(Twi)Light Dragon (Warcraft/WoW)

Looking forward to the future adventures of Mary McDragon, Draenei Paladin (or Priestess, but more likely Paladin because invul bubble).
Paladin is easier to fake than a Priest because you can be 99% warrior with a little bit of Light sprinkled on top, as opposed to a Priest which is expected to be more well-versed in the Light.

Yeah that one was weird and should be ignored as Blackout would say regarding the expansions of World of Warcraft.

As for Nzaria eating a Naaru, well there's that one Liadrin and her Blood Knights had captured and drained off for their Light powers they forcibly acquired.

Then there's the Sunwell's avatar who took a human form named Aveena Teague.

She'd be a walking source of Light for Nzaria to protect and absorb power from.

@Blackout , what do you think about Aveena Teague?
Not the biggest fan of her storyline (why does the power of the elven Sunwell turn into a human girl?) but it's whatever. She died in the same storyline as the one that introduced her, she left no long-term impact or consequences in the lore, and it is entirely possible to just ignore her existence.

As for M'uru, he is long dead. Velen used his heart to reignite the Sunwell.
 
Paladin is easier to fake than a Priest because you can be 99% warrior with a little bit of Light sprinkled on top, as opposed to a Priest which is expected to be more well-versed in the Light.
Weren't the Paladins also well versed in the Light as the first Paladins led by Uther the Lightbringer were taught by Archbishop Alonsus Faol? They always carry a tome of the Light around with them.

Nzaria might have to get one herself to pass off as a totally legitimate Paladin.

Not the biggest fan of her storyline (why does the power of the elven Sunwell turn into a human girl?) but it's whatever. She died in the same storyline as the one that introduced her, she left no long-term impact or consequences in the lore, and it is entirely possible to just ignore her existence.

As for M'uru, he is long dead. Velen used his heart to reignite the Sunwell.
Fair enough, Aneeva was just a walking plot device than a character in a nutshell.

I see, the Elves of Quel'Thalas won't have to worry about their magic addiction anymore after the return of the Sunwell.
 
You're welcome. Glad you like it.
I've always thought that having a TvTropes page for my work is something of a honour, I just don't want to make one myself because that feels rather egoistical.

Now that you've made one, though, I went and added a bunch of entries to it.

I'll try to squeeze out the next Chapter as soon as I have the time for it.
 
I've always thought that having a TvTropes page for my work is something of a honour, I just don't want to make one myself because that feels rather egoistical.

Now that you've made one, though, I went and added a bunch of entries to it.

I'll try to squeeze out the next Chapter as soon as I have the time for it.
I see. I'm glad you're honoured and I saw the new entries. Also it will take a while for the tv tropes page of your story to be part of the index of Warcraft Fan Works below.

Awesome, I look forward to your next chapter and take your time.
 
Chapter 5
Nzaria laid on the damp cavern floor, her tail curled around her, watching her breath mist in the cold air.

Somewhere in the distance, perhaps a hundred meters in front of her, a bit of sunlight peeked inside from the cave entrance. She merely waited and watched.

'Cho'Gall may suspect that you are still alive, since Emberus didn't report in, but he probably doesn't have the forces to spare to search for you while he's busy with the Wildhammers.'

'If you're lucky he might think that the Wildhammers sent Emberus back to the Firelands.'

'It's unlikely anyone will come across this cave soon. The entrance is only accessible by air, and likely formed during the Shattering so the dwarfs won't know of it.'

Nzaria made no reaction to the cacophony of voices. She felt numb in body, mind and soul, the voices fading to a background susurrus.

She had done everything right. She had been loyal. She had only ever sought to accomplish the mission given to her by Father- by the True Gods, more efficiently.

To unite the Twilight Brood under her, to reduce the pointless infighting that sapped their strength needlessly.

She thought back to the hundreds of eggshells littering the cavern. How many remained of her clutch? Not much more than two dozen. Of course, those that lived were stronger for the ordeal, gorged upon the devoured essences of their siblings, their instincts honed by the mere feat of surviving to maturity.

But… surely the strength of the Brood was lessened by the senseless losses they suffered killing each other rather than the enemies of the True Gods, the strength of the individual offset by the weakness of the whole.

Surely, there was an advantage in simple numbers. Was that not how the nations of Azeroth were able to resist the Twilight's Hammer?

Could the crucible not be the field of battle? Those that lived would be strengthened for it, while those who died would do so in service of the True Gods, instead of… instead of being devoured alive by their siblings.

