Here's the first part of the fight. Let's see what difference a year of writing has done to my very first bit of fiction.
I've finished the entire chapter now, but I'm not going to spam post it. Instead I'll post the final two pieces over the next couple days, around this time as usual. Give or take half an hour... ish.
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Chapter 25.2
Two submarines had been borrowed from the U.N. by NERV to scan the ocean where the Revenants had been coming from after the third attack. While they hadn't located the point of origin for the creatures yet, they had been fortunate enough to detect another one making its way towards Tokyo-3, and NERV had called its pilots in early to prepare them.
The afternoon sun shone brightly, reflecting off the blade of a gigantic axe clutched tightly by equally gigantic armoured red fists. Unit-02 stood in the middle of a street on the outskirts of the city, angry green eyes staring in the direction of the Tokyo-3 bay. More armoury and defense buildings had been completed over the last few months, and for the first time since last year, there were weapon batteries standing by to assist in punishing any potential invaders.
Behind Unit-02, hiding partially in the shadow of a tall windowless building, Unit-00 aimed a long rifle past the red Evangelion, focusing on the same point over the horizon. Rei didn't actually need to bring the weapon up to the cyclopean red eye in the centre of Unit-00's head, as the scope on the rifle was really just a camera slaved to her entry plug, but the action felt more natural.
A loud, petulant tone finally cut through the comm system as Asuka gave voice to her impatience.
"Where the hell is this thing?! It better not be late to its own funeral!"
"Asuka, relax for a moment will you? We're tracking the Revenant's progress, it will be here shortly."
The German girl gave an annoyed huff at the reply from NERV's command centre. "Relax? Why don't you try sitting in this tin can for ages, Misato?"
"Sure. Just invent a way to cut fift-seventeen years off my life and I'll give it a shot."
A third, authoritative voice cut in before the argument could devolve any further.
"Your target will be coming into range in three minutes. So settle down, both of you. And I can't believe I have to say that to my superior officer."
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Deep underground, a soft slap was heard in the command centre of NERV, as Ritsuko's palm met her face for the umpteenth time since she'd first met Misato Katsuragi. The chief scientist and sub-commander slowly shook her head as she realised she had grown used to these arguments between the Commander of NERV and its most abrasive pilot.
That didn't mean, however, she was anywhere close to enjoying having to break them up when they started taunting each other as if the command structure didn't exist. Both Misato and Asuka had an uncanny ability to irritate her, and she was almost positive that most of their bickering was deliberately designed to tick her off.
Standing a few feet away, Misato turned and glanced at Ritsuko, a disappointed look on her face for a few seconds before hardening up as she turned back to the holographic display projected in the air before the control stations.
Kaji had disappeared once more, and the tracking device that Ritsuko had sneaked onto him had been found in a bin on the other side of the city. Now there was another Revenant attack. Misato Katsuragi was not in a good mood.
The display showed an overhead view of the city above their heads, with the three Evangelions on the left side, and a red blip designating their enemy on the right, slowly moving through the Tokyo-3 bay area. Below the map, deep red numbers counted down the seconds before it breached the surface, and to the right, data streamed past as the supercomputers of NERV analysed the target, attempting to acquire as much information as possible on the enemy. Every little bit helped.
"How are their sync ratios?" asked Misato, finally breaking the uneasy silence that almost always preceded an engagement.
A few taps on the keyboard, and Makoto Hyuga replied, "Rei is at 64%, Asuka's at 70%, and Shinji is... 35%."
Just by looking at Shinji's eyes, Misato had known there was no point asking if he was going to join the fight. She sighed heavily. Despite the best efforts of everybody involved over the last few days, the Third Child's progress was painfully slow. She had seriously considered refusing to let Unit-01 launch, regardless of Shinji's determination, but the woman knew that such an act would be crippling for his morale.
'I bet even if his sync ratio hadn't increased at all, he still would have chosen to join Asuka,' she thought to herself.
She was not Gendo Ikari. Misato remembered the fiasco surrounding the Fifteenth Angel all too well. The former Commander had held Shinji back for no better reason than that he didn't want to put the soul of his wife in jeopardy. And both Shinji and Asuka had suffered terribly for it.
