I really need to do that analysis post, but it was obvious that Kiritsugu was somehow being removed from the board since the fight between Assassin and Archer.

I would certainly be very interested to see it - not least because I only realised Kiritsugu was headed for a sticky end around Kirei's conversation with Enkidu (when is when I feel the story really started finding its theme). But, I'm pleased this development did feel natural, instead of inserted simply for shock value.

I see that Homura reference. And it's very much appreciated.

I can't remember if Homura used mortars - she might well have done, it's been a while since I rewatched that fight. If so, silly Homuhomu, using indirect fire against a flying target, that gets you sent to artillery jail.

Still, I'm glad I'm invoking that fight for you! Stay tuned.

Also, there's no shortage of Kickass King Hassan Fanart on Google

Is… is there any other kind? He's got that Batman energy where even him doing mundane stuff looks awesome.
 
Chapter 55 - Survive
Chapter 55 - Survive

Were someone to stand on the hill where Kotomine Church had stood, they would, just for a second, have experienced a moment of perfect silence. The night was clear and cool, a breeze rushing across the grass of the grounds and rustling the trees that surrounded the site. To the North, our observer could have seen all across the city. At last, the fires of Berserker's rampage were entirely extinguished, though in many places power had not been restored, and Fuyuki stood dark and peaceful at last.

If that observer had looked to the East instead, they might have made out a dull glow, where the Einzbern castle was burning still. But even that blaze was not enough to wash out the night sky, or to cover it in smoke, and so the stars could still be seen, twinkling down uncaring.

And if you strained your eyes, you could just about make out a hundred points of light, rising and disappearing against the stars until you could hardly be sure they had been there at all.

For just a moment, you could hear a pin drop.

Just a moment. Then our observer would find that the site of Kotomine Church was not such a peaceful place to stand after all.

What dropped was not pins.

Avenger was not just struck – she was flattened by the storm of mortar shells that descended upon her like the fist of God. Knocked to the ground, Avenger could do no more than lie there and take the hits, driven into the dirt by the barrage of explosions.

These were no simple mortar shells. Every single one was on the same level as a Noble Phantasm. That was all very well to say, but picture it – really picture an item of legendary power, around which awe-inspiring tales might be crafted. Within that tale, nothing could stand up to such an overwhelming weapon. When the hero is finally worthy of wielding it, he crushes all opposition thanks to the sheer superiority of his weapon.

Something like that might just be able to stand up to one of these mortar shells. The other ninety-nine? Those would be more of a problem.

It was over in a single second. When it was done, the hill was scorched and blackened in a tiny circle – no more than ten feet across. Lancer didn't miss. Within that circle, though, the soil was pounded and baked into solid lumps then shattered and hurled aside, and the grass would never grow again. The breeze had been chased away by the shockwaves – as had some of the branches on the nearer trees.

The quiet that followed the shockingly sudden assault was broken by the sound of debris falling back to earth, and rubble shifting in the small crater as Avenger pulled her body back together again.

As soon as her head reformed, she glared at Lancer. "Cannon fire, huh? Or something like it. Don't know what you think you're going to achie-"

Lancer trailed their hand through the dirt, and the mortars fired once more. Avenger hissed, eyes widening, and she rushed back together, reforming just in time to lunge out of the way of the first shells. This time, however, Lancer had spaced out the hits, and Avenger was staggered by an explosion as she was struck directly on the top of her head.

With a snarl, she lashed out upwards, and her sword flashed a dull, angry red. A wave of searing demon fire blasted forth in a wave, engulfing the descending shells…

… to absolutely no effect. Avenger shrieked in rage as she was slammed into the ground once more. A second later, she was back on her feet, and this time her flag lashed out to intercept the last few shells. The deafening blast blew her hair around her head, but she stood unmoved even as the shockwaves opened cracks in the earth.

Lancer thumped the ground once more, and the mortars fired again. This time, Avenger responded by slamming her flag onto the ground herself. Around the impact point, the ground rippled, glowing red cracks opening up – and when the whistling shells descended, they were met with a forest of spears reaching for them.

Avenger's weapons shattered. Lancer's weapons exploded. The dust danced madly in the blasts, each new explosion creating strange shapes in the expanding cloud.

Avenger laughed amid the chaos. "Amusing toys, Lancer. But really, there's no way they could-"

That was as far as she got before Lancer emerged from the dust – fist rising with the unstoppable force of mountains.

An observer standing on the Indian subcontinent, if such an observer were several miles tall and witnessed things on the timescale of eons, might have understood Avenger's pain had they carelessly left their chin in the path of the emerging Himalayas. Lancer's fist tracked its inevitable path into Avenger's jaw, and the power of the planet lifted her off her feet.

The power of humanity, embodied in this case by a beautifully-wrought mortar shell engraved with lapis lazuli cuneiform extolling the history of ballistics, met her going the other way.

Avenger smashed into the ground. A lightning-fast punch blurred in to follow, and she only just rolled out of the way in time – only to groan when the familiar thump of artillery echoed off the hills when Lancer's fist struck earth.

"This is so unnecessary," grumbled Avenger, scrambling back as the shells rose high into the sky. Cracks of red fire, as from pottery left too long in the kiln, ran throughout her body, visibly knitting themselves together. "You already know those shells won't hurt me. Do you just like making noise? Is that it? Why bother?"

Lancer shrugged.

Avenger snarled, and with a contemptuous swipe of her flag a roof of interlocked spears thrust itself over her head. Lancer lunged, and Avenger raised her sword to parry the blow…

… which never came. Instead, Lancer seized her collar, and yanked her out of her protective phalanx straight into the path of the next descending mortar shell. It exploded with stone-shattering force directly against the side of Avenger's head, tearing her out of Lancer's grip, and she bounced and rolled across the cratered ground.

She was up in a moment, and launched herself at Lancer with a vicious sword slash which lit the air on fire behind it. Lancer ducked into an easy-looking crouch, tapping their fist against the ground while they were down there.

Then, they exploded upwards. They grabbed Avenger's head in a flying tackle, and bounced it against the ever-more-exposed bedrock. Rock lost.

This time, Avenger took long seconds to reform, and was visibly breathing hard after she had pulled herself back together. "Pointless. Pointless, pointless, pointless! You've seen this doesn't work! Why are you still trying?"

Lancer cocked their head. "Funny."

Avenger screamed wordlessly, and along with the sound came spears. They emerged from her body, punching out six feet or more – followed by another spear from the end of the first, then a third from the end of the second, quicker than the eye could follow until Avenger seemed to be at the centre of a bizarre and malevolent tree. Forking like lightning, the spears chased down Lancer.

The Chain of Heaven was faster. They dodged and ducked and wove their way through the darting spears – and wherever they would have been spitted regardless, a mortar shell dropped from the sky and shattered the offending spear to splinters. Despite the cracks and craters left in the ground, Lancer was surefooted, and even against a headwind of rushing metal they approached Avenger.

When they were only just out of arms' reach, they plucked a falling shell from mid-air and swung it full into Avenger's face. She flew back, carving a trench in the earth, but recovered smoothly using her sword as a brake. When she rose to her feet, she levered a rock the size of a small car out of the ground and kicked it at Lancer, dirt flying.

Mid-air, the rock lengthened, sharpened – then shattered, until a small cloud of razor-sharp spears flew at Lancer. They ducked, and their fist descended yet again.

