimyo; his crimes and the country's are one and the same. If his home and allies are unwilling to punish him, the Land of Rain will need to step in."

"That's not your place."

"We will make it our place," Nagato declared, and Minato realized that he wouldn't make any further progress on this. Nagato was making a moral declaration first and foremost; there wouldn't be any convincing him.

Minato conceded. "If Sand attempts to retrieve him, it will be done so without our knowledge."

"I'm sure," Nagato said, and Minato knew that both of them understood that his words couldn't entirely be truthful, but would have to stand for now. Some of the fire went out of him, and he sighed. "The attack is almost fully withdrawn. You should go, Minato. They'll need their leader."

Minato didn't spare a word as he turned to leave, but Nagato threw something after him. "You'll modify the jutsu formula, won't you?" he said, and Minato stopped. Nagato sighed. "It's an incredible thing, but..."

"But not one I can let you have. I will modify it, yes," Minato acknowledged, knowing that Nagato would understand the truth whether he lied or not. He thought the man would respond with some manner of bravado, like Yahiko would have, but instead Nagato stayed quiet.

"We've both drawn blood," he eventually said. "Can't we just pretend to be kids, and say that's enough?"

Minato paused, looked back. He could see two Nagato's: the god in the body of a man, unparalleled, ferocious, a force that could challenge the world alone, and another one of Jiraiya's students, a paradox of a ninja that had learned to kill for the sake of preventing death. They were laid over one another, existing in the same kind of equilibrium that Minato had built for himself.

"We're not children," he said, and Nagato sank in on himself. "Tend to your ninja, Amekage."

Nagato closed his eyes and vanished, whipped away by the Hiraishin, and Minato breathed out, preparing to face his failures.

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For a man who'd left his son in the hands of the enemy, the Kazekage's fury was impressive.

"You ran," he declared, making no effort to hide his disdain. Many of Sand's ninja had come to their leader's side in the confusion after the attack, and Minato felt he was facing the whole contingent that remained, nearly eighty ninja. They had spread out through the forest and the trees and shinobi of Konoha opposed them, including Rin and Sasuke, who had come straight to him after the psychic command. "You sacrificed both my Bijuu and my son."

"The Amekage's threat wasn't idle," Minato said, both noting the order Rasa had named his losses in and curious despite himself at how he was managing to keep collected even under these dreadful circumstances. "And I had no intention of letting him make good on it. Many more than your son would be lost if I hadn't chosen to negotiate, Rasa."

'Is something wrong with me? I hardly feel a thing.'

"He's the one we could not lose," the Kazekage bit out, his knuckles white. "A perfected Jinchuriki-"

"A mass murderer," someone behind Minato called out, and he glanced back, not immediately recognizing the voice. It was a member of the medical corp and one of Rin's assistants, Tanjiro, and he stood his ground despite the Kazekage's dark eyes flicking towards him.

"Hokage," Rasa said quietly, and his tone was so dangerous that despite his previous bravado Tanjiro didn't speak again. "You'd let one of your ninja speak to me in such a way?"

Minato weighed his options, and shrugged. He felt the ninja at his side tense, preparing for whatever would come.

"He's right," he said, and the whole Sand contingent shifted, whispers and dark muttering spreading rapidly. "Nagato made the same claim; it was his justification for not releasing him."

"Shinobi," Rasa said, looking like he might grind his teeth to dust, "cannot murder, nor be murdered. You of all people should understand that, Minato."

"Perhaps," Minato said. "But the decision has been made."

"Without our consent," Rasa said, and his shinobi nodded or voiced their assent, almost universally showing agreement. Minato wondered just what the character of the ninja who Rasa had decided to bring along on the assault were; he had noted long before that the Kazekage's other children weren't among them. "If this is how you treat an ally, well, how you treat your enemies seems a mercy." He looked around, catching the eye of several of his Jonin, and the nearest ones nodded.

"We're leaving," the Kazekage bit out. "Consider this the end of our alliance. Perhaps we will forgive you if you come to us on your knees, begging and scraping, and with an additional Bijuu to replace the one you've lost." The Kazekage sneered. "I'm sure the whole world will be fascinated to know the coward you've become, Minato."

Minato didn't spare a word. He just nodded, and Rasa's expression grew even more foul. Without another insult, he and his contingent turned and began to rush south to the Land of Wind.

Minato waited until they were gone to consider giving any new orders.

"If you have any Hiraishin kunai, drop them," he eventually said, the order and the confusion that accompanied it quickly spreading. "We're heading home."

"Minato," Rin said from his side, and he breathed in, turning towards her as the march began.

"Casualties?" he asked, and she shrugged.

"Not too bad. Only about a hundred, and three dozen of them dead," she said, rattling off the numbers with the efficiency only the head medical ninja could possess. "The retreat pulled together in good order."

Sasuke was there, Minato saw, watching everything quietly with bloodstained eyes. He'd been forced to burn more of his vision, probably fighting-

"Orochimaru?" he asked the both of them. Sasuke shook his head, while Rin frowned.

"He's dead," Sasuke said, and Minato let out a breath he hadn't known he'd been holding. "Or close enough to it. He… turned into a tree."

Jiraiya's teammate really had become a complete monster; torn apart by ancient chakra and petty jealousy. 'How could someone so brilliant,' Minato wondered, 'be so blind?'

But Orochimaru was now dead, or close enough to it, as Sasuke had said, so Minato permanently put him out of mind. He could see Jiraiya approaching, navigating through the shinobi spreading out as the march back to Konoha began in earnest. A light rain was drizzling down, masking what little sound they were making; it was a silent and shameful retreat.

"You did well," was the first thing Jiraiya said, and Minato almost spit.

"Yahiko's alive," he said, and he couldn't help but feel a bit of disgust when his master looked relieved.

'Does he not understand what that means? That this isn't over?'

He didn't, and he proved it. "Nagato will keep him under control," Jiraiya said with unearned confidence. "He's a wise man. Konan too. They'll get Rain back on the right track."

"I hope that's the case, sensei," Minato said, knowing it wouldn't be. "For now, it doesn't matter. Nagato stole the Hiraishin; I couldn't risk continuing the battle with that in his arsenal."

Rin, Sasuke, and Jiraiya all looked equally terrified, a terror that would surely race across the world when word of Nagato's victory spread, either by a triumphant Rain or a spiteful Rasa. But Minato could use that. It would make his enemies overconfident.

That was his initial thought. Minato could always find the silver lining in any situation. But the longer they marched, the longer the thought festered.

He'd failed. His life hadn't had many failures, if he was honest with himself. He hadn't lived a blessed existence bereft of strife, but whenever he'd put his mind to something, he'd accomplished it. But now, he'd finally met a man who'd stonewalled even him.

Minato had been labeled a thunder god, a god of war. But most pantheons weren't led by a god of war; war was subordinate to greater things, more fundamental physics and necessary pursuits.

Now, Minato couldn't help but think that Nagato was that greater god.

'He turned my strength against me,' he thought. 'No one else could. I thought my position was secure, that my secrets were safe, but that was a delusion.'

But then, that hadn't been his only delusion. He'd stood by and refrained from cementing Konoha's position as a hyperpower through rule of cruelty on the assumption that people would understand it was in their interest, not his, and Rain and Cloud both had rewarded that mercy with slaughter. He was the one with the divergent mind, the fear of himself, and now more than ever with Jiraiya's relieved look lingering in his mind it seemed to Minato that he was the only one who understood the true stake of things.

'How many more mass murders will there be?' he wondered. 'Waves, Rain, Konoha, and now, surely the Land of Frost, and many countries beyond. Stone will move soon, and the world will only plunge deeper into war. Even if our fight with Rain is done for the moment, the real war is about to begin. I thought they would be happy to accept a cold war where we spent money before lives, but everyone is thirsty for power and control, the means to remake the world in their image, to buy their people infinite security and freedom no matter how impossible their coexistence is.'

He was strong. Minato knew that. It was why he had been made Hokage.

'But am I strong enough? The Hokage is supposed to defend the village. The Hokage is supposed to carry on the Will of Fire. Have I really done that? Or were the Uchiha right? Did I waste these years waiting for a peace that will never come, blindly believing it would build itself?'

They left the Nation of Rain behind, but only physically. Minato was stuck there, dread weighing his soul down.

'Am I worthy of being the Hokage if I can't take that peace with my own two hands?`
 
It's way too late for me to give a detailed analysis but just wanted to say that this was excellent work as always Ser. The sheer terror of Nagato obtaining the Hiraishin was conveyed very well and I liked as even while Minato was facing the greatest defeat of his career (so far) he still felt powerful and that he had some agency until the last moment when he had to concede.
 
So now both Leaf and Rain have a blind founder that betrayed the village tucked away in a basement somewhere. Something, something something, but it's weird that it's happened twice.

The fight scenes were cool as hell, with move vs move vs countermove, bringing it down to earth with a brick to the ribs, then leaping right back out to army wide decisions. I'm unsure what exactly Nagato stealing teleportation means. The implication from the negotiations at the end was that Minato could basically un-steal it back, but I didn't really get how or why.

