[Nanoha/Vividred] All the colours of the Earth

Changing because I am suddenly very interested in exactly what would happen with this vote RE: Yuuno being too hurt to run and not having his Jungle Undergrowth bonus now that they're out of it.[/quote]

Sounds like you want to find out if Yuuno would die... Canonically he's quite hurt at this point. I don't think he could really defend himself again properly...

Would this lead to Raising Heart ending up with the police instead?


I guess not-magical girl Nanoha would be different though.
 
Eeeeeh. It's possible the Vivid side could figure out RH and scan for magical potential to get it to Nanoha?

We'd get to find out! And in the meantime Nanoha has a perfectly servicable martial arts style to pump all her effort into, now that she has a motivation to train harder.
 
pressea said:
Eeeeeh. It's possible the Vivid side could figure out RH and scan for magical potential to get it to Nanoha?.
Because as well all know, a government would never keep an alien artefact to study it for themselves! So that sounds like a completely legit scenario, yup.
 
Quickshot0 said:
Because as well all know, a government would never keep an alien artefact to study it for themselves! So that sounds like a completely legit scenario, yup.
I didn't say it would happen instantly! But there's a limited number of people who can really use the thing, you know? They can't get around that (hopefully??? Vivid tech is fearsome.) and ridiculously high ranked mages don't exactly grow on trees.
 
Calling this: [X] Run straight in, punch the horrid thing in its face

It's almost too bad... no matter, no matter. Yuuno will live a while longer, yes he will. Nanoha will also live.
 
Suzuka

It was strange.

Arisa shuffled her feet around, searching for a better position to launch an attack. Maybe searching for a position that would let her easily dodge. Suzuka didn't know which; she'd never studied fighting, hadn't even paid much attention to Nanoha during her demonstrations. The monster was in perfect focus, now; it was a fractal, electric blue veins of energy splitting over and over until, at its fog-like edge, it was hard to tell where the monster stopped and the air started. Somehow she knew, and she didn't know how, but the energy was flowing inwards rather than outwards. The monster was eating the light.

Suzuka had never thought of herself as a brave person. She had never been able to stand up to Arisa. Not when she was bullying her, although in retrospect Arisa had just wanted to drag her out of her shell - she sucked at it, that was all - and not now, whenever Arisa had a brainwave about what to do.

In a situation like this, with Nanoha hurt and Arisa shouting at her to get away, shouldn't she do as asked? Run away, take Nanoha, leave the monster to Arisa?

But she wasn't brave enough to trust that Arisa could stop it, and she wasn't brave enough to face the world without Arisa by her side. She couldn't possibly let her stay here on her own. They could run away together - she could grab Arisa, grab Nanoha, and they could do their best to escape - but even if it didn't catch them while they where fleeing, what would happen to the new kid? The boy she didn't know, who was obviously hurt and probably couldn't run? It'd catch him instead…

The thoughts ran through her head in a fraction of a second, courtesy of many an afternoon spent playing games in the forest behind her house. Usually the monster wasn't real, and it never looked this scary, but -

"Arisa's right," she told Nanoha. "You, run. Get the boy, and get out of here. Call for help."

That was all she gave herself time for. Arisa and the monster were still in a standoff, neither of them really moving, but that could change at any moment.

She turned away from Nanoha, terror still visible on her face, and ran towards the monster while yelling something undecipherable. One fist extended.

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Nanoha

"Suzuka, stop. You can't -"

Nanoha choked, as her headache spiked, and her whispered warning failed mid-sentence. She was forced to watch helplessly as Suzuka ran screaming towards the blob of darkness, hand outstretched as part of what Nanoha could only call an anti-stance.

A monster… why is there a monster? Since when are there monsters?

She could hear the boy that had tumbled out along with Arisa shouting something in a language she didn't recognise. The monster hissed, and the warbling sound seemed to pierce straight through her head, but she gritted her teeth and forced herself to think through the pain, blinking away tears.