This time, there was no reason besides concern for Shinji's safety to hold him back. Despite her fears, Misato had made her decision. Unit-01 had been launched, but she had requested that Shinji stay out of melee combat and focus on ranged weaponry; at least the targeting computers had the backing of the MAGI to assist him in aiming, to compensate somewhat for his slower reaction times.
Unit-01 now stood well inside the city itself, balancing Unit-00's Positron Rifle on top of an armoury building, with a couple of Pallet Rifles stashed nearby. Privately, Misato knew that the weaponry would likely be ineffective against the increasing abilities of the Revenants, but she would rather burn the entire munitions budget of NERV than admit to Shinji that his efforts wouldn't amount to much.
The countdown timer reached 00:30:00 and an alarm chimed to signify imminent contact. Misato closed her eyes as her hand reached for her neck, clenching around the silver cross necklace that hung there.
Maybe she should have given it to Shinji again.
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As the timer in her entry plug reached 00:30:00, Asuka clenched her Progressive Axe tighter and gritted her teeth, throwing a glance towards the middle of the city.
She, too, was nervous about having Shinji involved in this battle. If anything, she had tried to push harder than Misato to keep Unit-01 grounded. But all it had taken was a few words from the Third Child to make her acquiesce.
"I don't want to be useless again."
"Damnit, Shinji," Asuka muttered to herself, low enough that the comm link didn't pick it up. "Why can't I say no to you?"
Inside Unit-00's entry plug, Rei Ayanami sat, patiently waiting for battle to commence. Only someone who knew her very well, and was staring intently at her face, would notice the faint frown and slightly narrowed eyes indicative of worry on the First Child's face. When she spared a fleeting look at Unit-01, the intensity of the expression deepened slightly.
"Contact in ten seconds!" announced Misato over the radio.
The NERV gunships led the charge once more, unloading their missiles the moment the Revenant's head broke the water's surface. Its AT-Field predictably flared to life, rendering the heroic efforts of the aircraft pilots useless. The Revenant ignored the gunships as it stomped onto dry land, even as they attempted to circle around to find a gap in its protection.
"The MAGI have confirmed that this one is Unit-06, like I predicted," Ritsuko reported. "Sorry, but the weak points on this one are covered."
This beast was clad in more armour than its predecessor, with the orange shell now extending down most of each arm and leg as well as halfway up the long neck of the Revenant. To Asuka's eyes, it looked like the white beast was wearing a onesie that had shrunk in the wash, and the mental image almost made her chuckle.
"Great, this one has more armour. And..." With a mental command, Asuka's view zoomed in. "It's carrying a weapon too?" Her previous mood was extinguished as she realised just what exactly the Revenant was wielding. A familiar-looking double bladed sword was held loosely in its right hand.
"It's one of those shifting lance weapons!" somebody in the command centre confirmed for her.
"That's... not the Lance of Longinus itself, is it?" Shinji worriedly asked. Through the comm window, Asuka could see him clutch at his chest before nervously rubbing the palms of his hands with his thumbs.
"No, that's still somewhere in orbit," Ritsuko replied. "We would have noticed if something went up there to grab it."
"This weapon is just as deadly, however," Rei reminded them. "It will still pierce your AT-Field."
"Yeah, thanks for reminding me, Wondergirl," Asuka angrily said. Her eye was beginning to throb, as was her arm. She slapped a button to close the comm window before tightly clenching her controls. She immediately regretted the action, as the First Child didn't deserve to be a target of her anger. The comm window was silently turned back on.
The first true attack of the day went to Shinji and Unit-01 as the Positron Rifle unleashed a white-hot bolt of energy, aiming directly for the Revenant's red-lipped face.
"Jumping the gun I see," Asuka remarked as Unit-02 broke into a run, ripping up asphalt and shaking buildings with every step the behemoth took, the power cable unfurling behind her. The shot had simply splashed against the orange barrier, and the Revenant was now staring at Unit-01. She knew she had to get in close and keep its attention away from Shinji. He wouldn't last long in a melee. 'Don't even think like that, Asuka. He's the Third Child, he's invincible.'
