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AN: Based on professional spotlight stealing protagonist... Shirou Emiya, Best Onii-chan...
Fate/Kaleid Emiya: From Older Brother to Younger Sister, A Sword's Dying Wish

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AN: Based on professional spotlight stealing protagonist... Shirou Emiya, Best Onii-chan edition.

Your goal is to Bring Miyu Back! ... Actually, it's to get to Miyu. Good luck.

See the next post for your character sheet. In this case, let's say some stuff got stuck to you on the way to another world.

Fate/Kaleid Emiya: From Older Brother to Younger Sister, A Sword's Dying Wish

"O...nii-chan...?"

You saw Miyu laid down upon a stone block in the middle of the ritual circle within the large spacious cavern.

'Finally... after all the fighting we can...'

"Sorry for making you wait so long..."

'Now we can go home, Miyu.'

"Why...did you come?"

"....?!"

You felt your heart stop for just the briefest of moments.

How, no... why did your sister ask that of all things?

"I heard it... from those people."

'JULIAN!'

Tears began to fall from Miyu's eyes as she continued, "That the reason you and Kiritsugu-san took me in... was to use my...power..."

'That's not...'

"That I Am... Just a Tool. That in Kiritsugu's place, who couldn't find a way to use me... That Ainsworth would use me... to save the world..."

"So then why... Did you come here?!"

... You close your eyes, took a deep breath and reached into your coat pocket.

The answer was clear ever since that you made that oath under the snow.

"That... goes without saying."

You took out the Class Cards that you took when you won the Holy Grail War in this one night by your lonesome.

They began to levitate from your hand as the ritual began.

A genuine smile easily finds its way to your face, even if you knew this would likely be the last time you would ever see your precious sister again.

"I'm an older brother. So I have to protect my younger sister, don't I?"

Her eyes widen as you approach her.

"...?!"

"I've been trying to figure out what to do. It's been one mistake after another with me, so this might be one too."

You clasp your hands together with your sister's soft left hand, then you knelt down besides her.

And you made your wish.

"But, for this alone is true,

I wish upon the Holy Grail.

I pray you find a world where you won't have to suffer any longer.

I pray that you meet kind people.

I pray you find friends you can laugh with.

I pray you find a warm, small... share of happiness."

"O...Onii... Don't leave me..."

She fell unconscious as the ritual began as she floated to the air where the concentration of prana had recently manifested.

You held her hand before eventually you had to let go.

'...That's right. There's still one more thing you have to do.'

Walking away from the cavern and face your last opponent.

"Sorry, but my little sister is working her hardest right now. Could you wait just a little bit longer?"

The woman who sent swords right through your body the last time stepped forward.

"I cannot..." Golden portals swirl into existence behind her, and countless Noble Phantasms of varying quality manifest from them.

"Your wish will not be granted. A faker who slipped into the Holy Grail War. Shall not seize the miracle...!"

... Ah, now you understand... the card that Sakura tried to use for your sake...

"So that's the true Archer Card... Gilgamesh."


That time, the boy who won the Holy Grail War within a single night did not consider the possibility that when he wished for Miyu to find her small share of happiness...

...Such happiness didn't exist without him with her.

And so, the ritual sought to fulfill his wish in a way he didn't expect.

By bringing him along with her.

However, to travel to another world is a delicate procedure and his battle with the Ainsworth Doll Angelica who wielded the Class Card of the humanity's Oldest Hero sent him veering off course.

Following the trail of a being of great power being summoned... for yet another Holy Grail War.

(Pick One Route...)

[ ] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))

[ ] This place is dark... and it stinks. Wait, no, Sakura? But she was... her killer was right there, right there! I won't let her die again! All I need to do is get past that Rider servant again. (Medium canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up Riding class skill)

[ ] A red spear is thrust at you, like hell I'm going to die! Looks like I have to kill another Lancer again ... why is there another me doing here? (Low canon derailment... in terms of Servant roster, takes up Saber slot, gain A-Rank Magic Resistance and buff to stats)

[ ] Enhanced wolfs were attacking a white-haired girl in the snowy fields! I have to save her! (Massive canon derailment, takes up Archer slot, good buff to stats with even more prana)​
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Character Sheets and Goal Tracker
Goals:

  1. Bring Miyu Back (Cleared)
  2. Bring Miyu Back (Sort of)
  3. Bring Miyu Back (Needs amendment)
  4. Go to Miyu
  5. Spoil Medea and make her happy
  6. Protect Medea
  7. Spoil Serenity
  8. Learn more about the Greater Grail
  9. Scry on Sakura's situation (Done, Zouken ded)
  10. Learn about the founding families (Half-way done)





Name: Shirou Emiya
Master: -
Alignment: Neutral Evil/Good
Class: Archer / Caster


Parameters:

  • Strength: D (C with reinforcement) (B with Medea Reinforcement)
  • Endurance: D (C with reinforcement) (B with Medea Reinforcement) (A with Argos Spell)
  • Agility: C (B with reinforcement) (A with Medea Reinforcement)
  • Magic: A (EX)
  • Luck: E (EX)
  • Noble Phantasm: ???

Class Skills:

Independent Action: EX
Shirou is still alive, and simply have bits of Servant containers pasted onto him. Yeah, Gaia isn't kicking him out anytime soon.

Magic Resistance: D

Item Creation (Sword): C

Personal Skills:

Affections of the Grail (Imouto): EX
This skill boosts the rank of his LCK. At the last moment, he will break out of enemy Servant abilities that would normally be impossible to escape from. In addition to that, prana from the ley lines connecting to the Lesser Grail's involved in the Holy Grail War is being given to him freely. As he was brought along by Miyu but was displaced in a near enough alternate world where his prana was replaced with this world's leylines, he himself is not aware of the existence of this Skill. He would only notice it should the connection disappear or someone points it out.

Thaumaturgy: C-
During his life time, the sorceries learned by Emiya are unremarkable. However, the "projection" sorcery he wields is quite special, as it is able to duplicate weapons, including all the components, to near perfection. In addition, during duplication, he can even read the wielder's skills, which allows him to gain all kinds of Noble Phantasms and combat skills.

Eye of the Mind (True): C
A danger-avoidance ability that utilises the intelligence collected up to the current time as the basis, in order to predict the opponent's activity and change the current situation. This is not a result of talent, but an overwhelming amount of combat experience. A weapon wielded by none other than a mortal, gained through tenacious training. Shirou's Eye of the Mind is underdeveloped compared with EMIYA's, however, the encroachment of the Archer card into his soul has still engraved much of EMIYA's combat experience into his soul.


Noble Phantasm ???

Unlimited Blade Works (無限の剣製 Mugen no Kensei): E - A++ Rank (Anti-Unit)

Emiya Shirou's Reality Marble that records and stores every weapon he ever saw. His internal world has limitless resources to create any weapon then brought forth by Shirou's tracing. This iteration of Shirou is also capable of evoking the ability in its entirety. By chanting a small poem as an incantation, Shirou can call his Reality Marble to replace the physical world around him. His internal world shows a night sky with endless falling snow, the ground is littered with swords.

The majority of the weapons preserved in the reality marble are Noble Phantasms of Heroic Spirits copied through projection sorcery, each possessing deadly powers. Although the majority of the weapons are swords, the Noble Phantasm that provides absolute defence against projectiles, "Rho Aias", is also said to be copied and stored in the reality marble. Also, the ability of the replicated Noble Phantasm suffers one rank down compared to the original.

Not only can he freely access the weapon stored inside Unlimited Blade Works, he can also modify the weapons to his wish like Caladbolg II. In addition, he is able to capitalise on his ability to repeatedly project and use Noble Phantasms as disposable arrows, and then unleash the magical energy stored within – the tactic called "Broken Phantasm".


"I am the bone of my sword.
Steel is my body, and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades.
Unaware of beginning,
Nor aware of the end.
Withstood pain with inconsistent weapons, my hands will never hold anything.
Yet, my flame never ends.
My whole body was still Unlimited Blade Works"

"My body is made out of swords.
My blood is of iron and my heart of glass.
I have overcome countless battlefields.
Not even once retreating,
Not even once being victorious.
The orphan is alone again, striking diamond dust on a hill of swords.
But this life is not yet over.
This false body was still made of swords."



