Yeah thats more like it
That isn't how it would work in a true reality.The way I see it, it's our overall dream, but it's not our current goal. Like, of course we want to be rich, and being a great warrior would be awesome, but those are just things that'd be really nice to have not our deepest truest dream. What we truely want is peace, but we also know that it's impossible and that's there's nothing a brat like us could do to bring it to be. But, as the story goes on and we grow as a person, we become less and less pessimistic and begin to actually acknowledge our dream as anything more than just a impossible fantasy.
It's not a "burning desire that can be utterly forgotten and changed over time"That isn't how it would work in a true reality.
You are pushing this main goal dream as something the protagonist will grow into instead of have as a burning desire from the start that can be utterly forgotten and changed over time.
Course, this is a quest, good luck with your ideal protagonist plans, I guess.
Our dream defines us. We are not changing that easily. And fits rather well what I described. We, honestly and truely, desire peace above all else. Just we're utterly pessimistic and write it off as a childs dream and impossible in reality. It is our dream, and it defines us, but it is not our goal, it's a flight of fancy. But, as we grow and develop, it BECOMES our goal. We would be far from an ideal protagonist, we only start to approach idealistic after a lot of character growth.Every night you had a dream… a dream you could not quite understand.
But it was a dream you clung to though everything… becoming the only thing that truly defined you.
What is that Dream:
I'd imagine it'd be a good bit of rage. Odds are the war is what took our parents, and it's easy to assign every problem in our life to it.I'm generally not as captured by a character with purely white goals, still can enjoy them, but its the grey that speaks to me. Aang's goal may be peace, but he is driven by shame, if our ultimate goal is to bring peace I'm fine with that but I want it to not be driven by something like being a good kid with a good heart I want it to be Pride or Rage, or something along those lines. And having a dream/goal that isn't a world of peace is more interesting to me at least.
I don't want to influence the vote too much, but I will say this.
Belive me when I say this.I'm generally not as captured by a character with purely white goals, still can enjoy them, but its the grey that speaks to me. Aang's goal may be peace, but he is driven by shame, if our ultimate goal is to bring peace I'm fine with that but I want it to not be driven by something like being a good kid with a good heart I want it to be Pride or Rage, or something along those lines. And having a dream/goal that isn't a world of peace is more interesting to me at least.
I was meaning more, what exactly are we voting for here.I don't want to influence the vote too much, but I will say this.
An ultimate goal deep in our heart.Is our dream here our initial burning drive which we are working toward above all else? Or is it more of an ultimate goal we want deep in our heart, but are not necessarily working towards in any fashion?
Alright, that answers the question. It's something we truely want, but it is not a core defining characteristic and is transitory.An ultimate goal deep in our heart.
But it can change as we grow and travel. In fact, if it doesn't change, I will be very surprised.
This world had created your parents, the strongest people you have everknowknown.
[]Farmers: You had been born a farmer, and your family had been farmers for the last fifty generations, on the same land they had been working,day in,day outday in, day out.
(Gain Trait: TheNoblesNoble's Child: You have been raised in court, and received an education few would ever have. +10 to diplomacy rolls, +5 to intrigue rolls))
(Gain Trait: TheRouge'sRogue's Child: You have been raised in the underbelly of the world, you know there is more than the black and white Morality of life within the law. +10 to intrigue rolls. +5 to combat rolls.))
[]No one: You have no family to callyou'reyour own. You are just a child, a nameless one that lost his family to a world that is uncaring… unjust, and brutal. You were alive because you were lucky, and because the spirits had a plan for you. Whatever it was… you did not knowwhat it is. (Gain Trait: Orphaned: You are without parents, living alone, and being alive throughyou'reyour own skills, and the kindness of others. (+5 to all rolls. You are alone in this world)
The one thing i shoot for is interesting narrative potential.A reason I'm a fan of the Criminals and Whores background is family is an interesting thing to have within a narrative and this is not something we really have any example of within the world of Avatar, family can have their own stories parallel to ours and in this our father very much has at least a past, and both of them care for us given the description. I don't know I just really like this set-up.