She could think of at least ten ways to break Suzuka's charge, and she wasn't a monster. Most of them, she'd been told never to use on someone she didn't want to hurt - a monster wouldn't care -

Suzuka was going to get killed!

The monster turned to face Suzuka, its train-whistle voice increasing in volume and urgency. Arisa shouted something, but she couldn't make it out over the noise from the monster - at least she'd gotten the noise back under control - she was about to watch as it steamrolled Suzuka -

Nanoha staggered forward, unsure of what to do but completely unwilling to leave them alone.

The boy shouted something else, and a green tracery of light lit the air in front of him.

The monster flung a tentacle made of pure darkness towards Suzuka, bypassing Arisa entirely. Suzuka flinched, and threw herself to one side - no, fell to one side - but the tentacle simply curved, unerringly tracking her trajectory and homing in on her chest. Nanoha screamed, certain she was about to see something terrible.

A horrible ripping noise filled the air, and an actinic glare forced her to close her eyes and look away, blinking away tears. The monster screamed - she had no other word for it - screaming all around -

Finally the glare lessened. She looked up, afraid of what she'd find - Suzuka had been in the centre of that, whatever it was -

…Thank God.

Suzuka was still alive. She was standing somewhat awkwardly, and surrounded by a dense, luminous blue mist, but she seemed to be all right. The monster was gone. She knew she shouldn't relax yet, not before she was completely sure of what had happened to it - that it wasn't going to come back - but it was a little hard to stay focused. Her head still hurt, more so now than it had done earlier - too much stress, too much forcing herself to work through the pain - she kept going, though, until she was close enough to confirm that Suzuka really was all right. Not hurt at all, looked like. Not even scuffed. The only sign that something odd had happened was the mist, which was quickly dispersing into the afternoon air.

Arisa, who was standing a few meters away, let out a sound somewhere between a sob and a laugh, before she dropped her improvised stance and ran over towards them - stumbled - jumped the last few decimetres, and pulled all three of them down into a laughing, crying and very slowly relaxing tangle of limbs.

On their left side the boy looked incredulously at the three girls, while the strange green traceries that had been hovering in front of him slowly unmade themselves.

———————​
Arisa

"You're okay? You're both okay?" Arisa could hear the fear in her own voice, and even though both Suzuka and Nanoha nodded, she immediately followed up by running her hands over them, patting them down to make completely sure.

They were both fine. Neither of them had been hurt, even after… she'd seen the monster attack Suzuka, who had practically offered herself up as bait. The only reason she was fine was that half of it had evaporated on contact, after which the rest of it had run away while screaming like a banshee. She didn't think it'd want to come back, but even if it did, it was probably… well, she hoped this meant it was actually harmless.

Arisa slumped down onto the knotted grass, feeling the reassuring touch of her friends against her sides, and decided to just relax for a little while.

"But…" She heard Nanoha say. "Arisa, are you all right? You're all scraped up." Nanoha shifted around, and Arisa winced as she felt her poke next to a particularly long scratch.

"I'm fine," she said dismissively. "It's just a few scratches from running through the woods - hey, wait a minute. You're the one who asked me to do that, so stop complaining about them!"

..stop complaining that she'd gotten scratched up? Yeah, no, that didn't even sound sensible in her own mind, and she was sure she could hear Nanoha and Suzuka blinking in confusion.

"Um…"

Suzuka sounded doubtful, and Arisa could feel herself blushing. Trying to save face, she shot back a question of her own.

"What about you, Nanoha? Are you really okay? You weren't fine earlier."

"Un, un!" Suzuka agreed.

"Nyahaha!" Nanoha laughed, her typical response when they asked her something she didn't want to answer. They knew how to deal with that, too, by waiting her out. "Um. Well, it's like this. Sometimes I get these headaches, but they always pass pretty quickly."

They waited.

"Er, and I haven't had a really bad one for over two years, so I wasn't expecting it when it happened. That's why I never told you."

More waiting. Arisa glanced at the boy, who was tying something around his leg - tearing off part of his shirt to do it, too.

"Um, so -" Nanoha poked her fingertips together. "- They're always bad when they happen, but I'll be perfectly fine in another… two hours or so?"

