First Command - Torchship Captain Quest

Character Sheet
Vehicle Commander Smith
Dakota "Kodi" Smith
Kodi is fascinated with space travel, other cultures, and stories her mama told her about the war. She sees fighting as an unfortunate burden she is taking on to spare others. More of a cat person.
Drives
Investigate Everything, Pursue Truth Relentlessly, Be Merciful, Avoid Social Awkwardness
Relationships
Friend -
Crush -
Rival - Selena Green​
Montana "Monty" Smith
Monty has always wanted to be an explorer, to tell his mom stories about far-away places. Though not inclined to violence, he never backs down. Loves dogs.
Drives
Make New Friends, Be Forward and Direct, Try New Things, Be A Show Off
Relationships
Friend -
Crush -
Rival -​

Traits
Void-Born: You never take complications from 0g or space suits, but take -2d6 to feats of strength and double complications from high gravity.
Shifting Gears: You can spend 1 Determination to switch profiles. Costs +1 Determination each time per episode.
Well-Connected: You can spend 1 Determination to create an old friend, comrade, instructor, etc on any appropriate ship, facility, station, etc you might visit. They are always willing to help if you help in turn.
Certifications
Wild Animal 5+, Physical Instrument 5+, Social Being 5+, Cosmonaut 4+
English 3+, Russian 5+, OSL 4+
Artillery Officer 4+, Drone Pilot 3+, Missile Plotter 4+, Space Marshal 4+
Diplomat +4, Leader +4, Bureaucrat +4, Social Scientist +4
Modern Small Arms 4+, Damage Control 4+
Hobbies: Animal Handling,

Star Patrol Vessel Yeager-1
Statline will be linked above when ready.


Features
Corvette Dock, Transmaterializer

Weapons
x1 Sandblaster, x2 250MW Laser, x2 Probe Bay

Crew
7/42 Crew Assigned!​
PersonDepartment 1Department 2ExpertiseOther Certs & NotesTraits
VC SmithTacticalAdminDemolitionModern Small Arms, Working With Working AnimalsSpacer, Plural, Well-Connected
XO Evelyn Rosa Paz-Admin-SlugthrowersVeteran, Cyborg
SPC Nyiko Shilubana-BolonkinEngineering-Jury-Rigging, FlashfabSpacer
SPC Kroshtnyr SatkolResearch-SensorsAugment (Mental/Medical), Heavyworlder
SPC Selena GreenSecurity--YOUR RIVALHeavyworlder
SPC Kerman Ó CaolaidheAstrogationOrbits-
SPC Ariadna StrunaTacticalDrones-
 
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Here's the current (and sorted) vote count.
Adhoc vote count started by Derpmind on Jun 14, 2022 at 12:41 PM, finished with 19 posts and 14 votes.

  • [X] A Zinovian defector named Specialist Kroshtnyr Satkol, who jumped the border about five years back from her post on an early warning station. Her records indicate that some assholes in Admin keep flagging her as a potential spy, though you can't see much suspicious about her past her arrival.
    [X] Your… uh, Specialist Ella-Rose Matthews, Martian specialist in Signals, who, um, who Monty has an enormous ridiculous crush on which has made life for both him and Kodi very complicated.
    [X] Specialist Evelyn Rosa Paz, whose record scrolls quite a ways on your tablet. She wasn't just Solar Patrol in the war, she was Solar Patrol before the war, and has been slinging lasers since before you were born.
    [x] Your rival Specialist Selena Greene, Terran in Security, who you never quite got along with. Looks like she made the jump to Security Senor.
    [X] An Aquillian named Specialist Ael'ray Hexe, who… holy shit. She's Enforcer caste, which from what you understand means she's literally a genetically engineered cyborg sociopath with a programmed-in authoritarian personality. But she's served in Star Patrol six years without so much as a write-up?
    [x] Specialist Zora Paji, who stands out for a couple of reasons, partially the cybernetics and mostly the fact that they've actually got a Psi cert. Just the one, but it's in mind-reading, and they're still a 4.35 on the Granger-Baxter scale!
    [X] Specialist Viktor Oleksijovych Dotsenko, Vic! The two of you went to the Academy together. Top scorer in every class, but not an ambitious bone in his body. You think he might be overly humble because he's embarrassed about being an unapproved Augment.
    [X] A baseline Aquillian named Specialist Elluin Ty'er
 
[X] Specialist Viktor Oleksijovych Dotsenko, Vic! The two of you went to the Academy together. Top scorer in every class, but not an ambitious bone in his body. You think he might be overly humble because he's embarrassed about being an unapproved Augment.

