Obito-Sensei (A Sakura-Centric Naruto AU)

Oh, wow. The summit is going to devolve into utter pandemonium. And that's before counting Yahiko's force, which comprises an entire third of shinobi present.
 
Agh, how can merely setting the stage evoke so much TENSION

It's like reading the preface of a work describing the beginning of a global war.
 
Yondaime Mizukage Mei Terumi
He's outlived five Kage, mighty peers all
I was going to say that Ohnoki had outlived six Kage, but I checked and Mei is, indeed, the Fourth. Has it been said what happened to Yagura and why he didn't become the Fourth? Did the Third live longer because Madara did, was Yagura killed through some mechanism of Black Zetsu?

Yahiko is bringing friends. Quite a few of them, certainly more than the traditional two a Kage is permitted. They are fanatics, coming to do what fanatics do best: refuse and undermine compromise.
And Yahiko's transformation into Hanzo II is complete. Something tells me that tale of Jiraiya the Gallant ends with him in a sort of Konoha Crush situation, but I'm not going to make any concrete predictions.

Taking step back into a more omniscient view to showcase different perspectives and internal monologues for this chapter was great, I feel it really enhanced it. I might be biased, because I love reading about ninja politics, but on the other hand, it probably is just that good because you've built up this world so much and made it so deep that expanding it at this point just enhances that. For a set up chapter it felt really short, definitely not almost 4,000 words, which is a good thing.

I could probably go on, but I'd rather not ramble about half-headcanon minutea, so great job. It makes me want to write a Five Kage Summit and I know I can't do that yet.
 
Well these last two chapters have been amazing work @Ser_Serendipity , love how everything has come together for this final scheduled to be apocalypse scale eruption of clashing ideals plus character arcs reaching there fruition.

Random thoughts and points of note:

I am absolutely fascinated by fed up, sacrificed to much to stand losing anymore, choking on the ash of his ideals Minato. The possibility of him snapping and doubling down on violence in the eternal Shinobi flaw way-embracing Madara's grim suggestion was floated before post the loss in invading Rain but here now he really seems set to decide "Kill them all Hokage" is the way to go and honestly I truly want to see that.

Yahiko's radicalisation being incompatible with the path Nagato has set and him charging for the summit like an angry blind bull with an army of fanatics behind him is a fun twist to add to the mix.

Sakura's confrontation with Ino and her father was really fascinating, love how her Zetsu encouraged mania and tunnel vision come across and that the shadow is sharpening her into an ever more deadly blade at the cost of her sanity and connections. The way she's so primed to interpret any action against her as pure betrayal, the way her old bitterness and grudges are festering under the surface and come out combined now inhuman power and poession fed cruelty are all so troubling and so engaging.

The Summit is going to be an unholy disaster and I love it.

It's been a long and very enjoyable road to reach this point and as a reader it's a true pleasure to see the final arc arriving I can't imagine how it must feel as the writer of this monster story to be in the final stretch, I hope it's a rewarding experience and that you can take pride in this stunning achievement of a story.
 
Oh, fun. This isn't just a powder keg, this is a nuclear arsenal primed to blow. There are so many things that can go wrong here... many that no one really expects either. For example there's Kushina's rapport with Kurama and Sakura's remnant of Hidan inside her chakra. I doubt all of that is going to go off at once but even a fraction would be devastating.

Minato feels like he's close to saying, "Fuck it all" and just start killing instead of giving up his wife. Which is understandable.
 
One of the things I truly love about this story is how it deconstructs - puts the lie to the fandom perception of it just being the Uchiha inherent emotional fragility that made Obito become Tobi in canon. Suffering in great enough quantities and with enough time to grind someone down can make anyone change radically for the worse.

We see it in Gaara as this story shows what he could have grown into if canon Naruto hadn't reached him and his pressure cooker of a dehumanising weapon existence was left unchanged.

We see it in Yahiko who demonstrably was a capable and sane leader as seen by his handling of the Land of Waves fallout, but the the tragedy of the Canon strike strips away self control and restraint in the fires of trauma driving his surprise attack on Konoha, then being blinded and left to ferment in darkness and justifications only made him worse until he's reached his current status as the unholy inheritor of Danzo-Hanzo 's combined flaws.

We see it in Minato who truly wanted to advance the cause of peace and Konoha prosperity via diplomacy and subtle power all be it after having climbed to prominence on a mountain of corpses, we see him agonise over the things he sacrifices even as he does push ahead, we see it via his response to Madara's become ruin suggestion, where in he refuses to countenance's such a path at first and even in the wake of the failed attack on Rain where in he's frustrated and raw and looking down the barrel of being striped of Hokage status he keeps to that choice and then the Summit arrives and now the emotional pain has gotten so profound that Minato seriously is considering Madara's advice.

We see it in Sakura, who over the course of this story has learned all the wrong lessons, internalising that violence-rage and hitting harder than anyone thought you could is the way to get ahead, doubling down on the become a weapon ideal of shinobi society even as she sees the culture wide effects of such thinking as a problem to be fought. Each loss and awful tragedy Sakura endures (Gaara's rampage in the Land of Waves, The Canon Shot at Hidden Rain, The Invasion of the Leaf-Haku's death, The Calamity in Frost) leaves her more hardened, more fanatical and driven until she's reached the truly scary place she is in now.

It's a dark irony that in a world where Obito-Nagato didn't go through ego death via worldview shattering trauma numerous other characters get to experience such a thing in their stead and the world is a more dangerous place for it.
 
The only way things could go worse is if Orotreemaru climbs out of the ground like Hashirama's giant Buddha or Yahiko were to figure out/learn Impure World Resurrection with an army willing to die for the cause.
 
Oh, wow. The summit is going to devolve into utter pandemonium. And that's before counting Yahiko's force, which comprises an entire third of shinobi present.
Yeah, Yahiko's definitely inflating the count a bit, lol. But still, almost 40 named character's is gonna be a nightmare.
Agh, how can merely setting the stage evoke so much TENSION

It's like reading the preface of a work describing the beginning of a global war.
That's the idea! Glad it worked out!
I was going to say that Ohnoki had outlived six Kage, but I checked and Mei is, indeed, the Fourth. Has it been said what happened to Yagura and why he didn't become the Fourth? Did the Third live longer because Madara did, was Yagura killed through some mechanism of Black Zetsu?
Allllllll the way back in chapter 39, Kisame mentioned that Yagura dropped dead in the midst of some sort of power struggle thanks to a cursed seal on his heart. It's never had much attention drawn to it, but with Rin never being the host of the Sanbi and Madara dying at a different time, the Bloody Mist rolled out in a very different way (resulting in Zabuza and Haku ending up in Rain), and Yagura died without ever becoming a Jinchuriki or Kage.
It's been a long and very enjoyable road to reach this point and as a reader it's a true pleasure to see the final arc arriving I can't imagine how it must feel as the writer of this monster story to be in the final stretch, I hope it's a rewarding experience and that you can take pride in this stunning achievement of a story.
It's mostly terrifying tbh, Jiraiya's just being my voice here. A story is defined by its end, and I've given myself a lot to do here. Hope I pull it off!

Oh, fun. This isn't just a powder keg, this is a nuclear arsenal primed to blow. There are so many things that can go wrong here... many that no one really expects either. For example there's Kushina's rapport with Kurama and Sakura's remnant of Hidan inside her chakra. I doubt all of that is going to go off at once but even a fraction would be devastating.

Minato feels like he's close to saying, "Fuck it all" and just start killing instead of giving up his wife. Which is understandable.
Oh don't worry, everything is gonna go off. If there's a lingering plotline, I'm doing my best to resolve it here. It's going to get silly.
One of the things I truly love about this story is how it deconstructs - puts the lie to the fandom perception of it just being the Uchiha inherent emotional fragility that made Obito become Tobi in canon. Suffering in great enough quantities and with enough time to grind someone down can make anyone change radically for the worse.

We see it in Gaara as this story shows what he could have grown into if canon Naruto hadn't reached him and his pressure cooker of a dehumanising weapon existence was left unchanged.

We see it in Yahiko who demonstrably was a capable and sane leader as seen by his handling of the Land of Waves fallout, but the the tragedy of the Canon strike strips away self control and restraint in the fires of trauma driving his surprise attack on Konoha, then being blinded and left to ferment in darkness and justifications only made him worse until he's reached his current status as the unholy inheritor of Danzo-Hanzo 's combined flaws.