So much for cram school -

Arisa could have kicked herself. Why was she thinking about school now, after everything that had happened? What they should be doing was, um…

She glanced at her arms, which were covered in scratches - a few showing traces of blood - and then at Nanoha, who even though she sounded normal had barely been able to walk when she'd tried to chase Suzuka. There was also that boy, though he seemed to be doing a good job of fixing his own leg. She assumed.

"Suzuka, do you still have your pad?" She asked.

"Ah. Yes, just let me -" Suzuka trailed off, as she pulled a string of what seemed like silly putty out of her pocket. "Um. That is…"

"Is that your pad?" Arisa hesitantly asked. "What happened to it?"

"I'm not sure." Suzuka experimentally tugged at the putty-like substance, and found that it had a very limited amount of give before turning solid. It definitely wasn't real putty, she couldn't split it, but it wasn't acting the way her pad was supposed to act either. "I think… I think this is how they get if you completely tap out the battery, but I've never seen it like this before. Um…"

"Which means none of us have a phone. Great. Hey, you!" She shouted. "Boy over there, do you have a phone?"

"Arisa," Suzuka whispered intently.

"Ah, um, no?" He answered, sounding flustered.

"Great, just great. Um, nice to meet you though. I'm Arisa! What's your name?"

Suzuka hissed "Arisa!"

She was starting to sound like a teakettle. Arisa supposed she'd probably flubbed some Japanese greeting custom again, but she couldn't really help it, could she? Besides, it was his own fault for not immediately introducing himself once the monster went away.

"I'm… Call me Yuuno." He seemed terribly confused, but she got that reaction a lot. "Nice to meet you too?"

"Wonderful." Arisa smiled, though it was more of a showing of teeth. "And this is Nanoha and Suzuka. Now, since none of us have any way of calling for help, I think it's time we get out of here and find our own. Before that monster comes back, too."

She stalked over and, after confirming that only one of his feet were hurt, pushed herself under the corresponding arm to help him walk. A nod to Suzuka had her doing the same for Nanoha, who didn't have a bad leg but could still use the help.

"So, Nanoha said she heard you calling for help, but when I went over to have a look I found a monster. Even before then, I'm pretty sure you were giving her headaches. Do you know anything about that?" She asked conversationally. "There was that lightshow, too."

Yuuno stiffened. "Headaches? No, but the jewel seed… the monster… I was going to make it up to her…"

Curiouser and curiouser. At least it didn't seem like Yuuno had deliberately set the monster on them - not that she'd been worried about that, really. "Oh, don't worry about explaining it right now." For starters, Nanoha didn't seem like she was really paying attention to anything but her feet. "We'll just go visit Nanoha's home, and you can explain it to us and her family at the same time."

Oh, and now the poor kid looked half panicked, no doubt at the thought of the monster coming back - not. Arisa smiled to herself. Yep, that tactic looked like it'd work.

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They got a few concerned looks on the way - Nanoha's home was conveniently close, but it was still a few minutes of walking - but the occasional glare from her was all it really took to diffuse them. She knew they probably should have asked the first adult they saw for a ride, though; the reason they hadn't was that this had the scent of Adventure all over, and nothing actually bad had happened once they got over the fright. Well, other than Nanoha's headache, but she still insisted that was somehow "normal".

Arisa, always in the lead, was also the first one to reach the front door to her house.

"We're home!" She shouted inside. "Well, I'm visiting, but Nanoha's home, and we brought a guest! Is Miyuki here?"

"Just me, and I just got home myself," came an amused voice from inside. "Is Suzuka the guest, now?"

"Nope!" She dragged Yuuno, forcing him to follow until they were face to face with Nanoha's sister. "Er… He followed me home, can I keep him?"

Yuuno's face had looked completely and hilariously panicked when she dragged him inside, but he calmed down considerably now that he was face to face with a girl his own age. Arisa could understand that, she supposed; people didn't get much more nonthreatening than Nanoha's "younger twin".