One thing that I found especially interesting was Minato refusing to kill Karin. It wouldn't have won him the battle. It was arguably already lost at that point. This was solely to deny assets to the enemy, and to maximize impact on his foes while a minimum of effort required. Exactly what being a ninja is all about.

Minato is defined by the contradictions between being the best shinobi and being a good person. He tries to be both, but the fact is that in a lot of cases, Minato chooses to be a ninja over being a person.

Yet here, he completely rejects being the shinobi ideal.

His reasons are entirely emotional. He sees his wife in Karin; he knows Naruto is friends with her. But it's enough to completely stop him in his tracks.

That reminder of the people he loves is enough to break him out of the ninja mindset entirely. And it's why he's one of the few old guard I can see who could actually live in a peaceful world. I don't think that Nagato could do the same.

And of course, as always, its only going to get worse before it gets better. Looking forward to whatever comes next, cause I sure as hell have no idea.
 
The fight scenes were cool as hell, with move vs move vs countermove, bringing it down to earth with a brick to the ribs, then leaping right back out to army wide decisions. I'm unsure what exactly Nagato stealing teleportation means. The implication from the negotiations at the end was that Minato could basically un-steal it back, but I didn't really get how or why.
It sounded like Minato would alter the technique and rewrite his markers to cut Nagato out of his network. Nagato would still have the old version (which, presumably, he would also alter to keep Minato out).
 
This was an absolutely amazing chapter @Ser_Serendipity . The look inside Minato's head and the peak ninja combat and the politics and all of it.

So many fascinating twists and turns. No-one really won here and everyone kind of walked away poisoned by their failure or having to deal with ugly realities with no easy solution.

Nagato now has a partial Hirashin which raises his threat level even higher and his legend is going to reach the stratosphere after he manages to make the Yellow Flash retreat but he hasn't really resolved anything.

Yahiko's blind (though Nagato can reverse that if he so chooses) and has doubled and tripled down on hatred and fanatic ideology, if Nagato makes good on his promise to put his old friend under house arrest then as Minato points out that's going to crack the foundations of Hidden Rain and run into the fact Yahiko will absolutely be able to sway people - have support. Since what just happened is only going to make any attempt by Konan and Nagato to isloate and constrain Yahiko's influence a 100 times harder. From the Rain perspective the Hidden Leaf came into their home and attacked them - killed their friends and families, clearly Yahiko railing against them and saying Rain should break the Leaf is right and proper in the face of this. Of course caught up in pain and hate the grief Hidden Rain members aren't going to be interested in looking outside themselves and admitting that Rain attacked Konoha first.

Minato was fucking terrifying, a god of war in human form pulling out artistry of death ninjutsu and wrecking everyone not Nagato he went up against but now he's been forced to take a loss in a way that sticks in his throat and which has huge consequences.

Part of the motivation for hitting back against Rain was to remind the other villages that Hidden Leaf isn't weak, that the Yellow Flash isn't something you can challenge but now Konoha and the Yellow Flash have been made to look weaker, the alliance with Sand is broken and Minato is jus stewing in a very bad headspace.

The worst thing that comes to mind? Minato probably thinks that he could have turned this around or atleast mitigated the disaster if he hadn't been constrained by morals and human connections.

Until Nagato got the Hirashin Minato was trying to not kill him out of a promise to Jiraiya and you can bet he looks back and thinks that he should have gone for the kill from the start. Minato when he was moving to save Gaara - met up with Rasa froze for a second when confronted by Karin due to not wanting to kill the spitting image of Kushina who was also Naruto's friend. You can bet when he's running over what he could have done differently in the future he will look back on hesitating and think that if he had just been that bit more ruthless he could denied Rain another jinchruki and kept Sand an ally.

Minato stewing in a loss of the kind he doesn't have experience with, bitter about all his dreams going up in smoke, actually kind of disgusted with Jiraiya now and all set to think his flaw-problem was that he wasn't inhuman enough is in the exactly the kind of headspace where Madara's "The Only Person Preventing You From Achieving Your Dream Is Yourself" and "Become Ruin Hokage" rhetoric starts sound appealing.

Minato deciding that Madara has a point and listening to that black hole of pessimism can only go epically bad places.
 
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I would love to analyze this further but my brain is a fine mush right now. Healthy Nagato is always interesting to read, but a Nagato in a world where Yahiko survived is even more interesting. I really like Yahiko's characterization here, it makes sense he would go this far considering the Pain philosophy was originally his, and his perspective was a lot more grounded and realistic than Nagato's (which makes sense, considering Nagato has the eyes of a god) more transcendental and sweeping take. Nagato being his foil while Konan acts as the more neutral balancer between them is a pretty perfect extension of the characters in a world that followed this one's trajectory.

Granted, Nagato's only recourse in suppressing Yahiko's influence might be going full living god a la canon, just with less steps. Turning Kumogakure into a second moon might do the trick.

Ohnoki might be as stubborn as an ass but he might be Minato's best bet in an ally, despite all the Iwa-nin he's killed. I get the impression that Iwa's combined hatred of Suna and Kumo outweighs its hatred of Konoha.
 
It's way too late for me to give a detailed analysis but just wanted to say that this was excellent work as always Ser. The sheer terror of Nagato obtaining the Hiraishin was conveyed very well and I liked as even while Minato was facing the greatest defeat of his career (so far) he still felt powerful and that he had some agency until the last moment when he had to concede.
I'm glad that came through! It was important to me that even when he was at a disadvantage, Minato still felt like he could potentially turn the situation around (if he were amoral enough to). Balancing those capabilities with his strategic loss here were part of the why the chapter took so long; he just felt too wimpy, for lack of a better word, on the initial draft, but I agonized for way too long over how to fix it.
So now both Leaf and Rain have a blind founder that betrayed the village tucked away in a basement somewhere. Something, something something, but it's weird that it's happened twice.

The fight scenes were cool as hell, with move vs move vs countermove, bringing it down to earth with a brick to the ribs, then leaping right back out to army wide decisions. I'm unsure what exactly Nagato stealing teleportation means. The implication from the negotiations at the end was that Minato could basically un-steal it back, but I didn't really get how or why.

One thing that I found especially interesting was Minato refusing to kill Karin. It wouldn't have won him the battle. It was arguably already lost at that point. This was solely to deny assets to the enemy, and to maximize impact on his foes while a minimum of effort required. Exactly what being a ninja is all about.

Minato is defined by the contradictions between being the best shinobi and being a good person. He tries to be both, but the fact is that in a lot of cases, Minato chooses to be a ninja over being a person.

Yet here, he completely rejects being the shinobi ideal.

His reasons are entirely emotional. He sees his wife in Karin; he knows Naruto is friends with her. But it's enough to completely stop him in his tracks.

That reminder of the people he loves is enough to break him out of the ninja mindset entirely. And it's why he's one of the few old guard I can see who could actually live in a peaceful world. I don't think that Nagato could do the same.

And of course, as always, its only going to get worse before it gets better. Looking forward to whatever comes next, cause I sure as hell have no idea.
I... did not consider the Yahiko/Madara parallel, but I will now pretend that was 100% on purpose. Truly, my brilliance doesn't even need to be conscious to work out. And yeah, regarding the jutsu-nabbing:
It sounded like Minato would alter the technique and rewrite his markers to cut Nagato out of his network. Nagato would still have the old version (which, presumably, he would also alter to keep Minato out).
Curiosity nailed it, in that Nagato and Minato will inevitably make their own teleportation networks to firewall the other guy. But of course, they both know that if the jutsu could be cracked once, it could happen again, so now there's potential for a critical technique development race between the two of them, which could end incredibly nastily for either. It's a mess and a half.

And I'm so happy the Karin scene stuck out. Minato's human attachments are what define him as a person, imo, when contrasted against his superhuman killing machine nature, so it's critical that struggle (and what ultimately proved the victor) be apparent, especially heading into the finale. Thanks for helping me feel like I know what I'm doing!

Until Nagato got the Hirashin Minato was trying to not kill him out of a promise to Jiraiya and you can bet he looks back and thinks that he should have gone for the kill from the start. Minato when he was moving to save Gaara - met up with Rasa froze for a second when confronted by Karin due to not wanting to kill the spitting image of Kushina who was also Naruto's friend. You can bet when he's running over what he could have done differently in the future he will look back on hesitating and think that if he had just been that bit more ruthless he could denied Rain another jinchruki and kept Sand an ally.
It's truly awful how Minato's "failures" are being shoved in his face (though to be honest, I as the author consider him not attacking Karin at that moment a triumph that he hopefully holds tight to), especially when he's tried so hard for so long to respect his own humanity and others autonomy. I guess that's just how the world challenges ideals, though. You'll inevitably end up in a situation where you feel like your morals held you back unless you're a complete monster, and when you have the power to command something like Konoha... well, that challenge is even more difficult.
I would love to analyze this further but my brain is a fine mush right now. Healthy Nagato is always interesting to read, but a Nagato in a world where Yahiko survived is even more interesting. I really like Yahiko's characterization here, it makes sense he would go this far considering the Pain philosophy was originally his, and his perspective was a lot more grounded and realistic than Nagato's (which makes sense, considering Nagato has the eyes of a god) more transcendental and sweeping take. Nagato being his foil while Konan acts as the more neutral balancer between them is a pretty perfect extension of the characters in a world that followed this one's trajectory.

