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But I didn't even get to the point where Pure Form Lillie snorts a line of Dragomin and rides Vectors Cyber Oozaru form into battle!
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KnightofTempest
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I'd appreciate a definitive answer so I'm not stuck in limbo or something though. . .
KnightofTempest
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OK gimme a sec.
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Eeh, go ahead
if nothing else, I can use you in other capacity
also @Zer0 get Beyond in here and posting
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Name: Lungshaohan
Age: 22
Race: Human (Triclops)
Appearance: Looks like Tien, but instead of being bald, has a Chinese Queue and has tattoos on his arms and legs which function as magical enchantments capable of increasing or decreasing the gravity placed upon him.
Power Level:
Base 110,000,000
Kaio-ken x2 220,000,000, Kaio-Ken x3 330,000,000, Kaio-ken x4 440,000,000, Kaio-ken x5 580,000,000,
Mystic: 120,000,000
Max Kaio-ken + Mystic: 590,000,000
Combat Style: New Crane School ( Kikoho, Dodonpa, Four Witches Technique, Flight, Kaio-Ken up to x5, Solar Flare, and Multi-Form)
Innovated Techniques:
Four Witches Kikoho: A combination of the Four Witches Technique and the Kikoho, a two stage technique allowing for double the power of the regular kikoho
Zhuāngpèi Dodonpa: Lung Fires Four Dodonpa from four witches that combine together for a larger, more concentrated beam
Utilizes Crane Style Martial Arts like Tien did in Dragonball, emphasizes strategy and supplemental techniques like Four Witches, Multi-Form, and Kaio-Ken to overcome stronger opponents. Uses enchanted tatoos to help train.
Mystic Ki Capacitor (Prototype) Stores up to 330,000 PL worth of Ki
New Crane School Techniques can be powered by life force in order to achieve more powerful results at the cost of the user's health.
Skills: Taoist Philosophy, Enchanting and Ritual Magic, History.
Bio: A Member of the Three Eyed Clan and Descendant of the Famous Tienshinhan from Age 975, Trained in the New Crane School set up by Tienshinhan and Chaiotzu in the aftermath of the Buu Saga, a Martial Arts Prodigy, went questing for the secrets of Magic upon completion of his training at age 16 so as to better keep up with all the Saiyans and Namekians running around Earth in the Future. Studied under Baba Uranai in the Art of Enchanting and Ritual Magic for four years. Was Scouted by the Time Patrol at age 21 after defeating Pasnipp, the Saiyan Bandit King of Yunzabit Heights, who should have been defeated by a Namekian Warrior named Escargon in the original timeline. The Time Patroller on duty judged that this was not a threat to the timeline, but recommended the time patrol watch the Human Warrior, as he showed great potential and could feasibly be recruited. Was approached by the time patrol two months ago after once again getting involved in events he was not involved in during the original timeline, this time getting involved in a minor alien invasion from the West Galaxy and defeating one of the Invasion's two Generals. While this had a minimal impact on the timeline, as the invasion was supposed to be defeated anyway, the time patrollers on duty cited regulations and were forced to either arrest or recruit him. He chose to join the time patrol. Completed time patrol training last month and is now on active duty.
Personality: Lungshaohan is somewhat of a stoic, which comes from his Taoist upbringing amongst the Three Eyed Clan. However this stoic exterior hides deep run emotions that can surface in times of extreme crisis. For example, during his battle with the Alien General Rittun in the Invasion, he displayed a declaration of stubborn willpower, angrily determined to take the powerful general down with him if he could not defeat him outright. He then proceeded to utilize a four witches kikoho from his max kaioken level, fueling the attack with his life force in a double edged gambit to defeat the Alien. It worked, but Lungshaohan was bed ridden for weeks before the next senzu bean crop could be harvested to bring him back to full health.
Other than during these times of extreme crisis, Lungshaohan is a good natured man of few words, who tends to take what life throws at him with Stoicism.
