[X] Enable The Sun to focus it's emissions into singular deadly lazer of variable power. (Cosmic Act)
Solar superlaser people! You know you want it!
Solar superlaser people! You know you want it!
I feel like your God at the end of this quest is just going to be trying to hype up the sun *so hard*.[X] Enable The Sun to focus it's emissions into singular deadly lazer of variable power. (Cosmic Act)
Solar superlaser people! You know you want it!
I'm not so sure about Custodians on a meta level. It feels like we'll be putting Photomajig on the spot to constantly generate novel events for us - I think it's better if we let them develop organically as a consequence of events.
But... their entire purpose is to maintain the universe so we can get things to develop until we either interfere again or retire into the stars. All he'd need to do is mention that things are going good... at least until they're not.
Not a bad shout, but I like my coral cities...
Hmm. Okay. A compromise.
[ ] Raise up the City of the First Children by the Island. (Grand Act)
Watch.
Bãsn, the Smiling Maker, sees the First Children. Within their hiveminds, he sees -
lovehatesorrowjoydisgusthungerlust
- his kingdom, the infinite palace of desire.
They are not born of his design, and yet they honour him regardless. His eternal smile widens.
"Honour given, honour granted." His koan. Blessing and curse at once.
Watch.
Bãsn digs his fingers into his chest, shreds his ephemeral flesh, shatters godly bone.
Opens his heart, and calls forth the might of the Unfrozen Sun.
Creation in its purest form.
From his wound, it flows. Red. Rich and heady. Sinking into the World Ocean.
Twisting into immortal currents, freezing into scarlet ice.
Watch.
Bãsn laughs.
The ice changes.
Changed forever, Holy Ocean-and-Grinning Spirit, it rises, up, up-
Breaks the surface. The City shimmers in sunlight for the first time, dreaming spires and shadowed streets.
Immortal Home of the First Children, binding itself to the Island through long coral strands.
"Honour granted, honour given." His koan. Today they sing his praises.
Tomorrow they curse his name.
-The Scarlet Cycle, Stanzas 1-3, First Children oral tradition.
The city's made of coral, created from the blood of Bãsn (i.e. me) and the water of the World Ocean. It's bound to the island, but not directly attached to it, so everyone else can play around inside. Gives the First Children somewhere to live, and feels appropriately mythic. Thoughts?
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So I was bored and started thinking about what the Watcher and Historian look like. So I started drawing and this was the finished product. Enjoy.
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Hey, it's me again, so while I was drawing The Watcher and The Historian I also drew this but stopped halfway, Ik`Shar because while rereading I realized that he did not have legs and I was worrying over nothing so I drew a ball and put some eyes in it. And the World Sea because while working on it I realized that we still had not given it a solid form or a name (which should be Pent) and so I just drew an outline.
I could be misinterpreting things, but I may be getting the impression that some people are trying to author multiple acts which I know for certain is a no-go.
Well-written, feels like a proper creation myth, very evocative - have a +1 Vote from a Mark of Artistry.
[-snip-] Create the Abraxas, the divinely Inspired, primordial in nature, offspring and agents of the Architect's thought and mind. (Grand Act)
Divine messengers basically. The lower 440 are meant to be representatives of the Makers as a whole on Earth or the Unnamed World or whatever. The first Fifteen are the only real ones that are comparable to the Ainur or the Angel of Death.So, question - what do the Abraxes do, and how can the rest of us use them?
(Clarifying tone in advance because text is shit for that - I'm not trying to pick a fight, I'm just trying to get an idea how they fit in to the setting more broadly and how they can prompt interesting developments in future epochs.)
Divine messengers basically. The lower 440 are meant to be representatives of the Makers as a whole on Earth or the Unnamed World or whatever. The first Fifteen are the only real ones that are comparable to the Ainur or the Angel of Death.
Yeah they're meant for everyone else to enjoy.Okay. So the rest of us can use them too, then? Because that's the main thing I'm hesitant about. @Vanestus ' island was quite small, so it being sectioned off for them to experiment on was fine. Having 440 dudes who belong to you alone makes me a tiny bit uncomfortable, if only because they're pretty cool toys in the sandbox and honestly I want to play with them too.
Cool. Okay. Voted.
Voted, sounds like a cool idea.[X] Create The Triumphant Comet.(Lesser Act)
The Triumphant Comet will always appear in the Material and Immaterial realms whenever a grand story concludes. It shines with every color imaginable and stays in the sky for a day and a night.
I really don't think GigaChad would be a good addition lol
What are you talking about? GigaChad would be a brilliant addition to this world! How could his creation possibly be a bad thing?
It doesn't fit in the setting, it would ruin the fantasy theme of the entire thing with dead memes, and…What are you talking about? GigaChad would be a brilliant addition to this world! How could his creation possibly be a bad thing?
Screw Abraxas! Screw fantasy! And screw you! Dead memes forever!It doesn't fit in the setting, it would ruin the fantasy theme of the entire thing with dead memes, and…
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Let's just… not.
Also we're just three votes away from having a free divine messengers service, go vote for the Abraxas
[X] Create The Triumphant Comet.(Lesser Act)
The Triumphant Comet will always appear in the Material and Immaterial realms whenever a grand story concludes. It shines with every color imaginable and stays in the sky for a day and a night.
Voted for that as well!