An Everdistant Horizon (Worm/Horizon Series)

Im actually kinda reaching the end of easter eggs.
Honestly, about the only type of individual that hasn't shown interest in Taylor yet is that of Red's paticular group of morally dubious at best criminals that are unpowered. And Raymond would invest in Taylor after seeing the benefits her company will bring to humanity as a whole. Of course he'd use an Alias which would also reference another character his actor did via Alan Shore.

Whether or not Raymond actually shows up is up to you.
 
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If we are talking about expy's, I'm surprised no one before me made a link to Erik Prince and Blackwater/Xe/Academi. I can see why the author would bring in techno-thriller namedrops into this story; the question of where and how the American federal government backslid into obscurity by the start of Worm is an intresting one. Melding Worm with the more traditionally military-industrial-megacorp background of Horizon practically obliges the American polity to try and reclaim it's influence and independence from the PRT/Cauldron.

Introducing proxies for real life people is a new, and personally uncomfortable, step. It has its basis: PMC's are a part of the modern MIC, and might even be a permanent part of a regional superpower's toolkit moving forward. Of course you would consider the value of sending female operatives to manage the protection of a young female Thinker with no previous history with the government or armed forces. I just feel that portraying the wife of Erik Prince/Alexander Knight as a hot French MILF with a hypercompetent waif-fu daughter that blitzes us with operator coolshit [/egregious] shades towards IRL political pornography.

Also, why oh why did it have to be Seal Team 6. The spec ops branch with the largest proportion of loudmouthed publicity seekers who kill fellow SF soldiers during bungled sexual assaults to cover up reports of them stealing from the till.
 
But as Colin Wallis…he found that those feelings could not be so effortlessly discarded. Even if the world were to turn against him in this endeavor, it would make no difference in his resolve. He could continue to fight to save her. If necessary forever. If necessary alone.
This is one of the best versions of Armsmaster I've ever read, I think. Well, not Armsmaster anymore. I wonder what his new cape name will be.
 
I've heard talks about the mural scene, or taylor with Dolt,
I'll be honest the mural scene had me crying. I think the mural with Taylor in the foreground with her focus on, maybe in just enough of a profile angle to see tears would be so evocative.

I'm thinking Blade Runner poster style with Taylor (wearing her focus) replacing Ford and Amy replacing Young. Have the light changed from yellow to blue. For the bottom half make children playing with dolt in front of the mural and a devasted Boston in the background surrounding it.
 
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If we are talking about expy's, I'm surprised no one before me made a link to Erik Prince and Blackwater/Xe/Academi. I can see why the author would bring in techno-thriller namedrops into this story; the question of where and how the American federal government backslid into obscurity by the start of Worm is an intresting one. Melding Worm with the more traditionally military-industrial-megacorp background of Horizon practically obliges the American polity to try and reclaim it's influence and independence from the PRT/Cauldron.

Introducing proxies for real life people is a new, and personally uncomfortable, step. It has its basis: PMC's are a part of the modern MIC, and might even be a permanent part of a regional superpower's toolkit moving forward. Of course you would consider the value of sending female operatives to manage the protection of a young female Thinker with no previous history with the government or armed forces. I just feel that portraying the wife of Erik Prince/Alexander Knight as a hot French MILF with a hypercompetent waif-fu daughter that blitzes us with operator coolshit [/egregious] shades towards IRL political pornography.

Also, why oh why did it have to be Seal Team 6. The spec ops branch with the largest proportion of loudmouthed publicity seekers who kill fellow SF soldiers during bungled sexual assaults to cover up reports of them stealing from the till.

Soooo, I was about to go to sleep before I saw this post.

Anyways. Alexander Knight is an ooooold character in my writings. I think I first used an iteration of that name back in 2004/2005. So yeah, he's kind of a personal homage to my own history. Funnily enough, he's used in another story that I co-work with a friend. But, going down the road of it, but the character is basically from a gundam-esque, japanese mecha type series of stories/novels that we have toyed with for a decade and a bloody half hoping that one day we'd ever publish it. I sometimes use that character as my personal homage to my own writing history.