We see it in Minato who truly wanted to advance the cause of peace and Konoha prosperity via diplomacy and subtle power all be it after having climbed to prominence on a mountain of corpses, we see him agonise over the things he sacrifices even as he does push ahead, we see it via his response to Madara's become ruin suggestion, where in he refuses to countenance's such a path at first and even in the wake of the failed attack on Rain where in he's frustrated and raw and looking down the barrel of being striped of Hokage status he keeps to that choice and then the Summit arrives and now the emotional pain has gotten so profound that Minato seriously is considering Madara's advice.

We see it in Sakura, who over the course of this story has learned all the wrong lessons, internalising that violence-rage and hitting harder than anyone thought you could is the way to get ahead, doubling down on the become a weapon ideal of shinobi society even as she sees the culture wide effects of such thinking as a problem to be fought. Each loss and awful tragedy Sakura endures (Gaara's rampage in the Land of Waves, The Canon Shot at Hidden Rain, The Invasion of the Leaf-Haku's death, The Calamity in Frost) leaves her more hardened, more fanatical and driven until she's reached the truly scary place she is in now.

It's a dark irony that in a world where Obito-Nagato didn't go through ego death via worldview shattering trauma numerous other characters get to experience such a thing in their stead and the world is a more dangerous place for it.
I don't have anything to add here, it's just really insightful.
The only way things could go worse is if Orotreemaru climbs out of the ground like Hashirama's giant Buddha or Yahiko were to figure out/learn Impure World Resurrection with an army willing to die for the cause.
There was once an Orochimaru Zombie Crush at the Summit as well, yeah, lmao. But I realized that gave him too much narrative importance and decided to kill him off earlier, to keep the focus tight.

Well, tight's the wrong word. But tighter at least. Thanks for the comments!
 
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Chapter 94: Grand Finale New
Will Bring Everything Crashing Down

When they arrived in the Land of Iron, the first thing Sakura noticed was the cold.

Even though it was closer to summer than spring, the country was mountainous and the ground was still covered in slush, snow that had constantly melted and refrozen again and again under the relentless beat of the sun. It made traversal slippery as Team Seven and their co-conspirators slid down ravines and skated on half-frozen hills, careful to always move silently. Even far from the Mountain Fortress, samurai patrolled the country diligently, and they avoided several groups of them as they followed the Hokage's trail thanks to Hinata's sight.

There were few words spared. At this point, there was not much for any of them to say. It was only when they climbed higher into the mountains, tracking along cliffs that led down into deep rivers, that Hinata came to a stop and spoke.

"I see it," she said, and the group coalesced. Itachi Uchiha stayed on the outside; he had been watching Obito warily for the whole journey, moving like a skittish rabbit instead of the monstrously dangerous man he was.

'More than a little pathetic.'

"Lay it out for us, Hinata," Obito said. Right now, he was like her, Sakura thought. Focused; no energy to spare for nervousness. Her heart was beating slowly, filling her with calm determination.

There was no room for hesitation, and even less for mistakes.

Hinata nodded, bent down, and spent the next several minutes drawing in the snow and dirt with a kunai. As she drew, she spoke, concisely describing everything under her eyes purview.

'Could she be any more useful? You have incredible allies.'

Sakura ignored her thoughts, even if they were correct, and focused on Hinata, absorbing everything she said.

"We're currently six miles away," Hinata said, biting her lip as she continued to sketch. Everyone crouched down or leaned in to better observe, even Itachi. "There are samurai patrols rotating through the mountains, but they should be easy to avoid. The Mountain Fortress can't be missed: it's been carved out of the mountains themselves, like a crater. There are underground passages, but they're far more heavily patrolled; it's surrounded by three concentric walls, each about sixty feet tall. Covered as well, of course."

She breathed in, settling her nerves. Sakura watched carefully, looking for a trace of doubt. No matter how useful Hinata was, if she couldn't be relied on fully, she'd have to be left behind.

"The Fortress itself is a pyramid. Half of it is above ground; the rest below." She sketched out a triangle, drawing lines cleanly through it. "There are ten levels: they're not identical in size. Each floor varies from ten to eighty feet tall. The Cannon…"

"It's there?" Itachi asked calmly, and Hinata nodded.

"It's been mounted on top of the fortress," she said. "It's aiming straight up. From the chakra present in it, I have to assume it's charged." Her brow furrowed. "There are rods piercing it. From what I saw in Lightning, I believe they carry Nagato's chakra."

"Are they marked?" Obito asked, and once more Hinata nodded.

"With a formula I don't recognize," she confirmed.

"Hiraishin markers," Obito said, his face twisting into a sneer. "So he can reach the Cannon in an instant." He untied his hitai-ate, and then looked at Sakura.

She raised an eyebrow.

'Too weak to finish it?'

"Even a second, sensei," she said, and he nodded, finally cutting through the symbol of the Leaf.

"Even a second," he agreed, putting the headband back on. Obito finishing the job provided the push needed for everyone to follow through. Naruto, Sasuke, Hinata, and Mikoto all made the same mark, defacing the symbol of the Leaf. Only Itachi did not bother; after all, he was already an infamous rogue.

"There are other rods," Hinata continued, somehow looking older with her marred headband. "In the main meeting chamber, and I believe down below. The main chamber is near the center of the pyramid, on the sixth level. It is one of the largest." Her eyes narrowed. "The Hokage is about to arrive, but two are already there. Going by their mark, I believe they are the Tsuchikage and Mizukage."

"And Nagato and Konan?" Sakura pressed.

"They are there, and Jiraiya of the Sannin too," Hinata said, sounding faintly surprised. "The chamber has a huge table for the meeting; there are banners for each of the Villages hanging… except for Cloud. There are samurai too. One's quite a bit older than the rest. He's speaking with Nagato now." Hinata's lips pressed into a line. "He's not happy."

"Can't imagine why," Obito said flatly. If he was surprised Jiraiya was there, he didn't show it. The Toad Sage could be an ally or an enemy, Sakura thought.

'He's helped you before; perhaps he could be turned to that again.'

"Honor guards for all of them are present as well," Hinata continued, cataloging everything with impressive efficiency as her hands continued to sketch out the Fortress. "Two women for the Tsuchikage, a man and a woman for the Mizukage. Nagato and Konan… there are two, younger, our age or just a bit older. One looks like your mother, Naruto. Red hair, red eyes. Her chakra is…"

"Karin," Naruto said, suddenly very serious. "She's a sensor, the best I've ever seen. Has she picked up on us?"

"I don't believe so. The other is a boy, orange hair. His chakra is volatile."

Sakura looked around, and both Naruto and Sasuke shrugged. She shrugged back. It didn't really matter, after all. Even if they were shinobi of Rain, if they got in her way, she'd cut them down.

"What about the Jinchuriki?" Naruto asked. "My mom?"

"Your mother and the Hokage are being met at the gates," Hinata said, and they all looked west, as if they could see what she could see. All except Sakura, who kept staring at the picture Hinata had drawn, mind moving a mile a minute. "I do not see any other Jinchuriki… though I believe at this point they should all be present?" She looked around for confirmation, and Mikoto nodded with a grim look.

"If Cloud has not been invited and Sand has not yet arrived, then yes," she should. "Kushina should be the last."

"Then watch her," Sakura commanded, and Hinata gave a surprised nod. "We need to know where they're all being kept."

"What if they're being executed right away?" Naruto asked quietly, and Sakura shook her head once, hard.

"He'll kill them all at the same time," she said, not caring how Naruto's face was stricken by the truthful words. "Otherwise, one of the village's could have the advantage, even for a second."

'And Nagato couldn't have that, could he?'

"And Nagato couldn't have that," she said. "Everything has to be fair: the Jinchuriki, and the Cannon, all at once. That'll be what he's planning."

She grinned. "So watch Kushina, Hinata. Find out where they put her. Then, we'll know our next move."

###

When they reached the break in the hall, the reality of the situation crashed over Kushina all at once.

She'd accepted her death, she was pretty sure. But there was a difference between that and being at the literal crossroad, y'know? She stopped, looking back at Minato, Rin, and Gai, finding herself at a loss for words.

"Kushina," Minato said quietly. He was just as stuck as her. Seeing her husband looking so hopeless should have made Kushina feel the same, but for some reason it encouraged her to act the opposite.

"We did good, Minato," she said, leaning in and giving him a kiss. A last kiss, she realized. Her arms were bound at her sides, else she would have wrapped him up in a spine-shattering hug. He took it like a statue, kissing her back but only barely. When she drew back, she breathed out and mustered up a grin. "Good luck. I love you."

