...Did you miss the mote recovery effect tied to anima banners in his homebrew? Mid-combat regen still happens with that.
I didn't but I wouldn't really say that deals with the fact that if he is removing other mid combat mote regeneration than it seriously nerfs Malfeas' Overdrive pools. I don't have the best eye for game balance though so it could be that it does make up for it.
Unrelated, I was dissatisfied that Verdant Empress Endowment and its charms don't require the exalt to actually do anything, they simply snap their fingers and the effect occurs. So I rewrote the charm into two different ones. The first makes it so you can activate any time you hear a wish, and that fulfilling it gives you that botch mechanic, but doesn't fulfill the request for you. You still have to go and actually do the work. The second just makes it so you can improve a dot ability or specialty by 1 by training the target for a scene if that will fulfill there wish.
Verdant Emptiness Endowment
Cost: 10m, 1wp
Mins: Essence 3
Type: Simple
Keywords: Shaping, Sorcerous, Training
Duration: Indefinite
Prerequisite Charms: First Cecelyne Excellency, Transcendent Desert Creature
Few beings are as they would choose to be. Certainly, Cecelyne would rather that her inner borders were not fettered to Malfeas. Where dissatisfaction endures, emptiness spreads the idea of the Endless Desert. Prior to using this Charm, the character must have observed the target express dislike of her present circumstances and desire for some improvement or change. The wish need not be articulated with any intention of seeking its fulfillment or even seriously, but it must be unambiguous. Should the Infernal fulfill this desire, than at any point in the future, the Infernal may come back to that individual and demand any one task. If the target understands the demand and the task isn't literally impossible, she intuitively understands that doom will befall her for failing to obey. After one month or as soon as the task becomes impossible (or constitutes an unacceptable order), the duty ends without harm to the beneficiary. However, if the character stops working toward the goal for more than a day while the duty remains, she suffers a number of automatic botches equal to the Infernal's Essence rating. These botches match the effects of breaking an oath sanctified by an Eclipse Caste Solar and linger until the worst possible time.
Blessing of Cecelyne
Cost: -
Mins: Essence 3
Type: Simple
Keywords: Training
Duration: One Scene
Prerequisite Charms: Verdant Empress Endowment
This charm functions as an upgrade to Verdant Empress Endowment. When the Infernal activates that charm,they may spend spend the scene tutoring the target in one attribute, ability or specialty. At the end of this scene the target gains target gains one dot in the trained attribute, ability or specialty if doing so would fulfill their request. This Training effect can't raise any trait above its normal maximum, nor can it raise any trait higher than what the infernal possess. This Charm also can't target those who have any outstanding experience debt from prior use of any Training effect.
And then another take on the Verdant Empress Endowment. I really don't like the evil genie stuff and don't think it fits. The whole point of Ccelyne is that she gives you things, and you worship, revere and obey her in return. That's why Temple Self Apothesis and Locust Mana Plague make people who worship her or eat of her bounty revere her. With that in mind, a slight change to verdant empress to be more in line with that. Just replaces the botches with an intimacy of reverence.
Verdant Emptiness Endowment
Cost: 10m
Mins: Essence 3
Type: Simple
Keywords: Shaping, Sorcerous,
Duration: Instant
Prerequisite Charms: First Cecelyne Excellency, Transcendent Desert Creature
Few beings are as they would choose to be. Certainly, Cecelyne would rather that her inner borders were not fettered to Malfeas. Where dissatisfaction endures, emptiness spreads the idea of the Endless Desert. Prior to using this Charm, the character must have observed the target express dislike of her present circumstances and desire for some improvement or change. The wish need not be articulated with any intention of seeking its fulfillment or even seriously, but it must be unambiguous. Should the Infernal fulfill this desire, than the target gains an intimacy of reverence towards the infernal.