Can you please reveal the rolls?
Kind of look like mixed results and Nima did not get to use her munchfungus at all due to her good diplomacy.
 
I hope y'all appreciate my choosing to beta this instead of turning to drink off the back of watching Ep9. :V

I'm also very amused that my lastminute suggestion about the munchfungus line seems to have swung the vote. I expect very creative write-ins for how Nima can use munchfungus as an interrogation technique! ;)
 
Can you please reveal the rolls?
Kind of look like mixed results and Nima did not get to use her munchfungus at all due to her good diplomacy.

It's that there wasn't really time and narrative space (because it'd be a whole long thing set after the climax of the update) to include the interrogations of the prisoners, and so it's going to be the focus of the next update, on top of that other stuff.
 
(Nima suspected that working with vultures taking advantage of the plague to make money disqualified someone from being a good father.)

How awfully judgmental of you, Nima. :V
She disabused him of that notion, saber slicing through his left leg at the ankle. He screamed in pain and surprise and toppled down to the filthy floor. He kept on screaming as Nima turned, stepping out of the way of a desperate grab of her legs. "You should be able to get a prosthetic, it's close to the joint. I am sorry," she said, aware of how inadequate it was. But it was that or kill him, and she couldn't do the latter.

And Nima finally joins the most popular Star Wars club.

Nima was pretty sure he was a horrible sentient.

Eh. On the scale from Hondo to Palpatine? Jar Jar Binks.

He apparently never said that quote about cards, but he was willing to gamble his life as so many chips. Nima reached her hand out, and imagined this bubbling fountain, and then metaphysically knelt down to taste the water, trying to draw on what she knew from Barriss, what she'd learned about the brain and the rest of the body.

Ew. Brain bathwater.

[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

Everyone knows that villains love to explain their plans. :V

[X] They could use media access. Specifically, if they used CorSec contacts to be able to get into a position to put a 'splint' in the official Diktat Communication Holonet Channel, they could… hijack it, for at least a time, at the right moment.
[X] The Diktat is hiding, and he's ultimately the one planning… whatever this is. Nima feels like she can almost put it together now, but not any details as to what it's all for. But being able to find the Diktat to force his hand might be important.
[X] Get ready for a jailbreak of the Jedi District. And for that matter, figure out what it means that Valris' estates are being used like that. Does it mean anything? It might or it might not, or it might even be a double-bluff meant to implicate her.

Let's hope we don't contract plague. Break a leg, Nima.

All I want for Christmas, is you~

I hope y'all appreciate my choosing to beta this instead of turning to drink off the back of watching Ep9. :V

Hey, no spoilers, I'm yet to watch this trainwreck for myself.
 
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Nima's rolls, incidentally, were all over the map.

I could tell! That infiltration scene was a disaster, it's kind of a minor miracle Nima got out in more or less one piece. That scene with the war droids kinda reminded me of battle with Ventress at the spaceport in Dark Rendezvous.

Bell is right, Nima when she get's older is going to be a diplomatic force of nature when she gets older. Well as long as the dice are on her side.

Also Zekka Thine. . . another lovely Corellian or note. Also that vision, of course its a Darksider involved with these shenanigans. Hopefully they're as entertaining/nuts as the last ones.

[x] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

Debate is probably a better idea. We're kinda against the clock here.

[x] They could use media access. Specifically, if they used CorSec contacts to be able to get into a position to put a 'splint' in the official Diktat Communication Holonet Channel, they could… hijack it, for at least a time, at the right moment.

Information and media are always important, save for a good moment.

[x] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.

Shining a light on all the shadows, bringing the corrupt to justice. That's why we're here.

[x] Remarkably, the protestors haven't been struck down by the plague, at least not en masse, but they're in a difficult position. Is there anything Bell can do to help them? Do they need help? Well, they might, depending on how the final stage of… all of this goes down.


Ultimately, we're gonna need the people of Corellia on our side and this will go a long way to doing that. Also it's the right thing to do as well.
 
[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

[X] They could use media access. Specifically, if they used CorSec contacts to be able to get into a position to put a 'splint' in the official Diktat Communication Holonet Channel, they could… hijack it, for at least a time, at the right moment.
[X] The Diktat is hiding, and he's ultimately the one planning… whatever this is. Nima feels like she can almost put it together now, but not any details as to what it's all for. But being able to find the Diktat to force his hand might be important.
[X] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.

