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And then Taylor meet Twilight Sparkle.

Wow that would be hilarious.

Which would also mean ifit was late enough in the series she'd meet Starlight 'Poster girl for inadvisably applied magic' Glimmer and Sci-Twi 'Managed to figure out how to detect and capture magic with technology' Sparkle. It would be fun to watch from a safe distance... like another universe. A fairly distant one.

Add in Gadaget Harckwrench and Agatha Hetrodyne to see just how insane things could get.

Also RCB is almost certainly going to do something massively unwise, and unintentionally hilarious. I already put in my take, I'm interested in seeing what the official version is like.
 
Fortuna, the Trolling Troll whom Trolls.
Who. You're referring to the verb's subject; also, this sentence is intransitive so it doesn't even has an object to be referred.

Wikitionary said:
Usage notes
  • Who is a subject pronoun. Whom is an object pronoun. To determine whether a particular sentence uses a subject or an object pronoun, rephrase it to use he/she or him/her instead of who, whom; if you use he or she, then you use the subject pronoun who; if you use him or her, then you use the object pronoun. The same rule applies to whoever and whomever.
  • (...)
  • The use of who as an object pronoun is proscribed by many authorities, but is frequent nonetheless. It is usually felt as much more acceptable than the converse hypercorrection in which whom is misused in place of who, as in *the gentleman whom spoke to me.
 
Before now, Carols issues were only on display to her daughters, who were unable to make her get help, and her husband, who given his own issues, is unmotivated. Now she's gone mask off to her sister, who will definately take action.
Probably. That does not neccessarily mean Carol will actually do better, of course. And even if Carol do shape up, there is a good chance it will not last. The force of habit is strong.

Question is: would Carols sister have done anything that actually mattered if official attention was not involved? I'm honestly not sure. One can hope, of course. But it could easilly have come to words and hot air that were then ignored. Or pretended to be listened to, then Carol letting all the annoyance and stress blow up on what she could decide to see as the cause: Amy.
 
Does Vicky know how overworked her sister is?
I don't think Vicky could possibly have known or else she'd already have gone ballistic on someone. Perhaps literally. Obviously she'd be aware that something was wrong because Amy was visibly not happy, but the full scope of the problem almost certainly eluded her.

At this point in her character arc Vicky's main flaw is not thinking shit through before she does shit, but she's still a cinnamon roll who just wants everybody around her to be happy and who genuinely loves her sister.

Especially given that trying to write a strictly canon-compliant Amy is impossible due to the fact that 'Worm' and 'Ward' are directly opposed to each other on exactly who Amy Dallon is supposed to be. And I don't just mean 'the direction her character took in the future', I mean in each story's respective portrayal of the events of the first year of Worm canon, 2011. Any fanfic is by inescapable necessity using the author's particular fanon version of who Amy Dallon is and why, because her core canon is... "strongly disputed" is the politest way to put it.

Which means that Vicky can feel anything the author wants to on the topic, because who she's feeling it about is entirely up to them to determine.
 
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Loved the latest story extension, @mp3.1415player. The basement scene with Taylor in her Comfy Chair and QA's linkport was perfect. I imagine Shaper and Waste were busy having their own conference while the humans scattered. Probably even from earlier, come to think of it, since neither Amy nor Vicky noticed her hitchhiker from the back yard. (Granted, they were getting hit with a lot of input at the time, and dragonflies don't exactly have to touch scalp if they perch on one's head so Amy's lifecan alert wouldn't have fired off.) I wonder if the two Shards already had updates in place, or if they are getting fresh downloads right now?
And then Taylor meet Twilight Sparkle.

Wow that would be hilarious.
My Little Physicist: Friendship is SCIENCE!
 
Technically, that would stop it from being legally enforceable. It's a basic part of contract law that they can't be made under coercion. If someone puts a bit of paper in front of you, holds a gun to your head and says "Sign or I shoot" it becomes legally meaningless (while still, for example, being quite handy for removing money from a bank account as your dead body slowly cools on the floor surrounded by blood).

That might be true in our world. And yet the Wards exist. Unless you think the parents of the Wards are the ones who have to sign an NDA regarding any secret identities their children learn. It's more likely that on Earth Bet children are legally capable of signing an NDA and having it be binding. Also note that both Vicky and Amy did have the choice of not signing. Nobody was holding a gun to their head and forcing the issue. They read the cover page, understood what the cover page said, and then they decided to keep reading. Here, an excerpt:

"Your friend, Taylor Hebert," the brunette replied with a smile. "That hasn't changed. But before I can tell you anything else, at least about what you really want to ask, you need to read these, understand them, and sign them." She looked at the two sets of paperwork, then up at Amy and Vicky. "Or you can pretend none of this happened, we can go back out into the garden and finish the lemonade, then go for an ice-cream and a movie or something."

Amy studied her. Taylor looked back, smiling a little, but Amy got the impression that her friend was hiding a certain amount of worry under the usual cheerful expression. She glanced at Vicky who was chewing her lip, clearly desperately curious but also cautious. They'd heard enough from Carol to be wary of signing anything at all without someone trusted checking it over.

Amy herself had signed a lot of NDAs over the time since she'd Triggered, probably more than almost any Parahuman in the city, and was very familiar with the process. This seemed different somehow.

Note that they had a choice right from the get go. They could not read and sign the NDA, at which point nothing happens. They go back outside, drink lemonade, and play with the dragonflies.
Or they could read and sign the NDAs, and see just how deep the rabbit hole goes.

The warnings under that were fairly bloodcurdling. In essence it suggested that turning the page was a capital offense if one didn't immediately sign the document. She exchanged a look with Vicky, who had accepted the other one from Taylor, her sister looking back with wide eyes, then both of them flipped to the next page.