It was caught by a black gauntlet as Avenger appeared from the dust cloud, and the guns fell silent.

"Enough," growled Avenger.

Only a hastily-raised forearm prevented the sword stroke from taking Lancer's head off, and even that was chopped almost clean through. Avenger let out a scream of effort, and with a dull red explosion quite different from Lancer's artillery, 'almost' became 'completely'. Lancer's hand fell to earth, the severed end glowing cherry-red.

Lancer backed away, but their vision was blocked by a black flag – before a sword ripped through it, and pierced an inch into Lancer's head before they managed to slip away. They kicked out, but Avenger had the rhythm of the fight now and the kick met a quickly-extruded spear. Chains wrapped it, but Avenger simply seized the chains and whipped Lancer overhead to slam into the ground.

Lancer, unbothered by lying on their back in a crater, raised a fist and brought it down – only for it to hit a black boot instead. Avenger grabbed their tunic and hauled them up.

"I said enough," said Avenger. "Let's just keep this between you and me, yeah? No more of those stupid cannons. Things like that," she tutted. "They'll always fail when you need them most. Good steel, that's what you want."

Lancer was – or could make themselves be – one of the toughest things on the planet. So when Avenger raised her sword and slammed it straight through their body, it said terrible things about the level of sheer force she could call on. It pierced even Lancer's invincible body like a knife through butter.

With a sick grin, Avenger lit the sword on fire, and made it a hot knife through butter – a white-hot, incandescent glow, that set grass on fire clear across the hill. Lancer glowed from within, their eyes and mouth highlighted in an angry red, and where the sword entered their chest you could see the clay start to splinter and crack.

For a second, the two were immobile. Lancer transfixed, a blinding bar of fire through their chest; Avenger holding them bodily off the ground with one hand and pushing her sword deep with the other. In that moment, it looked as though even Enkidu would fall.

And then the Chain of Heaven abandoned the pretence of human form.

Starting from their wound, they unravelled. First, their long hair whipped around them in a frenzy of green and gold. Then, it was impossible to tell where hair ended and Lancer began – and finally, Avenger found herself thrusting her sword into nothing more than a ball of golden chain.

With a snap, the chain writhed – and like a magician revealing a cunning knot, suddenly Avenger's arm was bound up to the shoulder. She swiped at the chains, but they simply gave way – and more wound themselves around her legs, until she was held fast, anchored at a dozen points to the ground.

A knot of chain behind Avenger blurred, shifted – and turned into the familiar androgynous figure of Lancer, holding three lengths of chain in their hand.

"You're stuck in the past, Avenger," they said. "Revenge is selfish, and can never look forward, so of course you'd never appreciate the works of humanity past your own era. But, as in all things, the only constant is change."

Avenger snarled, and exploded with spears once more. They passed harmlessly through Lancer's chains holding her captive, and Lancer simply sidestepped out of the way.

"In one thing you were correct, however," they said. "I have indeed used enough mortar shells."

And, body crackling with golden lightning, they slammed their fist down in a titanic blow. The power behind it was nothing like as weak as an avalanche, or even colliding continents. This was the kind of impact that created moons.

The ground in its path shattered.

And, already softened by the impact of hundreds of Noble Phantasm artillery, so did the hill. All of it.

It took long seconds for the two Servants to fall.

Lancer landed partway down the side of the pit, hand braced and body still crackling with lightning. Avenger landed on her feet in the centre, and swiped her sword to one side defiantly – before her mouth fell open in shock.

Cannon dug themselves from the ground on every side, lining the crater like crystals in some enormous geode from a dream of war. Ornate bombards, modern howitzers and naval guns, all the way up to carronades lining the rim of the pit. All were beautiful, all were the pinnacle of human craft turned to destruction, and all were aimed squarely at Avenger.

Across the top of the pit, a spiderweb of chains flashed orange-gold as every single one fired at once.

Had a living human somehow been in the pit, they would have died instantly, not from the cannonballs, artillery shells and grapeshot that filled the air in an almost solid cloud, but from the sound alone – or would have, had the muzzle velocity of Noble Phantasm-level artillery not exceeded the speed of sound.

Avenger was torn asunder. From the impacts, certainly, but in many cases the projectiles from opposite sides actually collided within her body, and the shockwaves blew even her iron-hard form apart like water. The instant after the cannon pit fired, there was nothing but a pile of fused projectiles glowing red-hot where Avenger had been.

Then it stood up.

"Oh, do you not need all this clay?" it said. Slowly, the cannonballs and shells melted and ran together, and the blue cuneiform that had been engraved on them became an angry red glowing script, promising revenge on the world in Medieval French before fading. Within seconds, Avenger stood again. "I'm more than happy to take it over, if you're sure."

"I won't lie, I'd rather you didn't," said Lancer, resting a hand on a magnificent bombard. "It does feel rather disturbing."

"Oh, well, have it back then."

One moment, there was a small armoured woman. The next, a messy ball of spikes, spears driving themselves deep into the earth that made up the crater sides. Guns broke, pierced by spears or bent – but not all. The largest remained, aimed, and fired again.

The ball disintegrated. But before it did, Avenger reformed herself from a knot of spears stabbing up towards the sky, and leapt upwards, slashing at the golden chains. Before she reached them, another coil lashed round her ankle, and Lancer slammed her down into the ground – or they would have done, had Avenger not reached out a hand and snagged a spear on the way down.

In the blink of an eye, Avenger became nothing more than a wicked-looking spike branching out from the spear she'd grabbed, and the chains closed on nothing. That spear, in turn, glowed a furious red – and then the one it was connected to, and the one connected to that, before one close to Lancer exploded, thorns branching out in a lashing frenzy. Lancer skipped back, and by the time they landed, Avenger had taken her human form again.

"That's an unfortunate trick for you to have learned," Lancer said. "I'd hoped it would take you longer to discard your human body."

"I rejected my humanity the moment I was reborn in the Grail," Avenger sneered. "If it holds me back, why keep it? But, yeah, if you hadn't shown me how, it might have taken me a little longer, so cheers for that. Seems like this body's really good at learning."

"Ah. Still, this pit will be your grave."

Avenger rolled her eyes. "How long before the lesson sinks in, Lancer? I'm invincible."

In answer, the guns fired – specifically, the old-time naval cannons. Avenger sighed and let it happen, clearly expecting to have to put herself together again.

Instead, chain shot wrapped itself around Avenger's body in a blur, and somehow wove themselves between a second web of chains which shot from Lancer's hands to link with the one covering the pit. Avenger was suspended, disconnected from the spears which were even now falling in pieces to litter the base of the crater. She struggled, and shot more spears from her body – but with a roar of gunfire these were disintegrated before they made it more than a foot.

"Yes," said Lancer. "Still, dodging is sometimes useful even so."

"You can't keep me here forever!" fumed Avenger – literally, smoke rising from her form as an impossible heat raged about her.

"No," agreed Lancer. "Just long enough."

And Serenity, recognising her cue, dropped silently from her hiding place at the top of the pit.

Observing this fight was, in some ways, the most difficult thing she had had to do throughout the entirety of the War. Lancer could tell where she was, and could try to steer their shots away from her and keep Avenger's attention on them, but it was only Serenity's skill that had avoided some of Avenger's more indiscriminate attacks – and, being frank, Lancer's sheer power was not gentle on those nearby either.