And while yes, there is some blink and you'll see it crap that you can say is, oh thats just Eric Prince and blah. It really isn't actually. In Book/Series 3 of that story with my friend, Alexander Knight is actualy the commander of a military element of an international company called Hexa. While they do some private security and stuff for nations that buy Hexa's military products, they didn't start off that way. Sam, actually joined Hexa because the money was good, and she really didn't know what she wanted to do with life, but with the family being all military and heroes, she kinda just did it (there was a brother, but I'm probably not mentioning him in here...suffice to say, Isaiah ends up being an antihero in Book 3, but you really spend a lot of the time thinking he's the actual main villain), and she actually ends up being pretty good at her job. I'm not sitting here and saying she's a badass, in fact, itll probably come out in later chapters, but for Sam to actualy get to where she is, was not easy or fun.

Amelie, actually started in Book 1, as a French Resistance Fighter who hated the one world government of Earth, and supported it when the Space Colonies decided to invade for independence in Earth-Space War I (hence the gundam reference). She actually met Alexander when she saved his ass when he was a POW. She then spent Book 2 working in the shadows as intelligence and ended up being a big deal in helping end the Second Earth-Space War. But I kinda liked the idea of her still touching on her roots in the story.

But yeah, I'm digressing. I kinda just threw them in, because I could and because I like tipping my hat to them, because if it wasn't for them, I would probably not have become a writer as I am today.

Though, I will be honest with you, I didn't tie in the Rainbow Six/Hexa thing, until like....maybe a week ago? And it just was out of left field when my ADD addled noodle was like, hey Al...Hexa means 6...you're having Jack do Rainbow...Rainbow Six...get it? And I fucking facepalmed because it happened and it was through no real intentional action, it just slid into place. You can ask the discord, cuz I was both amazed and stupified at my own supposed 'brilliance'.

But yeah, there wasn't any attempts to be an expy to Eric Prince and his bullshit. I fuckig didn't even think of that worthless bastards ass when I wrote up Hexa. I was just paying homage to myself, as funny as it was.

And yeah, I've reallly never been a fan of the real world ST6. Between Dicky M and the rest of them, I kinda viewed them as like... I can't even put it words how I feel like them. I just kinda went with, in Worm World, they werent a waste of oxygen and carbon. And actually did their job well enough without gloating about it. I did like the idea of Red Cell though, and actually in the original draft of this chapter, there was talk about actually having a Red Cell already done with Zero Dawn, but then we decided that'd likely cause Taylor to lose her everlovig shit and would destroy whatever trust that could have been built.

I hope one day, if I ever have the opportunity to 'retire', I will actually sit down and write that story in my own hand with my friend.

Anyways, long ass nonsensical response, blame the exhaustion. I'll respond to everyone else later. It's 1130pm over here and I've been up sice 6am after 5 hours of rest. I'm gonna crash
 
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Okay, so the last few days have been busy or uh, well everyone's had those days when sleep combines poorly with 'get your things done and then have free time' I'm sure. But I finally managed to finish the chapter! And I loved it.

I think I had a whole bunch of things I meant to mention about the chapter but I kind of fell asleep halfway through reading it so whoops!

Fortunately I had two quotes covering what I felt were the most 'critical' moments to discuss:
The criminal organization known as The Teeth knowingly and willingly endangered American citizens with their actions. As such, after legal consultation with the Attorney General's office, with my power as Interim Governor of the State of Massachusetts and local military governor, I hereby declare The Teeth as an organization conducting insurrectionist acts against the United States of America. Thereby, effective midnight tonight, all members of The Teeth are to be designated as enemy combatants and I have ordered General Faraday to begin preparations to hunt down this insurrectionist gang with lethal force authorized.
Yeah... This thing here really does seem to be selling the idea that the position that the US Government is going to end up evolving towards in this story is 'The PRT is there for managing the Parahuman Situation, so long as it remains internal crime. But there are limits to what can be considered Internal Crime, so make sure you don't go over them. Otherwise the other Law Enforcement Agencies get involved along with the military. And those have far more relaxed criteria regarding the escalation of force under those situations.'

