More specifically, what did you think about the glimpse of cultivation you got?
I'm a little surprised how physically conditioned the transition to a new decade is. To be honest, I thought it would be some kind of spiritual enlightenment in understanding God and his works in the world. But instead, the transition was more like an alchemical process where, under the pressure of the soul, Zeal moved to a qualitatively new level.

I also didn't quite understand the line about the fact that the transition to the third decade allows the transformation of Fervour into Zeal on its own. Couldn't we have done it without a mentor?
 
I also didn't quite understand the line about the fact that the transition to the third decade allows the transformation of Fervour into Zeal on its own. Couldn't we have done it without a mentor?
It's probably an in-universe thing that doesn't affect us, the players, so it hasn't really been mentioned. Like if we were playing a more standard cultivation quest we would just have our guy go cultivate, we wouldn't tell him to specifically go clear out his meridians, then make a core, etc. Here, Audrey just cultivates Zeal through whatever method she does, and we just get the end result as the specifics of how she cultivates don't really matter.
 
It's probably an in-universe thing that doesn't affect us, the players, so it hasn't really been mentioned. Like if we were playing a more standard cultivation quest we would just have our guy go cultivate, we wouldn't tell him to specifically go clear out his meridians, then make a core, etc. Here, Audrey just cultivates Zeal through whatever method she does, and we just get the end result as the specifics of how she cultivates don't really matter.

The equivalents of this sort of thing will matter more going forward, the transition through the Second Decade and even hitting Third is just a lot simpler than progression through the Third and higher winds up being. I'll leave it to IF to give details as this is more his area and I'd likely get some details wrong, but actual cultivation in the 'additional Beads and Decades' sense is about to become a bit more complicated, though not, I think, in an onerous way.
 
I also didn't quite understand the line about the fact that the transition to the third decade allows the transformation of Fervour into Zeal on its own. Couldn't we have done it without a mentor?
Christian cultivation relies on having 'shepherds' to 'guide the flock'. If Audrey did not have a teacher, she could not gain Zeal.

edit: Now that Audrey has reached the Third Decade, she can gain Zeal on her own.

I'm a little surprised how physically conditioned the transition to a new decade is. To be honest, I thought it would be some kind of spiritual enlightenment in understanding God and his works in the world. But instead, the transition was more like an alchemical process where, under the pressure of the soul, Zeal moved to a qualitatively new level.
So, the enlightenment stuff comes later. Remember that there are 15 Decades to get through. You don't start climbing a mountain from the top, after all. (and also I am only so creative, lmao, I will run out of wondrous enlightenment scenes sooner or later)

The way I see it, fervor is a naturally 'hot' and 'active' substance, able to fuel things for little cost thanks to its fiery nature. Zeal, on the other hand, is 'cool' and 'stable', which provides a solid foundation for learning and progression.

If you're super fiery and energetic, pumped up with your fervor, you're probably going to have a hard time sitting down and actually learning the truth of God's Creation. Being calm and collected, running on your quiet zeal and confident faith, allows for a much greater learning ability.

Theoretically, you could build a foundation with fervor alone, but it wouldn't be stable at all.

Fervor has its place, of course. Zeal, by nature of its stability, is a poor energy source. It first needs to be broken down into fervor before it can be used in battle and the like. Fervor has no such limits, able to quickly leap into action at a moment's notice.

The convert's fervor versus the theologian's zeal, if you will.
 
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So, the enlightenment stuff comes later. Remember that there are 15 Decades to get through. You don't start climbing a mountain from the top, after all. (and also I am only so creative, lmao, I will run out of wondrous enlightenment scenes sooner or later)

The way I see it, fervor is a naturally 'hot' and 'active' substance, able to fuel things for little cost thanks to its fiery nature. Zeal, on the other hand, is 'cool' and 'stable', which provides a solid foundation for learning and progression.