Then she took a deep breath, turned, and followed the samurai escort into the depths of the mountain, leaving her husband and the life they'd built together behind.

The corridor twisted, turned, turned into stairs, again and again. They dropped several hundred feet, and all the while Kushina didn't have any company but for several samurai who were completely unreadable beneath their full armor and the demon in her head.

COWARDLY WRETCH! RELEASE ME THIS INSTANT!

It wasn't happening. After all, letting the Kyuubi out would be a betrayal, one that could result in Konoha being obliterated. Against the threat of that, of Naruto's death, her own death and the death of the Kyuubi couldn't hold a candle.

THIS IS WHY THERE WAS NO TRUST TO BE FOUND! The demon raged. WHY YOUR SHOW OF FAITH WAS EMPTY! THIS IS HOW ALL HUMANS ACT! BOLD UNTIL THEY ARE PRESSED; PRINCIPLED UNTIL THERE IS DANGER! FILTH! SCUM! WHEN THEY FAIL TO KILL ME I WILL TEAR YOUR FAMILY TO SHREDS!

I gave you your chance! If it weren't for the thick sealing cloth she was bound in, so much that she couldn't move her arms and could only stumble forward like a drunk drying rack, the Bijuu would have burst out of her instantly. The cloth stung and bit at her chakra system like a hundred hornets, but Kushina was not too concerned; after all, she'd be dead soon.

I did everything I could. I spoke with you, I left the spiral seal for you; I tried to make every deal I could think of. You're the one who would not reach out! This is your fault!

BECAUSE I KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN!

Even now, you can't consider compromise, Kurama, Kushina thought, finally allowing a bit of bitterness to sink in. It's the ultimate prisoner's dilemma: we're both gonna die because of your stubbornness. The idea of just giving me control so this didn't have to happen… you've spent so long as a force of destruction that cooperation doesn't even make sense to you anymore, huh?

Kurama kept screaming, but Kushina had gotten very good at shutting him out. She didn't bother to respond as they trudged closer to her fate. What more was there to say? She'd tried her best, and failed; there wasn't anything more shinobi in the world than that.

Down, down, down, until the samurai began to slow as they reached their destination. Kushina finally saw what would be, if not her final resting place, her prison until then.

It wasn't what she had expected.

The hall opened up into a vast chamber, the ceiling perhaps forty feet tall and the walls quite distant. Before her, there was a shoji, a door made of rice paper propped up in the middle of the chamber and leading into a hall of them. Dim light spilled through the paper, even though the only illumination in the chamber were distant, flickering fluorescents.

"Inside," one of the samurai grunted, gesturing to the open door, and Kushina stepped inside. There were black rods studding the hall, she noticed, arranged in a pattern that eluded her, but her attention was drawn away from them as the door closed behind her, leaving her alone.

Kurama's voice suddenly vanished.

Kushina blinked and stumbled forward, an infinite weight inexplicably released from her. The Bijuu had been shut away, suppressed like the flick of a light switch. It was still there, still alive in her gut, but had no hold over her, even though her seal was shattered.

She wandered forward, experimentally pressing as the shoji. Hard as steel, and unmoving. She traced her hand along the wall, leading herself down the hall and into what she shortly realized was a maze. The deeper she went, the quieter the space in her head grew; a supernatural peace stole over her, carried by the warm and sourceless light that infused the whole maze.

It was a marvelously complicated seal, Kushina thought, analyzing just for the joy of it. This maze was a prison and a place of stasis. Within, nothing was allowed to change, and chakra was suppressed to near non-existence. It had to be the work of the Rinnegan, given that its actual principles so thoroughly eluded her. Opening and closing the shoji gate gave the seal a release mechanism, increasing its active strength; the maze channeled chakra in particular patterns, like a jutsu formula on a large and formal scale.

Essentially, it was the spiral formulas the Uzumaki had mastered, but times a million.

Kushina found herself exploring, driven by her curiosity as she pulled aside door after door, finding some resistant and others pliant. She pushed towards the center of the maze, delighting in the workmanship of the seal. Even if it was meant to doom her, she couldn't help but admire Nagato's ingenuity. If this was what the Rinnegan made you capable of, she couldn't blame Jiraiya for being so enamored with it.

Eventually, she pushed a shoji aside and found that she wasn't alone.

It was a wide room filled with tatami, unusually decorated in patterns of the five elements. The center of the maze, for sure. There were people there, some sitting and staring at nothing in particular, others comatose, one suddenly watching her with wide, surprised eyes.

Kushina recognized them immediately; after all, knowing the Jinchuriki of other villages had been critical to her job. Gaara of the Desert, empty and cold. Yugito Nii, pacing with a furious look. Roshi and Han, both of Stone's Jinchuriki kneeling with their arms crossed and eyes closed. Utakata, lying face-down like he was dead. Killer Bee, cross-legged in the corner and looking at nothing.

And Fuu, who was the only one that stood and moved towards her.

"Hi." The girl from Waterfall managed a weak smile. "How's it going?"

"Hey," Kushina said, not sure what else there was to say. The Sanbi didn't have a Jinchuriki right now, it seemed: she noticed an ugly vessel in the corner, clay molded into a wailing infant, and frowned. "So this is everyone, then?"

"Think so," Fuu said quietly. "Are you Kushina?"

"That's me," Kushina said, giving the girl a smile. Seeing someone so young here, more than anything else, sent a trickle of doubt down her spine. Fuu was barely older than Naruto. In fact…

"Naruto told me about you," Fuu said, sitting down. Kushina did as well, feeling ridiculous in all the crimson cloth swamping her body. It wasn't necessary to wear anymore, but she didn't remove it: taking it off was equally pointless. "I was kinda hoping I wouldn't see you here."

"Oh?" Kushina asked, and while Fuu shrugged, it was Yugito Nii that spoke up. The blonde woman stopped her pacing, looking over with a sneer.

"If anyone would have refused the Summit, it would have been the Hokage," she grunted. "But if you're here, it means everyone has capitulated to Rain. There's no hope for any of us." She kicked a tatami mat, but it didn't even budge; even that sort of minor violence was impossible here.

"Quiet, would you?" Han said, not opening his eyes. The Stone ninja was huge, seven-foot and then some, and even sitting he seemed the same size as Fuu and Yugito. "I would prefer to die in peace."

"Don't count on it, you big bastard," Yugito snarled. "I don't think any of us will be going peacefully."

"Not with you here," Han grumbled, ignoring Yugito glaring daggers at him. Kushina couldn't help a snort of amusement, and Fuu smiled at her.

"Sorta what she said, yeah," she admitted, leaning in. "Is Naruto okay? And Sasuke and Sakura? I didn't get a chance to say goodbye to them. Not really."

"They're okay," Kushina said, remembering how distant her son had been the day before. He had said goodbye to her, but it had felt half-hearted. He hadn't yet accepted what was happening; it would probably take him a long time. "As okay as they can be."

"That's good." Fuu shifted, searching for words. "They told me a little about you when we were in the Land of Frost. It made me want to meet you, but now that we're both here… I dunno what to say."

"I know the feeling," Kushina said warmly. "You left a huge impression on Naruto, even back when he'd known you for a single day. Thank you for being friends with my son."

Fuu's smile grew more certain. "He was my first!" she said, but the smile soured. "Which makes it even suckier I can't say goodbye. But I guess that's how it goes for people like us, right?"

"Always has," Kushina said, and they lapsed into silence. Fuu spent another minute pondering, shifting from thigh to thigh as she rocked back and forth, eventually, she nodded, making a decision, and stuck her fist out.

"You're a strong ninja, right?" she said. Kushina regarded the proffered fist with a bemused look.

"Stronger than most," she said, very humbly, and Fuu giggled.

"Prove it then," she said, waggling her hand. "We might only get to know each other for a little bit, but I wanna see if you're like Naruto."

"Like Naruto?" Kushina said, gingerly removing her arm from the wrap. It half-hung off of her, revealing her right side. Fuu nodded emphatically.

"Him and Sasuke and Sakura. We did this in Frost; it made me understand them a little better."

Seeing no harm in it, Kushina firmly clashed knuckles with Fuu.

An electric shock ran the length of both their bodies. The seal they were surrounded by dampened all chakra, but Kushina nonetheless felt a tremendous impact as their energy met and switched, rushing up one another's arms with enough force to knock their hands away from one another.

