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Hey guys, what' up? I'm RexHeller and welcome to my plot bunny thread. This is my personal thread for posting all the ideas I come up with. You can find a full list of my ideas my following the link bellow. There's currently 484 ideas, there so feel free to make requests.

The way making requests works is that there will be a list, with every request and the person that made that request. Everyday, I'll pick one of the stories on the request list and write a chapter for it. At the bottom of the chapter, I'll ping the person that made the request, they'll give me feedback on how I did and they get to make a new request. The request list will be updating and the cycle continues the next day.

Please note that I said that you have to give feedback if I pick your request. Technically, I can't force you to do it, but it helps me grow as a writer and gives me the motivation to keep going. Plus, the longer/more in depth/more helpful your feedback is, the more likely I am to pick your requests in the future in order to get more of that good feedback. Skip on the feedback or do a crap job of it, I'm less likely to choose you again.

Anyway, please enjoy reading what I already have here and, again, feel free to make a request.

Idea List - Click Here to See All 543 Ideas


Request List

@SpeckofStardust: When Time Meets Lightning
@MaHaL: Violence Group
@KuletXCore: Summer Sickness
@Dark Lord Potato: Swapped
@Neph Champion: Noble Soul
@Krazyfan1: My Name Is Black
@Shadowdrakon: Dollhouse
@The Name of Love: Zero Fated
@1eragon33: A Pocket Full of Monsters
@Omida: Fate's Plaything
@Look to the Left: Petal's Protectress
@Firebird Zoom: A Killer
@Prester Fred: Escalation
@Crusader Jerome: My Servant is Myself
 
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Fate: Zero Hope
Fate/Zero Hope

Meanwhile, in the Dark Place
There is a place that is not a real place. Though no light reaches it, it is not truly dark. It cannot be found, felt, understood or even properly described. It is beyond such concepts. However, for convenience sake, I shall be calling it the Dark Place as I tell you these tales. The name is, as they say, close enough.
The Dark Place is home to two denizens. Their job is to tend to the multiverse. To do so they have been granted unimaginable power. You see, each universe must reach certain requirements otherwise it shall be destroyed. Once there were no rules for the multiverse and so it was filled with worlds that where almost identical to others or where intelligent life never evolved, or where the rules of physics where broken and nothing made the slightest bit of sense. Basically, a lot of useless clutter. And, so rules were created to ensure that each universe was useful, or at least interesting. Any universe that didn't fit the requirements was destroyed.
Now for any other uninhabited worlds this wasn't a problem. But for the worlds where intelligent life lived destroying their universe meant millions, billions, or even trillions of lives lost. This was generally thought of as a bad thing. Which is where the denizens of the dark place come in.
Their job was to make changes to universes so that they fit the requirements. They could do anything; change events, flip personalities of people, even move things between universes. There was nothing beyond their power. As a result, they produced some very interesting stories, one of which I will be sharing with you right now.
Our tale begins when one of denizens had left the Dark Place to take a break. Caring for the multiverse is tiring work and everyone is entitled to a break sometimes. The one on break was the more conservative of the two, preferring subtle changes and to keep things as orderly as possible. His partner, on the other hand, preferred to make things as interesting as possible, even if it didn't always make sense.
"All right! With him out of the way, maybe I can finally have some fun! Let's see, what's next? Another one based on the Holy Grail War, huh? Well there's an easy way to liven up that party. He, won't even be able to get made at me. We'll just make a few replacement's and…Done! Now all that's left is too sit back, relax and enjoy the show."

***

Fuyuki City, Kotomine Church. One year ago.
Kirei Kotomine, former Executioner of the Church and one of the Seven Masters in the fourth Holy Grail War, was not a man prone to introspection. However, as he stood in front of the summoning circle in the basement of his father's church, he found himself thinking back on his life, and towards the future.
Kirei thought back on how he had worked in many different fields and succeeded in all of them. He thought of how he had earned praise when he followed in his father's footsteps to become an Executioner and surpassed all expectations. He thought of his wife, who had died young, and his daughter, who he had entrusted to his in-laws soon after.
He thought of three years ago, when the command seals that marked him as a Master in the Fourth Holy Grail War had appeared on the back of his hand. It was then that his father, Risei Kotomine, had introduced him to Tokiomi Tohsaka and together they had explained what the Holy Grail War was.
Despite the name, the Holy Grail was not the Cup of Christ, but rather a wish-granting artifact of immense power. However, because it was called the Holy Grail the Church had to become involved and so was allowed to send an overseer. Their job was to provide safe haven for any of the defeated masters and to ensure that the war remained a secret from the general public. Risei had been the Overseer in the last war and would be reprising the role for the Fourth.
Tokiomi, on the other hand, would be actively participating in the war as one of the Masters. His family, the Tohsakas, had been one of the three founding families that had started the Holy Grail Wars. The Tohsakas also donated heavily to the Church and were personal friends with Risei ever since the last war. This was why Tokiomi and Risei had decided to enter an alliance to ensure that the Grail did not fall into the wrong hands. Kirei was to be apprenticed to Tokiomi for the next three years so that his grasp of mage craft could be improved enough so he could summon a Servant for the Grail War.
For each Holy Grail War the Grail would chose seven Master to participate. They, in turn, would summon a Heroic Spirit to be their Servant and fight for them in the War. Heroic Spirits were the souls of great heroes of the past such as King Arthur or Alexander the Great, who, in life, had done such incredible deeds that their legends would endure far after their deaths. This would earn them a spot on the Throne of Heroes, a sort of afterlife. Each of the seven Servants would be of a different class: Saber, Archer, Lancer, Rider, Caster, Berserker, or Assassin.
Kirei thought about all of this, and of how it was all utterly meaningless to him.
Since the day he was born Kirei Kotomine had felt empty. Nothing could fill the void in his heart. He did not feel pride in his accomplishments or love for his family. Neither the birth of his daughter or the death of his wife brought him any emotion. He did not feel joy, love, fear, anger or sadness. He did, however, feel confusion at why he had been chosen as a Master. Each Master was supposed to have a wish that they wanted fulfilled. That's why they were chosen.
Kirei didn't. And that confused the hell out of him.
In the end he decided that it didn't matter and that he had wasted enough time. He placed the relic he would be using to summon his servant, a fragment of an ancient mask, in the middle of the summoning circle. He then stepped back, raised his hand and began to speak the incantation that would bring his Servant to life. Soon the air was filled with light and magic.
When the light faded an imposing figure stood in the middle of the circle. The servant was dressed in a black and gold outfit that reminded Kirei of ninja he had once scene in a Hollywood movie. His forearms were covered in spiked bracers that matched the gold and black color scheme while his biceps were uncovered, showing of his obvious muscles. Poking over each shoulder was the handle of a katana, also gold. A black hood covered his head. However, what drew Kirei's attention was his face, or rather, what covered it.
The mask fragment Kirei had used for the summoning had been white and reminiscent of a skull. While the man standing in front of Kirei did sport a mask, it was made of gold and only covered the lower half of his face leaving his eyes exposed. His eyes that, for some reason, were pure white.
Suddenly the figure spoke. "I am the Servant Assassin. I ask of you, are you my Master."
Kirei nodded. "Yes, I am." To remove all doubt, Kirei raised his hand and showed his command seal.
"Then the contract is complete. If you have no orders for me, I will retreat into my astral form." Assassin said in a serious voice.
"No orders, but I do have one question." Kirei decided to put his suspicions to the test. "What is your name?"
"You may call me Scorpion."

