An Aura of Freedom (One Piece/Pokemon)

Will that stop Vegapunk from trying to reverse engineer Pokeballs? He will see it as a way to harmlessly capture criminals and prevent bloodshed for law enforcement.

Of course the World Government has... other ideas for it.
The World Government actually wants to keep Vegapunk as far away from Pokeballs as possible, for certain reasons.

One thing continuously irks me to no end every time I come to your story. Just outright infuriates me. I run out of story. Every time.

Joking aside I check this one near daily and assuming the hows of it all will be explained later I am not worried about that except for one which you aptly displayed in the fight with Zoro and sneezy. How can a pokemon win a fight with people who can potentially outfight them while getting instructions and the opponent having not only more time than needed to win but also clear knowledge of what's coming? I'm having a hard time picturing them being able to overcome that and still being the pokemon of so and so and not suddenly totally independent crew members as the trainers become redundant minus nami's kidnapping ways.
The fact that trainers have to yell out exactly what they want their Pokemon to do does create a tactical disadvantage, and it's something that the Pokemon and Pokemon trainers in the story will need to overcome in order to remain relevant in the face of the progressively stronger One Piece characters, though there are workarounds in the same way that Observation Haki has workarounds. No matter what happens, though, the trainers themselves will at no point become redundant and they and their Pokemon will always be a package deal when it comes to major fights.

As Zoro's fight showed, Pokemon also have a lot of natural resilience that ordinary fighters don't, which is one of the big things they have going for them on top of the special effects of some of their moves.

Next complaint is not real feel free to ignore it. Why no rhyhorn? Rhyhorn gets no love if it's not a Brock fic :(

If the Straw Hats had a Rhyhorn on their team, it would either have Lightning Rod and make Skypiea laughably easy, or it wouldn't have Lightning Rod and Spruce would kick himself so hard he would die and the story would end. Had to be done, unfortunately.

Now for my only real complaints. Mr. Sneezy's gimmick really does irk me to the point I can never even remember his name. I can not even think of a pun or funny reason for it. It's just adding an achoo every time he talks. Also fairly sure Sanji would have beat nickel 11/12ths to death. That is all for that.

I view Sanji's treatment of Nickel as being somewhat similar to how Luffy spares his enemies. Not strictly out of mercy, but because what he did was actually the crueller option. Ordinarily, Sanji would have just kicked Nickel into oblivion, but because he was in that specific scenario with the soup already there, he chose to take the path that would inflict the much more grievous damage.

Sorry to hear that Copper's gimmick falls flat. The sneezing is supposed to be because he's a poison type trainer, and sickness is close enough to poison type vibes. If it's any comfort, he's the only member of Team Steel's leadership that I currently have no plans to revisit in the future.

Oh... I got a notification and thought the next part was here... tis instead a pumpkin thingamabob... but that also made me have more thoughts.

I would commit unspeakable acts to be able to write this story's chapters within a day.

Because me brain is weird like that. Pumpkin>gourgeist> ghost>zombies>brook arc is where my brain went. Can we expect non land bound pokemon to appear random places not originally from the pokemon world? Like ghost types attracted to zombie land?

"Gengar no get out of that shadow I am trying to do something we can play later!"

It'll take a while for the story to get there, but yeah. Ghost types on Thriller Bark wasn't even a question.

Oh, right, I meant to post the realization that aura being haki means that ghost types are immune to armament!

Aura and Haki aren't necessarily the same thing. They're closely related to each other, and Observation Haki is almost identical, but there are some key differences that will become more apparent once the Straw Hats start using Haki themselves and Spruce becomes more proficient with Aura.

On teams. I dont expect everyone to get a full team of 6, for reasons of both character bloat and keeping fight scenes reasonable, as well as the settings preferences for 1 on 1 duels. 2-4 each seems more reasonable, with likely only Magnus getting the full 6 since he is the specialist here.

I also am not expecting more than one, maybe 2 pokemon per SH when they leave Iron Island, both because Iron Island only has Sinnoh and earlier pokemon, limiting options, and to give time to focus on them. Likely with the bulk of the crew picking up a partner in the after-battle 'party' segment, since the climax of the arc is so close and only Zoro and Nami have picked up tagalongs.
If I tried to give everyone a full team of six Pokemon I would be crushed by my own hubris. It won't just be Spruce who gets a full party, but most of the Straw Hats are just going to get the one main partner Pokemon. The Straw Hats who are already strong enough on their own don't have much incentive to incorporate Pokemon into how they fight, whereas the weaker ones like Nami and Usopp will be more pushed into becoming proper Pokemon trainers. Even then, there are almost no scenarios in which one of the main Pokemon battlers is going to have a full team of six Pokemon all out in a battle at once.

