What sort of start should this have?

  • Wild Born Dragon! (In a Dragon Nest, possibly siblings, with mother)

    Votes: 24 50.0%
  • Wild Born Dragon! (In a dungeon, alone)

    Votes: 11 22.9%
  • Wild Dragon! (Dragon appears in the wild, no egg, no apparent blood ties)

    Votes: 5 10.4%
  • Summoned Dragon! (as Defense for a Nation)

    Votes: 2 4.2%
  • Summoned Dragon! (By a traditional Light Side race/tribe)

    Votes: 2 4.2%
  • Summoned Dragon! (By a traditional Dark Side race/tribe)

    Votes: 2 4.2%
  • Summoned Dragon! (By a Good individual)

    Votes: 2 4.2%
  • Summoned Dragon! (By an Evil Individual)

    Votes: 3 6.3%
  • Summoned Dragon! (By a Neutral entity/individual)

    Votes: 5 10.4%
  • Summoned Dragon! (By God/Goddess)

    Votes: 4 8.3%
  • Summoned Dragon! (By Devil/Demon King)

    Votes: 15 31.3%
  • Other

    Votes: 2 4.2%

  • Total voters
    48
  • Poll closed .
Although I don't like the morale implication, I'm going with mind altering.
If the kids tell their story, they will either not be believed (and then the dragon burned us to death isn't something you expect the corpse telling you) - which is not good for them, or someone figures out the life breath. Which starts a hunt.
Also, the trauma doesn't sound like something I'd want to keep.

[x] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone
to take the Demon Kids back to the Black Citadel. (Or have Theyra pick a few clansmen and have her do it.)

// And I don't like visiting the demons in person just now
 
Can we have any more details on the nature of Demons? Are they the counter parts to the Angels, or are those Devils? Would getting attention from the Black Citadel be bad for Lucian? Hell, what is Demon society like? If its human-ish, +violence and power-play, I might be fine with them going back. If its not, what other options would there be for them? How would they react/act around Lucian?

I'm fine with just returning the Dwarves. As for the kidnapped/enslaved kids...not really sure what to do. Arguably sticking with the clan with better treatment is better then what they had before, and its probably about as safe as going off with the Vikings. Despite their issues the thieves obviously aren't all bad given how Kaya turned out. Then again, we could also just drop them off in a village, but that gives no guarantees that they won't just end up street-rats again. It would be a good option to take them with us for our eventual island kingdom...but there is literally no support infrastructure at all. Not really feasible.
 
I'll be coming back to say more in a bit, but I wanted to say it gives me joy to see the Black Citadel, which I kinda made up on the fly for one of my omakes, actually make it into an official update.
 
Ok, I'm back.

Question, @Ryuchanwings, did anyone else survive Tal's hyper-beam killing spree? Or just these kids?

Also answers to Nalanaya's questions about the demon-kids would be nice.
 
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Can we have any more details on the nature of Demons? Are they the counter parts to the Angels, or are those Devils? Would getting attention from the Black Citadel be bad for Lucian? Hell, what is Demon society like? If its human-ish, +violence and power-play, I might be fine with them going back. If its not, what other options would there be for them? How would they react/act around Lucian?

I'm fine with just returning the Dwarves. As for the kidnapped/enslaved kids...not really sure what to do. Arguably sticking with the clan with better treatment is better then what they had before, and its probably about as safe as going off with the Vikings. Despite their issues the thieves obviously aren't all bad given how Kaya turned out. Then again, we could also just drop them off in a village, but that gives no guarantees that they won't just end up street-rats again. It would be a good option to take them with us for our eventual island kingdom...but there is literally no support infrastructure at all. Not really feasible.

Thank you!! This is excellent points and feedback.

So, in this world, angels and demons are different species. Their natures are opposite each other, and typically, when they meet they will fight. However, Lucian is not bound to heavenly duty right now. He has been effectively cut off from heaven, for reasons you may learn in the future. His only connection and alliegance right now is to Ivorixia, and since his old job was a guardian, he will try to lead her on the path of least negative karma. Fallen angels are a thing, angels who are naturally positively charged and inclined towards doing what they believe is right for the God they work for can stray from the path. If they act in a way they know is defying their God, they become Fallen, negatively charged angels that are generally nasty.