Instead of having their skull cracked open for something they couldn't have known would draw Mother's ire.

Instead of having their neck snapped just for being wounded in battle.

Instead of being sent to their death… not even for questioning Father or Mother, but simply for wanting to reduce infighting.

A snort escaped Nzaria's nostrils, a low giggle shaking her shoulders.

Was she- was she mad?

No one else had ever questioned it. It was simply how things were, like the sun in the sky and the ground beneath their feet. She had never questioned it, not until her first battle, after she had seen the senseless slaughter firsthand.

Was she… broken in some way? Defective? She recalled how some of her siblings had been born malformed, or grew asymmetrically.

Was this some defect of the mind? A flaw in her brain, gone unnoticed until now? She thought back to the panic that had enveloped her at Highbank for seemingly no reason.

'No. Far worse: you are the only sane one. Surrounded by madness, even reason begins to look like insanity.'

Nzaria exhaled slowly. Her head felt heavy and foggy.

'You have been brooding over this for days. Weeks, perhaps. This can't go on forever.'

'The power you consumed from Emberus will only last for so long.'

'Eventually you will starve to death.'

'Sooner or later somebody will find you.'

Nzaria ignored the voices, making no move to stand.

"What does squatting in a cave accomplish?"

The onyx-scaled dragon looked down at her as it stood in front of her, orange eyes like embers burning with contempt.

"You are just hiding away from the world. Like a coward. Are you a dragon, or a mouse? Predator, or prey?"

"Shut up," she growled, shutting her eyes.

"Perhaps Father was right about you after all. Perhaps you are weak."

Nzaria pounced on the other dragon with a furious roar, two scaled bodies tumbling across the cavern floor.

Then she blinked and the other dragon was gone, her claws scraping against the rocks..

For a moment, she just stood there panting, her body aching. Her forelimbs and throat tingled with pain where Emberus had burned them.

But the spike of anger had cleared through the malaise that fogged her mind, if only for a moment.

She walked to the mouth of the cavern, gazing down into the rolling green hills of the Highlands, in the distance dotted with the occasional settlement. To the east was the sea, waves pounding against the rocks, while far in the west, shrouded by a bank of white clouds, she could see the mountains.

What was she supposed to do now?

That was the question she could not answer.

Every time she tried, it was like her thoughts became a whirlpool, an endless spiral descending deeper and deeper into the abyss.

What should she do?

She should return to Grim Batol.

'Cho'Gall will kill you if you return to the Twilight's Hammer.'

Yes. He would kill her. She couldn't return.

But she had to. She had to obey. That was her purpose. That was what she was made to do.

But he would kill her. She had done no wrong, committed no mistake.

But she had to obey. It was her duty. Father was the favoured servant of the True Gods.

But she couldn't. She was a traitor through no fault of her own.

She had to obey.

She would die.

Obey.

Die.

Obey. Die. Obey. Die. Obey. Die. Obey. ObeyreturndiekillobeydieOBEYKILLOBEYDIETRAITORKILLOBEYKILL-

Stone cracked and broke as Nzaria rammed her skull into the walls of the cavern, once, then twice and thrice for good measure.

She fell to the ground, clutching her head as she writhed in agony, feeling like her head had been lit on fire.

But the pain made the thoughts go away.

She rolled over to her back and laid there on the cold stone for a long while, the only sound her own heaving breaths and the pounding of her heart in her ears, each beat sending a fresh wave of pain through her skull.

Eventually, she struggled onto her feet, staggering towards the mouth of the cavern. Scales melted into soft flesh, her form shrinking and her balance shifting backwards onto two legs.

Sunlight stabbed at her eyes as she sat down at the stone cliff, watching the highlands below, breathing in the fresh air.

She felt tired.

She should just… lay down.

Nobody would find her here. She could figure this out later.

'No! That's what you've been doing for weeks now, without progress.'

'You can't hide forever.'

'The Hour of Twilight comes.'

Nzaria blinked, and the verdant hills were awash with flame. Tortured winds howled in her ears, raging floods sweeping over the landscape. Geysirs of molten magma gushed out of enormous cracks in the earth, casting the darkened skies in the hues of purple, stretching infinitely into the horizon. And in the skies above, she saw her brothers and sisters, countless purple-scaled, winged shapes, filling the very skies themselves.

An eternal twilight.

All-encompassing.

