An Offer She Couldn't Refuse [Exalted]

Like, I assumed a heroic firmin/noresore/etc would be a 'glorious beast' like Lassie, not that they'd be able to violate core elements like 'literally not sapient'. That is interesting, though.
Lassie? You mean the dog that consistently communicated with humans to alert them of problems?
Beyond that, though, one of the most common abilities of heroic animal (i.e. normally non-sapient) characters is sapience, so... -shrug-
 
Hi, just found this story through the advertisement of @ManusDomine in the Exalted thread. Haven't seen many pure Exalted fics, and especially not many of this quality. Mostly just playthroughts (the Kerisgame being one of them, obviously).

I wait with great interest to see where you are going to take this story, which I'm betting to go at some point along the lines "How the fuck did I end up as the king of kings for my people?" after the obligatory visit to Malfeas, based on the amount of people that have already started following her. I'm also intrigued in the setting you are painting before us, and I appreaciate the great attention to detail you are taking with the little (as well as big) things, like making the local weapons being in-theme with the place.

I also want to see how you are going to handle the Infernal powers themselves, as it has been made clear that you are drawing quite heavily from the Kerisgame, at least for quite many of its metaphysical mechanics. I especially wonder what kind of person will our MC end up after she starts sipping more on the COSMIC POWER KOOL-AID, OH YEAH! considering that she seems to have started her career mostly as an actual (if sneaky-tactical) kool-aid man.
 
Hi, just found this story through the advertisement of @ManusDomine in the Exalted thread. Haven't seen many pure Exalted fics, and especially not many of this quality. Mostly just playthroughts (the Kerisgame being one of them, obviously).

I wait with great interest to see where you are going to take this story, which I'm betting to go at some point along the lines "How the fuck did I end up as the king of kings for my people?" after the obligatory visit to Malfeas, based on the amount of people that have already started following her. I'm also intrigued in the setting you are painting before us, and I appreaciate the great attention to detail you are taking with the little (as well as big) things, like making the local weapons being in-theme with the place.

I've always been pretty fond of Celtic and pre-Roman aesthetics, and it makes for a pretty interesting place.

I also want to see how you are going to handle the Infernal powers themselves, as it has been made clear that you are drawing quite heavily from the Kerisgame, at least for quite many of its metaphysical mechanics. I especially wonder what kind of person will our MC end up after she starts sipping more on the COSMIC POWER KOOL-AID, OH YEAH! considering that she seems to have started her career mostly as an actual (if sneaky-tactical) kool-aid man.

Aindriu is really enjoying getting to play around with superpowers and do ludicrous action-oriented things, at this point. Malfeas suits her pretty well.
 
Part 14: Nightmare Fugue Vigilance
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The muddyness of trying to sleep gave way to actual sleep soon enough. Unfortunately.

The last few days had given her plenty of fodder for terrible nights, and her mind had decided to make full use.

Most of it she didn't remember. Scattered impressions of blood, viscera, yelling, screaming, singing, and dead silence. Rage, and failure.

So much failure.

She just felt rough and without much rest in her sleep.

The clearer parts started in a city. The same towering brass and basalt city from her last dream. It was full of the dead, again. They were human, though, and their cheeks were streaked with tears.

The hollow-voiced song was playing in the distance, as Aindriu looked out over the littered, undamaged city, rubbing tears from her own eyes.

Then one of the bodies got up, and she recognized it instantly. Long brown hair, bearded face, bruised and mangled body, right knee bent sideways and charred. Diarmait, the man who'd killed Ealu, and who she'd tried to beat to a slow and painful death before getting too sick of it to continue with anything other than a quick and painful death.

"I know, right? That hurt. A lot."

The bodies around her had changed at some point. They weren't the dead of Fallen Lapis. They were all people she had killed today.

There were a lot of them. Not a hundred, but... multiple dozens. Her arms remembered delivering each wound on their destroyed bodies.

Aindriu was a veteran soldier. Her hands were nowhere near clean of blood. Killing didn't really trouble her. It had at times. She'd gotten over it. But she had never before killed so easily, or in such numbers.

Aindriu swallowed. "... you're bandits. You've been preying on suffering to enrich yourselves. I've done so much less to all of you put together than any one of you has to anyone around you."

"You didn't have to do this to us. You decided to."

"You decided to wreak havoc across your own people! There were over a hundred prisoners in that fort today alone!"

"Yep. And I'm comfortable with that. I enjoyed it, so I did it."

Aindriu clapped a hand to her mouth to keep herself from gagging at the memory of his body breaking under her.

Diarmait grinned. "You did what you decided to do. You hurt me, you hurt everyone you could get your hands on."