Granted, Nagato's only recourse in suppressing Yahiko's influence might be going full living god a la canon, just with less steps. Turning Kumogakure into a second moon might do the trick.

Ohnoki might be as stubborn as an ass but he might be Minato's best bet in an ally, despite all the Iwa-nin he's killed. I get the impression that Iwa's combined hatred of Suna and Kumo outweighs its hatred of Konoha.
Ame going full theocracy at this point would be interesting, but it would certainly thread the needle on keeping the village together without directly undermining or ejecting a member of the trinity of Amekage. Maybe Yahiko will just go full Devil In The Basement, in contrast to the god above? I've left enough open that while I know how things are ending, the journey there is full of twists even to me (in fact, the next chapter has already surprised me twice).

Thanks for the comments everyone!
 
Chapter 81: Legacy
Can Scavenge Whatever They Need
It wasn't until they started sifting through its rubble that Tenten realized that she'd never visited Sakura's house when it had still been standing.

She'd dropped by, of course, been inside, but never really visited, spent time there. It was a little thing, but it filled her with melancholy as she turned aside shattered drywall and lifted up what had once been a refrigerator. In the weeks since the attack, much of the village had been cleaned up, but there were still ruined homes that hadn't been cleared, and that especially went for the places Kimimaro had rampaged.

Technically, the place had been declared a biohazard. She and Sakura were both shinobi so they hadn't been kept out, but being here wouldn't be safe for some time. Even if the terrifying Rain ninja that had almost killed Neji and their sensei was dead, his bones were still alive, and they reacted violently to being touched. They'd been spread across this whole neighborhood and several others like a grisly forest, white trees and shrubs transforming parts of Konoha into an alien landscape. Removing them all would probably take months or even years considering how hard they were to destroy. Despite that, Sakura sifted through the ruins of her home in an apparently light mood, humming something to herself under her breath as she picked through a former life.

It was unsettling, Tenten thought. But since that day, Sakura had been unsettling in general. She'd been sad and split before Haku had shown his face, but that bastard had broken something for her; now, she was both distant and driven, fiercely present but feeling like she was autopilot at the same time. It wasn't like the girl Tenten had become best friends with at all.

It wasn't the first time she'd felt a surge of self-loathing for being weak enough to lose the rematch and force Sakura into a position she never should have been put in, but Tenten was getting better at pushing the feelings away. Gai-sensei had told her there wasn't any point in regretting doing her best, and Tenten was doing her best to accept that.

Still though. It sucked.

"It was under your bed?" she asked for the second time, and Sakura nodded as she gingerly rotated a crushed washing machine to peek inside.

"Last I saw it," she confirmed. "But my mom might have moved it."

"She woke up, right?" Tenten asked, and Sakura nodded. "That's good."

"She still sleeps, most of the day," Sakura said, sounding like her parents were the least of her concerns. "Dad spends most of his time with her. Everyone says it's a miracle she's alive."

Tenten, who'd never known her parents, felt the urge to scream for just a second to see if she could get Sakura to snap out of it, to appreciate what she still had. But she knew it wasn't the right thing to do, so after a moment the urge faded and she forced out a laugh. "Well, they're right about that," she said. "I mean, that guy almost killed Neji. Compared to a lot of people, your mom did pretty well."

Sakura looked over with a soft smile. "Well, that's true. She did hit him. That's pretty impressive."

They searched for a bit longer in silence before Tenten had another question.

"What'll you do if it's destroyed?" she asked, and that made Sakura pause for a second. Tenten stopped too; Sakura wasn't even breathing. It was like she was frozen in ice.

Then she jerked back into motion, like a movie with a damaged reel. "I guess I'd be disappointed," she said with a little, fake sounding laugh. "It wouldn't change much. I don't really need it. I just think it might come in handy." She let out another, real laugh. "And besides, it survived what happened in Rain. Compared to that, this doesn't seem like much."

"They make the uniforms tough, huh?" Tenten joked, and Sakura started digging with renewed energy.

"Really tough. Fireproof, stab proof, non-reflective… as tough as the Nation, I guess," Sakura said, a statement that Tenten instinctively wanted to challenge but had to consider true enough. After all, Rain had survived whatever Cloud's weapon was, devastated the Hidden Leaf, and pushed back the counterattack. The people leading it might have been dipshits of the highest caliber, but its ninja were tough as nails. Haku was dead, but he'd definitely been proof of that.

They turned over rubble for another couple minutes before Tenten's hand brushed something soft. She paused, checking to make sure it wasn't a weird bone spur set to impale her, and found a red cloud staring up at her.

For a moment, she had the urge to hide it. She could bury it while Sakura wasn't looking, and bury the Akatsuki and what they'd meant to her friend with it. But the thought was crazy. Sakura's beliefs wouldn't change regardless of whether she found her uniform or not, and if she really was going to the Land of Frost, it could help her out. So Tenten, ever pragmatic, shoved aside what had once been a kitchen counter and carefully drew the uniform out, shaking it off a little to dislodge some of the dust and rubble.

"Sakura?" she asked, turning to find her friend staring at her. Tenten felt a chill. How long had Sakura been watching? Had she noticed the moment of hesitation? "Got it."

"Great!" Sakura said, standing up and dusting herself off. "Still in one piece?"

Tenten looked it over. It was; the uniform had survived the destruction of Sakura's home without a scratch. She wasn't much for superstitions, but that struck her as a particularly ominous omen. Still, that didn't keep her from folding it up and handing it over to Sakura with deference. Tenten couldn't tell if it was mocking or not, and Sakura clearly didn't care. She took the uniform gingerly, some stress seeping out of her, and Tenten looked her over. She wished that she looked as relaxed as Sakura, but instead her whole body just ached more.

"If I was cleared for duty, I'd go with you, you know," she said, and Sakura smiled.

"I know," she said. "But from how Naruto talks about her, I don't think disobeying Tsunade would be a good idea."

"She's not what I expected," Tenten admitted. "I told you she'd inspired me, but she's so…"

"Selfish?" Sakura asked, and Tenten shook her head as she carefully stepped out of the rubble towards the street.

"It's not that. She's just not driven, I guess. She has this incredible talent, but it's like she resents it. I thought that one of the legendary Sannin would have more pride in their work."

"She's had a complicated life," Sakura said with a shrug.

"I guess," Tenten said doubtfully. "But now… well, it doesn't matter. You're leaving later today?"

"That's the idea," Sakura confirmed. "Sasuke's finishing up some stuff with the hospital and his family, and Naruto's with his family. We're going to grab Jiraiya and be out by nightfall."

Tenten hesitated as they reached the street, and this one Sakura definitely noticed. "What?" she asked.

"What are you trying to do there, Sakura?" she asked, and once again she saw Sakura stutter, freeze up.

"It's my mission," she seemed to eventually decide.

"Your mission is finished," Tenten said gently, but Sakura shook her head.

"I found out what happened to the Nanabi," she said. "But that isn't what the mission turned into. Rain's attack failed; Leaf's counterattack failed. Neither side knows what to do next, but if no one does anything, we're just going to keep killing each other for no reason. Just like…" She paused, swallowed, and even though Tenten silently begged her to say the name Sakura moved on without acknowledging what was choking her. "So my mission's not finished. Not until the war's over for good."

"That's not your responsibility," Tenten said, and now Sakura frowned.

"It had to be someone's," she said. Tenten couldn't help but gape at the audaciousness of the words. "So I'll make it mine."

"And Naruto and Sasuke?" Tenten said, trying to get Sakura to just say the whole of what she was saying, to get her to see the insanity of it, but Sakura kept moving forward without hesitation.

"They're part of this too. All of us, we're the only ones who can do this because of what we've been through," she declared, sounding a little angry. "I don't like it, Tenten. I can feel it separating us from everyone. Me from you, cause you don't get it, and us from Obito. Even our own sensei can't completely understand us anymore, because he wasn't there. He didn't see what Cloud did; he didn't have to-"

Once again, the freeze. This time, it lasted long enough that Tenten started to raise her hand before Sakura snapped out of it. "You know what I mean," she said. "Even if you can't understand why I feel that way, you have to understand that we're different now. If anyone can make Rain understand why they need to stop, it's me, Naruto, and Sasuke."

It struck her dumb for a minute. But only a minute, because what Sakura was saying finally gave Tenten the courage to speak her mind.

"But Sakura," she said, the sun beating down on both of them. "What about me?"

Sakura stopped. "What about you?" she asked, sounding genuinely confused.

"I'm the Leaf. And why should we stop?" Tenten asked. Sakura stared at her with dawning horror, the first genuine show of emotion besides frustration she'd shown all day. "Rain attacked us. They killed the Third Hokage, almost killed Hinata and Choji and Neji and Lee and Kiba. Naruto's mom, your mom, that Kimimaro guy put both of them in a coma. If it hadn't been for the Fourth, a ton more people would be dead. And now, he's been driven off by Rain?" She let some heat creep into her voice. "Why should we stop? They're just going to do this again, and that time they'll know how to beat the Hokage with whatever trick they pulled."

