Well, with the quiet rollout of 1-1, and the rewrite using the momentum to work on the others, I'd like to hear a little bit from you guys. Has 1-1 been improved, making you care for the characters and the tribe more, or have I wasted my time and should have just gone on with the story? Did I overdo or underdo anyone? Is there anything more you want to see now that I'm going back to try and make a better story? I'd like to hear you guys, especially during the rest of the rewrite, which will be done much faster now that I have something to work off of character-wise. I can't read minds, and as Bulwark has shown us, I take criticism both seriously and well.
Now for some unfortunate news. I'm shelving The Torches Rise for the foreseeable future, which is a rather difficult decision to make. TTR was my first dedicated work, and it was a lot of fun writing one story for so long. Unfortunately that has changed. It hasn't been a matter of readership or user engagement, but the fact that when I think of writing an update for TTR, I get a sense of dread. Sitting down to write TTR means taking on so much baggage, so many stray plot points which never went anywhere, so much crap which eventually became insurmountable. I've been wanting to conduct a rewrite of TTR for a long time, but there is simply so much of it that I would need to shift this from a hobby to a full time job to fix. And, at this point, I'm unsure if it will really be worth it. In short, writing for The Torches Rise has stopped being fun.
So, The Torches Rise is shelved on a cliff hanger. I may return to it at a later date, though I find that prospect rather unlikely. If anyone wishes to take it over, I give my full consent.
And with this, now I can focus my energies on The Embers Crackle, and the quests I make in the future.