Fiend: Thread Three, Thread Harder. [Exalted/Worm]

logiccosmic said:
Actually, going to make a brand new thread tomorrow, with some serious advice from ES. It'll be even newer, huzzah.
I read his reply and I have to agree with it. What you have written IS good, but it could be polished up a lot. Also any spoilers for the plot? Compared the what you have already posted ofc.
 
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