All-reaching.

The Hour of Twilight was coming. The Hour of Twilight was near. The Hour of Twilight was inevitable.

There was no hiding from it.

There was no fleeing from it.

'Then the only option that remains is to fight.'

Fight the servants of the True Gods? Oppose the Hour of Twilight?

A dagger manifested in her hand.

She would sooner die.

Nzaria blinked. The dagger wavered in her hand.

That wasn't right.

She didn't want to die. If she did, she wouldn't have disobeyed Father's orders. She would have let Emberus kill her. She would have returned to Grim Batol and faced Father.

But it was her own thought. How could it be wrong about her?

She tossed the blade aside, and a moment later it diffused into raw magic.

Fighting against servants of the True Gods… she was a servant of the True Gods, and Father had tried to kill her.

If Father had already raised his hand against her, then it was no sacrilege to do the same.

There was a pressure in her head, like she was deep underwater, but she kept going.

If Father had tried to kill her simply for serving the True Gods to the best of her ability… then he was an imperfect servant.

And if he was imperfect, then so would be the Hour of Twilight that he intended to bring about.

It had to be stopped.

The Twilight's Hammer must be destroyed.

Nzaria was breathing heavily, hunched over, bits of bile dribbling down her mouth. Her head was pounding, but she latched onto that logic, that conclusion, and forced it through her mind even though her thoughts felt sluggish, like moving through tar.

Yes.

The Twilight's Hammer must be destroyed.

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The Twilight's Hammer outpost stood in the charred remnants of what had once been a Wildhammer village, the remnants of stone foundations and the errant support column sticking out of the blackened ground. Flags depicting the spiked hammer-insignia flapped in the wind, whilst cultists bustled around dark purple tents.

Twisting, spiralling elementium spikes had been driven deep into the earth, and all around them the ground was cracked and broken, purple light shining from the rents. Nzaria could feel the energy radiating from them, much like what she had felt in the shamans she had assassinated or in Emberus, but also subtly different. It tasted like blood and pain on her tongue.

She wore the guise of a purple-robed cultist, a hood covering her short black hair. Angry burn-marks lined her hands and throat- no matter what form she tried to take, the scars remained.

Perhaps that was only proper. A reminder, of Father's betrayal, of the first time she defied an order.

"Halt!" the guard called out to her as she approached, raising his halberd at her. "Whence cometh the shadow?"

"From the kingdom of the Masters, the sunken city where Gods sleep," Nzaria answered the challenge sharply.

"Whence cometh the light?"

"From the flame, the world of mortals set upon the pyre."

"And from shadow and light cometh Twilight." The guard smiled, lowering his weapon. "Welcome, sister. What brings you to our humble outpost?"

"I come bringing urgent news from Grim Batol," Nzaria lied smoothly. "Directly from Cho'Gall."

She suppressed a smile at the way the man's face turned pale- she had found that Father's name unlocked many doors.

"Lord Ukrol is out in the field," he said, hesitating. "In his absence Earthbreaker Tyrush is in charge, but… are you certain it cannot wait?"

"It cannot," Nzaria said, shaking her head with a pretense of sympathy, as though she were only following orders. "Take me to Tyrush."

He nodded slowly, turning around to lead Nzaria deeper into the camp. Throughout the outpost, there were cultists preparing food, erecting buildings, standing watch, and all of the other necessary functions of a military camp.

But a number of them, dressed in elaborate robes, were erecting great spikes of elementium, driving the barbed columns of metal deep into the earth. Rituals were conducted around each spike, beating hearts carved out from the chests of living captives, and great amounts of magical energy channelled into the metal, flowing deep into the earth.

Nzaria couldn't claim to fully understand what they were doing, but she knew that it was meant to somehow make the elements less obedient to the Wildhammer Shamans and more pliant to the methods of the Twilight's Hammer, so this was as good of a place as any to start.

The guard took her to the very center of the camp, where a great elementium spike rose over a hundred meters into the sky, countless lesser branches stabbing into the ground around it, as though the canopy of an upside-down tree, thrumming and crackling with power.

Twilight's Hammer Elementalists surrounded the structure, channelling dark energies into the metal. Others conducted sacrifices- not living ones, but of Elementals forcibly summoned and carved apart by runed knives, their cores smashed upon anvils and their essences fed into the spikes.

"What could possibly be worth interrupting my work?"