Friend!

[X] Your rival Specialist Selena Greene, Terran in Security, who you never quite got along with. Looks like she made the jump to Security Senor.

Lover!

[X] An Aquillian named Specialist Ael'ray Hexe, who… holy shit. She's Enforcer caste, which from what you understand means she's literally a genetically engineered cyborg sociopath with a programmed-in authoritarian personality. But she's served in Star Patrol six years without so much as a write-up?

Other lover!
 
The Luna Yards were the biggest shipbuilding facility in known space, the massive facilities that had once been necessary to produce the hundreds of thousands of ships a year needed to sustain an interplanetary civilization at slower-than-light speeds. Nobody else in the galaxy had ever needed such an absurd thing, and it was the reason that a little species on two planets had fought an empire with two thousand and kicked its ass. You read once that at the height of its operation during the war, it was supposedly producing ships faster than the birthrate of fifteen billion human beings could make crews for them. That didn't sound right, but you had vivid memories of looking out the windows of L5 and seeing the glow of 0g crucibles and radiator sails with the naked eye.

One thing to consider here is that this is not just an industrial wonder, it's a monument to one of Earth's subcultures which is likely extinct or nearly so.

We know, from the lore document, that pre-war the average vessel has a lifespan of just 2 years, with a crew of 4 people. At half a million ships build per year, that gives us a total fleet of 1 million ships flying through the solar system on average, with a crew population of 4 million people (likely to be actually 6-8 million people, to account for those people who are on leave).
With this system existing for decades, and it's very isolated nature of both the places they came from and the places they visited, it's highly likely that it formed it's own subculture.

Now, enter the war. Ship production expands dramatically over the years, and those need staffing. A huge number of people who used to run the regular ships die.
The others will be grounded. By the time the war ends, every conventional civilian ship will have been timed out.
Meanwhile, the job they used to do has radically changed. A voyage that used to take months, can now be done in 20 minutes. Space travel has changed from long periods of isolation, to constant work EVA's docking and undocking, and hanging out in space stations. So not only are most of them dead, the niche they used to occupy is irrevocably gone, eradicated within a single generation.

Star Patrol might be the last remnant of this sub-culture.
 
[X] Specialist Evelyn Rosa Paz, whose record scrolls quite a ways on your tablet. She wasn't just Solar Patrol in the war, she was Solar Patrol before the war, and has been slinging lasers since before you were born.

Secondly, turns out you got somebody from the Mendel aboard, somebody you know! Shame it wasn't Owen, but he's probably off running his own hospital now. Instead, you have…

[X] Your rival Specialist Selena Greene, Terran in Security, who you never quite got along with. Looks like she made the jump to Security Senor.

Finally, it looks like you have an alien on board. Only about 5% of Star Patrol is non-human or human-derived in origin: one in forty is about right. They are…

[X] A baseline Aquillian named Specialist Elluin Ty'er, whose record has serious hacker cred. He's a political refugee from a border system of the IDR, which means he's a thin-boned non-psychic space elf from the hypercapitalist hellhole, instead of an emotionless cyborg elf from the feudal hellhole. His last posting is classified, that's cool.
 
[x] Specialist Evelyn Rosa Paz, whose record scrolls quite a ways on your tablet. She wasn't just Solar Patrol in the war, she was Solar Patrol before the war, and has been slinging lasers since before you were born.

[x] Your rival Specialist Selena Greene, Terran in Security, who you never quite got along with. Looks like she made the jump to Security Senor.

[x] An Aquillian named Specialist Ael'ray Hexe, who… holy shit. She's Enforcer caste, which from what you understand means she's literally a genetically engineered cyborg sociopath with a programmed-in authoritarian personality. But she's served in Star Patrol six years without so much as a write-up?
 
[X] Specialist Zora Paji, who stands out for a couple of reasons, partially the cybernetics and mostly the fact that they've actually got a Psi cert. Just the one, but it's in mind-reading, and they're still a 4.35 on the Granger-Baxter scale!
[X] Your rival Specialist Selena Greene, Terran in Security, who you never quite got along with. Looks like she made the jump to Security Senor.
[X] A Zinovian defector named Specialist Kroshtnyr Satkol, who jumped the border about five years back from her post on an early warning station. Her records indicate that some assholes in Admin keep flagging her as a potential spy, though you can't see much suspicious about her past her arrival.
 