"But why didn't you help me?" It was Aindriu's own voice. The cutesy voice she used when pretending to be speaking Ealu's part of a conversation with her cat. The blue-gray cat slinked out of a brass alley, body almost bisected, looking up at Aindriu with wide, betrayed eyes.

Aindriu swallowed. "I... I couldn't."

"You didn't," Diarmait interrupted. "Could and couldn't are cute words to excuse yourself for not doing things. They let you get away with saying all the pretty words about what you're supposed to want without having to do anything about them. You didn't stop me, you just used the chance to hurt me. If you wanted to do it, you'd have done it."

"I literally couldn't get up!" Aindriu yelled. "I begged you and you wouldn't stop! I struggled and I couldn't get up! I tried!"

"And I died," Ealu whispered, mournfully.

"Hey, now that's bullshit," a rough voice interrupted. Cearr walked up behind her, towering over her, a tall, powerfully built young man, with broad, firm features, and long strawberry-blond hair. He clapped a hand on her shoulder, and gripped it tightly. Painfully so. "To succeed in what you want to do, you've got to be capable. Aindriu's too pathetic to have done it even if she wanted it. All she can do is bury her face in books and hope things happen her way."

"Leave me alone, Cearr," she snapped, turning her head away.

"Hah, sure. I've already done that." He grabbed her head and forcibly turned her face to the arrow-riddled bodies of the Talinin formation at Krellen Ford. She could see Fionola Sweetwater in the torn ranks, gasping for breath around the arrows in her lungs.

Aindriu swallowed. "... That wasn't what I-"

He shoved her between her shoulder blades, and she stumbled forward, landing on hands and knees among the moaning, wounded, and dying. "I'll leave you to it." His cruel laughter faded as he left.

This was done, it was over, it had already happened, but Aindriu found herself doing the same thing she'd done the first time. Crawling through the bodies, bandaging what she could, restarting hearts, giving a quick end to those who couldn't be saved and would just die slowly and painfully. She couldn't just leave them screaming.

The torn body of Ealu worked alongside her as she had the first time, digging under the bodies, finding the living among the dead, pointing them out for Aindriu, comforting them in their last moments.

There weren't many she could save. Most had died. More than one because of her decisions - withholding care from someone who would take more to save so she could use the precious seconds to save two or three.

She swam in the blood and the mud, struggling to pull a bare pinch's worth of people out, and was swept away by its current.

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The muddyness of trying to sleep gave way to actual sleep soon enough. Unfortunately.
She swam in the blood and the mud, struggling to pull a bare pinch's worth of people out, and was swept away by its current.

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Express option on trauma rails today, in the overnight car, apparently.

Definitely looking forward to her chat with Fionola after waking up.
 
She feels bad she had to kill slavers, I'm sure she'd feel bad for all the people she couldn't save in a battle.

Though I wouldn't be surprised if she'd met the Prince personally, too.

They're childhood... associates? He bullied her a fair bit as a kid, she kicked him in the crown jewels when she was seven. (The King laughed so much at that point) The Celebrant Lance sept is somewhat notable in Talinin, and has been serving the king of the Three-Lamina as advisors and druids for a few generations now, so she and Cearr did grow up together.

To be clear, this isn't necessarily reflective of what he was like. This dream is mostly Aindriu's own mind browbeating her between her existing anxieties, existing traumas, and guilt over what she did and failed to do. Given Cearr appeared in the dream to serve the 'tongue lashing' role, one can imagine her mental image of him isn't very positive, but that may or may not be fair - he was a brat at ten, and he made an impression, and clearly didn't do much to fix that impression, but he didn't keep up the same behaviour and frankly Aindriu avoided him and didn't look very closely.

(In his defence, he was legitimately shocked and horrified when one of his crowd ended up breaking her arm as a kid - not intentional, just a shove and an unfortunate landing. His friends weren't 100% in tune with the exact details of where he wanted to take things and sometimes misread the signals and overestimated how far it was supposed to go. Like, Aindriu was five when that happened, Cearr was eight and his crowd floated around that age. Basic level of toddler dickishness and poor communication and impulse control)
 
ANd of course there are the shared notes of being powerless, and fleeing for the two of them as he ran away from a second circle demon, which is the only sensible thing to do as a Mortal.
 
Part 15: In Her Wake
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Leonce ran a finger along the crystalline writing, feeling it crack under his pressure. He wasn't attuned enough with Pasiap to tell if the material itself was something unusual, but it certainly didn't belong on the wooden walls of this slave wholesaler's barracks building.

