Hmm, interesting quest. I probably won't be an active contributor, nor vote most often, but I've read through the quest thus far and like it and received some inspiration. Plus, if this was a show, I'd hold off on having
Rose get torn up till the end, and I think the quest's reached the point most of the characters are simply too important to kill off, liked too much to kill off, or not important enough to produce a shock. And while the civilians being killed helps further emphasize which side the dark grey in this light grey v.s. dark grey conflict (I hesitate to say grey v.s. grey because one side is obviously much better than the other. Hmm. Maybe grey v.s. dark grey?), I don't think it makes sense. There's a fleet in the way! So, if it's a show, let's deal with the fleet first.
[X] Mosi's intelligence allows the Outer Fleet to eliminate several key targets early on.
[X] The Inner Fleet's surviving leadership is abruptly and suddenly killed all at once, including the loss of Sikes' counterpart, causing a total breakdown in organization (but not a rout... yet).
@Gazetteer, one, interesting quest you've got! Two, is out off the box thinking being accepted?
(Also the post ended up way longer than I intended.)