The whole situation is set up that I'm PRETTY sure they're plaguebombing a major population center.
So seize the moment by the balls. Disrupt CorSec, nail the Diktat and then trigger off a riot with a Seize TV Channel
And no braindiving. The opponent is at least as good as we are
 
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[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

[X] They could use media access. Specifically, if they used CorSec contacts to be able to get into a position to put a 'splint' in the official Diktat Communication Holonet Channel, they could… hijack it, for at least a time, at the right moment.
[X] The Diktat is hiding, and he's ultimately the one planning… whatever this is. Nima feels like she can almost put it together now, but not any details as to what it's all for. But being able to find the Diktat to force his hand might be important.
[X] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.

Edit: Nima bad at infiltration eh? Not surprising haha.
 
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[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

[X] They could use media access. Specifically, if they used CorSec contacts to be able to get into a position to put a 'splint' in the official Diktat Communication Holonet Channel, they could… hijack it, for at least a time, at the right moment.
[X] The Diktat is hiding, and he's ultimately the one planning… whatever this is. Nima feels like she can almost put it together now, but not any details as to what it's all for. But being able to find the Diktat to force his hand might be important.
[X] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.
 
[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

[X] They could use media access. Specifically, if they used CorSec contacts to be able to get into a position to put a 'splint' in the official Diktat Communication Holonet Channel, they could… hijack it, for at least a time, at the right moment.
[X] The Diktat is hiding, and he's ultimately the one planning… whatever this is. Nima feels like she can almost put it together now, but not any details as to what it's all for. But being able to find the Diktat to force his hand might be important.
[X] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.
 
[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

[X] They could use media access. Specifically, if they used CorSec contacts to be able to get into a position to put a 'splint' in the official Diktat Communication Holonet Channel, they could… hijack it, for at least a time, at the right moment.
[X] Remarkably, the protestors haven't been struck down by the plague, at least not en masse, but they're in a difficult position. Is there anything Bell can do to help them? Do they need help? Well, they might, depending on how the final stage of… all of this goes down.
[X] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.

Merry Christmas!
 
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Was she actually close to dying against droids? The joys of being a charisma based character, I guess. A lot of power and influence, but kinda actually really easy to kill.

It's the curse of Jedi Diplomats. You see, the only lightsaber form available to the class is the shitty and unbalanced Niman, that requires a ton of skill points better spent elsewhere before it becomes something worthwhile. We tried to mitigate it with multiclassing into a Rider to at least not suck at dodging and running away, and there's also a loophole that taking up Niman enables to pick the disgustingly OP two weapon-fighting Jar'Kai regardless of the class specialization, but it also requires a lot of skill points.
So for now we're stuck in the Early-Game Limbo.
 
Nima may need to spend some time training her Jar'Kai, maybe with Ahsoka, I want to catch up with her. And Scout too, it been too long.

Although I also want her to learn more language, culture, and psychology, it should help her persuade people. Come to think of it maybe tactics as well, it should come in handy.

...Too many things to do haha.
 
Was she actually close to dying against droids? The joys of being a charisma based character, I guess. A lot of power and influence, but kinda actually really easy to kill.

Actually, not that close? She faced no long-term consequences, but a lot of by-skin-of-teeth stress damage that didn't quite roll over into anything more than the Mild consequence of the cut to her side. So, *waves hand up and down*

But if she was a stronger combatant, or luckier, she could have done things a lot cleaner.
 
Merry Christmas. The vote closes tomorrow, but I'm not sure whether I'll be able to update next Tuesday. Holiday seasons, and all that. Plus, I have a feeling I'll want to get the next update *just* right.
 
[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

[X] The Diktat is hiding, and he's ultimately the one planning… whatever this is. Nima feels like she can almost put it together now, but not any details as to what it's all for. But being able to find the Diktat to force his hand might be important.
[X] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.
[X] Remarkably, the protestors haven't been struck down by the plague, at least not en masse, but they're in a difficult position. Is there anything Bell can do to help them? Do they need help? Well, they might, depending on how the final stage of… all of this goes down.
 
[X] Debate/argue. Try to antagonize them, try to draw them into discussing their plans, defending them… be mean but not too harsh.