"I'm… Yuuno Scrya," he said. "Nice to meet you."

"Likewise," the brown-haired girl replied. "Takamachi Hayate, I'm glad to make your acquaintance."

Arisa cut in. "And now that that's done -"

She put her hands on her hips and glared at Hayate, who would probably have made some attempt to escape if she wasn't stuck in a wheelchair.

"Even if Nanoha wasn't going to, at least you should have told me about her headaches," she said. "Honestly! You're both terrible at asking for help."

Nanoha walked up behind her, leaning on Suzuka's shoulder and inadvertently making a good case that, yes, either or both of them really should have mentioned it. Suzuka's slight frown also helped.

Hayate paled, and she responded in a hurried, worried manner that took most of the wind out of Arisa's sails.

"Big sis! Are you all right? I didn't hear - you're not still hearing it, are you? Should I call Mom and Dad?"

Nanoha waved her off. "I'm fine, I'm fine. I'm not sure, but - it wasn't very bad this time. I'm almost back to normal already, see?" She carefully extracted herself from Suzuka, thereby demonstrating that she could stand on her own legs with only a minor bit of trembling.

Hayate let out a heartfelt sigh of relief, and Arisa looked uncertainly between the two of them. This sounded a lot more serious than she'd expected. Nanoha…


Arisa:
[ ] Interrogate Yuuno-kun
[ ] Interrogate Hayate
[ ] Interrogate Nanoha
[ ] Call one set of parents or another
[ ] Write-in


Realistically these can be combined arbitrarily, but there's a problem: Hayate and Nanoha don't really want you to know anything, and neither does Yuuno. Adding an appropriate strategy is very important. Here's a hint: In Nanoha's case, making a decent case that you already know what she's trying to keep secret will help.
 
So, Hayate has the BoD if she's in a wheelchair, I believe.

Not sure why Nanoha and Hayate are trying to keep magic and shit secret, but it's kind of obvious what with the monster fight and all.
 
Winged One said:
So, Hayate has the BoD if she's in a wheelchair, I believe.

Not sure why Nanoha and Hayate are trying to keep magic and shit secret, but it's kind of obvious what with the monster fight and all.
They're trying to keep the headaches and hospitalization and all that secret, not magic. They probably don't think their martial arts are THAT odd. They've demonstrated them before, after all.
 
pressea said:
They're trying to keep the headaches and hospitalization and all that secret, not magic. They probably don't think their martial arts are THAT odd. They've demonstrated them before, after all.
Nanoha already told her insignificant-in-canon friends about the headaches, though.
 
Winged One said:
Nanoha already told her insignificant-in-canon friends about the headaches, though.
Not the extent of them. It's sounding like they didn't even know she was hospitalized 4 years ago (that was before she met them) from them. Or that she's still deathly afraid of it coming back. She's downplaying HARD to avoid worrying her friends.

I think it might be worthwhile to have a nice, pubic discussion with Nanoha and/or Hayate about them in front of Yuuno. He's already guilty that he caused headaches, so when he finds out exactly what he did to her he should be guilty as hell and will spill the beans on what he knows easier.
 
Strategies:
Turn to Yuuno first, demand to know what he did to Nanoha and the green stuff we saw him making. What the heck was that monster and what does he have to do with it.
Nanoha - hit her with a double pronged attack of concern(because she's obviously still wobbling, we won't take "I'm fine" for an answer), and affront at not being trusted to keep what you learn to yourself. What if she has another incident, if we can help, we will. Ram the guilt button harder maybe?
 
Rereading gave some good dirt.
"Don't bother." Nanoha shook her head, then immediately winced and leaned a little more on Arisa again. "I know what's wrong, and I've already been to the hospital. It isn't anything they can help with, really. Well, not for me - there's someone else hurt, I heard them -"
Nanoha mentioned she was hospitalized and that it's not something they can help with.
"It's not like that," Nanoha said. "I promise I'll explain later, but -" She continued in a somewhat weaker, anxious tone. "Someone's hurt, and close by. We need to find them. Arisa, please."
And, more importantly, she promised she'd explain later. It is now later. Get to explainohaing.
 