[x] Specialist Zora Paji, who stands out for a couple of reasons, partially the cybernetics and mostly the fact that they've actually got a Psi cert. Just the one, but it's in mind-reading, and they're still a 4.35 on the Granger-Baxter scale!
[x] Your… uh, Specialist Ella-Rose Matthews, Martian specialist in Signals, who, um, who Monty has an enormous ridiculous crush on which has made life for both him and Kodi very complicated.
[X] An Aquillian named Specialist Ael'ray Hexe, who… holy shit. She's Enforcer caste, which from what you understand means she's literally a genetically engineered cyborg sociopath with a programmed-in authoritarian personality. But she's served in Star Patrol six years without so much as a write-up?
 
[X] Specialist Zora Paji, who stands out for a couple of reasons, partially the cybernetics and mostly the fact that they've actually got a Psi cert. Just the one, but it's in mind-reading, and they're still a 4.35 on the Granger-Baxter scale!
[X] Your… uh, Specialist Ella-Rose Matthews, Martian specialist in Signals, who, um, who Monty has an enormous ridiculous crush on which has made life for both him and Kodi very complicated.
[X] A baseline Aquillian named Specialist Elluin Ty'er, whose record has serious hacker cred. He's a political refugee from a border system of the IDR, which means he's a thin-boned non-psychic space elf from the hypercapitalist hellhole, instead of an emotionless cyborg elf from the feudal hellhole. His last posting is classified, that's cool.
 
[X] Specialist Zora Paji, who stands out for a couple of reasons, partially the cybernetics and mostly the fact that they've actually got a Psi cert. Just the one, but it's in mind-reading, and they're still a 4.35 on the Granger-Baxter scale!

[X] Your rival Specialist Selena Greene, Terran in Security, who you never quite got along with. Looks like she made the jump to Security Senor.

[X] A Zinovian defector named Specialist Kroshtnyr Satkol, who jumped the border about five years back from her post on an early warning station. Her records indicate that some assholes in Admin keep flagging her as a potential spy, though you can't see much suspicious about her past her arrival.
 
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[X] Specialist Zora Paji, who stands out for a couple of reasons, partially the cybernetics and mostly the fact that they've actually got a Psi cert. Just the one, but it's in mind-reading, and they're still a 4.35 on the Granger-Baxter scale!
[X] Your… uh, Specialist Ella-Rose Matthews, Martian specialist in Signals, who, um, who Monty has an enormous ridiculous crush on which has made life for both him and Kodi very complicated.
[X] A Zinovian defector named Specialist Kroshtnyr Satkol, who jumped the border about five years back from her post on an early warning station. Her records indicate that some assholes in Admin keep flagging her as a potential spy, though you can't see much suspicious about her past her arrival.

I really like the image of an XO who starts passing on our orders before we actually say anything.
 
[X] Specialist Viktor Oleksijovych Dotsenko, Vic! The two of you went to the Academy together. Top scorer in every class, but not an ambitious bone in his body. You think he might be overly humble because he's embarrassed about being an unapproved Augment.

[X] Your rival Specialist Selena Greene, Terran in Security, who you never quite got along with. Looks like she made the jump to Security Senor.


[X] An Aquillian named Specialist Ael'ray Hexe, who… holy shit. She's Enforcer caste, which from what you understand means she's literally a genetically engineered cyborg sociopath with a programmed-in authoritarian personality. But she's served in Star Patrol six years without so much as a write-up?
 
Okay we have a tie on the XO, so will somebody please break the tie?

Also, please stick to the formatting in the actual updates next time, it will make my life a lot easier.
 
[x] Specialist Evelyn Rosa Paz, whose record scrolls quite a ways on your tablet. She wasn't just Solar Patrol in the war, she was Solar Patrol before the war, and has been slinging lasers since before you were born.
 
1-3: Crew Manifest
The fact that this program was coming together in a hurry was very obvious from crew the manifest; they were pulling people in from all over the service, and all of them on short notice. A lot of them shared previous services in ships which had just been decommissioned; Hadfield-3, Hawking-21, Tereshkova-4… and Mendel-5.