[x] Some elements of CorSec are working with the Diktat… in fact, most of it. Finding a way to sabotage their efforts to cover for the Diktat might be important, both in the court of public opinion, and in any efforts to take control.
[x] Remarkably, the protestors haven't been struck down by the plague, at least not en masse, but they're in a difficult position. Is there anything Bell can do to help them? Do they need help? Well, they might, depending on how the final stage of… all of this goes down.
[x] The 'mainline' treatments are being evacuated. It was too loud, and too explosive, and saving all of them is impossible. But knocking over a single truck so that you have at least some legitimate, working treatment would be… lovely.
 
It's the curse of Jedi Diplomats. You see, the only lightsaber form available to the class is the shitty and unbalanced Niman, that requires a ton of skill points better spent elsewhere before it becomes something worthwhile. We tried to mitigate it with multiclassing into a Rider to at least not suck at dodging and running away, and there's also a loophole that taking up Niman enables to pick the disgustingly OP two weapon-fighting Jar'Kai regardless of the class specialization, but it also requires a lot of skill points.
So for now we're stuck in the Early-Game Limbo.


Naw, Nima is actually specialized for a specific set of fights:
-Skirmish. Hit and run, use Rider mobility and twin weapons to hit, do damage and be out of reach, let someone else do the followup. Fighting with a skirmishing Nima requires significant dakka superiority because taking down a Jedi at range requires volume of fire or area effect attacks, and with Nima's ability unless she's fighting in a tunnel or a small corridor you can't close in.

-Duel. Talk, understand them, weaken their resolve. She's not a great duelist, but dueling her is dueling against the clock, because there aren't that many people who actually attack you on the social/mental stress tracks, and thus most opponents are underequipped for it.

If its neither of those then she shouldn't be fighting, but the universe isn't so kind.
 
-Duel. Talk, understand them, weaken their resolve. She's not a great duelist, but dueling her is dueling against the clock, because there aren't that many people who actually attack you on the social/mental stress tracks, and thus most opponents are underequipped for it.

It won't always work though. I even feel like, in most cases, it shouldn't.

Like, Nima's opponent needs to be already uncertain, unskilled at hiding their problems and Nima must know what those problems are. Nima's opponent also needs to be willing to listen, and not dismiss her words outright. Nima also can't talk to someone if all her focus is on "don't die horribly" part of the fight - which will get harder and harder if she doesn't get better at plasma stick waving. And Nima needs to know a language her opponent is fluent at.

That's a lot of factors to account before Nima can even begin using that strategy.
 
It won't always work though. I even feel like, in most cases, it shouldn't.

Like, Nima's opponent needs to be already uncertain, unskilled at hiding their problems and Nima must know what those problems are. Nima's opponent also needs to be willing to listen, and not dismiss her words outright. Nima also can't talk to someone if all her focus is on "don't die horribly" part of the fight - which will get harder and harder if she doesn't get better at plasma stick waving. And Nima needs to know a language her opponent is fluent at.

That's a lot of factors to account before Nima can even begin using that strategy.

Her record track is 1:1 so far.

Like, she's stopped Bariss the Bomb, but Nylirah the Melomaniac got away and honestly would've won, probably.

But the thing is, she's always fighting someone older than her, because, let's face it, there's no plausible situation where she could seriously duel another thirteen years old, much less someone younger than her.

If she survives to her adulthood, I feel like several of these problems will be solved. She's still very young after all, it's just she seems older, because she acts maturely and has an inferiority complex seemingly developed through lifelong practice and self-deprecation by someone at least twice as old as her.
 
Her record track is 1:1 so far.

Like, she's stopped Bariss the Bomb, but Nylirah the Melomaniac got away and honestly would've won, probably.

But the thing is, she's always fighting someone older than her, because, let's face it, there's no plausible situation where she could seriously duel another thirteen years old, much less someone younger than her.

If she survives to her adulthood, I feel like several of these problems will be solved. She's still very young after all, it's just she seems older, because she acts maturely and has an inferiority complex seemingly developed through lifelong practice and self-deprecation by someone at least twice as old as her.

1:1? But what about the criminal whose leg she had to cut off? She got his blaster almost instantly and tried to talk him down afterwards. But he dismissed her words. Even if she won the fight rather easily, her talk-no-jutsu failed.

