A Desperate Measure (Worm/Exalted Quest)

[X][Initiation] Master your foes, and you master the world (Initiation: Raksi's Teachings – When a nontrivial character expresses fear of you, or upon success of an intimidation roll against them, gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Fear is a tool")

[X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)
Danny needs a protection detail, and we can't count on the PRT.
 
[X][Initiation] Master your foes, and you master the world (Initiation: Raksi's Teachings – When a nontrivial character expresses fear of you, or upon success of an intimidation roll against them, gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Fear is a tool")

[X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)
 
[x][Initiation] There is an order to the cosmos (Initiation: Theanoan Method – As long as you're able to inscribe some element of the spell you're casting as a reflexive action, you gain 1 additional Will for every Focus Will action you take, to a maximum of 3 per arc. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "There are secret truths to the world, and I will know them")

Looking at this from the impact of her new intimacies trying to abolish all heirarchies might be ok right now but long term makes it impossible for us, the divinely blessed supernaturally skilled leader, to rebuild something better. It just seems straight up impractical for a solar. For fear as a tool I just worry about what having that as an intimacy will do to Taylor and her outlook and attitudes. Seeking secret truths might be a bit impractical at times but it seems less negatively impacting than the others.

I'm also ok with sacrificing the right something if anyone comes up with a good suggestion.

[x][Doggo Decision] Don't send the dog (in the future, I will assume you want to keep your hound with you unless you vote otherwise)

Sending the dog could well draw attention to Danny that he otherwise wouldn't have, plus it just seems straight up incovenient for him. I'm fine for sending it with him if we have knowledge of an active threat targetting him but day to day it seems a bit much.

[x][Cape name] Zenith
[X][Doggo name] Write in: Swift
[X][Costume] Modern-ish:
 
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@Profilozof This is NOT a plan vote, so please change your vote to be by task instead! Otherwise your votes won't be counted correctly. Sorry if the constantly changing vote structures are confusing for everyone, I'm still experimenting with the quest to try and find the vote structure that I like.
It's a deep lore thing, one of her past incarnations was Salina, who manipulated the entire Solar Deliberative to basically alter the laws of Creation so that it became far easier for people to access sorcery.
Yeah, when I realized you guys were a Zenith who was immediately diving into sorcery, I couldn't resist. For those who don't know the lore, Salina is also notable for being one of the premier sorcerers of the first age, developing one of the eminent schools/theoretical frameworks for sorcery. She was also a radical anarchist despite having an Exaltation built for ruling and living in an age where Solars ruled by default, which is pretty impressive too. We'll see whether or not you inherit her sympathies.

And on an unrelated note, everyone can probably expect updates to slow down a bit in the coming days. I'm really enjoying the quest so far, but my current pace is probably not sustainable in the long term.
 
[x][Initiation] There is an order to the cosmos (Initiation: Theanoan Method – As long as you're able to inscribe some element of the spell you're casting as a reflexive action, you gain 1 additional Will for every Focus Will action you take, to a maximum of 3 per arc. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "There are secret truths to the world, and I will know them")


[X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)
 
@Profilozof This is NOT a plan vote, so please change your vote to be by task instead! Otherwise your votes won't be counted correctly. Sorry if the constantly changing vote structures are confusing for everyone, I'm still experimenting with the quest to try and find the vote structure that I like.
Fair enough, but sidenote:

I am surprised people want to go for getting fear from named characters, while it is an easy way to get Will, it will also have an impact on Taylor's personality
 
[x][Initiation] There is an order to the cosmos (Initiation: Theanoan Method – As long as you're able to inscribe some element of the spell you're casting as a reflexive action, you gain 1 additional Will for every Focus Will action you take, to a maximum of 3 per arc. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "There are secret truths to the world, and I will know them")
[X][Costume] Casual:
[X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)
 
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Just reminding everyone that we also need a cape name, a costume, and a name for your dog! So far the cape name is tied between Lux and Zenith at one vote apiece, and the costume and dog name votes only have one vote each
 
Speaking of, what do you think of costume ver.1.0? And the name for doggo?
I like them both! I really appreciate that you provided a reference picture for the costume, though as you pointed out it won't be exactly like the picture if you go with that. I'm thinking white at the top fading to gold at the bottom for the coloration of the coat/robe (assuming this wins, of course. Right now there's no other costume votes, so…)
 
I like them both! I really appreciate that you provided a reference picture for the costume, though as you pointed out it won't be exactly like the picture if you go with that. I'm thinking white at the top fading to gold at the bottom for the coloration of the coat/robe (assuming this wins, of course. Right now there's no other costume votes, so…)
Yup it is very basic because Taylor doesn't have a budget or materials to make a better one. If we get to upgrade it in the future (I am not sure how gear works in exalted), I would like to add:
  • some armour or protective stuff to get across that heroes should get protection
  • gas mask just in case
  • Nightwing style taser+escrima
  • first aid Kit
  • pocket sand of power/s
 
