Glory of the Emerald Empire (Legend of the 5 Rings Quest)

I'll admit I might have been more than a bit too obvious with those parts... Do you think they really detract from the overall impact of the update? If so, then I'm going to have to go back and edit that segment a little.
Well, admittedly not everyone will be familiar with the materials, and they're not bad lines. That said, I caught the references immediately and they completely pulled me out of the previously established mood.

It didn't help that Shasa used that phrase after a death speech that showed she thought she was finally doing the right thing after a lifetime of being foolish, rather than as the culmination of her despair. Not only is the reference line so overused as a joke that it's difficult to take seriously, to someone who catches it and thinks of the reference the connotations that it carries sort of run counter to everything that she'd previously said.

And the oni in my head was suddenly breaking off its sinister tones to begin singing in a woman's voice, which is just no.
 
Well, admittedly not everyone will be familiar with the materials, and they're not bad lines. That said, I caught the references immediately and they completely pulled me out of the previously established mood.

It didn't help that Shasa used that phrase after a death speech that showed she thought she was finally doing the right thing after a lifetime of being foolish, rather than as the culmination of her despair. Not only is the reference line so overused as a joke that it's difficult to take seriously, to someone who catches it and thinks of the reference the connotations that it carries sort of run counter to everything that she'd previously said.

And the oni in my head was suddenly breaking off its sinister tones to begin singing in a woman's voice, which is just no.

Thank you for your insights. That's a fair critique, and I'll be sure to edit things a bit.
 
Hey guys what's going on this update--

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RIP Shasa. ;;

We'll miss you. However, as Crab must, we will go on without you somehow--
Ten Glory
Ten EXP
Three Honor

your sacrifice is not in vain Best Girl-- *cough*

Anyway! So, this puts us up to a grand total of twelve EXP, enough to raise either Perception, Strength, Intelligence or Reflexes to 3 or some skills - but it's the latter of the two that we're going to want. If we raise either our Fire or Air (both of which are good choices) then what we get is Insight 2.

Which gives us this sexy little gem with some training on the upcoming timeskip~;
Rank 2: The Mountain Does Not Move
The Hida bushi is famous for extraordinary tenacity, weathering wounds that would kill normal men. You gain Reduction equal to your Earth Ring.
This, with our Kaiu armor, would set us at Armor TN 33. With Earth 3. And 13 DR.

We won't be needing much else this game, most likely.

Intelligence, though, would probably be useful in Dragon lands, as Dragon are fond of riddles and knowing things, like the Phoenix. They're a bit more esoteric, though; with that said, however, I feel that skills can compensate for that, and that spending all the EXP on Reflexes 3 frees up Sosuke to allocate for whatever it is that he wants and/or needs next. It also helps with initiative, and we'd be rolling 5k3 since it also raises us to Insight 2.

So, tl;dr;

Attribute+ is very good. Ring+ makes us either tankier and smarter, or really friggin' tanky. Going really friggin' tanky frees Sosuke to spend points as needed into Skills (it makes us faster too) that will be useful, and sets him on that route for a good long while, so it's the more efficient option.
 
All right, changed the dialogue a bit and toned things down. I hope that smoothes things out.

Thank you all for your critique and contributions. It all helps make this Quest just that much better, and I appreciate your input.
 
I think we should buy up reflexes, with Shasa gone, we're going to have to learn to do a little iaijutsu just in case, and Reflexes helps more with that than intelligence. (Alternately we save a little longer for void 3....sexy sexy void 3)
 
So is there any superior form of Tetsubo that we might receive for killing the Oni? After all while it is likely shameful to lose equipment "breaking it off while smiting evil incarnate" is about as good of an excuse as there is.
 
With all the glory we've got, is likely for us to get some better equipment.

o7

You'll be missed Shasa.
 
SO I DID A THING!

I feel a sense of satisfaction as Sosuke screams for----

Light surges through my eyes, brighter than anything, bright enough to burn, bright enough to shatter reality.

My stomach heaves as I stumble.

What had I?

Unbidden memories of what I had done flash through my eyes, flaying my mother bit by bit enjoying her cries as my power grew.

My father broken and destroyed by his wife giving me a symphony of screams as I let my power eat him from the inside out.

Sosuke....dear, precious Sosuke, the man who I hated, the man who changed things...the man I might...love.

