OLD CANON Rejection
ARBITRACOM
Sic transit gloria mundi
Over on SB, M90A4 posted this idea;
This chapter is written based upon this idea. Credit goes to M90A4.
GROTESQUE: Rejection
"Did you devour them? Like those sharks in their wombs?"
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2025
Montana sits, curling on herself upon the walls of the massive redoubt of Fleetbase Antler's Keep, not far (relatively) from her namesake, Big Sky Country, on the north of East Coast. The wind gently sweeps on her long, flowing blonde hair, like it did on the great plains, and the coldness is familiar to her. Yet she is a visitor here. The Antler Keep's flagpoles fly the flag of the Joint Command: Wing, Star, Bloom, and Anchor, as well as the mark of its resident Composite Task Group, RECKONER: A stag's skull on red, with sharp, bleached antlers.
RECKONER by function hosts most primary line-combatant US Shipgirls, such as the Iowa-class. But Montana does not belong there-she and her sisters did once-but calls it home no more. They belong in GROTESQUE. A federation of the disquieting: anomaly-chasers and secret-hunters, daily courting danger deep within Abyssal territories. Its crews and officers few, its Shipgirls even fewer.
How does GROTESQUE, barely recognized, count among its ranks the sisters of the Montana-class, while RECKONER, a prestigious line unit, emanating with well-deserved glory and American pride, does not?
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Why am I here? Why are we here? Why not the others? Where are they?
Montana agonizes herself that question, every waking moment.
Even among the already causality-defying and reality-bending Shipgirls, the Montana class is a special case. Daughters of an impossible time, summoned from the depths of the ancient US Navy. Their appearance made the world wonder.
Certainly most are appreciative of their firepower, of their technology and the options they bring to the tactical holo-table. Much excitement, at first. Surely the other unbuilts and stillborns and never-weres are closer, now?
But she-and her sisters-are aberrations. They are not war-winners or even glorious failures like Yamato, their supposed rivals. Aberrant. Obtained from a glitch in the metareality material reification software used in the Summonings and Constructions, they say. A fluctuation within the contained singularity. Various methods attempted to replicate their arrival, to call upon the others. But the Summoning Forges are silent.
Questions of how complete must a ship be. Graf is here. Themselves of the Montana-class are here. But where are the others?
Why are they not here?
Amagi, Tosa, or the Lexingtons. Or the remaining two sisters of the Iowa-class.
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The Armoured Qualm, carved into the psyche of every armoured fighting shipgirls-those who call themselves battleships and battlecruisers. A part of it--
The specter of obsolescence and inefficiency and inflexibility hangs upon your head, a doctrinal Damocles-how do you make yourself worthy? How do you ensure that you are not a liability? That your presence will not hurt your allies?
That qualm is mostly doctrinal rather than existential, but nevertheless, one day Montana thought: that might be what my existence did. That her presence brings pain and grief to the others who are still waiting.
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2023
Two names, two empty seats on the dining hall, on the briefing room, two empty rooms and two unused beds, kept in waiting.
Illinois and Kentucky.
All the girls in the Montana-class are inexperienced, thus the burden on Montana the eldest was doubly heavy, for she must guide her sisters where she found no such guidance for herself. Naturally they would gravitate towards their predecessors, the Iowa-class for counsel.
Alas.
Like all fires, it started small. Just a misunderstanding. Montana approached the Iowas, to talk, and sat where she-as it turns out-is not supposed to. How could she have known?
Then months of unfulfilled waiting and anticipation, of jealousy and anxieties, too powerful to be contained anymore, erupted.
"Stop this, Iowa. You are out of line!" Missouri stepped, a barrier between Iowa and Montana.
"No. It is they-she-who went out of line. I reject this, I reject them! Why are you even here, Montana? How could you be here where the others don't? What did you do?!"
"You know it's not their goddamn fault, Iowa. You're better than this!" , Black Dragon interjects.
