The Explosive Turnabout: Beginning (29/29)
DrPikachu
Mad Scientist Pokémon
- Location
- a laboratory
Continued from the previous post.
[I stop moving!]
[Dedede stops moving!]
[The spear-wielding Waddle Dees stop moving!]
[As if out of nowhere, Escargoon appears, pointing an accusing finger at me! (I think it's one at least; hard to tell when everyone either has mitten-hands or stubs.]
Escargoon
Just what do you think you're doing, Detective?! How dare you antagonize His Speechlessness instead of being out there cuffing that Kirby!
King Dedede
Es... Escargoon!
Ema
I'm getting to the bottom of this case, THAT'S what I'm doing! And I have evidence that disproves the king's criminal story!
Escargoon
Oh you do, do ya? Care to share with the rest of the class?
Ema
Sure, but you won't like the grade I'm about to throw do—
[Suddenly, the main gates burst open, revealing an out-of-breath Waddle Doo. Somehow, between his wheezes (how can he do that with no mouth?), he manages to salute his king with no trouble at all.]
Waddle Doo
Your Majesty! There's been an incident!
King Dedede
B-bwuh? An incident?
Ema
(Oh, what's next? Is Chief Bookem gonna suddenly show up five minutes from now?! This is ridiculous!)
Escargoon
Well, what are you waiting for, a written invitation?! Spit it out, Captain!
Waddle Doo
Your Majesty... There's been an explosion at the gas station in Cappy Town!
Ema
(Wh...... Whaaat?! Exploded?! Wait, that tremor...)
You can't legally charge me for disrespecting you!
[King Dedede's jaw practically drops to the ground in shock! For a second, I can swear I feel the ground shaking as it happens.]
King Dedede
Im... Impossible!!
And that, my friends, ends act one of case one. Bet you thought I forgot all about that gas station in the opening "cinematic"? What should we expect in act two...?
Actual investigating sequences? You bet!
Arguing with more people? Of course!
Breaking through mistakes and contradictions? How can I say no?!
Finally meeting Kirby face-to-face? Uhhh...as long as the Snackoos are safe and secure at the bottom of Ema's bag... We'll see.
Now I'd like to address a few possible concerns. For all intents and purposes, this was the tutorial section of the quest. Our future opponents won't be as easy to crack as ol' King Dedede was. With that in mind, I have renamed the "No-Longer-Relevant Material" section to "Discarded Material". Everything that ends up in this section still won't have that much bearing on the case anymore, but it's still nice to have references on what we've learned so far. Logic nuggets in this section will also have their "parentage" shown, if they had any "parents."
I know I kinda just came back from one, but there will be a short break before I start act two. I need to finish fleshing out the system mechanics for the Investigation phases, because it's gonna be pretty hard to describe all these scenes with text alone, unless I've been looking at this all wrong (which is entirely possible and quite ironic, given the source material's insistence on "thinking outside the box when you're backed into a corner").
Making these Profile, Evidence and Logic icons? That doesn't take me very long at all.
Whole backgrounds from scratch? That's another story entirely as far as my spriting skills are concerned.
In the meantime, if you have any questions, suggestions, critiques, omakes, fanart... Lay it on me, and I'll answer what I can.(as he mentioned the latter two, Pandora's box doth open, the QM blissfully unaware of what he has unleashed) No "can this character be in plz" questions will be answered whatsoever; just figured I'd rip that bandage right off. I'm not gonna make promises like that and risk writing myself into a dead-end.
[I stop moving!]
[Dedede stops moving!]
[The spear-wielding Waddle Dees stop moving!]
[As if out of nowhere, Escargoon appears, pointing an accusing finger at me! (I think it's one at least; hard to tell when everyone either has mitten-hands or stubs.]
Escargoon
Just what do you think you're doing, Detective?! How dare you antagonize His Speechlessness instead of being out there cuffing that Kirby!
King Dedede
Es... Escargoon!
Ema
I'm getting to the bottom of this case, THAT'S what I'm doing! And I have evidence that disproves the king's criminal story!
Escargoon
Oh you do, do ya? Care to share with the rest of the class?
Ema
Sure, but you won't like the grade I'm about to throw do—
[Suddenly, the main gates burst open, revealing an out-of-breath Waddle Doo. Somehow, between his wheezes (how can he do that with no mouth?), he manages to salute his king with no trouble at all.]
Waddle Doo
Your Majesty! There's been an incident!
King Dedede
B-bwuh? An incident?
Ema
(Oh, what's next? Is Chief Bookem gonna suddenly show up five minutes from now?! This is ridiculous!)
Escargoon
Well, what are you waiting for, a written invitation?! Spit it out, Captain!
Waddle Doo
Your Majesty... There's been an explosion at the gas station in Cappy Town!
Ema
(Wh...... Whaaat?! Exploded?! Wait, that tremor...)
—[Flashback]—
EmaYou can't legally charge me for disrespecting you!
[King Dedede's jaw practically drops to the ground in shock! For a second, I can swear I feel the ground shaking as it happens.]
King Dedede
Im... Impossible!!
—[/Flashback]—
[King Dedede's face has gone pale.]
Ema
(So that tremor was real...?! It must've been from the explosion! Just how much gas did they have?!)
Waddle Doo
I have a platoon of Waddle Dees over there putting out the fire, but it appears that several of the townspeople have suffered critical injuries from the explosion, with possible fatalities. And when I had left, Kirby had just arrived and was assisting in keeping the fire under control.