Which actually could be something I very much see Cauldron ending up backing. Because it's something that pushes hard for 'maximum trigger rate, minimum parahuman death rate' conditions which is what they want. As that means things can be awful for people, but if it's something that is likely to cause massive casualties or is just too bloody overall even if there's only a small group that get hit...

Well, that's when people start discussing about escalating beyond the PRT. Which would cause the 'sane enough' groups to immediately drop their activity level or organise some form of co-operation to make the groups that aren't reducing their levels of terror... get calmed down.

It just, you know, is going to piss off Alexandria a hell of a lot. And probably miff Eidolon as well.
Turns out ignoring emotional turmoil and throwing myself into work resulted in increased productivity. I can see why Dad did it so much.
As for this... Man, this line was just absolutely golden.
 
But yeah, I'm digressing. I kinda just threw them in, because I could and because I like tipping my hat to them, because if it wasn't for them, I would probably not have become a writer as I am today.
Thank you for that interesting background dive. I thought that the Rainbow/Hexa link was pretty inspired even before you mentioned the Hexa/6 pun. Replacing the traditional government agency/team of the Campus or Rainbow with a PMC feels more natural to a Worm-era writing universe that has moved ~20 years past Clancy's active career.

I don't mean to come across as a purity checker unnecessarily, so
a. I am a single reader of a work written for the public enjoyment, and my insights are thus inherently limited in scope.
b. I missed some implications while I was trying to leave a constructive comment.
I'm surprised no one before me beforehand made a link to Erik Prince and Blackwater/Xe/Academi.
Of course you a mission dispatcher would consider the value
...cheers?
 
Thank you for that interesting background dive. I thought that the Rainbow/Hexa link was pretty inspired even before you mentioned the Hexa/6 pun. Replacing the traditional government agency/team of the Campus or Rainbow with a PMC feels more natural to a Worm-era writing universe that has moved ~20 years past Clancy's active career.

I don't mean to come across as a purity checker unnecessarily, so
a. I am a single reader of a work written for the public enjoyment, and my insights are thus inherently limited in scope.
b. I missed some implications while I was trying to leave a constructive comment.

...cheers?

It's no problem, my response was addled by sleep deprivation. I didn't mean to possible come off as abrasive if you took it that way. I actually had a friend who worked in Blackwater/Xe/Academia back in the 00s/10s. We kinda fell apart around '16/17, but some of the stories that he told me were the kinda things that made me rather...uncomfortable to make any direct alliterations to that. I was honestly thinking more of the kinetic situation that stems from like MGS/R world instead a modern day reincarnation so of the old Hessians, where it's more convenient and politically expedient to have PMCs do the dirty work instead of assigning government/military assets to something.

And honestly yeah, I think because of how the government in Worm has kinda been shifted in a way that causes the PRT to have far too much power, while at the cost of other traditional entities within the government, would necessarily require adjustments and actions that you and I would probably find abhorrent or morally questionable.

But in many ways, when I envisioned Hexa, it's one of those, government/not government dirty work orgs that serves more as a deniable operations platform. Considering the issues that stem from the PRT basically amassing so much power that it'd make J. Edgar Hoover just a slight bit jealous in all the toys the PRT/Protectorate has(considering he didn't have access to theater-range ballistic massiles, amongst other things) and the ability to literally throw anyone's constitutional rights into the trash bin without so much as an investigation of question.

I kinda like playing with the effects the PRT/Protectorate has had on the overall direction and focus of the government. And then create a sandbox in which there would naturally be blowback and manuevering by other groups. Just because they lost, doesn't meant they are just going to lay down and take it (even if RCB/Cauldron would very much appreciate it).

So yeah, at the end of the day, this is me just trying to expand a little bit on cause and effect, and then look at possible paths and progressions that may take place as a result. In many ways, this is kinda a part story writing thing, part critical thinking experiment.
 
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Believing, that she can take on Butcher on her own may already be a part of Butcher's influence on Hannah.