Looks like the old girl hadn't made it. I wasn't surprised, it was already two years into a three year mission and it probably needed a serious rebuild given damage, neutron activation, and the Zinovian shuttle still sticking out the side. Still, good on Selena for making the jump to Security Senior, even if that meant she had to get stuck in a rocket with us again.

This was going to be interesting.

Every entry had a variety of statistics next to them; departments, years service, station and ship postings, and medical alerts. That was important for logistics and so on; for instance, if you gave a flatlining gene-edited Martian the same jolt of oxygenated plasma you'd give a baseline Terran, they'd live, sure, you'd just end up with a grand-mal seizure on your hands from oxygen poisoning. So having that info on their ID card made perfect sense.

This crew was a diverse lot; we had a couple cyborgs who needed stocks of replacement parts, a few medical dependencies, allergies both trivial and serious, normal stuff. I'd looked through these records before as part of my admin duties, but I was seeing stuff that I think had been censored before. I guess it's probably pretty important for a vehicle commander to know who had minor psychic abilities, who was augmented beyond nearbaseline, and who was taking antipsychotics, but it was still a little uncomfortable.

That's life in space, though. If you expected privacy, you're in the wrong line of work. There were consent forms for this information's release, which we knew because you and I had to sign a bunch about our plural stuff. Rubbing shoulders on a ship, anything that could be problematic had to be known.

Which is how I noticed we had an alien crew member. I might have just scrolled over the name, but it was impossible to miss the giant warnings of the commonplace painkillers that would be poison and the alternate resuscitation methods that the crew would need to be taught and so forth. Specialist Kroshtnyr Satkol was a Zinovian.

Curious, I opened the file. A picture greeted me of a woman with brownish, almost orange skin, yellow-white furlike hair pulled back tightly, and ridge lines along her forehead and cheekbones where subdermal plating was installed. Her eyes were an unnaturally deep green. There was a vaguely feline energy to her, but more terrifying adult lioness stalking a gazelle than your average cute kittycat girl with access to gene mods.

Her file said she was a defector, jumped ship from a spy station five years ago and had tried to settle on Titan. Not for long, though, she applied to join Star Patrol within a year, but she'd been held up for a long time in security review. She'd done a mixture of Academy classes and tested certs, then a rotation of posts on refuelling centres and near-Earth science posts. Her file was filled with affirmations of her loyalty, competence, and drive, though no particular commendations owing to the frankly boring nature of the posts

I'd served with aliens before, but mostly various Aquillians, who were by far the majority of alien volunteers. Never a Zinovian, I wasn't even really aware there were any in Star Patrol, though I knew there had to be a few because Zinovian defectors and refugees weren't uncommon. Hell, some of the prisoners we'd taken (you'd taken, to be accurate) were probably applying for asylum right now, given that their government didn't tend to look kindly on those who surrendered.

Curious, I poked my head in on the biological section, just to see if there was anything important to note. From what I remember, the Zinovians made aggressive use of genetic modding. Sure enough, her file claimed she'd been modified pre-natally for 'analytical intelligence', with scare quotes giving that all dubious weight it probably deserved. As a result, she was medically dependent on neurotransmitter receptor blockers or she'd start suffering dissociative episodes and photosensitive seizures.

There was a laundry list of other warnings, given how far removed her biology was from terran life, but all of it was manageable and she could at least eat the same food for the most part. It was fine, it was going to be fine. I set the file aside, stretched, and glanced out the window. Most of the crew would be arriving tomorrow, so that meant I had a little time.

I thumbed through the comm controls until I saw a familiar name.

"Monty to Specialist Shilubana-Bolonkin, you there Nyiko?

"What's up, captain?"

"Have I got time for a little EVA before we test-fire the engines?"

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A thing that downwellers sometimes struggle with is that not all spacers are quite the same, there's a pretty wide variety of lifestyles out in the stars. That was evident right now as we walked along the outside of the hull, if you compared Nyiko's confident stride with my more measured steps and insistence on looking at my feet.

"You okay, Monty?" he asked.

"Yeah, just a little more of an indoor cat, that's all," I replied. I forced myself to look up, and I felt my hands tightening against my safety line as I did. It wasn't the zero G, we're great at that, nor was it the pressure of the suit or anything. It was the size. Don't like anywhere you can't see the walls.

