America's media corporations have a very high instance of recycling content too.

Its an odd cycle, where you won't have your book/movie/whatever selected unless you can prove it will be popular. How do you prove it'll be popular? By referencing previously popular things.

So, your stuff won't see the light of day unless its either a copy of current stuff, or you risk going digital and doing everything yourself (and getting lost in the sea of everyone else with the same idea).
 
Chapter 21: The Blood Moon Spectral God
Transmigrated back into the body of her child self, can the mighty Celestial Bing Meilu survive in a Xianxia world all the while staving off the advances of arrogant young masters and wannabe protagonists alike?

Why is life so hard for the Icy Beauty?


Any corrections or criticisms are welcome, I hope you enjoy Chapter 21: The Blood Moon Spectral God

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After having finished her talk with Xia Xuefeng and Zhang, Bing Meilu lay down on her bed. Her small body sank into the soft mattress. For a few minutes, she simply lay there, staring up at the ceiling.

Her eyes traced the wooden planks that made up the roof of her rented room. They were dark brown, with just a hint of green, she noted.

Slowly, a sinking feeling began to encompass the girl, her mind slowing. She lifted a hand to her mouth, letting out a soft yawn. She was well and truly exhausted.

Weeks of running through the woods of the Bird Talon Continent, the constant stress of her journey through the Flesh Mountains, the Qi she had expended, the mental stress of the revelation of the Moon Crying Swan Palace's destruction - All of that added up to ensure Bing Meilu was left feeling more tired than she had ever felt in her new life.

As a cultivator of Qi Condensation, she could sustain herself without sleep and other basics necessities like food or water for much longer than the average person but, ultimately, she was still just a mortal. A mortal who needed to sleep.

Bing Meilu blinked, rolling over and yawning again. She closed her eyes, inhaling deeply. Slowly, the ebony-haired girl began to drift off to sleep.

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Bing Meilu ran through a meadow of tall green, her skin brushing against the soft plants that grew from the earth. Drops of morning dew fell off of the disturbed flowers, splashing against her dress.

Dozens of fluffy white rabbits jumped alongside the girl in lockstep, their fur shimmering as if made from metal thread. One rabbit jumped in front of her, slowly growing in size until it was face to face with her.

The rabbit's tiny red eyes seemed to glimmer in the soft morning sunlight.

"Can I have a carrot," the rabbit asked.

"Oh, alright," Bing Meilu responded, reaching into the basket of fish by her left side.

She began to dig through the cold silver corpses of the fish, grasping onto the firm shaft of a carrot.

She pulled the carrot out of the basket, handing it to the rabbit, who began to chew on it.

Then, suddenly, the rabbit shoulder's began to shake, a deep chuckle erupting from its mouth.

"You fool! After all these years, I've finally found you!"

The rabbit's hands flew up to its head, pulling it off. It was just a mask! And below that mask was the face of the old man whom Bing Meilu had stolen her fish from twenty-five years ago!

"After years of hunting you down, I've finally caught up!" the man laughed. "Now, give me back my fish, you rascal!"

"I'd rather die!" Bing Meilu shouted. "Take this!"

She jumped forward, palm splayed. Lighting burst from her skin, forming a blade of electricity that stabbed towards the old man in the rabbit suit.

Yet as her thunder blade made contact with the man's chest, it did not kill him.

Instead of penetrating the exposed flesh between his ribs and stabbing his heart, the man's body simply fell apart, dissolving into hundreds of snakes.

The snakes wrapped around Bing Meilu's body, slowly constricting her.

'You can't hurt me,' the snakes laughed. 'I'm made of snakes!'

'Oh no! He right!' Bing Meilu thought in despair. 'If he's made of snakes, how will I defeat him?!'

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Late at night, Bing Meilu lay asleep, gently dreaming. Her chest rose and fell with each breath. Her long ebony hair messily spread out across the mattress of her bed, fluttering slightly as she moved in sleep.