If you're super fiery and energetic, pumped up with your fervor, you're probably going to have a hard time sitting down and actually learning the truth of God's Creation. Being calm and collected, running on your quiet zeal and confident faith, allows for a much greater learning ability.
Hmm, these descriptions put me in the mind of humors which is very interesting.
 
Hmm, these descriptions put me in the mind of humors which is very interesting.
It's also a ringer for some of the aspects of Yin and Yang, albeit clearly not meant in the same dualist fashion. Rather than a balance, one flows into the other. I'm not super familiar with the xianxia genre but it seems appropriate that Christian Cultivation has something that on the surface resembles an aspect of Taoist Cultivation, but with an utterly divergent perspective.
 
It's also a ringer for some of the aspects of Yin and Yang, albeit clearly not meant in the same dualist fashion. Rather than a balance, one flows into the other. I'm not super familiar with the xianxia genre but it seems appropriate that Christian Cultivation has something that on the surface resembles an aspect of Taoist Cultivation, but with an utterly divergent perspective.
Funnily enough, a lot of xianxia isn't actually all that close to actual Taoist thought.
 
One fun revelation IF had in our discussion chat was how incredibly well suited to Cultivation stories Christian Theology actually is.
 
One fun revelation IF had in our discussion chat was how incredibly well suited to Cultivation stories Christian Theology actually is.
Christianity, especially as imagined by the scholastic traditions of the middle ages, is all about spiritual ascent and by various means rendering oneself spiritually closer to God, both through ritual and training/education. Combine that with the supernatural feats ascribed to warriors and often credited to God's miraculous intervention in the legendary literature of the time and I'm not remotely surprised this concept came together as well as it has.

Funnily enough, a lot of xianxia isn't actually all that close to actual Taoist thought.

Yeah I'm not under the impression anything I read in a Xianxia story remotely reflects Taoism as a spiritual or religious practice or theory. It just kind of takes the cosmological concepts and runs with them.
 
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Turn 6.1 - Gilbert's Troubles
Now that Audrey has stepped into the Third Decade, cultivation takes on a radically different shape. Rather than simply learning to convert Fervour into Zeal—and strengthening the soul towards that goal—Audrey now must make a temple of her being. Materials, infused with Zeal and high in quality, must be accepted into her soul so that she might construct a home for the Holy Spirit.

Her family should send her a minor stipend for her birthday, which will go far in acquiring materials of high enough quality in sufficient amounts.

Huh, when was the last time she thought about her family?

A frown tugs at the corners of Audrey's mouth, the wind tousling her hair as she rests elbows against a balcony. Down below, on the ancient Roman-paved streets of Warwick, the teaming mortal masses go about their every-day. Children carry groceries as their parents barter for fractions of pennies. Craftsmen trade wargear for wealth with the ever-present, world-trotting mercenaries seeking fame and fortune in the conflicts between Norse and Anglo-Saxon. Hammers strike metal in the Warwick mint, the first of two in Warwickshire.

Even so far away from Charmouth, the day-to-day lives of the mortals is just about the same here as it was back home. Of course, there is one major difference between Warwick and Charmouth; here the banner of the Waerings flutters from every terrace and tower, here the only Eotenslaga is her.

The groan of a creaking door rips Audrey from her thoughts as a round-cheeked face blinks in shock and surprise. Gilbert of Loxwale freezes in the doorway, the dark steps leading into the blacksmith's shop below silhouetting his small and slight frame perfectly.

"O-oh," Gilbert manages to stutter out as his fingers knit themselves into nervous knots. A slight wince crosses his face as he brushes against some tender spot on his hands, "sorry, I didn't know you'd be here." He pauses for a moment before making to back out, "S-sorry for bothering you."

Audrey blinks and purses her lips, brows digging a shallow trench on her forehead. "Whatever are you apologising for?" Internally, Audrey allows herself a pat on the back for nailing her mother's style of speech; all proper and precise and grown-up.

"Oh, well," Gilbert struggles down a swallow as he seems to wilt in on himself, "I-I was just wanting to, well, do a little, um," he rubs at the back of his neck, "people watching?"