"But…" Sakura faltered. "It was a misunderstanding…"

"Who cares?" Tenten said, not trying to be cruel but unable to not be blunt. "If you kill someone in an accident you're still responsible for it, and it's not like this was a mistake. A thousand ninja don't wander into a village and massacre it by accident. Rain made itself the Leaf's enemy for no reason, and now you're trying to make peace with them? Just because you lived there for a year? Was it really that great, being away from us?"

Sakura took a long time to respond. Tenten dreamed that maybe she'd made her friend see sense.

"Do you think war is better than peace?" she eventually asked, and Tenten couldn't help but scoff.

"If you make peace without getting justice, haven't you just put the war on hold?" she said. Sakura flinched.

"We've both hit each other," she said. "That should be enough."

"It's not," Tenten said. "You can do whatever you want in Frost, Sakura. I hope it makes you feel better. But even if you do convince Rain to sue for peace once and for all, everyone here is going to remember what they did." She gestured to the forest of bones that surrounded them. "They left a mark that couldn't be scrubbed off. Whatever you're doing, you're doing for yourself, not for some idea of peace. If you keep thinking this is some sort of mission that only you and your team can do, you're just going to keep isolating yourself. I can't follow you to Frost, and I wouldn't be able to forgive Ame alongside you."

This time, Sakura didn't freeze. It was then that Tenten knew that for now she'd lost her friend to something deeper and darker than she could understand.

"If I have to do it alone," she said, cold as Haku had been, "then I'll do it alone. It's important enough that there can't be another answer."

The gulf between them grew; Tenten felt like the world was rushing away, the space separating her from Sakura racing out into a vast canyon. She couldn't understand her friend anymore, and Sakura couldn't understand her. Her friend's guilt at killing Haku and her desperation to keep anything like it from happening again had consumed her, and now they didn't have a shared language. Sakura wasn't even a ninja of Konoha now; she was basically a rogue, adrift between two countries and belonging in neither of them, and she was determined to run off to a warzone to try and find a place for herself in a world that had destroyed every home she'd had.

What could she say? Was there anything she could say to make Sakura understand that she loved her, that she cared about her, that she just wanted her to scream or cry or do anything to show that she was still alive and that she didn't need to crush herself under an impossible quest to atone for something that Tenten's own weakness had forced her to do?

If there was something to say, Tenten couldn't come up with it. She searched desperately for the panacea, but it didn't exist.

The friendship cracked; the world split. Sakura walked away without another word, tucking the Akatsuki uniform under her arm and picking up speed, leaping up onto the rooftops and, like the sun dipping below the horizon, vanished from Tenten's life.

###

"A tree?" Mikoto shifted, favoring her left arm. Despite the time that had passed since the battle of Konoha, the wounds Kimimaro had dealt still bothered her, and she wore a medical patch over one of her eyes. Even now, it was sore and sensitive to light; that might have been her new normal. With a patch of his own, Obito felt like he was a strange mirror of her. One man stepping towards eternal light, and one woman towards eternal darkness.

It was a melancholy thought, but he didn't let it drag him down. "What caused it?" he asked. Sasuke and Rin glanced at one another. The four of them were seated in the living room, Rin with a beer in hand. She and Sasuke had returned mostly unharmed from Amegakure to his relief, but Obito couldn't help notice that every once in a while, Sasuke was squinting at bright lights or deep shadows.

He'd used his eyes facing Orochimaru. Even if he hadn't said so, it was obvious.

"I burst his tenketsu," Rin admitted. "I'm no Hyuuga, but any decent medical ninja could have done with the state he was in. His body ran out of control, but I didn't expect him to turn into… whatever that was."

Obito pondered, keeping an eye on Mikoto first and foremost. He was searching for some sign of recognition, but none came. It was all the confirmation he needed; what he'd read on the tablet had only been visible to the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. The only people who could possibly have context for what Rin and Sasuke were saying were himself and Madara Uchiha.

"What is it, Obito?" Rin asked, and he shook his head, making the fateful decision. "You look constipated. Trust me, it was grosser than whatever you're imagining."

He laughed, getting a satisfied grin out of Rin. "It's not that," he said. "Frankly… I'm not sure what it is." He leaned forward, taking all the room's attention. "But him turning into a tree has got me worried. Remember, Madara said that the First Hokage's flesh did the same thing, and the stone below Nakano Shrine, well, it described something similar."

Mikoto didn't seem surprised that Obito had told Rin about the tablet, which was good, because if she'd made an issue of it he would have laughed at her. "You saw something?" she asked urgently. "With your eyes-?"

"I did," Obito admitted. "I didn't care about it much at the time with Madara rambling about his Infinite Tsukuyomi, but I guess it matters a lot more. There was a legend there about a divine tree that was a font of chakra, which became the Ten Tails and ran amok when a woman stole chakra from it."

"A woman?" Sasuke asked, seeming somewhere between curious and fed up. Obito shrugged.

"The tablet claimed it was a princess named Kaguya; the Sage of Six Path's mother."

"Like the clan?" Sasuke asked, raising an eyebrow.

"Maybe. It could just be a coincidence, though," Obito said. "Considering how they ended up, I find it hard to believe those wackjobs could be descended from the Sage." He frowned. "Kagami is still in captivity; I suppose we could ask her. She was rejected from the clan, but if they had any founding myths, she might have been told them as a child."

"Maybe," Rin said, sounding doubtful. "So the Ten Tails started out as a tree?"

"That's the Uchiha's legend. It's what Madara believes, anyway," Obito said ruefully. "And considering what Kushina has confirmed with… the Kyuubi, well, the legend's seem to be more accurate than not. And that, plus the First Hokage's affinity… Orochimaru turning into a tree is…"

He stopped, not sure if he could find the right word. Interesting? Terrifying? It was both, and far more beyond.

"He did say I was close when I mentioned Kimimaro," Rin said. The mystery was clearly fascinating to her; she never could leave something like that alone, which was just one more thing Obito found attractive about her. "Between that, his rambling about immortal chakra and the Rinnegan…" She laughed. "What, you think he'd almost turned himself into something like the Tailed Beasts? Or what the Tailed Beasts were, before? Close enough that when his body fell apart, it returned to an 'original' form?"

"I have no idea." Obito had no interest in trying to sound smarter than he was, so he chose honesty instead. "But turning into a tree studded with eyes is horrible enough that it makes me wonder." He scratched the scar on his chin, leaning back. "It's a combo of the Uchiha and the Senju… the two clans descended from the Sage's son, right? I dunno if the Senju had anything like our tablet; that might be a question for Tsunade, if she were willing to share. But the Shodai had control over nature, and his trees are still standing in places like the Forest of Death. It does seem like there's a connection; trees, the Sage and his sons, the Tailed Beasts, maybe the princess Kaguya and the Kaguya clan. Not to mention him calling Madara and Hashirama's chakra different from everyone else's. There's something binding them all that we're missing, that not even Madara knew about."

With the whole room staring at him, Obito grew self-conscious. "I think, anyway," he clarified. "I might just be trying to tie everything together for the sake of it. It feels less frightening that way, right?"

"It's frightening in different ways," Mikoto said simply, and she was right. "Do you think Orochimaru was speaking of Madara's Will when he spoke of divergent chakra? The Black Zetsu?"

"I think that's the most likely possibility," Obito said. Sasuke nodded with him, but spoke up nonetheless.

"But he mentioned Hashirama as well," he said. "And I don't think the First's shadow ever came alive." He paused. "Unless, well, it did, and no one ever learned about it?"

"A White Zetsu to the Black?" Rin suggested. Obito chuckled.

"Maybe? It's impossible to say now."

"You think we made the wrong decision?" she asked with an arched eyebrow, but Obito shook his head.

"No. I think if Orochimaru had managed to crawl away, even as our prisoner, it would only have been for the worst. Sensei didn't question it, right?" he said. Rin shrugged.

"He didn't. But he was out of it. You've spoken with him?"

"Only a little. But I'll be talking to him about this," Obito confirmed, and everyone in the room nodded in agreement. "Even if Orochimaru's dead, or close enough to it, what he became means his last words were worth listening to."

"Do you think it really matters?" Sasuke asked.

'The world pours things into people beyond hatred, and if you can't understand what those things are, you'll never see what's coming.'

"It does." Obito surprised himself with the confidence in his voice, and Sasuke straightened up. "Whatever Orochimaru was onto is tied into the roots of this whole mess. If we can figure out what it was, we'll have a better idea of how to save Itachi… and maybe how to navigate whatever's going on with Rain. It's-"

There was a knock at the door, and Obito paused, glancing over. After a moment, Mikoto spoke; it was her house, after all.

"Come in."

An Uchiha poked her head in, a woman named Yari that Obito barely knew. She'd distinguished herself in the attack on Konoha after awakening her Sharingan at the relatively late age of twenty-one, and since then had taken to wearing a thin blindfold, apparently overwhelmed by her new visual acuity. "My apologies, Lady Mikoto," she said quietly. "There are some visitors: the Jonin Commander, and some of his advisors. They said they're here to speak with Lord Obito."