It had been hours since the girl had fallen asleep, and she was deep in her dreams.

As she dreamt, the girl's body suddenly froze. Every muscle, tendon-bone and ligament locked into place as a terrifying feeling slammed into her body.

In the night sky, a massive blood-red moon had appeared. Ghostly howls filled the air, crying and shrieking in agony. The screams were almost oddly musical, like a hellish choir of the damned had risen up from the underworld to haunt the living.

An overwhelming aura filled the air, mighty beyond comparison. Like a god had descended from Heaven, all living beings in the city froze from the terrifying feeling, completely unable to move.

Chests froze mid breath, eyes froze mid-blink, mouths froze mid-bite.

Bing Meilu awoke from sleep, unable to breathe, unable to move, unable to open her eyes to see. All she could feel was that horrifying pressure crushing down on every part of her. It was like being submerged in the depths of the oceans, hundreds of fathoms of seawater weighing down on you.

Still delirious from sleep, Bing Meilu struggled, trying to move. Yet it was no use. She couldn't even twitch a toe. Slowly, the fog of slumber cleared away and Bing Meilu realized what was going on.

That horrifying, soul-crushing pressure weighing down on her was unmistakably familiar. It was the sensation one felt when they were exposed to the Aura of a cultivator much stronger than themselves.

Then, just as suddenly as before, Bing Meilu felt something. A shiver through her spine as if someone were watching her. Then, a surge of bizarre foreign Qi gushed into her body, forcefully flooding through her meridians.

It was the Spiritual Sense of a cultivator, inspecting every nook and cranny of her body.

Her heart shook at the feeling of violation as the foreign Qi explored her meridians and groped around her Dantian.

Bing Meilu's Dantian rumbled as she gathered her Qi and slammed it against the foreign Spiritual Sense invading her meridians. Her assault battered against the invading Qi like a snowball against a city wall. Utterly useless. After a moment, she gave up.

All Bing Meilu could do was sit still and wait as her body was thoroughly inspected by the Qi.

'I'm going to fucking kill whoever is responsible for this insult!' Bing Meilu swore mentally.

A cultivator's meridians system was their most secretive and intimate place. It contained the very essence of their cultivation and being. Generally, the only time a cultivator would ever allow it to be inspected would be a medical examination. To forcefully inspect someone's meridians, as was happening now, was the height of disrespect.

Of course, to cultivators, disrespect did not matter. Only strength did. If you were strong enough to get away with it, you could do whatever you wanted.

'Once I've regained my cultivation, you're going to be the first on my list to kill!" Bing Meilu thought. '...Although, now that I think of it, I do have to kill that scum bitch from the Golden Dragon Celestial Firmament first... and that heiress of the Vajra clan... and that bastard duke from the Free Cities Deathless Domain Alliance... Actually, I have a lot of people I need to kill once I get my cultivation back.'

As she lay frozen, Bing Meilu heard the balcony door of her room open, loud footsteps ringing through the air. A draft of warm wind followed, flowing over her still form.

At the same time, the Spiritual Sense invading her meridians retracted.

Then, she heard a voice speak. It was not the voice of a human. It reverberated and echoed with the cadence of a thousand men.

"So... it actually is the Crystal Providence's legacy... I really can't believe this! Even after so long, fragments of her inheritance are still around yet all of mine are long gone, even though we both died at the same time! Just another thing for that bitch to gloat about, I can already imagine what she'll say next time we convene!"

Bing Meilu could almost feel the words moving through the air, slamming into her chest with physical force. White-hot pain shot through her torso.

"I could kill you and ensure her legacy is just as destroyed as mine..." the voice continued, now sounding thoughtful. After a pause, it sighed before continuing. "But... she's still the Second King's favourite. If she complains to him that I interfered with her successor, he wouldn't be happy at all."