She's as compromised as it comes with Master/Trumps.
 
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huh. Rainbow Six is an international organization, while hexa is Primary USA forces.
Does that mean we'll, end up with clear divide or are gonna have to explain why Tchanka is benchpressing our robots on a dare?
 
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A Lone Man On a Mountain I
This started out as an idea from BigBadBen and kinda took off from there. Introducing a side character that will only have a few or so scenes for the foreseeable future. But it felt like the right place to put him.

Special thanks to all of you who decided to throw yourselves on the Patreon. I'm currently in contact with Mikezzzzz on Deviantart for the commission. Some of you in the Worm community should know that name. So let's hope to see something in the foreseeable future.



A Lone Man on a Mountain I

Taking in a deep breath of the cold, mountainous air, he released it slowly, watching as it steamed from him. It was one of the few accompaniments he had in this dreary landscape. His gaze slipped from the rising sun to the valley down below, to the remains of what had been the city of Eagleton, his home.

Now it was nothing more than a graveyard infested by the Machine Army.

An overgrown crumbling ruin of a city, which nature was reclaiming inch by inch. One where danger often hid in plain sight.

Yet, in the nearly twelve years since they had emerged, the Machine Army had learned to leave him alone. The exact reason why they had chosen to, when they had made it a point to kill every other human they encountered in their territory, he didn't know. But he had a feeling that somewhere, someplace, in those ones and zeros, he had earned a grudging respect from them that it was not worth the effort to remove him from their domain.

There was no peace between the machines and himself. There would NEVER be peace between them. But grudging respect? Leaving each other to live and let live? It was tolerable. Over the years he had just become…tired. Going through the motions of life, waiting for the inevitable day when he was finally reunited with his family.

Rubbing a hand through his unkempt beard, he pushed the memories back. That was the trick really. Focus on the now. Live in the moment.

So he kept living, waking up each day with tasks in mind. Complete the tasks. Sleep. Wake again. Enjoy the little moments of nature unspoiled by other people.

Because there was no one else around. Just ghosts. Old memories. Little reminders.

Focus on the tasks.

He shouldered his pack, jostling the weapons on his back. He had a boar to track.


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The sun was high in the sky. The gravel crunched under his boots, and the grass pushed up through the cracks of the road he walked along. Animals were amazingly adaptive. Where they would have once avoided this part of the city, now they crossed through it without fear. The short memories of their lives were blessings in a way.

Rost kept his eyes moving. Taking in the broken display windows, the mannequins with water-stained clothes. Maria would have commented on that.

He bit his lip. Don't go down that road.

Taking another look ahead, he slowed to stop. Intuition was a funny thing. It was the brain's way of saying that it noticed something, but it wasn't certain what it was. Gut instinct was a powerful thing, if you could start respecting it.

His years before returning to Eagleton had trained him to respect it. It saved his life quite a few times.

Alright…break it down. What was he seeing? Rusted cars. Crumpled post box. Broken shop windows. Grass moving in the wind. His grip on his spear tightened. Guns were too complex, the gunpowder ran out years ago. Bows, arrows, spear. Metal tools were fine. Most survival tools lasted.

Collecting a scrap of rubble at his feet, he aimed and let fly. The pebble flew true, clanging against the mailbox. The sound rang out in the silence like a gunshot. He waited. The sound faded. Yet still, he waited.

With a metallic shriek, the mailbox unfolded. Nothing humanoid, just a ramshackle collection of limbs, and hinges. It was completely lacking in symmetry, but somehow able to fake a damaged mailbox. Just not convincingly enough.

It warbled and chittered, a bladed limb jabbing in his direction. He lowered his stance, ready if needed. Live and let live only went so far. There would NEVER be peace.

A fight didn't seem to be in the forecast today. The machine backed away, before turning and taking off in an ungainly scamper.

He relaxed, adjusting the pack on his back. Daylight was fading, it was time to track his prey or he would go hungry this evening. There was no benefit in standing still.


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Sighing, he kept low. Human voices on the wind as the patrol walked by. The added weight of his kill on an improvised sled was not pleasant, but like most discomforts it could be ignored.