Jinchuriki and Jinchuriki, Kushina understood in a split second, and something more than that besides. She and Fuu were assailed by countless phantom sensations, seeing and hearing things long passed overlapping in a blur of feelings that squeezed tears from both their eyes.

istherelikeaspecialhandshakeorsomething
yourmommustbeamazingtoholdit
i'mreallygladimetyouguys
yeahitrustyoukonan
you'reawifeamotherifyoudied
loveisn'tapanacea
nothingis
butitgivespeoplestrength
AND I'M STILL GONNA TRY


"What?" Fuu choked, falling back. Yugito Nii watched with interest, ceasing her pacing and watching the both of them. Kushina took a shuddering breath, her and Fuu's words ricocheting around her head and chipping away at her resolve.

"Fuu," Kushina whispered, feeling the younger woman's heart in her hands. They were at an inflection point, a crossroad that extended infinitely far into the future. The responsible, shinobi thing to do would be to crush Fuu's heart. Break her again, leave her to wait with the rest of them.

But overwhelmed by what she had just experienced, Kushina couldn't bring herself to do it.

"You've made a mistake," she said frankly, and Fuu stared at her, tears still leaking from her eyes.

"You're not like me," Kushina continued, potentially dooming everyone she knew with her honesty. On the ground, Utakata stirred, shifting his head to watch them from the floor. Yugito Nii was still watching, along with Han and Rōshi. Only Gaara and Killer Bee remained unmoving, essentially unconscious.

Kushina swallowed.

"You're not ready to die yet."

###

Snow started to drift down. Despite blue skies being visible in the distance, the mountains around the Fortress itself were blanketed in wet, slushy snow that half-melted as soon as it landed, a gorgeous shower that tickled her nose.

Sakura barely noticed it. There was no room in her head for anything but planning.

"The tenth level makes sense," Obito said, pacing. "So in that case… we'll have to switch things up a little." He shook his head. "Nagato would be stupid not to have marks down there, even if we can't see them right now thanks to that barrier. That means all of us going straight for the Jinchuriki will just drop him on top of us. We need to split his attention beforehand."

"He can't teleport instantly, right? Not like Dad?" Naruto asked, and Obito nodded.

"He needs to make hand signs. He surprised me last time, but now that I know them… I think I could stop him," he confirmed, and Sakura snapped her fingers.

"Three teams," she said, everything already clicking together in her head, and Obito raised an eyebrow. Everyone else looked to her; Sakura's heart didn't skip a beat.

"Sensei, you can get the closest with the Kamui without alerting Karin," she said, laying everything out as efficiently as possible. "You confront Nagato and the others, and keep him distracted. Don't let him teleport." Obito nodded, accepting the most dangerous job in existence without hesitation, just as Sakura had known he would. He was the most powerful of them all, and it wasn't close: he was surely the only one that could hope to face Nagato.

Sakura set her pack down and started pulling short-range headsets around, passing them around; everyone affixed them without a word in edgewise. "Sensei, don't take one of these. You'll want to appear alone, and you won't need to communicate anyway. You'll be busy. Mikoto, you'll use the Benzaiten to get to the Jinchuriki without getting detected, and free Kushina and Fuu to start. You'll have to hypnotize the Kyuubi."

"I'll go with her," Itachi said, and Sakura shot him a sharp look. "I'm quite proficient at masking my chakra," he continued pleasantly. "It will probably not be as efficient as her Benzaiten, but it should keep me hidden from Karin."

"Alright." Sakura accepted it. She had a vague sense that Itachi was underselling his abilities, but couldn't pinpoint the source: she just knew that he was being truthful. Sasuke looked uncomfortable, but she didn't care. "Mikoto and Itachi for the Jinchuriki then. Hinata, Naruto, Sasuke, and I will stay at a distance, just outside Karin's range, and move in if either group encounters complications."

Sakura looked around at her teammates, receiving nods. Good. "Sasuke, you'll go to help with the Jinchuriki," she continued. "Naruto and Hinata, we'll go together. The Cannon will be our first priority; everything else depends on how sensei, Mikoto, and Itachi do. Good?"

To her satisfaction, everyone nodded, some with surprised expressions. Naruto was practically glowing with admiration.

'He's so cute.'

"The other Kage are entering," Hinata said, her focus shifting. "Everyone has arrived now."

"Just as well," Sakura said. "Anything else before we go?"

"If we're going, then it's time I do my thing," Naruto said, and Sakura blinked before remembering what he was talking about.

"Right," she said, already removing her hoodie and top. She paused halfway, everyone watching her, and gestured for them to do the same thing. "You can do all of us, right?"

"I think so. I'll let you know if it doesn't work," Naruto said, unfurling a scroll, a brush, and an inkwell from his pack. He tested the brush on the scroll and nodded, satisfied, running through the same formula several times. Freezing slush landed on Sakura's bare shoulders, but she didn't flinch; the rest of the team was removing their shirts and jackets as well.

"It'll have to be on your stomach," Naruto said, blushing as he approached. Sakura nodded, standing ramrod straight as Naruto set to work. "That's where chakra gets shaped, obviously, so it's most efficient there," he muttered to himself, having difficulty looking at her abs for whatever reason. The ink was cold, just as much as the snow, but once more Sakura did not flinch. She folded her arms, patiently waiting and staying stock still as Naruto placed the seal on her stomach.

"Alright," he said after a minute, standing back and looking over his handiwork. His blush wasn't getting any lighter. He made nine hand signs with slow deliberation, brow furrowed with concentration.

"Kai," he hissed, and the seal lit with orange light for a moment, painlessly searing itself into Sakura's skin. She poked at it, finding the ink dry, and pulled her Akatsuki hoodie back on, giving Naruto a nod and a smile.

"Set," she said, and he beamed at her. "You said it's automatically activated?"

"Yeah," he said, getting to work on Sasuke. "The first time any of you get badly hurt," he said, slightly raising his voice so everyone could clearly hear him, "it should kick in." His tone grew a bit less cheerful. "But, just so you know… it'll shorten your life. Just a little. But if it needs to be activated, it'll probably be worth it."

"It's incredible work, Naruto," Obito said sincerely, and Naruto gave him a brief grin before refocusing on Sasuke. "I'm sure Kabuto would be honored."

"Well," Naruto said, and didn't finish the sentence until he was done with Sasuke. "We'll see."

It took several minutes for Naruto to finish, but when he was done every member of the team was marked with his brand new technique. Sakura watched the whole thing with admiration stirring deep in her chest.

'He's brilliant. You could not ask for someone better by your side.'

"Alright," Naruto said, a streak of ink across his cheek. He blew out a breath, sweating: he'd already used a lot of chakra solidifying the seals, but he was recovering quickly. "Anything else?"

"Just one thing," Obito said, stepping forward. "Before I go." He looked over all of them, his gaze particularly lingering on his students. Sakura shifted from foot to foot; she was ready to go. In just moments, everything would start and then it would never stop.

"I'm proud of you all," Obito said simply. "No matter what happens, you've all become incredible people. I wish I could claim you for myself, but we all know I haven't been a perfect teacher." He grinned. "It will be an honor to fight beside you here. I know you'll do your best, but I'll leave you with something Naruto's other teacher gave me."

His grin stayed, but his eyes were dead serious. "Do better than your best."

"Good luck, sensei," Naruto said, and Sasuke echoed the same.

"You have this," Sakura said, perhaps demanded, and Obito smiled wryly.

"Good luck, all of you," he said, and then he swirled out of existence, carried towards the Summit by his boundless will.

"Alright," Sakura said, finding herself grinning. Mikoto and Itachi were already moving; Sasuke hugged his mother, and hesitantly stopped before his brother. Barely slowing down, Itachi reached out with a gentle grin and poked his younger brother in the forehead, leaving Sasuke frozen as his family flitted into the mountains.

Despite the danger, despite the uncertainty, despite the infinitely terrible cost of failure, Sakura was excited. Her heart picked up, a steady thrill rushing through her.

"Let's go," she said, and Naruto, Sasuke, and Hinata nodded, all carrying the same determined look. She didn't say the words that were echoing through her head, but she was sure that they could all see them in her eyes.

'It ends today.'
 
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This chapter was so juicy. Loved everything we where served here.

Sakura's quietly off her rocker viewpoint continues to fascinating and disturbing with a touch of darkly funny as Black Zetsu's commentary leaks through.

Kushina - Kurama's conversation where The Nine Tails feels his cynicism has been validated because people trying to be nice and recanting on that when the pressure mounts fits uncomfortably well with the old fox's worldview and Kushina is bitter because she really did try only for it to not be enough was a great addition.