Bing Meilu's mind jolted as she began to process the voice's words. The Crystal Providence was a mighty goddess from the ancient past who had lorded over the Dao of Yin. She was also the creator of the Crystal Providence Absolute Tome that Bing Meilu cultivated. It was a superb cultivation manual the girl had received from the dying last member of a sect that practiced it back when she was still a bright-eyed youth in Immortal Realm.

Yet somehow, the source of the voice seemed to actually know the Crystal Providence personally. Wouldn't that mean they were also some kind of god?

Without warning, the force-crushing Bing Meilu disappeared and her head shot up as she began to spew blood, heaving and choking as her injured lungs expelled the thick fluid. Her eyes shot open and she caught sight of the source of the voice.

A few feet from her stood a tall man. His skin was as pale as alabaster, smooth and without flaw. His hair was long and ebony, spilling over his shoulders like a sea of ink. In the place of his pupils glowed two red-moon that shone eerily. Black robes wrapped around his thin body, decorated by images of red moons that dripped with blood. He was supernaturally handsome - flawless in a way that was uncanny and inhuman.

"Your little subordinate tells me you gave her the instructions to my Anthem of the Crucified," the man said. "Now, where exactly did you find that? I don't recall ever teaching it to anyone!"

Bing Meilu froze. The Anthem of the Crucified? It was the cultivation method that had been used by her close friend Ruan Hua, who had looted it from the corpse of the... Blood Moon Spectral God, an ancient god who had perished epochs ago. A being that could certainly have met the Crystal Providence in the past.

'But... The Blood Moon Spectral God is long dead!' Bing Meilu thought furiously. 'And even if there were still some lingering fragment of his spirit alive, why would it take notice to me giving its Anthem to Xia Xuefeng but not to Ruan Hua's use of it? The only difference between now and then is... time...'

Time in the millions and millions of years, in fact. Bing Meilu had forgotten to account for the fact that the present moment was the ancient past compared to her old life.

Ruan Hua had cultivated the Anthem of the Crucified without issue - but millions of years before she had done so, Xia Xuefeng could not, because the Blood Moon Spectral God was still around in some form, and would notice.

As Bing Meilu was deep in her thoughts, her body automatically answered, compelled by the power of the Blood Moon Spectral God.

"I received it from my junior sister, Ruan Hua," Bing Meilu answered robotically.

"...And where did she get it?" the man continued, sounding almost exasperated.

"She found a manual for it on the corpse of the Blood Moon Spectral God," Bing Meilu said.

The man opened his mouth to speak, before pausing. Then, his eyes widened, fury plastering across his face.

"She what?!" He screamed.

The physical force of his words once again slammed into Bing Meilu, sending bolts of burning pain through her entire body.

"You... You mortals really have balls!" he spat, face dark with rage. "To dare deface my grave..."
 
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Imagine the faces of the people she knew in her former life should they see her dream. :D
 
'Oh no! He right!' Bing Meilu thought in despair. 'If he's made of snake, how will I defeat him?!'
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He's annoyed that someone would dare disturb the grave at all. Putting a cultivation tome that alerts and summons him when used lets him revenge himself on the graverobbers.

Except for the fact that he didn't notice anything because he was dead at the time. He didn't revenge himself on the grave robbers or else she would have known not to give the book out.
 
Chapter 22: The Bluewing Alchemy Academy
Transmigrated back into the body of her child self, can the mighty Celestial Bing Meilu survive in a Xianxia world all the while staving off the advances of arrogant young masters and wannabe protagonists alike?

Why is life so hard for the Icy Beauty?


Any corrections or criticisms are welcome, I hope you enjoy Chapter 22: The Bluewing Alchemy Academy

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With that, the ancient deity's avatar faded, face a twisted rictus of anger, and the world returned to normal. Bing Meilu did not know if whatever leftover scraps of power he had left had simply run out, or if the sheer apoplectic rage her admission had induced in him was enough for him to simply leave in a fury,

Either way, with the terrible pressure gone, Bing Meilu heaved a gasp of relief, face white before she steeled her expression.