The PRT did not send their best to Quarantine Areas. They sent two types; the undisciplined and the zealous. The zealous were those who believed the hype. Believed that they were the thin line keeping madness at bay from escaping. They went about their duties carefully. Equipment cleaned. Helmets on. Procedure followed to the letter.

The rest were undisciplined. The washouts. The troublemakers. The ones who were an incident from being judiciously cashed out, or just couldn't handle their job, but the system couldn't just terminate them. They walked about with scuffed up gear, smoking, joking, and wandering around when they should be keeping a tight patrol pattern.

Capes fell into these categories as well, they just came with a brand of their own troubles in addition. Most of them were angry and itching for combat. They wanted the action, they wanted the fight. He had wondered in the past if this was a condition of the capes, because almost every single one he had encountered assigned to the Quarantine Zone shared these traits.

He did his best to avoid them. Not impossible, just difficult. They changed their patrols often. Twice in the past he had been caught and questioned. The first time he had tried to explain that this place was…home. Even destroyed as it was, he felt at peace here.

The second time, he just kept quiet. The outcome didn't change in either case. They relocated him to the nearest city. He would hike back past their patrols and just kept on living. It hadn't been hard to set up in Eagleton. The PRT didn't expect anyone to break in. Or if someone did, it would usually be Capes who wanted to steal something or use the Machine Army for their own ends. Some attempts were picked up by patrols. The rest made it in and were found by the machines. The Machines generally won those fights.

The men passed by, chatting and letting their weapons swing loose. Sloppy and amateurish. It was clearly evident that they were content in their own superiority.

No matter. Night was falling, and the sky was growing dark with rain clouds. He would have to hurry to make his evening camp. He had dozens spread across the zone. But few could be used to dress and care for his kill. It wouldn't do to waste precious meat.


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Scratching at his jaw, he huddled closer to his fire. April weather in Tennessee was usually temperate, but the cold front had brought rain with it. It wasn't enough to be freezing, but it was enough to carry a chill. Yet, despite the inclement weather, his demons had been silent for a while now. Being in the forest helped keep them quiet.

Not the same quiet as the house. That was the quiet of a tomb, of old memories waiting to jump out at him. It was only here, now, with the fire going, and the day's work done that he would let himself remember. Happy memories, of successes and shared hopes, of mundane moments that were now so precious.

It took effort to not think of the later times. Hearing the news while he was half a world away fighting someone else's battles. Fighting battles that made no difference in protecting his family from falling to bloodshed at home. Where they should have been safe.

The wind picked up, sending sparks spiralling in the air. The trees groaned as they swayed, and the fire crackled and shifted. Leaning back on the log, he looked up to the sky and noted the clouds starting to part, the rain giving way to the still of night.

He stoked the fire, now free of the threat of rain and fed a few more sticks to the hungry flames.

"If you walked any heavier, the patrols might catch you."

"And if you keep growing that beard, they might think you're a bear."

He looked up, watching as a younger man ambled into the light. He had a pack on his back, a sturdy pair of boots and clothes fit for a time in the woods.

"What do you want, Clark?"

"Can't an old friend drop in and say hello? Swap stories about how lovely the forest is at this time of year?"

He snorted, "The last time I saw you I held a gun to your face. If you call that friendly behavior, then I wonder who handles your mental evaluations."

"Sometimes the best of friends have disagreements at gunpoint," was the other man's blase response, coming to a stop beside the fire, motioning to the other log, "May I?"

For a brief moment, he wanted to be petty and tell the other man off. But the one thing that everyone knew was that the man was persistent to a 'T' once he set his mind to it. So instead of telling him to pound sand, he merely motioned to the other log, and Clark took a seat on it.

"What do you want?"

"A lot, but we can start with you putting aside this 'mountain man' aesthetic and come with me to do some good."

He honestly knew it was going to be that, he thought to himself with a sigh.

"Fuck off."

Clark leaned back, uncaring of the bite in his words. "Oh come on, Rost, I came all this way and tracked you down, the least you can do is pretend to be interested. Just a little? Please?"