Left it out of the quote but your speculations surrounding which Pokemon each Straw Hat might acquire were interesting, and there were some that I hadn't even considered. The lack of Vivi wounded me deeply.

Not every member of the crew will be leaving IronIsland with a Pokemon, especially because at this point that would mean having half the crew go off after the main battle is finished and have some kind of meaningful encounter. It would feel too rushed at that point, and I don't want every Straw Hat to suddenly have a Pokemon each after just one island. That would be a nightmare with balancing Little Garden and Drum, and spacing it out adds to the sense of progression, I feel.

Some notes:
-The Ralts suggestion brings to mind an image of Luffy with a Gardevoir that throws a black hole at Blackbeard in some big showdown (possibly Impel Down?) and I found that funny.
-Hancock getting jealous over a fish is funny enough that I am considering changing my plans for Luffy to incorporate it. I also imagine that he would try and jump into the water in order to try and play with it and be in constant need of saving.
-Sanji suffers enough post-Thriller Bark and especially post-Timeskip that I would feel bad if I went through with the Lopunny gag.
-Usopp is going to catch one of the Pokemon you listed. He will also catch a ghost type Pokemon that I don't think anyone will see coming.
-If Smoker or Tashigi did catch a Wingull, it would definitely have Smoker's smoking habits.
 
I also imagine that he would try and jump into the water in order to try and play with it and be in constant need of saving.
If anything, that's part of the impetus for Feebas to evolve. Luffys unconditional affection.

People keep dissing the (canonically, not my opinion) dumb, ugly, weak looking fish, and Luffy punches them in the fucking mouth for insulting his friend.

Also very easy to introduce to the story. Unlike landbound or even flying pokemon, water types are not constrained to a landmass. If they can survive in an ocean full of sea kings and other nasties, deep water pokemon can turn up anywhere on the Grand Line.

On Vivi being excluded, unless you plan on having her abandon or be forced out of Alabasta, she wont be plot relevant again until well into post-timeskip. So I didnt go in deep on her. Especially since she already has an animal companion.
 
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There was a WoG that megas will be part of this story, so does that mean Yveltal caused a mass extinction on (insert One Piece planet name here), or did lots of magic rocks come out of a wormhole on some island (presumably whereever Kuma sends our new scout)?
 
There was a WoG that megas will be part of this story, so does that mean Yveltal caused a mass extinction on (insert One Piece planet name here), or did lots of magic rocks come out of a wormhole on some island (presumably whereever Kuma sends our new scout)?
I mean in the Delta Episode they came from meteors iirc.

But given the still unknowable events of the Void Century, it's entirely possible there was an Yveltal superweapon. The extent of Pokemons involvement with the backstory of the Blue World is still unknown.

Edit: if they are,SO many new questions.
 
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On Vivi being excluded, unless you plan on having her abandon or be forced out of Alabasta, she wont be plot relevant again until well into post-timeskip. So I didnt go in deep on her. Especially since she already has an animal companion.
Even if she does have to stay behind in Alabasta, she's still a member of the crew, and all Straw Hats will be getting at least one Pokemon of their own.

There was a WoG that megas will be part of this story, so does that mean Yveltal caused a mass extinction on (insert One Piece planet name here), or did lots of magic rocks come out of a wormhole on some island (presumably whereever Kuma sends our new scout)?
The Ultimate Weapon did exist in this world's past. It is also completely unrelated to the Ancient Weapons.
 
Well. Now you have unleashed a can of theory crafting worms. Because you have confirmed that Pokemon are native to the world and subject to its rules. Part of its history.

Can pokemon eat devil fruits? Are there Pokemon Zoans?

How do the existing Mythical Zoans relate to pokemon?

What happened to the Legendaries that the planet got this fucked up?
 
If so, I feel so bad for the at least one magicarp that I am certain has, and then had to quickly evolve and learn to fly, or die.
Wouldn't be quick either. As we see with Van der Decken and Jack the Drought, fishman devil fruit users can still breathe underwater. They simply cannot move. So the Magikarp would sink to the bottom of the sea and slowly starve to death.
 
If so, I feel so bad for the at least one magicarp that I am certain has, and then had to quickly evolve and learn to fly, or die.

Wait it's just sea water right? And couldn't they just, stay human and lament their luck like brook did at first iirc? Also I am now picturing luffy kidnapping someone to be the new crew member/pet while they desperately try to hide from both shenanigans and plot
 
Sorry to hear that Copper's gimmick falls flat. The sneezing is supposed to be because he's a poison type trainer, and sickness is close enough to poison type vibes. If it's any comfort, he's the only member of Team Steel's leadership that I currently have no plans to revisit in the future.