She stood shakily, circulating her Qi through her meridians to strengthen her weakened body and strained mind. At the same time, she internally berated herself.

'Bing Meilu... You fool! You failed to pay attention to the differences between your first and second life and earned yourself a God's enmity! You're going to have to deal with this and it's going to be messy!'

Gods were beings that transcended reality and the era, entities whose means and existence those from lower words could not comprehend. As a lower being, having a God coming after you was as if the emperor personally wanted the death of a particular chicken.

Death was not a question of if, but when.

Even if she had been at the peak of the Paragon Realm, Bing Meilu would still hesitate to challenge an actual God. Luckily for her, the Blood Moon Spectral God was long past his glory days, nothing more than a decaying fragment of will, the vestige of a long-dead God who no longer qualified to hold the title. If Bing Meilu played her cards right, she felt she could still triumph. Even so, it was one more trial, one more enemy to be added to a mounting list of problems.

She still didn't know who was behind the destruction of the Moon Crying Swan Palace, nor if the Devil and Demon God who'd ended her first life were aware of her regression and coming after her. She didn't even fully know how many butterflies in time had been caused by her regression.

'There's no use crying over spilt milk, I can only ponder my next move,' Bing Meilu resolved, face emotionless despite the dangerous revelation.

She inhaled, the much denser Qi of Bluewing Prefecture compared to the north of the Bird Talon continent allowing her cultivation to progress quicker, though not nearly as fast as the Yin Qi of the Flesh Mountains.

Bing Meilu was still only in the fourth realm of Qi Condensation. Ultimately, the most important factor in her success was her own cultivation level, and she resolved to increase it as much as she reasonably could.

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Hours later, Bing Meilu's cultivation was interrupted by Xia Xuefeng, who stumbled into her room, face pale. Being weaker than Bing Meilu, she has likely been even more affected by the crushing power of the Spectral God.

"Mistress..." the girl whimpered. "Something happened... There was- a man- he called me a 'filthy mortal'... he did something to me! There's something in my Dantian! He said I would be the 'vessel of his rebirth'!."

Even Xia Xuefeng, a twelve-year-old child, who was, by in large, unaware of how the cultivation world worked, knew that a foreign presence in her Dantian was not good.

"Come here," Bing Meilu ordered sharply.

The distraught girl nodded, nervously walking over to her mistress and taking a seat.

She gasped, as the icy power of Bing Meilu Qi infiltrated her body.

"It's a Sealing Mark," Bing Meilu eventually said.

"Wha-what the fuck does that mean?" Xia Xuefeng squawked in fear.

"Calm down." Bing Meilu ordered. "Your panic serves neither you nor me."

She sat in silence for nearly ten minutes, allowing the horrified mortal child to reach a semblance of calmness, before continuing.

"A Sealing Mark is something akin to a fragment of power or will from a cultivator. It's similar to avatars and incarnations. They can serve all sorts of purposes, but in this case, it's to allow the master to use your body for rebirth, allowing the shattered fragment of death to be reborn as a living being capable of regaining his glory and power."

"What will happen to me?" Xia Xuefeng asked, bravely attempting to hide the terror in her voice.

"There are multiple options, depending on your luck. The best would be the most literal case. Your womb is impregnated with the sealing mark and you literally give birth to his reincarnation. It's not uncommon for higher beings to use lesser mortals this way. It's the origin of such legends as the idea that sages and great conquerors were born of virgin women who became 'miraculously pregnant' upon viewing a falling star or such nonsense."

"That's the best option?"

"The next option is a simple possession of your body and cultivation. The Sealing Mark would slowly siphon away at your cultivation before taking over your body and mind in full."

"Is that the-"

"The worst option is to be used as a sacrifice." Bing Meilu continued calmly "At least if possessed, your body gets to share in the glory of a higher being. This method would turn you into nothing more than a pill waiting to be consumed at the right moment."

At this point, Xia Xuefeng's face was completely pale with fear.