Too respectful by a wide margin, and not a title anyone in the clan would have ever used for him even a year ago; especially a year ago, after what had happened with his team. Obito did his best not to react, but he did stand up. "Shikaku's here?"

Yari inclined her head. "We did not want him to stress himself, so we had him wait by the compound entrance."

"We'll finish this later, then," Obito said, and the room nodded in agreement. "I'll report to Skikaku and the Hokage, and we'll figure it out from there. Rin, you're staying?"

"Just for a bit," she said with a smile. "I'll catch up to you."

"Careful what you say, Obito," Mikoto chided as he turned away.

"Don't you think we've kept enough secrets?" he said, and caught a glimpse of Sasuke and Rin's hidden smiles as he left. Yari stepped respectfully aside, and then followed him a step behind like a retainer as he made his way through the compound.

She was quiet, moving silently like a proper shinobi, but Obito could feel her anxiety. He glanced back at her, and she looked away as if she were afraid to meet his quenched eye.

"Something wrong?" he asked, and she shook her head.

"No."

"You're sure?" he asked, genuinely curious, and she nodded. "Okay then."

They were about halfway to the entrance when his curiosity flared back up again, and he spoke against his better judgment.

"Why 'lord?'" he asked. Yari slowed down. "Just curious, that's all."

"It seemed appropriate," she said after a moment.

"It's not what I'm used to," he said.

"You and Lady Mikoto are the de facto clan heads at this point," Yari explained after another pause. "When your team defected, there were… doubts… but they came back such splendid shinobi that it was obviously the intention from the start: to steal our enemy's secrets and teachings."

She glanced over at him. Her Sharingan was visible through the blindfold in faint red lights, and Obito remembered when he had just awoken his own eyes, how addicted he'd been to the feeling of chakra burning in his temple and the razor sharp clarity that had suffused all of existence. "And now, with you having inherited your brother's eye… I don't think I'm the only one who feels ashamed of their ignorance. You have always been one of the greatest of the Uchiha, Lord Obito. The fact that the Jonin Commander himself is here to call on you is only further proof of that. You deserve more respect than we could possibly muster to make up for our past wretchedness."

Obito was too stunned to put together a proper answer, so after a moment he just nodded and said "I see," instead of anything particularly clever. Yari seemed to find that appropriate, and they reached the compound entrance without exchanging another word.

Obito dismissed Yari with a gesture and she departed as he pushed through the small, unlocked door beside the great gates. He'd expected Shikaku on the other side, and with company: he hadn't expected that company to be Koharu and Homura, the withered advisors and former comrades of the Third Hokage.

Obito paused, feeling like he'd stepped into a bear trap, and Shikaku gave him a deadly serious nod. "Glad you could join us. Do you have time to take a walk?" He gestured down at the wheelchair he'd been stuck in for the past week. "Well, you know what I mean."

"A walk?" Obito asked. He liked Shikaku and especially respected the man's strategic genius, but the situation was rubbing him wrong. "What for?"

"There are some things we wish to discuss," Koharu said, her voice as blunt as usual. "You're not obligated if you don't wish to, Obito Uchiha."

"Jeez, okay," Obito muttered. The grudge he'd felt against the advisors might have faded after working with them to clean up the village, but he still didn't enjoy their company. "Let's take a walk then."

The journey towards the village proper was along a paved path that wove through one the preserved forests and past several training fields. The way was a short one for a ninja, but a ninja in a wheelchair was a different story. Obito walked slowly alongside Shikaku, with Homura on his left and Koharu at Shikaku's right, and as they meandered they spoke to one another in quiet tones.

"You're healing well," he led off with, and Shikaku scoffed.

"I'm healing. I don't know if I'd call it 'well,'" he said, shifting an obviously stiff neck. "Still can't feel anything below my chest."

"Tsunade said it would come back, if I recall. Naruto told me that, anyway," Obito said. Shikaku grunted, but after a moment nodded.

"I'm sure. It's just frustrating," he said. "And how about you? Your eyes feeling better?"

"I think so." Obito was doing his best to be genuine, but the sinking feeling wasn't going away. "Rin thinks it will be fully healed in five or six days. Though the chakra network still isn't fully developed, so I get the feeling it's gonna itch like hell soon."

"That's great," Shikaku said, sounding both sincere and distant. "And you're feeling good in general, aside from that?"

"Okay, what's up?" Obito said, already fed up.

"Have you seen the Hokage since he returned from Ame?" Homura asked, adjusting his glasses. Obito narrowed his eye.

"Briefly. I was going to go speak with him after this, actually."

"He is handling his defeat in Amegakure poorly," the man said bluntly. Obito felt his face twitch into a sneer, but managed to quell it.

"He wasn't defeated," he said, and now it was Homura that was hiding a sneer, though not nearly as well. "He made the decision to retreat before lives were carelessly spent."

"Yahiko lives," Koharu rasps, "and Nagato stole the Flying Thunder God from under Minato's nose. A more conclusive defeat, there has never been in the Fourth's history."

"That's because there haven't been any others," Obito said with a laugh. "Seriously? This is what's happening?" He directed the scornful question at Shikaku. "Sensei doesn't perform perfectly a single time, and these old folks already want to put him out to pasture?" Now, he let the sneer out. "He's been a bulwark against war for more than a decade now; the village has never been on better terms with the Daimyo's court, and even after Rain's attack, no one doubts we're the strongest in the world. I'm sure of that. Is that what this really is about, Shikaku?"

Shikaku stopped, steepling his fingers as he gave Obito an honest look. "It's not come to that. Not nearly," he said, and Obito blew out a frustrated breath. "But there are concerns. What happened in Amegakure has just brought them to a head, that's all."

"What kind of concerns?" Obito said, trying to stay in control, to stay calm. Shikaku sighed.

"I know he's your teacher, Obito. I didn't come here to offend you," he said, which only really offended Obito more. "The conflict with Rain is complicated. With both villages being led by Jiraiya's students, there's always been an uncomfortable personal connection. The Daimyo is aware of that, and frankly, the Jonin are too."

"Minato's been handling it," Obito declared, and Shikaku shook his head.

"I've seen Minato handle everything the world threw at him. He's been a sterling Hokage, a worthy successor to the Third. The Demon Lands Crisis, the assassination of the Guardian Ninja, the tariff wars in the Land of Grass: Minato handled that. He was decisive; none of us could second guess him." For the first time, Shikaku seemed to take a moment to think and choose his words with utmost care. "But when it comes to Rain, he's been compromised."

"His son blindsided him completely," Koharu said roughly. "Running off on that mission; Minato never saw it coming."

"Kushina did," Obito said, but Koharu just laughed.

"And didn't share her insight, which is its own problem. She had a woman's intuition: she recognized his stubbornness, perhaps. It doesn't matter," she said, moving on and ignoring Obito's obvious distaste at her outdated declaration. "Your team's wholesale defection to the Land of Rain unsettled him, and when Cloud attacked he put their safety before information gathering, which they had been sent there for in the first place." She held up her hand, preempting his objection. "It was your desire as well, and one we cannot blame you for. But it is a father's job to worry for his child, a teacher's job to protect his students. It is the Hokage's job to make the difficult decisions for the betterment of the village."

"That alone would not have moved us," Homura said, picking up the verbal combo so fluidly that Obito couldn't help but be impressed. It was like he was being attacked from two sides at once, blows slipping through despite his best efforts. "But his lapse in allowing the village to be assaulted-"

"What?" Obito bit out. "What, should he have read Yahiko's mind? He attacked without even most of the Nation of Rain knowing about it!"

"But the assault was nearly a success because Minato had departed on a pointless diplomatic effort," Homura said. He was so calm that Obito found it hard to believe it was his real feelings. "He was desperate to forge a false peace with Rain because they were both students of Jiraiya, and so he believed they could understand one another. But can you look at what happened, and say that is not a mistake?" Now Homura's anger became obvious, though still subtle. "Yahiko took advantage of his sentimentality, and the village suffered for it. The summit was worthless; with any other village, Minato would have known to simply secure Konoha and wait for the situation between Cloud and Rain to resolve itself, rather than stepping out and risking a bite by a rabid dog. And now-"

"I won't hear this," Obito said. "It's insane-"

"It's not." Shikaku's voice cut through Obito's burgeoning rage. The man looked heartbroken, and that was enough to keep Obito from fully going off. "It happened again in Amegakure. Yes, it's admirable that Minato worked to save as many lives as he could." Shikaku Nara was a kind and thoughtful man, but the Jonin Commander was as tough as steel and spared nothing but cold logic for every situation, and it was the latter that was watching Obito with a sorrowful look. "But that wasn't the mission; we did not dispatch more than seven hundred ninja with the expectation they would all return. That's the dreadful reality of war."

The cruel words brought pause to them all, but Shikaku continued without any mercy. "The Minato we know could have won that battle, Obito. You know that. Even if Nagato stole the Flying Thunder God, even if he used it to kill many of our ninja, Minato would have won. He had the Kazekage: he had a Jinchuriki, and Jiraiya, and hundreds of skilled ninja at his side. The cost would have been steep, but he would have won, and Rain would no longer be a threat."