Name: Medea
Master: Shirou Emiya
Height: 149 cm
Weight: 41 kg
Source: Greek mythology
Region: Greece
Alignment: Lawful Good (Greek)

Class: Caster

Parameters:

  • Strength: E
  • Endurance: E
  • Agility: C
  • Magic: A
  • Luck: A
  • Noble Phantasm: C
Class Skills:

Item Creation: B

Territory Creation: B

Personal Skills:

Golden Fleece: EX

It is a treasure that the Argonauts, led by Jason, was looking for, but the legitimate owner was in Medea's bloodline. It allows the user to summon a dragon by throwing it to the ground with the proper knowledge to summon a Phantasmal Beast. Medea lacks the knowledge, so she is unable to utilize it. However, one can recover by loving the skin. "Fluffy! The healing of the spirit has surpassed the body!"

High Speed Divine Words: A

A Skill that assists with magical incantations via a power to activate Thaumaturgy without the use of Magic Circuits. The language of the Age of Gods, back when words played a heavy role in spellcasting. As such, it is power long lost by modern magi. It is particularly useful for direct attack magic. High-Thaumaturgy-level Magecraft can be cast at the speed of Single-Action spells.

Poison Resistance: A++

Medea, an excellent treatment magus, naturally invalidates all poisons, making her poison proof. At the same time, when she heals someone of poison or anything that can be considered conceptually as "poison", she is also able to restore their physical strength.

Noble Phantasm

Pain Breaker - All Wounds Must Be Repaired: C (Anti-Thaumaturgy)

A medical Noble Phantasm that forms a pair with Rule Breaker that Medea would originally use as a Caster. It can be said that if Medea's Noble Phantasm is the materialization of her legend of betrayal, Medea Lily's Noble Phantasm is the materialization of her love.

It returns any and all curses and injuries by means of magecraft to zero. "Pain Breaker" performs automatic repairs not by means of time manipulation, but by calculating the proper figure one originally had. For those that do not know any better, it would just look like the rewinding of time. It can abolish any and all unreasonableness other than "death", but it simply cannot bring back the dead.


Name: Hassan of Serenity (Nickname of another timeline: Mary)
Master: Shirou Emiya
Height: 161 cm
Weight: 42 kg
Source: Historical Facts, Old Man of the Mountain
Region: Middle-East
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Class: Assassin


Parameters:
  • Strength: D
  • Endurance: D
  • Agility: A+
  • Magic: B
  • Luck: A
  • Noble Phantasm: C
Class Skills:

Presence Concealment: A+

Personal Skills:

Independent Action: A
She possesses the skill of Independent Action as a personal skill rather than part of her class. It is high enough for her to be able to survive for a few days if she kills her Master, while consuming human souls.

Projectile (Daggers): C
Just like the other Hassans, she also wield dirks for both short-range and long-range combat, slicing up her opponents in an instant with dance like movements. However, unlike the dirks wield by the Cursed-Arm Hassan or the Hundred Face Hassan, her personal dirks are white kunai-shaped daggers.

Shapeshift: C
Her Shapeshift skill allows her to disguise herself. She usually takes on the guise of a pure and innocent looking maiden and her appearance is extremely bewitching to men, who look at her full of lust and disregard caution just to go to her. Even in her Servant form, she is still shown to be extremely alluring.

Poison Resistance: C+

Noble Phantasm

Zabaniya: Delusional Poison Body : C+ (Anti-Unit, potentially Anti-Army)

Zabaniya: Delusional Poison Body is the ability possessed by the Hassan of Serenity, an attempt by the Order to replicate the Indian Visha Kanya (Poison Girl).

Her body resists all sorts of poisons and, at the same time, is a lump of poison. Let alone her nails, even her skin and body fluids would act as deadly poisons.

It makes the entirety of her body poisonous to the touch and even the sweet aroma that emanates from her is poison in and of itself. She prefers embracing her victims and kissing them on the lips, using the poison to fry their brains in a few seconds, but any form of contact with her is fatal, no matter how small.