***

Fuyuki City, Tohsaka Manor. Three Months Ago.
Tokiomi Tohsaka was not happy. Nine months ago his apprentice, Kirei Kotomine, had performed the ritual that had summoned the servant Assassin. However, the Servant was not who they were expecting, Hassan-i-Sabbah. Instead they had a Servant that they knew nothing about and refused to tell them his real name. Tokiomi could find no mention of this "Scorpion" in the history books.
Further souring Tokiomi's mode was the fact that he had no idea why this had happened. Kirei had performed the ritual perfectly. The relic he had used was the genuine article. Even after nine months of research Tokiomi had no idea why the ritual had produced a result other than what was expected. This worried Tokiomi to no end.
Still, the plan was still salvageable. Assassin appeared to be extremely skilled. He also had the ability to fit into the original plan. All that was left was for Tokiomi to summon his intended Servant and his victory was assured.
As he approached the summoning circle Tokiomi went over the actions and incantations once more in his head. Now so long as what happens to Kirei doesn't happen to me…No. This is no time for doubt. This will be perfect. And so he began the ritual.
Upon completion, however, his spirits fell. Standing before him was not Gilgamesh, King of Heroes, but a young, smiling, blond woman dressed in what appeared to be a brown military uniform. However, Tokiomi had a hard time believing that any military would issue skirts that short. The skirt, and her ample "assets", would have had Tokiomi believe that he had some had summoned some sort of callgirl, or cosplayer if it weren't for the absolutely massive, and very, very real, rifle she held. In truth the gun was more of a cannon then a rifle. It was taller then he was and she was leaning it against her shoulder like was nothing!
When she spoke, it was with a British accent. "Hello! I'm Archer. Are you the one who summoned me?" she asked cheerfully.
Overcoming his shock, Tokiomi managed a reply. "Yes, I am your Master."
"Sorry, but I already have a Master. But don't worry; I'll still follow your orders. Oh, I'm supposed to say that the contract is complete now aren't I?" The girl tilted her head to the side and placed a finger on her chin.
Tokiomi Tohsaka, powerful Magus and head of the Tohsaka family, felt, for the first time in his life, the desire to smack him self in the face.

***

Fuyuki city, Roof of the Hyatt Hotel. One Month Ago.
Kayneth El-Melloi Archibald had to struggle against the urge to pull his hair out in frustration as he tried to figure out at what point the world had decided to conspire against him. The answer was obvious though. As soon as the command seal had appeared on the back of his hand nothing had gone right. His student, Weaver Something, had stolen his original relic. His relationship with his fiancé, Sola-Ui, was steadily deteriorating. And now, despite obtaining a back-up relic and performing the ritual perfectly, the Servant standing before him was not Diarmuld Ua Duibhne. At least the class was right.
The servant held in his hand a long spear with golden head and a shaft wrapped in blue cloth. He the armor he wore was dark purple and had apparently been inspired by a dragon. Spikes jutted out from the knees and elbows, and a small set of decorative wings was attached at the shoulders. Completing the image was his helmet, which looked like a dragons head and covered his eyes and the top of his head but allowed his long silver hair to flow in wind.
"I am Lancer." The Servant spoke with a deep voice. "I ask of you, are you my Master?"
Not trusting himself to speak, lest his anger get the better of him, Kayneth merely nodded.
"Then the contract is complete." Lancer continued in his serious tone.
Kayneth took several deep breaths to calm himself. After all, loosing one's temper would be unbecoming for an elite mage such as him. Finally feeling in control again Kayneth decided to interrogate his new Servant. "I have a few questions for you Lancer. Who are you? Why did you get summoned instead of Diarmuld? And how good are you with that lance?"
"I have no idea why I was summoned and not this 'Diarmuld'. However I assure you my skills will be more then enough to win you the grail. I defeated more men and monsters then I could count in my own world. My companions and I even killed what some would consider gods." Lancer said in the same even tone he had used so far.
Kayneth examined Lancer closely, looking for any hint of embellishment, but was unable to find any. He doesn't seem to be bragging but such a statement is rather unbelievable. Fighting gods and monster and winning? But then again he must have done something to be placed on the Throne of Heroes. Kayneth decided to give Lancer a chance to prove himself and live up to his claims. But something was still bothering Kayneth.
"What do you mean 'your own world'?"

***

Fuyuki City Outskirts. One week ago.
Weaver Velvet could barely contain his excitement. Here he was about to summon a Servant in the Holy Grail War! Sure, having to use fresh chicken blood for the summoning circle might have been gross. Very gross. And slightly traumatic.
But that was fine, all part of what had to be done. After all, wasn't that what he believed in, that hard work paid off. Finally those bastards back at the Clock Tower wouldn't be able to look down their noses at him, simply because he couldn't say his great-great-grandfather invented a silver-polishing spell or something. Weaver couldn't wait to see the look on Archibald's face when he realized the very same student he had belittled in front of class would be beating him with his own Servant.
Weaver double-checked that everything was perfect. Let's see…summoning circle? Check! Relic in the middle of the summoning circle? Check! Summoning incantation memorized? Check! Command Seals? He looked down at the back of his hand at the red markings. Part of him still couldn't believe the Grail had actually chosen him"Check! All right! Let's get started!" He practically cheered. Then he began the summoning incantation.
As he chanted light began to flow from the summoning circle, filling his heart with pride. The sound of electricity crackling filled his ears as well as…a dog growling? Before Weaver could wonder what this meant the spell finished, light exploding outwards, causing Weaver to fall over backwards. When his vision cleared and his ears stopped ringing, Weaver found himself sitting on the ground looking up at the Servant he had summoned. His jaw dropped.
Standing there was not some mystic hero of legend but a young American, probably in his early twenties. He had brown hair and wore a leather jacket with orange accents and a flaming eight ball on the shoulders. Other then that his cloths were pretty plain, just a white shirt, brown pants and black boots.
"Hi there!" the man in the circle said with a small wave. "I'm Rider. Are you my Master?"
"Y... Yeah?" Weaver stuttered.
"Cool, then the contract's complete. You wanna go grab something to eat?"