Eathbreaker Tyrush was a stout, broad man with much of his upper torso bare, showing his tattoos in purple ink depicting the symbols of the Twilight's Hammer. The lower half of his face was concealed by a cloth mask, while the upper half was shorn of hair with more tattoos across his scalp, and his eyes burned with power as he glared at Nzaria, the lesser adepts and guards shirking away from his wrath.

"This," Nzaria said as a dagger manifested in her grip and plunged into the Earthbreaker's throat, driving it deep with inhuman force until she felt the jarring impact of metal on bone as it severed the human's spinal cord.

A cry of alarm sprung from the other cultists but Nzaria was already changing, her form rapidly growing in size. Her mace-like tail lashed out, pulping fragile bodies and sending men flying like leaves, while shadowflame gushed out from her open maw to engulf the remainder of the Elementalists, reducing them to ash.

Slightly to her disappointment, she found that the same tactics that she had employed against the Wildhammer were just as effective against the Twilight's Hammer: even the mightiest spellcasters can do little when ambushed by a dragon in a place they thought themselves safe.

She had expected… more of them.

'They are only mortals, in the end.'

Nzaria beat her wings, ascending to the air as she rained more shadowflame upon the cultists, their tents quickly catching flame. The dark fire spread eagerly, tongues of purple flame moving of their own accord to seek out flesh to burn. Screams and smoke filled the air, as she hunted down the remaining cultists with almost laughable ease.

Scattered, without leadership or magic, taken completely by surprise… they had little hope of bringing her down. A few managed to hurl spears or crossbow bolts her way, but a dragon in flight is an infernally difficult target to hit, and they inflicted nothing more than glancing blows. She circled the camp, killing any of the cultists that tried to flee or were driven out of the camp by the flames.

Then, she turned her attention upon the elementium spikes, digging them out of the earth and snapping the thin metal rods. The howling of the wind and the heaving of the earth died down with each spike she destroyed, though it never fully went away, even as she toppled the central spire, digging out its supports one by one until it collapsed on its own.

Within a matter of minutes, over a hundred cultists were dead, and an entire camp razed to the ground.

"Nzaria?"

She whirled about as she heard a familiar voice from behind her.

Another winged shape descended from the skies, purple scales glimmering in the fading sunlight. On its back rode a hulking armoured orc clad in jagged plate, carrying a long lance.

"Araxion." He had been one of the drakes in her group, before Father had separated her from the others. "And Ukrol, I presume."

"Lord Ukrol to you, lizard," the orc growled. "What is the meaning of this treachery?"

"Father said you were dead," Araxion said as he landed, his expression inscrutable.

"He tried," Nzaria replied. "He sent me into a trap to kill me off."

"I know."

Nzaria couldn't quite conceal her shock, and Araxion instantly seized on it.

"Did you think we wouldn't know? That this was some grand revelation that would shock us into joining you in betrayal? Father told us as soon as you left, while he punished Theralion and Valiona," he laughed coldly. "You always were weak, in body and in spirit. Father's only mistake was not killing you when you dragged Sethrion back to Grim Batol."

"Father fears us. That is why he tried to kill me. That is why he won't let anyone unite the Brood."

"That is what Theralion and Valiona said," Araxion replied. "You should've heard the way they squealed."

"Enough talk!" Ukrol growled, smacking the butt of his lance against the back of Araxion's head. "She is a traitor to the Twilight's Hammer. What are you waiting for? Kill her!"

They needed no more encouragement.

The two scaled bodies collided with a tremendous crash, claws scraping grooves into each other's hides as they reared on their hind legs, jostling for advantage. Ukrol nearly lost his balance on Araxion's back, clearly more used to jousting with gryphon-riders than the frantic grappling of dragon-on-dragon combat.

"What are you doing, dragon?!" the orc yelled out, but Araxion said nothing, his attention fully on fending off Nzaria claws from his throat.

Though they had not fought each other before, both of them had killed at least half a dozen of their siblings to stand where they did. They clawed at each other, wrestling for superior position, but their necks were coiled back like serpents, hissing and snapping at each other without making contact.

They were invulnerable to each other's breath, and turning ethereal was meaningless when both of them could do so: if they each turned intangible at the same time, they would remain tangible to each other. This meant that when fighting their own, a dragon's jaws were their most powerful weapon, but their throats were also their greatest weakness, and one could not be used without exposing the other. Thus, victory almost always went to whichever drake managed to get their jaws around the other's neck, but committing to such an attack was risky, because a miss would mean near-certain death.

