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The events in his 3rd year were the only ones where there wasn't an actively hostile person after Harry. He was just collateral due to Fudge's incompetence. That said, Snape not providing the wofbane potion when needed could be considered an attempt to get someone killed. As was Snape's actions when they confronted Pettigrew.
 
I believe the one that wasn't was the close encounter with the werewolf.
Pettigrew and Snape were both involved in the events leading to Voldemort targeting Harry as an infant (secret keeper betrayed the Potters, the one who handed over the partial prophecy in the first place...), and both were present and involved in the fiasco that led to the close encounter with the werewolf.
 
When you think about it, Harry Potter only really does a few truly Heroic things. Going to rescue Hermione from the troll is one. Going down into the Chamber of Secrets to rescue Ginny is another. And then rescuing Sirus Black in his third year would be the last one. All the rest aren't so much him being a Hero, as just trying to survive being an impulsive kid who just happens to have murderers after them.

That said, "I can't be a Professional Hero, because I'm not paid" was hilarious.
 
When you think about it, Harry Potter only really does a few truly Heroic things. Going to rescue Hermione from the troll is one. Going down into the Chamber of Secrets to rescue Ginny is another. And then rescuing Sirus Black in his third year would be the last one. All the rest aren't so much him being a Hero, as just trying to survive being an impulsive kid who just happens to have murderers after them.

That said, "I can't be a Professional Hero, because I'm not paid" was hilarious.
Gabrielle Delacour circa 4th Year, 2nd Task, would beg to differ (and would make the count of "girls who chase Harry" increment).

5th year, deceptive as it might seem, also had Harry indirectly save Arthur Weasley and try and save Sirius Black (which backfired horribly, alas).

Sixth Year would have him save... I wanna say Katie Bell, not sure if name correct, the girl who got nearly killed by the cursed necklace "courtesy" of Draco Malfoy.

Seventh Year... well maybe saving Malfoy from Fiendfyre counts.
 
Gabrielle Delacour circa 4th Year, 2nd Task, would beg to differ (and would make the count of "girls who chase Harry" increment).

5th year, deceptive as it might seem, also had Harry indirectly save Arthur Weasley and try and save Sirius Black (which backfired horribly, alas).

Sixth Year would have him save... I wanna say Katie Bell, not sure if name correct, the girl who got nearly killed by the cursed necklace "courtesy" of Draco Malfoy.

Seventh Year... well maybe saving Malfoy from Fiendfyre counts.
Yeah, Katie Bell, Seventh Year Gryffindor (at the time) and Chaser on the Quidditch team for all the same years Harry was Seeker.
 
Worm - Power Stealing?
Leet had decided that his power was too troublesome and had built a gun that would let him swap his powers for someone else's. The problem was that he needed an acceptable target, because he wasn't just going to trade with Über and saddle him with the troublesome thing. This led to monitoring police reports with a portable police scanner, and a parahuman-involved bank robbery sounded perfect.

When they showed up they were able to get into position. The gun had a limited-range parahuman highlighting system that worked through the cloud of darkness in the front of the bank, and with a single person highlighted there it seemed like a solid choice of target. Taking aim, he fired...and missed, the shot continuing on into the bank. Scowling, he corrected his aim and fired again...except this time the shot was dodged.

Pausing, he looked at the screen on the device. No locks, though he'd apparently hit some insects that had been discarded. That meant he was likely hitting the inside doors. Nodding, he took aim and fired twice more, both shots being dodged this time. Growling this time, he fired another two times, only for the parahuman to retreat further into the building and out of range. The other possible options in the area didn't look any better, too much chance of hitting a Ward, and...why was the gun heating up?

He barely threw the gun into a half-filled dumpster before it exploded, but Über hadn't gotten him into the car before they were suddenly blitzed and his vision went black.



Vicky had just dropped into the bank, and one of the villains had grabbed Amy...and then swung her around and out of the way of some kind of shot from outside of the bank.

That didn't seem very villainous, and in the process of doing so they'd taken the shot instead and had fallen over.