***

Fuyuki City, Matou Manor Basement. Four Days Ago.
Kariya Matou and his father Zouken Matou had very little in common. Originally the only thing they shared was a family name. One year ago a second similarity had formed when Kariya agreed to have Crest worms implanted in him so he could become a mage. He did this so that he could win the grail and save Sakura Tohsaka, daughter of the woman he loved but could never have, from having to learn his family's corrupting magic. Now the father and son had a third thing in common: complete and utter bafflement.
"I'M THE CONDUCTOR OF THE MEAT SYMPHONY! ARE YOU THE BOSSY-PANTS MAN?"
Standing in front of the Master and the Vampire was a man. Maybe. It was hard to tell. He was over six feet tall and heavily muscled. It was easy to tell because he wasn't wearing shirt. He was wear pants, thank god, as well as boots and bracers that looked like they where made from scrap metal and a gas mask. In his hand was some sort of strange mix between a battle-axe and a buzzsaw. It was also made of scrap metal.
Zouken was the first to recover. "Well your certainly has the crazy part of Berserker down. If he's as powerful as he is insane then you might just have a chance. Not that I don't have complete faith in you." The old man's voice dripped with sarcasm, causing Kariya to flinch. "Now if you and your 'Servant' will get out of here, I need to start preparing Sakura for the next Grail War."
Kariya scowled at his old man, but turned to leave anyway. There was no point in fighting him. He was too powerful. Kariya needed to save his strength for the war if he was to have any chance at winning before the Crest worms killed him. And he had to win, for Sakura's sake.
He was halfway up the stairs out of the dungeon when Zouken called out to him. "Kariya! Aren't you forgetting something? It's like you're not even trying to win the Grail." Zouken cackled.
Kariya turned and saw that Berserker was still standing in the summoning circle, sniffing his armpit. Which was strange because he was still wearing his gasmask.
"Berserker! I am your Master! You will follow my commands! Now turn into your astral form and follow me." With that done Kariya turned to leave once more.
"THIS MEAT BICYCLE HAS TWO SEATS!"

***

Einzbern Castle, Germany. Two days ago.
Irisviel von Einzbern looked at the two men staring at each other from across the church sanctuary. She would be entrusting these men with not only her life but also her hopes and dreams starting from this point on and she hoped they would get along, but the way they stared at each other was worrying.
The first man was Kiritsugu Emiya, the Magus Killer. Nine years ago this magical assassin had been hired by the Einzbern clan of mages to win the Holy Grail war for them. He had been invited to their castle and there he had met Irisviel. They had fallen in love, married, and had a child. Now he was going to fight for the wish they shared: World Peace. He had been expecting to summon King Arthur Pendragon, King of Knights. What he got was someone entirely different.
The other to speak was the servant Kiritsugu had just summoned. He was tall, over six feet, with grey eyes, silver hair, and tan skin. He wore black armor and an unusual red coat. This was Counter Guardian EMIYA, the Wrought Iron Hero, Archer of the Fifth Holy Grail War, and now, Saber of the Fourth. He had just been summoned by his own dead father.
When they spoke it was the same word, at the same time. This one word rang out against the silence of the sanctuary. "Impossible."


Here's the first thing for you guys to look at. It was written over a year ago now and I'm quite embarrassed about it. It has quite a few problems and I consider it a rough draft at best. One of the reasons why I haven't worked on it for over a year is because I've decided to change my choices for Lancer and Rider and I haven't come up with any new ideas to fill the roles so feel free to suggest some Lancers and Riders from other franchises.
 
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Puella Magi Tempus Ansa
Puella Magi Tempus Ansa

It was a scene that Homura had seen played out time and time again. The city of Mitakihara, the only place that had ever felt like home, ruined beyond all repair. The storm raging, flooding the street with black, dirty water. Buildings wrecked, leaning at odd angles or in some instances on their sides completely. Bullet casings lying all around her as she lay on the cold, hard concrete as she realized that, once again, she had failed. And of course, easily heard over the storm, there was the laughter. Always with the damn laughter.

Homura laughed a little herself. It was a bitter laugh and it made her cough up a little blood. This was her hundredth loop. An anniversary of sorts. In fact the first thing she did when she had gotten out of the hospital this time had been to buy a herself a slice of cake. It even had a little candle for her to blow out. Homura wasn't sure what had made her to hold that little mockery of a birthday party. Maybe she still possessed a little bit of sentimentality that hadn't been sacrificed to her obsession yet. Maybe she had simply started developing a dark sense of humour as a coping mechanism. Whatever the reason was it didn't matter now. Soon she would be turning time back and her hundred-and-first loop would begin.

Honestly she should have turned her shield already, this loop was a lost cause now, but something held her back. Maybe she really was growing sentimental, maybe it was just weakness but for some reason she wanted to stay in this timeline until the last second. She wanted to see the end of it.

Madoka and Kyubey were near by. They always ended up near by some how. Kyubey was explaining everything.

God, I hate that white rat.

Madoka was crying.

Please don't cry Madoka. I promise I'll fix everything. Just please, please don't cry.

Madoka had dried her tears now and a determined look had replaced them.

Here it comes. Madoka will wish to defeat Walpurgisnatch, she'll her Soul Gem will shatter and it will be done. Homura reached for her shield, preparing to turn it.

"I wish to meet Homura again, but this time as the one protecting her, not as the one being protected!"

Wait what?

A flash of light as Madoka's Soul Gem was created and then time turned back.

***

Madoka was giddy with excitement. It had worked, really, actually worked! She could hardly believe it! She looked down at her hand for what must have been the hundredth time that day, making sure that her Soul Gem ring was still there, making sure that it was all still real. Her new habit of checking her ring had gotten her teased mercilessly by Sayaka but Madoka didn't care. She was a Magical Girl now! She'd gone back in time! She'd be able to protect Homura and Sayaka and everyone else!