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Age: 22
Race: Human (Triclops)
Appearance: Looks like Tien, but instead of being bald, has a Chinese Queue and has tattoos on his arms and legs which function as magical enchantments capable of increasing or decreasing the gravity placed upon him.
Power Level:
Base 110,000,000
Kaio-ken x2 220,000,000, Kaio-Ken x3 330,000,000, Kaio-ken x4 440,000,000, Kaio-ken x5 580,000,000,
Mystic: 120,000,000
Max Kaio-ken + Mystic: 590,000,000
Combat Style: New Crane School ( Kikoho, Dodonpa, Four Witches Technique, Flight, Kaio-Ken up to x5, Solar Flare, and Multi-Form)
Innovated Techniques:
Four Witches Kikoho: A combination of the Four Witches Technique and the Kikoho, a two stage technique allowing for double the power of the regular kikoho
Zhuāngpèi Dodonpa: Lung Fires Four Dodonpa from four witches that combine together for a larger, more concentrated beam
Utilizes Crane Style Martial Arts like Tien did in Dragonball, emphasizes strategy and supplemental techniques like Four Witches, Multi-Form, and Kaio-Ken to overcome stronger opponents. Uses enchanted tatoos to help train.
Mystic Ki Capacitor (Prototype) Stores up to 330,000 PL worth of Ki
New Crane School Techniques can be powered by life force in order to achieve more powerful results at the cost of the user's health.
Skills: Taoist Philosophy, Enchanting and Ritual Magic, History.
Bio: A Member of the Three Eyed Clan and Descendant of the Famous Tienshinhan from Age 975, Trained in the New Crane School set up by Tienshinhan and Chaiotzu in the aftermath of the Buu Saga, a Martial Arts Prodigy, went questing for the secrets of Magic upon completion of his training at age 16 so as to better keep up with all the Saiyans and Namekians running around Earth in the Future. Studied under Baba Uranai in the Art of Enchanting and Ritual Magic for four years. Was Scouted by the Time Patrol at age 21 after defeating Pasnipp, the Saiyan Bandit King of Yunzabit Heights, who should have been defeated by a Namekian Warrior named Escargon in the original timeline. The Time Patroller on duty judged that this was not a threat to the timeline, but recommended the time patrol watch the Human Warrior, as he showed great potential and could feasibly be recruited. Was approached by the time patrol two months ago after once again getting involved in events he was not involved in during the original timeline, this time getting involved in a minor alien invasion from the West Galaxy and defeating one of the Invasion's two Generals. While this had a minimal impact on the timeline, as the invasion was supposed to be defeated anyway, the time patrollers on duty cited regulations and were forced to either arrest or recruit him. He chose to join the time patrol. Completed time patrol training last month and is now on active duty.
Personality: Lungshaohan is somewhat of a stoic, which comes from his Taoist upbringing amongst the Three Eyed Clan. However this stoic exterior hides deep run emotions that can surface in times of extreme crisis. For example, during his battle with the Alien General Rittun in the Invasion, he displayed a declaration of stubborn willpower, angrily determined to take the powerful general down with him if he could not defeat him outright. He then proceeded to utilize a four witches kikoho from his max kaioken level, fueling the attack with his life force in a double edged gambit to defeat the Alien. It worked, but Lungshaohan was bed ridden for weeks before the next senzu bean crop could be harvested to bring him back to full health.
Other than during these times of extreme crisis, Lungshaohan is a good natured man of few words, who tends to take what life throws at him with Stoicism.
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The Invaders from West Galaxy poured out from the metallic monstrosity they called a ship, all white and blue uniformed, green skinned, amphibian creatures. Lungshaohan was there along with a few other warriors to meet them. He took a mental head count of the invaders, there were about 2 thousand of them pouring out from the cavernous launch bay. Though individually these soldiers didn't rate more than 18,000 Power Units, together they could prove to be a mighty threat.
Turning to the other four warriors, comprised of the Saiyan Swordsman Yammu, two members of the New Turtle School named Nero and Torune, and the Namekian Warrior Mukose, Lungshaohan said,
"Right, so by my count, everyone needs to take 400 soldiers each. I'll take the left." Before powering up to Kaio-ken x2 and heading off to confront the leftmost division of invaders. A moment's concentration allowed him to make use of the four witches technique, sprouting an extra pair of arms from his shoulders.
