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I have been looking at some of my older stories...

Why did you read that drivel!? I can barely understand what I meant at times and 'I' wrote it!

I mean, I still make mistakes, but holy crap I was bad!
 
Hiver said:
I have been looking at some of my older stories...

Why did you read that drivel!? I can barely understand what I meant at times and 'I' wrote it!

I mean, I still make mistakes, but holy crap I was bad!
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Because a lot of other stuff available was worse, and you at least were trying to tell a good/interesting story.

Sad, isn't it?
 
Hiver said:
I have been looking at some of my older stories...

Why did you read that drivel!? I can barely understand what I meant at times and 'I' wrote it!

I mean, I still make mistakes, but holy crap I was bad!
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The basic ideas were sound, even if the execution had some weak points.
 
Your ideas were sound, and we could tell you were improving between stories and within them. You just kept writing, and got better. It's a process, and we're glad to be able to follow the ideas you come up with on the way.
 
Stories like your older ones are terrible to read in one sitting because of all the flaws I'm sure your aware of now. However when they are written in short snippets that release quickly it's more like a collective role play or game than a conventional story. We get to guess, rote for you, make suggestions, ect. Those things make it more fun even if it is terrible writing looking back. Sort of like how stories told by friends are crap when viewed through the lens of proper storytelling but it's fun as it is being told, because of who is telling it and the context.
 
Hiver said:
I have been looking at some of my older stories...

Why did you read that drivel!? I can barely understand what I meant at times and 'I' wrote it!

I mean, I still make mistakes, but holy crap I was bad!
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I really hope when the next arc starts you won't have spent a few years sandbagging again. I assume while you we're teaching Dawn to get a forest and plains you formed a link yourself. Dozens of creatures going from 'oh cute' to 'OH FUCK' for you to copy and after this you shouldn't have one damn problem getting a mage teacher to help learn spells. He got a wake up call when Dawn died in front of him because he holds himself back too damn much, lets see him learn from that.
 
Hiver said:
I have been looking at some of my older stories...

Why did you read that drivel!? I can barely understand what I meant at times and 'I' wrote it!

I mean, I still make mistakes, but holy crap I was bad!
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For all the reasons the other said, but also because we don't have to wait between updates. We get glorious fic served up nearly every day. I mean we've half jokingly considered using you as a measurement for rate of updates.
 
AkumaOuja said:
I've had this conversation on like 13 threads now, it has feathers, a beak and lacks the reptilian nature that is a requirement of being a dragon anywhere and everywhere, the feathers similarities to scales noted but none withstanding. It's a god damn bird.
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They don't have feathers. Like, at all.

Scales. All of it. Even their wings, and the plumage on their head and tail are just scales with feather-like consistency, and their physiology is noted to be a combination of reptilian, avian, and mammalian traits.
 
Sweet, after much waiting we get to see the reactions/fallout as Atreus informs the Jedi council just why he considers the honor debt very much null and void.
 
Will you be continuing the old thread or starting a new one?

I'm just wondering if I should bother putting the old thread on my watch list.
 
Bailey Matutine said:
Will you be continuing the old thread or starting a new one?

I'm just wondering if I should bother putting the old thread on my watch list.
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New thread. The mods want threads ended at page 100. It will be a sequel anyway, if a direct continuation.
 
Ryune said:
I never said it was cost effective but then again it's not like he would never use it for anything else. Also, isn't picking up chicks for short lived relationships what all youngsters do with their first mode of transport?
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Planeswalkers should focus on Kirking; they have the perfect excuse for it. Have a guy on every plane, so you can always leave if one annoys you.
 
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