It is said that this Hassan possessed the power to spread this deadly poison on the wind, wiping out entire armies if necessary, but also lacking in the capacity to discern friend from foe, making it equally devastating to her allies.

Best Onii-Chan Equipment:
  1. Kiritsugu's Thompson Contender
  2. *16 Origin Bullets (1 used on Zouken)
  3. *19 Origin Bullets Blade (1 used on Zouken)
  4. .*4 30-06 Springfield bullets (1 used on Zouken)
 
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[X] Enhanced wolfs were attacking a white-haired girl in the snowy fields! I have to save her! (Massive canon derailment, takes up Archer slot, good buff to stats with even more prana)

Was torn between this and punching Shinji's face in... but then I realized that with this, we can punch him earlier in the timeline!
 
[x] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))
 
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[X] A red spear is thrust at you, like hell I'm going to die! Looks like I have to kill another Lancer again ... why is there another me doing here? (Low canon derailment... in terms ofServant roster, takes up Saber slot, gain A-Rank Magic Resistance and buff to stats)
 
[x] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))
 
[X] Enhanced wolfs were attacking a white-haired girl in the snowy fields! I have to save her! (Massive canon derailment, takes up Archer slot, good buff to stats with even more prana)

Was torn between this and punching Shinji's face in... but then I realized that with this, we can punch him earlier in the timeline!
I guess that's possible. But isn't it more the case of when in the quest you punch Shinji rather than when in the timeline? Illya is 2 months ahead after all.

Caster is around January 12 while Canon starts at January 31st.

Going for the Sakura one will mean a few days from canon.
 
[X] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend t hat I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))
 
[X] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))

Medea Lily instead of normal Medea?
 
[X] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))
 
I guess that's possible. But isn't it more the case of when in the quest you punch Shinji rather than when in the timeline? Illya is 2 months ahead after all.

Caster is around January 12 while Canon starts at January 31st.

Going for the Sakura one will mean a few days from canon.
Oh, I'm aware of that.

You see, if we were to punch Shinji's face in before he gets Rider, we would have a much larger chance of killing him! And then Sakura would be forced to use Rider instead of Shinji, which would spread butterflies and make this quest interesting! Not to mention we would also almost certainly befriend Ilya! And a power boost on top of that too?! With no Archer to kill us?! SOLD!!

Truly flawless logic. :cool:

:p

Edit: Medea Lily's fine too.
 
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[X] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))

Magus Killer, once more.
 
[x] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))
 
For those unsure of where Miyuverse Shirou comes from, see this trailer:



Best Sakura was too good for the Nasuverse. R.I.P. Miyuverse Sakura
 
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Medea Lily instead of normal Medea?

Yeah, mostly since this is a Fate/Kaleid crossover, which means we need Mahou Shoujo's for the unevitable final fight vs the Ainsworth's.

Storytelling wise, older Medea brings nothing particularly new to Shirou's repertoire in terms of destruction. And Shirou needs a temporary Imouto to dote on.
 
[X] Enhanced wolves were attacking a white-haired girl in the snowy fields! I have to save her!(Massive canon derailment, takes up Archer slot, good buff to stats with even more prana)



Also, I remember you nick... I think, I just can't remember what you wrote but I remember that it's good so I'm going to assume this'll be good as well.

Wait, are you NickTheHun?

Aha! I just checked and yes you are! I expect great things from you, considering your accomplishments. Don't feel pressured... :drevil:
 
[X] What is this place? A Magus's lab of some sort...? These are... people! Looks like I'll be taking up Kiritsugu's mantle for awhile then. Just another magus to exterminate. Judging by the bruised face of the girl currently on the floor with a magus standing over her, the answer was clear. Well, my new little friend that I picked up from that Caster servant should do the trick. (Large canon derailment, takes up no Servant slot, picks up a Caster class skill (kind of))
 
[X] Enhanced wolfs were attacking a white-haired girl in the snowy fields! I have to save her! (Massive canon derailment, takes up Archer slot, good buff to stats with even more prana)
 
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