"Right, Dodon Barrage!" He shouted, firing off successive Dodonpa from each of his four arms. The Dodonpa technique was a marvel of Ki Conservation and efficiency and one of the New and Old Crane School's Signature techniques. For a minimum effort it allowed a consistently powerful beam attack capable of doing a good deal of damage.
Yellow beams of energy sliced through the air, spearing soldier after soldier and putting a dent in the mass of aliens on the leftmost flank. Lungshaohan didn't stay in one place for long either, because giving these alien troops the chance to gang up on him in a melee would be bad. Instead he flitted from place to place, constantly firing off Dodonpa Rays with his four arms, attempting to keep out of range and fritter away at the edge of the enemy formation.
The Enemy soldiers, predictably did not take this well and after the initial shock wore off, a barrage of energy balls answered Lungshaohan's Dodon Barrage. It was a wide blast area, but Lungshaohan knew he only needed to deflect or block a small portion of the mass of energy balls and fly through the gap created before the majority of attacks could close on him.
Firing off a short burst of Dodonpa Rays, his attack punctured a small hole in the coverage of the incoming attacks, prematurely detonating a small section of the wall of energy. Immediately, Lungshaohan flew through the gap and the remaining attacks exploded behind him.
Now however, he was stuck in with the enemy formation and so attempted to maneuver so that the majority of enemy attacks would get in each others way or hit another enemy. He fired off Dodonpas where he could and used his martial arts when needed.
A Ki blast was dodged as it passed through the space he had been in previously and took the left arm off another of the alien soldiers that had been flanking him. He elbowed an alien in the side of the head, snapping it's neck before spinning around and firing a Dodon Barrage at the squad of aliens that had followed him in to the attack, scything them down with pinpoint accuracy, before turning into a kick that snapped the spine of another alien.
On and on this went until the Alien Horde began to thin and the pressure was off him for a few precious moments, which he took to regain his breath and check on the progress of the other warriors. He caught the telltale blue sheen of a Kamehameha Wave, letting him know that the New Turtle School was still fighting, and he heard a gutteral roar from far to his right that signified that the Yammu was getting into his fight. An Orange beam of energy near the center allowed him a moment to see that the Namekian was still ready for action. Then the moment passed and he was stuck in amongst the soldiers again.
A series of Elbow Strikes, Knees, kicks, and punches in rapid succession allowed him to fell another squad of enemy soldiers in close combat and he turned around and deflected a ki ball aimed at his back right into the path of another alien, detonating the hapless invader before a Dodonpa put the other alien out of his misery. A Strong Kick sent another alien hurtling towards the Ground, impacting with enough force to snap multiple ribs.
Finally it looked like the remaining Alien Soldiers were too afraid to attack before he heard a creaky voice shout, "Enough!"
Floating down from the Alien Ship was a warrior in a slightly more elegant uniform, with a black and white cylindrical cap on his green head. "I am Rittun, one of the Twin Generals of this army. You have fought well, but your power will take you no further."
Lungshaohan could sense this Rittun's Power was immense, easily topping his max of 13,750,000. Yet he could not allow the alien his way. He had to fight him, if only because the others were currently occupied.
"I am Lungshaohan of the New Crane School. I will be your opponent." Said Lungshaohan Stoically.
The Alien laughed, a throaty, chuckling sound before saying, "I see you are eager to meet your death, come then!"
Lungshaohan deactivated his seals and bolstered his Kaioken up to his current max of x5. This only elicited a raise of an eyebrow from the alien general.
The pair of warriors took stances as the wind howled before their battle. Then the fight began. Lungshaohan rushed in, throwing elbows, knees, kicks, punches, and all manner of attacks from all angles, attempting to do as much damage as he could to the alien General in the crucial first few moments of the fight, while Rikkun would not be taking him seriously. A Saiyan might have started with a little power and worked his way up, but Lungshaohan could not afford such luxuries against a clearly superior foe.