Yup it is very basic because Taylor doesn't have a budget or materials to make a better one. If we get to upgrade it in the future (I am not sure how gear works in exalted), I would like to add:
  • some armour or protective stuff to get across that heroes should get protection
  • gas mask just in case
  • Nightwing style taser+escrima
  • first aid Kit
  • pocket sand of power/s
In general Exalted Essence is not super interested in tracking the minutia of your inventory, and frankly neither am I. I'm perfectly happy saying you have a utility belt with whatever useful things the plot demands (within reason; I might have you make a check of some sort to be prepared for items that are too specific)

The only gear that has, like, stats is your armor and weapons, and even that's pretty bare bones: armor is either light or heavy, and weapons are either light, medium, or heavy and have varying tags attached to them that modify them a bit. So escrima sticks would be a light weapon with the paired and balanced tags, for example.

I'm happy to say your costume counts as light armor if you, for example, wear motorcycle leathers under your coat or something. This would increase your soak by 1.
 
Long term I'd love to pick up Joyous Handiwork Genius and use it to make our costume for maximum impressiveness.
 
[X][Initiation] Hierarchies are to be abolished (Initiation: Salina's Humility – Whenever you spend a scene deliberately humbling yourself in service to those of lesser status and greater need, overturning the natural hierarchy of power, you gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Hierarchies are meant to be abolished")

[X][Initiation] Love is a weapon (Initiation: Bargain with Mara – When a nontrivial character expresses unrequited love, admiration, or obsession for you, you gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Love is a weapon")

[X][Doggo name] Write in: Sundered Rose

[X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)

[X][Cape name] Write in: Lux, (PRT somehow gave you a pretty good capename and keeping it will save them paperwork)

[X][Costume] Casual:
-[X] Lightly armoured
-[X] Gold highlights
-[X] Made for Urban traversal
-[X] Yang from RWBY inspiration
 
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[X][Initiation] Master your foes, and you master the world (Initiation: Raksi's Teachings – When a nontrivial character expresses fear of you, or upon success of an intimidation roll against them, gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Fear is a tool")

[X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)

[X][Cape name] Zenith

I don't want to go with the first thing the PRT called us, and I like the idea of the word calling to Taylor from her past lives.
 
If you voted earlier but only for a couple categories, I'd encourage you to weigh in on the cape name, costume name, and dog name votes

Edit: I've set the vote to end in two and a half hours. If there are ties when the vote ends, I will be picking from amongst the winners arbitrarily. Some amount of coin flipping may or may not be involved.
 
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[X][Cape name] Write in: Lux's Zenith (light's highmost point)
I think that's what the name would mean at least? Friends and most of the public call her Lux, people who are formal (like Armsmaster and the PRT) can use the full name and lose precious seconds of battle saying the whole mouthful :V Zenith for times when she gets pissed off or gets a little too, well Zenith.

[X][Costume] Magical/Modern-ish?:
-[X] something functional, with a robe/trench coat combo that's functional but no less distinctive
-[X] not too baroque, go for a simple design and warm colors evoking light, the sun etc.
–[X] consider adding abstract designs that evoque who she's become as a hero as time goes on (harsh edges for when she acts violent, wavy ones for when nice for example) all similarly centered on sun/light/warm/sky ideography
-[X] loads of pockets and maybe a basic aid kit later on when/if we get more money
-[X] Try some lower face coverings or sunglasses for now. Two choices for a mask either:
–[X] A power effect that can be applied to the face and make those who see us unable to describe how our face looks like after the fact (cameras only show a ball of bright light in place of where her face should be (definitely requires magic))
–[X] A featureless mask with no visible eye-holes that lets the caste-mark shine through nonetheless (probably requires sorcery or some nice bit of DIY, but I'd bet it can be done with mundane materials or toybox acquired ones)

I'm taking a bunch from @Profilozof's plan here, in my defense, it is a good plan and I only plagiarised it a little.

[X][Doggo name] Write in: Solana

In the southern Mediterranean levante is the name given to the easterly wind, it is also known as (wind of) solano, thus Solana.