But Serenity had persisted. When the sky fell on Avenger, she had been out of the way, forewarned by Maiya (herself in constant contact with Kirei). When the two monsters had fought it out in close combat, Serenity had sought an opening while shockwaves tore at her skin. When Avenger had turned the area into a storm of blades, Serenity had used every ounce of skill and speed to stay one step ahead. When Lancer had turned a hill into a pit and then fired it at Avenger, Serenity had clung to the top, even as her eardrums burst under the pressure.

All of it, for this one moment.

She fell, utterly noiseless and invisible, not even a shadow to be seen. In her hand, she held a misshapen, kludged-together device – the Spiritron Dispersal Bomb.

It would – claimed Waver Velvet – completely annihilate all magic within its area of effect, which was a radius of three feet. All magic. All spells, all curses, all Bounded Fields, all spirits, demons, fairies, ghosts… even Ghost Liners were not unaffected, although erasing all but the weakest Servant was beyond it.

And, of course, it would unmake entirely the Dragon Core Stabiliser that was Avenger's foothold in this world.

It was the ultimate anti-magus tool, and there had been enough material in the remains of Caster's workshop to make six of them. Waver had ruined two in the process of figuring out how to repurpose Caster's designs, before settling on a bomb instead of a beam. They had tested one, to check if it worked and to find the all-important range.

In Serenity's hand, therefore, was one of their three last chances.

Like an owl stooping towards an apocalyptic mouse, she dropped, watching the cocoon of chains that held Avenger get closer.

Six feet.

Five.

She thumbed the detonator.

Four-

It happened too fast for even her to track.

Avenger's head snapped round, shocked and furious eyes meeting Serenity's. In the next instant, there was an earsplitting crack, and the chains binding Avenger snapped. Avenger grabbed a length of chain one-handed and whipped it through the air even before she started to fall. The end blurred towards Serenity-

-and smashed the Spiritron Dispersal Bomb to smithereens.

Avenger landed back at the bottom of the pit. Serenity snagged a trailing length of chain and scuttled along it to the shadows in a far corner, but the damage was done. Avenger's eyes tracked her.

"Presence Detection too?" frowned Lancer. "You really do learn quickly. I'm a little annoyed at how easily my chains snapped, as well… those were made to hold gods, you know."

"Well then, I'm as far from divine as it gets. No wonder they couldn't hold me," sneered Avenger, not taking her eyes off Serenity. "I'm no mere god. I'm the Devil herself."

With a swipe of her sword, spears rose from the earth. With the planting of her black flag, they set alight with a sinister red glow, and the heat of it set the air shimmering.

Avenger smiled at Serenity, and the malice in it made her skin crawl.

"Welcome to Hell, little murderer."
 
"Pointless. Pointless, pointless, pointless! You've seen this doesn't work! Why are you still trying?"

Lancer cocked their head. "Funny."
You know this is Gil's influence when the Chains of Heaven decide to fight someone For The Lulz.
Cannon dug themselves from the ground on every side, lining the crater like crystals in some enormous geode from a dream of war. Ornate bombards, modern howitzers and naval guns, all the way up to carronades lining the rim of the pit. All were beautiful, all were the pinnacle of human craft turned to destruction, and all were aimed squarely at Avenger.
… OK, we all know the TFS meme for this.
The ball disintegrated. But before it did, Avenger reformed herself from a knot of spears stabbing up towards the sky, and leapt upwards, slashing at the golden chains. Before she reached them, another coil lashed round her ankle, and Lancer slammed her down into the ground – or they would have done, had Avenger not reached out a hand and snagged a spear on the way down.

In the blink of an eye, Avenger became nothing more than a wicked-looking spike branching out from the spear she'd grabbed, and the chains closed on nothing.
Ah. Shit. That's a disturbingly effective manifestation of the Avenger Class' ability to take a hit and dish it back out tenfold.
She thumbed the detonator.

Four-

It happened too fast for even her to track.

Avenger's head snapped round, shocked and furious eyes meeting Serenity's. In the next instant, there was an earsplitting crack, and the chains binding Avenger snapped. Avenger grabbed a length of chain one-handed and whipped it through the air even before she started to fall. The end blurred towards Serenity-

-and smashed the Spiritron Dispersal Bomb to smithereens.

Avenger landed back at the bottom of the pit. Serenity snagged a trailing length of chain and scuttled along it to the shadows in a far corner, but the damage was done. Avenger's eyes tracked her.

"Presence Detection too?" frowned Lancer. "You really do learn quickly. I'm a little annoyed at how easily my chains snapped, as well… those were made to hold gods, you know."
Unless Jalter gets Chunni enough to call herself a Demon God, those were always going to be below full performance.

And Serenity very much has her work cut out for her.
 
Almost got her. Jalter proves too tough to catch by surprise this time, alas, even with the high ranking of Assassin's concealment ability. Guess they'll have to use one of the other two bombs.
 
"I'm no mere god. I'm the Devil herself."
You know, blasphemy right after causing a leader of the Hashashin to fail an assassination might be a really, really fucking bad idea. Last time Serenity fucked up like this it caused someone who might really, really not like that shit to show up, after all.
 
You know, blasphemy right after causing a leader of the Hashashin to fail an assassination might be a really, really fucking bad idea. Last time Serenity fucked up like this it caused someone who might really, really not like that shit to show up, after all.
Y'know what? That might actually earn her a bit of a Freebie from Grampa Hassan
 
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Chapter 56 - Die New
Chapter 56 - Die

During Serenity's training, she had been taught to scale sheer walls without making a sound and run at full speed over soft sand without leaving footprints. By the time she was twelve years old she could dodge arrows – by the time she was selected as the head of the Order she could do the same while standing on her hands. Her training demanded that she be one of the most agile and mobile people on the planet.

She'd gone on to use exactly none of it, because quite a lot of the rest of her training had drilled into her the idea that if she'd gotten to the point of scaling walls and evading the attacks of the guardsmen she would have already messed up unacceptably. Instead, she was taught to make use of her looks and charm and powers of persuasion to get close to her targets… or something they were about to eat or drink. Her tainted body had not come out of nowhere. Even before she began her hideous transformation, she was already an expert in the use and delivery of poisons, and had acted as a thousand nondescript serving girls feeding poisoned dates to generals or pouring clay flasks into palace wells.

As Hassan-i-Sabbah, she had not gotten into a single fight, or even really exerted herself outside of keeping her skill sharp. She hadn't needed to.

Hassan of the Serenity indeed.

All of which was to say that Serenity was very much not used to dealing with what might be called 'hard targets'.

She was somewhat regretting that now.

She leapt from her perch halfway up the side of the rocky pit an instant before spears slammed into it and crushed it to rubble. She ran along the shafts, surefooted as if she was sprinting down a street – and noticed the glow just in time. The spears lit themselves on fire just as she launched herself into empty space, and she felt the soles of her bare feet scorch.

The pit was already filled with so much flame that this hardly made a difference. Were Serenity not a Servant she would have found it almost impossible to see through the smoke, the heat haze, and the blinding glare of the fire pouring without fuel from every surface Avenger had control over. As it was, she was feeling the effects of her lowered Endurance. Had Kiritsugu been her Master still, she would have dodged by enough to not even feel the heat.

It wasn't worth worrying about.

With another deafening roar, cannons fired, and suddenly the spears were so much shrapnel. Down below, Serenity noted that Avenger had blocked the shots aimed her way with a solid wall of spears, although Lancer was barrelling towards it palm-first.