Nzaria and Araxion pushed against each other, hind legs and tails churning up the earth as they sought to unbalance the other while maintaining their own. Araxion was somewhat larger than Nzaria- she had always been one of the smallest of the Brood to have survived -but he was weighed down by a rider and harness, one that was currently hanging on for his life rather than contributing.

'Keep him off-balance. If you give Ukrol room to use that lance you are dead meat.'

'This position is favourable to you. If he goes low you get on top of him, if he stays high the orc can't fight.'

Nzaria shoulder-checked her brother, sending him reeling backwards. If she was in his position she would have rolled over, tried to increase distance, but of course he could not do so without crushing Ukrol to death. Thus, Araxion was forced to fight from an increasingly disadvantageous position, increasingly focused just on maintaining his balance rather than counterattacking. He was protecting his neck fiercely with his foreclaws and wings, rebuffing all attempts Nzaria made towards it, but she savaged his chest, drawing thick rivulets of squirming black blood.

Unfortunately, Ukrol seemed to have finally realized his predicament, dropping his lance and drawing a shortsword with a single edge of jagged crystal. With one hand holding onto Araxion's saddle the orc swung over his shoulder, the blade sinking into Nzaria's shoulder. Ukrol yanked his weapon back in a sawing motion, spraying yet more black blood and drawing a pained roar from Nzaria.

Araxion seized the opportunity to retreat, beating his winds to leap backwards and landing some distance away, breathing heavily.

"Are you trying to get me killed, dragon?" Ukrol accused, wiping blood off of his blade as he glared down at his mount. "Is that it?"

"Get you killed? I just took my sister's claws for you, you ungrateful orc!"

"Watch your tongue with me, lizard, or I will remove it. I saved us both from your incompetence."

'Their disunity is their weakness. Exploit it.'

Rather than give them the chance to resolve their differences, Nzaria breathed in deep and unleashed a blast of shadowflame at the pair.

Araxion, of course, was immune to the dark flame that coursed through his veins as much as hers. But Ukrol… Ukrol was not so lucky.

"Hrrraaargh!

The orc screamed in pain as the shadowflame washed over him, cooking him within his own armour. It was only for a split-second before Araxion shielded Ukrol with his wings and body, which likely saved his life. But there was a brief but noticeable moment before Araxion acted, one that Nzaria suspected Ukrol had noticed.

She had gambled that her brother's instinct, after having just been berated and threatened by the orc, would not be to shield him. Oh, he eventually did so, because Father would be displeased if he let Ukrol die, but there was an instant of hesitation before then.

'And Ukrol knows that.'

The orc tore his ruined helmet off his head, glaring down at Araxion.

"I will have your hide after this," he growled. "Now stop playing around and kill her!"

Araxion gnashed his teeth but took to the air with heavy wingbeats, darting at Nzaria, but she dodged and took flight herself. They made a number of inconclusive passes at each other as they each rose higher and higher, trying to get above the other drake.

Nzaria beat her wings as hard as she could, but even weighed down Araxion's greater wingspan was telling, and the shoulder wound inflicted by Ukrol flared with pain every time she moved her left wing. Little by little, he was winning their little war of maneuver.

'This isn't going to work. You can't beat him in a straight fight.'

Who said anything about a straight fight?

Nzaria launched herself at Araxion, despite his superior positioning. Normally, this would have been sheer suicide- it was much harder to attack upwards than downwards, meaning that Araxion would be able to easily fend off her attack and then launch a counterattack that would likely kill her.

But before they made contact, Nzaria held her breath, turning ethereal.

She saw the fractional widening of Araxion's eyes, and could guess what was going through his head. If he let her pass through him she would be above him, yielding the dominant position. He had seen her do the exact same maneuver against Sethrion. The only way to avoid it was to shift himself, negating Nzaria's advantage.

Naturally, Ukrol could not turn ethereal, which would leave him falling to his death.

But for a Twilight Dragon, a choice between their own life and that of a superior that had just spent the last several minutes berating and insulting them, was no choice at all.

Araxion's form rippled with purple energies as he turned intangible as well, and with a yelp Ukrol fell through him, in sudden freefall.

Which, of course, was exactly what she had been aiming for, as she let go of the breath she had been holding, turning corporeal and spreading her wings to rapidly decelerate mid-air.

Then, opening her jaws wide, she caught Ukrol as he fell.