Sosuke writhing underneath me in submission as I took his eyes so he would look at no one else but me.

I...
This is what you are

Shut up.

Look at it face it

Shut up.

This is you, this is what you've done

I close my eyes, and bury my face in my hands trying to force the images and sounds away.. Like a frightened child, why is the light so bright?

A part of me dares to look.

It's...Sosuke?

Why does he shine like the sun? Why does he burn? Is this real?

Oh Kami...please...
"Let it be a lie," I whisper, voice hoarse. "Please. I… I could not be that terrible."

He looks at me, but he doesn't see me, not really, I...I have to touch him , to show myself that, what I saw, what I did wasn't real.

My hands reach out, and I burn, my finger tips scream as if grabbing molten metal....he's...he's fire and light, purity, not...not me...not darkness and filth.

In spite of myself I begin talking.
"So… Sosuke? Are you... Are you real?" I ask

No response, words tumble out of my raw throat.
"Oh, by the Heavens! Sosuke, please forgive me! I'm sorry! I'm so sorry! I… I would never do that! Not to you! Please, please believe me!"

Sosuke's face remains impassionate as ever. The burning light consuming him, he has no place for me, nothing but contempt.

My heart shatters, he can't...I don't blame him, not after what I did, but I...

The aching feeling in my chest grows

He could be yours, you just have to take him

Shut up.

Power, glory, respect, that's what you want isn't it Shasa-chan?

Be quiet Kansen I will not listen to you.

In a voice that reminds me more of thunder than Sosuke he speaks
"Woman if you are truly sorry, than kill the man Kohsa he is---"

And the the oni screams, my body flies into a wall from the force as the battle begins anew.

On my hands and knees, I try to stand. I have to ignore the stabbing pain in my heart, or the feeling like I nearly tore my eyeballs out, have to...have to do what Sosuke said.

Why do I have this accursed body, not strong enough for anything but looking pretty?

You could change that, we can help you

I can barely hear Kohsa screaming about his betrayal, so focused am I on trying to move.

Damn you!

Sosuke turns his burning light on the portal, pouring his power into his strike, the kansen scream in my ears, telling me to stop him, to take a knife and use the power in our blood to end things.

No...I can't.

Hours, maybe minutes pass before Sosuke stops, hunching over hand on his knees, his breathing deep and uneven. The portal looks weak, but at least the Kansen have stopped screaming.

Use the knife, give us a sacrifice, and all the power in the world will be yours.

More and more voices fill my head, I can't stop listening, they speak to me of how to solidify the portal, to make it permanent.

No.

DO IT

The portal calls to me, to make it real....no.

I feel Sosuke looking at me, and even as his eyes widen at my sorry state, I admit the truth. I know how it ends.

"It's not over yet," I whisper.

Not until I finish it. Finally my body is ready to listen to me again, I stand up, swaying.

"Sha-" Sosuke starts and stops, his throat raw "Shasa?"

I look towards the portal.

"You were right to direct the fire there, Sosuke-san," I continue. "The ritual was not yet ready for this step. More blood was needed to ensure the portal's stability, and your flame has weakened it further. But more will be required to seal it."

"How… How do you know these things?" he asks, "Shasa, what are you saying?"

It's like an overgrown puppy, you just kind of want to hug it. But that's not how this goes. I have to admit the truth now.

I look down at him with a sad smile, my eyes wet with unshed tears
"I know because the kansen are whispering it to me even now, Sosuke-san." Tears flow down her cheeks. "I know because I am Maho-tsukai. I cannot deny it any more, not now. Not after what I have seen. I tried to fool myself into thinking it was just a few times, that I would never touch it again. But that is… That is not how this works. I realize that now."

A stupid ignorant little girl who hated the world and wanted to change it for herself, a stupid selfish little girl...that was what I had been. I had thought myself so clever , so wise to hide myself from my idiot clansmen.

How had it all come to this?

"Wha-What?" he asks.

With that voice I have my answer.
Hiruma Sosuke, without meaning too, saved me from myself.
I had to repay that debt.

I gather my strength ignoring that puppy dog look again.
"There is still something that must be done before this portal can be closed, The ritual was completed with a sacrifice… and it must be broken with one. I will see this finished."