His gambit worked for a time, combos broke Rikkun's Guard and elbow and kneww strikes battered the alien General who was content to play with his opponent. Unfortunately this could not last, as Rikkun let out a massive ki blast that pushed Lungshaohan Back and followed it up with a savage kick that sent the Triclops warrior hurtling.
Lungshaohan righted himself in time to see Rikkun wipe a smear of blood from his split lip and growl before charging in. As the battle began in Earnest, Lungshaohan found himself at a disadvantage. For every attack he slipped through Rikkun's Guard he was hit with two, and his dodges and deflections were getting closer and closer to missing as the Alien General ramped up his power in intensity. Finally, just as he sensed Rikkun's Power reached it's max, Lungshaohan missed a block and was sent hurtling to the ground by a powerful kick. Just as he was crawling out of his impact crater he saw a bright beam of red energy heading towards him. There was no time to dodge and the Beam was too powerful to deflect. Lungshaohan was forced to either block or fire off a beam of his own and enter a beam struggle with a man with easily four times his max power level. Blocking would end this fight, as Lungshaohan would most likely receive a severe wound, and he was already battered. A Beam Struggle was his only shot and that shot was slim.
Placing all four of his hands together, he shouted, "No! I will not allow you to have your way!" As he charged his strongest attack and filtered it through the lens of four arms. "KIKOHO!" He shouted as he fired off the Four Witches Kikoho.
The Yellow beam struggled with the Red one but was being steadily pushed back. Lungshaohan began to sweat as he was clearly losing the battle. Rikkun was laughing as his power overwhelmed Lungshaohan's
"Prepare yourself for the afterlife, Human! You fought well but it is time for you to meet your ancestors!" Shouted Rikkun over the Roar of the Clashing beams.
"If I am to die, THEN I'M TAKING YOU WITH ME!" Roared Lungshaohan back as he poured his life force into the Struggle, enhancing his kokoho fourfold at the cost of his health. He didn't care, if he lost this battle, his life was forfeit anyway. The Extra power bolstered an attack that already hit for twice his normal power a further four times, and as the floodgates opened, Lungshaohan's Kikoho began to rapidly gain ground until finally it engulfed Rikkun in a tide of Yellow Energy, ravaging the Alien General with sheer, desperate, power and defeating him.
Unfortunately, Lungshaohan also took an inordinate amount of damage. If the others managed to win their fights, he would likely be out of action for some time until Korin could grow more senzu beans to heal his wounds. As he lost consciousness, the last thing he saw and heard was a roar and a flash of golden light, as Yammu achieved Super Saiyan in his fight with the other Alien General. . .
Turning to the other four warriors, comprised of the Saiyan Swordsman Yammu, two members of the New Turtle School named Nero and Torune, and the Namekian Warrior Mukose, Lungshaohan said,
"Right, so by my count, everyone needs to take 400 soldiers each. I'll take the left." Before powering up to Kaio-ken x2 and heading off to confront the leftmost division of invaders. A moment's concentration allowed him to make use of the four witches technique, sprouting an extra pair of arms from his shoulders.
"Right, Dodon Barrage!" He shouted, firing off successive Dodonpa from each of his four arms. The Dodonpa technique was a marvel of Ki Conservation and efficiency and one of the New and Old Crane School's Signature techniques. For a minimum effort it allowed a consistently powerful beam attack capable of doing a good deal of damage.
Yellow beams of energy sliced through the air, spearing soldier after soldier and putting a dent in the mass of aliens on the leftmost flank. Lungshaohan didn't stay in one place for long either, because giving these alien troops the chance to gang up on him in a melee would be bad. Instead he flitted from place to place, constantly firing off Dodonpa Rays with his four arms, attempting to keep out of range and fritter away at the edge of the enemy formation.
The Enemy soldiers, predictably did not take this well and after the initial shock wore off, a barrage of energy balls answered Lungshaohan's Dodon Barrage. It was a wide blast area, but Lungshaohan knew he only needed to deflect or block a small portion of the mass of energy balls and fly through the gap created before the majority of attacks could close on him.