A moment later a second shot came through and struck Amy anyway, making it seem like that had been the goal, but instead of just falling over Amy had screamed in pain.

Getting Amy out of the way of any further shots was priority one, and Vicky focused on that...followed by the maybe-not-a-villain that had taken the first hit. Two more shots had come in and hit others while she was doing that, including one of the definite villains. Regent, she thought? Both of them had fallen unconscious as well, and she was more concerned about the young girl. But whoever it was hadn't stopped with hitting Amy, and she didn't fancy going through the darkness and hoping her force field could resist whatever it was, so she darted out through the hole she'd made coming in. That let her spot Über and Leet, the latter being the one shooting into the bank. She retained enough sense to make sure that they were the only ones that looked like they could've been firing into the bank, not wanting to go after the wrong targets or miss someone slipping away trying to frame the duo, and that had a bonus of giving them time to throw the gun into a dumpster where it exploded.

As they were now unarmed, she went straight for them, figuring that they could answer questions when they woke up in custody.



"This is a mess," Emily said as she looked over the information they had. "Four villains captured, except that Glory Girl stated that one of the villains seemingly-intentionally took a shot intended for Panacea. Something that the camera footage confirms, even after Panacea had delivered a hit with a fire extinguisher. The shot in question was from Über and Leet attempting to steal someone else's powers for Leet, supposedly unaware that Panacea was in the bank...but the security cameras show that the first two shots were aimed basically perfectly to hit the girl with the rest being more random after failing to acquire Panacea's powers for themselves. One had hit a boy dressed as Regent, likely formerly known as Hijack, but now showing no signs of having parahuman abilities. The young girl hit in the same pair of shots can make people around her twitch now. Cancer, but no powers, in the last two bystanders hit."

"And Armsmaster reluctantly admitted that the girl that took the first shot for Panacea had been heavily involved in taking down Lung," Renick noted. "But only after she said something about it to an officer."

"Have we confirmed if she has Panacea's powers?"

"She has a mild concussion. Nobody wants to risk testing it."

That...was honestly a very good precaution. "And we now know enough about the situation with her to make forcing her to do much of anything problematic. What of Panacea?"

"Still catatonic."

"Do we know why?"

"The other girl spent significant time in the hospital after her likely trigger event in January. It seems...likely that things were covered up significantly. Due to the concussion we can't use what she's saying against her, but she's rambled a bit about several topics, including a bullying campaign. One of the names that has come up is Sophia Hess. The assumption is that it takes time to recover from the sensory input of controlling bugs, coupled with Panacea having done something to screw that up further before the two were hit and that possibly causing additional issues when their powers swapped."

...fucking hell, this wasn't just a mess, it was a disaster. "Do we have any good news?"

"Not really. New Wave knows about the 'undercover hero' bit that Armsmaster revealed and is planning on offering the girl membership when she recovers...if only to get access to her assistance in helping Panacea learn to control her new powers."

That...wasn't bad news, exactly, but it was still annoying.
 
What I would find fascinating is Amy's take on this. She would be relieved and upset at the same time. All the expectations of her from Carol to heal are now on someone else. But at the same time, I don't see our Escalation Queen Taylor just healing with her powers. There are so many ways to break the setting with her new powers and Amy watching someone else do it Better would be kind of funny.
 
Aww, the explosion didn't scramble the Glory Girl, Über, and Leet powers?

But yes, I now wonder whether Amy and Taylor will be best friends or worst enemies like this. In a CmptrWz story I'd generally assume the former, but there are some very significant hurdles in the way...
 
It's interesting that Leet's power theft gun had a HUD which kept telling him his target dodged, when that never once happened. Why do I think that was Leet's power it's self dodging?
 
It's interesting that Leet's power theft gun had a HUD which kept telling him his target dodged, when that never once happened. Why do I think that was Leet's power it's self dodging?
No, Grue saw the first shot miss him and started dodging the rest. He can see through his own darkness. It helps that it's a sci-fi "traveling slower than the speed of light so you can see where it's going" gun. :V

Hitting insects on the way in is how Taylor shifted to keep Panacea from being hit.