Metal and bone crunched between her teeth as she bit down, nearly bisecting the orc in half. She shook her head side to side, spraying blood everywhere, before inhaling.

Ukrol's life force flooded through her veins, revitalizing her tired muscles and scabbing over her bleeding wounds. It was not enough to restore her to full condition, of course, but it was a damn sight better than Araxion, his heavy breaths misting in the cold highlands air, black blood continuing to drip down his chest.

'And so, the tide turns.'

Nzaria beat her wings, rapidly rising higher and higher in the air. Araxion responded by trying to match her, but he was growing more and more tired by the moment, while she had just been infused with fresh energy.

The superior position that Araxion had sacrificed Ukrol for was slipping away from him by the moment, and there was nothing he could do about it.

Except, of course, make use of it while he still had it.

Pivoting mid-air, Araxion dove at Nzaria, but it was already too late. They crashed into each other once more, but the angle of contact was shallow, granting him little advantage.

They clawed at each other, locked together as they tore chunks of flesh from each other's hides, but Araxion's wounds and exhaustion soon began to tell. As they spun and flapped, descending towards the ground even as they tried to maneuver around each other, Nzaria targeted Araxion's wings, slashing his wing membranes apart.

He locked his claws on her in a deathgrip, but it didn't matter. She spread her wings, flipping Araxion under her as they descended towards the ruined remnant's of the Twilight's Hammer camp like a meteor.

Blood sprayed into the air from both drakes, forming a black trail as they fell, the wind whipping in Nzaria's face, and an instant before impact she caught Araxion's eyes.

They were afraid.

Then, blackness.

'Wake up! You have to wake up, now!'

Nzaria jolted back into awareness, every part of her body aching. She tried to rise, but her right hindleg gave out from under her, sending waves of agony through her

'The bone is broken. You won't be walking on that leg.'

She grit her teeth, shaking her head in an attempt to clear her vision. It returned, slowly, in blurry flashes, but with each blink she could see a little more.

Araxion.

Her brother lay beneath her, black blood pooling on the ground around him. His chest was rising, erratically, weakly, but still alive. But… his entire torso was twisted in an unnatural angle, his limbs splayed limply around him.

'Between breaking a leg and breaking one's spine, I think you came ahead in the exchange.'

Nzaria hesitated for a moment.

Then, she surged forward, locking her jaws around Araxion's throat, and bit down with all of her might. The other drake twitched and convulsed, but if he was even conscious, he could not move his legs. Even if he could have, it would not have mattered.

Nzaria's teeth sheared through the soft scales of Araxion's neck, biting deep before twisting, and something snapped, Araxion's chest going still.

Then she inhaled.

Power flooded into her in a constant torrent, suffusing her entire body. Nzaria cried out in pain as the pieces of her leg bones were pulled back into position and mended together, while all across her body new scales pushed out from her flesh to cover her wounds.

She drank deep, until nothing was left of Araxion but a withered, pale husk.

Then, she collapsed off of him and rolled onto her back, her heart hammering in her chest, struggling for breath.

'That was too close. A one-dragon crusade against the Twilight's Hammer won't last long.'

"I won," Nzaria said petulantly.

'And what if the next outpost has two of your siblings?'

"What else could I do?" she demanded, grinding her teeth. "I am alone."

'The Alliance has the manpower and resources to defeat the Twilight's Hammer, but they do not know them. You lack the power, but you know the Twilight's Hammer in and out.'

Nzaria paused for a moment.

"They would never trust me. I would not trust myself, in their position."

'Then do what you were made to do. Infiltrate the Alliance, walk amongst them while only letting them see what you want them to see. But instead of destroying them from within, you will be helping them destroy the Twilight's Hammer."
 
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Like I said before, there's pretty much no chance of the Alliance detecting her unless it'd be more self-sabotaging for them to do so than not - for a setting with at least three kinds of shapeshifting and/or body-jacking infiltrator, in addition to the mind control magic and just plain normal betrayals, you'd think people in WoW would be less blindly trusting of random weirdos who show up with suspicious amounts of knowledge.

Going off Blizzard's current inclinations the explanation is probably some nonsensical reference to the Cosmic Hexagon that breaks established lore, characterization, and basic logic to make it somehow the Titans' fault.