Finding will I never knew I had, I force myself to step towards the portal.

Another step, forward, just one more at a time.

"Shasa, oni lie," Sosuke shouts from behind. "The kansen lie. I do not know what was done to you or what you can hear, but if dark powers tell you to shed blood on a portal to their realms you should probably not do that, no matter what they claim it will or won't do!"

I'm finally at the portal, the Kansen continue to whisper to me everything, how I can be a goddess, how I can be all that I ever wanted. If I would just do this one thing.

Picking up the knife that Kohsa used, I turn back to Sosuke. My face forced into a perfect mask.

"My apologies, Sosuke-san," I say, trying desperately not to show the sadness inside. "I was not clear. I do not know how to close this portal because the kansen are telling me how. I know what must be done because the kansen are telling me how to stabilize it. I am… I am not the best with blood magic, but by doing the opposite I will be able to destroy this foul thing." I explain.

"You don't know that!" he screams. "Shasa! Shasa, please! You don't have to do this!"

The ache in my chest hurts a little more at that. He cares, he really does, a part of me admits that makes me happy...but the rest knows that I'm going to die. One more tragedy in a life filled with them.

After what I saw, what I know I will become, I can't let myself live.

"But I do," I say, looking at the knife. "You don't know what I saw, Sosuke-san. I was… I was a monster. I bathed in the blood of my family, lorded over the torture of our people. And you… what I did to you…"

To those wonderful eyes of his...and his mouth...his everything, for someone I love, I hurt him terribly in a way that can never be forgiven, even if it was an illusion...it was something I could do...would do in time.

"That doesn't matter," He says his voice turning to a shout at the end. "Shasa, it was a lie. It was a vision made to hurt us, nothing more!"

Sosuke, why do you make me do this? Do you think I want to tell you the truth? But I...I can't lie to you now, not here.

"No," I respond, shaking my head. "It was that, and so much worse. I have lived my life deceiving myself, thinking my petty wants were justified and that Bushido was nothing but silly rules to hold me back."

I look into his eyes for the last time. "But then you showed me what true honor is with your every action, the joy that could come from serving a cause larger than oneself. And I was… I was ashamed of myself."

The gentle chats, the way he was so earnest all the time...and how he acted, I don't think I had a chance against him really.

"Please don't do this," he begs his voice nothing more than a whisper. "Shasa, please! We can get you help. We can find another way to close the portal. Just… please…"

Again the familiar ache, is it love? Maybe, I want it to be...but what do I know of love?

"I think…" I say slowly. "I think you and I might have been good together, Sosuke-san. I think… I think I might love you. And that is why I cannot let you die to the horrors waiting to emerge." I give him one last smile.

"Goodbye." I say.

Turning away, I cut my palms with the knife, and summon my will to make the Kansen obey.

Blood pours out of me in an unending flood, and I barely notice my body trembling from the pain, I have to do this. I have to---
 
This is definitely canon now. A heart wrenching omake, Gman. It will make a worthy addition to this tale, and I thank you very much for sharing it.
 
@Winged Knight Hey can we take a disadvantage of some sort for Shasa? Seems appropriate

Anyways I bring to you several plans to help people vote on the build process

[] Faster, Stronger, Better, Harder:
Spend all 12 points on Reflex 3

Pros:
Immediately ups our insight rank and gives us a new tech
Improves our Armor TN by 5 (Who wants 33 Armor when suited up? Better question who doesn't?)
Improves our Initiative so we can hit people faster

Cons:
-Not immediately useful in Court
-Takes all our XP so no goodies for a while


[] Patience Samurai-san!
Save until we have enough for Void 3 (4 more xp)

Pros:
-Void is fundamentally the most useful trait in the game allowing us to:
Call more raises
Shrug off more damage
Spend more void for phantom skill points
Mess with turn order
-One of the key stats for Iaijutsu which we may need to do now that Shasa is gone
-Will also instantly raise us an Insight Rank once obtained

Cons:
-We have to wait to get the shinies
-It will also involve us spending all our XP
-Doesn't synergize well with any of our current skills.