Demons, on the other hand, are very different. They come in a wide variety of shapes and sizes, and are the natural denizens of Hell. A long time ago, however, rifts between their dimension and this reality were torn, and fashioned into gates. Many demons came to live here, amd fashioned their own societies and nations. Demons can be good or bad, but are by nature very chaotic beings, primarily carnivorous, and usually wound up at war with angels over dietary differences(they used to eat angels and other sentients a lot. Not really done now among the more intelligent demons but slavery is still prevalent.) As well as moral differences. They are a very aggressive, durable species compared to most of the world's inhabitants. They have a very bad rap, and for the most part it is earned, due to the royal families actions in the past.

The current royal family is actually not doing a terrible job. They have treaties with all surrounding nations, trade is active, and the slave trade is being regulated by the government. There are laws. There are no wars being fought close to home, and they haven't threatened anyone on the continent for the past 60 years, which is really good on their part. I won't give everything away, I have a few plot hooks and other things cooking there....

And yes, there were other survivors, but they all ran away. Muahahahahahaha!!!!
 
Memory lane
Father Dwarf: I know it might be hard my children but please repeat what happen to the investigators

++++flash back++++
We were huddled in the corner with the other children
We were scared when alot of shouting and booming suddenly happen from outside then everything went quiet he appeared

flashback end
Noo you wrong the one who appeared look like this

your both wrong the other kid said
It was a magical girl that save us
after a few minute of the children squabbling on what the hero look like the adult concluded that he's an

Parents: eccentric hero
Bystander: a wierdo
Investigators: ....
Then proceeded to the nearest bar

Far up
Kaya:... I thoght you want to edit they're memory is to not make them have a traumatic moment
Tal:wow as in wow I don't know how mother would react when she hears of this
AHAHA: dd don't judge me I did it perfectly it just just I I planned it so nobody suspect a dragon save them!!!
Tal:... Ok but is there a reason all of them are
Kaya:Freakishly buff
AHAHA:.... l I uh
Lucian: its just shows her openness on those she love
AHAHA:YOUR NOT HELPING!!!


This just pop in my head
Edit when the topic of changing the kids memory come up
 
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Guys I need more votes to continue... shoukd I wait until after the holiday? Is that it?
Oh you wanted another vote? Oh um sorry forgot about that. *Tries to think of what to vote for$&$;&... {Ran into error due to Runtime: Sick/With.Cold PNG:)}

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Eh I'll vote later when I'm feeling better or not at all... maybe I'll make another QQ Omake or something. Also what holiday was it again?
 
Sorry, was at work, here is my vote.

[X] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone to take the Demon Kids back to the Black Citadel. (Or have Theyra pick a few clansmen and have her do it.)

And question, how would we be altering their memories? Just remove the memory of them dying, or something else/more?
 
[X] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone to take theDemon Kids back to the Black Citadel. (Or have Theyra pick a few clansmen and have her do it.)
 
Sorry, was at work, here is my vote.

[X] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone to take the Demon Kids back to the Black Citadel. (Or have Theyra pick a few clansmen and have her do it.)

And question, how would we be altering their memories? Just remove the memory of them dying, or something else/more?

Removing the memories of dying, aye.
 
[X] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone to take the Demon Kids back to the Black Citadel. (Or have Theyra pick a few clansmen and have her do it.)
 
[X] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone to take the Demon Kids back to the Black Citadel. (Or have Theyra pick a few clansmen and have her do it.)
 
Okay, gonna close voting here and post the new part after the fourth!! See you all soon!
Adhoc vote count started by Ryuchanwings on Jul 3, 2017 at 3:53 PM, finished with 18 posts and 6 votes.

  • [X] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone to take the Demon Kids back to the Black Citadel. (Or have Theyra pick a few clansmen and have her do it.)
    [x] Edit memories, then Take the Dwarf Kids back to Locus Crescent, and hire someone
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On the road again! (Sort of?)
Sorry for being late again, guys. Would have finished this sooner but I spent the last seven days trying to trap a raccoon that was pilfering my eggs and chickens. Persistant little jerk. Anyway, he's no longer a problem.