Despite her best effort, she couldn't shake the sense of foreboding that had wedged itself into her brain ever since their phones had rung earlier that day. Asuka had a bad feeling that if she didn't take out this angel, something terrible would happen.
"First, with me! It'll take both of us to erode its AT-Field!"
"Affirmative."
Asuka let out a war cry as her Evangelion charged Unit-06. Her axe came around and she swung the weapon horizontally at its torso. The impact could be heard for kilometres around, a discordant musical note, as the gigantic metal blade met the AT-Field.
Surprisingly, the Revenant reacted to the attack, its feet tearing up chunks of earth as it braced itself and the field with one hand raised. With the way things had been going in their fights, Asuka had half-expected that not even two Evangelions would be able to break through. She grit her teeth as Unit-00 fired over her shoulder.
The extensive simulation training the two female pilots had done together meant that Asuka barely even blinked as the round passed within meters of her Evangelion's head. Rei was scarily accurate. The previous fight didn't really count, as that had been a result of the third Revenant pulling a fast one on them.
In this scenario, just as they had practised, the First Child took her shots wherever she could while staying behind Unit-02, using the camera scope to effectively aim past her partner while at the same time covering their power cables. Meanwhile, Asuka would keep the target's attention on herself, acting as a mobile shield for Unit-00.
And this shield had spikes.
As the two female pilots focused their will on bringing down the Revenant's AT-Field, Unit-02 brought its axe around in a mighty swing at the barrier before the creature could shore up its defenses. Any extra pressure that Asuka could bring to bear would only aid their efforts. Sparks flew as the blade simply skittered across the field, unable to gain any purchase on the frictionless wall.
A second positron round from her left impacted against the barrier, and then a third. The Second Child glanced to her left and saw that Unit-01 had repositioned itself as the fight progressed, and was now standing behind another armoured building, firing as fast as his weapon would allow.
The enemy's field was weakening, and Asuka turned her full attention back to the Revenant.
Obviously not content with simply defending itself, the white Evangelion abruptly brought its weapon into play, shifting to a double-handed grip. The massive sword just barely missed Unit-02's torso when it had to bend almost in half to dodge the first swing.
Now that she was on the back foot, Asuka had something else to concentrate on, besides her attempt to bring down the Revenant's barrier. Thankfully, Unit-00 was still firing constantly as Rei backed up to give Unit-02 some space, kicking their cables back as well. The pulleys for their cables soon activated to take up the slack as the Evangelions moved backwards.
The Progressive Axe crashed against the Revenant's weapon again and again as Asuka finally managed to put a halt to the retreat. The Revenant's field was finally down, but now they had to deal with its second layer of defense.
Asuka lost her concentration for a moment as Unit-01 showed up down a side street, where there was no building for him to hide behind, and suffered a cut to her Evangelion's upper left arm. Her own arm burned, but she put it out of her mind. Shinji was now out in the open, firing once again.
With no AT-Field to block it this time, the round slammed into the Revenant's right arm and chest. It shrieked in pain as the armour cracked slightly, before doing something that nobody expected.
Unit-06 fired back.
Its mouth opened wide, and energy pulsed inside its throat before bursting forth directly at Unit-01. In the confined street, the purple Evangelion had nowhere to run.
"Gah!"
"Oh, that is such bullshit!" Asuka cried out as a familiar cross-shaped explosion appeared over Tokyo-3 once more. "Shinji, you alright?"
"I'm... okay, I think. I got my-"
Unit-06 fired again.
This time, the explosion was accompanied by a cloud of dust as Unit-01 flew backwards into the building behind him, and Asuka's heart leapt into her throat.
The retaliation didn't stop there, as the Revenant charged down the street for a few hundred meters, before suddenly leaping into the sky with its weapon raised above its head. To Shinji's credit, he managed to get two more shots off with the Positron Rifle before Unit-06 landed directly in the middle of the dust cloud, but neither of them hit.
As Asuka and Rei reached the edge of the now-clearing cloud, they heard the familiar sound of a Pallet Rifle firing. The smoke and dust finally dissipated enough for them to see, and what they saw was a somewhat confusing sight.
