Gromweld said:
With these explanations, I remove most of my complaints, and apologize for making some of them in the first place.
My reaction, and I believe most of the others, was due to this fundamental misunderstanding.
Since you wanted to fix that percentage, I'd note that that a major reason that so many people didn't catch onto things like this is because of the sheer amount of writing you've put into this as well as the time span its gone across. To put things into perspective, we've been at this for four months and you've generated an obscene amount of writing for each update. With that kind of time span and the amount of material, it's very easy for things and events to fall out of mind.
It's easier to recall simple statements, which is why I was arguing about transparency. Things that are extremely important can be lost in the rest of the material if they are not highlighted by someone (be it you or a player).
The foreshadowing that you've made is probably a lot more clear reading the updates back to back. I would bet that most of the people that
did catch onto this were those that had the time to put into rereading everything. If those readers don't speak up (or are not effective enough to convince people), it's very difficult to maintain consistency across long time periods.
Speaking as a person who has followed a different quest for over a year and reread it many times, even then it's sometimes difficult to keep some of the past events in mind.
Edit: I should probably vote too.
I was going to forego the Integrity specialty but then I remembered that this was Worm.
[x] Write-In: Should've read the Owner's Manual first...
-[x] Stunt: You've been getting burned too often by poor understanding of your own Charms, and it's making you ineffective. This stops now. You tell the others you're taking a nap, close your eyes, and meditate on your Charms. It's high time to figure yourself out.
[x] Essence Reservoir-to-Heart: Provide counsel for a member of your caravan, getting to know them better as a mortal as well as evaluating them for Alchemical potential.
-[x] Stunt: Talk to Dennis, find out how he's doing, and what he thinks of things so far. Get his support in covering up for any Clarity induced social mistakes, and see about enlisting his assistance in keeping Aisha sufficiently motivated and amused, especially after their mutual Glenn sessions. The last personal conversation you've had with him involved a prank involving being surrounded by a swarm of bugs, after all, things could stand to be on a more positive note.
[x] 4 XP - Craft ●●●●○
[x] 4 XP -
Bureaucracy ●●○○○
[x] 4 XP -
Medicine ●○○○○
[x] 2 XP - Integrity (Mental Trauma ●○○)