"Instead, they're a greater danger than ever," Koharu cut in, ever the sharp-tongued elder. "Now, it's not just the Hokage's judgment that is compromised, but his greatest technique as well. It's no exaggeration to say the situation is catastrophic."

Obito stopped, and the others did as well. They watched him, waiting for a reaction, but he didn't give them one. Instead, he took a deep breath.

"Shikaku, you stay here," he eventually decided. "You two, leave."

"Don't think you can dismiss us so easily, Obito," Koharu said, bristling. "We-"

"You're not helping," Obito said. "Frankly, you're just pissing me off. But I want to finish this conversation. You can leave, or I can."

Homura moved to say something, and Obito shifted his eye to him. The man froze, blinked, and backed down. Obito was sure that last week there would have been no concession, but times had changed.

"Koharu," Homura said after a moment. "We'll finish this later. If he wishes to speak with Shikaku alone, that won't be a problem."

Koharu looked like someone had just handed her a plate of rusty nails for dinner, but when Homura turned to leave, she followed without even sparing a nasty look. Obito watched them walk away, sure that they were trying to eavesdrop, not speaking until the elder's had gained some real distance along the path.

He swiveled, crouching down in front of Shikaku to bring them eye to eye. The Jonin Commander was resolute, not shifting from his gaze.

"Why are you telling me this?" Obito asked.

"You know why," Shikaku said, his voice a whisper. "You're not as clueless as you act, Obito."

"I want to hear you say it," Obito said, just as quiet.

Shikaku considered his words carefully. "There hasn't been any pressure. Not yet. Lord Sugawara adores Minato, but his court is already reacting to the failure to punish Rain, and us initially ignoring the bounty for freeing Rain's Daimyo. There have always been members of the government convinced that Minato had sympathies for the Nation of Rain, and was dangerous for it: what Homura and Koharu spoke of, and my own concerns, will just be the spark that lights the fire."

"The Daimyo will try to remove sensei?" Obito confirmed, a question that wasn't a question. Shikaku nodded.

"Obviously, he does not have the power to do so directly. But with a war on the horizon… government missions are only going to get more lucrative, and he will direct those as his court demands. Konoha would suffer; the reconstruction isn't proving cheap, and with the existing casualties…" Shikaki sighed. "If the worst comes, a replacement will have to be found."

"Who did you have in mind?" Obito asked.

Shikaku stared at him.

"Seriously?" he asked. Obito frowned.

"What?" he said, but it was already slowly dawning on him. "Wait, you don't mean-"

"Obito," Shikaku said, the ghost of a laugh in his words, "I'm going to assume, for my own sake, that you weren't being serious just now."

"Shikaku," Obito said, deadly serious. "I don't think that's a good idea."

"That's what makes you an excellent choice," Shikaku said, which was absurd. Obito started to speak, but he held up a hand. "You must have noticed; you're practically an idol in the village now. Your leadership in the assault, holding off the Sanbi until Minato got back, and all without your Sharingan; it made people who thought you were just the product of that Mangekyo reconsider."

Obito shifted, feeling uncomfortable, but Shikaku didn't give him a chance to interrupt. "Your students are a model for every ninja: Sakura took down Rain's Jinchuriki and saved Kushina's life with Naruto, and Sasuke saved me. It was too late for Choza, but he faced down a legendary rogue and came out on top, even if the Sandaime had to give everything in the process."

He leaned in, his eyes hard, both friendly and calculating. "You are the role model everyone is looking for now, not Minato. And when your eyes are finished healing, your Kamui is going to be fully unleashed. The Flying Thunder God might have been stolen from the village, but no one can take your power from you, not unless you're dead. If anyone can be relied upon to defend the village and uphold the Will of Fire, Obito… it's you."

Obito grimaced. "You know what my clan has done. After what happened-"

"Planned to do. They didn't manage anything real before Itachi dealt with it," Shikaku said, clearly unimpressed. "I don't care about the ancient rivalries, and however that influenced the Shodai and Nidaime's decisions, and I don't care about any perceived grievances the Uchiha had nearly a decade ago. The Senju had integrated so heavily most haven't even kept the name, or died off: the Uchiha are still strong, even after the Massacre, and you're the strongest of them, Obito. Of the other founding clans, there are perhaps three ninja that could be considered, but none of them compare to you."

"It's-"

"Just shut up and consider it, will you?" Shikaku said, halfway between amused and frustrated. "You said the exact same thing to Minato when he picked you for Team Seven, didn't you?"

'You really think that's a good idea?'

Shikaku saw Obito remember, and grinned. "Everyone can see you've come a long way, Obito; you have to stop doubting yourself and see, really see, who you are, what you're capable of, and the people who are relying on you. Your team all became incredible ninja thanks to you: the village isn't a lake thanks to you." He threw one hand out, encompassing the world. "You're Minato's student; it's your job to surpass him. Nothing is set in stone yet, but if this keeps up, someone else might need to lead the village in his place."

"I don't feel like I would be ready," Obito said, but this time he managed to cut Shikaku off before he could start up again. "And I'm sure you're going to say that no one is ever ready. That's probably true. But the Hokage is more than just a figurehead. They're a leader, the leader. I'm not a strategic guy; I don't know the first thing about policy. I've never even met the Daimyo face to face."

"Minato hadn't either," Shikaku said with a shrug. "And not everyone's a polymath like him. The Hokage has advisors, both here in the village and in the Daimyo's Court. The job isn't a lonely one."

"I don't like a lot of the people giving the Hokage advice," Obito said, glancing in Homura and Koharu's direction. The farther away they got, the slower they went, obviously trying to judge the conversation from a distance.

Shikaku laughed. "And they don't like you. In their eyes, you killed a lot of perfectly good Leaf ninja when you helped rip up ROOT," he said. "But Minato didn't keep them around just because he likes arguing with them. They're experienced, even if they're sometimes wrongheaded, and there aren't many direct disciples of the Nidaime left."

"What if I was Hokage, though?" Obito said, saying the words fully for the first time. "Would I be under any obligation to invite them into my confidence?"

"That would be your call," Shikaku said. "Like you said, the Hokage is the leader. The position is chosen by democracy, but its powers are anything but democratic."

Obito mulled. There wasn't much else he felt he could do. What Shikaku was saying was so enormous that he had no choice. His literal childhood dream was being presented to him, but he never would have dreamed the circumstances around it would be so toxic. He'd given up on leadership after Kakashi had died, but that had been an old him, a weaker him. One who hadn't reawakened the fires of ambition, which despite his protest were even now rumbling through him.

The Hokage was one of the most powerful people in the world. They were one of the few people who could enact change, real long lasting change, with more tools than just violence or greed. How could he look at that with the feeling that something was wrong, that the world was wrong, and that maybe he could do something to fix it, and simply say 'No?' Was he that afraid of embracing power? Shinobi were taught all their life to be both ambitious and pragmatic, to take all they could but never try for too much and die in the attempt. Obito had shunned every shred of agency and forsaken all the autonomy he could for decades, trying to make up for what Rin had rightfully pointed out weren't his failures. Could he go from that, to this, and not become someone wholly different in the process?

"I don't know," he decided. "I'll keep it in mind." He straightened up, standing and blowing out a heavy breath. "I'll speak with sensei about it."

"You're welcome to." Shikaku nodded. "You should. He knows better than anyone what might happen now. I'm sure he'd welcome your input."

"He's at the tower?" Obito confirmed, and Shikaku shook his head. "Where, then?"

"With Kushina."

Not surprising, and Obito wouldn't mind talking to the both of them. Naruto was probably there as well. "Well, I was going to see him anyway. There's something I think you should hear about first, though. Regarding Orochimaru."

"Please, then," Shikaku said, gesturing at the distant elders to rejoin the conversation. "At this point, nothing could surprise me."

###

After badly surprising Shikaku, Obito made his way to the spiral home at a brisk pace. The streets were heavily patrolled by shinobi but none delayed him, and he arrived just as the sun began to set. He didn't know much of the history of the spiral home, just that it had been built with Uzumaki secrets as a means to suppress the Kyuubi early in Kushina's life, but looking at it always made him queasy.

It had a wide set of double doors as the main entrance at the end of a path that led off the street, and two ANBU stood guard. They gave Obito respectful nods as he approached and let himself in without a word, closing the door behind him. The sound of a quiet discussion greeted him, though all involved paused when they heard him enter.

"Obito?" Kushina's voice echoed through the entry hall, carrying over from an adjacent living room. "That you?"

"It's me," Obito said, making his way to the room. His instinct had been right: Kushina, Minato, and Naruto were all here, seated around a low table with a small meal, either a late lunch or an early dinner. Naruto gave a grin and a two finger salute, but Kushina and Minato just nodded; they seemed equally serious.

"Interrupting something?" Obito asked, and his sensei shook his head.

"It's nothing," he said, gesturing. "Grab a seat if you want. We were just finishing up."

Obito did, taking the spot across from Naruto, and tried to figure out exactly what to say next.