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"I think...." I began, then paused before continuing. "I think that we should take the Dwarf twins back to Locus Crescent. Theyra, could you pick a group of people from your clan that you trust, and take the Demon children back to the Citadel? We can pay you for it." As much as I was curious about the old land that I used to live and fly by, I had a few reasons why I didn't think that going there was a good idea. For one, Lucian. I had no idea how my 'theft' of 'property' was taken by the authorities there. Also the way that Tal and I basically made the slavers piss themselves, heh. For two, Tal's Light affinity was generally looked at as a blessing from Bahamut, who didn't really like Demons all that much. His beautiful golden scales were a dead giveaway, and many Paladin orders used a Gold dragon for their crest. And lastly, Demons tended to live for a long time. There might be some who would recognize what a pure white High Dragon could be.

Most people mistakenly assumed that a white High Dragon's secondary element was Ice. It was not. Ice High Dragons typically kept their crystal-like baby scales and color, so, they were more shiny than I was. (Green High Dragons, by the way, usually had plant or wind-related breath or powers.)

In any case, it was likely a poor idea to go to the Silver Sands at this point in time.

Theyra nodded as she looked over at the kids. "No payment will be needed, Lady AHaHa. I have the feeling there may be a reward for their return, my Brothers and Sisters will be pleased enough with that."

I frowned slightly as I thought it over. I hoped it wouldn't be one of those 'LAST REWARD' sort of situations, but I didn't think it would be. After all, it's not like they'd say we were the ones who kidnapped them. "Thank you, Theyra." I said, relieved that this situation would be at least a little straightened out. I was actually pretty excited about having a brief visit to Locus Crescent. It was a city-state, sort of like Venice from what I understood, and a huge trade center for a good chunk of the continent. They might be tiny, but no one wanted to piss them off. They had a HUGE library, and were the center of the Merchant Guild and the Adventurer Guild. I was really looking forward to it.
Kaya went back over to the kids with Theyra and began talking to them. While they did that, I began.... subtly using the mind exercises and 'Peek' spell Mom taught me to begin looking at their surface thoughts. I felt bad about doing this, but I really didn't want them to have memories of getting killed in a terrifying manner. Well, actually one of them hadn't died, so... yeah.

A couple of them had really terrible memories, and I winced. One of the Dwarf twins had been looking at the other when the ray hit, and actually remembers seeing what the power did to their sibling just before they died themselves. Just a flash, but it was scarring. Only one of them hadn't seen or felt anything at all, the little demon boy, and I was glad of that. Gently, little by little, I began to pluck at the little fibres of memory, trying to get them to unravel and separate naturally. I didn't want to leave behind any mental damage or obvious signs of tampering. The mouse girl and the Dwarf would probably always have a deep fear of dragons now, but... hopefully this would dull it a little. enough so that this trip wouldn't be excruciating.

Once we had figured out our plans and confirmed what the children wanted to do... we started trying to figure out how we would be transporting them. Every animal we hadn't scared off was dead. So, the only 'beasts of burden' we had were Tal and I ourselves.

Dammit, I was really wishing for a small fleet of like griffins or wyverns or something now. We were big, but carrying this many people at once was risky and awkward.

If only we had a.... I stopped, then grinned and let out a small burst of laughter, drawing weird looks from the kids, a questioning one from Theyra, a raised eyebrow from Kaya, and rolled eyes from Tal and Lucian (Lucian because he could read my mind and understand why I was suddenly thinking of a fat man in a red suit and deer.).

"Just wait a minute, I have a great idea." I said, before turning and beginning my search for a cart or buggy or carriage or something.

Well... there was a cart I spied, but when I got closer I dismissed it as a possibility. There was a huge hole through the center and it looked like the axles were cracked. A little distance away, I found a wheel. Hah.

But when I looked in the mouth of the cave where they stashed loot, I hit the jackpot. At some point, these crafty bastards had stolen a fancy carriage, like the ones nobles used. I grabbed the dangly bits on the front with my jaws and dragged it out of the cave. It was perfect. The kids would be comfortable inside, and it had a lot of curtains and was all closed off so that they wouldn't have to look out of the windows and see that they were hundreds of feet up in the air. More importantly, it looked like it would be light enough that I could pull off the enchantments without too much trouble.

