Omake: A Champion of the Lowly (non-canon)
A Champion Of The Lowly

The soft rain pattering against the cracked and dirty concrete outside of my little nook in the alley did little to soothe my mind as it usually did, with not even the lit cigarette in my hand and its smoke coursing through my lungs offering any ease as it usually did. Just my luck, those were the expensive ones. The ones I always smoked to calm down when...when it happened again.

My hands began to shake slightly as I remembered the girl, huddled in her shower, weeping, and how she had looked when I helped her inside. Bruises all over her. Split lip, swollen eye, shallow cuts by a knife held against her throat and skin, cracked ribs and blood everywhere, cyberware smashed and tearing...elsewhere.

And for what?! Because she was "too costly for that cheap a cunt?!" Too "uppity for a thrash alley joytoy?!" Because she had dared to sell sex so she could make ends meet! Because she was just a mere whore that one could do almost anything with because no one cared! My hands shook with anger, and I tried to get them to stop. I had seen dozens like her, some in worse states, some dead. What happened to her wasn't unusual, so why was it making me so angry?

"Maybe," a calm male-ish voice said near me, ripping me out of my thoughts and startling me, "because you haven't noticed how long you were at 59?" My hand was already on my gun, smoke in a puddle, as I looked at the exotic borg wearing weird tatters as clothes that had managed to sneak up on me. How? Lynx paws, maybe? Though, looking at...him(?), I didn't see any (obvious) weapons, and mine sure as shit couldn't penetrate a Borg. If he wanted to kill or abduct me, the best I could do was scuff his white paint job. However, I forced myself to calm down. He may just be a John looking for some talk before fun, and, looking at him, I couldn't exactly say I was opposed to that...if not right now. Then his words registered in my mind as I looked at his six arms, slowly moving in strange poses with his speech.

"59? What the hell does that mean? If you're a customer, I'm currently helping a friend right now. Come back later or wait ten." That...got me a friendly chuckle. Weird, never got a chuckle for telling a John to wait. Cackles or laughter before I had to pull and make my point clear, but not a chuckle.

"People rarely go from 0 to 60. If they do, one has failed to notice how long they were at 59. But, enough about that," the exotic borg said, shaking his head, his arms and hands moving with his speech. "You are upset about what happened to that girl, are you not?"

Upset? Upset?! "I am fucking livid, is what I am!" I yelled, not caring that the exotic could likely pull me limb from limb without breaking a sweat, his flippant tone pissing me the fuck off. "We sell our bodies just like anyone else in this God damned city, but just because we sell our holes and dicks and not souls and body parts, everyone thinks they can do whatever the hell they want! Do you have any idea how common this shit is?! I am lucky that the worst I had happen to me was someone "sampling the goods before buying" instead of beating me half to death and having their way with me!" The borg didn't move much but merely nodded.

"And what happens to those who do such things to you and yours? Does the police not arrest them, or do the Mox not visit justice's due upon them?" I stared at him for one, baffled, second. Then I laughed. It was an ugly laugh, the kind you had in the face of fear, from stress, or anger.

"Justice? You think there is justice in this cesspit of a city?!" I mocked, anger swelling up inside me at the utterings of this absolutely naive idiot. How the hell had he survived long enough to scrape together the eddies for a full Borg body? Cause he sure as shit doesn't look like a rich corpo fuck. "Even if we went to the police with a goddamn address of the fucker and video evidence, we'd be lucky to bribe even one cop to take action! And the Mox," I growled, my hands balling into fists, "are self-serving whores that wouldn't lift a finger if a joytoy is being beaten to death before their eyes if they don't pay their prices." I stopped talking, trying to calm myself down with deep breaths like they always do on the shows or in the books. It barely worked, pushing that bonfire of rage down into the pit where it always was. "The only justice to be found for us is at the end of our guns. And good luck finding the people, eddies, or the weapons for that if the assholes are part of the major gangs and you don't even fully own your own body."

"And if you had the people," the borg spoke calmly, his voice doing far more to calm me down than the breaths to my, hidden, irritation, "the weapons, or...the eddies. Would you hunt those criminals so they will be judged and sentenced for their crimes?"

"Just so that a corrupt judge is bought by them, or some fucking lawyer spins what they did to be legal before the law?" I sarcastically asked with a scoff.

"I DID NOT ASK IF YOU WOULD FOLLOW THE LAW." A voice spoke. I turned my head. And my entire body froze.

And I beheld glowing divinity.