When Madoka had woken up that morning in her bed she had been half sure that it was a dream but then she had found her Soul Gem. In her excitement she had transformed, right there in her room. She had almost gotten in trouble when her dad had checked walked into her room, wondering what she was cheering about so early in the morning. Luckily her new shield could apparently stop time. That had come as a shock to the pinkette but not an unpleasant one.

After barely keeping her new status as a Magical Girl a secret Madoka had tried to be more careful. She had followed her normal routine: wake up mom, clean up and get dressed, eat breakfast with her family, walk to school with Sayaka and Hitomi, listen to Ms. Saotome complain about her latest break up. All in all it had gone very well, other than literally everyone Madoka talked to asking about why she was so happy. She had tried to keep her excitement under control but it was just so hard. But Madoka didn't have to wait anymore. It was time.

Ms. Saotome finished her rant about her boyfriend (well, ex-boyfriend now) and a girl walked into the classroom. But this was not the confident, mysterious (and if Madoka was being completely honest with herself, sexy) badass that Madoka knew and lo- liked a lot but only in a friendly sort of way. This girl was shy and nervous. She wore red-framed glasses and wore her dark hair in two braids. She looked like she was about to have a heart attack just standing in front of the class. When she spoke it was with a sever stutter. "H-h-hello e-everyone. I-I'm Ho-Homura A-a-a-Akemi."

"Wait, what?!"


Today was my mother's birthday so I was too busy to write anything new. This is actually the combination of two snippets I had already posted in The Homu-Home.

I'm also adding two more ideas to the list, one quest and one story, that I had forgotten yesterday. These are they.

Untitled Neon Genesis Evangelion AU: Different from the other untitled Neon Genesis Evangelion AU.

Untitled Neon Genesis Evangelion Quest: NSFW. Only listed for completion's sake and won't be discussed her so as not to piss of the mods.
 
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Puella Magi Tempus Ansa Part 2
Puella Magi Tempus Ansa
Part 2

"Uh, um, e-excuse me?"

Hitomi and Sayaka stopped their conversation and looked at Homura. She hadn't meant to interrupt them. Well, she had but she hadn't wanted to be rude about it and now they were looking at her and it was so embarrassing. Homura likely would have apologized and ran away if not for Madoka.

Madoka just smiled at her, making Homura feel more at ease. Something about that smile made Homura think that maybe things would be alright. "Yes?" Madoka asked.

"I-I, um are you th-the nurse's aid?" Homura stuttered through her question.

"Yep." Madoka replied. "Did you want me to show you where the nurse's office was?"

Not trusting herself to speak, Homura just nodded nervously.

"Okay then." Madoka smiled again and Homura relaxed. "Let's go."

The pair walked in silence through the hallways of the school, Homura following behind Madoka like a lost puppy. It wasn't until they reached a corridor that didn't have anyone in it that Madoka broke the silence. "So why do you need to visit the nurse for?"

"Eh!" Homura nearly jumped out her skin in surprise. "Oh, um… I'm r-recovering from h-heart surgery and I was feeling a-a bit faint so…" Homura let the sentence trail off out of embarrassment.

"So if you received a big shock you might have a heart attack?" Madoka asked.

"Um, m-maybe?" Homura answered, confused by what that had to do with anything.

"That's too bad. I guess I'll just have to show you later." Homura barely heard Madoka mutter to herself. Madoka stopped suddenly in the middle of the corridor and turned around to face Homura. "Homura Akemi. Do you believe in miracles?"

"Wha-what?" Was Homura's very intelligent answer. "I mean… um, well… maybe?"

Madoka just smiled at her. Now that Homura thought about it, it seemed like there was some melancholy mixed in with the kindness. "That's okay if you don't know. It's not like it's something most people think about." Madoka closed her eyes for a moment before opening them. When she did her smile changed from one that was halfway melancholy to a brilliant, friendly smile of joy. "Anyway, I'd like to be friends. Is that okay?"

Homura's mind short-circuited at the idea that someone might really want to be her friend. She had just transferred in, she didn't know anybody, she wasn't really that special and yet here was this kind, happy girl wanting to be friends. "I-I'd l-like that a-a lot." Homura managed to stutter out.

Madoka's smile did the impossible and turned even more brilliant. "Great! Come on, we should get going." Madoka turned about and continued down the hallway. As she walked away Homura's sharp ears caught Madoka whispering something under her breath. "This time I'll protect you, I swear."

As Homura followed Madoka she could only ponder what that strange scene was all about.

OH MY GOD IT'S SO BAD! *Pulls hair out from frustration with own mediocrity.*
 
Puella Magi Tempus Ansa part 3
Puella Magi Tempus Ansa
Part 3

It was the end of the school day and Madoka had a plan. Last time around she had gone to the mall with Sayaka and Hitomi and then once Hitomi left, that was when she and Sayaka had been introduced to the world of magic. Well, none of that was necessary this time. Instead, Madoka was going to find Mami directly and get her help in training as a Magical Girl. Fighting Witches was very dangerous and Madoka had no intention of dying to some random Witch before she could save Homura. Madoka knew that Sayaka and Hitomi would be disappointed that she couldn't come along, and in fact Madoka was also disappointed she wouldn't be able to invite Homura to join them, but this was important darn it!

Making her excuses to Sayaka and Hitomi, Madoka rushed out of the classroom, intent on finding Mami as soon as possible. Unfortunately, Mitakihara Middle School was huge and Madoka had never learned where Mami's classroom was last time. As a result, Madoka basically ran all around the school in the hopes that she might come across Mami randomly. It didn't work, but just as Madoka was about to give up, she saw Mami headed out the main gates of the school grounds.

Rushing to catch up with her, when she was close enough Madoka called out to Mami. "Mami! Wait up!"

Upon hearing her name, Mami stopped and turned around. When she saw Madoka running up to her, her expression shifted to one of faint confusion. As Madoka came to a halt in front of her, Mami greeted the pinkette. "Hello. I don't think we've met. What can I do for you?"

Unsure of what to say, Madoka simply held up the hand with her Soul Gem ring for Mami to see. At the sight of it Mami's eyes widened a bit. "Oh! Well… would you like to go somewhere a bit more private to discuss things?"

Madoka agreed and so Mami guided her to a cute little cake shop where they got a semi-private booth. Madoka was a little disappointed that they weren't in Mami's apartment, eating Mami's homemade cakes but the cake she got was pretty good anyway so she decided that it didn't really matter.

As soon as the two of them made their orders, Mami got down to business. "Right, you obviously know who I am but I don't know who you are or what you want so why don't we start with that?"

