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Since it looks like second then first has more support than I thought it would, I might be willing to change my vote if there is support for hiring a script doctor to punch up the dialogue in the second script.
If we're doing this for the characterization, then we'd better make damn sure that we do it right.
Though there's only so much we can do. I mean, reminder: an 80 is really good. So it'd take a really good script doctor to find that many obviously flawed places that could be much better that aren't subjective.