[] Courtly Blade
Spend 6 points to get Iaijutsu 3
Spend 3 points to get Courtier 3
Spend 2 points to gain emphasis on Iaijutsu Focus (Rerolls 1's on that roll)
Save one for whatever

Pros:
-Makes us a not terrible duelist (okay not great but not terrible)
-We are ridiculously good at being a courtier for a Hida Bushi at rank 1
-Only 3 points off from rank up and if we're good we might be able to get special training from the Dragon
-Do you like drawing weapons as a free action? Now you can! Only Katana but it's the little things that make it worth while

Cons:
-We don't get a shiny new technique
-We don't get more defense or speed
-still need to raise Reflex and Void to be a good duelist.
 
Courtly doesn't really appeal to me, neither from a mechanical perspective, a character perspective, or from a narrative perspective. Mechanics wise, I don't think we'll be using courtier or dueling often enough to justify buying them, especially as we've already been spending loads of points in social skills. We've been neglecting combat for too long to really neglect it now.

From a character perspective, courtier skill seems alright, but dueling? Sosuke is much more of a "Hida Smash" kinda guy for me to see him doing any dueling. At least, without a very good IC justification - for instance, losing a duel with significant consequences. I don't think losing a battle to an Oni would really prompt sosuke to learn dueling. If anything it's more likely to make him learn to smash even harder. After all, if he had his Kosha a bit harder Shasa would still be alive (no blood mage, no portal). Or if he had managed to kill the Oni sooner.

Now Sincerity I could see him working on - to avoid talking about Shasa's blood magic without blatantly lying - but not dueling.

From a narative perspective, we managed thta Oni fight by the skin of our teeth. Sosuke is likely going to be focused on how to increase his chances of surviving a similar fight. After all, with the Shadowlands' leader giving us his personal attention, we're undoubtedly going to have to face another Oni at some point. Sosuke won't take that threat lying down.
 
@Bastur2 it would cost two skill points to go to sincerity two. On the hole 5k3 can be useful but it's a bit of a crap shoot 6k3 is when you start making most rolls. The best thing about courtier 3 is that it gives a mastery which gives +3 to insight.

@Hydroplatypus
The argument can be made that with Sasha gone we will have to handle any duels that our glorious leader Yasuki-sama gets himself into, and with that in mind it's prudent to prepare for it. I admit to preferring the first plan but I wanted to give an array of options for people.
 
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[x] Faster, Stronger, Better, Harder

For reasons... courtly blade just dont really fit. I would love to get that void point just so we dont have to mind raising that for some time but the no synergy con with our current setup makes me lean more to the first plan.
 
I would go for raising reflexes to 3.

We're a yojimbo, we don't take part of courts directly and by ourselves. With what we have on courtier and etiquette should be enough inside dragon lands.

Also, goddammit Gman, that omake was good.

...

Shasa, why? :(
 
So, do anyone have any idea on what to buy?

Do we need any skill upgrade or can we do with only attributes?
bruh

For my ~300 words worth of reasoning, and the fact I doubt we'll need iai too much, I'm going with;

[] Faster, Stronger, Better, Harder

I feel that waiting a tiny bit to raise Void 3 will be better, for reasons I will expand upon tomorrow if asked. Therefore;
[] Patience Samurai-san!
-[] I will remember you. (Take Lost Love Disad.)

lol nevermind
 
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@Winged Knight Hey can we take a disadvantage of some sort for Shasa? Seems appropriate

Should it be voted on, I would allow an appropriate Disadvantage of up to no more than 3 points for these events. It's thematic and it makes sense. I'm unsure if I will allow the actual gaining of Experience for it, though. I'll get back to you all on that after I've considered the matter.
 
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I say that if we take Lost Love, we can bank everything we have and then save for Void 3; 1 EXP isn't much, and it would also raise us to Insight 2--

--which means that we'd need a sizable amount of time to learn the Rank 2 School Technique. After the timeskip that must be coming up. Unless @Winged Knight would wave that, for when we hit Void 3 and just give us the DR?
 
There will be opportunity to obtain the Rank 2 Technique should you become eligible, yes. It actually wouldn't take that long. Every one of the 5 Techniques you get when you raise Insight is really just an increased understanding on what you have already learned.
 
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I agree with @Rook on getting Lost Love disadvantage, because it seems appropiate even if @Winged Knight gaves us no exp for it. But since he does, we're 3 exp away from raising void to 3

So, making a vote.

[x] Patience Samurai-san!
 
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