He shook his head, turning to Serjeant Cuivringo, the most together of the men who'd been on-site when it all happened. They'd linked up fairly quickly, Leonce taking the rest of the Grand Order north the moment they saw the flickering bonfire of anima light towering over Cat Lake and meeting Cuivringo's men fleeing south from their mission there.

"And you say it was a Forsaken?"

The man looked a little unsure. "I think so? It was the sunburst on the forehead, but it was green, and I thought it was supposed to be gold?" He shrugged. "I don't really know whether or not that matters."

"I suppose it's close enough to call it a safe assumption. We had a green Forsaken two years ago, tearing up north from Krellen Ford. No idea if it's the same one." Leonce hoped it was, better than having two Anathema in the region.

Cuivringo remained silent - he was a subordinate, not a peer, and would only speak to a Prince if asked to.

"What did its host look like?"

"Female, around eighteen. Short, stacked, curvy. White skin, white hair down to the knees. Pretty, features look like she's a half, both Pretannic and Lyric descent."

Leonce nodded. "Thank you, Serjeant." Hm. Not the same host as the one two years ago - that one had been big, broad, and male. Perhaps the Anathema had moved to a new host since then, or perhaps there were now two Forsaken in Pretannia.

Leonce looked out over the wreckage of the wholesaler, shaking his head. Dragons, it'd done so much damage so quickly. Buildings torn open, bodies strewn across the grass, ashes and blood-red crystal everywhere. His men were taking care of as many of the bodies as they could while he investigated, but if that thing went for a city they could be seeing reruns of the Bull's war two years ago.

That was not acceptable.

"Serjeant," he turned to Cuivringo. "Split your fletches. The wounded may make their way to the nearest town. Send an escort as appropriate. You and whoever else you choose to bring are messengers." Leonce moved up to Ichigo, his clawrider, and patted the riding bird's toothy snout as he looked in his saddlebags, pulling out a signet ring and tossing it into the Serjeant's shocked hands. "You may have my seal - you have my full authority in this matter, and may commission whatever aid, rest, or resources you require, barge through any impediment, as if you were me. Take my message, as well as your own account, to the Queen, as fast as you can, no matter what."

Cuivringo pressed the fist holding the ring to his heart. "Yes, Your Highness!" The seal was quite literally Leonce's legal identity. It was not something often handed out to commoners, and the serjeant knew well the significance of being entrusted with it.

Leonce needed to write a letter to send with the man. Aunt Sahula would probably appreciate knowing exactly why she'd be having to soothe the Lochmor over him bringing his troops onto their lands. Also he might end up needing a much larger army, his Grand Order of the Bronze Wire was one of the smaller orders at thirty fletches and he wasn't sure exactly how well it was going to stack up against an Anathema. He should have numeric and equipment superiourity, but he only really had legends and the wreckage of the last war to go by to determine exactly how puissant an Anathema was.

He had to at least try and pin it down, though. He was a Prince, it fell upon him and his family to deal with the dangers - both temporal and spiritual - that an Anathema posed to everyone in Pretannia. If they lost contact with it or it got too deep into lands he couldn't tread on so freely, there was no telling what kind of havoc it could wreak.

And it would be even worse if the Realm decided to handle the matter again.

Leonce pulled the necessary implements from his saddlebags and wrote up the letter in quick, businesslike characters, whispering the words to himself as he did so - he wasn't the kind of gifted druid who could read and write without reference to the actual sound of the words. "Respected Aunt. Anathema attack in Lochmor. Believe it to be Forsaken. Cat Lake wholesaler completely destroyed. Grand Order of the Bronze Wire in pursuit to the northeast. Will seek to pin down or sanitize the Forsaken. This is a Wyld Hunt. Request reinforcement. Please apologize to the King of Lochmor. Loyally, Prince Leonce."

There weren't exactly practiced contingencies for handling Anathema among the Rokan-jin. The closest anyone alive had come to a Wyld Hunt was when the Bull of the North came to them with its mad ambition. There remained scattered half-memories from the Shogunate of how a Wyld Hunt was to be gone about, practiced on rare occassion throughout the Second Age, but no one had any experience in executing them. There was no established protocol for a Rokan-jin prince to engage in a Wyld Hunt, but this was important enough Aunt Sahula would probably understand why he was breaking so many of the established protocols. They had been made without consideration of Anathema - they hadn't had to consider Anathema for centuries.

He folded the letter up, sealed it with wax, and handed it to Serjeant Cuivringo. "Make certain this letter reaches the Queen. Answer any questions she may have."

Cuivringo took the letter and bowed.