Do we press Nanoha first or Yuuno? Currently we've witnessed Yuuno using magic, in a way he can't really deny, fighting a monster, which he can't deny either, on top of saving his life. I think he'd be easy to pull an admission of magic's existence out of, which might make it easier to squeeze Nanoha since if her business is magic related, that removes one barrier when we already know.
 
veekie said:
Do we press Nanoha first or Yuuno? Currently we've witnessed Yuuno using magic, in a way he can't really deny, fighting a monster, which he can't deny either, on top of saving his life. I think he'd be easy to pull an admission of magic's existence out of, which might make it easier to squeeze Nanoha since if her business is magic related, that removes one barrier when we already know.
Nanoha first, definitely. Knowing about magic isn't going to help with her. Something like this should do it. I suck at flavoring so I'll leave that to Baughn or anyone else.

[] Interrogate Nanoha
-[] So? You promised you'd explain later. If this is about you being hospitalized, you already let that slip. And from the sound of it, everyone in your family knows, and now that we've seen you stumbling around like this we're going to be more worried if you don't tell us than if you do.

Not sure how to phrase Yuuno's. Play up his hurting Nanoha, he said he'd make it up to her, and he can do that by telling us what's going on? Definitely threaten to tell Nanoha's parents and say we can keep it between us four if he caves now. Suzuka apparently being like kryptonite to Jewel Seedsmonsters might be something to bring up.
 
Actually with that phrasing, I could hit Yuuno with the headache thing before Nanoha explains anything, to guilt trip him first. Just checking, this is Arisa PoV right?

[X] Interrogate Yuuno
-[X] (while being seriously annoyed and helping to bandage his injuries)"What did you do to Nanoha? You know she collapsed so the monster nearly got her? I nearly got killed by the monster because you called us out there to help you. Now explain everything! Is that monster after your gemstone? A Jewel Seed? Or is it because you could make that green light? What is that monster? It had tentacles and it's still out there! What if it tries to eat someone! If you don't answer immediately I'm going to tell our parents, and they will sort this out."

[X] Then Interrogate Nanoha.
-[x] "You're not fine. Look, you're still wobbling and you promised you'd explain later. If this is about you being hospitalized, you already let that slip. And from the sound of it, everyone in your family knows, and now that we've seen you stumbling around like this we're going to be more worried if you don't tell us than if you do. We're friends Nanoha, friends share their troubles." Let her stew on the last bit until she spills.

Basically bombard and overwhelm Yuuno so she feels compelled to tell us something he knows at least. He's not good with aggressive girls, and between that and what he already let slip, putting the pressure on should work.
 
That looks good enough to get bandwagoned until something better shows up. We've got tons of time before this updates again; there's no rush.

Might want to acknowledge Yuuno's injuries some. At least get him some real bandages instead of his shirt. He probably isn't willing to accept more than that.
dragongod123 said:
It seems Nanoha and Hayate are twins, Hayate is bound to a wheelchair, and Nanoha gets headaches in the presence of magic. What do you guys think the chances are that The Book of Darkness is bound to both of them because of some freaky twin thing? We know Nanoha started getting headaches four years ago however we don't know when Hayate lost the use of her legs. I think it may be important to find that out.
We know Nanoha and Hayate aren't related, Suzuka said so. Graham must be piiiiissed. And we can't really do anything about the situation unless Yuuno finds and recognizes the book or the A's arc starts.

God, A's is going to be so messed up even if this wasn't a crossover.
 
pressea said:
That looks good enough to get bandwagoned until something better shows up. We've got tons of time before this updates again; there's no rush.

Might want to acknowledge Yuuno's injuries some. At least get him some real bandages instead of his shirt. He probably isn't willing to accept more than that.
Done. Edited in

Also I just noticed. Suzuka met the Vivids before.
The phone was completely drained of charge after the blue mist effect.
Vividred magic consumes absurd amounts of power to do it's tricks.