Rubble fell to the ground around the white and purple Evangelions, but most of the building remained standing. The Revenant had just barely missed Unit-01 with its sword, but it had cut the Positron Rifle in half and buried itself partway into the ground. Shinji had apparently picked up the Pallet Rifle during his second repositioning, and was now firing point blank at the centre Unit-06's torso. The rifle rounds, despite being depleted uranium, simply bounced off the armour as the gun wavered around.
And Unit-06 was simply sitting there and letting Unit-01 attack. Asuka growled deep in her throat. It was mocking Shinji as it almost lazily severed his power cable.
Rei continued to fire past Unit-02 as the red and blue giants ran down the street, succeeding only in chipping off small pieces of its armour. Unit-01 finally dropped the useless weapon and punched at the white beast's head, the only unprotected body part it could reach. But Shinji's sync ratio was too low, and his attacks were easily dodged.
The Revenant lacked eyes and possibly ears, yet it still sensed the approach of the other two Evangelions. It batted aside another feeble punch before slamming a hand around Unit-01's neck and clenching tightly.
"Ghhk!" Through the neural link, Shinji was clearly feeling the effects of the strangulation as Unit-06 stood up, dragging his Evangelion with it. Its grip shifted from a strangle to a choke as it turned around, wrapping its forearm around Unit-01's neck and presenting its captive to Asuka and Rei.
"Damn you, bastard!" Asuka yelled as she slid to a halt. It was that or run head-first into a purple and green wall. Behind her, Rei refused to let up, peppering any exposed areas of Unit-06, even if the shots came perilously close to Shinji's Evangelion.
"Asuka... help!" Despite his predicament, Shinji was still trying his best, aiming wild punches over his shoulder as well as slamming Unit-01's elbow into the Revenant's ribs.
"Hang on, Shinji," Asuka said in what she hoped was a reassuring tone as she activated Unit-02's spike launcher. Even as the targeting system followed her darting eyes, it couldn't find a suitable point behind Unit-01, so she aimed for the arm that had her fellow pilot in a chokehold and fired. The spike crunched into the armour, but stopped when barely even a quarter of it had penetrated. The second and third spikes fared no better.
Unit-06 growled in pain, before tightening the hold and almost lifting Unit-01 off its feet. The choking noises from Shinji's comm redoubled even as he gave up his attempts to cause damage to his captor in favour of trying to shift the arm around his Evangelion's throat.
The building behind them exploded.
The recently-completed weapon batteries had finally been brought into play, and they were now hitting Unit-06 in its flank through what was left of the building. But despite the advantage of a surprise attack, they simply didn't have the power to cause any damage to the Revenant.
Unit-06 emitted another growl, before bringing its sword up to point at Unit-01's back. Asuka sensed what was going to happen and charged forward, desperate to stop the white demon at any cost.
But she was too slow.
As if to taunt her, the Revenant shoved the blade through Unit-01's stomach right as she was almost within arm's reach. The choking sounds in her ears stopped, replaced by a single scream of pain as the purple Evangelion's arms went limp.
Tears began to leak from Asuka's eyes, dissipating quickly in the LCL, as Unit-06 twisted the blade and brought forth a howl of agony from Shinji. Despite the people in the command centre shouting about forcibly reducing his sync ratio, he still screamed just as loud when the Revenant pulled the blade sideways through Unit-01's torso, partially bisecting it, before contemptuously shoving the limp robot away to collapse into a building.
Unit-01 fell to the ground and lay motionless as the lights in its eyes dimmed. A few seconds later, they went out.
"Jetzt... reichts...," Asuka quietly said, her teeth clenched so hard they were in danger of cracking. Giant red fingers clenched tightly around the axe in Unit-02's hand, the metal warping under its grip. Pure, condensed anger erupted and propelled her Evangelion forward, crossing the remaining distance between her and Unit-06 in a heartbeat. "Ich werd dich ausnehmen und an deinen eigenen Eingeweiden aufhängen!"
The locks on Unit-02's jaw shattered as the red Evangelion let loose a metallic screech in sync with its pilot.