Wait. "Ah! Before you leave." Leonce stepped back to the crystallized wall, and tapped a finger against the wood. A block of the wooden wall obediently pushed free of the rest, falling into his hands, and he handed the crystal-coated wood to Cuivringo. "Take this as well. Try to get it to Princess Akaene." His half-sister was one of the comparatively few Rokan-jin children of Pasiap (most of them owed more to Sextes Jylis), and might be able to make a bit more out of the anathematic crystal. Hopefully the matter was moot, but better to plan more than needed.

Cuivringo took it, bowing again, and waited.

Leonce chuckled. "No, that actually is it this time. Go, and good riding."

"Yes, Your Highness." The Serjeant bowed, and returned to his fletches.

"So what's the plan?" Dame Hibiki asked from behind him, making him jolt halfway out of his armour.

He turned to face her. "How do you do that?" She was wearing the same heavy cataphract's armour he was, she had no right to be that quiet in it.

"With care, Your Highness. So, the plan?" Her hair was up in a bun, wire-inlaid bronze mask twisted to the side of her head, helmet still on. Eager for action, she was, he'd taken his mask and helmet completely off to let his skin breathe.

He shook his head, looking out over the wreckage again. "We pursue the Anathema. Contain it, kill it if the opportunity arises." He nodded towards the northeast. "It moved northeast on our wagon. With the majority of the scattered survivors - most likely its thralls by now."

"What about the others? Reminder, Your Highness, the Kingdom's interest in the Cat Lake wholesaler is to provide us with workers, we need people to work the mines and we don't have enough to spare from the fields."

Leonce shook his head once more. "No, we don't have the men to spare to pursue. We can always buy more slaves, an Anathema is a genuine crisis."

"Got it, I'll get everyone mounted. We'd better be out of here quickly, I would not bet against the King of Lochmor having seen that anima flare, and his ambaxtoi are going to have some pretty pointed questions for us if they catch us squatting on the wreckage."

Leonce chuckled, waving a hand. "Half the time they're going to be complimenting us for what the Anathema did, no one but Pretannic kings get to own slaves, so no one but kings likes the slave trade. I'll be along."

She bowed, turned the mask back to cover her face in the fearsome scowling image painted on it, and strode off, barking orders at the Bronze Wire's constituent fletches.

Leonce took a deep breath, and made a quick prayer to the Dragons that they would look kindly on this endeavour.

And then he rose, pulling on his dragon-mask and putting the helmet on over it. Blossoms trailed in his wake as he let himself breathe deeper of the essence of Creation, mounting Ichigo, and preparing to move out.

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Hm. A Wyld Hunt so early in her career? Even an inexperienced one like this is going to be dangerous...

Poor girl. They'll probably kill her followers and she'll blame herself. But what can she do? I think Hell-Walker Technique doesn't let you bring passengers without an upgrade, and it takes some dedicated mutation charms to let mortals survive in Malfeas.
 
One of the most aggravating parts of the Bronze Faction's legacy; turning what should have been allied heroes against each other.
 
He shook his head, looking out over the wreckage again. "We pursue the Anathema. Contain it, kill it if the opportunity arises." He nodded towards the northeast. "It moved northeast on our wagon. With the majority of the scattered survivors - most likely its thralls by now."
Leonce shook his head once more. "No, we don't have the men to spare to pursue. We can always buy more slaves, an Anathema is a genuine crisis."
The ability of the human mind to not twist itself apart in its hypocrisy is really astounding, honestly. Clearly, slavery is only bad when Anathema do it.

Leonce chuckled, waving a hand. "Half the time they're going to be complimenting us for what the Anathema did, no one but Pretannic kings get to own slaves, so no one but kings likes the slave trade. I'll be along."
No one but kings like it, but they still follow it.
 
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Perhaps the Anathema had moved to a new host since then, or perhaps there were now two Forsaken in Pretannia.
This is the least wrong thing the Immaculate faith teaches about Celestials. I should not be as amused as I am about how wrong he is.
A Wyld Hunt so early in her career?
Mostly a matter of bad luck. The further out into the Threshold you go, the less likely a Celestial will get a hunt called on them.
 
Maybe this is a meaningless nitpick, but what version of infernals is being used here? It sounded like pretty standard 2E stuff so far, but the castemark didnt seem to fit that (no caste of standard 2E infernals has a sunburst).
 
Maybe this is a meaningless nitpick, but what version of infernals is being used here? It sounded like pretty standard 2E stuff so far, but the castemark didnt seem to fit that (no caste of standard 2E infernals has a sunburst).
They're using 2E with a lot of homebrew, most of it being Revlid's and Earthscorpion's. The Green Sun Bursts instead of the canon GSP caste marks is an ES invention.
 
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