- Pronouns
- They/Them
Hrrrrrrm. My first concern is that this reminded me of how pessimistic Vampire is. If your story follows the canon/ES model of vampires by and large being contemptible bastards and/or soulless monsters, I'm not sure I'd be up for getting too involved in that. Not only would that be the kind of thing more likely to stoke my anxiety and depression than anything, but it just feels... hollow to me at this point. Contrived, even, since it uses the conceit of vampires to justify presenting a world where better things aren't possible, the capitalist model of exploitation is a universal law, and anyone telling you otherwise is either an idiot or a conman.
I feel like there's a divide between thinking that better things are possible, and thinking that it's vampires who can bring that about? There are better and worse vampires, but by and large even the most well-meaning vampire is not necessarily part of a healthy body politic, except in a purely individual sense. Even the Carthians, who too often define mortal humans as the means of production have more to do with the anti-immigrant, anti-black, anti-woman union organizations that inevitably faced divide-and-conquer from capitalist elites.
It's possible to imagine Mages as part of a better world, or Changelings as part of a better world. Werewolves have a role in preserving some level of spirit balance, so even if plenty of Mages, Changelings, and Werewolves are terrible monsters, it seems to be for the same reason that some people are terrible monsters rather than anything inherent.
Vampires, well, that's a lot more ambiguous, and so the drama is usually deeply individual. In this case, the Quest is very much about exploring history and the personal dynamics, but the world will change for both the better and worse in the time this Quest takes place in.
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