I love the Jinchruki all stuck in this powerless, can't affect anything limbo of a Rinnegan grade prison seal, everything is peaceful and beautiful but it a cage where they have no choices - agency and can only wait to die. Given what she may or may not have been told about what happened to her village and Kage Yugito being deeply angry and seething was on point.

Kushina and Fuu talking then connecting via Ninshu was fun, love how Kushina intellectually knows the smart thing - the Shinobi thing to do is push Fuu's feelings away and not make things harder but as a human being she can't not speak up and so tells Fuu that deep down the girl isn't really ready to die yet. As far Kushina knows this isn't going to help or change the outcome, she isn't aware that anyone is going to derail the summit so Fuu is set to die whatever Kushina says but she does the person not Shinobi thing of saying the words anyway.

The hype is real and I am so eager for what comes next.
 
Wait, what's the effect of combining Zetsu with the Jashin seed in Sakura?

Post Reveal about Black Zetsu and the plot to resurrect Kaguya.

Sakura: "A benevolent mother goddess to put humanity into a peaceful sleep, that's your goal?"
Black Zetsu: "Yes. No more blood and bone. No more human killing each with a power they should never have claimed for themselves."
Sakura: "Yeah I'm sorry that's not good enough for me."
Black Zetsu: "What?!"
Sakura: "A Divine Mother to lull the world to sleep, bring paradise on Earth? The animals called Shinobi don't deserve paradise and don't need some chakra charged Mother take their choices away."
Naruto: "Sakura yes!"
Sakura: "What the world needs is more violence! Violence and pain fit to kill those who won't learn and teach through suffering. Not an ancient Mother Goddess but a newly begun Devil of Ruin and Slaughter! Something to make them quake in fear, something to make them regret ever seeking war!"
Naruto: "Sakura No!"
(Sakura injects Jashin Chakra seed into the Ten Tails subverting Kaguya's return and creating Neo-Jashin.)
Black Zetsu: "I may have made a mistake."
 
It seems hard to predict because it's not really clear what Jashin is or what his(?) deal is.
 
It seems hard to predict because it's not really clear what Jashin is or what his(?) deal is.

"Like, I just want some blood. I'd be fine if y'all did some blood drives at the hospital, but my first followers decided to do the whole 'form a circle, lick the blood, and stab themselves' shtick, and they really seem to get a kick out of it, so who am I to stop them?"
 
Yeah I don't have much to say about this one. Its simply solid writing that finishes setting up all the dominoes for the climax. It was nice to get to see more of Sakura's utilitarian POV of her teammatespawns though and I loved the last line. Keep up the good work.
 
I think one good thing about this climax is that everything clashes here, so after the dust has settled the overarching issues like Black Zetsu and Kaguya should have resolved itself.

In the end it matters less who wins but who survives. The balance between the countries is fucked already but losing their Kages and most powerful ninja might make them look like easy targets, which could cause yet another war.
 
Fuu really is too good for this world of shinobi!
True breakout character imo, I never expected her to have such a big role in everything but I'm glad she pushed through.
This chapter was so juicy. Loved everything we where served here.

Sakura's quietly off her rocker viewpoint continues to fascinating and disturbing with a touch of darkly funny as Black Zetsu's commentary leaks through.

Kushina - Kurama's conversation where The Nine Tails feels his cynicism has been validated because people trying to be nice and recanting on that when the pressure mounts fits uncomfortably well with the old fox's worldview and Kushina is bitter because she really did try only for it to not be enough was a great addition.

I love the Jinchruki all stuck in this powerless, can't affect anything limbo of a Rinnegan grade prison seal, everything is peaceful and beautiful but it a cage where they have no choices - agency and can only wait to die. Given what she may or may not have been told about what happened to her village and Kage Yugito being deeply angry and seething was on point.

Kushina and Fuu talking then connecting via Ninshu was fun, love how Kushina intellectually knows the smart thing - the Shinobi thing to do is push Fuu's feelings away and not make things harder but as a human being she can't not speak up and so tells Fuu that deep down the girl isn't really ready to die yet. As far Kushina knows this isn't going to help or change the outcome, she isn't aware that anyone is going to derail the summit so Fuu is set to die whatever Kushina says but she does the person not Shinobi thing of saying the words anyway.

The hype is real and I am so eager for what comes next.
Always delighted to see your insights Toxin! The Jinchuriki prison was something that was stuck in my head for a while now; this fragile maze of paper walls that nonetheless constrains the most fearsome creatures in the world was just an unshakeable image. Kinda a visual metaphor for the whole shinobi system, really.
If Sakura were even a quarter of the way to rationality, she would process that thought, realize she's thinking of Uchiha Itachi as being pathetic, and quickly realize something is very wrong. :V
lmao, way too accurate.
Wait, what's the effect of combining Zetsu with the Jashin seed in Sakura?
Excellent question, can't answer quite yet.
Yeah I don't have much to say about this one. Its simply solid writing that finishes setting up all the dominoes for the climax. It was nice to get to see more of Sakura's utilitarian POV of her teammatespawns though and I loved the last line. Keep up the good work.
Doing my best to! The Summit has been surprisingly easy to write so far, though I haven't hit the true chaos yet, so we'll see if that continues to be the case. So far though, on track for weekly updates!
I think one good thing about this climax is that everything clashes here, so after the dust has settled the overarching issues like Black Zetsu and Kaguya should have resolved itself.

In the end it matters less who wins but who survives. The balance between the countries is fucked already but losing their Kages and most powerful ninja might make them look like easy targets, which could cause yet another war.
That's the idea, yeah. I wanna wrap up everything important conclusively here, leave some dangling threads to imagine the shape of future adventures, and have a nice relaxed epilogue. That's the dream, anyway.

Thanks for the comments everyone! See you this weekend!
 
Chapter 95: Revolution New
Declares War On The World

Jiraiya always preferred to arrive early for meetings, and the Kage Summit wasn't any different. It was set to begin at noon precisely: he was there at nine. The Toad Sage introduced himself to the samurai, placed himself in their custody, and was brought to Mifune. Their conversation was brief.

"I have no disagreement with you observing, Toad Sage," Mifune said. The Steel General had a decade on Jiraiya and looked every year of it, his face creased with countless wrinkles like paper that had been crumpled and thrown behind a desk. Unlike all the other samurai in their heavy, face-obscuring armor, he went bare-headed, though he wore a wrap around his head, hiding the terrible scar there. "We are both survivors of the Salamander, after all: it would not be my place to doubt you… So long as you do not disrupt the peace of the Summit."

"That's not why I'm here." Most everything in Jiraiya's mouth tasted like ash, words especially. "It just feels like my duty to watch. This is thanks to my students, after all."

Mifune nodded, showed him to the meeting room, and left him under samurai observation as he attended to other matters. Jiraiya found a corner and tried to meditate.

Obviously, he couldn't. There wasn't a sage in existence that could do that right now, he was sure of that. The same word kept playing over and over in his head: revolution, revolution, revolution.

His prophecy was about to come true. He was absolutely sure of it. The great revolution that the Great Toad Sage had foreseen was imminent, straining at the bounds of the pages of history as it tried to rip its way out. One of his students was about to change the world.

It was too easy to assume that it would be Nagato and Konan. They had called the Summit, ordered the execution of the Jinchuriki, and pushed everything over the edge.

But they hadn't crashed to the bottom of the cliff yet, and Jiraiya was an author who could not help but chart out the could be's and the may be's. Minato was coming here too, another subject of prophecy. It was selfish and absurd for him to be obsessing over it now, but the ancient Toad's utterance had dominated Jiraiya's life for so long that he couldn't help but be obsessed: obsessed and relieved that his anticipation was finally coming to an end.

Bring the revolution, he thought. Whether it's a firestorm or a rotation or something beyond my imagination, hit me with it as hard as you can. I want this to end: I want to see the next step, even if it's not what I wanted.

Absorbed in his thoughts, Jiraiya watched and waited as the mightiest ninja of the world arrived one by one.

Nagato and Konan were first, their coming marked by a great panic. The Cannon had come with it, and Nagato installed it on the roof of the fortress without much in the way of asking for permission. Jiraiya didn't want to see it again, but its placement was too loud to miss. The Amekage introduced themselves and their Honor Guard to Mifune as Jiraiya watched; Nagato ignored him, but afterwards Konan approached, accompanied by the young Uzumaki they'd brought along, Karin.

"Sensei," she said. "Glad to see you're alright."

"Konan," Jiraiya said, looking up at her and then over at Nagato. "I hope this ends how you wish."

