An Everdistant Horizon (Worm/Horizon Series)

Hannah Washington/Butcher XV

For once i would like to see someone ANYONE inherent the mantle but not go crazy, maybe quirky but still keep themselves in control, the butcher is just voices in your head and honestly that's not the worst mindscrew in WORM, that can be fought and even controlled they can scream and whine all they want but YOUR the one control of your body, now I'm not saying it would be easy but I have a friend we been buds all the back to middle school and he has schizophrenia and hears people that are not there but he has his shit together and if he can get into a yelling match at 3am with himself and NOT go on a murder rampage I have faith that Hanna can too the pain thing she used while not great is a method of grounding and along as she grounds herself she can pull through this I know it!
 
Read "Inheritance" on AO3 Taylor gets her original power, and then gets Butcher because Quarrel was allergic to bee stings
I remember reading that, didn't know it was still updating. Thx for the reference.

The best part was that Taylor's multi-tasking basically slotted each personality into a separate channel she could 'mute' if necessary, or bring to the front for a 1 on 1 conversation while pushing the others back. Great way to keep from going absolutely stark raving nuts from multiple real voices hounding you 24/7.

Can't wait to see how Hanna deals with 14 other voices in her head.
 
Amy came out of the cliff hanger OK and even made it to school...then used a land line to thwart her mother's plan to keep her in toe. Analog for the win...which Hexa seems to follow as well with their paper maps. Hanna as The Butcher also makes the impending political explosion in DC seem tame as well. (Could a Medical Focus help her you think?)
The art idea sounds great and the mural would be cool to see. Not sure what to suggest other than having the Amy break down with Taylor saying we'll show them all, but have it drawn in the same style as ARCANE, with the similar sounding promise between Jinks and the man with the damaged eye (Silco). "What could have been" would have gone well with the scene as well.
Colin getting his act together, while dealing with MASSIVE PTSD (I began typing PRT instead of PTSD at first) and his quest to save a version of his friend...you don't make it easy for him. But I look forward to his climb and what new hero name you will pick for him.
As for the next Endbringer attack, wouldn't it be cool if Jack asked Captain Ramius to help them set up the naval defenses to protect the bay.
As always, thank you for letting us read your work and I can't wait to read more of it.
 
The Dream Is Dead (Part I?) (A What If Story?)
This was an idea that just came to me out of the blue last night when I was looking for inspirations on Taylor's looks. I found a Deviantart post of a black-haired girl in a military uniform and my brain kinda went, what would happen in the Faro Plague DID Happen in Bet-verse. A little bit of Terminator, and a little bit of review later, we get this small little apocryphal snippet. I may do additional snippets later, who knows, but it was an idea that just wouldn't go away until I slayed it.

I have also reached out to Mikezzzzz and have given him the greenlight to do the first artwork for Everdistant Horizon. My hope is to have it at the latest sometime next month.

Currently we are at 6300 words on the next chapter. So there's your update.

Otherwise, enjoy this What-If





The Dream is Dead

The first sign that something had gone horribly wrong was when Norilsk went dark in 2023.

We had known that the Russians had reactivated the closed city in order to play catch up with the United States and the revolution wrought by my company, Zero Dawn Technologies. Pouring trillions of rubles into the research center in order to not fall behind, they had chosen one of the most remote facilities in the world in order to keep it hidden from our eyes.

It wasn't until images came from Irkutsk and Omsk six months later that we came to the horrific realization of just how far they had been willing to go in order to try and reach parity with us.

The Russians called it the Iron Plague, but to me it was simply the Faro Plague by another name. The Russians, despite several warnings by myself over the years, had chosen to create a networked intelligence in order to offset the qualitative advantage we had to them, but had not invested the time or safeguards that I had with Sobek.

By the time we were aware of its existence, it was already too late. Irkutsk and Omsk fell in less than twelve hours. It wasn't until the Plague's legions reached Yakutsk, Yekaterinburg, and Ulaanbaatar that nuclear weapons were used, only to fail as they were intercepted before their terminal phases. Not even theater missiles made it through to stem the tide in nuclear fire.

Only then, was the request out for our assistance made. But by then, it was already too late. Zashchitnik, or Guardian, had reached a point where Sobek could no longer stop it outright. It had become networked too far, too well defended, where even the combined might of Sobek and Dragon had been unable to break it.

