Crimson Aria (Arpeggio of Blue Steel)

fallenblades643 said:
These DD's are fucked so hard.
Nah, it's the first battle in the scene. I'm guessing it will be more even.

Heck, I bet at least one sub is with the group, readying to strike while the DDs keep the Cruiser from looking elsewhere. Why do a comprehensive sonar sweep when you already know who the enemies are?
 
fallenblades643 said:
These DD's are fucked so hard.
DaLintyGuy said:
Nah, it's the first battle in the scene. I'm guessing it will be more even.

Heck, I bet at least one sub is with the group, readying to strike while the DDs keep the Cruiser from looking elsewhere. Why do a comprehensive sonar sweep when you already know who the enemies are?
Something has to have hacked them or taken them over...

well unless the fleet really IS trying to kill Task Force Crimson...
 
Oh good, glad to see you're not dead.

It will be interesting to see how useful Richardson will or will not be here.
 
Inverness said:
Oh good, glad to see you're not dead.

It will be interesting to see how useful Richardson will or will not be here.
As its been mentioned, Richardson is in Intel - his job its to collect and analyze information, locate patterns and in general sift out useful information from the noise and present, to paraphrase the Vice-President of the Daily Days, 'The precursor to a conclusion.'

And fog fleet doesn't usually use tactics...right?
 
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Well, these forums seem to hate me - took me nearly TWO HOURS to get the forums to load so I could post this - gah.

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The sound of shifting metal cut through the Atlantic air, weapons systems coming to the ready as Richardson felt the vessel underneath him rumble. The deck began to tilt ominously as the Augusta banked into a sharp turn, bringing its own broadside to bear against the approaching destroyers. Richardson turned from his observations to turn to Augusta. "Weren't we just talking about how you guys don't do broadsides?"

The dark-haired Mental Model grinned. "If the enemy wishes to play a little game, who am I to deny them?" Her turrets turned to bear on the enemy ships. What had been eight-inch guns on the original split and unfolded, energy arcing across them as a soft glow emanated from within. Across the deck, swaths of previously exposed vertical launch cells opened as their armaments came to the ready.

For a brief moment, the only sound in that desolate stretch of ocean was the sound of the sea crashing against the side of the nanomaterial hull.

At once, all three Destroyers lashed out, beams of light and plasma arcing out of their cannons as missiles screamed through the air. Explosions blossomed across the Augusta's Klein Field, the backwash from the explosions ripping across the deck and driving Richardson back from the rails, falling to a knee as he brought an arm up to shield his face from the light and excess heat of the barrage. If this was what was leaking through the shield...

He looked up from his spot on deck to see Augusta standing unfazed as she watched the bombardment with what looked like only mild interest. The attack quickly petered out, leaving the Augusta wreathed in a cloud of smoke but otherwise unscathed. Silence once again descended on the Atlantic until Augusta's grin turned predatory. "My turn."

A sharp whining scream was the only warning as Augusta's forward turret lashed out with a beam of pulsating energy that crashed into the first Destroyer. Its Klein Field barely slowed the attack down as the beam cored the ship's forward turret which promptly detonated in a massive explosion as whatever energy storage systems within failed catastrophically.

The three destroyers swiftly responded, redoubling their efforts as fire poured onto Augusta's defenses. Their effectiveness did not seem to show any noticeable increase. Missiles screamed through the air toward the Augusta only to be shot down by the Heavy Cruiser's laser-based anti-missile systems. Her own follow-up attacks were finding less success than before as her cannon barrages lit up the enemies' own Klein Fields like the Fourth of July, the energy barriers flaring, but managing to hold. "Looks like they've reinforced their defenses," Richardson noted idly, most of his thought processes in awe of the levels of firepower being thrown around and shrugged off.

"Diverting power from propulsion, no doubt," Augusta commented as she shot down another barrage of enemy missiles with a wave of her hand, her armaments lashing out with her every gesture in a symphony of destruction. "They should have known better."

"They should have...known..." A thought broke Richardson out of his awe-induced state as he turned to Augusta. "The normal assumption in the Fog Fleet is that three Destroyers can't face down a Heavy Cruiser, right?"