More that I'm incredibly literal. Back when I was trying to write I could portray emotion very well and was considered very intense in that and had my fight scenes compared to anime but I struggled with anything subtle to the point I said screw it and deleted everything, and I mean it was so bad all my readers dropped em. So I missed it while trying to find metal puns to go with the names. Had it been a weezing that was always out I'd have picked up on it but it would have taken that for my oblivious self to notice so don't feel bad if I miss something.
 
Took me a couple days to realize, but you dropped all the pieces for a spoiler.

Vivi will be getting a pokemon. She will not be leaving Alabasta behind. And you have no plans to cram in the introduction of a new character in the time between Mercury taking a rubber to the face and the Straw Hats departure.

Therefore, one of three things will happen. At some point between Little Garden and Alabasta, there will be a second Pokemon themed detour. Vivi will gain a water type partner while someone fishes en route. Or pokemon have been spread to Little Garden, Drum Island, or Alabasta.

Honestly, pokemon on Alabasta isnt the most unlikely. Could easily be a Yamask or Golurk lurking in some forgotten ruin.
 
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Took me a couple days to realize, but you dropped all the pieces for a spoiler.

Vivi will be getting a pokemon. She will not be leaving Alabasta behind. And you have no plans to cram in the introduction of a new character in the time between Mercury taking a rubber to the face and the Straw Hats departure.

Therefore, one of three things will happen. At some point between Little Garden and Alabasta, there will be a second Pokemon themed detour. Vivi will gain a water type partner while someone fishes en route. Or pokemon have been spread to Little Garden, Drum Island, or Alabasta.

Honestly, pokemon on Alabasta isnt the most unlikely. Could easily be a Yamask or Golurk lurking in some forgotten ruin.
Your predictions aren't necessarily completely correct, but between one of the things you said here and you predicting Usopp's Pokemon, I'm getting a little paranoid you've got a way to peek at my notes for the story.

Inserting another Pokemon island between Little Garden and Alabasta would be problematic due to all the time-sensitive elements involved in that section of the story. If it's before Drum, then the Kestia either kills Nami because the Straw Hats can't cure it/can't get to Drum in time, or Nami is somehow treated on the island they visit and then Drum gets skipped outright, and there's simply no way I'm doing that.

Because of the revelation about the Alabasta royal guards defecting to join the rebel army, there wouldn't be a way to justify the Straw Hats stopping at another Pokemon island between Drum and Alabasta, and it would be too much of a left turn. Little Garden to Drum to Alabasta will be a straight pipeline.

After Alabasta, there's less of a through line connecting the arcs to each other, which makes it easier to insert Pokemon islands in between the canon ones and handwave travel times so that the Straw Hats still inexplicably arrive at each new setting just in time for the plot to happen, on top of also adding filler arcs/movies I want to include in the story.

I'm curious to know what you think Vivi's Pokemon is going to end up being. I will say that it falls within the same restriction of being in the Sinnoh Pokedex just like the other current Straw Hat Pokemon are.
 
I'm curious to know what you think Vivi's Pokemon is going to end up being. I will say that it falls within the same restriction of being in the Sinnoh Pokedex just like the other current Straw Hat Pokemon are.
For clarity, DP, Platinum, or BDSP DeX? All three are different.

Also realised I neglected the stowaway option, which opens things up a tad.
 
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Ok, so start by eliminating the obvious.
Nosepass, Sableye, Skuntank, Toxicroak, Steelix, Lucario, Staraptor, Floatzel, Meditite, all taken by other notable trainers so far. Too early to be doubling up.

Vivi wont pick up a pet she cant care for, so anything that doesn't seem like it could be happy living long term in the endless dunes of Alabasta, espescially in its landlocked capitol, is out.
Finneon, Mantine, Milotic, Cherubi, Shellos, Vespiquen, Wurmple, Seaking, Whiscash, Quagsire, Tentacruel, Octillery, Abomasnow, Bibarel, Pachirisu, Roserade, pretty much anything that needs a wet, woodland, or cold environment is going to be MISERABLE in Alubarna, or restricted to a custom built habitat.

Psyduck too, but also because I dont think your the type to do that to Carue.

Fossils are still a big question mark, so Shieldon and Cranidos to the side.

I'm also setting aside the ghosts, since they dont seem to be very common on Iron Island, and that's probably all getting left for Thriller Bark. So Duskull, Shuppet, Misdreavus, Spiritomb, and Drifloon are out.

Murkrow, Machop, Geodude, and Zubat could all do fine in Alabasta, Hippopotas would obviously thrive, but none seem like they would resonate with Vivi for reasons of typical personalities or battle styles.