Montana stood silenced. She caused these sisters to fight. Her presence is unwanted. An error.
It's my fault, all of this.
Iowa's next words impacted with the force of a superheavy shell. So she went away. Missouri chased after her.
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Then I will correct this. I will bring them back, I will learn the secrets, the cosmic arbitration that brought us here. And you will wait no longer. I will bring them back.
Missouri caught Montana, lonely in her room, holding a slip of paper, her transfer to GROTESQUE.
"Please don't do this. Don't go, Montana. I did my best to talk to Iowa. Please forgive her. I'm sure she eventually--"
"No, Missouri. It is I who must apologize. My presence caused all this."
"But surely you don't have to go! Iowa's taking it too far--" Missouri, gentle and kind, tries to understand.
"It's approved. Admiral Fell Masterson understands. I will go to GROTESQUE with Louisiana. The others will go with ANATHEMA. We will learn. We will bring the others back...."
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CTG GROTESQUE is uniquely based not on an Arsenal Port or Naval District. It is the only CTG with a mobile base, the JCS Ambient March. Built upon the unfinished hulk of a Gerald R. Ford-class supercarrier salvaged from the ruins of Newport, bought and retrofitted as a mobile base by the Joint Command. Another daughter of the seas, born into war.
Ambient March docks on Antler's Keep to receive supplies. Food, like beef and salted fishes. Equipments and spare parts. So it is that her crew and Shipgirls went ashore. The thought of meeting the Iowa-class again fills Montana with anxiety and guilt.
But also with a resolve, a promise she will keep.
From up the walls she saw the Iowas walking together. Only Missouri sees her. They acknowledged each other, a simple nod.
A promise.
Don't give up the wait. I will bring them all back.
Anyway, had an idea related to the Iowa sisters...
Had this vision of the Iowas always reserving 6 seats everytime they eat in the mess hall, or whenever they dine out, or social functions. The Iowa's would react adversely whenever someone sits in those two vacant seats and force those transgressors to sit in another seat.
When asked why they constantly reserve 6 seats instead of four, they become rather tight lipped about it.
Well, this is easy to figure out why, the Iowas are always waiting for their 'unborn' sisters to join them someday.
I dont mind if someone takes this idea and use it in their stories.
This chapter is written based upon this idea. Credit goes to M90A4.
GROTESQUE: Rejection
"Did you devour them? Like those sharks in their wombs?"
-----
2025
Montana sits, curling on herself upon the walls of the massive redoubt of Fleetbase Antler's Keep, not far (relatively) from her namesake, Big Sky Country, on the north of East Coast. The wind gently sweeps on her long, flowing blonde hair, like it did on the great plains, and the coldness is familiar to her. Yet she is a visitor here. The Antler Keep's flagpoles fly the flag of the Joint Command: Wing, Star, Bloom, and Anchor, as well as the mark of its resident Composite Task Group, RECKONER: A stag's skull on red, with sharp, bleached antlers.
RECKONER by function hosts most primary line-combatant US Shipgirls, such as the Iowa-class. But Montana does not belong there-she and her sisters did once-but calls it home no more. They belong in GROTESQUE. A federation of the disquieting: anomaly-chasers and secret-hunters, daily courting danger deep within Abyssal territories. Its crews and officers few, its Shipgirls even fewer.
How does GROTESQUE, barely recognized, count among its ranks the sisters of the Montana-class, while RECKONER, a prestigious line unit, emanating with well-deserved glory and American pride, does not?
-----
Why am I here? Why are we here? Why not the others? Where are they?
Montana agonizes herself that question, every waking moment.
Even among the already causality-defying and reality-bending Shipgirls, the Montana class is a special case. Daughters of an impossible time, summoned from the depths of the ancient US Navy. Their appearance made the world wonder.
Certainly most are appreciative of their firepower, of their technology and the options they bring to the tactical holo-table. Much excitement, at first. Surely the other unbuilts and stillborns and never-weres are closer, now?