Augusta turned to face him, giving the still-incoming fire little thought as her robes fluttered in the backwash. "generally, yes."

"So," Richardson watched the Mental Model carefully. "Why are they attacking you?" The expressions that played across her face were telling. First surprise, then suspicion, then dismissal.

"They made a mistake," Augusta suggested. "It's as simple as that."

"On something this basic?" Richardson replied. "You're all warships. Screwing something like that up would be like me forgetting how to touch my nose." Richardson's eyes narrowed as he looked out toward the destroyers. "They're up to something..." But what? He racked his brain for ideas, but this wasn't his field. The only thing that came to mind was...

His eyes went wide as it hit him. "Do a sweep!"

Augusta arched an eyebrow. "A what?"

"A sweep," Richardson repeated. "A scan. Whatever you want to call it - just make sure that they are the only things around here!"

Augusta considered him for a moment before giving a nod, closing her eyes as if in contemplation. Her lips moved in silent murmurs like she was in a trance before, after a minute, they shot open as she spun around, one hand stretched out toward the horizon. "Gotcha!" Instantly, dozens of ASROCs rippled forth from Augusta's stern and into the waters behind her.

The sea exploded as columns of water soared into the air that were quickly joined by two vessels breaching the surface. "Missed them." Any of the amusement Augusta had been displaying earlier had vanished. To her stern was two more of the strange modified Fletcher Destroyers, water still sluicing off their hulls. Having lost the element of surprise, the pair decided to join their three brothers in the attack. Besieged from two sides, the heavy Cruiser was no longer taking things lackadaisically. A few strands of hair fell out of place as she split her attention on keeping her barrier up on both sides. It flickered ominously for a moment, then steadied even under the barrage. "Is that all you can offer!?" She replied with another volley of missiles, some of them managing to pierce through the defenses, leaving two more Destroyers short another weapon system. The Klein Fields on the others were beginning to flicker as well, which Richardson was guessing wasn't a good sign for them. Flickering shields were never a good thing.

The Destroyers, between the five of them, had the firepower needed to down the Heavy Cruiser. They didn't however, have the staying power. With their sneak attack exposed, Richardson doubted that they could survive to sink their target. He wasn't sure they could even disengage at this point, but they weren't even trying as far as he could tell. If anything, they were pressing harder.

He turned to Augusta. "Why are they still attacking?"

Augusta fired off another volley from her Cannons. "Perhaps they have a death wish?"

Richardson rolled his eyes. "They're losing - its obvious. They should be trying to escape, but they aren't."

"They can't," Augusta replied as she fired off another volley. "Our top speeds are effectively the same. The cannot disengage any more than we can."

"You mean we're pinned?" Richardson asked, surprised. He'd figured the Cruiser had hung around out of some form of boredom.

"More or less," Augusta confirmed. "Why?"

Richardson wished the pieces would just fall into place, but they didn't. All he knew was that they were pinned and the Destroyers seemed interested on keeping this way. He didn't know what they were planning but he knew one way to ruin it. "Sink them!"

Augusta gave him an amused look. "Two orders in as many hours, aren't you a cheeky one."

"They're planning something!" Richardson practically yelled back. "And I really don't want to know what. But they can't pull it off if they're all dead."

Augusta studied him for a moment, then turned away with a huff. "So be it." A volley of missiles and cannon fire poured onto the nearest destroyer, which suddenly pulled back. Its two compatriots closed ranks in front of it, seeming to provide it cover. "Well, that's different."

"Different is bad," Richardson mused as he returned to the binoculars from earlier. The fire had slackened off, the destroyers seeming to divert their attention to defense as the damage from the battle had taken its toll. Smoke poured out from where turrets had once stood as nanomaterial flowed to try and repair at least some of the damage. Several of the destroyers weren't even firing any more and that wasn't even the strangest thing. "Do destroyers have a siege mode?"

"Excuse me?" Augusta asked, still focusing on trying to sink the destroyers.

"Because those Destroyers looks like they're-" He was cut off as an unearthly groan suddenly cut through the air as Augusta's head whipped around.