[X][Initiation] Hierarchies are to be abolished (Initiation: Salina's Humility – Whenever you spend a scene deliberately humbling yourself in service to those of lesser status and greater need, overturning the natural hierarchy of power, you gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Hierarchies are meant to be abolished")

Canon!Taylor was a master, thus she had by default some serious issues with not being in control of... a lot of things really (capes who trigger as masters tending to desire control most above all), which is understandable but when your power is the one thing both holding open the wound in your psyche that caused you to feel that and is low-key keeping your psyche together as a result... things get messy. So her taking this path seems to me like a very interesting direction to take the character, which is also in someways surprisingly similar but feels to me... different, fresh in some hard to define way, I want to see where it goes.

From a mechanical POV I don't think it'd be so bad, pretty much most of what she'll do will fit under that category from a certain point of view. Something as simple as riding public transportation on patrol when not in a hurry or helping a homeless person get to the shelter in one piece while going through Empire territory could count. I think so at least. Am I at least half-right there @Amazing Abzan?

It's not like we'd have to grovel in front of our 'lessers' all the time and while this is a decision that will shape Taylor it's not like she has to always go about it the same way or like she cannot eventually develop other ways to gain Will. In point of fact, I'd argue that the more time goes on, thus the more powerful she gets, the easier it'd be to trigger the conditions for it. Is it not humbling for one who has battled Endbringers and made S-Class threats bleed to help an old lady cross the street?

The image it brings to mind reminds of both Superman (who could just dedicate himself to fighting world-ending threats and not the 'little' stuff), taking the time to rescue cats from trees and reasure the owners the feline is fine before he flies away with a smile; and of Spiderman being deceptively strong and powerful and having run with the capital A Avengers (seriously the guy holds back from using his full strength in comics from what I know because if he doesn't he might just accidentally some poor random robber, the people in his rogues gallery meanwhile are... well they are not slouches that's for sure) yet incredibly down to earth to the average New Yorker, who adore him because sure he has punched at least one cosmic being in the face, but he's still there for them.


Fakedit (you can skip this is just me shaking off the nerves of posting by writing some stream-of-conciousness panicky thoughts): *painfully sarcastic (as in I am in pain)* I love timezones because I will find out I just got out of my daily duties and crossed all 't's and dotted 'i's and then I'll be going to bed and I'll cluelessly check SV before bed because I found a really good quest that has actually made me invested in surprisingly few updates and it probably has no updates because it always updates at night for me and there was an update last night and the author, who lives half the world away is closing the vote in two hours, so I'll. just. write fast lmao

Really liking this quest thank you for writing QM. Sorry for coming in so late but uhh, time zones evil
 
[X][Initiation] There is an order to the cosmos (Initiation: Theanoan Method – As long as you're able to inscribe some element of the spell you're casting as a reflexive action, you gain 1 additional Will for every Focus Will action you take, to a maximum of 3 per arc. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "There are secret truths to the world, and I will know them")

[X][Cape name] Zenith

[X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)
 
Wow @AtelophobiaSucks thank you for that big post! This is my first real experience with public writing, so seeing someone put so much thought into this quest is really cool!
From a mechanical POV I don't think it'd be so bad, pretty much most of what she'll do will fit under that category from a certain point of view. Something as simple as riding public transportation on patrol when not in a hurry or helping a homeless person get to the shelter in one piece while going through Empire territory could count. I think so at least. Am I at least half-right there @Amazing Abzan?
You're half-right. Riding the bus wouldn't count, but helping a homeless person would. I had in mind things like working in a soup kitchen or cheering up sick kids in the hospital. You know, classic community service type stuff. Doing the neighborhood hero stuff of helping old ladies cross the street or get cats out of trees would also qualify if you're not using it as an excuse to go Solar!social on somebody. The key point is that it's humbling, a deliberate overturning of the natural hierarchy of power. That's what makes it sorcerously potent as opposed to just a good deed.
The image it brings to mind reminds of both Superman (who could just dedicate himself to fighting world-ending threats and not the 'little' stuff), taking the time to rescue cats from trees and reasure the owners the feline is fine before he flies away with a smile; and of Spiderman being deceptively strong and powerful and having run with the capital A Avengers (seriously the guy holds back from using his full strength in comics from what I know because if he doesn't he might just accidentally some poor random robber, the people in his rogues gallery meanwhile are... well they are not slouches that's for sure) yet incredibly down to earth to the average New Yorker, who adore him because sure he has punched at least one cosmic being in the face, but he's still there for them.
Not much to say here other than that I really love this image.
Really liking this quest thank you for writing QM. Sorry for coming in so late but uhh, time zones evil
It's all good, I'm glad you're here and I appreciate the vote! I love hearing that you're enjoying what I wrote, that puts a big smile on my face.