When they impacted, Serenity felt the shockwave even in mid-air, and the flames billowed madly – but she had no time to be rattled. The air around her was filled with broken metal, most still red-hot from the fire. Turning a full circle in freefall, Serenity batted it aside with her knives, though they chipped and cracked from the impacts.

They would be no use. Serenity had no sentimentality whatsoever towards her killing tools, and threw them away immediately – which was to say, she fired them like thunderbolts straight at Avenger. Getting even scratched by one would bring death to almost anything alive under the sun, because the poison coating her persona weapons was about as potent as it got – getting hit by one would be worse, because the force behind her shots was about the same as a ballista bolt.

Avenger barely spared them a glance before pivoting out of the way. Fine. That wasn't what Serenity had been after.

Lancer appeared in a rush of whirling hair in the path of the knives, and caught them neatly. With a crunch that could have been the knives finally snapping, they shoved them deep into Avenger's chest and twisted, before planting a bone-shattering kick into her sternum that had Avenger skidding backwards before she recovered and lashed out with another blast of focused, white-hot flame from her flag.

The fire was immediately dispersed by a cloud of cannonballs that thudded into Avenger's form, staggering her – and followed immediately after that by Lancer's fist curving down to smash her further into the rock. They followed up with an earthshaking stomp – but Avenger was already reforming on the other side of the pit, an X of crossed stakes melting into each other and taking her form.

"Poison isn't effective either, I see," said Lancer. "I hadn't really expected it to be, but it was worth a shot."

Avenger glared hatefully at Lancer – more hatefully than normal – and Serenity was very glad she'd hidden herself against the side of the pit once more, clinging to a soot-covered ledge half a foot wide. "I've got the same body as you, ya dingus. Why would you even think it was worth trying?"

Lancer opened their mouth.

"Oh, wait, let me guess. 'Funny'?"

Lancer closed their mouth.

"In a way I'm glad you're the first person I'm killing. Well, second." Avenger's hate-filled eyes snapped onto Serenity's hiding place. "Don't think I've forgotten about you. Whatever toy you think you have that can work on me, let's see if you can use it while impaled!"

Avenger slammed her flag on the ground, and once more spears lanced out from every available surface. Half of them were immediately intercepted by artillery shells or shredded by grapeshot, but some of Lancer's weaponry had itself been knocked aside by emerging spears – and when Avenger cackled and set them on fire, some of the thicker stakes were able to shove past even Lancer's counterfire.

This left a distressing number of sharp points heading towards Serenity, exploding out of the inferno below.

Still. She had not trained her entire life for nothing.

She jumped just as the first spear drilled into the rock where she'd been standing, and landed on the shaft – only to quickly swing herself under it and out of the way of the next. This time, she'd learned her lesson, and her feet had barely touched it before she moved, fast enough that she passed through the flame without feeling the heat. She dropped and landed on another, then cracked off a thin spike just above her and twirled it to bat away the next.

Further and further down she dropped, riding the spears as much as dodging them, swinging from shafts even as she dodged blades and ducked away from where the heat was greatest. Once more she formed her white knives – even if they could only last for a couple of blocks before breaking, that was a few extra seconds that she could survive, and a few feet closer to Avenger.

The pit looked like some crazed forest ablaze, or a flaming cobweb made by a bizarre military spider. Serenity mapped out the paths in her head, and navigated her way downwards, never more than an inch from death.

Avenger snarled down below – or maybe it was just a grunt of effort as she hammered down on Lancer's guard with her sword. Either way, she'd kept enough capacity to ruin Serenity's day, as every stake started growing tiny spikes along the shaft.

Serenity twisted in mid-air, aborting her landing on a particularly-vicious looking stake, and instead reached out to pinch the blade of a different spear between fingers and thumb. She was there for only a second before jackknifing her body out of the way of yet more emerging spears, then flung herself with only her fingers towards the next blade.

Before she was halfway there, she realised she'd miscalculated. Avenger's smirk grew wider, and she slammed both her hands on the ground even while dodging a kick from Lancer. The heat spiked even beyond the insane ambient level – and a storm, a wall of blades surged towards Serenity from the ground. She knew she'd never be able to deflect them all, or even dodge, in mid-air as she was. Avenger had her dead to rights, and she knew it.

Fortunately, so did Lancer.

Yet another deafening roar saw most of the onrushing spears reduced to splinters as the Noble Phantasm guns fired once again. Serenity was now dropping towards a hail of viciously-sharp shards, but that wasn't a problem.

The problem was the extra-thick, reinforced stakes plunging upwards towards her, pitted and scarred from Lancer's assault but very much intact. Serenity couldn't hope to succeed in breaking them where Lancer had failed, but if she had a knife that wouldn't shatter instantly she could at least block long enough to push herself out of the way…

Then she caught a flicker of gold in the corner of her eye, almost indistinguishable against the red and orange that made up Serenity's world down here in the pit, and almost laughed. It looked like Lancer had come to the same conclusion.

The stakes raced upwards, and Serenity spread her arms, as if to accept them…

… and the clay replicas of her own blades that Lancer had created slapped into her hands.

With blinding speed, Serenity slammed them into the side of the oncoming spike, and levered herself out of the way just in time.

Below her was just another spear left over from one of Avenger's previous assaults, a horizontal bar blocking her path, and Serenity brought both her knives down on the shaft. They cleaved through like an axe through dead wood, and she plunged past without slowing down.

Once again, she closed in on Avenger, falling through ever-hotter layers of fire. Down below, Lancer pummelled Avenger with artillery blasts, wielded as precisely as a boxer's punches – and in fact timed to be as awkward as possible to defend against at the same time as Lancer's own close combat strikes. Anything to keep Avenger's attention off Serenity for even a second longer.

Serenity touched down on rock heated so much it glowed like coal, and shot forward. Avenger's back was turned, busy trading earthshaking blows with Lancer. Serenity primed and flung the Spiritron Dispersal Bomb, then jinked right and made as if to close in on Avenger.

Avenger turned and flung out an arm at Serenity, and the very air exploded into flames.

They were gone an instant later as the bomb went off.

To a human observer, nothing happened. To Serenity's spiritual senses – the same thing that let her know when Servants were near – there was a horrific void of sucking nothingness, that instantly quenched Avenger's flames, stilled the roiling earth below as it was ripped from both Lancer and Avenger's control…

… and engulfed Avenger.

Avenger's arm froze in place, nothing more than a clay statue.

The rest of her still moved.

Serenity had missed.

Maybe it was the shockwaves, maybe it was Serenity misjudging her strength now that Maiya was her Master. Either way, she'd failed. There was no point dwelling on the mistake, only learning from it and succeeding next time.

… but as Avenger examined her now-frozen arm with interest, then turned a calculating gaze on Serenity, Serenity found herself really, really wishing it had worked. As she watched, Avenger's arm cracked all over, tiny pieces flaking off and getting caught in the updrafts of the incredible heat Avenger emitted. Beneath them was clean new flesh and steel – or clay imitating flesh and steel. Avenger turned her arm this way and that, examining it.

"Huh," she said. "That completely blew out everything I had animating this body's arm, at least until I pumped more power into it. I'm guessing I don't want to be caught in that completely, right?" She sneered at Serenity. "Well, fighting this chucklehead," she pointed a thumb over her shoulder at Lancer, "was already annoying enough without adding in attacks that might actually do something. So, uh, this has been real, but I think I'm just going to bail. Bye bye, have a horrible day."