That everyone else is assuming that Grue wasn't the intended target is another thing entirely.
 
Re: Worm - Power Stealing?

Fascinating

The fallout will be glorious!

And I can see Cauldron trying to claim/use the "power switching" gun/technology for their "plans."
 
So his gun was only really telling him about ONE parahuman in the bank it's self? And not showing anything else in the line of fire, such as civilians?
His gun's parahuman detector had a limited range that didn't reach all the way into the bank. Grue was shown as being able to retreat out of range, even.
And I can see Cauldron trying to claim/use the "power switching" gun/technology for their "plans."
Good luck to them recovering anything from the debris left over after it exploded.
 
Worm - Power Stealing
So that's Pandemic and Plague for the girls, I guess, just with reversed powers from theoriginal.

I could see Alec perfectly happy with a power that only wants to do any one thing once - whee's the fun in repeating a gag? Humor is only good when it's fresh!

I do wonder about L33T with Alec's powers, though. I guess he could keep to their gaming theme by piloting someone around as his "player character" to do whatever the heist of the day requires, but their MO to date was very much in the vein of a prop comedian, so without an ever-changing array of tinkertech they'll have to make some major adjustments. Of course, without the millstone of [Prototype]'s limitations to work around, they may well end up far more effective villains; Uber was a decent threat to begin with, and Hijack's master ability is nothing to scoff at when not being sandbagged like crazy out of laziness and the desire to keep a low profile -- if there's any slurs you can't lump onto the gamer goons, it's those two.
 
So that's Pandemic and Plague for the girls, I guess, just with reversed powers from theoriginal.

I could see Alec perfectly happy with a power that only wants to do any one thing once - whee's the fun in repeating a gag? Humor is only good when it's fresh!

I do wonder about L33T with Alec's powers, though. I guess he could keep to their gaming theme by piloting someone around as his "player character" to do whatever the heist of the day requires, but their MO to date was very much in the vein of a prop comedian, so without an ever-changing array of tinkertech they'll have to make some major adjustments. Of course, without the millstone of [Prototype]'s limitations to work around, they may well end up far more effective villains; Uber was a decent threat to begin with, and Hijack's master ability is nothing to scoff at when not being sandbagged like crazy out of laziness and the desire to keep a low profile -- if there's any slurs you can't lump onto the gamer goons, it's those two.
Actually, it seems that "first person shot and second person shot swap powers" is how the gun works. So Taylor and Panacea get swapped, then Regent and one of the normals in the bank get swapped, giving her his powers and bringing Alec down to normal, and then two normals get shot resulting in no new powers, but cancerous growths that might be it trying to grow a Corona Pollentia and Gemma.
 
So that's Pandemic and Plague for the girls, I guess, just with reversed powers from theoriginal.

I could see Alec perfectly happy with a power that only wants to do any one thing once - whee's the fun in repeating a gag? Humor is only good when it's fresh!

I do wonder about L33T with Alec's powers, though. I guess he could keep to their gaming theme by piloting someone around as his "player character" to do whatever the heist of the day requires, but their MO to date was very much in the vein of a prop comedian, so without an ever-changing array of tinkertech they'll have to make some major adjustments. Of course, without the millstone of [Prototype]'s limitations to work around, they may well end up far more effective villains; Uber was a decent threat to begin with, and Hijack's master ability is nothing to scoff at when not being sandbagged like crazy out of laziness and the desire to keep a low profile -- if there's any slurs you can't lump onto the gamer goons, it's those two.

Leet didn't actually swap his powers with anyone. What his gun actually did was swap powers between two targets hit in sequence (or cause cancer if neither had powers). Thus Alec no longer is a parahuman, and some rando bystandar now has his power. Which he may not have realized is the case. So he'd have had to shoot Grue, Then shoot himself to swap powers. But again, I think Leet assumed the swap would occur when he hits his target, thus wasn't aware that each pair of shots had an effect. He was assuming he hit doors or door frames.
 
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