You will never convince a Bonsly to set foot on a ship.

Ponyta could work, but it's a bit big to be a stowaway. And ya know, on fire.

Skorupi. Its wierd, but I could very easily see Vivi doting on a Skorupi. Good for the desert too, but Drapion isnt as good a match for her. And this is not a world where a pokemon can afford to stay small and cute.

Buneary and Aipom. Both friendly, could very easily get on with Vivi and easily sneak aboard the Sunny to steal food. Less than ideal in the dunes but manageable. Normal types have lots of options, and Lopunny even has Mega potential. Decent picks.

Shinx. I could see it. Not the BEST in an arid climate with all that dark fur, but not the worst. And some useful unique abilities at Luxray.

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Hoothoot. Top pick tbh. Desert Owls are a thing, varied moveset and some anime only illusion powers which are on theme for the sands. Has lots of potential to be training with Pell during the timeskip, strengthening both.

Sneasel. Good counterbalance to Vivis idealism without the dickishness present in many other Dark types, and not as badly in need of cold temperatures as other ice types, just needs to stay in the shade or in a room with it's own ice during the day. Also fits well with Vivis more agile hit and run fighting style.

Gible. Would RAPIDLY become the apex predator of Alabastas dunes. Is a little goofball this early on for an easy bond before becoming the type of fierce protector Vivi kinda needs given what she is headed into post Reverie Arc. Gets Put On A Bus so no worry about scaling a full Pseudo to Straw Hat villains until you are ready.
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Anything not mentioned, I dont really have ideas on for or against.
 
I was kinda hoping that Pokémon have started showing up in Alabasta. Maybe the Desert Resort of Unova somehow becomes apart of Alabasta and the Strawhats and Robin somehow discover and enter the Relic Castle.
 
Ok, so start by eliminating the obvious.
Nosepass, Sableye, Skuntank, Toxicroak, Steelix, Lucario, Staraptor, Floatzel, Meditite, all taken by other notable trainers so far. Too early to be doubling up.
I think you might be getting Skuntank mixed up with something else, as the only instance of a Skuntank in the story so far has been the Stunky that sprayed Luffy. You are correct that there won't be any double-ups with Straw Hat Pokemon, as I want all their teams to be unique and built around their strengths and personalities. I'm not as concerned with doubling up with Pokemon that other characters, like the Admins, are also using, since they're going to be absent for ages after Iron Island, and in Vivi's case, she'll be put on a bus before those characters make their return. In Steelix's case, the notable trainer who was using one of those is dead, which means there's an open slot for a character to run Steelix.

Some of these suggestions for Vivi have once again made me reconsider my plans for her team.

I was kinda hoping that Pokémon have started showing up in Alabasta. Maybe the Desert Resort of Unova somehow becomes apart of Alabasta and the Strawhats and Robin somehow discover and enter the Relic Castle.
That could be a cool idea, but I'm not sure how I would fit it in neatly on top of everything else going on in Alabasta at the time. There will be some pretty big revelations in Alabasta, which I hope are able to get people excited. If the Straw Hats ever do have to revisit Alabasta, this is definitely an idea I'll try and incorporate.
 
I was kinda hoping that Pokémon have started showing up in Alabasta. Maybe the Desert Resort of Unova somehow becomes apart of Alabasta and the Strawhats and Robin somehow discover and enter the Relic Castle.
Not particularly viable. The pokemon in One Piece are not an example of cross dimensional fuckery, just getting portaled in. By what QM has revealed thus far, they are native to the world of the Blue Seas SOMEHOW. This world was created by Arceus sometime in its distant past.

We cannot just plop down chunks of poke-earth smack dab into the middle of existing OP locations and call it good.

Inorganic and immortal pokemon are the ones most likely to show up outside the apparently hidden Islands where they still live. Bronzor, Magnemite, Claydol, etc, waking up after centuries of slumber to a changed world.

And of course ocean-dwelling water types just propagating across the seas.


On the other hand, by implications, something about the world fundamentally changed just in time for the new Joy Boy to land on Iron Island. Reintroducing Pokemons existence to the wider world. Otherwise Ghost Types only NOW appearing on Thriller Bark would make little sense. (If Thriller Bark always had Ghosts, the Marines would have them for sure.)

I suppose, depending on the nature of that change, QM could tap Legends Arcues for ideas and have Time Space rifts become a thing, leading to Rifts forming all over the Grand Line. And we know that spacetime is FUCKED on that ocean. Islands of eternal day, temporal anomalies, oceans made of goddamn fruit juice, the Calm Belts. Shits definitely fucked enough to justify Rifts as a mechanic, so long as it's not JUST happening in proximity to the Straw Hats.
 
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