"You're looking glummer than usual, Obito," Kushina said after a moment with a mischievous grin. Her eyes still hadn't gone back to normal: ever since Naruto had woken her up, they'd been affected by the Kyuubi's chakra, distending the pupils vertically. Even though Obito knew the Kyuubi hadn't taken control, it still felt disturbingly like being watched by a predator.

"I just had a talk with Shikaku," Obito said. "It didn't put me in a good mood."

"About me being replaced?" Minato said mildly. Obito coughed.

"Sensei-?" he started to ask, but Minato waved him off. Kushina was frowning, while Naruto just looked confused.

"Am I wrong? It seems to be happening more lately," Minato said with a trace of good humor, and Obito couldn't help but chuckle.

"No, that's basically it. But there was some other stuff I wanted to check with you two about," he said, and Minato showed a spark of curiosity. "So pick your poison, I guess."

Minato seemed unsure, but Naruto ended up picking it for them. "Shikamaru's dad is talking about replacing you?" he asked his father. Minato shrugged, an extremely unusual motion for him. "What, just because of what happened at Amegakure?"

"Most likely," Minato said, still perfectly calm and balanced. "After failing to punish Rain sufficiently for their attack, I'm sure many of the Jonin have doubts about me, to say nothing of the Daimyo's Court. An unpopular Hokage isn't Hokage for long; even the Sandaime had to head off a couple votes over the years."

"That seems unbelievably stupid," Naruto said, just looking more confused and concerned. "I mean… I don't know a lot about that kind of thing, but replacing the guy in charge when a war's on can't be a good idea, right?"

"It depends on the situation," Minato said, but he didn't have the energy he usually did before launching into an explanation. Obito chose that moment to step in.

"The Jonin Commander, among others, is concerned that your dad's judgment is compromised when it comes to Rain," he explained. Naruto frowned, but didn't interrupt. "Because of their connection to Jiraiya-sensei, among other things."

"Well, that's dumb. Nagato's just… really strong. Right?" Naruto asked, looking to his father.

Minato shook his head.

"They're right," he said, and Obito had to admit some shock. If there was anyone he would have thought could have completely separated their shared past, it would have been his sensei. But apparently he'd been wrong, and now he was bearing witness to something he'd thought impossible: Minato Namikaze looking embarrassed.

"My judgment has been compromised. Calling you all back too soon," he said to Naruto, "because I was frightened of what might happen to you, instead of trusting you to do your job. Taking it easy on someone bearing the Rinnegan, of all people, because of a promise I made to sensei." Minato looked distant, running over everything again and again. "You remember, Obito, I was told I had fettered myself. I don't think that's true, but it was definitely the case in Rain, and it put us all in a terrible position."

"Sensei," Obito said carefully. "I really don't think you take any of that to heart."

"I'm not," Minato said with a reassuring smile. "Trust me. It's just close to this particular truth, that's all." He sat back, leaning back on both hands. "Nagato had me dead to rights.".

Kushina flinched, but it was Naruto that spoke once more. "No way," he said, shaking his head. "Even if he stole the Hiraishin-"

"He caught me," Minato said, not being harsh but authoritative enough to stop Naruto from saying another word. "He had me by the hand. Jiraiya and you all told me enough about the Rinnegan for me to know that was it. He could have torn it off: he had the strength for that. But that would have been getting off easy compared to having my chakra drained away, or my soul ripped out."

With the room struck dumb, Minato continued in the same musing tone. "Yahiko knew it too. He demanded Nagato kill me. But he didn't; he was determined to negotiate, even though we'd come there to kill his people. At the time, I barely considered it. My only thoughts were for winning the fight, even though I'd lost it right in that moment." He laughed. "My heart knew what my mind was too slow to realize; as soon as he put one of my ninja in danger, I rolled over like a beaten dog."

"Sensei, you were preventing a disaster," Obito argued. "If you hadn't withdrawn, Nagato could have come all the way here, to the Hidden Leaf. Both villages would be even more devastated. Withdrawing then-"

"If Nagato had wanted to devastate the village, he would have done so," Minato said. "He wouldn't have wasted time with Fukoro; he would have gone to the Leaf, and come back with proof. That was well within his ability, before I destroyed the Hiraishin seals here." He leaned forward, more serious. "If we're to continue to prosecute a war with Rain, which may be inevitable however unfortunate it is, Shikaku is probably right, as usual. I'm not cut out to command it."

"Who would be, if not you?" Obito asked, but Minato shook his head.

"I'm sure Shikaku has his own opinions on that, and I would defer to them," he said. But there was a lot in his eyes; shame, introspection, and cleverness alongside them. The way he was looking at Obito made it seem like he already knew exactly what Shikaku had said. "I wouldn't hold a grudge against my successor; it's not like I would be exiled, or anything that dramatic. The village would still need me, and I it: I would just be another Jonin. Given how things have developed, I would probably be put in charge of the Barrier Corp and the QRF, to focus on defending Konoha."

"I don't know how you can take this more calmly," Kushina said with a chuckle. "I'd be spitting fire by about now, Minato."

"It's justified. And it will give me more time to focus on you," Minato said, effortlessly inspiring a blush. Naruto stuck out his tongue in a mock gag, but still seemed conflicted. To his credit, he was keeping his mouth shut, waiting to gather his thoughts to speak. "But there's not much to worry about now; these sorts of things take time. I'll still be Hokage when your eyes are healed, Obito." Minato smiled. "I can rely on you for the operation against Cloud, right?"

"Of course," Obito said. "I'll smash that Cannon if it's the last thing I do."

"Well, try to make sure it's not," Minato said dryly. "Since you're more important to the village than ever, after all."

"So that's happening, for sure?" Naruto said, and his father nodded. "When?"

"Most likely this time next week," Minato said. "Obito's projected to be healed by then, and he'll be leading the assault."

"I am?" Obito asked, surprised, and Minato nodded.

"You are," he confirmed. "Mission scrolls are being dispatched at midnight tonight; we're doing our best to keep everything as quiet as possible, since Cloud may have better spies than we gave them credit for. Rin will be your second in command: sorry if that's not your ideal date."

That got a chuckle from everyone, thankfully lowering the tension a little, but Naruto had more questions. "So then, Sakura and Sasuke and Jiraiya and I…" he pondered. "What should we do, once the Cannon is busted?"

"That depends on how Cloud and Rain react," Obito said, feeling the opening Minato was leaving him. "Frankly, I don't think you should be going, and I doubt your parents feel differently," he said, getting nods from Minato and Kushina. "But it is an important opportunity, even if it's dangerous. Konan is likely Rain's leader or second in command, depending on how Nagato conducts himself going forward. Trying to keep relationships positive with her will be important if we don't want this war to drag on forever, and you were right that you three are the best fit to handle that." He sighed. "And with Jiraiya there, I'm not too worried about you. War is chaos, but I have faith he'll keep you safe. Really, you're all Chunin or Jonin by now: it'll be your job to follow your gut, both on your own safety and the betterment of the situation."

"Well, that's helpful," Naruto said with a roll of his eyes. "I'll keep an eye on Sakura, then. See what she and Sasuke think." He paused. "Have you seen her, sensei?"

"Barely," Obito admitted. "Everything's been so busy, and it feels like she's made herself scarce."

"She's not doing good," Naruto said frankly. "It's like she's frozen."

"Frozen?"

"Like she's not letting herself think things," Naruto said, all the adults paying him their full attention. He didn't wilt under it at all. "She's not grieving. Even though she had to kill Haku, I've never seen her cry. I feel like… half the reason I'm going to Frost is just to make sure she's okay."

"She had to make an impossible choice," Kushina said softly. "I told her that's what the Akatsuki was built around: I never thought it would go that far. She was close to Haku, right Naruto?"

"Very," Naruto confirmed, and Obito detected a hint of jealousy in him for just a second before it was washed away by concern. "I can't imagine how she feels. "

"Then the best thing you can do is be there for her," Kushina said, doing her best to comfort him. "When she does grieve, and she will, it's going to be something terrible. The longer she waits, the more intense it will be. She'll need you there to keep her in one piece." She leaned forward, putting her hand on his shoulder. "It sucks, but that's part of what love is. Sometimes, you can't keep someone from suffering. All you can do is help them through it. No matter how bad it is."

Naruto didn't protest; he just seemed to absorb his mother's words, and then he nodded, determination plain on his face.

Obito reflected, not for the first time, that he had a marvelous team. The subject dampened the whole room, but after a couple seconds of silence Kushina pushed through it as she turned on Obito.

"So, what was the other thing?" she asked. "You came here with two, remember?"

"Orochimaru turned into a tree," he said, and Minato was the only one who didn't give a baffled look. "Obviously that sounds crazy, don't look at me like that. It's what Rin and Sasuke reported, right sensei?"

"It is," Minato confirmed. "Though I wasn't very concerned with it at the time."

"The Ten Tails was a tree starting off," Obito said, trying to be as efficient as possible. Kushina stiffened, though the reaction was a little strong for what he'd said. "And Orochimaru's tree was covered in Sharingan. He'd taken genetic material from both Madara and the First Hokage; Mikoto and I are concerned that there's a connection between them, the divergent chakra Orochimaru mentioned, and the Sage and the Ten Tails."