But she-and her sisters-are aberrations. They are not war-winners or even glorious failures like Yamato, their supposed rivals. Aberrant. Obtained from a glitch in the metareality material reification software used in the Summonings and Constructions, they say. A fluctuation within the contained singularity. Various methods attempted to replicate their arrival, to call upon the others. But the Summoning Forges are silent.
Questions of how complete must a ship be. Graf is here. Themselves of the Montana-class are here. But where are the others?
Why are they not here?
Amagi, Tosa, or the Lexingtons. Or the remaining two sisters of the Iowa-class.
-----
The Armoured Qualm, carved into the psyche of every armoured fighting shipgirls-those who call themselves battleships and battlecruisers. A part of it--
The specter of obsolescence and inefficiency and inflexibility hangs upon your head, a doctrinal Damocles-how do you make yourself worthy? How do you ensure that you are not a liability? That your presence will not hurt your allies?
That qualm is mostly doctrinal rather than existential, but nevertheless, one day Montana thought: that might be what my existence did. That her presence brings pain and grief to the others who are still waiting.
-----
2023
Two names, two empty seats on the dining hall, on the briefing room, two empty rooms and two unused beds, kept in waiting.
Illinois and Kentucky.
All the girls in the Montana-class are inexperienced, thus the burden on Montana the eldest was doubly heavy, for she must guide her sisters where she found no such guidance for herself. Naturally they would gravitate towards their predecessors, the Iowa-class for counsel.
Alas.
Like all fires, it started small. Just a misunderstanding. Montana approached the Iowas, to talk, and sat where she-as it turns out-is not supposed to. How could she have known?
Then months of unfulfilled waiting and anticipation, of jealousy and anxieties, too powerful to be contained anymore, erupted.
"Stop this, Iowa. You are out of line!" Missouri stepped, a barrier between Iowa and Montana.
"No. It is they-she-who went out of line. I reject this, I reject them! Why are you even here, Montana? How could you be here where the others don't? What did you do?!"
"You know it's not their goddamn fault, Iowa. You're better than this!" , Black Dragon interjects.
Montana stood silenced. She caused these sisters to fight. Her presence is unwanted. An error.
It's my fault, all of this.
Iowa's next words impacted with the force of a superheavy shell. So she went away. Missouri chased after her.
-------
Then I will correct this. I will bring them back, I will learn the secrets, the cosmic arbitration that brought us here. And you will wait no longer. I will bring them back.
Missouri caught Montana, lonely in her room, holding a slip of paper, her transfer to GROTESQUE.
"Please don't do this. Don't go, Montana. I did my best to talk to Iowa. Please forgive her. I'm sure she eventually--"
"No, Missouri. It is I who must apologize. My presence caused all this."
"But surely you don't have to go! Iowa's taking it too far--" Missouri, gentle and kind, tries to understand.
"It's approved. Admiral Fell Masterson understands. I will go to GROTESQUE with Louisiana. The others will go with ANATHEMA. We will learn. We will bring the others back...."
-------
CTG GROTESQUE is uniquely based not on an Arsenal Port or Naval District. It is the only CTG with a mobile base, the JCS Ambient March. Built upon the unfinished hulk of a Gerald R. Ford-class supercarrier salvaged from the ruins of Newport, bought and retrofitted as a mobile base by the Joint Command. Another daughter of the seas, born into war.
Ambient March docks on Antler's Keep to receive supplies. Food, like beef and salted fishes. Equipments and spare parts. So it is that her crew and Shipgirls went ashore. The thought of meeting the Iowa-class again fills Montana with anxiety and guilt.
But also with a resolve, a promise she will keep.
From up the walls she saw the Iowas walking together. Only Missouri sees her. They acknowledged each other, a simple nod.
A promise.
Don't give up the wait. I will bring them all back.