We had rushed to defend China and Russia, but it was simply a matter of too little, too late. Within three years of hard, desperate fighting, Russia was gone, and Iron had pushed through Central China and had reached the Middle East. We were losing, even as we started fielding newer and better machines and weapons, we just couldn't stem the tide. By the time the Iron Plague reached Berlin, the decision had been made to begin fortifying redoubts in Britain, Japan, Australia, and the Pacific, with the world's governments and militaries uniting under a single banner in the face of possible extinction. Decisions were made to buy as much time as humanly possible, with each inch paid with lives in order to build the defenses in order to stop the spread of the Iron Plague.

By the time the machines reached Calais, the largest migration of humanity in the history of its existence had taken place. Hundreds of millions were saved, but billions were still lost. And it was only through the sacrifice of so many that even they had been saved.

That had been ten years ago.

Today, the human race, which at its height in the Post-Scion World had numbered six-point-two billion people was now less than two. Huddled behind defenses covering less than one-third of the world and militarized to an extent never before seen in its history.

Because we knew that this lull would end sooner or later.
 
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As often is the case, disaster is heralded by people going "These safety measures are costly and pointless! I can just do without and be awesome! Heh, heh, everyone's an idiot except for me!"
 
But what about alternate earths, though? Couldn't the human population evacuate there?
The public face of interdimensional travel is that it's outlawed or something like that (I think). People know about other dimensions because of Haywire but he's dead and the government doesn't feel like blindly opening portals using Tinkertech no-one can repair. And Cauldron probably doesn't care because this is just a single Earth and yeah it sucks that all their work is fucked, but hey, all the conflict is bound to cause a bunch of Triggers. Worst comes to worst they can just grab any useful parahumans and bail.
 
So, a little bit of an expansion. But there is no option to jump to an alternate Earth. Sadly their only known living means of doing that died in the fight with Scion. Furthermore, the option to 'escape' to someplace else is difficult at best, impossible at worst. Suffice to say, even if I didn't make it obvious, but trying to get something like a colony ship into orbit is pretty much a lost cause. The machines have the ability to engage targets at suborbital altitudes, but engaging targets beyond that is not beyond its capability as well.

Suffice to say, its fight or die, and there is no Project Zero Dawn to save anyone because this isn't a 'consume all biomass then shut down once fuel runs out', because the energy sources of the machines is different compared to the Faro Plague thanks to Taylor putting alternative energy sources into the wild sadly.
 
So, a little bit of an expansion. But there is no option to jump to an alternate Earth. Sadly their only known living means of doing that died in the fight with Scion. Furthermore, the option to 'escape' to someplace else is difficult at best, impossible at worst. Suffice to say, even if I didn't make it obvious, but trying to get something like a colony ship into orbit is pretty much a lost cause. The machines have the ability to engage targets at suborbital altitudes, but engaging targets beyond that is not beyond its capability as well.

Suffice to say, its fight or die, and there is no Project Zero Dawn to save anyone because this isn't a 'consume all biomass then shut down once fuel runs out', because the energy sources of the machines is different compared to the Faro Plague thanks to Taylor putting alternative energy sources into the wild sadly.
Being fair, looking at what this Iron Plague is...

It seems to be the Faro Plague 2.0, Militarised. Or in simpler terms, the Faro Plague was created from fundamentally Paramilitary designs optimised to carry out and protect Biofuel Harvesting Operations. Just ones in a world that can be quite violent, if not to the Cyberpunk standard.

This? This came from a Major World Power going all in on industrial, scientific and military robotics to equalise things. Which means the Iron Plague is probably constructing full on automated factory complexes to more efficiently mass produce robots. It's building server hubs and scientific facilities to innovate engineering improvements, though thankfully it's probably not doing scientific experimentation which means if something doesn't come up from the natural methods of iterating upon known knowledge then the Iron Plague is unlikely to discover it (aka it's heavily lacking in Blue Sky research capability, that was probably a later development goal).