King Dedede
In...injuries...? F-fatalities...? I...I...
[His expression goes blank as he stares into space.]
Escargoon
And since we can't understand those Waddle Dees, you ran up here instead of sending one of them out. Well, run back down there! We can't let Kirby run around like he owns the place! Isn't that right, Your Majesty?
King Dedede
......I...I...
Escargoon
...Your...Majesty?
[Escargoon waves his hand in front of Dedede's face, but the king's eyes don't even track its movement. Snapping his fingers produces similar results. The snail then angrily turns to me.]
Escargoon
Now look what you've done, you detective! You broke His Majesty! And unfortunately for you, the warranty expired a long time ago!
Ema
("Warranty"? Did they seriously buy Dedede at a store or something?)
I'm pretty sure I had nothing to do with this, Dr. Escargoon. Now in case you didn't hear your captain, you have an emergency on your hands. People could be—ARE hurt. Whether your king allows it or not, I'm going to Cappy Town to investigate.
Waddle Doo
Please, allow me to drive you there, Miss Skye! We can take His Majesty's tank! Follow me!
Ema
Oh, really? Th-thank yo... Wait, did you say "tank"?!
(I think I was wrong to call Dedede a tyrant! He's a bona fide dictator!)
Escargoon
Hey, His Catatonicness didn't give you permission to take the keys, you miniature cyclops! Get back here!
[Escargoon attempted to give chase, but Waddle Doo and I were long gone.]
Ema
(Looks like King Dedede's lies and Kirby's true nature are gonna be the least of my problems now...)
(An exploding gas station... Just what is going on in this kingdom? And how in the world did I get so involved that I'm actually doing my job?)
(Guess there's only one way I'm gonna solve all these mysteries...and that's by grasping the truth with my own two hands! Science, don't fail me now...!)
Ema
(So that tremor was real...?! It must've been from the explosion! Just how much gas did they have?!)
Waddle Doo
I have a platoon of Waddle Dees over there putting out the fire, but it appears that several of the townspeople have suffered critical injuries from the explosion, with possible fatalities. And when I had left, Kirby had just arrived and was assisting in keeping the fire under control.
King Dedede
In...injuries...? F-fatalities...? I...I...
[His expression goes blank as he stares into space.]
Escargoon
And since we can't understand those Waddle Dees, you ran up here instead of sending one of them out. Well, run back down there! We can't let Kirby run around like he owns the place! Isn't that right, Your Majesty?
King Dedede
......I...I...
Escargoon
...Your...Majesty?
[Escargoon waves his hand in front of Dedede's face, but the king's eyes don't even track its movement. Snapping his fingers produces similar results. The snail then angrily turns to me.]
Escargoon
Now look what you've done, you detective! You broke His Majesty! And unfortunately for you, the warranty expired a long time ago!
Ema
("Warranty"? Did they seriously buy Dedede at a store or something?)
I'm pretty sure I had nothing to do with this, Dr. Escargoon. Now in case you didn't hear your captain, you have an emergency on your hands. People could be—ARE hurt. Whether your king allows it or not, I'm going to Cappy Town to investigate.
Waddle Doo
Please, allow me to drive you there, Miss Skye! We can take His Majesty's tank! Follow me!
Ema
Oh, really? Th-thank yo... Wait, did you say "tank"?!
(I think I was wrong to call Dedede a tyrant! He's a bona fide dictator!)
Escargoon
Hey, His Catatonicness didn't give you permission to take the keys, you miniature cyclops! Get back here!
[Escargoon attempted to give chase, but Waddle Doo and I were long gone.]
Ema
(Looks like King Dedede's lies and Kirby's true nature are gonna be the least of my problems now...)
(An exploding gas station... Just what is going on in this kingdom? And how in the world did I get so involved that I'm actually doing my job?)
(Guess there's only one way I'm gonna solve all these mysteries...and that's by grasping the truth with my own two hands! Science, don't fail me now...!)
To be continued.
And that, my friends, ends act one of case one. Bet you thought I forgot all about that gas station in the opening "cinematic"? What should we expect in act two...?
Actual investigating sequences? You bet!
Arguing with more people? Of course!
Breaking through mistakes and contradictions? How can I say no?!
Finally meeting Kirby face-to-face? Uhhh...as long as the Snackoos are safe and secure at the bottom of Ema's bag... We'll see.
Now I'd like to address a few possible concerns. For all intents and purposes, this was the tutorial section of the quest. Our future opponents won't be as easy to crack as ol' King Dedede was. With that in mind, I have renamed the "No-Longer-Relevant Material" section to "Discarded Material". Everything that ends up in this section still won't have that much bearing on the case anymore, but it's still nice to have references on what we've learned so far. Logic nuggets in this section will also have their "parentage" shown, if they had any "parents."
I know I kinda just came back from one, but there will be a short break before I start act two. I need to finish fleshing out the system mechanics for the Investigation phases, because it's gonna be pretty hard to describe all these scenes with text alone, unless I've been looking at this all wrong (which is entirely possible and quite ironic, given the source material's insistence on "thinking outside the box when you're backed into a corner").
Making these Profile, Evidence and Logic icons? That doesn't take me very long at all.
Whole backgrounds from scratch? That's another story entirely as far as my spriting skills are concerned.
In the meantime, if you have any questions, suggestions, critiques, omakes, fanart... Lay it on me, and I'll answer what I can.
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