And with Nilyrah her talk-no-jutsu not only failed, it backfired horribly. It's only thanks to Nima that Nyrilah was able firm her resolve in the Dark Side and her destruction obsession.

E. Wasn't Nyrilah also a child? And just you wait, I'm pretty sure she'll have to fight somebody from Anakin's team sooner or later. Irony demands it.

E2. As with any force users, she'll be overwhelmingly powefull on her own once she gets some experience. But all her enemies will do the same (well, important ones). It's just that most of them will spec more into combat, thus putting her on the backfoot again.
 
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1:1? But what about the criminal whose leg she had to cut off? She got his blaster almost instantly and tried to talk him down afterwards. But he dismissed her words. Even if she won the fight rather easily, her talk-no-jutsu failed.

I was talking about the important fights, those with glowing plasma sticks. :V
Nylirah is a young adult, iirc.
 
Jedi Initiate Quest!

There is rarely peace, as a troubled galaxy falls into war. The Temple has fallen into a martial mindset. People train their lightsaber skills with far more fervor, they practice killing-blows, they study battle tactics with as much enthusiasm as they had once practiced clearing their minds of thoughts. The Temple is a hive of activity… and yet also hollowed out, with so many Knights and Masters gone off to war.

Knowledge is pushed through faster and faster, as if the teachers are afraid that the time will come when they'll have to be pushed out, stumbling and confused, upon the world. Everything is more fraught, and it seems now, in a world where a fallen Jedi led a rebellion against proper authority, that the wrong knowledge might be as dangerous as ignorance.

The passions of a galaxy are unleashed. Slogans, shouts, cheers. Rallies. This was the galaxy, and yet there was the temple, meant to be the center, the grove of peace amid the passions of life. And yet, who can help but get drawn up into them? Who can help but to follow every battle, every crisis, and dream of what would happen once you became a Padawan?

The chaos must have an end, surely. The Separatists and their schemes are an act of madness, and yet so many followed them. So many broke away. And in the Temple, the Clans face daily reminders of what has changed. They hear the exploits of those who once were in their Clan, and shudder at the deaths, and the destruction. Those that speak for peace, those that try to unite the Jedi, who seem to be united only by the violence they might inflict, seem less evident now than at any time in a thousand years.

Death is everywhere. Clones die for the sake of men. Jedi die for the sake of civilians. Jedi who walk the path of the healer speak of incredible carnage. Even in Coruscant, even in the capital, there are still signs. When a Jedi dies, if there is anything left, it is returned to the Temple. The pyres burn through the night, burn until a person can't even stand it anymore. And other Jedi limp in, injured, marked by death as if it had ever so gently touched them in passing. If to die is to join with the force, then this war…

But despite this, in the Temple, there is peace, if you can find it within you, there is harmony--if you don't get into an argument with your clan--there is serenity, or at least the outward face of it. And of course, always, everywhere, binding the universe together: there is the force.

Choose Species

[] Twi'lek:

Slavery is everywhere, even where the laws should have long since eliminated it. Even in the heart of the Republic. Jedi Knight (later Master) Jordyan Bell found and intercepted a slave ship on its way down into the heart of the vast Megapolis, part of a ring selling high-value exotic slaves for… discerning clients, some of them rather high placed. Among the few dozen saved (quality, and not quantity, was the name of the game) was a mother and her young child, the latter deemed to be force sensitive. The mother was freed, and helped as much as Jordyan could manage. The child was, with her permission, brought to the Temple. He has been like a father to you, though while he confirms that your mother is safe, he will tell you little else.

Jordyan Bell and his friends and allies are all rabidly against slavery, radicals that have at times tested the patience of the Jedi Order, and the war has brought them new causes, and new worries, as they try to lead the clones, and this has sent him out of contact for long periods of time. Growing up as a twi'lek in the Temple is fraught with contradictions. You are at once a stranger in a strange land, and yet there are enough Twi'lek Jedi that hints and vestiges of a culture torn away remain there, and are often shared among Jedi from a similar backgrounds. Thus, you are in-between, growing up in a time of war, wondering about your past, and what you lost--and of course what you gained. And thinking, at times, of your mother.

You get: Species Aspect--

Twi'lek Ex-Slave: Growing up, you remember your mother's voice, your mother's face, but hazily now. People joked that you could eat everything, when you joined the Temple: but there were times vaguely remembered before where you had to eat anything at all. You're agile, and some people call you graceful, and you're very sociable. And at least one person has called you 'cute' before.