"Impossible!" she whispered as the one of the defending destroyers pulled away from it's partners. "those graviton readings..." The sight they were now presented with was as incredible as it was outrageous. Two of the destroyers had telescoped and morphed, most of their mass now split into two large pylons that stretched what would have been aft to stern and then some. Lens-like constructs hung in the air as bolts of energy that was seemingly endemic to Fog technology arced across it. Richardson had no idea what he was looking at, but Augusta seemed to.

"...A Graviton Cannon..."
 
Partially called it. Well, maybe fully, but I'm going to lowball my success. Really, nothing exciting, but still an interesting fight. Also, alien metallurgy aside, when weapon banks fail, they usually do so catastrophically. And damage nearby components. Just how bad are these DDs hurting by now?
 
That cannon's not going to have enough power to damage unless accompanied by alpha strikes of corrosives from the other two destroyers.

I think it would be best if the two "hidden" destroyers would be taking up guard, and the first three destroyers merged together. Then you might have something like what Iona had in the early episode/chapters battle with Takao, only on par with Takao's firepower. A one-shot, barely operational, weapon. Destroyers don't have the ability to manifest mental models, and going by what we see of Nagara's tactics, unless a battleship is right nearby micromanaging, this whole thing isn't really feasible for their operational norms, even customized we're looking at basic "motherboard" limits.
 
That, and it should have been obvious which one would deploy the cannon, as it would take up something like 30-60% of the can's mass.
 
DaLintyGuy said:
Partially called it. Well, maybe fully, but I'm going to lowball my success. Really, nothing exciting, but still an interesting fight. Also, alien metallurgy aside, when weapon banks fail, they usually do so catastrophically. And damage nearby components. Just how bad are these DDs hurting by now?
ah, well I I have trouble writing fight scene - not sure what to do when its just two sides thowing shots at each other and I didn't want it to turn into one 'I am not left-handed' reveal after another.

They're hurting pretty badly at this point, but I figured that wouldn't be apparent in the middle of the fight. as for the commentary on the cannon - Iona could fit the Grav Cannon and still looked mostly like a ship when she deployed it. The Destroyer's are half the mass of the 401, and in this case pretty much the entirety of the ship in this case has turned into the cannon.

as for their backing...well, you'll have to wait.
 
Dragontrapper said:
ah, well I I have trouble writing fight scene - not sure what to do when its just two sides thowing shots at each other and I didn't want it to turn into one 'I am not left-handed' reveal after another.

They're hurting pretty badly at this point, but I figured that wouldn't be apparent in the middle of the fight. as for the commentary on the cannon - Iona could fit the Grav Cannon and still looked mostly like a ship when she deployed it. The Destroyer's are half the mass of the 401, and in this case pretty much the entirety of the ship in this case has turned into the cannon.

as for their backing...well, you'll have to wait.
Iona has significantly greater power generation and processing ability than the cans.

1) Twice the size.

2) A submarine (this grants a processor and power bonus to Fog ships).

3) A crew to help handle some duties (puts less burden on the processing core)


As for the backer?

I'll say...

It's some battleship, doing an experiment in weapons and tactics. It's not very successful. Also, she's not REALLY trying to sink Augusta, just choosing her because she's "off" from normal. After the "exercise" she'll be somewhat miffed.
 
Inverness said:
Gendou Chihaya, you mean. :p
I've always thought of him as a cross between Gendo and Char.

He's got the Char scar. And the little sister/daughter figure that he wants to protect (who just happens to be a veritable doomsday weapon in this case).

The beard and plotting are somewhat Gendo-derivative, of course.
 
synx said:
It's also hinted that there is something special about Iona that makes her different from other Mental Models.
A) She is very old for a race that matures and evolves rapidly.

B) 400 and 402 have direct links with Yamato, who has an ear out for them at all times-and we've seen hints that this might be true with Iona as well.
 
00Zy99 said:
On this site there are three.

One is (mostly) dead.

The other is somewhat insensate and kind of Gary Stu-ish.