She bent her knees – and then the ground shattered as she rocketed skywards. A maelstrom of spears rose with her, layers eaten away every second by the relentless barrage of Lancer's artillery but Avenger safe in the centre. Higher and higher she rose, past the top of the pit and past Lancer's chains, already shown to be useless against her…

…until Lancer's hand closed around her ankle. She swiped with her sword, but it broke on Lancer's skin.

"God, you're annoying," she said. "Fine! If you want me in your stupid pit so bad, let's go!"

With one hand, she reached out and grabbed part of the chains at the lip of the pit – she heaved her legs up and grabbed Lancer's robes with the other. The chains stretched higher and higher under Avenger's momentum, until with a mighty heave she hauled herself downwards.

Avenger and Lancer shot like bullets aimed by a vengeful god into the heart of the earth – almost directly on top of Serenity. She leapt aside frantically, just as Avenger slammed Lancer into solid rock with as much force as Serenity had seen anything hit anything else.

Rock lost. Rock fell.

Serenity awoke in darkness.



After the inferno that Avenger had made of the pit, the cool and dark of underground was like being plunged into icy water. Serenity swam – materialised still, she had to be to carry the all-important final bomb – through ground that even now shook from titanic forces unleashed deep below.

Eventually she emerged – into air, if not to light. Still, darkness was no obstacle for her. She crawled out from a fresh crack in stone slabs, covered in dirt. Her feet landed on stone, making no noise, and she took a deep but silent breath. Dust, cobwebs, old stuffy air… a cellar?

The ground shook once more, and a tiny piece of stone fell from the ceiling. It made no more noise than a whisper, just a tiny clatter in the dark, but even that was enough for Serenity to judge the size of the space by the echoes. Not a cellar, a catacomb. There had been such things under Kotomine church, hadn't there?

The dead held no fear for Serenity… well, unless they'd been resurrected by the Grail. But even as weak a Servant as her was far beyond any ordinary ghost, so she strode the catacombs without fear.

Serenity paused to put an ear to the ground, and shivered. Far, far beneath her feet, there was a constant grinding and pounding of stone and metal – and, though she may have just been imagining it, a peal of hateful laughter.

She would have been quite content to leave Avenger locked in subterranean battle with Lancer for ever, two monsters holding each other at bay… had she not been almost certain that Kyushu would sink into the sea before a week was out.

Perhaps that was being unfair. Lancer at least knew the risk in leaving Avenger unchecked.

Serenity checked over the last Spiritron Dispersal Bomb. It was, miraculously, in good working order. And so was the other piece of insurance she'd taken along – the final, final resort, untested.

For now, she would try to find her way back to the pit. The fact that Avenger was trying to leave it suggested that she, at least, thought there was a good chance of her being trapped and caught there. Lancer's job was to hold Avenger down – Serenity's job was to deal the killing blow. They had a plan, and they'd stick to it.

She walked on in utter dark, her mental map refreshed every few seconds by pieces of the walls dislodged by Avenger and Lancer's fight. She passed yawning voids where all sound vanished, picked her way across flagstones buckled and cracked from one or other of the epic impacts this poor hill had taken today, doubled back where the tunnels had collapsed entirely.

From the world of the dead, Serenity sought her return to the surface, just so she could willingly throw herself into hell once more.

Eventually, she saw it. Just a simple trickle of starlight, enough to count as 'pitch black' in any other time or for any other person. For Serenity underground, it was almost blinding. She made towards it…

… and the tunnel behind her exploded in a riot of flame and fury.

Serenity darted to one side, and barely avoided being gored by a spear of fire. Avenger stood in front of her, barely a hundred feet back down the tunnel. She blazed, lighting the catacombs in a hazy glow and making the statues cast bizarre flickering shadows on the stone walls.

So close.

"Right," Avenger said, covered in wounds that knitted themselves together as Serenity watched. "Now that I've got a few spare seconds, hold still and fucking die, please."

Serenity did no such thing.

As the tunnel was filled with more and more stakes, and the heat rose to unbearable levels, she ducked and wove and sprinted – towards Avenger.

A blade tore her upper arm. She ignored it – leaned into it, in fact, because it gave her an extra inch to avoid that spear thrusting in from the other side. Two blasts of fire rolled towards her, and she feinted left, then kicked off the opposite wall as they changed direction in mid-air to splash against the statue where she would have been. A stake pierced her foot, and she tore it free, ignoring the agony to just keep running.

Closer and closer she drew, and watched Avenger's smirk.

She thinks she knows what I've got up my sleeve, thought Serenity.

Good.

Serenity raced towards Avenger, using every trick, every ounce of speed and agility to stay one step ahead of her final onslaught. It was the least subtle approach to an assassination she had ever done. Had she not had the practice against Archer in their chase, just those couple of days ago, she would never have made it, but somehow she worked her way closer to her target.

When she was only ten feet away, Avenger smirked, and slammed both hands on the stone floor.

A phalanx, a wall of spears burst from the ground, filling every inch of tunnel and blazing so hot Serenity could feel her hair curl. She charged forward nonetheless. She had faith.

In God, certainly. But most of all, right now, in her partner – and in their Masters, who knew how to communicate with each other for just such a moment.

Just before Serenity reached the wall, it was ripped apart by the unstoppable force that was Lancer – who emerged from the floor like a breaching shark and pulled the wall of spears aside as if it were no more than a set of curtains. Avenger's face was revealed behind it, shocked.

The Spiritron Dispersal Bomb was already in mid-air.

Serenity watched in slow-motion as it sailed towards Avenger's chest – five feet, four feet, three-

Avenger's flag sliced it in two, then plunged into Serenity's chest.

There was a numb sensation, then one of loss, and Serenity knew her spirit core was pierced. Already the strength was draining from her limbs, and her vision swam – while both were, for now, far beyond human limits, she had only seconds. In the gold light of Serenity's dissolution, Avenger's smirk grew – and Serenity smiled with her.

Because this was the moment. Let Avenger think that the bombs were her last resort, let her think that Serenity was somehow unwilling to die to see her mission through. Ridiculous. In every era, in every battle, the moment you thought you'd won was the very moment you were most vulnerable to having your world turned upside down.

Serenity's hand was already drawing her last resort, heedless of the pain. In her hand, Emiya Kiritsugu's Thompson Contender felt as natural as if she'd been using it all her life, an Origin Bullet already in the barrel.

She fired – and the bullet missed by an inch as Avenger frantically ducked.

An instant later, Avenger's sword left flaming contrails in the air as it passed through the gun without slowing down. Springs and bolts flew, and the Mystic code fell, useless.

And just as Serenity had truly begun to despair, she caught a glint of gold once more.

She whipped her hand out to the side – and the clay replica of the Thompson that Lancer had just created fell into it. Serenity's hands blurred, gold sparks flying as she fell apart, drawing a spare Origin Bullet and loading it into the Noble Phantasm Thompson.

Avenger's sword slashed back in – only to be caught in golden chains.

Serenity fired her last chance directly into Avenger's chest.

Avenger screamed as her body went haywire, spasms wracking it and spikes shooting off in all directions. Even fired from a Noble Phantasm, the bullet hadn't penetrated deep enough – it was lodged about half an inch into Avenger's iron-hard form, and though it was wreaking havoc on her clay body it hadn't reached the core.