Edit: I mean they could also make it the vague, ill-defined Light pantheon's fault, which would actually make some degree of sense given the whole 'unshaken faith in oneself, one's cause, and one's allies' thing supposedly needed to use Light magic, but the Light pantheon is even more 'blatantly only exists to fill out the Hexagon because Blizzard realized they'd blasted through all the big guys of the alignment already' than the Void Lords, seeing as they added and then killed off the previous big guy for the Light faction in the same expansion - you know, the 'Prime Naaru' from Legion who existed to rant at the player about how Illidan never did anything wrong, opposing him in any way shape or form was a mistake, and he was actually the Chosen One all along... then get murdered by him in what was presumably intended to be a cool moment of defiance.
 
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'Then do what you were made to do. Infiltrate the Alliance, walk amongst them while only letting them see what you want them to see. But instead of destroying them from within, you will be helping them destroy the Twilight's Hammer."
I look forward for Nzaria interacting with Varian Wrynn the High King of the Alliance and his son Anduin Wrynn when she pulls The Onyxia but unlike Onyxia, she actually helps them and pulls her weight.

you'd think people in WoW would be less blindly trusting of random weirdos who show up with suspicious amounts of knowledge.
Warcraft Self Insert Characters (OC or Canon Characters the SI woke up as): *heavy sweating*
 
Eeeeee it's back!

Excellent dragon fight!

Nzaria? Fuck up the bastards for me, will you?
 
Are the Voices the Old Gods? They seem too helpful.
Not directly, I don't think. They're more a visualisation of Nzaria's thought process spurred on by her poor mental state, at least as far as I can see. I can't recall any instances of them showing themselves to be anything more than hallucinations. but my memory isn't the best.
 
Are the Voices the Old Gods? They seem too helpful.
Not directly, I don't think. They're more a visualisation of Nzaria's thought process spurred on by her poor mental state, at least as far as I can see. I can't recall any instances of them showing themselves to be anything more than hallucinations. but my memory isn't the best.
I've thought and continued to believe they're representative of the various energies shes absorbed. Red is Rage/Warrior, Brown is Life/Druid, Purple is Shadow/Void, seemingly the three things that have actually made her body function. She absorbed light earlier but it doesn't seem to talk more Convery emotions/stabilize. Its been a hot minute, but it doesn't seem she's eaten any mage.
 
High King of the Alliance
This is one of those things where I exercise my right as writer to ignore Blizzard's stupid writing, because I will never forgive them for making "High King of the Alliance" a thing. I apologize for the ensuing wall of text, but I've put quite a bit of thought into this topic, and it's one of my pet peeves in Warcraft lore.

In this story Varian is not the High King of the Alliance, whoever came up with that title at Blizzard should feel bad.

He is the King of Stormwind, and the Supreme Commander of the Alliance, but he is not the latter because he is the former. Or, well, he is, but not because the titles are inherently linked to one another- he is the King because of the hereditary right of monarchy, and the Supreme Commander due to politics.

Originally, the position of Supreme Commander was created to coordinate the war efforts of the member states of the Orcish Horde. When Anduin Lothar was slain by Doomhammer at the conclusion of the Second War, the Alliance did not appoint another Supreme Commander, mostly because there wasn't really a need for one. During the Third War, the combination of the Scourge and Burning Legion invasions caught the Alliance so off-guard that there wasn't any coordinated response by the Alliance, nor a chance to appoint a unified military commander.

When the Alliance was reformed in the aftermath, there again wasn't a huge need for a Supreme Commander- they mostly faced localized threats like the Silithid, the Dark Horde, Defias, the Dark Irons, the Black Dragonflight, Naxxramas, and the occasional skirmish with the Horde. Appointing one would also have been politically difficult: the Night Elves might have recognized the military necessity of joining the Alliance after being decimated in the Third War, but they were still a proud people with long memories of being the dominant force in Azeroth, they wouldn't easily submit to a Supreme Commander. As such, the Alliance functioned as a loose military alliance where they all broadly cooperated but each member-state mostly did their own thing. When the Dark Portal reopened and the Scourge invaded again they pooled their resources to fight these threats appointing Danath Trollbane and Bolvar Fordragon to lead these expeditionary forces, but still there wasn't a pressing need for a unified military command for the entire Alliance.

However, this changed with the coming of the Cataclysm. Under their newly appointed Warchief, Garrosh Hellscream, the Horde resumed open hostilities with the Alliance, whilst the forces of Deathwing launched a coordinated assault against both factions across the planet. This wasn't just expeditionary warfare in Outland or Northrend, this was a world-spanning conflict that was developing rapidly, and it soon became clear that the previous ad-hoc cooperation would not suffice. The Alliance needed somebody to coordinate its disparate armies, allocate resources where they were needed and make snap decisions when needed. Luckily, there was historical precedent for just such a role: the Supreme Commander of the Alliance.