"People watching?" Audrey hums to herself before nodding, "Makes sense, this is a spot well-suited for it."

"Yeah," Gilbert nods quickly, seemingly finding his footing, as he repeats Audrey's words back to her, "it's a really good spot!"

Truer words have never been spoken. A private little balcony above a storefront owned by a skilled blacksmith—the same smith who maintains Audrey's wargear—there are few spots in the entire town more equipped to watch people go about their business.

Silence falls as the spark of upbeat tempo in Gilbert's stance fails to catch. He crumples back inwards, shoulders falling forwards as he slouches and struggles to make eye-contact.

Audrey frowns, which summons a wince from her companion. There's something wrong with Gilbert. A nervous boy he may be, but this is a new level far beyond the anxiety he's displayed before.

"Well," Audrey says as she turns back to her lean, "don't mind me."

Gilbert hastens to her side, only to freeze as something falls from his clothes. Spiralling through the air is a lightly-charred and leather-bound book. But, rather than the pristine pieces of parchment decorating Audrey's abode, the dirt-stained pages are torn and crumpled while the covers are scoured and beaten, the indent of a boot-clad foot pressed into the leather. The spine looks like it might fall apart at any moment, much in the same way Gilbert's spine trembles as his gaze darts from Audrey to his book.

Bending over, Audrey scoops up the book as she gently holds it between her hands. Carefully opening the worn covers, the contents of the book make itself known. The pages are slightly scorched at the corners, though quick action saved more than it failed. Though smeared by rough handling, the skill used in these charcoal sketches still shines through like sun rays through a cloudy sky.

A quick glance at Gilbert's fingers—stained with flecks of charcoal and smelling slightly of smoke—confirms Audrey's suspicions. This is Gilbert's sketchbook and someone tried to destroy it; multiple times, in fact, if the age of the foot-imprint and the recency of the smoke-smell is anything to go by.

This cannot continue.

"Gilbert," Audrey begins with slow, careful words as Gilbert gulps, "who did this to your book?"

"N-nobody!" Gilbert hastens to answer, his words nothing but lies. "I-it just, um, fell into a f-fire!"

Audrey blinks, once, long and slowly, before answering with flat words and an even flatter stare, "Gilbert, does your Knight know about this?"

Gilbert freezes, his teeth clamping shut as his eyes widen in fear, "Y-you can't tell him! P-please, please, you can't. Promise you won't, a-and I'll tell you!"

Audrey frowns as she considers Gilbert's words. Her gut conjures up a memory of a hostile stare; she's pretty damn sure she knows who did it. She doesn't need to promise Gilbert anything.

However, it would surely damage her relationship with Gilbert if she went over his head like that.

What does Audrey do?
[ ] Promise Gilbert to keep this a secret
[ ] Withhold the promise

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AN: And so begins some Fun.
 
[X] Promise Gilbert to keep this a secret

Even if we don't tell anyone, we can just help Gilbert on our own. It's time to make enemies, friends and do righteous deeds to the best of our abilities.
 
There's also the weirdness of the Norse 'Realm 0' of non-Odr cultivation which is just...not a functional thing for Carolingians, or not very functional anyway. They need Zeal to be real cultivators at all.
True, it would probably be best to think of Realm 0 as the equivalent of decade 1 through 3 (in realm, definitely not in power since Realm 0 describes everyone from that kid we killed in the ice lake fight to Steinarr) with Realm 1 being the equivalent of hitting decade 3 and finally building your inner world.
 
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[X] Promise Gilbert to keep this a secret

Audrey now must make a temple of her being. Materials, infused with Zeal and high in quality, must be accepted into her soul so that she might construct a home for the Holy Spirit.

I was wondering if the inner Church soul stuff that we once saw in Gabriel's interlude got nixed, bur it seems like that is a more advanced Carolingian thing.
 
heck yeah, we should go on adventures to get better building materials. this is a cultivation quest, so focusing on our foundation should bring benefits.
 
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