With the last of her strength, her body reduced to no more than the muscles absolutely necessary to get the job done, Serenity acted. She pulled out the knife Lancer had forged for her during this very fight, slammed it into Avenger's chest, felt it connect with the Origin Bullet, and then felt both connect with some device deep within, coiled where the heart should be.

She felt the device crack.

She felt Avenger's body go perfectly still.

And then she felt nothing at all.
 
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Did. Did the overpowered servant of this war defy all narrative convention and actually survive the longest?

Enkidu personality wise is a lot less likely to snatch defeat from the jaws of victory I guess.

Also the origin bullets providing the final blow is a very good one narratively speaking. This fic was all about the relationship between master and servant and thus even while dead Serenity's master helps to provide the final blow
 
Well. It took absolutely everything they had prepared, and then some on top of that, but it seems like they managed to score a critical blow on Due's body. Which means that if Avenger can still control her, it's going to take a lot more effort and might end up frying some of Da Vinci's systems along the way.
Downside, Avenger might still be able to do lesser grail nonsense. Which means she's still a (Walking? Floating?) self propelled vessel full of curses and enough mana and nonsense to annihilate the entire city and surrounding countryside if simply blown up. Are Kiritsugu's Origin Bullets capable of harming Avenger's self still in the Grail through her possession of Due? That's kind of what this is going to rely on.
It would certainly be thematic if Serenity's blow truly was what struck Avenger down for good.
 
Probably wouldn't mean much for Enkidu to win given, you know, the corrupted Grail. But given Enkidu himself can become a Grail if he has enough magical energy, if this is enough to take down Avenger then Enkidu can probably still grant Kotomine's wish. If it isn't, then maybe Enkidu's Grail can be used to conteract Avenger's...
 
She whipped her hand out to the side – and the clay replica of the Thompson that Lancer had just created fell into it. Serenity's hands blurred, gold sparks flying as she fell apart, plucking the Origin Bullets out of the air and loading them into the Noble Phantasm Thompson.

The Contender only fits a single shot (one of the sacrifices the design makes to maximize accuracy and be able to easily swap to multiple bullet types). You may want to rewrite this section to have Serenity carrying an ammo bag or something for the other bullets, and/or note that Enkidu's version of the gun can hold multiple bullets (but it really wouldn't be a Contender, then). Similarly, she couldn't mag-dump on Avenger later, as she'd need to reload after every shot (though given Servant speeds, that'd still be plenty fast).

EDIT: fixed typo.
 
The Contender only fits a single shot (one of the sacrifices the design makes to maximize accuracy and be able to easily swap to multiple bullet types). You may want to rewrite this section to have Serenity carrying an ammo bag or something for the other bullets, and/or note that Enkidu's version of the gun can hold multiple bullets (but it really wouldn't be a Contender, then). Similarly, she couldn't mag-dump on Avenger later, as she'd need to reload after every shot (though given Servant speeds, that'd still be plenty fast).

EDIT: fixed typo.

Haha whoops

Hold up then, give me a moment. I'm not much of a gun nut (I have people for that), so thanks!

Edit: fixed, hopefully this all makes sense now and preserves the feel I was going for.
 
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Huh? Nicely done. But then is Avenger actually dead since the body she was controlling was just a puppet? Or is she about to be reborn in the Lesser Grail? Or as the Greater Grail since there are now 7 Servant Souls collected in this Holy Grail War?

See this is my problem with analyzing this story before it is done. You're doing a Maelstrom Plot without knowing what a Maelstrom Plot is. This means that you are using all the starting pieces of it without being constrained by the story conventions of said plot to create something really interesting, challenging and new.

What use is a full analysis when all I can imagine it doing here is constraining your imagination?
 
Aww, Serenity didn't survive til the end. At least she landed a deathblow on Avenger? Good job, little poison assassin.
 
With the last of her strength, her body reduced to no more than the muscles absolutely necessary to get the job done, Serenity acted. She pulled out the knife Lancer had forged for her during this very fight, slammed it into Avenger's chest, felt it connect with the Origin Bullet, and then felt both connect with some device deep within, coiled where the heart should be.
"My poison! Right through your twisted soul! Take it! Take it straight to the Throne, you sickening pile of curses!"
 
With the last of her strength, her body reduced to no more than the muscles absolutely necessary to get the job done, Serenity acted. She pulled out the knife Lancer had forged for her during this very fight, slammed it into Avenger's chest, felt it connect with the Origin Bullet, and then felt both connect with some device deep within, coiled where the heart should be.
I think that's as plain and self-evident a demonstration of how Fate stories always resolve True Final Bosses that get spawned from backstory shenanigans and the Grail War going sideways. Three or more layers of Bullshit get packed into a martyrdom play, making a weapon attuned to that specific enemy nobody but the audience could have anticipated.
 
So Avenger falls due to Kiritsugu's Origin Bullets and the partnership between Serenity and Enkidu, gotta admit, did not expect this series of events. Bravo.

Now I'm curious what'll happen next. Enkidu won, and even if he doesn't use the grail, he can remain manifested without needing to Incarnate so long as he's got a contract with a Master as an anchor, due to the support of the planet handling the fuel issues.

So he might be sticking around
 
Did. Did the overpowered servant of this war defy all narrative convention and actually survive the longest?

Fourth War tradition - Gilgamesh was the only Servant survivor of Zero, after all.

Enkidu won, and even if he doesn't use the grail, he can remain manifested without needing to Incarnate so long as he's got a contract with a Master as an anchor, due to the support of the planet handling the fuel issues.

So he might be sticking around

Well, yes, he could. Enkidu has some Strong Opinions on the proper role of a Servant, however, as you might have gathered.

On another note, I think we've got about another chapter to go to deal with the immediate aftermath, then a couple of epilogues. I'm a little worried that it's kind of an abrupt end, but hopefully I should be able to tie off most of the loose ends theme-wise, at least for those who ended up being my main characters. So close!
 
Chapter 57 - Live New
Chapter 57 - Live

When the Core Stabiliser was broken, Avenger no longer had any control of the body of the homunculus Due. This did not mean she gave up. All her will was bent towards the dragon core inside her puppet body, attempting to wrangle it into remaining in the world through a mix of liberal magical energy use and sheer hateful willpower. Had it been a regular dragon core (if such a thing could be said to exist), she may even have succeeded.

However, this particular dragon core came from a rather peculiar dragon. It rejected utterly Avenger's attempts to control it, and forced the excess energy to vent as flame.

The results were… spectacular.



Maiya didn't need Kirei's satisfied report that the battle was won.

The pillar of fire erupting fifty feet into the sky, issuing forth from underground, was a pretty big clue.

Not that Avenger couldn't have done such a thing – by now Maiya would never put anything past that witch – but the fire felt cleaner, somehow, than the sullen orange infernos that Avenger had used. This felt almost natural, although anywhere where fire naturally acted like this was nowhere Maiya wanted to be.

Beside her, Kirei stood, and after a moment offered his hand. "Come," he said. "Lancer says there is still a job to do."

Maiya took the hand, wincing as Kirei hauled her to her feet. Her own palms and fingers had healed a little thanks to Kirei's magecraft, but they were still in terrible shape and any touch was an agony. Still, she appreciated the gesture, for what it represented more than anything.