"D-Do you know which option it is?"

"No. It's not possible to know at such an early stage. By the time I'm an immortal I could probably narrow it down."

"Is there anything I can do?" Xia Xuefeng asked, a note of desperation entering her voice.

"Yes. You could shatter your cultivation?"

"...Huh?"

"You're only a suitable vessel for this God's rebirth because of your cultivation method. If you were to shatter your Dantian and return to life as a mortal, you would not have to worry about it."

At this Xia Xuefeng paused. She sat in silence for nearly a full minute, brow furrowed.

"That's not an option."

Bing Meilu merely raised an eyebrow, suppressing her smile. Xia Xuefeng was only twelve but already had impressive willpower.

"If that's the case, there is only one other choice. You'll have to refine the Sealing Mark. In the world of cultivation, there is no perfect method. A Sealing Mark is not the full power of its owner, and with skill, power and a bit of luck, you can refine it, taking away the power left behind by the owner and making it yours. I once had a similar Sealing Mark applied to me by the Empress of the Golden Dragon Celestial Firmament, and that is how I dealt with it. It's highly risky but there's no other choice for you." Bing Meilu explained.

In the end, the two's problems were still solved by cultivating to a higher level. More challenges had been added, but the path remained the same. Power was the ultimate guarantor.

Bing Meilu allowed several hours for Xiaxuefeng to recover, the two cultivating in silence.

Bing Meilu Yin Qi thickened as she stepped into the fifth stage of Qi Condensation.

Her servant, on the other hand, formed her second and third blood cross, stepping into the second stage of Qi Condensation.

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Bing Meilu calmy strode down the streets of Blue Pearl City, flanked by the still injured Zhao and Xia Xuefeng.

In the distance a tall palace stood, glistening blue domes standing proud, like pearls in the sky. This branch of the Bluewing Alchemy Acadamy was from where the city got its name.

They arrived at the outer gates to the palace compound, where a long line stood. Merchants, diplomats, alchemists and more are all awaiting their turn to enter and complete business.

Rather than take a place in line, Bing Meilu led her subordinates directly to the gate, ignoring the strange looks those waiting sent her.

At the gate three disciples of the Bluewing Academy stood, two guarding while one processed those trying to enter.

Bing Meilu silently stood, a few feet away from them. Eventually, one of the guards turned to look at her. After frowning for a moment, he walked over to her.

"Back of the line, Young miss," he said curtly.

"Disciple Bing Meilu of Moon Crying Swan Palace greets her junior brother," she said.

She heard gasps from the people in the line but ignored them.

The guard merely raised an eyebrow.

"The Moon Crying Swan Palace? You're claiming to be a survivor."

"I happened to be stranded away from the sect on a mission during its destruction and survived. "

"Do you have your identity token?"

"I'm afraid it was lost with my spatial ring during a fight," Bing Meilu said.

The guard's face had become suspicious, so Bing Meilu raised her hand.

A complex matrix of icy runes appeared, circling around her arm in the shape of a snowflake.

"... What's that supposed to mean?"

"It's a secret technique of the Moon Crying Swan Palace. Even if you don't recognize it, your superiors will."

"I can bring you in to have your case heard, but who are these two?" the guard said after a moment of contemplation.

"This is my Junior Apprentice Sister, Xia Xuefeng. Naturally, she'll be coming with me. This man is my protector, Zhang, whose brave sacrifice has led to him being injured. I'm sure the Twelve-Headed Avian Sect won't mind me bringing him along?"

The guard shrugged. If Bing Meilu was who she said she was, there was no problem with her bringing along a servant. If she was one of the many frauds who had attempted to sneak in using the catastrophe as cover, then he was sure his superiors would deal with things in a properly final fashion.

He pushed open the gates, blue robes fluttering in the gentle breeze, and led them to an office that stood isolated in the courtyard.