"Uh, right." Madoka knew that she was safe with Mami but she still felt nervous talking to her. After all, Mami had been a hero to Madoka, someone to look up to and so talking to her potentially as equals was a bit nerve-wracking. That, and the last time Madoka had seen her had been when Mami had… died, which didn't help Madoka's mental state any. "Well, I'm M-Madoka Kaname and I'm a new magical girl. I was hoping you'd be able to show me the ropes?"

Mami's eyebrows raised and Madoka thought that maybe she had said something wrong but then Mami smiled and nodded. "Okay, that sounds grand." She agreed and began to cover the basics of being a Magical Girl to Madoka. Madoka already knew most of it but she was so relieved that Mami didn't ask exactly how Madoka knew she was a Magical Girl that Madoka didn't interrupt.

Eventually, after their cake was finished and they had covered everything that could be talked about, Madoka and Mami left the store for some practical training. To Madoka's surprise, Mami didn't really have a dedicated training area set up. She had created all the techniques, tricks and skills that Mami knew in the heat of battle. According to Mami, this was usual way of doing things for Magical Girls and training outside of barriers was rarely done, which was the opposite of what Madoka had assumed. Still, Mami thought it was a good idea for Madoka to get at least some of the basics down before entering a barrier so they made their way to Mami's apartment building.

Once they got there, they headed to the roof and transformed, then spent the rest of the afternoon training. Mami was certainly surprised to learn that Madoka's shield didn't have any offensive capabilities. While the ability to stop time was certainly useful, without some method to attack Madoka's options on the battlefield were severely limited. Mami had some ideas on what Madoka could do to get around that but they mutually decided that instead, they would focus on something else that day.

And so, until the sun started to dip low in the sky, Mami taught Madoka how to dodge. She couldn't use her rifles without getting unwanted attention thanks to the noise that made but her ribbons were a fine substitute. They were capable of moving much faster than Madoka expected and they were able to come at her from surprising angles. Over the course of the afternoon Madoka had gotten caught and wrapped up more times than she cared to count but by the time they were done Madoka felt like she was starting to get it.

Still, even with as much fun as Madoka was having, she had to go home sometime. Mami and Madoka undid their transformation and as Mami escorted Madoka down stair, she reviewed the day's training session: what Madoka had done right and where she could still improve. Madoka drank it all in, being sure to commit Mami's advice to memory. Finally, when they reached street level they said goodbye, Madoka surprised Mami with a quick hug, and Madoka went home, satisfied with a good day's work.

The next day Madoka went to school like usual but was disappointed to find that Homura wasn't there. At first she just assumed that Homura was running late but as the first bell drew closer and closer she began to get worried. When the bell finally rang and Ms. Saotome walked in Madoka was sure something was wrong.

"Students. Attention please." Madoka was temporarily distracted from her fears for Homura's safety when Ms. Saotome began talking. Unlike her usual bright and enthusiastic method of communication, Ms. Saotome spoke softly and seriously. Looking at her, it was clear that something was wrong. Her face was pale and her eyes seemed focused on something far away from the classroom. "I have… awful news. Homura Akemi is dead."

Opps.
 
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Puella Magi Tempus Ansa Part 4
Puella Magi Tempus Ansa
Part 4

Madoka's heart stopped. Her vision blurred and she couldn't breathe. How? How had she failed? What had she done wrong? Why? Just…. Why? Whywhywhywhywhywhywhy-

Somehow she forced more air into her lungs. It took tremendous effort but she started to breathe again and the roaring in her ears quieted down, allowing her to hear the rest of what Ms. Saotome had to say. " –walked into traffic on her way home from school. The police aren't sure if it was an accident or…" Ms. Saotome didn't finish her sentence.

Suddenly Madoka needed to get out of there. She felt cramped, like the room was too small. She stood up. "I need to go to the nurses office." She hoped she looked sick enough that Ms. Saotome would let her go. She certainly felt sick enough.

Ms. Saotome nodded and before she could finish saying "Of course Dear." Madoka had sprinted out of the classroom. She didn't go to the nurse's office though. She needed fresh air, so she headed for the roof. Once she got there though, she had no idea what to do next.

She had failed. She had failed in less than a day if what Ms. Saotome had said was true. She had no more goal, her entire purpose for becoming a Magical Girl was gone. Walpurgisnacht was still coming but Madoka couldn't really bring herself to care at the moment. Yes, she would still fight it anyway but if she couldn't even keep Homura alive for a day, how was she going to save anyone from the worst Witch in history?

Dark thoughts filled Madoka's head. At some point she had lain down on one of the benches and started staring up at the sky. Idly, she brought her Soul Gem up in front of her face. She was surprised at how dark it was. She hadn't been using her magic so why… Madoka realized it didn't really matter why. She should probably cleanse it. She did have an extra Grief Seed Mami had been kind enough to loan her but… She just didn't care.

Did it really matter? It wasn't like she could actually do anything as a Magical Girl. She had no methods of attack so it wasn't like she would be able to do anything except run away from Witches. Madoka chuckled mirthlessly as a morbid thought struck her. She was so pathetic her Witch would probably be super weak too, just like her. In fact, she'd probably be more use as a Grief Seed for Mami to use instead of as a Magical Girl.

The more she thought about it, the more Madoka realized that it was actually a pretty good idea. Mami was in class of course. If she became a Witch right then, then Mami could kill her before she could hurt anyone. Really, this was the best course of action for everyone.

Transforming into her Magical Girl state, Madoka started turning her shield back and forth, using the only magic she knew she had to try and fill her Soul Gem faster. Tick, and the world would turn gray, with all movement stopped. Tock and life would return to the world. Tick, tock, tick, tock, tick, tock. Back and forth Madoka turned the shield.

It was like an hourglass Madoka realized. When it was right side up, the sand would fall and time would go on. Turn it side ways, the sand stops and so does time. But that would mean… No, Madoka thought, that would be ridiculous. Except, she had already turned back time once so maybe it wasn't as ridiculous as she thought. In any case, it couldn't hurt to try, right?

Gripping the edge of the Shield, Madoka rotated it further than she had ever before, a full one hundred and eighty degrees. There was a brief sense of vertigo and then Madoka felt something soft where before she had only felt the cold, hard stone bench she had been laying on. Opening her eyes, she saw that she was somehow back in her room, in bed with her pajamas on. Reaching up and opening the blinds, the morning sun ended up blinding her.

Rubbing her eyes to clear the spots from them, Madoka got up and started looking for her phone. When she found it she started laughing in relief. It was yesterday! Homura was still alive! She had really done it! … Except she had a Soul Gem nearly full of Grief that was about to hatch a Witch in her own home.