Together they picked their way across the scarred and pitted battlefield where Kotomine Church had once stood. There was no hill any more, only Lancer's pit – but even outside it, there were craters and broken spears to mark Avenger's brief rebellion against mankind. As she passed one, Maiya reached out to touch one wrecked point, and drew blood. Even in death, what Avenger left behind was not gentle.

As they neared the flaming geyser, they saw Lancer standing unruffled on the edge of the pit, their hair blowing in the updraft.

"Welcome, Master. Welcome, Hisau Maiya," they said. "Master, as I promised, I have won you the Grail." They gestured behind them at the devastation of Kirei's home. "All that is left is to claim your prize." Lancer's face was in shadow, framed by the blinding light of the flames behind them. Like this, they appeared as some fey and mythical being, a creature not entirely of this world. Which, Maiya supposed, was exactly correct.

As they stared, a dark shadow appeared in the pillar of fire – a second flame within the first, that formed the shape of a cup. Before Maiya's eyes, the Grail appeared – the same golden cup that had destroyed the Einzbern Castle, burned her hands and killed Kiritsugu.

"Flame is flame, no matter where it may be. With the Lesser Grail in the heart of Avenger's flames, she can manifest it wherever her fire holds sway… or maybe she is simply exerting over a dozen Servants' worth of energy to manifest it regardless." murmured Lancer. "As you see, Master, the Grail stands ready to be taken. Give the order, and I'll seize the prize you have fought for. Didn't you put your life on the line for this moment? Didn't you seek to slay the woman next to you because she stood in your way?"

Maiya blinked, but Kirei made no move.

"And what would I wish for?" said Kirei.

At this, Lancer laughed gently. "Kirei, you're the Master here, not me. It's not my place to tell you that. Anything you like! You can, as Emiya Kiritsugu wanted, wish for a world of peace. You can, as your own nature desires, wish for a world of suffering. You can, as I suggested, wish to change yourself. So, what'll it be?"

Maiya stared into the Grail. There was a tension in the air, even as it scorched before her – as if the fire was waiting for a direction. Beneath the roar of flame there was a pregnant silence, that begged for a command to break it, until the urge to speak became unbearable. And, Maiya thought, she was not the one who had the right to speak. How much worse must it be for Kirei, from whom the Grail was awaiting a response?

Eventually, Kirei spoke. "A wish…" he said. "Made on this cracked and broken thing? I cannot imagine it."

Lancer said nothing, their face still inscrutable.

"I admit, Avenger fascinated me," Kirei went on. "A being born only to do evil – one whose very existence was a rejection of God. Why was she allowed to exist? Would she be allowed to exist? Part of me wanted to hold you back, Lancer, simply to see what she would do next.

"But then I saw what she was. How she acted. I was… unimpressed. Not with her power, although it did prove insufficient in the end. Instead, I was struck by just how petty her desires were. Simple revenge against those that wronged her, and against the world that let it happen. Was that it? Was that all that the ultimate evil could muster? It was too boring for words."

He raised his head and stared straight into the heart of the blaze, where the Grail blazed, its own corrupted fire struggling to hold back the cleansing flame of Tarrasque.

"I think I do not want anything this Grail can offer me. Corrupted as it is, all it can offer me is evil. And not even an interesting kind."

"Is that your answer, Kirei?" Lancer said. Their voice was deadly serious.

"It is. I will make no wish on such a Grail as this."

"Very well." Lancer whipped their hand behind them, and chains erupted from it. They plucked the Grail from the heart of the pillar of fire just as it guttered out, and Lancer roughly cast it on the blackened earth before Kirei and Maiya. It smouldered, but only feebly.

In its light, Lancer's face was visible. It was the same as it ever was – beautiful, calm, and unworried.

"So, that's it," Maiya said. "I… suppose we need to find some way of destroying the Lesser Grail now? And will that deal with Avenger?"

Lancer smiled at her. "Focused as always. Yes, and no. However, I have another question for my Master."

Kirei blinked, taken aback. "Is… is that not the end of it? I believed I had made my choice."

"You have. But life is a series of hard choices, Kirei. Living as a complete human isn't about simply making a single decision, but about forging yourself into someone who decides. However, this will be the last thing I ask you." Lancer pulled on the chains, half-raising the Grail off the ground. "I have said before that I can become any tool you want. And if what you require is a wish-granting machine, well…" they shrugged. "With enough magical energy, that is not impossible for me. There is enough magical energy within this Grail. So, once again I ask you; Master, do you have a wish to make?"

At this, Kirei looked stricken, and stared at Lancer as though betrayed. He looked down at the Grail in thought, clearly seeing something else in the sullenly burning metal.

Maiya almost said something, but as soon as she opened her mouth she felt a pressure on her – and speech became impossible. She met Lancer's green eyes, and they shook their head, very slightly.

This decision would be Kirei's own, clearly. His Servant would tolerate no influence on his unfettered will.

For almost a minute the trio stood in silence. Then, at last, Kirei chuckled to himself. Out loud, he said, "I believe I was overthinking this."

Lancer tilted their head. "Oh?"

"You say you can become a wish-granting machine. I do not doubt you. But…" Kirei looked at the sky, where the stars were still visible. "I think I can as well. And so can Hisau Maiya, and my father, and Waver Velvet. Each of us can become a machine for granting the most important wishes of all – our own.

"So, thank you, Lancer. Thank you for all you have done for me over the course of this War, winning it least of all. But I have no wish I want to make on you. I will do it with my own hands, or not at all."

Maiya was struck by the urge to interrupt, to blurt out that, no, in fact, there was a lot that still needed to be done and a wish could stop a thousand children like her from having to become soldiers in pointless wars… but in the end, this wasn't her wish to make. For better or worse, Kirei was the one who had emerged victorious.

The beaming smile Lancer gave at Kirei's words was like the sun coming out after rain. "Wonderful. Humanity never ceases to delight me." They reached inside their sleeve. "Maiya, I'm sorry for being forceful, and I know you're disappointed, but I thought it was for the best. As an apology, please accept this."

To Maiya's great surprise, they withdrew a Thompson Contender, and held it out.

"Is this…?"

"Sadly not. Avenger destroyed your master's own Mystic Code. Mine is a poor copy, lacking everything that made the old one special."

They met Maiya's eyes, and she understood exactly what Lancer meant. She felt the same way.

What made Emiya Kiritsugu's Contender special was not the power it held, or even the magecraft that could be worked through it. It was special because it was Emiya Kiritsugu's, and Natalia Kaminsky's before him. The sentiment, the history, that would never return, no matter how good a weapon this new one was.

It was a really damn good weapon, though, Maiya thought as she weighed it in her hands. That was Noble Phantasm quality for you, she supposed. With movements that had become instinctive, she stripped the gun down and inspected it, marvelling at how smoothly it handled – then out of nowhere recalled long hours sitting with Kiritsugu as a child as he taught her how to do this very thing.

The original gun was gone. But the memories and the skills remained, and that was the important thing.

She slid an Origin Bullet in to the breech and snapped it closed, then nodded sharply at Lancer.

"Thank you. I'll make use of it."

"Good," said Lancer. "Then I think you have your first target right here, don't you?"

She did. Without hesitation, Maiya cocked the Contender, aimed – and shot the Grail.

The agony of the recoil as it jolted her hands almost made her drop the Contender, and only the memory of Kiritsugu's training – "Never drop your weapon, Maiya, never, look after it and it'll look after you" – let her hold on.

