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Zergling and Spartans

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I remember back in the day the strategy that always payed off was to make more zerglings. If you have enough zerglings, you can beat battlecruisers.
 
VexMasterTyrant said:
Aw that really sweet! Killing Covenant Forces for the UNSC is a good thing in my book! And destroying a Covvie Ship on your lonesome is a badass feat!
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But why, your not human, why are you interfering in another alien vs alien conflict....
Honestly, if anything, Humans, in general, contain far more essence due to the fact that Halo Humanity was an old race, a forerunner tier old race, the average human should contain far more essence than Covenant...

I'm not saying F*** humanity, but give me a more realistic perspective of a zergs, not just a human in a zerg body...
Give a more realistic perspective of UNSC, don't just White- Wash them, and don't just Black-Wash the Covenant...
Give the perspective of an outsider
Maybe I'm expecting too much...
Maybe it's just me...
Anyways good luck... Zerg Speed
 
Y Ddraig Goch said:
But why, your not human, why are you interfering in another alien vs alien conflict....
Honestly, if anything, Humans, in general, contain far more essence due to the fact that Halo Humanity was an old race, a forerunner tier old race, the average human should contain far more essence than Covenant...

I'm not saying F*** humanity, but give me a more realistic perspective of a zergs, not just a human in a zerg body...
Give a more realistic perspective of UNSC, don't just White- Wash them, and don't just Black-Wash the Covenant...
Give the perspective of an outsider
Maybe I'm expecting too much...
Maybe it's just me...
Anyways good luck... Zerg Speed
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It's a combination of factors really.
First off, it's a self insert. I would want to stop the covenant if I was in HALO, so I would try to stop them. I understand that the races can be redeemed, but the High Prophets will not let the pressure on humanity fade. For now I'm making an enemy out of the covenant because if I don't try to stop them they will keep killing humans.
I could just not care about them. I'm lazy enough for that. But the problem is I would care, and that feeling would be intensified by the memories of Gamer TrueGuardian, as a Gamerkinds empathy is increased with time.
 
You really need to sort out the threadmarks, mate.

But the story seems okay, so far. Needs a lot of polish, but the best way to improve is just to keep writing.
 
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