"Cool, isn't it? Look, my granddad lives right down there in that section, left of the round piece, see?" Nyiko exclaimed, reaching a head above him to point to the Lunar surface which loomed in the sky.

"That's awesome," I replied, very distinctly not looking. "Come on, we're going around back."

"I still don't understand, the dock'll have been over it a dozen times," Nyiko insisted.

"Yeah, well, this is our one chance to look at it with our own eyes. An hour from now, everything behind those lights is going to be so radioactive you'll get cancer if you think about it too long. I want to see the whole ship while I can. Call it a safety thing."

"Alright. No handholds back there, just warning you," he said. "Not much use for them."

"That's why we have the boots," I replied.

We pushed off onto the nacelles and walked back, the spire of the FTL ring strut jutting out like a tower, then down toward the far end of the ship. It wasn't very far at all; ships always seemed large and looming when you were just a ways away and then surprisingly small when you got close. Yeager-1 was just over a hundred metres from end to end, and we're exited at roughly the halfway point airlock.

Finally, we arrived at the corrugated engine radiator panels; they looked like the rest of the ship, but instead of the outer layer of aluminized steel, it was tantalum hafnium carbide alloy. When the engines operated in economy mode, firing pure reaction products, these radiators kept the assembly cool, and could reach temperatures in excess of 3000k.

"Welp, it's a ship," Nyiko said, clapping me on the back. "You wanna swing over and take a look at the magnetic nozzles too?"

"No, this should be good. Gimme a moment," I said, walking along the outer curve until I arrived on the inner surface, the other four engines looming around me. More power than this ship's namesake could have imagined when he broke the sound barrier, so much that the speed limit on these engines was how much reaction mass we were willing to burn, how many Gs the gravity systems could cancel before it squished us into our crash couches. The primordial power of the early universe, channelled by magnetic fields to bring us the stars. In exchange, that power would poison this place; nobody would ever see it up close again.

I drew an engineering pen from my bag, and knelt down.

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What do you write or draw on the side? Cultural context: your character is a vaguely American communist astronaut whose pop culture is very 1960s inspired, so midcentury memes encouraged.
[ ] Write In​
After your crew arrives, you'll be going on your shakedown cruise, and doing some tests, then heading out along the beacon network to your mission area.
What sidetracks you?
[ ] A distress beacon from a Star Rescue ship which is being chased by unknown attackers!​
[ ] A distress beacon from a station which is being threatened by extremists!​
[ ] A distress beacon from a cargo ship which is being menaced by pirates!​
 
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[X] A distress beacon from a cargo ship which is being menaced by pirates!

pirates good

brain bad, no idea for what to scribble
 
[X] Kilroy was here

Could always go with that ancient meme.

[X] A distress beacon from a cargo ship which is being menaced by pirates!

And let's go with some exercise!
 
[x] Posadas was wrong, but not for long!
Maybe?

[X] A distress beacon from a cargo ship which is being menaced by pirates!
Pirates can be good.
 
[X] A distress beacon from a station which is being threatened by extremists!
[X]Mom's ambrosia recipe
 
[x] A distress beacon from a Star Rescue ship which is being chased by unknown attackers!

Sounds a lot like the Yeager program's remit - lots of unknowns, likely ship-to-ship combat. Can't hurt to do a test run before we get to the Calesius Abyss.
 
[X] So it's come to this

[x ] A distress beacon from a Star Rescue ship which is being chased by unknown attackers!
 
maybe something like Unidentified Friendly Object?

the UFO craze was huuuge in the 50s-60s

EDIT: no wait, Unidentified Funky Object, that's it
 
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[X] A distress beacon from a cargo ship which is being menaced by pirates!

Pirates, meet Yeager-1. Cold unforgiving vacuum, meet pirates.

Meanwhile, I confess to having no idea what might be suitable in terms of a pop-culture sort of reference-y thing (I'm plagued with the same problem as the cast of Archer, where I might drop a reference to Rien Poortvliet when a Gnomeo-and-Juliet quip would serve the same purpose and not lose most of the people in the room) so I'll go for the classic nuclear-technician-inspired black humor.
[X] "I am designed to face mortal dangers and unfavorable odds. If you see me running, try to catch up."
 
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Changing to:
[x] "DANGER RADIATION DROP & RUN"

[X] A distress beacon from a cargo ship which is being menaced by pirates!
 
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