"I asked," the divine...thing before me continued in a softer voice, though my body still didn't move, "if you would hunt those that committed heinous crimes, such as the one that broke the spirit of the woman you consoled, helped, and healed. If you ensure that justice, wrought by divine judgment and not mortal law, is visited upon them. And if you would do so, again and again."

I stared.

And then the words settled in. "You...you w-what? You want me, me to-to," I stammered, trying to make sense of what was being asked of me. "But, I am just a-"

"A prostitute," the divinity spoke, nodding. And yet, what struck me the most was that there was no judgment in his words, or posture. As if he had just stated a fact. "And," he continued, "a woman angry at the world. Angry at injustice, the wrongness of a world where the weak suffer. Angry at a perceived powerlessness to change a cruel world to a just one."

"Perceived?" I asked, control over my mouth and limbs slowly returning to me. The divinity nodded.

"You did not act, not because you couldn't, but because you feared the consequences of failing...or succeeding. And I intend to give you the choice," he spoke, a hand reaching out to me, empty palm up. "To strike back against those who do injustice against those they feel superior to, to bring hope for a better world for all who will be saved by you, and to become a beacon of justice that will banish injustice wherever your name is uttered."

"Why?" That was all my throat could produce; whatever shock I had now replaced by fear...and suffocating hope that this was real and that I wasn't lying in a ditch, hopped up on drugs and dying.

"Because you have the will to try and change the world." He spoke. "You merely lack the means. And I will clad you in such armor as to shield you from all harm, shall give you such weapons and teach you such tactics so that none can best you, and lift you up to become a champion of Justice, true, unblemished, and eternal." The glow diminished, though flickers of it still lingered around him. "However, I will not force you to make a decision now or even today," he spoke, slowly vanishing from my sight, "but I will leave you with knowledge as a parting gift. How you act on it will be your decision, to its contents and a future working for me."

He vanished utterly, and I blinked. Then, I blinked again, a face, an address, and a time suddenly within my mind, and the knowledge that this man had raped the girl I had helped. And...when he would be alone.

I looked at my gun.

And clenched my hand around its grip.


AN: Just a thing that popped into my mind and got written out while at work. Yes, I know it won't change the vote, and is likely not what the QM intended for the option, but I can still write, dammit!
 
AN: Just a thing that popped into my mind and got written out while at work. Yes, I know it won't change the vote, and is likely not what the QM intended for the option, but I can still write, dammit!
Get sidestory'd boiiiiii

I, for one, am extremely supportive of this Omake being 100% canon. Which option is this supposed to map too?

Because she was just a mere whore that one could do almost anything with because no one cared! My hands shook with anger, and I tried to get them to stop. I had seen dozens like her, some in worse states, some dead. What happened to her wasn't unusual, so why was it making me so angry?

Also I am weirdly reminded of Jacqueline, who I unironically describe as Robin Hood meets Reverse Jack The Ripper- executing corrupt nobles to provide power and wealth to the lowly masses. God, if I wasn't already busy, I would totally write Phantasmal Divinity...

Also I've had this whole "Brothel Manager who is actively highly supportive of his girls and genuinely believes the world would be better without men"- because of stuff like what was mentioned in this Omake. Man, all those terrible clients being cursed(?) so all their descendants would be female no matter what seems like such an interesting punishment.
 
@TennoTurian writing is hard work, and I've seen too many people take it for granted. Is there any particular reason why Aves couldn't have reached out to two individuals? Could even tie into how Aves barely did anything in the Omake, keeping it an internal secret that trying to split his attention between two separate candidates was actually really difficult for his current level. I could definitely believe Aves wanting to pick all three and trying his hardest to make it happen.
 
Is there any particular reason why Aves couldn't have reached out to two individuals?
IMO, gameplay reasons being turned into narrative. Also, we seem to pick up not mere base followers of our faith, but "Heroes/Champions" so to speak, with Tanner Montoya playing the role of either an Agent, Champion, or Avatar Candidate, and Tano Asa a Cleric for our faith.

And also, Aves has, like, two people actively praying to him, with a full 50% being still weirded out by the whole thing. Give it time, and we'll be consecrating whole congregations to the path of Justice.
 
And also, Aves has, like, two people actively praying to him, with a full 50% being still weirded out by the whole thing. Give it time, and we'll be consecrating whole congregations to the path of Justice.

That's not fair, you put in so much effort into that Omake and there's no way "Burning With Rage" can win. I've been in enough Quests to understand the majority of Voters/Readers don't really care what wins, only that the Story continues. It shouldn't be Non-Canonical purely because it didn't win the Vote.
 