Tempus Ansa is one of the hardest Stories I have so far to write. The other one is Learning To Sing.
 
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Puella Magi Tempus Ansa part 5
Puella Magi Tempus Ansa
Part 5

Madoka clutched at her soul gem and stared wide eyed as it steadily filled with grief. She didn't understand. She wasn't using her magic, she wasn't even transformed and yet her soul gem kept getting darker and darker. As the her level of grief rose, so did her fear. If she didn't find someway to stop it, she was going to turn into a witch and if that wasn't bad enough, she was still in her home, with her family waking up. As soon as she transformed, they would be her first victims.

Madoka couldn't let that happen. But no matter how desperately she tried to think of a solution, none appeared. She needed a grief seed to drain her soul gem, but she didn't have any. She couldn't get any either, because even if she knew where a witch was and could reach it before time ran out, she didn't have any way to kill it. The only possible way for her to get grief seeds she could think of was to get some from Mami but there was no way she'd be able to reach Mami's apartment before her soul gem cracked, unless she transformed and used her magic to freeze time. But that would cost magic and just make the situation worse.

With no way out, Madoka gave up. Tears began to flow as she sniffled and sobbed. She was going to die, there was no way to avoid it, but there was no way she was going to let her family die along with her. She began to mentally "scream" with all her might.

MAMI-SAN, HELP!

What? Who?
Mami, normally so calm and composed, sounded confused as she answered Madoka's telepathic call. But then she recovered, and sounded more confident with her next question. Where are you? Hold on, I'm on my way!

Madoka sagged with relief. Mami was on her way. On her way to save Madoka's family. On her way to kill her…

Tears fell.

The next thing Madoka knew, it felt like a tremendous weight was being lifted from her shoulders. Opening her eyes, she saw Mami in her magical girl costume, crouched over her in her and holding a grief seed up to her soul gem. As the blackness was drained away by the witch egg, Madoka felt like she could finally breath again.

Draining away the grief only took a few seconds, and Mami tucked away the grief seed. The look she gave Madoka was sympathetic, but Madoka thought she could see undercurrents of suspicion there as well. "Feeling better? I hope so, because I've got a lot of questions for you, like how did you know me or why you let your soul gem accumulate so much grief."

Before Madoka could answer, there was a knock at her door. "Madoka?" Her father's voice was muffled by the wood. "Are you awake? I thought I heard someone talking."

"Morning Dad!" Madoka called back. Switching to telepathy, she started talking quickly to Mami. Thank you, Mami-san. You saved my life. And I promise to give you the answers you want but could you maybe leave for now? I don't think either of us want you getting caught by my parents.

Mami frowned but she stood up and hopped up into the frame of Madoka's open window. Fine, we can talk later but you will explain everything. You owe me. Until then. Without so much as a goodbye, Mami jumped from the window and left.

Madoka got up and sighed. Well, she had lucked her way through one crisis, but now she had to figure out how to explain everything to Mami without sounding like she was crazy or lying. It was apparent by how she left that Mami didn't think much of her at the moment and Madoka hoped that she hadn't just alienated her friend. And of course, she still needed to figure out how to protect Homura.

But first, she needed to wake up her mother.

Haven't done this for awhile. I went and looked back on it, and looking through the thread, I realized that I haven't see some of the guys I consider friends around her for awhile either, like @UbeOne, @The3rdCorinthian, and @akrasiel23 around lately either.
 
Witches Are Good Girls
Witches are Good Girls
Homura was nervous. While she would never admit as much to anyone she wasn't so prideful that she would lie to herself. She could admit that she'd failed a hundred times, that she'd probably keep failing for a while yet, that she was stubborn, unsociable and a bit obsessed. She was very good at being honest with herself so she could admit that she was nervous. Nervous and a bit hopeful as well.

Every loop had its differences. Homura didn't know why things seemed to randomly change when she went back in time but they did. Sometimes it was small things and sometimes the changes were big. It didn't make sense to Homura: If she was traveling back in time then everything should be exactly the same each time, at least until she started making changes. But there were always things that her actions couldn't account for. Maybe she wasn't traveling back in time but rather sliding sideways in to a different timeline. That would make sense but Homura hoped it wasn't true. If it were then that would mean that she was overwriting the Homura native to each new timeline, essentially killing her. Homura might be ready, willing and able to do whatever was necessary to save Madoka but the thought of killing innocents in pursuit of that goal still darkened her Soul Gem. She wasn't a monster. And the kicker would be that in the end the Madoka she saved wouldn't even be 'her' Madoka, just the latest version of her.

Back to each loop having it's differences. This loop had the biggest change so far: there were no Witches. None. In the two weeks since she had woken up in the hospital Homura had not encountered one Witch. She'd gone looking for them and hadn't found any. There hadn't been any unusual suicide, crimes or accidents in the news either. It wasn't too much of a problem for Homura, who had Grief Seeds stored in her shield, but she didn't know why or how and that made her nervous. But there were no Witches and maybe that meant no Magical Girls and if there were no Magical Girls or Witches then Homura didn't have to save Madoka at all. She hoped that was true.

After two weeks of no sign of either Witches or other Magical Girls Homura was about ready to admit that maybe, just maybe, she could relax. But first there was one last thing to check up on. Which was why she had been waiting across the street from an abandoned construction site for the last ten minutes. This was one of the earliest points where Kyubey might make contact. So far there hadn't been any sign of Madoka but Kyubey had just shown up.

Now Homura had a choice. She could question Kyubey on the lack of Witches and maybe get some answers. There was no way she'd get the whole story out of him and the answers she did get would probably be designed to lead her to the wrong conclusion but it would be a start. Or she could kill him for no real benefit what so ever. Homura pulled out a pistol from her shield. Useless or not, killing Kyubey made her feel warm and fuzzy inside.

She took aim at the cabbit as she raised her arm she felt something wrap around it, halting her movement and digging in painfully. She looked down to find a thorny vine had sprouted thought the pavement of the sidewalk she was standing on and wrapped around her wrist. She tried to pull free but that just made the vine tighten and the thorns to puncture her skin. Before she could react more vines burst through the concrete and wrapped around Homura, binding her tightly. It reminded Homura of all the times Mami had tied her in her ribbons but much more painful thanks to the thorns making her bleed.

"How curious. You are quite the anomaly."