Persistent, and annoying. Yeah, that was Clark.

"I'll listen, but that doesn't mean I'm going to say yes."

"See, I've got a problem. I was asked to put together a team of killers. The kind of team who will get shit done, keep their mouths shut, and who work well with the strange and the unexpected. And, of course, kill it."

Clark pulled his arms wide, "Not a lot of people can achieve that. Even less when you consider the new blood running things. Which means I need to pull a few dusty relics from storage for the job," he then leaned forward slightly, a damnable smirk on his face, "You're the relic in this case…in the event you missed that."

"Another war to fight in some far-flung corner of the world? Doing the dirty work for people who don't care and will never see the consequences of their actions? I'll repeat myself," Rost frowned, looking over the fire. It would need wood soon, "Fuck off."

"See Rost, that's where you're wrong. We ain't hunting some Russian oligarch too big for his britches this time. No more globetrotting and killing someone cuz our bosses think they looked at America the wrong way. The dirty work is happening right in our backyard. Home soil. And it's Ryan putting this soirée together. You think Ryan doesn't know the score?"

That brought his retort up short. Taking the moment to collect his thoughts, he tossed a few more branches into the fire, setting the embers flying, "Ryan wouldn't go for it. Not here at home. Not worth the mess if things got out of control."

Clark shrugged, "Things have changed. Ryan thinks it's worth it now. Not sure if you saw the news, but the PRT has been making 'shitting the bed' an artform lately. Ryan thinks with the PRT finally getting its well-earned 'Caesar and the senate' treatment, there's a chance we can make a joke of their dog and pony show. Frankly, I think it's about damn time."

For a moment, he felt a surge of rage at the mention of the PRT. It had been them that had failed to protect his family. It had been them that had decided that it wasn't worth doing anything about the Machine Army, instead choosing to wall it in and forget it. But as quickly as it was there, it was gone, replaced with the familiar emptiness.

"I'm not that person anymore, Clark," he finally said, using a stick to stoke the fire, "I left it behind me."

"Bullshit, Everett. You never leave it behind, not until your dying day. You're lying to yourself if you think you can lock it up and throw away the key. You were the best tracker the Marines ever had. You've survived in the heart of the Machine Army's territory for over a decade. I need your skills to help me deal with problems none of those pansies in DC have the guts for."

"Who are you going after?"

There was a moment of silence, before he got his answer.

"The Slaughterhouse Nine."

He raised an eyebrow. That was a name he had heard from time to time, usually over the radio when he chose to listen to it. The Slaughterhouse Nine, a group of murderous capes who went from place to place. Why they still seemed to exist had always bothered him, it was nothing that a few precision-guided bombs wouldn't be able to solve. Only it seemed the government was quite content with keeping it a cape issue.

Seems like someone had finally lost their patience

"Why now? You've had years to deal with them."

The other man smirked, "Things change, like they always do. New allies, new tech, new enemies, new possibilities. Does it really matter, Everett? This is going to happen. I don't know what the odds are, I don't ask. But the odds are better with you, then without you."

"So," the man leaned in, "are you in?"

He didn't answer immediately, instead choosing to stare into the fire, searching for answers. There was a part of him that yearned for what Clark was offering, to get back on the horse and actually do something to make a difference again. But there was another part of him that felt like by doing so, he would be dishonoring the memory of both Maria and Alana.

But was he really? Was he actually honoring them by doing this? Not quite living, but on the other hand, not quite dead either. Just existing, shuffling through what was left of his life, waiting for death to finally reunite himself with them.

Was it fair to their memory?

He knew the answer to it and he hated it. Because he knew exactly what Maria would say to him, even if he didn't want to admit it.

Closing his eyes, he released a sigh. Looking for something - anything really - that could stop him from doing this. But there simply wasn't an answer there.

"Alright," he finally said, "I'm in."

Clarke's smile was all teeth, as he held out a hand.

"Welcome to Rainbow."
 
huh. Rainbow Six is an international organization, while hexa is Primary USA forces.
Does that mean well, end up with clear divide or are gonna have to explain why Tchanka is benchpressing our robots on a dare?