[] Duros

Your mother was a voyager. Your people have journeyed across the stars themselves. She was a strong woman, or so you'd like to think. Strong to make it all the way across the galaxy. You remember so little of her, but you were once told when you asked that she'd been an independent Captain, boarded by pirates. Jedi had arrived too late to save her, but they had saved her child, and when that child turned out to have potential in the force, took them to the Temple.

The war has brought battles, and battles are stories. You are nimble-minded and adventuresome, the kind of person to explore the Temple from top to bottom, and everyone comes to you for the latest news about the battles, reeled off the top of your head as if you had a holo-recorder stuck in there. One day you'll become a Padawan, and you won't just be telling the stories… you'll be living them!

Species Aspect--

Keen Duros: You have a mind like an iron trap, remembering all sorts of useless trivia, especially if you can make it into a narrative of sort, which is a very good mnemonic. You enjoy learning about the galaxy, and have a bit of a talent for finding your way, and an affinity for all things related to space travel. Some have even called you a little flighty, in a fond way.

[] Wookie.

Born in a small village under a lesser lord, you were in many ways typical of wookies who become Jedi. Found by chance, neither hidden nor pushed forward by your kin, you found your way into the system quietly, though in later years there would be a sense of separation, a question about your home and what it meant that would only increase as Kashyyyk stood neutral.

Wookies live for a long time, and so there are plenty of Wookies in the Jedi Order, most of them following some aspects of traditional Wookie culture, from the braids to life debts, though not extending to warfare. You're something of an enthusiast about being a Wookie, well-mannered and yet always asking questions about how things are going on Kashyyyk. You wonder, sometimes, what you'll fear if the war ever reached that planet in earnest, full-on.

Perhaps you'll soon find out.

Gregarious Wookie: You are big, and some find you somewhat intimidating, though those that know you sometimes say that you're an affable ball of fuzz. That said, you're strong and tough, and capable of impressive feats, as most Wookies are. You're in tune with your culture, and fascinated with your heritage, always looking for news on how Kashyyyk is faring.

[] Clawdite.

You'll never know what your mother was thinking, when she crossed paths with a Jedi. It wasn't a story you were supposed to know about, and to be fair, you still don't. Your mother crossed paths with a Jedi somehow, during a mission… and not necessarily in the best way. You were found afterwards, and raised. It's simple, and perhaps someone else would make more of it than that.

But Clawdites are a solitary species in some ways, careful and quiet, or that's the stereotype, and when you have the ability to look like someone else, yet have to work through pain to do it, when you're a subject species… you understood, in some vague way, why Clawdites kept to themselves, even as you knew essentially nothing about 'your' culture. You're happy to live as you can. You watch, you think. You figure out how to use your past, instead of letting it use you. The war is out there, and sooner or later, you'll have to face it, but for now, you practice.

Meditative Clawdite: You can change colors easily, and with a little effort look rather like someone else, though there are many details that are hard to maintain, and it tends to be painful. Still, you have a skill with blending in, and in your attempts to gain a greater understanding of your abilities, you are quite good at meditation (to cope with the pain of changing forms) and focusing.

[] Falleen

Falleen nobles and their problems have brought no end of trouble not only to other species, but to Falleen rather less exalted. One such problem sent Jedi forth, and while there they found a child. That child, of course, was you, and they convinced the parents to give up the child, in part out of gratitude. You don't know who the parents are, but there are whispers that it might be some Falleen noble or another. You don't know the truth of it, and ever since Falleen, the planet and the species, joined the Confederacy, you've tried not to think too much about it.

You're a sociable person, laid-back, even sometimes cool, without being cruel. Yet sometimes you wonder, especially with your pheromones, how many of your friendships might be in some small way… tainted. You especially hesitate at using it too forcefully, as you make your way in the Temple. Yet it is always there, a sort of temptation, there with that tiny prick of curiosity about your past. You have plenty of friends, and yet sometimes you wonder whether you're hiding your doubts from them, your troubles, and you try not to view people at too far of a remove.