Homura whipped her head back up to look at Kyubey when he spoke. She was surprised to see he was now resting on the shoulder of a Magical Girl. She was wearing a deep green sundress that matched her hair, a black belt around her waist, long socks that were stripped with light green and black and a pair of black flats on her feet. Her soul gem served as belt buckle. It was bright red and shaped like a rose. Held in one had was an oversized pair of black scissors, which Homura internally declared to be the most ridiculous weapon since she had found out that that Mami's muskets were made of ribbons. But what drew Homura's attention was the mask on the green girls face. It was pure white and completely smooth, without eyeholes or any other physical features. Its only detail was a black design that looked like a stylized butterfly.

"That's okay though. We'll fix that in just a second." Kyubey spoke again. Apparently this was a cue of some sort because the green Magical Girl started walking towards Homura, pulling out a white mask similar to her own except without the butterfly design. Something about the silent girl deeply unnerved Homura and she began futilely struggling against her bonds.

"Please don't struggle. Just a few more seconds and you'll be feeling wonderful I promise. We just need to put this mask on you and –Hm?" Kyubey stopped mid sentence, something catching his attention up in the air. He jumped off of the green girl's shoulder and not one second later a golden blast of golden magic slammed into the girl, sending her flying back into the construction site.

"Stay away from her!" A mature voice called out seconds before someone with blonde curls landed in front of Homura with her back to the trussed up time-stopper.

Homura recognized that voice and those curls. "Mami?"

The new girl spun around and Homura's violet eyes met one pink eye and one green one. "Hello. I'm Candeloro."


Wow, I'm really late with this today. Still before midnight were I am but I totally forgot about this today so that's why you get the last of the pre-writen snippets I had. This one was also previously posted in the Homu-Home and It's also just a first draft. The two major problems I have with it is that there's no way Homura would go two weeks without checking on Madoka so I'll have to rework it so that she meets the Witches way earlier and the the second problem is that Candeloro's introduction is poorly worded and needs to be cleaned up. Anyway, tell me what you guy's think!
 
Witches are Good Girls part 2
Witches Are Good Girls
Part 2

"Hello. I'm Candeloro."

Homura stared at the girl in front of her. She looked like Mami. She sounded like Mami. She smiled the way Mami smiled. But she wasn't Mami. It wasn't just the heterochromatic eyes and strange outfit, while those were very strange. Something about her just felt off.

"Are you okay?" The Mami-lookalike, Candeloro apparently, asked with concern.

"I am as well as I can be, considering the situation." Homura replied, mentally shrugging. She didn't like to rely on others, not any more, but she wasn't too proud to admit that at the moment she needed help. Homura also hoped that Candeloro would be able to provide some information if they got out of this alive.

"Ah! Right, sorry!" Candeloro apologized and panickedly started pulling at the vines that held Homura in place. "We need to get out of here! Those girls are way to strong to fight!" Unfortunately, despite pulling with all her might, she didn't seem to be making much progress.

Over Candeloro's shoulder, Homura caught sight of the green Magical Girl getting back up out of the pile of girders Candeloro's magical blast had knocked her into. "You may want to hurry up." Homura said, calm as ever.

"What?" Candeloro paused in her frantic tearing to look at Homura. Following Homura's gaze, she turned her head to look over her shoulder. When she caught sight of the Magical Girl getting up she immediately went back to pulling at the vines, working twice as fast as before.

Homura knew Candeloro wouldn't make it in time. The Magical Girl was up now and had just summoned a new pair of scissors. In a few seconds one of them was going to be getting impaled. "Focus on my arms." Homura commanded.

Candeloro looked up in confusion. "What?"

"Just pick one of my arms and focus on it!" Homura shouted at the panicked girl.

"Okay, okay!" Candeloro did as she was told and started pulling apart the vines that held Homura's right hand. She still kept hold of her pistol. Candeloro realized if she freed that hand the girl she was trying to help might be able to shoot the Magical Girl and hold her off while Candeloro worked to free her from the rest of the vines.

Finally ready to attack, the green Magical Girl leaped, scissor first, at Homura and Candeloro with enough force to crack the pavement beneath her feet. At the same time Candeloro cheered as she finally broke the last of the vines holding Homura's arm in place. However her elation turned to despair when Homura dropped the gun and instead reached for her left side. "What are you doing?" Candeloro yelled.

Ignoring the frightened girl, Homura gripped the edge of her shield and turned. There was a clicking of gears and instantly the world turned grey, all noise ceased and the enemy froze in place along with the rest of the world, the tip of her scissor blade not an inch from the back of Candeloro's head. Homura quickly freed herself of the vines, careful not to touch anything she didn't want to bring into time stop.

Now that she was free Homura had options. She could try and kill the Magical Girl but Candeloro had told her that the enemy was too strong to fight. Homura didn't know how true that was, as she didn't know the level of strength of either of them but she wasn't about to take chances. That meant running away for now and coming back later when the odds were in her favor.

That just left the question of what to do with Candeloro. The blond girl hadn't impressed Homura so far. She had only pulled off a basic blast of magic, something relatively easy to do and weak over all. She didn't seem to have any weapons. She had been more focused on fleeing than fighting, suggesting that she was rather weak. And, perhaps worst of all in Homura's opinion, she had panicked. Losing your head metaphorically in combat was a good way to lose it literally as well. All in all, it looked like Candeloro would just be dead weight if Homura brought her along.

Despite all that Candeloro had saved Homura's life and if she left her there, Candeloro would die as soon as time stop ended and that just didn't sit right with Homura. Sighing, Homura reached out to pull Candeloro into the time stop. She justified her decision with the hope that Candeloro would be able to fill her in with what was going on.

As soon as Candeloro was touched color returned to her and she looked around fearfully. "W-what? What's going on? Why's the world all grey?"

Homura ignored her questions. "Be quiet and hold on." She said as she scooped the taller girl into a princess carry and jumped.

Candeloro was scared and confused. First she had attacked a Magical Girl, which was an easy and painful way of committing suicide. However, it wasn't like she could just sit by and watch as Kyubey hurt yet another innocent girl. Then, just as she was sure she was about to die the whole world had turned grey and everything was frozen. Except the girl she had tried to save, who was now free of vines somehow. She had been picked up before she could react and now she was being carried by the other girl as she leaped from building to building across town.

Finally the girl with the black hair landed on a rooftop and didn't immediately jump again. She set Candeloro down, letting her stand on her own two feet. Then she reached for her shield and turned it. Somehow this made color return to the world and everything started moving again. Finally the girl looked at Candeloro with a piercing stare and started talking. "Hello. I am Homura Akemi. Thank you for saving my life. Now would you please answer some questions for me."

Not completely happy with this one.