So, at this time, not sure which operators of R6S fame are gonna make a cameo. Part of the issue here compared to the R6S world is how divided and fragmented the world is in comparison. You don't have that quasi-interpol/anti-terrorist setup because there really arent any of those treaties in place that R6S enjoyed. Still there have been....talks, and Chanky Kang was mentioned in passing, so keep your hope, we may figure out a way to integrate. It's just Hexa/R6 is a lot more...America-oriented so it may be difficult to fit other nationalities in so to speak
 
So, at this time, not sure which operators of R6S fame are gonna make a cameo.
Well, at least with all those para-humans around it certanly make their equipment more reasonable to develop. Some are even well suited counters.
We gonna see ZDT having to came around to the idea of security personel carring around some scary looking shields.
The question is , how much will Taylor 'invest' into them. For while she is hesitant with weapon development, any of the knock out gadgets seems up her alley. Mayby. We'll see
 
"Who are you going after?"

"The Slaughterhouse Nine."

"Welcome to Rainbow."
Finally some competent normal people to put a bullet or 500 in Jack's skull. Also wonder how Cauldron is going to freak out that their little pet-band of mass murderers is not the target of some very scary SpecOps people who aren't interested in the pagaentry of Capes.
 
How hard a turn are we taking into Clancy town? I showed up for tinkers and robots, and while this has delivered for the most part, the last few chapters are more political thriller/love-affair-with-the-gun than I really prefer.

I bounced off of Tom Clancy novels as a kid, and have never played an R6/Battlefield/COD game in my life, so it's kind of my personal snooze button.
 
How hard a turn are we taking into Clancy town? I showed up for tinkers and robots, and while this has delivered for the most part, the last few chapters are more political thriller/love-affair-with-the-gun than I really prefer.

I bounced off of Tom Clancy novels as a kid, and have never played an R6/Battlefield/COD game in my life, so it's kind of my personal snooze button.

As I told someone on AO3. Not much longer, they'll be sidelined. We're just putting pieces in place for dealing with a few threats and future issues. But I think we'll have maybe 3 more references before they disappear to the background for a good while. If anything, they'll be relegated to sidestory tier after that. If mentioned really at all until we start getting crazy again, but that's not for like....2 years in story?

Anyways, hopefully that settles some worries. Its not much more. In fact, we have Jack popping up in the next chapter, and then we have the end result of this buildup.
 
If mentioned really at all until we start getting crazy again, but that's not for like....2 years in story?
Well if going by Canon Worm, killing Jack (probably) delays GM by a decade so either we have enough time for Taylor/ZDT to get everyone on a spaceship or we get the Faro Plague dismantling Zion's core.

Either way nice to see what's going on behind the scenes
 
As I said on SB in regards to someone kinda griping about suspension of disbelief of Rost still alive in Eagleton, Rost is the very epitome of "Do Not Pursue Lu Bu" for the Machine Army. They tried capping his ass...it didn't end well.
So basically, the Machine Army is in full 'The moment you get a good chance to get him, do so. Just don't deliberately seek him out unless it's by setting up ambushes' mode with him because it's just that painful for the resources it (doesn't) gain?
 
So basically, the Machine Army is in full 'The moment you get a good chance to get him, do so. Just don't deliberately seek him out unless it's by setting up ambushes' mode with him because it's just that painful for the resources it (doesn't) gain?

Its....kinda that. Theres also some other aspects at play in the background. Its more like you only have ine pov that may not provide the whole story. So to speak. Unfortunately, I can't really say more than that even though I really want to so I can cut a certain commentor over at SB off at the knees cuz Im getting kinda fed up with them wanting immediate reward instead of a buildup.

Still theres a reason we brought in Rost. Just cant say the what and why though. Just like we brought in Ruan and Hexa. And also had the events in Boston and the stuff with Butcher. If we went in depth wed olay our hand before its ready sadly.
 
It was a massive and interesting chapter. Thank you for your efforts. This is very fun and ambitious story.
 
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