Firing off a short burst of Dodonpa Rays, his attack punctured a small hole in the coverage of the incoming attacks, prematurely detonating a small section of the wall of energy. Immediately, Lungshaohan flew through the gap and the remaining attacks exploded behind him.
Now however, he was stuck in with the enemy formation and so attempted to maneuver so that the majority of enemy attacks would get in each others way or hit another enemy. He fired off Dodonpas where he could and used his martial arts when needed.
A Ki blast was dodged as it passed through the space he had been in previously and took the left arm off another of the alien soldiers that had been flanking him. He elbowed an alien in the side of the head, snapping it's neck before spinning around and firing a Dodon Barrage at the squad of aliens that had followed him in to the attack, scything them down with pinpoint accuracy, before turning into a kick that snapped the spine of another alien.
On and on this went until the Alien Horde began to thin and the pressure was off him for a few precious moments, which he took to regain his breath and check on the progress of the other warriors. He caught the telltale blue sheen of a Kamehameha Wave, letting him know that the New Turtle School was still fighting, and he heard a gutteral roar from far to his right that signified that the Yammu was getting into his fight. An Orange beam of energy near the center allowed him a moment to see that the Namekian was still ready for action. Then the moment passed and he was stuck in amongst the soldiers again.
A series of Elbow Strikes, Knees, kicks, and punches in rapid succession allowed him to fell another squad of enemy soldiers in close combat and he turned around and deflected a ki ball aimed at his back right into the path of another alien, detonating the hapless invader before a Dodonpa put the other alien out of his misery. A Strong Kick sent another alien hurtling towards the Ground, impacting with enough force to snap multiple ribs.
Finally it looked like the remaining Alien Soldiers were too afraid to attack before he heard a creaky voice shout, "Enough!"
Floating down from the Alien Ship was a warrior in a slightly more elegant uniform, with a black and white cylindrical cap on his green head. "I am Rittun, one of the Twin Generals of this army. You have fought well, but your power will take you no further."
Lungshaohan could sense this Rittun's Power was immense, easily topping his max of 13,750,000. Yet he could not allow the alien his way. He had to fight him, if only because the others were currently occupied.
"I am Lungshaohan of the New Crane School. I will be your opponent." Said Lungshaohan Stoically.
The Alien laughed, a throaty, chuckling sound before saying, "I see you are eager to meet your death, come then!"
Lungshaohan deactivated his seals and bolstered his Kaioken up to his current max of x5. This only elicited a raise of an eyebrow from the alien general.
The pair of warriors took stances as the wind howled before their battle. Then the fight began. Lungshaohan rushed in, throwing elbows, knees, kicks, punches, and all manner of attacks from all angles, attempting to do as much damage as he could to the alien General in the crucial first few moments of the fight, while Rikkun would not be taking him seriously. A Saiyan might have started with a little power and worked his way up, but Lungshaohan could not afford such luxuries against a clearly superior foe.
His gambit worked for a time, combos broke Rikkun's Guard and elbow and kneww strikes battered the alien General who was content to play with his opponent. Unfortunately this could not last, as Rikkun let out a massive ki blast that pushed Lungshaohan Back and followed it up with a savage kick that sent the Triclops warrior hurtling.
Lungshaohan righted himself in time to see Rikkun wipe a smear of blood from his split lip and growl before charging in. As the battle began in Earnest, Lungshaohan found himself at a disadvantage. For every attack he slipped through Rikkun's Guard he was hit with two, and his dodges and deflections were getting closer and closer to missing as the Alien General ramped up his power in intensity. Finally, just as he sensed Rikkun's Power reached it's max, Lungshaohan missed a block and was sent hurtling to the ground by a powerful kick. Just as he was crawling out of his impact crater he saw a bright beam of red energy heading towards him. There was no time to dodge and the Beam was too powerful to deflect. Lungshaohan was forced to either block or fire off a beam of his own and enter a beam struggle with a man with easily four times his max power level. Blocking would end this fight, as Lungshaohan would most likely receive a severe wound, and he was already battered. A Beam Struggle was his only shot and that shot was slim.