@TennoTurian writing is hard work, and I've seen too many people take it for granted. Is there any particular reason why Aves couldn't have reached out to two individuals? Could even tie into how Aves barely did anything in the Omake, keeping it an internal secret that trying to split his attention between two separate candidates was actually really difficult for his current level. I could definitely believe Aves wanting to pick all three and trying his hardest to make it happen.

As Cooky said. Its mostly due to narrative reasons. I would love to do more for my quest, but with adhd, work, and other rl stuff to juggle, I simply dont have the time or the energy to give it the writing and 'dice system' it deserves.
 
As Cooky said. Its mostly due to narrative reasons. I would love to do more for my quest, but with adhd, work, and other rl stuff to juggle, I simply dont have the time or the energy to give it the writing and 'dice system' it deserves.

Personally I consider Dice System stuff to be a complication, leaving all the power into Mechanics rather than what feels natural and fun to write. Still seems unfair to me such a well-done Omake is only Non-Canon purely because the Vote it is tied to couldn't possibly win by this point.

Not sure what you mean regarding writing, it isn't fun having some 'minimum' word count needed- I often need to justify writing 1,000+ to myself.
 
Voting seems to have slowed down so looks like I'm closing the vote! Thanks for voting everyone!
Scheduled vote count started by TennoTurian on Sep 23, 2023 at 1:25 PM, finished with 57 posts and 39 votes.
 
Criminal Activity: Little China 1
A/N: Here be your update everyone! I wanted to go back to making posts more cinematic, it was... hard but I think I did my good here! I really should get back into writing like this, I think my creative muscles have atrophied x.x but anyway, here's the update! Discuss the choices, make your votes! I hope you all like it! ^ w^

[X] A foot on the edge. Running on a journey on the perilous road to myths.

Edgerunner (noun): Someone who lives on the Edge. May be claimed as a badge of honor or even vocation, as in the various fixers, couriers, and mercenaries who can get things done just outside the letter of the law.

10:21 AM June 01, 2075
Jack
Night City, Watson

"Thank you! Thank you, thank you!" A tearful woman, her face worn with wrinkles beget by a hard life, thanked the Edgerunner that just appeared in front of her doorstep, her hands clutching an old, stolen locket that has, at least, been finally returned to her. "I was beginning to think I'd never-"

She couldn't find it in herself to speak anymore, even the thought of finishing that sentence nearly had her falling to her knees. In the end, she managed to muster enough strength for one final, and hoarse, "Thank you."

The Edgerunner, a tall man with tanned brown skin, clad in a fitting synth-leather jacket and incredibly short shorts that did nothing to hide his yellow cybernetic legs, stood in front of her door, merely smiled and left. Giving the woman some much needed privacy once his job was done. His eyes lit up as he contacted the fixer to give her the details.

After the first two rings, a familiar one-eyed media popped into his peripheral view. "Jack." She uttered his name with an expectant tone. "I assume you've finished the gig?"

"Just left the client's place." He smiled, making his way through Watson. "Dropped off the package personally."

"Nice work, Jack." Regina's visage on the video com nodded with approval, her own eyes glowing as she sent the rewards. "Sending you the eddies. Gig closed."

"Always a pleasure, Regina." The hooded man nodded in farewell as the call ended.

Another day, another good deed. Normally, he doesn't really like taking klepping jobs but once he heard the deets from the former media, well. He couldn't really say no, couldn't he? His chooms called him a bleeding heart but they weren't wrong. He was a sucker for stuff like these and whenever he got involved? He always did his best to help out and actually went out of his way to any Fixer looking for his type of services to give him gigs like this. Sure, it really cut into his income but after seeing the client's faces like that woman? It was totally worth it.

He stopped by one of the vending machines for a burrito, he was just about to put in the eddies when an NCPD alert popped up in his view. His hunger gone, he automatically opened the notification and the NCPD's dispatch filled his audio output.

"Attention all NCPD Subcons, we have reports of an organized crime in progress-"

"Out of the way!" A woman screams as she is shoved aside, several people, all heavily modified with cybernetics running past her, two of them clutching heavy duffel bags in their arms. The last of them looks back and almost hisses at the solos chasing after them and continues to run, pushing and pulling people aside and behind them. Adding obstacles that would hinder their pursuers.

"-ltiple suspects confirmed, presumed to be armed and dangerous-"

One of them, a woman with a face riddled with optic lens, turns and fires her shotgun into the crowd at the mercenaries behind her laughing as the majority of the spray of bullets disappears into the pedestrian masses and causing a mad panic as people begin to run. Some fall over dead, others badly wounded.