With a screech that sounded uncannily like a woman's scream, the metal distorted into sharp-edged fragments. The flames flared up one last time… and then guttered out entirely. The Grail began dissolving into golden sparks, which flew away on the lingering updraft and then were gone.

Maiya shook her hands gingerly, then put the Contender away.

"Did it hurt?" asked Kirei.

"A little."

"Good," said Lancer. "Using a tool of destruction shouldn't be without cost, in my opinion."

Easy to say for someone who was a tool of destruction and invincible into the bargain, thought Maiya, but she held her tongue. "And has that dealt with Avenger?" she asked instead.

"Not quite," said Lancer. "But she is now powerless to affect the world… at least until the next Lesser Grail comes along. At that time, she will once again seek to manifest herself through it. Sadly, I think she does not have that much time."

Lancer stood, and faced the west, eyes shining gold. Their hair shifted in a breeze Maiya did not feel, and they extended one rough hand towards the wreck of Mount Enzou. Then they clenched a fist, and Maiya felt something shift beneath her feet.

There was a rumbling deep in the earth – and when it passed thing seemed… different, misaligned in some unidentifiable way. Lancer stood still for a moment, fingers and hair twitching. Movement caught Maiya's eye, and she had to look again as the trees shifted their branches in time with Lancer's motion. Birds wheeled overhead in strange patterns, and the wind shifted, bringing a scent of sea air.

After a few moments, movement ceased, everything settling into a new configuration that felt more natural somehow. Lancer's fingers stopped their motion… and then began to dissolve, just as the Grail had.

"Lancer…" said Kirei. "What have you done?"

"Nothing really," said Lancer. "Simply shifted the leylines, that's all. In time, the Greater Grail will cease to exist, without anything to power it. And without the Lesser Grail, Avenger can't lash out while the Greater Grail dies. Of course, that also means there is nothing providing me energy, either."

Kirei looked as distressed as Maiya had ever seen him. "But you can take power from the planet, as much as you need! As long as I'm here to act as an anchor, you can keep yourself alive!"

"Now why would I do a thing like that?" Lancer said, sounded honestly baffled. "The Earth has more need of that energy than I do, believe me. Besides, my work here is done – Kirei, you've turned out better than I could have possibly hoped at the start of the War. No, I have no reason to linger. This has been an interesting diversion, though."

Maiya looked at Kirei, who still seemed at a loss for words. "We'll make sure the Greater Grail is properly dealt with," she said. "Or I will, in any case. Will you help, Kirei?" Later, she realised that may have been the first time she called him by name.

"Yes… yes, of course," said Kirei, seeming to wake from a reverie. "I shall persuade Tohsaka Tokiomi to help. After Avenger nearly killed his wife and daughters, I cannot imagine he still intends to make use of a Grail corrupted by her… although this War has been full of events which I could not imagine. He may take a little persuading. But I will see this through."

"Good. Good!" said Lancer, now shedding sparks like fireflies. They formed a colossal cloud around them, over a dozen meters tall, as every scrap of the vast magical energy within the Chain of Heaven was returned to the earth. "Well then. I was never very good at parting, but I hope I have been an adequate tool for you, Kirei."

"A tool?" Kirei smiled. "Not at all. For my part, I count you as a mentor, an inspiration… and a friend."

Within the blinding cloud of motes, Maiya thought she saw Lancer's lips part in surprise. Then, with laughter so soft she could have imagined it, their form disappeared entirely, and the sparks spread out as far as the eye could see. The light faded, and they were gone.

Kirei stood silent for a long moment, watching the flow of the sparks over Fuyuki. Then, when he saw no more, he sighed, and straightened up.

"Well, that appears to be that," he said. "It seems I must pay a visit to Tohsaka Tokiomi. I think my father will be useful for this discussion." He paused. "… if you wish, you too may come along. As the one to deal the final blow to the Lesser Grail, you are not uninvolved – and as the inheritor of Emiya Kiritsugu's fascinating trump card, you may well be invaluable for the dismantling of the Greater."

"Thank you. I think I will come along, in fact."

"And after that?" Kirei turned and fixed Maiya with his dead-eyed gaze. Despite the dullness in his eyes, however, Maiya felt as through she were under a microscope. "What will you do? Where will you go? As I understand it, you have never been without the direction of Emiya Kiristugu. Now that he is dead, where does your life lead from here?"

That was the question, wasn't it? With the looming threat of Avenger, Maiya hadn't considered it. Being the Master of Assassin had already been unthinkable enough to try and get used to. The idea of what to do after Avenger's defeat had been a problem for later – and, truth to tell, Maiya had half expected that even with all of Assassin's guile and all of Lancer's raw power, Avenger would still prevail and take the decision away from her.

But 'later' had become 'now'. All Maiya's life stretched away ahead of her, vast and rudderless and confusing. She thrust her hands into her pockets, and suppressed a wince as her burned fingers brushed against the Thompson Contender in its holster. At the touch, though, she remembered her own words, what felt like hours ago.

It is quite alright to leave a legacy, Kiritsugu. People do it all the time.

"I think… that there's a lot of suffering in the world. Someone needs to do what they can to get rid of it. The hard way, if I have to." She laughed, quite to her surprise. "A shame that one wish-granting artifact turned out to be defective, and that the other wasn't mine to use! I understand why you threw away the Grail and Lancer's offer of a wish, Kirei, but I wish you hadn't!"

"Ah…" Kirei blinked, then bowed in apology. "I suppose I must seem very selfish. In fairness, I do not believe such a world gained by such a shortcut would have much meaning. The Lord already gave the world salvation when He sent his son – a perfect world already awaits, though we all must toil in this one to prove worthy of it."

Maiya waved her hand. "I'm not here to debate religion with you, Kirei. But I do believe a better world is possible, and I'm not about to abandon those who are already suffering." She thumbed the Contender in its holster – and felt, along with it, her purse, with two very special coins inside. "I inherited a legacy along with the tools to follow it, after all. And I have a certain child in mind in need of rescue."

"Worthy work," Kirei said, inclining his head.

There was a pause, during which there was no sound but the wind, testing out the new patterns Lancer had set out for it.

Then: "The Church keeps me busy. But, when I have time… I think I should like to see how a dead man's dream works for someone else. Perhaps it is, after all, just the thing I need in the process of changing myself. Perhaps not. Either way, I am willing to find out."

Maiya blinked. Was he offering…?

"I certainly won't turn down the help of a Church Executor," she said. "But, first things first."

"Indeed."

In the east, the sky was brightening. The smoke was clearing. The dust had settled. The new wind cleared the clouds ahead of it. The sun rose, and Maiya and Kirei stepped into it together, leaving the ruins of Kotomine Church behind.



For each Master, a Servant. For each Servant, a Master.

Two reluctant killers.

Two aimless weapons.

Two dignified leaders.

Two dedicated protectors.

Two loyal nobles.

Two genius newcomers.

Two wild beasts.

The Grail chose the worthy.
 
And that is that, with an epilogue to tie up everything I imagine?

Tarrasque was able to get his shot in in the end.

This has been an interesting timeline
 
Hey @Rob Rimsill? Tell me when you are done with this story so I can do a post-mortem on it. This has been a fascinating journey and one I wouldn't have chosen. I do however want to analyze it when I see all of it.
 
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