And most dangerously of all, it's got the full design complement for an All-Aspects Automated War Doctrine. Admittedly, especially considering it's from the Soviet Design Heritage, one that's light on aerial designs but that's likely made up for via 'deploy enough coverage of enough anti-air and nothing flies' which is particularly shown in how all nuclear warheads are being intercepted no matter what type. Unless nuclear artillery shells are making it through, just not having enough impact by the severe restrictions on warhead yield that comes with that deployment method?

Which actually means that orbit probably is 'safe' to deploy. It's just orbit is also such an absolute warzone between 'humanity' and 'Iron Plague' that the reason you can't manage a colony ship is not that nothing can be deployed to orbit... It's that the things you'd need to deploy beyond orbit to construct a colony ship just can't be hardened enough nor protected enough with a ground-launch design to survive reaching the 'safe' construction zone.

Most likely also side a side element of 'we can't spare the launch capacity from ensuring that the Iron Plague doesn't achieve orbital dominance and especially doesn't sneak it's own constructors through to the moon to start building there to launch the material to build the colony ship'. And this is not helped by the fact parahuman powers are very limited once you leave the atmosphere, before factoring in the maximum range limitation.

So those, which are likely to be one of the more potent 'edges' humanity has even in a Post-Scion world changing how that functions... Well, aren't available.
 
Commission Status and Chapter Update
So figured I'd come out of the woodwork and provide you guys with an update since its been over two weeks since the last chapter. THat and give you guys some awesome news when it comes to the commission.

Anyways, first, the chapter. Well, suffice to say, we are at the point to where we are likely going to split this baby into at least two parts. This is mainly because the chapter is looking to be around 40K words. Frankly, that's a bit too much, so we're looking to make a few digestible cuts so you guys dont starve, and we are allowed some opportunity to maybe create a buffer (ha ha ha ha, right). So, yeah, We're gonna try and button this baby down.

But suffice to say, we are at 18K words at the moment, and still have 6 scenes to do form the outline. So yeah, yikes. Luckily, the first half of the outline is mostly done. And until I get my phone fixed I'm unable to go and work, I guess thats more time to try and push this thing out.

Now, moving on. The Commission. Well, the first rough draft has come back. and let me tell you, its a bit rough, I've already talked to Mikezzz, so there will be changes incoming. But here is the first iterative rough draft for you guys


So, there you guys go. Hope to have some more news for you come around the end of the month.
 
What do you do that you can't find a friend with an old phone they will let you use for a week or two?

Currently unemployed. Company decided to reward my 20 years of undying loyalty with firing me because I was too expensive and had the perfect excuse in a psychotic girl complaining about me. Also, no real IRL friends because work literally consumed almost every facet of my life. Kinda hard to have a life when you are literally on call for the last decade even on your days off. I haven't had an actual week-plus vacation in 14 years outside of medical leave last year which ended with me writing this story.

Basically I'm trying to do some gig work. One of my issue is that companies kinda frown at the idea of someone taking an entire month off in the span of three months. So until I get back from the family cruise (I had nothing to do with it, and I really dont want to be stuck on a freaking cruise liner), I'm pretty much just scraping by.
 
Companies used to reward loyalty. Now it's about profit profit profit. Majority of the workers are contractual. Once the contract expires they can just not renew it. No need to have severance pay. Do they even have that anymore? I'm self employed these few decades, so my knowledge maybe obsolete.
 
Chapter Update and Completed Commision
Well, I had hoped to give you guys an update by the end of the month last month, but alas, things happened and got caught in the slog. But I can give you guys at least some update now. We're on the final scene of the chapter(s), and its looking to be about 35-36K like I was worried. So we will be splitting it into at least two parts spread out over some time. The hope is the time we have will allow us to have more consistent production.

Moving on, Mikezzzzz has finished the commission. He did it in two versions, one with the writing on the wall and without. But overall, it's fantastic, and if you have the time, click his name and go over and give him some love.

With Writing



Without Writing




I'm aiming to try and finish the chapter today and put it up for review.
 
Yeah, sorry about that. When I talked to Mikezzzzz, we discussed how legible it would be at that distance. He said he wasn't as happy with that as the without, but I had wanted to try and make it close to full setting so we continued on it.

Not being legible is fine. But since the size is so small the faded color used is almost transparent.
I suggest a darker shade for the hands and writing. At the moment its barely visible
 
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