Falleen Scion: You are the descendent of some prince or other, in some limited fashion, and as a Falleen, you are are often thought to be charming, in part because of the pheromones, though you are sometimes uncomfortable with this. Cool and controlled, and yet compassionate, you are hard to trick with the force, and can hold your breath for an extended period of time. As an added trick (and it's just that, a trick) you can change your coloration at will.


[] Trandoshan

The hunter sometimes becomes the hunted. Violence is a way of life for many Trandoshan, and thus it isn't known what act orphaned you, it is only known that you were found, found to have a talent in the force, and not to be too old for it. You were taken to the temple, and there you grew, though a little faster than your peers.

You grew tall, and you grew up, large even for your species, and very careful of both it and the sort of hunter's instincts you sometimes had. You were good at tracking, good at watching, cunning if somewhat lacking in friends. Not entirely without them, but it always came a little harder, and when the Trandoshans began to work with the Confederates against the Wookies… well, there were more than a few edgy people here and there. You're of age that in your people you'd already be going off to battle… and yet you don't feel ready at all.

Gawky Trandoshan: You are huge and imposing, with eyes that can see into the infrared spectrum and the ability to eventually regrow even lost limbs, if given enough time. While somewhat isolated from others, and somewhat more aged than your yearmates, you are very loyal to what friends you have. You also have a tracker's instinct, an ability to follow a target, to watch for signs of that which you hunt--be it a stray pet or a wayward book or a foe--and a love of the task itself.


[] Mon Calamari

Born not in the sea of Mon Cala, but in the sea of stars, you were the child of mildly prosperous parents, and unlike some people, your story is quite simple: the Jedi found them, they were loyal enough to the Republic, and concerned enough about the force, to give you over, and from there you slid into the Temple like a Quarren slides into water.

Always, you were at least as interested in the ocean and the islands of the night sky as in the water, though like most Mon Calamari you had some skill at it. Instead, you spent your time looking up starfighters, learning more about the tactics of ships and fighters, when it came time for the war. The ravages of war came to Mon Cala, of course, and you could do nothing but learn, and listen to the lectures. Watch famous starfighting Jedi such as Skywalker stride through the Temple and wonder if, when you finally reached the stars, you might not be as brave as he. Certainly, few have had reason to call you anything but devoted both to the Jedi way and your duties.

Canny Mon Calamari: You are a somewhat strong swimmer, though you find staying submerged for long periods of time uncomfortable, and your eyes, capable of swiveling, do increase your field of vision to some extent. But most of all, you are a curious sort, smart and interested in starfighters and mechanics in general. You are organized, disciplined, even methodical.

[] Nautolans

The child of wandering musicians, they gave you up both freely, but did try to push a few objects, a few mementos, onto the Jedi. The Jedi kept them, judging them no danger. A few pieces of music, a blanket, a toy for the water. Not much, but enough that you think of them fondly, even though you don't remember them. You don't want to meet them, but you're glad of the proof that you were loved by your parents, and you hope that their musical dreams were fulfilled.

You are a swimmer, a singer, sometimes a joker, jovial and often unconcerned with the consequences of your actions… except when it hurts the feelings of others, as the ability to feel the emotions of others, combined with the sensibilities of a Jedi mean that this you can't tolerate. You get along with others who love swimming, and are something of an athlete, when it comes to swimming. The war brought changes, though war itself didn't touch your home: but it did lead to more studying about how to lead aquatic campaigns, as everyone seems to assume, with some accuracy, that Nautolans, along with Quarrans, Mon Calamari, and others, are best in amphibious campaigns. You've shown some skill at that, and at least the enemies will be droids: less chance to feel the pain and suffering of others, something you can barely tolerate in the Temple, sometimes.

Nautolan: An excellent swimmer, your large eyes can see well in low light, and you have a passion for water that connects you with others who share in the Temple's pool. Your sense of smell is often almost too good, and you have an empathic sense of what others are feeling, one that gets only stronger when in the water, and which has helped soothe over difficulties and disagreements. You are also, actually, a halfway-accomplished musician in your people's style.

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A/N: So here you go.
[X} twilek for race
 

Bad news: the vote is many months past. Good news, you won! :V

That may depend on which definition of 'young adult' we're using.

Nylirah is in her late teens. Over eighteen. I can't remember right now at 10 PM if I had an exact timeline set where it mattered whether she was 18.5 or 19.

E: I'll double-check the update where Bell talks about it to be sure I'm not getting it wrong.
 
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