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Fragmentation (Original Superhero Setting)

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[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
 
[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.

Must I explain why? :p
 
So our planet forms' intelligence and power is based on mass right? And we have a theoretically infinite source of mass in the form of Nature's Hatred. Not sure how to leverage that exactly but it's a thought.
 
[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Helpful: You don't need to run circles around people when they're just genuinely curious. Avoid revealing anything you haven't already told the CBCC, but within those boundaries is fair game.


Edit: Since it is basically the same (Celes posting cryptic hints through her individual account was a foregone conclusion) I might as well approval vote for

[X] Plan I Put Some Hybrid In Your Hybrid
 
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[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
 
Nixeu said:
Needs a period, mate. It's always the ones you fail to run by your editors that have the errors, ain't it?
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>W>

The Froggy Ninja said:
So our planet forms' intelligence and power is based on mass right? And we have a theoretically infinite source of mass in the form of Nature's Hatred. Not sure how to leverage that exactly but it's a thought.
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Just power, not intelligence. There's also no real concern when it comes to feeding your planetary body mass; your dad has that covered.
 
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[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: Any information you choose to disclose is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
 
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[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
 
[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.

Because this lets Upgrade have her own account, which will leave people very confused about who the fourth member of Progeny is.

Also, the idea of government employees digging through cryptic youtube comments to try to find just a little extra information about the OP hero team is hilarious.
 
[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
 
[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Helpful: You don't need to run circles around people when they're just genuinely curious. Avoid revealing anything you haven't already told the CBCC, but within those boundaries is fair game.

lets be helpful!
 
DB_Explorer said:
..... find a boy our age who's smart enough to handle it then use the fact that he's a boy our age to troll the internet into shipping wars.

: P

Since clearly if we can't add more siblings we need to have the internet think we might have a BOYFRIEND.

then hire a girl for something else to totally confuse matters
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Obviously we need to follow the tropes and find a boy whose so bland and inoffensive that the whole sibling sister units can pine after at the same time. Only to find out later that said "boy" was actually a dummy put in place by their dad. And by dummy I mean a literal crash dummy with no extra gimmicks and the only reason why the girls go along with it is because it feeds the tropes, humors their dad while at the same time trolling the entire world and magical girl community.

/s it went a little bit away from me there.
 
Bugs said:
@Alivaril I'd like some WOG. What would this quest have been like if we'd elected not to make our dad an Eldritch Abomination?
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...Different? I mean, your parents and your relationship with a sibling were pretty much the basis for the PC's personality. So really, it depends on what you're comparing it to. The biggest difference would probably be less defenses against mental effects, though; in most respects, the twins are effectively human. They're enthusiastic about being eldritch abominations, but the actual effects of being such are minor in comparison to full-fledged superpowers.
 
[x] Active: Progeny's account will regularly reply to comments until you all get bored of doing so.
-[x] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.

I like the idea of having a shared account to muddle the waters of just who is posting at any one time. Let's add to the glorious confusion!
 
I think this is the only opinion I have:

-[X] Teasing: Any information you choose to disclose is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.

Not "all" information, but what information we choose to disclose. Also, strongly approve of getting Upgrade in on the trolling. It's an important chance for Upgrade to interact with others in a constructive manner, which is good not only for Upgrade but should assuage some of the government's fears about us.
 
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Yeah, I don't think people noticed the part where it says all information.

[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: Any information you choose to disclose is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.

@Alivaril is this edit fine?
 
[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
 
[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.

Incidentally, this would also have some implications with the uncanny coordination part. For better or for worse.
Alivaril said:
I also felt as though this chapter was a bit wooden, so I'd appreciate it if I could get some feedback on that.
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It was fine.
Alivaril said:
Expect hallucinations and don't worry if some of them are lucid. We apologize in advance for any apparent trials or tests of character; the diamond should work just fine despite those.
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Is this a reference to character creation in games?
 
What A Day said:
@Alivaril is this edit fine?
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...I guess? "All information" amounts to the same thing, though, since you'll be choosing to disclose stuff in a format so obscure it's likely to spawn hundreds of conspiracy hypothesis. EDIT: Going by intent, I'll take it as a vote to be a little more careful with what you even hint at.

curiosity said:
Is this a reference to character creation in games?
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Nah, a reference to tests of character prior to being given magical powers, positions of authority, overcharged versions of preexisting powers, etc. Think "unconscious magical girl temporarily trapped inside dark prison while her outmatched allies fight the BBEG," complete with flashbacks.
 
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[X] Plan I Put Some Hybrid In Your Hybrid
-[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
--[X] Helpful Progeny account: You don't need to run circles around people when they're just genuinely curious. Avoid revealing anything you haven't already told the CBCC, but within those boundaries is fair game.
--[X] Teasing individual accounts: Any information you choose to disclose is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments and outright trolling if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.

(Plan formatting courtesy of TheBiggerFish)
 
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[X] Plan I Put Some Hybrid In Your Hybrid
-[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
--[X] Helpful Progeny account: You don't need to run circles around people when they're just genuinely curious. Avoid revealing anything you haven't already told the CBCC, but within those boundaries is fair game.
--[X] Teasing individual accounts: Any information you choose to disclose is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments and outright trolling if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
-[X] Also, discuss with our parents.

Best of both worlds...
 
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[X] Hybrid: Progeny's members will have their own accounts to play with while the Progeny MewTube account will be used for official statements. Individual comments won't be favored by MewTube and will thus have a higher chance of fading into obscurity, but Celes's sh*tposting habit might make that into a good thing.
-[X] Teasing: All information is fair game, but people will have to slog through extremely cryptic comments if they want to make sense of any of it. Upgrade's emoticons probably won't help any.
 
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