2 down, 2 to go. Probably only getting one done tonight, if that.
 
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Witches are Good Girls part 3
Witches are Good Girls
Part 3

Homura stared at the Witch's Barrier hanging in the air in front of her. And that's clearly what it was, a Barrier. Definitely not the safe place that Candeloro had promised her. Homura had been infinitely patient with the girl, at least by Homura's standards. She had rescued Candeloro despite her seeming uselessness. She had agree to put of the explanation she had demanded until they where someone where "safe enough". But this was a step to far. Rather then think Candeloro was pathetic, now Homura thought she might be trying to lull her into a false sense of security. She wondered if it would be better to just shoot the girl right now.

Unfortunately, that would mean that she still wouldn't know what was going on. Beyond the fact that she couldn't save Madoka if she didn't know what she was supposed to be saving her from let alone where the girl even was, Homura was just getting plain frustrated at this point. Things were happening but she didn't know why or how. It was like she was a Rugby player who had been thrown into a game of American football without having the differences explained to her.

So it might not have been smart, walking into an obvious trap like this one but at this point Homura simply didn't care. She was walking to the Barrier and one way or another she was getting answers. After all, it wasn't really a trap if she knew it was coming, right?

Homura glanced at Candeloro, who was waiting patiently for Homura by the Barrier. She certainly didn't look like an eldritch abomination made of emotional pain given physical from that wanted to eat her. She looked like Mami. Maybe this wasn't a trap after all?

Sure, and maybe the universe was going to cut Homura a break and all the various Madoka's she had failed were going to turn up all right and wanting to be Homura's harem. It could happen.

"Homura?" Candeloro asked. She must have noticed Homura's scowl. "I know it looks weird but trust me, it's the only place we'll be safe."

Homura shrugged. "You first."

Candeloro flinched a bit. "Ah. Right, sorry." She turned to face the Barrier, taking one last look over her shoulder as if to make sure that Homura was still there, and stepped inside. Homura took a breath to calm her nerves and followed.

Inside the Barrier was much different than what Homura was expecting. Typically, the insides of Barriers are strange, and while this one clearly wasn't the same as reality, it lacked the sheer insanity that typified Barriers. There wasn't anything misshapen or bent at odd angles. The world wasn't made of plants or darkness or any other strange materials. There were no strange smells or sounds that had no source. Everything was just… normal.

Homura found herself standing in the middle of an ordinary street. The same street, she realized to her surprise, as the one she had just been standing on outside the Barrier. Turning around, she found that the Barrier was attached to the exact same apartment building as the one it had been attached to in the real world. The only difference was that everything was dark and they sky was an odd mix of colors, as though by stepping into the Barrier she had been thrown into the future by a few hours and it was evening. But when she looked down at herself she saw that she was still brightly colored. It seemed that it wasn't that it was actually dark, just that everything was darkly colored. However, there was something else that was bothering her.

Before Homura could figure out what it was the door to the apartment building opened up and Candeloro poked her head out. Unlike earlier where she looked constantly nervous, now she was smiling widely. "C'mon, in here! This is where we live! I can't wait to introduce you to everybody!" She said excitedly. Then she ducked back into the building. Homura rolled her eyes, checked that her shield was still there in case things went wrong and then she went inside the building.

Inside was a rather standard apartment lobby, with a set of stairs in the back, some elevators to the side, a front desk and some chairs and tables in the middle of the floor. Before Homura could take in any more details than that, Candeloro was grabbing her hand and trying to drag her to the stairs. "C'mon, everyone lives upstairs. I just know-"

Whatever she was about to say was drowned out by a great crash. Snapping her eyes to the stairs, Homura was treated to the sight of a great big ball of red and blue rolling down the stairs as two voices shouted at each other.

"Admit it! You're the one that ate my fish cakes!"

"Did not! And even if I did it was because you were to busy crying in your room to enjoy them!"

"You take that back!"

"Oh, boo hoo. You gonna go write about it in your diary?"

There was another, louder crash as the big ball of violence finally landed on the main floor, coming to a halt and properly separating into two distinct figures.

"Girls!" Candeloro shouted angrily, surprising Homura that such a loud sound could come out of the nervous girl. "What have I told you about fighting! Straighten up, we have a guest."

Both figures stood up and brushed themselves off. The first was dressed in a bright red kimono a couple of sizes too large for her, with strange, multicolored designs and her hair was fire. Not on fire but actually made of fire, pulled back and tied into a ponytail with a black ribbon. However, what surprised Homura but really shouldn't have was that she had Kyoko Sakura's face, in much the same way Candeloro had Mami's.

If the red figure surprised Homura, the blue one brought her up short and left her completely stunned. A knight in the shape of a mermaid, she a long fish-like tail that supported her weight and which she used to slither along the ground like a snake. Her upper half wore full plate armor and a blue cape with a huge, patterned collar tied around her neck with a pink ribbon. Without a doubt, this was Sayaka Miki's Witch. The only differences where her size, which more in line with a regular human, and that wasn't wearing a helmet, allowing Homura to see Sayaka's blue-haired, blue-eyed face.

Candeloro, oblivious to Homura's distress, pointed to first the Kyoko look alike and then to Sayaka's Witch. "Homura, I'd like to you meet Ophelia and Oktavia Von Seckendorff."

"Candeloro, what are you doing!" Oktavia shouted, drawing a sword from nowhere. "That's a Magical Girl! Get away from her!" Holding the sword in a ready position she began to advance on Homura.

Candeloro jumped in-between the two of them and held her arms out. "Wait! Don't hurt her!"

"Move Candeloro! She's dangerous!"

"No! You don't understand! She's nice! She saved my life!"

While Oktavia and Candeloro engaged in their shouting match, Ophelia casually walked up to the still catatonic Homura. "So, uh, Candeloro's telling the truth, right? You're not going to kill us all? Because, honestly, you sort of have us dead to rights and I'd really rather not die today."

Homura turned to regard Ophelia, slightly pulled out of her daze. She worked her jaw for several seconds without sound coming out before finally managing to stutter out a question. "I-is this all of you? This is all of you, r-right?"

"Eh?" Ophelia tilted her head questioningly but wound up shrugging. "Almost. Our fourth member stays on the roof because-"

Ophelia didn't get to finish her sentence before Homura moved. Dashing up the stairs and ignoring the cries of panic and anger behind her, Homura hoped and prayed with all her might that she was wrong. That the pattern she had seen wasn't a pattern, just coincidence.

Rounding the last twist of the staircase, Homura burst through the door to the roof and stopped dead. And then she started to scream.

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