So Suzuka might be using Vividred type powers somehow. Or at least discharged her phone and blew it away

Other odd stuff I can't pin down
Well, then. It was a nice day, the sun was shining brightly between the leaves, there was just a hint of breeze, and she might as well make herself comfortable while they waited. She shifted slightly, snuggling up to Nanoha - if nothing else, it'd reassure her that she wasn't going anywhere - then leaned backwards and closed her eyes against the sun.

Shortly afterwards she felt Nanoha's head on her shoulder, and allowed her own to rest against her friend's. The situation was odd, but this was still - nice, even if they were completely missing out on cram school. The heat was enough for her to quickly drop off into sleep.

Spotlight - she was shifting side to side - they had to find it! The treasure had fallen overboard, they had to find - no, Arisa, don't aim that at me, too bright -

She was surrounded by a dizzying smell of flowers, pink cherry blossoms flying everywhere, like in a storm. She felt happy - sated - warm and comfortable. Wait, someone was shouting - what was that?
Not sure if the dream sequence meant anything.
The monster was in perfect focus, now; it was a fractal, electric blue veins of energy splitting over and over until, at its fog-like edge, it was hard to tell where the monster stopped and the air started. Somehow she knew, and she didn't know how, but the energy was flowing inwards rather than outwards. The monster was eating the light.
Jewel Seeds are supposed to produce energy though, not absorb it. Something is screwy. Not to mention how Suzuka knew which way the energy was going.

As for Nanoha, both Yuuno and the Jewel Seed Monster are causing some kind of mental static to Nanoha. Sounds like the Midchilda magic is reacting poorly with whatever she is.
 
veekie said:
Jewel Seeds are supposed to produce energy though, not absorb it. Something is screwy. Not to mention how Suzuka knew which way the energy was going.
If I remember correctly, then Jewel Seeds are described more like energy storage devices. If that's the case the described sequence makes more sense, though that Suzuka can see that is strange...



Still, Suzuka could mention seeing which way the energy was flowing to try and press Yuuno for answers. If properly phrased it would seem like she knew about magic already and was explaining what Jewel Seeds in specific are after all.
 
veekie said:
Yeah but PoV interrogator is Arisa.
Eh, if we want to have other people say things Baughn will probably let us get away with it as long as we aren't doing something silly like writing in that Nanoha tells everyone all her secrets.

[] Suzuka: Mention odd things.

As far as jewel seeds taking in energy goes, they have to, don't they? Or Fate's "activate all the Jewel Seeds forcibly" plan wouldn't work. IIRC she basically just cast a huge spell and hoped they would absorb the energy.
 
[X] Interrogate Yuuno
-[X] (while being seriously annoyed and helping to bandage his injuries)"What did you do to Nanoha? You know she collapsed so the monster nearly got her? I nearly got killed by the monster because you called us out there to help you. Now explain everything! Is that monster after your gemstone? A Jewel Seed? Or is it because you could make that green light? What is that monster? It had tentacles and it's still out there! What if it tries to eat someone! If you don't answer immediately I'm going to tell our parents, and they will sort this out."

[X] Then Interrogate Nanoha.
-[x] "You're not fine. Look, you're still wobbling and you promised you'd explain later. If this is about you being hospitalized, you already let that slip. And from the sound of it, everyone in your family knows, and now that we've seen you stumbling around like this we're going to be more worried if you don't tell us than if you do. We're friends Nanoha, friends share their troubles." Let her stew on the last bit until she spills.

Man, apparently canon has been torn into even more tiny shreds than I expected. I wonder how Hayate got adopted. And if we could use the Book of Darkness to our advantage somehow.
 
Wander said:
Man, apparently canon has been torn into even more tiny shreds than I expected. I wonder how Hayate got adopted.
The sole change I made to canon was to, um, move it forward about 25 years.

...in retrospect, I should have expected there might be a few knock-on changes. And I'll admit I'm extrapolating a lot about how magic works, but that's pretty much a given.

Still don't know how Hayate and Nanoha met? You've gotten a couple of hints already.
 
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