"Captian, I have a girl claiming to be a disciple of the Moon Crying Swan Palace..." the guard relayed Bing Meilu's story.

After a moment, a voice from within the office responded.

"Send them in."

The guard pushed open the door and the three walked inside. The office was humble and lived in, with trophies and personal effects covering the walls and desk.

A tall, slender man sat behind a desk, wearing the blue robes of the Alchemy Academy. Bing Meilu would describe his features as attractive, but more 'pretty' than handsome, like a pampered noble prince with elegant features, smooth skin and the like. Only his strong Yang aura, which revealed him to be at least in Core Formation, revealed he was a male.

Bing Meilu refrained from bowing, causing the man to snort in disdain. Instead, she raised her hand, using the same matrix as she had shown the guard.

At this, the guard captain froze, widening his eyes.

"Is that Hai Yu's Grand Xia Frozen Matrix?"

Hai Yu was the Prime Grand Elder of the Moon Crying Swan Palace, only behind the Palace Master Yueling Shang and Great Ancestor, Yueling He in authority. She also happened to have been Bing Meilu's Master in her first life, and as such the transmigrator naturally knew her secret techniques.

The Guard Captain stood up and bowed, sweat beginning to appear on his brow. As a guard captain of a branch sect from the sixth-ranked branch of the Twelve-Headed Bird Sect, he was far below the direct disciple of a high-level Grand Elder in status. Even with said Grand Elder dead, that didn't mean her name meant nothing.

Now, he couldn't know Bing Meilu was not only not the disciple of a Grand Elder, but not even actually a member of the sect.

"This humble guard's name is Xi Long. I'll immediately bring you to meet the Wing Master of our local branch. I'm sure she'll be delighted to help you sort out your issues, Senior Apprentice Sister."

Despite being only a child in Qi Condensation, he, a Core Formation Veteran who had been alive for centuries, had to address her as if she was his senior.

"'That is acceptable," Bing Meilu said.
 
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Hours later, Bing Meilu's cultivation was interrupted by Xia Xuefeng, who stumbled into her room, face pale. Being weaker than Bing Meilu, she has likely been even more affected by the crushing power of the Spectral God.

"Mistress..." the girl whimpered. "Something happened... There was- a man- he called me a 'filthy mortal'... he did something to me! There's something in my Dantian! He said I would be the 'vessel of his rebirth'!."
:facepalm: Feckin' xianxia worlds, worse than Detroit... Can't go five minutes without someone trying to turn your organs into a resource :mob:
"Is that Hai Yu's Grand Xia Frozen Matrix?"

Hai Yu was the Prime Grand Elder of the Moon Crying Swan Palace, only behind the Palace Master Yueling Shang and Great Ancestor, Yueling He in authority. She also happened to have been Bing Meilu's Master in her first life, and as such the transmigrator naturally knew her secret techniques.
Meilu... You couldn't have presented a slightly less exclusive secret technique? You know, pass yourself off as a ordinary member, not the direct disciple of a specific well known bigshot?
 
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Glad to see this back.

Meilu... You couldn't have presented a slightly less exclusive secret technique? You know, pass yourself off as a ordinary member, not the direct disciple of a specific well known bigshot?
1) In her defense, she can impersonate being the disciple of that specific well known bigshot a lot better than she can anyone other specific role in the Palace, because she was that disciple in a parallel universe/past.

2) Less in her defense, if she weren't an arrogant idiot, I'm pretty sure the entire plot would never have happened, since as I recall the triggering incident for this was her as an absurdly high-level cultivator doing something reckless and dumb and accidentally blowing up the universe or something. So of course she's making arrogant and idiotic decisions.
 
Less in her defense, if she weren't an arrogant idiot, I'm pretty sure the entire plot would never have happened, since as I recall the triggering incident for this was her as an absurdly high-level cultivator doing something reckless and dumb and accidentally blowing up the universe or something. So of course she's making arrogant and idiotic decisions.

Quite. It's sort of her defining characteristic.
 
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