Then there's this one. Which is pretty damn good (over-powered destroyers aside).
I remember one that kinda threw people since some stuff on making the US more gloomy ala all the issues with Japan in the manga came off as slightly racists due focusing in an oddly specific fashion about African Americans and social economic classes. Of course I could be miss remembering.

as for the the destroyers I think the point is to show something is up since someone modded the DD's to merge to make the cannon - Dragon just thought two DD's (plus remote help from a Mental Model most likely) provided enough power to match Iona. If he used three we likely could not be having so many issues with the DD's and their toy.
 
nemo1986 said:
Hey what was Augusta's mental model based on?
Diana Rubens from Spice and Wolf. Also, while I have the forum cooperating, tweaked the last snip so its two destroyers instead of the one - that puts the total mass in line with the 401.
 
Snip 4
Time for another snippet. I still suck at writing combat though.

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It may have been that, as mere destroyers, they lacked the power. It may have been, forewarned, Augusta had gained a extra moment to prepare for it. It may have simply been sheer luck.

Whatever it was, it had been just enough.

The air screamed as the massive weapon discharged, an instant after Augusta seemed to throw everything she had into her shield. Concentrated Gravitons meet the warped space-time of her Klein Field as waves of energy peeled off of both. Even through the energy barrier Richardson could feel the effects, sudden shifts between weightlessness and bone-crushing G's.

The beam petered out, leaving the Augusta smoking but intact. Her Klein Field flickered and died, the effort of stopping the attack seeming to have feedback into her other systems as smoke and sparks billowed from various sections of her hull. The strain seemed to have effected Augusta as well, the Mental Model's chest heaving like she had just ran a marathon, her head hung in exhaustion. Finally, she looked up at the still combined vessels, a dangerous glint in her eyes. "My turn."

Richardson had never seen what was usually referred to as an 'Alpha Strike', and the use of such a tactic by a Fog Fleet vessel was considered an extreme level of overkill. An attack from a single Fog weapon was usually enough to eliminate a human vessel, and there was little reason why a Fog Vessel would ever need to attack something that would require such firepower, such as a fellow Fog ship.

The analyst's had obviously never considered 'woman scorned' as a reason.

What could only be described as a ludicrous amount of ordnance poured from the Heavy Cruiser as what seemed like every single launch cell she had emptied itself, with every surviving energy turret joining in for good measure. An amount of kinetic, chemical, and electromagnetic energy likely measurable in the terajoules impacted the fused destroyers, blowing their shield out like a cheap candle before enveloping them in the white light of pseudo-nuclear annihilation. Three seconds later, the glow subsided and the offending ships had ceased to exist, along with the destroyer that had been stationed next to them.

"Vaporized?" Richardson stammered. "A Fog ship can... vaporize?"

"Oh, yeah," Augusta replied with a grin, "Absolutely." Of course, vaporizing a fog ship came with a price, it seemed. None of the launch cells were reloading it seemed, and the turrets were idling as steam curled off of the barrels. For the moment, Augusta had no weapon systems, and after taking that canon strike, no defenses. And two Destroyers still mostly functional to the aft. Augusta let out a resigned sigh as she watched the two ships close in. "Guess I overdid it."

Richardson began to wonder if anybody would ever figure out the bizarre circumstances of his death when he heard the last thing he had been expecting. "Is that...rock music?" As it grew louder, sure enough he began to make out the distinctive rifts of an electric guitar. It sounded as if somebody was playing heavy metal over an intercom system at extremely high volume.

Augusta let out a sigh. "She's misappropriating her psyops system again." The two destroyers were taking the new development with slightly less aplomb. Turrets began tracking around as one was hit by a salvo of missiles from somewhere in the opposite direction of the music. Turrets began tracking back around in the other direction, their route, previous bearing straight toward Augusta, now fracturing as the ships split up. Their attention split in two directions, neither was looking in the right direction as another ship broke the surface in between the two of them, mere yards away from either ship. Richardson scrambled to one of the binoculars to try and get a better look at whatever had just arrived. It looked like another Cruiser, with somebody lounging on the roof of the bridge. She was leaning back against sensor antenna, cowboy boots tapping along to the beat of the still playing music, arms folded behind her head as an impromptu pillow and...was she wearing a cowboy hat?

"Girls, girls," The figure stood up as she spoke, and it took Richardson a moment to realize that she had hijacked Augusta's intercom system. A sleeveless black top and brown vest left her arms completely exposed as well as her midriff, and the very short shorts left large swaths of skin her legs in view. The boots, he realized, might actually cover the most skin. "Do try to keep up."