And this was their second (and possibly final) chance to back out. The cover page clearly detailed the consequences for continuing to read and not signing. At this point, if they so desired they could have put the packets down and walked away without any issues. They chose, of their own free will and without any coercion, to keep reading. They then reread the NDA multiple times, making absolutely sure they understood what the hell they were signing. Only then did they decide to sign. Again, nobody was holding a gun to their head and saying "Sign, or else". They weren't under duress and being forced into it. Yes, they had a warning that it basically could be considered a capital offense to not sign after reading the entire thing, but they still had that choice and nobody was forcing them to sign.

My Little Physicist: Friendship is SCIENCE!

Better then an old MLP/Call of Cthulhu mashup game I once saw on Playbyweb called My Little Cthulhu: Friendship is Madness
 
How can she do that? Remember its not tinker tech so anyone with the blueprints can build it. Do you really think that the only copy of the documentation is stored in Gravtech? There is not way the government is that stupid considering how component they have being displayed so far?
You do have a point but I guess I just wrote that comment thinking Taylor will build some kinda atomic teleporter or disintegrator that targets the signature of her particlar type of tech. But still....doesn't she own the blueprints? It might not fully mitigate the copying of her tech but it'll stop a fair bit...right? I apologize if this comment lacks critical knowledge. Have a good day my dude.
 
That might be true in our world. And yet the Wards exist. Unless you think the parents of the Wards are the ones who have to sign an NDA regarding any secret identities their children learn. It's more likely that on Earth Bet children are legally capable of signing an NDA and having it be binding.
Given how many children and women are likely to trigger compared to adults and men, this was probably changed in the 90's once it was clear that superhumans weren't going away. I'd imagine that there is still a lower limit on who can sign, and that they have to reaffirm their understanding every few years until they are an adult.
You do have a point but I guess I just wrote that comment thinking Taylor will build some kinda atomic teleporter or disintegrator that targets the signature of her particlar type of tech. But still....doesn't she own the blueprints? It might not fully mitigate the copying of her tech but it'll stop a fair bit...right? I apologize if this comment lacks critical knowledge. Have a good day my dude.
The issue is that it's not a type of tech, it's new physics and programming paradigms. She is just making the proof of concepts. They have multiple other groups doing the ramification and engineering work for it. Imagine that she's the polyglot version of Einstein, and everything she's produced is the equivalent of gr and Sr.
 
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another thing to keep in mind is Hyperbole, this is a teen reacting to a warning page of a NDA that lists what bad things could be brought to bear if they violate it. Amy is familiar with HIPPAA, this is just a bit more, enforceable
 
They have multiple other groups doing the ramification and engineering work for it. Imagine that she's the polyglot version of Einstein, and everything she's produced is the equivalent of gr and Sr.
To expand on my own thoughts, there are three legal protections on reproducible work. Copyright applies to intangible works like music, art, and writing; this gives control and distribution rights of the first sale to the producer. Patent applies to physical items and processes; such as computer chips, the diagnostic programs used for identifying certain cancers, gm seeds, etc. These are specifically limited to a particular implementation of that process, so if someone comes up with a completely different way of doing the same thing you can't do anything about them. The final one is trade secrets, and the only protection in law is against espionage, which has harsh penalties (destruction of all data that was produced using the stolen information has happened) if convicted, to the point where many companies will turn over ex-employees that are trying to sell them company secrets.

Math and databases are explicitly not covered by any of these laws, neither are natural phenomenon. This does mean that cooking recipes aren't protected even though the book they are in is.
 
Taylor might be the pioneer in these fields, but she is by no means the only one studying them... now. Just the one who keeps blazing a trail into new areas of SCIENCE for others to follow.
 
I can't help but feel mildly impressed with Carol. She didn't go on an "Amy is Evil by Nature because her dad's a villain" rant in front of her sister and the feds, even if it's what Carol does believe.
 
I can't help but feel mildly impressed with Carol. She didn't go on an "Amy is Evil by Nature because her dad's a villain" rant in front of her sister and the feds, even if it's what Carol does believe.

Wait, I just realised, Carol believes Amy to be evil by nature. Wildbow said the same => Carol is a genderbent superpowered Wildbow SI :o

P.S. I am obviously 100% serious in the line before this one :p
 
I can't help but feel mildly impressed with Carol. She didn't go on an "Amy is Evil by Nature because her dad's a villain" rant in front of her sister and the feds, even if it's what Carol does believe.
Gotta say, this rant of hers did her no favors.
"She spends too long at the hospital one day, then wants to take the next one off completely! And now she wants to… to… have a holiday or something like that!
Especially given the '62 hours a week at the hospital' bit.
 
Fortuna, that's who. Fortuna. Contessa. The Boogeyman with the Hat. Pull the English textbook out of your backside and read the story.
Ignorants should try to learn, not boast of their anti-intellectualism and insult their betters.

In that sentence "Fortuna, the Trolling Troll" is the subject, "Trolls" is the predicate, and there is no object, so the proper pronoun is "who".

By the way, why are people reacting to my correction with "Funny" instead of "Informative" or just a "Like"?
 
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English grammar has a thousand and one rules. I highly doubt that anyone knows and follows every single one of them. I am also almost certain that in this short post I have committed grievous grammar sins and yet no one would even know unless they spent an unusual amount of time looking for them.

Why does it matter if a sentence fails to abide by one of the rules if everyone can understand its meaning and intent. I have read grammar books and half the time the examples they show make less sense than the technically incorrect sentences.
 
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