"We'll use this." I said, once I was back over with the others. "The kids will ride in here, and I'll pull the carriage behind me."

One of the human kids crossed his arms and raised an eyebrow. "Right. How's that going to work?"

I puffed myself up. "I'll have you know, I am a Master Sorceress." I said loftily. "This is a simple enough enchantment for me."

It wasn't as simple as I made it out to be. I had to remove the wheels and have Tal lift the entire thing so I could inscribe runes in the undercarriage with my talons. I worked in Levitation, Stabilization, and Tag-along, which was sort of a homing spell, but one that wouldn't have it run into me.

Lucian looked over the children while Kaya and Theyra went through the camp, getting everything they could for the trip. A lot had been abandoned. Only a few books, I wasn't surprised really, they didn't seem to be too logically inclined, but we actually were able to salvage a lot of foodstuffs. Including salt and pepper!!! I was really excited about that.

It all went into Tal's bag of holding for now, we'd get it all sorted out when we got home. For now, we got the kids situated in the carriage and headed back to the town from the other day.

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(A day later)

The trip back was uneventful. We had no random encounters (I actually would have liked one, as any creatures able to reach this altitude would likely be useful. Aaah, I wish we had someone with the monster taming skill in our party already....) and even the weather was clear and pleasant. The Dwarf kids don't enjoy flying very much, but that demon girl was actually pretty difficult to try and convince to stay inside the carriage. She kept climbing out to sit where the driver would usually be, and called out to me to try and engage in conversation. I tried to act like I couldn't hear her over the wind for now, since I sort of had a weak spot or two (Or ten) for kids, and didn't want to change my plans any more than I already had. I Hoped that Mimikyu and the golems were doing alright and had made a good headway on the cleanup for now.

Once we landed, we stepped aside with the village headman again to bargain things out as to what was going to happen with the Mouse girl and the two human kids. I had Lucian act as a lie detector, deciding to err on the side of caution. I wasn't sure if these humans practiced in the slave trade or not.

In the end, things turned out fine. With a small gift and reminder that I'd probably have Tal or myself check in on them time to time for good measure, the two human children were accepted for apprenticeships with the village carpenter and stablemaster, the mouse girl electing to go into service at the village temple. It seemed that her tribe was usually more spiritually inclined in the first place, unlike most beastkin races.

Theyra picked out several strong warriors she trusted to take the Demon kids back to the Citadel. After talking in private, we decided that she would meet up with us later back at home, and I gave her some extra gems so she could aquire a flying beast or other transport that could take her to the Nyrraedia, along with a spell worked into a tattoo that could give her the right idea of where to go.

"I will see you again soon, My Lady." She said with a bow as they mounted up, their horses shaggy and compact, made for Northern weather. "Safe travels."

"You too, Theyra. See you soon!" I said, waving her off as she left. I felt a little conflicted about letting one of my party go off on her own so soon after I met her, but the relationship level gave me faith I wouldn't be betrayed, and besides, I still felt responsible for what happened to those kids.

That afternoon, I was back in the air again, with Tal, Kaya and Lucian, the Dwarf kids holed up in the carriage behind us. Kaya had convinced them we were taking them back to their parents, but I think they still didn't trust Tal or I too much still. I mean, it made sense. Dwarves and Dragons, in most fantasy settings, did not mix well at all.

Now, even flying fast, Locus Crescent was a few days away at least. The large city-state was to the Southeast, surrounded by lush fields, and a giant freshwater lake that was shaped like a crescent moon, hence the name. This was going to be a little boring, so I had Lucian sit in the carriage with the kids and Kaya, everyone telling and swapping stories, Luc linking me in through our bond so I wouldn't get too bored. I even took a couple hours to craft a telepathy spell to link Tal in, so he wouldn't be too bored on the flight. He'd been sort of quiet since the whole thing at the thieve's village. I understood why, but I was sort of worried about him anyhow. Hopefully he wouldn't be.... I mean, dwelling on it couldn't be good for him. Were there dragon psychiatrists? Oh hell, I was probably the closest thing we'd have for that, being a healing dragon and all. Nuts.