Placing all four of his hands together, he shouted, "No! I will not allow you to have your way!" As he charged his strongest attack and filtered it through the lens of four arms. "KIKOHO!" He shouted as he fired off the Four Witches Kikoho.
The Yellow beam struggled with the Red one but was being steadily pushed back. Lungshaohan began to sweat as he was clearly losing the battle. Rikkun was laughing as his power overwhelmed Lungshaohan's
"Prepare yourself for the afterlife, Human! You fought well but it is time for you to meet your ancestors!" Shouted Rikkun over the Roar of the Clashing beams.
"If I am to die, THEN I'M TAKING YOU WITH ME!" Roared Lungshaohan back as he poured his life force into the Struggle, enhancing his kokoho fourfold at the cost of his health. He didn't care, if he lost this battle, his life was forfeit anyway. The Extra power bolstered an attack that already hit for twice his normal power a further four times, and as the floodgates opened, Lungshaohan's Kikoho began to rapidly gain ground until finally it engulfed Rikkun in a tide of Yellow Energy, ravaging the Alien General with sheer, desperate, power and defeating him.
Unfortunately, Lungshaohan also took an inordinate amount of damage. If the others managed to win their fights, he would likely be out of action for some time until Korin could grow more senzu beans to heal his wounds. As he lost consciousness, the last thing he saw and heard was a roar and a flash of golden light, as Yammu achieved Super Saiyan in his fight with the other Alien General. . .
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what little there is
hoo boy
@Sucal will love you
current impression: 6/10
has potential, but doesn't 'sell' the character
I suggest asking for help on how to improve
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what little there is
hoo boy
@Sucal will love you
current impression: 6/10
has potential, but doesn't 'sell' the character
I suggest asking for help on how to improve
Ok, how do I improve? I wasn't sure exactly what to put since the OP was rather barebones on character creation guidelines. . .
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A bit more proper grammer for one(glares at @Sucal)
a bit of personality
perhaps a little snippet on the exact events of how your character got recruited so I can judge how well you write
KnightofTempest
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Ah, cool. Sorry about the constant capitalization, it tends to happen with me in posts that go longer than two or three sentences. I blame the internet. . .
KnightofTempest
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And edited with a bit about personality and how he was scouted by the time patrol.
Hint: He got involved in events he didn't in the original timeline. . .twice and the time patrol decided it was arrest him or recruit him time.
Are we supposed to suggest a power level or is that something you give us? Cuz I'm seeing crazy shit like power levels in the hundred millions. . .
Hint: He got involved in events he didn't in the original timeline. . .twice and the time patrol decided it was arrest him or recruit him time.
Are we supposed to suggest a power level or is that something you give us? Cuz I'm seeing crazy shit like power levels in the hundred millions. . .
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Sucal
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For one thing you misspelled Grammar.
Also I'm injured and posting from tablet half the time. Sue me
(though really if we are doing auditions for a potential non saiyan 7th, we should consider doing something a bit more open)
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Got another person who I know can write PMing me on this
and possibly Zer0 if he wants to play [REDACTED]
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Sablonus
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I can't help it! I want to join almost every RP that comes out!
EVERY! SINGLE! ONE OF THEM!
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Your character is mostly hear to learn, in any event. Once Chronoa has enough information, she has some one-on-one in mind for you.
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get rejected once or twice then come back
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That's just it! I keep fucking getting in!get rejected once or twice then come back
AAAAAAGGGGHHHHHH!
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well then, you must obviously be submitting to trash-tier games which let in everyone and anyone
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well then, you must obviously be submitting to trash-tier games which let in everyone and anyone
EDIT: Wait, no, i've been rejected a few times.
KnightofTempest
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So am I good or should I keep working on it?
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keep working
i'm looking for good writers here who can handle the shit I pump out and turn it into something decent
so perhaps a short story thing, max 1000 words?