"How did you know that stuff about the Ten Tails?" Kushina asked. Obito gave her a curious look.

"It's on a rock the Uchiha have kept around forever," he said. "The same place Madara got his information about the Tailed Beasts in the first place, but I can read it now."

"Kurama's curious," Kushina said, and Obito blinked.

"Wait," he said slowly. "It's still talking to you?"

"Oh, right," Kushina said cheerfully, like a demon wasn't chattering in her brain. "I forgot you weren't here for that part. Yeah, he's still talking to me, y'know." She paused. "Oh c'mon. Everyone calls you an 'it' starting off. Get over it."

Obito looked over at Minato in disbelief, but the Hokage just shrugged. "The seal is beyond repair," he said. "And making a new one will be months of work. So long as Kushina stays here, she's safe, but the barrier between her and the Kyuubi is dangerously thin. She says she can hear its voice at all times, and it has access to all her senses. Hence the eyes."

"Hey," Kushina chided. "He, remember? He doesn't like being called 'it,' even if he doesn't really have like, a gender." She paused, listening. "I'm not telling them that. But he wants to know where the rock comes from."

"Mikoto said the Sage passed it down to the clan," Obito said, trying and failing to take the twist in the conversation in stride. Of them all, Naruto seemed to be handling it the best; he was staring at his mom with obvious fascination. "As a way of keeping history clear."

"He doesn't know anything about that," Kushina said after a moment, listening to words only she could hear. "So it was probably a gift to Indra, in that case. I wonder if he also gave one to the other brother?"

"I thought the same thing," Obito said. "But Tsunade is probably the only one who'd know, and I doubt she'd want to tell me about it. There may also be a connection to the Kaguya, so I intend to speak with Kagami, see if she knows anything."

"With the Kaguya? And Kagami's still here?" Naruto asked, and Obito nodded.

"Held prisoner," he confirmed. "And apparently the Sage's mother was a princess named Kaguya. It could just be a coincidence, but I think it's worth following up on."

"Why're you digging?" Kushina asked.

"Same reason you were," Obito said. "There's lost history between the Beasts, Madara, Nagato, all of it. I dunno if it's actually going to be helpful, but understanding how all this came to be isn't going to hurt anything."

"Hmm." She leaned back, thinking it over. "One second."

She fell silent, her eyes occasionally twitching or her mouth half-forming words. It was incredibly disconcerting, and Obito shuffled closer to Minato.

"You're okay with this?" he whispered. Naruto watched them both suspiciously, torn between eavesdropping and continuing to watch his mother.

"Kushina's convinced the Kyuubi can be negotiated with," Minato whispered back. "Since learning its name, she's come to believe it's a rational actor. But it doesn't matter if I'm okay with it or not: there's nothing we can do for now, short of tearing her chakra system out." He made a face somewhere between a grimace and a grin. "Which obviously isn't an option."

Was the Nine-Tails a rational actor? Obito had only had two interactions with it and neither had been pleasant, but the conversation had at least shown it capable of planning, and it had spoken truthfully by the terms of their agreement. If it had complete access to Kushina's chakra system, maybe negotiations were the way to go, even if they were unsettling.

"Oh for-!" Kushina suddenly blurted out. "You little asshole. It's not like I had much of a choice, y'know!" As everyone stared at her, she kept speaking to herself, her tone getting more and more irritated. "You are a little asshole! I don't care how big you were: right now you're technically smaller than me!" Another pause, and then she laughed. "We're both stuck in the situation, Kurama! It's literally a prisoner's dilemma! Well, not literally, cause we can talk to each other, but y'know!"

She stood up, and Minato did as well. "Kushina?"

Obito and Naruto stood as well, but Kushina ignored them all as she started pacing. "I'm sure you've been burned before, but he's a good guy! Even if he did reseal you, it was just to save me! What, should he have just let me die?" She stopped. "Well, that's rude. I think I've been a pretty good host since I-" Another pause. "Well… I guess that's a bad example. Stealing your chakra was pretty harsh. But it was a desperate situation, y'know?"

Obito saw her have a minor epiphany. "But I guess that's how people will justify anything…" she said quietly, before falling into thought.

"Mom?" Naruto asked. "What's wrong?"

"He's pissed off," Kushina said bluntly. "He doesn't think we have any right to go digging more into the Sage's past, especially when Obito's descended from one of the kids that fucked it all up."

"What would it take for him to trust us?" Naruto said, but Minato shook his head.

"He says there's nothing," Kushina said, gritting her teeth. She started stomping off, and Obito and the rest trailed after her as she grew more and more furious. "But he's wrong. You think I'm just another human, huh? You're a real shithead, y'know that? How many people have you told your name, huh? Would you have just told any other human your name?!"

Kushina picked up speed, and Obito's heart skipped a beat: she was heading for the front door. Minato and Naruto had noticed the same thing and were speeding up as well, but none of them could believe that Kushina would really be heading towards the exit. Stepping outside would be suicide, after all; in her current state, the Kyuubi would overwhelm her immediately.

"Would any other human do this?!" Kushina demanded, and before anyone could grab hold of her she flung the door open and barged outside into the setting sun.

Obito's heart stopped; he, Minato, Naruto, and both of the ABNU, who had been standing guard but had seemingly also been too shocked to prevent the door from opening, tackled Kushina in a tangle of limbs and dragged her inside; she was outside the seals for barely more than a second, but it felt like an eternity. Kushina didn't resist. Instead, the moment she was back through the doors, she started laughing.

Her eyes were still blue: no crimson chakra raced across her skin or through her hair. The Kyuubi was still safely locked away.

"Oooh, so scary," she laughed. "Why didn't you do it then? You had your chance: I think you hesitated!"

"Kushina!" Minato barked, and Obito couldn't tell if he was the frightened husband or the disturbed Hokage as everyone else scrambled off of her, leaving Minato holding her alone.

"Oh, it's fine Minato," she said. "He talks a big game; he doesn't know how to deal with this any better than you do."

"I don't know how to deal with this," Minato said, fixing her with a stern gaze. "But it doesn't matter if you need to prove a point or not. You can't do that again. Even if he has a name, there was nothing stopping him from killing you. The whole village could have been at risk-"

"Nothing stopping him but himself," Kushina said with a grin. "I'll do it as many times as I need to, it doesn't matter-" As Minato helped her to her feet, she laughed again. "Well, they won't let me now, y'know? But listen-!"

She gave Minato, Naruto, and Obito the same serious look at the same time, talking to both herself and them at the same time. "The most important thing right now is learning to trust one another. And that goes for more than just me and you, Kurama! It's the way out of a lot more messes than this one! All of us know that: we're just too afraid to take the first step! Well-!" She pointed at the half-open door. "I took the first step! So now it's your turn! Show me I can trust you!"

She dropped her hand, smirking. "He's sulking," she said after a moment. Lightning fast, she grabbed Minato and pulled him close, kissing him deeply. Naruto didn't have time to turn away, and let out a protesting sound as Obito chuckled and averted his eyes.

"Sorry," she said, drawing away. "It just feels weird doing that while he's watching. Had to take the moment."

"It's fine," Minato said, looking like his mood had improved a little. "Well, actually, it's not fine. I'm serious. Don't do that again. For my sake, at least."

Kushina crossed her arms. "That's fine. It's his turn anyway, y'know," she said. "Might take him a while, though."

"Okay…" Obito said. "Sorry, I didn't mean to cause… all of that."

"Don't worry about it, Obito," Kushina said. "It's gonna happen one way or another." She sighed. "I'm hoping to convince him to leave, but leave enough of himself behind so I don't, you know, die. But it's gonna be hard work. Convincing a person with that much history would be tough: Kurama's basically a demigod, from what we've learned. It's a tough one."

"Kushina…" Obito said. "That's crazy."

"A little. But what else is there?" Kushina said.

"The seal will be repaired," Minato reassured her. Obito couldn't help but notice he didn't say one thing or another about the Kyuubi being released. "I'll have time, once things have calmed down. You're my first priority."

"I know you could," Kushina said with a sad smile. "But I dunno if I could live with myself if you did." She put a hand over her stomach. "Knowing that he's not just a demon… it changes everything, even if he's still an asshole. I don't much like the idea of being a prison for something that might not need it."

"The Kyuubi's still destroyed countless lives," Obito pointed out. "You said yourself when you woke up that it… he acknowledged that."

"He did," Kushina agreed. "But that was because he'd lost hope. I mean, obviously it's messed up, but he can't die, y'know?" She sighed. "Wouldn't it be better, for me, for the whole world even, if he could go back to what he was supposed to be doing? Not destroying, but teaching instead?"

"It'd be better," Naruto spoke up. "If it's possible. But mom… do you really think you can help with something like that?"

Kushina was scared. Obito could see that now, now that the adrenaline had subsided. She had an unexpected passenger that was doubtlessly saying all sorts of nasty things to her, and her entire role in the world had been upended; she'd been forcibly brought to question everything she knew about her life. He was familiar with the feeling. Maybe he was the only one who could see it because of that. They made eye contact, and he felt that Kushina was thinking the exact same thing.

"I dunno," she admitted.

"But I'm still gonna try."
 
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