She gave him a strange look, doubtlessly overthinking his words. For once, Jiraiya wasn't putting that much into them, but she couldn't know that. "Thank you, sensei," she eventually decided, before taking a seat beneath the grand banner of Rain. The meeting room was dominated by a semi-circular table large enough to seat twenty that curved around it, and Rain was placed on the leftmost end. There was a smaller table set opposite the middle of the curve, and that was where Mifune had placed himself, looking out over where the other Kage would be as the arbitrator.

But Nagato had placed himself there as well, sitting right next to the Steel General and removing himself from his fellow Kage. He and Mifune quietly argued, but the samurai was eventually forced to acquiesce.

Not a good start: the man claiming godhood spurned his peers.

Karin and the other Rain ninja, Jugo, took up positions behind Konan, and over the course of the next two hours the other Kage arrived.

The Tsuchikage was first. The man looked frail, but Jiraiya knew just how much strength was packed into his little body. In one of his novels, it would be tempting to make Onoki a miserable creature without any redeeming qualities, but Jiraiya knew that unfortunately wasn't the case. The Tsuchikage was both canny and paranoid, making his decisions based on the cold logic of ninja and little else. He was strong, dangerous, and successful.

Still, Jiraiya couldn't help but wink when the Tsuchikage looked his way, eliciting a smirk from the man. Both of his Honor Guard were very easy on the eyes too. He recognized them, of course: Kurotsuchi, Onoki's granddaughter and an inheritor of Lava Release, and Yui Tono, a sealing specialist with vibrant purple hair who looked like she'd had a raw lemon stuck in her mouth for a couple years. Kurotsuchi was looking around with obvious curiosity, but Yui stared straight ahead and radiated contempt.

The Tsuchikage settled in, speaking quietly with his Guard, and had enough time to look like he'd spent all his life in this room by the time the Mizukage arrived.

Mei Terumi, Yondaime Mizukage, and accompanied by Eyestealer Ao and the only loyal Swordsman of the Mist, Chojuro. They all took their place without much ceremony, Ao giving Jiraiya a bemused look; neither of them had expected to meet again so soon. The Mizukage tried to stay calm, but Jiraiya could sense her disquiet no matter how carefully she hid it behind a coy smile.

Minato was the next one to arrive, and the one Jiraiya paid the most attention to. Everyone present observed the Hokage, Yui Tono practically vibrating as he entered, but none of them saw what Jiraiya did.

He'd expected grief, anger; Minato wasn't someone who lost control of their emotions, the perfect shinobi, but Jiraiya still expected a sign. He had imagined that he would come to his feet and console his student, giving him a bit of strength to continue forward.

But instead, Minato's coming froze Jiriaya's blood and turned his heart as solid and unmoving as a stone.

The Hokage entered like the deadly killer he was, every step perfectly paced and his attention falling across everyone and everything equally. In his full Hokage regalia, like the rest of the Kage, he absorbed the entire room in a moment, assigning threats, politely greeted Mifune and the other Kage, and took his seat with Rin and Gai behind him.

But his eyes gave him away. Minato was struggling, his mind absent. He was absorbed in himself, like Jiraiya and his prophecy were. Jiraiya could see, as clear as day, a shadow of Minato calmly rising to his feet and cutting the throats of everyone in the room. Doing it regardless of the Cannon being fired; doing it regardless of Konoha being damned in the process.

The Hokage was a razor edge that no one could touch without suffering a life-threatening wound, and Jiraiya found himself frozen in terror. Even more horrifying was that no one else present, not even Nagato, seemed to notice. His student's invisible killing pressure was apparent to him and him alone.

Minato made eye contact with him, and Jiraiya carefully inclined his head. The Hokage's mouth curled up into a smile, but nothing about him changed.

The rest of the Kage arrived just minutes later. Rasa of the Desert and his children filed in, not greeting anyone before they took their positions, and almost directly behind him were a contingent of Cloud ninja. There was no banner for them, but Darui seated himself nonetheless, looking both tense and confident. The Kazekage had an unexpected tagalong; Jiraiya allowed a grunt of surprise at Chiyo the Puppet Mistress being present. The ancient woman was bundled up in traditional robes and looked half-asleep, but he was sure it was an act.

Interspersed amidst the remaining Kage were four more arrivals, leaders of minor villages. Elder Eiji from the Hidden Waterfall, bearing twin swords and a cocky look; Namazu of the Hidden Rivers, an older, stocky man with a thick brown beard and mustache styled to have several whorling braids that stuck out from his face at severe angles; Lord Hirate of the Hidden Grass, former monk turned shinobi that still dressed the part with a clean shaven head and humble robes; and Mistress Jinmeiyō of the Hidden Springs, a tall and severe woman with rich garments covered in jangling beads inscribed with various jutsu formula. Each leader took a seat between some of the Kage, spreading out as their single bodyguard did the same, retreating to the shadows of the room to observe.

Now, finally, everyone was present, and noon arrived moments later. Jiraiya straightened up, taking in the whole room instead of each individual. There was a tremendous pressure with so many powerful ninjas gathered together, but it was subdued. Though Minato's aura continued to scream to Jiraiya, the various Kage regarded one another calmly, though all occasionally glanced at Nagato, removed as he was from the rest.

Mifune rose, clearing his throat. "Present your marks of office," he said, his voice not raised but carrying throughout the room; a general's . As one, the Kage removed their hats emblazoned with their villages' symbols and gently placed them down on the table; the minor leaders placed weapons, prayer beads, emblems, and a carved fish, doing the same. "You, the Rokukage, and the River Lord, Head Elder, Lord of Grass, and Mistress of Spring have assembled here at the Amekage's request," the Steel General said, both managing to not make a mockery of the word 'request' and impart equal importance to each title.

"One of the Amekage has placed himself apart from you," Mifune continued, glancing at Nagato to his side, and Jiraiya almost laughed at the boldness of the samurai. "Do not mistake this as him having undo authority; he has simply refused to move." Nagato looked up at the samurai, a hint of a smile tugging at his mouth as Mifune turned back to the assembled leaders. "I am Mifune, and I alone shall preside over these proceedings. If there is disagreement, I shall moderate it."

He sat back down, ramrod straight, and gestured graciously to all assembled. A consummate professional, Jiraiya thought; even among all these people, he radiated authority. He was the wise elder that Jiraiya had so often played at, and played poorly.

"You may begin."

"Rokukage?" Rasa immediately said with a snort, before the echo of Mifune's voice had even faded. He gestured to Darui, face twisting into a sneer. "Is there even still a Hidden Cloud to present a Kage at this Summit?"

"The Hidden Cloud still exists," Darui said gradually, looking at Nagato and somehow refraining from a cutting remark. "Though it is badly injured, that I cannot deny. Because of those dire circumstances… I am here to ensure we have a voice at the most important table in the world."

That opened the floodgates; everyone began talking at once, with Mifune occasionally interrupting as a calming presence. Jiraiya sat back, letting every word sink into him. The specifics didn't matter, not right now. Blame was the name of the game. Every leader went after Darui, blaming him for everything that had happened, the Calamity in the Land of Frost, claiming that the Hidden Cloud should be finished off as a lesson to future generations. As he listened to the mindless hatred, Jiraiya's mind wandered.

He wondered how Kushina was doing. The news of her imminent execution hadn't shocked him as badly as it should have. The second he'd seen her in the wake of the invasion with her seal shattered beyond repair, he'd known she would be living on borrowed time. No one could survive with the Nine Tailed Fox inside them and no means of containing it: even the Uzumaki seals and structures in Konoha would only keep her safe for a time. Her fate had been sealed the second she'd chosen to battle Kimimaro instead of letting him rampage.

Still, it was heartbreaking. But he'd suffered heartbreak before. At least Kushina had had time to say goodbye to her family and friends; at least she hadn't died abruptly, with no chance to dispel her regrets. As far as shinobi went, her circumstances could have been much worse.

"My predecessor did not do anything that any other Kage would not have," Darui's voice rang out, cutting through Jiraiya's musing, and he looked up at the various shocked and appalled performances. All the Kage, except Minato, acted offended, but Darui stood up, his steady voice raised but not angry. "The history of mankind is a history of conflict; the story of our Hidden Villages is a tale of war. Four now, in as many generations. For as long as the Villages have existed… they have all been chasing after greater weapons. Ninjutsu, secret formulas, Bloodlines, the Jinchuriki. And now, technology."