"-uspected to have ties to gang organizations. Night City Officials are offering a reward to neutralize the threat."

"Freeze, NCPD!" A uniformed officer stepped into their path, gun drawn, eyes wide with surprise but shone with determination; however, the rude and mocking laughter from the approaching gang goons made her falter and the woman who had fired off into the crowd before, raised her shotgun and pulled the trigger.

With a loud bang, the gun went off and pellets flew through the air, all wildly missing the intended target who quickly leapt behind cover for safety, letting them run past her. She fired a few times in their direction but her shots, too, went wild as she yelled into her comms as she identified the familiar symbol of a three eyed skull on one of their jackets. "This is Officer Scofield, suspects have been sighted! Confirmed to be Maelstrom, suspects are armed and dangerous and have opened fire into civilians, multiple casualties! Requesting medical assistance and back up! Repeat-"

A blur rushed past her, a runner streaked in yellow sprinted towards the fleeing Maelstrom who were making their way back into the Docks district. Shoving any unlucky Night City citizen aside or outright killing them.

Jack gritted his teeth, if there was one thing he hated, it was Maelstrom. But what the fuck were they doing in Little China? Some would argue this was The Mox' territory but everyone really knew that it was Tyger Claws. Why would they risk a gang war operating on Tyger Claws ground? He didn't have the time to think about it. What mattered more were the people that were getting hurt and killed! He had to stop them.

Pulling out his baton, the mercenary flicked his wrist and it extended to its full length of two feet, electricity sparking along the length. He can't just shoot them with his Shingure, they're out in the open streets, he'll shoot someone by accident. The best he could do is get up close and disarm them, maybe they wouldn't notice him if they kept- Shit, one of them was looking at him.

"Looks like we got company, chooms!" An ugly smile stretched across his equally ugly and zombie-like face, a robotic hand pointing straight at him.

"Flatline 'im! We gotta delta!"

"Bye bye!" The woman with a face covered in optics giggles as she raises her weapon and starts shooting. "Bang! Bang! Bang!"

"Oh shit!" Jack picked up the pace, his cyber legs sparking as he ran faster and faster, the pointed ends of his legs left inch wide holes in the pavement, dodging and weaving to keep her shots inaccurate. "Got to aim better than that, choom!" He can't help but say, flashing her a mocking smile.

"You can't keep hopping around forever, little bunny!" The borderline cyberpsycho cackled with glee, pausing to reload her weapon.

The nearest Maelstrom goon smacked her upside the head with a metal hand, nearly sending her stumbling. "Quit flirtin' with the gonk, 8-ball! Keep shootin' im! We're almost there!"

You watched this all happen as you flew unseen by Jack's side, you can see the Edgerunner's hatred of the cybernetic fanatics that were carelessly shooting at anyone they pleased. His need to stop the situation from getting any worse, his desperation to keep innocent people safe. Yes, this is the one you have sensed and his heroic heart aligns with your primary domain. With your approval, you shall grant his wish to defend the innocents of Night City and gestured with all four of your hands.

How will you assist?
[ ] Grant Jack a Blessing
- [ ] Give him a boost in speed (-5 Faith)
- [ ] Envelop him with a protective shield (-8 Faith)
- [ ] Imbue him with Divine Might (-10 Faith)
[ ] Hinder the criminals with a curse (Faith cost increased due to number of targets)
- [ ] Cast a hex to slow them down (-7 Faith)
- [ ] Curse their weapons with impotence (-10 Faith)
- [ ] Bestow an affliction that weakens their very soul (-12 Faith)
[ ] Write in: (-? Faith, determined by QM)
 
[X] Grant Jack a Blessing
- [X] Give him a boost in speed (-5 Faith)

How much would turning Jack into a vengeful spirit hunting for criminals (like a cross of Ghostrider/Punisher) cost?

Edit: Gonna go with the Boost in Speed, maybe wait for a better opportunity to pull the Ghostrider card.
 
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[X] Grant Jack a Blessing

How much would turning Jack into a vengeful spirit hunting for criminals (like a cross of Ghostrider/Punisher) cost?
A lot. Probs most of what Faith you currently have but there's also another problem.

That kind of thing would require Jack to be dead and very, very angry.
 
[X] Grant Jack a Blessing
- [X] Envelop him with a protective shield (-8 Faith)
 
[X] Grant Jack a Blessing
- [X] Give him a boost in speed (-5 Faith)


If David with a sandevistan is able to become a legend in night city by chipping in with cyber tech, what can an edge runner like Jack do with god on his side.
 
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