Turrets sluiced around, splitting between the two targets, before unleashing bolts of plasma into the pair of Destroyers. The two ships let out metallic groans as both reeled, the Cruiser reversing rapidly as the two enemy ships finally started to return fire, their shots crashing into the sea or each other as they tried to keep up with their target. The cruiser came to a stop a couple of ship length's ahead of them, the destroyers slowing to a stop shortly afterward. Richardson watched on, dumbstruck. "What are they..."

"They're dead," the voice from before commented over the intercom again. "They just don't know it." As if on cue, a pair of explosions erupted from the Destroyers, both of which finally keeled over and, at long last, began to sink.

Richardson looked up from the binoculars and tried to compose a thought. "That," he finally managed after a couple of minutes. "Was the single most ridiculous thing I've seen. And that's saying something."

"Thanks!" The voice replied over the intercom. It was very chipper, and if it did in fact belong to their unknown savior, seemed to be enjoying herself quite a bit. The cruiser began to draw up next to them until the Mental model could leap down onto their deck. A mess of deep red hair poured down her back, brown eyes that seemed to glow and a cocky grin reinforcing his earlier thought that she was enjoying herself. She let out a whistle as she got a look at Augusta. "Damn, you look like crap."

"Thank you for showing up, Wichita." Augusta replied as she took a seat on the deck, leaning against one of the bulkheads. "But I can assure you I had it well enough in hand."

Wichita snorted. "Yeah, you totally had those Destroyers on the ropes. Hell of a light show all the way."

Richardson's brain finally caught up with current events. "Wait, you're Wichita? as in the USS Wichita?"

Wichita doffed her hat as she gave a dramatic bow. "The one and only...Well, sort of. The original got sold for scrap, so..." She blinked as she suddenly turned to look at Richardson properly. "Who are you?"

"Richardson, The Heavy Cruiser Wichita of Fog Fleet Task Force Crimson." Augusta introduced the Cruiser. "Wichita, Intelligence Specialist Third Class James Richardson of the United States Navy. Yes, He's human. I caught him just off their Defense barrier."

"Caught him?" Wichita echoed. "What, you fish now?"

"Well, he was sitting in the middle of the sea in a rowboat, he was somewhat hard to miss." Augusta chuckled before it turned into a hiss of pain. Richardson hadn't expected that.

"Yeah, well, you can tell me all about it after we get you patched up." Wichita knelled down to examine help her up. "Come on, lets get you inside somewhere. Do you're engines still work?"

Augusta nodded. "Still working at..thirty percent. Power core is still intact."

"Thank goodness." Wichita added before turning to Richardson. "Hey, human. Get over here and give me a hand." Off-guard, Richardson found himself obeying before he could give the matter any thought, draping one of Augusta's arms over his shoulder before he could thing to object.

"This is completely unnecessary," Augusta argued, even as Richardson could feel her letting the two of them take most of her weight.

"Shut it, Miss know-it-all." Wichita snapped back, before turning to Richardson. "And what are you doing here, anyway?"

"Like she said," Richardson nodded to Augusta as they headed inside the ship. "She basically kidnapped me. Though you don't seem that suspicious of me." Neither had Augusta, he recalled. Strange.

"Well, if Augusta hadn't bothered to kill you, you're probably at least mostly harmless." Wichita shrugged as they arrived in the same reading room he and Augusta had been sitting in earlier that day. "If she trust's you, then I can trust you." They settled her into one of the overstuffed chairs, Wichita turning to Richardson. "So, what's your story?"

"I thought we were waiting until she was repaired," Richardson said, going over the earlier conversation in his head.

"I said she could tell me after she got patched up," Wichita corrected, "You, on the other hand, seem to be perfectly fine."

Richardson sighed. "It's kind of a long story..."
 
Maes said:
Good snip!

Though... "kilojoules" is actually really damn tiny. 1kJ ~= what energy a 100W bulb consumes in 10 seconds. ;)
He forgot how tiny a joule was.

We need like Mega or Tera joules
 
Or terawatts if we're getting into "postulated ratings for Star Trek shipborne phaser power" territory.
 
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