He crossed his arms, looking at Nagato once more. "Cloud may have had the… ill-fortune of being the first victim of Rain's project, but I will not accept us being named a unique evil."

For a moment that quieted all present, before the Mizukage spoke.

"Well," Mei said, almost playfully. "If that's the case, perhaps it's time to drag out the Cannon's designer? We could all get a look at the man that is really responsible for this mess." She smiled, her incredible beauty ruined by her hungry look. "And decide his fate."

The Kage nodded, and Mifune rose. "It would be ideal to advance the agenda," he said, nodding to two samurai guards. They left, and he continued. "Though I must once more protest the presence of the weapon here."

Nagato, who had been quiet since it all began, spoke. "It was your trade that made that thing possible," he said quietly. Mifune did not stiffen, did not turn to look, but Jiraiya could tell every ounce of his focus had fallen on Nagato. "And now, you are afraid to host it? Perhaps you should have considered that more carefully, before you helped create it."

Mifune did not respond. He stared straight ahead, exuding peace. Jiraiya couldn't blame him. It wasn't the whole truth, but it wasn't a lie either. Iron was the foremost exporter of the chakra conductive metal the Cannon was constructed from, and the samurai were high up that particular pyramid. It was all their sins sitting above their heads now, weighing down on the roof of the Fortress in the shape of an ugly weapon: greed, hatred, Ninjutsu, coalesced into something awful beyond his most flowery description.

Well, maybe he could try while a mostly innocent man was dragged before the eyes of a world desperate for a scapegoat. How would he put it? Like a karmic spider, thick poison sacs bulging, weighed down by an ocean of blood-

Then there was a sound, and Jiraiya's sardonic musings whipped away in an instant. He cocked his ear, unable to believe what he was hearing; everyone in the chamber did the same. It sounded like water running over electrified stones, or a generator in the midst of heating up being dropped down an elevator shaft.

Obito Uchiha popped into existence, standing atop the Kage's table, and Jiraiya's mind stuttered to a dead stop.

For a full second, an eternity for shinobi, no one said or did anything. Obito looked around the room, trying to make eye contact with each and every person present, Jiraiya included. When Jiraiya looked into his one-time student's Eternal eyes, he sucked in a breath.

One-time student-!

A cruel slash was drawn through Obito's hitai-ate, bisecting the symbol of the Leaf. Obito had always had confidence issues for as long as Jiraiya had known him. He'd never believed he deserved a thing: always thought his eyes a crutch. Never desired for himself, only ever followed orders.

But today, there was a desire, a fire in his eyes, that leapt the distance between him and Jiraiya like an invisible flame and lit Jiraiya's own heart alight.

"Hokage!" the Tsuchikage called out. Honor Guard had erupted from the shadows, filling the room with ninja as nearly twenty shinobi leapt to their leader's defense. The ten remaining samurai in the room readied themselves as well, chakra erupting from their blades. "We must assume this treason!"

"Peace," Mifune commanded, his samurai circling the room. "An unwelcome guest will be removed, treason or not." He turned to Minato, his hand falling to his sheathed sword. "Hokage, command your man to leave. Or there will be consequences."

Minato looked around, the dead light in his eyes shattered, replaced by curiosity, fear, fury, a hundred other emotions Jiraiya couldn't identify. He looked back at Rin and Gai, and the both of them wordlessly shook their heads.

"It's treason, all right," Minato said, his tone mild and yet somehow cutting through the almost audible screech of chakra filling the room. "But it's not mine."

More and more ninja noticed the slash drawn through Obito's headband, and confusion and anger spread through the room. Mifune's hand tightened around his blade. Jiraiya was still transfixed.

Popping out of nowhere-

Facing down the Kage-

Looking around with those inhuman eyes, burning and yet bereft of cruelty-

Jiraiya's heart felt like it was going to burst out of his chest.

Nagato cleared his throat, standing up. Mifune glanced back at him, but did not interrupt.

"Obito Uchiha," Nagato said, and even Jiraiya didn't expect what came out of his mouth next. "Please step down; it's childish to stand on the furniture."

"I won't," Obito said, his face twisting into a carefree grin. He looked so happy and free, so much that Jiraiya felt a flash of insane jealousy. There were many explanations for this that fit neatly into preconceived notions: a clever and treacherous Leaf scheme, perennial Uchiha madness, a sacrificial play where Obito threw him on the sword to spare his teacher's wife.

But this wasn't any of that. Jiraiya felt it in his bones.

"That's quite rude," Nagato noted.

"Yeah," Obito grinned. "I didn't come here to be polite."

"Hmm," Nagato crossed his arms, apparently at a loss, and it was the Mizukage that spoke instead.

"Why have you come here then, Uchiha?" Mei asked, bracketed by her guards. Her eyes were clever, curious. "You can't seriously intend to interrupt us."

"Hmm." Now it was Obito's turn to cross his arms and consider. Jiraiya watched in total disbelief; how could he not have prepared a statement? He'd crashed the Kage Summit without even knowing what he was going to say!

Jiraiya started laughing, ignored by the rest of the room.

"I guess that's pretty simple," Obito decided, nodding. Jiraiya could see right through him. The words emerged without consideration, without thought, straight from his soul. There were many things he should have said, that the hero was supposed to say: I'm here to save you from Nagato, I'm here to help you fight Rain, I'm here to prevent a disaster. Noble words that would have let him turn everyone against Nagato, and perhaps ensure a bloodbath to Obito and the Leaf's favor.

That wasn't what Obito said.

"I'm here to declare war on the world."

Maybe the room should have laughed along with Jiraiya, but a deadly stillness spread instead. As Jiraiya's laughter tapered off, he could see why.

"Ridiculous." Onoki's hands tightened into whitened fists.

"Absurd." Mei's eyes were wide and cautious.

"There's no way." Darui's hands inched towards the broad sword strapped across his back.

"Foolish." Gold dust was already dancing in Rasa's palms.

Konan and Nagato said nothing, watching as they readied themselves. Mifune did the same, eyes flicking between his samurai with silent commands.

The legend of Obito Uchiha was a terror known worldwide. The child who'd slaughtered twenty grown men; the ghost who bathed in lakes of blood; the Uchiha with an Eternal Eye; the Right Hand of the Hokage, the Untouchable Blade. Obito Uchiha, on any day, would be a dreadful opponent.

This Obito was an entirely different beast.

His chakra crackled around him. Both his eyes spun, their seven points seeming eager to cut. He stood strong before the mightiest in the world, as if daring them to approach. He'd undergone a transformation. Not just both of his eyes becoming Eternal, but something more than that. He'd shed every falsehood, shriven away the parts of him Jiraiya had assumed were true but had turned out to be fear and false modesty and useless baggage.

He was just as fearsome as Nagato, and he stood before the world without giving an inch.

"Obito," Minato said, the only one that hadn't prepared himself for a fight. He sighed, long and slow, and Obito placed his full attention on his sensei. Despite that, no one moved. Jiraiya watched as Karin began to tremble, overwhelmed by the fear and violent urges ricocheting around the room. "I wish you wouldn't do this."

"Too bad, sensei," Obito said, gesturing at his headband. "Don't work for you anymore, as I'm sure you can see."

"Obito, what the fuck are you doing?" Rin asked, looking confused and desperate. "You can't come back from this-!"

"Rin," Minato said firmly, and his student shut her mouth, looking helplessly between her teacher and her lover. Minato dragged his focus back to Obito, the same murderous aura that Jiraiya had seen when he arrived flickering back to life. It was directed at no one and nothing. There had been no collusion. This was just another factor beyond the Hokage's control, one more thing establishing his helplessness.

Minato wasn't the protagonist here, Jiraiya couldn't help but think. He often was in any given situation, but not here.

"You've endangered the village by doing this, Obito," he continued in the same quiet, serious tone, like a parent guiding their child. "Even if you've cut yourself from Konoha, you will still be seen as a ninja of the Leaf; your actions here speak for all of us. Please, think of your students, your friends… everyone. Stand down."

Obito stayed resolute, not speaking, and Minato continued, a breath of urgency in his voice. "No one can take on the world alone," he said, and Jiraiya knew Minato was speaking from the heart, digging up his deepest beliefs just the same as Obito had. Their ideals were clashing in the middle of the room with a physical impact, chakra on chakra. "No one can take on every grudge and every responsibility. Not me, not you, not even Nagato," he said, pointing at the Amekage. "You're being naive."

Obito raised a finger, and his chakra went still. The room tensed, ready to snap.

"You're wrong," he said, like it was that simple.