And in your defense, I don't leave much time for voting because I'm eager to get writing lol
 
Ya know what, I'm going to change my vote for intiation, I don't think it's the optimal choice but I do think it'll make for a more interesting story:

[X][Initiation] Hierarchies are to be abolished (Initiation: Salina's Humility – Whenever you spend a scene deliberately humbling yourself in service to those of lesser status and greater need, overturning the natural hierarchy of power, you gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Hierarchies are meant to be abolished")

And revoting for everything else so the tally counts it:
[x][Doggo Decision] Don't send the dog (in the future, I will assume you want to keep your hound with you unless you vote otherwise)
[x][Cape name] Zenith
[X][Doggo name] Write in: Swift
[X][Costume] Modern-ish:
 
Approval voting

[X][Initiation] There is an order to the cosmos (Initiation: Theanoan Method – As long as you're able to inscribe some element of the spell you're casting as a reflexive action, you gain 1 additional Will for every Focus Will action you take, to a maximum of 3 per arc. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "There are secret truths to the world, and I will know them")

[X][Initiation] Master your foes, and you master the world (Initiation: Raksi's Teachings – When a nontrivial character expresses fear of you, or upon success of an intimidation roll against them, gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Fear is a tool")
 
Vote closed
Scheduled vote count started by Amazing Abzan on Oct 15, 2024 at 8:18 PM, finished with 27 posts and 12 votes.
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    [X][Initiation] Hierarchies are to be abolished (Initiation: Salina's Humility – Whenever you spend a scene deliberately humbling yourself in service to those of lesser status and greater need, overturning the natural hierarchy of power, you gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Hierarchies are meant to be abolished")
    [X][Initiation] There is an order to the cosmos (Initiation: Theanoan Method – As long as you're able to inscribe some element of the spell you're casting as a reflexive action, you gain 1 additional Will for every Focus Will action you take, to a maximum of 3 per arc. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "There are secret truths to the world, and I will know them")
    [X][Initiation] Master your foes, and you master the world (Initiation: Raksi's Teachings – When a nontrivial character expresses fear of you, or upon success of an intimidation roll against them, gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Fear is a tool")
    [X][Initiation] Love is a weapon (Initiation: Bargain with Mara – When a nontrivial character expresses unrequited love, admiration, or obsession for you, you gain 3 Will. Taylor will gain the minor intimacy "Love is a weapon")
  • 4

    [X][Doggo name] Write in: Euruss (Named after god of eastern wind)
    [X][Doggo name] Write in: Swift
    [X][Doggo name] Write in: Sundered Rose
    [X][Doggo name] Write in: Solana
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    [x][Cape name] Zenith
    [X][Cape name] Write in: Lux, (PRT somehow gave you a pretty good capename and keeping it will save them paperwork)
    [X][Cape name] Write in: Lux's Zenith (light's highmost point)
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    [X][Costume] Modern-ish:
    -[X] but with more zenith colors
    -[X] maybe baton(s) instead of swords (if we can ger some)
    -[X] loads of pockets and maybe a basic aid kit later on when/if we get more money
    -[X] Maybe add sunglasses if there are any fitting ones in the house
    -[X]
    [X][Costume] Modern-ish:
    [X][Costume] Casual:
    [X][Costume] Casual:
    -[X] Lightly armoured
    -[X] Gold highlights
    -[X] Made for Urban traversal
    -[X] Yang from RWBY inspiration
    [X][Costume] Magical/Modern-ish?:
    -[X] something functional, with a robe/trench coat combo that's functional but no less distinctive
    -[X] not too baroque, go for a simple design and warm colors evoking light, the sun etc.
    –[X] consider adding abstract designs that evoque who she's become as a hero as time goes on (harsh edges for when she acts violent, wavy ones for when nice for example) all similarly centered on sun/light/warm/sky ideography
    -[X] loads of pockets and maybe a basic aid kit later on when/if we get more money
    -[X] Try some lower face coverings or sunglasses for now. Two choices for a mask either:
    –[X] A power effect that can be applied to the face and make those who see us unable to describe how our face looks like after the fact (cameras only show a ball of bright light in place of where her face should be (definitely requires magic))
    –[X] A featureless mask with no visible eye-holes that lets the caste-mark shine through nonetheless (probably requires sorcery or some nice bit of DIY, but I'd bet it can be done with mundane materials or toybox acquired ones)
  • 10

    [X][Doggo Decision] Send your dog with your dad (in the future, I will assume you want your hound on protective detail unless you vote otherwise)
    [X][Doggo Decision] Don't send the dog (in the future, I will assume you want to keep your hound with you unless you vote otherwise)
 
Alright, to break these ties fairly, I'm just going to pick the result that is listed first in each category. So your initiation is Salina's Humility, your dog's name is Eurus, and we're going with the "modern-ish" costume plan.
 
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