When we stopped for breaks, I'd try to spend ad much time with him as possible, sleeping next to him when we had to sleep, and when we didn't, we watched the stars like we had when we were hatchlings and talked softly about things in Draconic.

"... You are strange." He said quietly to me one night, after a long, but not awkward silence. I looked at him, choosing to remain silent as I waited for him to elaborate. "You always have been, I mean. You paid more attention to stories about non-dragons than our own kind when we were in the nest, and even given your nature, you'd insist on flying close as possible to the borders of the most human-like races around. I never understood that about you. It still doesn't make perfect sense. They're so...." He paused, looking down at his claws. "... fragile. Mortal." He said in a solemn tone.

I opened my mouth to speak, but he wasn't done yet. "I'm not saying it's a good or bad thing, just that it's.... different. Strange. But I think... I might understand a little more now." He said, looking at me. "It's due to your nature, Ivori. You're a healer. You try to think of how our actions will affect all beings we touch, not just other dragonkind. If it hadn't been for you or Lucian...." He paused, trying to think of how to phrase it. "... I wouldn't know. No, I wouldn't care, I don't think. I wouldn't think of them as equals. I still don't, not entirely. They are clever, yes, but alone they are weaker than us as a whole. At most, I would find them amusing or annoying." He looked back at the sky. "But when you hit me, and you screamed about children... I.... It became more.... real?" He hesitated, then sighed. "I've been doing a lot of thinking. I have the Breath of Light. Dad said, the 'blessing of Bahamut', and that he would be watching over me. I thought that meant I would become a Champion of our kind someday, and that I had to do what's right by them." He turned back to me again, amethyst eyes searching my face. "But, Bahamut is not just our God. He is the God of many humans and elves as well, and who knows how many others? He doesn't protect us alone. Maybe..."

He trailed off, and my mind raced a bit. Holy shit, I was getting the feeling that my next response might help shape his actions for centuries, if not the rest of his life. Um... What should I say? What should I -DO-?

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[] Tell Tal the truth of your birth (Let him know about your life before, cause ???)
[] Tell Tal that he should reflect on this more and choose for himself what he wants to do.
[] Yes, Bahamut would want you to be a protector for all, not just dragons.
[] Write In
[] Maybe when we reach Locus Crescent, he should visit Bahamut's temple and pray about it?
 
[X] Tell Tal that he should reflect on this more and choose for himself what he wants to do.
-[X] But yes, Bahamut would want you to be a protector for all, not just dragons.
 
[X] Maybe when we reach Locus Crescent, he should visit Bahamut's temple and pray about it?
-[X] Until then why not reflect upon it?
 
[x] Tell Tal that he should do what is right, not what he wants to be right. He's a good person, with a good sense of right and wrong. He just needs a bit of wisdom and introspection to make full use of it. He can continue to be a good person if he tries.
 
[X] Maybe when we reach Locus Crescent, he should visit Bahamut's temple and pray about it?
Use spell 'Pass the Buck'! Its usually churches and deities that deal the complex crap, just shovel it on them and see how things go! If we need to intervene later, we can do so then.

Also not really fond of the idea of Tal getting the wrong impressions from this. I mean, we were fine keeping literally half our life from our family for decades, but at his first sign doubt we're going to let loose? I mean, it shows concern, but it also shows that we're not doing this because we trust him, but rather because we don't think he can deal with it himself. Gotta remember Draconic pride after all.

That said, if things deteriorate more we should tell, and definitely once they've stabilized we should. I have the feeling he'd get a kick out of the gamer-esque interface and what it says about High Dragons.
 
...... is it just me or for some strange reason i feel there should be singing about light and Bahamut with choir group accompaniment in the background.
 
[x] Tell Tal the truth of your birth (Let him know about your life before, cause ???)
-[x] Then tell him that he should reflect on this more and choose for himself what he wants to do. Your reasons are not his reasons; he needs to form his own opinion.

// First part just to widen his understanding by showing him what's possible; the second one to tell him ultimately he must come to his own conclusions. That doesn't preclude asking others for their opinion, but the decision must be his.
 
[X] Tell Tal that he should reflect on this more and choose for himself what he wants to do.

He'd be happier if he thought it through fully
 
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