Minato blinked.

"Obito-" he muttered in disbelief.

Jiraiya couldn't tear his eyes away.

'You will guide that revolution. The choice that you make will decide which way that change goes.'

No matter what happened, no matter what Obito did, Jiraiya had to follow him with everything he had. If he had to die for him, he'd do it without hesitation. The day he'd been waiting for all his life had finally arrived.

"I'm not naive," Obito declared. His arms slowly dropped to his sides, his body relaxing. "No one, not even you, sensei, truly understands what I'm capable of."

"Deluded words from a deluded child," Onoki called out, and Obito shot him a blood-freezing glare. The Tsuchikage was halfway through a hand-sign before he realized what he was doing, and stopped. Obito ignored him.

"I'm going to stop this Summit," Obito said, taking a step forward. He dropped off the table and landed without a sound.

The whole room, bar Minato and Nagato, stepped back.

"I'm going to save Kushina. And the other Jinchuriki while I'm at it. All of them," he continued. Another step, another retreat.

Obito's absurd words sounded far too true for anyone's comfort.

"And then, I'm going to go home," he said, chuckling. Another decision, right from the heart. Jiraiya saw him make it in that instant; he'd come here with no foresight, trusting everything to the moment.

"And you know what? I won't even have to kill a single one of you stupid bastards to do it."

The declaration rang throughout the chamber, and for a moment Jiraiya thought that some of the Kage, the greatest ninja in the world, might break and run. Nagato looked uncertain; he did not fling himself at Obito, knowing that it would be pointless if Obito wasn't attacking.

Then, someone started clapping.

It was so ridiculous, so crude, that somehow Jiraiya knew who was responsible without even having to consider it.

He looked towards the nearest entrance, and Yahiko walked into the chamber, continuing his mocking applause.

"Manage that without killing anyone?" his blind student asked, 'looking' around the chamber despite his closed eyes. He was in Sage Mode, navigating as if he had sight, and Jiraiya resisted the urge to tackle Yahiko and strangle the life out of him. He'd have to at least wait until he was in Sage Mode himself. He immediately started meditating, freezing his body as Yahiko kept speaking, the chamber too shocked to react. Even Mifune was overwhelmed by his sudden arrival. "That would be a hell of a thing."

The man who hate had blinded looked at his fellow Amekage with a smile. "Konan," he said pleasantly.

"Yahiko, how the hell are you here?" Konan asked, rage starting to spread across her fine features.

Yahiko ignored the well-founded question. "Why does the Hidden Leaf still exist?" he asked. "Wasn't any interruption to be punished immediately?" He gestured to Obito on the table, the question rapidly spreading around the room.

It was a fulcrum, Jiraiya saw. Yahiko was a bastard, but he was a smart one. The other Kage were all weighing their chances now; turn on Nagato, butcher the Rain, and run off with their Jinchuriki. Sack the Summit; after all, Nagato hadn't yet followed through on his threat.

"Obito no longer represents the Hidden Leaf," Minato declared, staying ahead of the rising tide of blood. "He has renounced the Village, and gone rogue."

He threw away his student just like that, but Jiraiya couldn't blame him. Doing anything else right now could be deadly.

"Oh?" Yahiko asked in mock surprise. "Truly?"

"Truly," Minato said emphatically. "I came here in good faith, Amekage." How he couldn't be seething, veins exploding out of his head, Jiraiya would never understand.

"Well, that's convenient," Yahiko said with a beatific smile. The scars around his eyes crinkled. "Then, Hokage, could you do us all the service of killing this intruder? Before he's mistaken for one of your own?"

Obito raised an eyebrow, and Yahiko turned his smile to him. "We can't have our peace talks interrupted, after all."

Jiraiya's eyes flickered to Nagato, interrupting his meditation for a moment. His student was struggling, but only for a second. Yahiko had checkmated him; if he did not agree, all the Kage in the room would turn on him instantly, each fighting under the hope it would not be their village the Cannon struck first. Desperation and fear made the air hazy.

Nagato nodded.

"Dispose of your rogue, Hokage," he said. Despite Mifune's bold words earlier, he was silent; the illusion of his authority was shattered. Nagato stood up, looking around the room. "Everyone who wishes to assist is free to. We'll resume the Summit when Obito Uchiha is dead."

All at once, too much happened for Jiraiya to track.

Obito flung himself at Nagato, ripping up a piece of the table under his feet.

Minato flung himself at Obito, a knife emerging from his cloak.

And half the room followed him.

Nagato was nearly struck in the head by a chunk of stone, and then the room descended into complete chaos; ninjutsu cracked and shattered the walls, flames devouring the banners of the villages, and Ao, who had pursued Obito as well, was flung across the room, slamming through a stone pillar and tumbling to a stop. Shinobi who had not entered the battle, including Konan, Yahiko, Nagato, the Tsuchikage and his guards, Rin and Gai, Rasa and his children, Chiyo, and several of the minor leaders scattered for cover, and Obito transformed into a whirling maelstrom of violence as he and Minato descended into a battle that was impossible to follow.

Sage Mode finished. Jiraiya surged to his feet, but as he did Karin began shouting.

"There's more coming!" she said, drawing the attention of the room to her despite Obito, Minato, and a dozen other ninja ricocheting around it. "At least twenty!" He could feel them now too, though not with the same certainty as Karin; shinobi were converging on the fortress from every direction, cutting down samurai guards as they streamed in through the underground tunnels and over the vast walls.

A handful of them felt familiar; the rest didn't. Obito's team was here, but the others-?

"More treachery!" Yahiko shouted, gesturing wildly around the room. "Who else is attempting to undermine this meeting?!" He turned to Nagato, who had yet to pursue Obito: the Rinnegan was taking in every aspect of the fight, watching the dance Obito and Minato had fallen into with unmistakable fascination. "Nagato, this can't stand! You have to use the Cannon!"

"Some of them are heading for it!" Karin confirmed, and Nagato took a deep breath. Part of the ceiling shattered, Obito punching the shards of stone into the ninja assaulting him with enough force to shatter bones. Mistress Jinmeyō's bodyguard went down with a cry of pain, their leg facing the wrong way.

"Nagato, you did your best, but the Summit has failed!" Yahiko said. Some of the Kage looked ready to attack him, and he spun towards them eagerly. "The Cannon-!"

"Will not be fired until it is clear what's happening," Nagato declared, and Yahiko's eager look slipped away. "I will guard it. Kage: defend this Summit with your lives." He looked around at those not engaged with Obito. "If you betray it, you will be punished."

Obito lunged for him again, but in the midst of a battle with Minato it was too much; he was nearly stabbed through the lung, and by the time he dodged the attack and came to his feet Nagato had made several hand signs and vanished, carried away by the Flying Thunder God. Yahiko immediately chased after Obito, adding himself to the fight. With Nagato gone, Konan immediately began barking orders.

"Mifune!" she said, and the general nodded stiffly. "Organize your samurai! The Fortress is under attack! Tsuchikage, Kazekage, Eiji, Hirate, take your ninja and kill the intruders!" She was spitting, enraged by the apparent betrayal. "Karin, stay by my side! If anyone touches the Jinchuriki, we will vaporize their home!" She gestured to Rin and Gai, watching the battle between Obito and Minato in horror. "You as well, Leaf ninja! Go!"

The room emptied, ninja fanning out through every exit to kill those that had put them all at risk as Obito continued to battle Minato, Yahiko, Mei, Darui, Jinmeiyō, Namazu, and their various guards all at the same time. Somehow, he wasn't losing.

"And you," Konan said, spinning towards Jiraiya. He gestured innocently at himself.

"Who, me?" he said, his toad-like features painting him as the picture of innocence. Lord Hirate pushed by him, expecting Jiraiya to give and stumbling when he didn't.

"Karin, restrain him!" Konan snapped, and even though he knew she was capable of it Jiraiya was surprised as the miraculous golden Adamantine Chains erupted from the young Uzumaki girl and encircled him, wrapping his body tightly and forcing him to his knees. He watched the technique with interest, comparing it to Kushina's. "No more interruptions! Not even from you, sensei!"

Konan paced the chamber, observing the near-incomprehensible fight Obito was putting up. Neither she nor her sensor, engrossed in the sudden invasion, had noticed Jiraiya's sleight of hand.

"The Summit won't be ended," Konan declared, looking up towards the ceiling, where beyond Nagato was guarding the Cannon from forces unknown. "The Jinchuriki won't be saved."

"Whoever they are, we'll track them down and kill them all."
 
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