Nah, the pacing was clean enough. Hell, if there's any semblance of rush to it, it can be attributed to a nature-induced "die fast, live fast" approach fit to these critters living in the wild... although I didn't particularly feel any rush to the situation, eh.
Amusingly for that I imagine a grass type and a ghost type would be among the least rushed. Ghosts can't really die, as far as we can tell. Be wounded, for a time, but not really die. And grass types are, well, plants. I imagine Leaf is actually extremely long lived, and being a grass type would have a slower pace at life just in general.
 
Amusingly for that I imagine a grass type and a ghost type would be among the least rushed. Ghosts can't really die, as far as we can tell. Be wounded, for a time, but not really die. And grass types are, well, plants. I imagine Leaf is actually extremely long lived, and being a grass type would have a slower pace at life just in general.
Actually a good point, but one that amusingly enough may have its exception here, since... Eeveelution. Former not-a-plant, you know what I mean?
Then again the flipside of that is how adaptable the species is supposed to be. Hm. Was Leaf a relatively young Evolution, too?
 
Actually a good point, but one that amusingly enough may have its exception here, since... Eeveelution. Former not-a-plant, you know what I mean?
Then again the flipside of that is how adaptable the species is supposed to be. Hm. Was Leaf a relatively young Evolution, too?
And Charlie has only been a ghost for a month. Both of them are probably still adapting to having more time ahead of them than they subconsciously think.
 
You know, I just realized Oak is going to have a panic attack the moment he finds out the MC is a human ghost. Not because of any existential dread or problematic implications, but because it means Agatha dying will no longer free him from having to be afraid of her and her Ghosts. If anyones coming back as a malevolent spirit its her.
 
You know, I just realized Oak is going to have a panic attack the moment he finds out the MC is a human ghost. Not because of any existential dread or problematic implications, but because it means Agatha dying will no longer free him from having to be afraid of her and her Ghosts. If anyones coming back as a malevolent spirit its her.
"I see you've captured your own ghost type congrats!"
"I captured nothing, save me!"
 
"It seems Misdreavus evolve when possessing witch costumes on Halloween night. More study is needed, which will be very hard to accomplish considering the rarity of the species, and the fact that the window for testing amounts to only a few hours once a year. I really miss Celebi." - Oak
"Get in the fucking witch costume, Misdreavus!" *Gendo pose*

I hope people aren't disappointed I actually had Leaf and Charlie actually talk about it instead of dragging Leaf's crush out for 30+ chapters. That felt unproductive and unhealthy, not to mention unrealistic.
Dragging out the misunderstandings in a story strikes me as both contemptuously insulting and uncomfortably sadistic. Like people not only failed to recognize a gimmick as...well, the gimmick it is (and thus another dead horse is tossed onto the pile), but looked at a literary tool where people fuck up and decided that Crab Bucket mentality made for entertaining reading. Which it really doesn't.

Whether they resolve or separate varies via story circumstances, but just endlessly dragging it out is bad on its own, and is straight up stupid when one of the participants is a literal no-kidding Empath.

Thank you for not doing that.
 
It took me a bit too long to realize what the typo was, lol. I'll fix it soonish.

Oak, gastly is honestly more poison type than ghost type I think.
They're made of poison gas, so yeah.

This section is several levels of hilarious within the chapter's context of "What the fuck is a ghost?". Amorphous Body Type indeed, poor fella himself can't even tell of their new body is male or female. Misdreavous aren't genderless, which makes the absolute confusion very, very funny.
I'm actually going to copy/paste my response to a similar comment from somewhere else:
I started thinking about things like egg groups and how pokemon biology and breeding would function.
Misdreavus, like the majority of ghost-types, are in the amorphous group.
So I started thinking about what that meant, realistically, and came to the conclusion that most ghosts don't have sexual dimorphism in the way mammals do. Or possibly even at all.
And I'd imagine the others of the more esoteric egg groups(grass, mineral, bug, monster, etc) have strange traits as well. When you think about it, separating many pokemon into simple male/female doesn't make sense

Side note, yes, this means that, barring other factors, many grass types are biologically hermaphroditic, rock types likely reproduce by some sort of fission, and steel types might even print their children.

It's a fantasy world, why bother restricting the weirdness at all?

I think part of the problem here is that ghosts don't seem to have a normal, all true ghosts apparently being the partially-damaged remains of one or more humans/pokemon. Trying to figure out what counts as normal for them is going to vary dramatically based on how intact they are and what they were previously.
Oh hey, someones paying attention, nice.

Agatha dying will no longer free him from having to be afraid of her and her Ghosts. If anyones coming back as a malevolent spirit its her.
lol, she's going to outlive him out of spite, and then not even let death stop her.

Hm that new move of Charlie is most likely night shade
It's Hex, actually. The original name for which is Evil Eye.

And oh boy the number of people glad I didn't have them dance around the obvious fact is gratifying. Seriously, why drag things out like that? it makes zero sense, barring character quirks, to drag out having a conversation for so long that it destroys relationships.
 
And I'd imagine the others of the more esoteric egg groups(grass, mineral, bug, monster, etc) have strange traits as well. When you think about it, separating many pokemon into simple male/female doesn't make sense
I think for some trees may be a good thought- see some species of trees are hermaphrodites. But some are distinctly male or female, with the only real difference being their flowers. And some have a weird combination of both sexual and asexual reproduction.

It's possible misdreavus are male/female amorphs, which means they could reproduce by splitting off a piece of themselves, and it takes a piece from a male and a piece from a female to combine to actually make an egg, but what counts as male vs female is entirely arbitrary - they are really just "type 1" and "type 2".

Of course it may not work that way at all! But yeah; male/female can easily just be standard nominclature for something that bears no resemblance to male/female mammals.

… and let's not get started on the species that can actively change their physical sex in response to various triggers, or even just as part of their natural maturation process!
 
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Elm is the reproduction professor, yeah? I like to imagine that Oak sends Elm a picture of Charlie talking to Leaf. Elm is somewhat confused that ghosts can potentially reproduce and decides to schedule his own interview later on.

I think if oak is that young elm is probably not in scientific field yet, Or even born for that matter...
 
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Going by the anime, Elm was described as "one of Professor Oak's top students at a university". So him being a teenager or currently on his own journey at this point is definitely likely. Assuming Oak is in his late 20's/early 30's right now.
 
Actually a good point, but one that amusingly enough may have its exception here, since... Eeveelution. Former not-a-plant, you know what I mean?
Then again the flipside of that is how adaptable the species is supposed to be. Hm. Was Leaf a relatively young Evolution, too?
As per the Leafeon entry, its still in the Field egg group, meaning fundamentally mammalian structures, but the pokedex entry says the cells are more plant based than animal based. They also begin to resemble dead leaves more as they age.
 
Side note, yes, this means that, barring other factors, many grass types are biologically hermaphroditic, rock types likely reproduce by some sort of fission, and steel types might even print their children.

It's a fantasy world, why bother restricting the weirdness at all?
Checks out. But what I'm hearing here is...

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"What do you MEAN you don't know where it came from?!" Charlie asked calmly.
"I don't know how it got here!! The egg was there when we woke up!!" Leaf responded, just as calmly.
"I'm too young to be a parent!!"
"We're too young to be parents!!"
"We're too traumatized to be parents!!"
"Aaahhh!!!"
"Aaahhh!!!"
And much calm screaming was had, bothering the forest until Marshal had to show up to deal with the screaming ghost again.
Needless to say, once it was explained to her she found the whole thing hilarious.
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