But who to take the mantle? Jaina had the prestige for it but neither the inclination nor the mindset, nor did Velen. Mekkatorque didn't even control his own capital, and Greymane was a laughable idea. Danath was still in Outland and his kingdom was gone, Kurdran and Falstad had Wildhammer business to focus on, and Bolvar was dead (allegedly).

So the choice came down to the leaders of the three largest members of the Alliance: the Humans of Stormwind, the Dwarfs of Khaz Modan and the Night Elves of Darnassus. While the other two had been ravaged by the First and Third Wars respectively, Ironforge had survived relatively untouched, which would have made Magni Bronzebeard the shoe-in candidate… if he didn't get turned to diamond in a botched ritual trying to stop the Cataclysm. With the ensuing succession crisis, attempted Dark Iron coup and the founding of the Council of Three Hammers, the dwarfs were firmly out of the competition.

Which left only two options: Tyrande Whisperwind and Varian Wrynn. Tyrande was obviously far more experienced than Varian, and on her own qualities the superior candidate. However, the Night Elves had been in the Alliance for only a scant few years whereas Stormwind was a founding member. They had an isolationist history and lived on the opposite end of the planet from most of the other Alliance members, whereas Stormwind had far more historical ties and connections within the Alliance, and was centrally located. And while Tyrande had vast experience, it was experience leading the Night Elves, not a multinational alliance. Varian had first-hand experience with the Orcs from his time in captivity and had taken over the Valiance Expedition in Northrend in the wake of Bolvar's death, demonstrating his ability to command disparate forces. And Anduin Lothar, the previous Supreme Commander of the Alliance, was also from Stormwind and a personal friend of his, setting historical precedent in Stormwind's favour.

So Varian became the Supreme Commander of the Alliance, but he is not the High King. I know Blizzard sometimes tries to claim the High King isn't just the Blue Warchief and is merely a military leader, but then they turn around and have the High King make all political and military decisions for the Alliance, everybody (including the leaders of independent nations like Jaina and Genn) started referring to Varian and Anduin as "My King" and worst of all, they made the title inheritable from Varian to Anduin. For fuck's sake they even made the Horde into a council when that's what the Alliance should have been from the very beginning.

The Alliance is, as the name implies, an alliance of sovereign nations that have come together in a defensive pact, whereas the Horde is in practice an empire where vassal states swear oaths of allegiance to the Warchief. The Supreme Commander is a strictly military leader whose powers are well-defined, whilst the Warchief has theoretically unlimited power because Thrall somewhat naively never codified the boundaries of the Warchief's powers, and everybody else was fine with it because they trusted Thrall not to abuse that power. Cue Garrosh Hellscream.

Varian's ability to order citizens and forces of the member states of the Alliance beyond Stormwind (not humans, Stormwind) around is limited strictly to what forces those member states place under his command. Everything else needs to go through the governments of those member states, and if he's not happy with their decisions the most he can do is petition the other member states of the Alliance to agree to expel them from the Alliance for being non-contributing freeloaders.

By contrast, Garrosh can just go to Silvermoon or Undercity or Thunder Bluff and start interfering with the internal affairs of the member states of the Horde, his power limited only by realpolitik. If the Warchief says jump, the terms of the blood oath don't leave a lot of room for disobedience, and in theory he could even replace the leadership of the member states. But, of course, if say the Blood Elves hold their allegiance to Lor'themar higher than they do the blood oaths, then trying to do so would likely start a civil war, so even if he theoretically has the right to issue such an order in practice he can't. He can do anything that won't make his subjects rebel against him.

This is because the Alliance was from the very beginning designed as a multipolar pact between the well-established nations of Lordaeron, Stromgarde, Stormwind, Kul Tiras, Dalaran, Gilneas and Alterac, which each had both a keen interest in not ceding away their sovereignity and the experience in statecraft and diplomacy to avoid doing so. Having this structure in place from the start made it easy for the Alliance to expand and contract as member states were added, destroyed or left the Alliance. By contrast the Horde and the position of Warchief were invented by Gul'dan to bind together the Orc Clans under a singular, easily-manipulable leader, and when the Alliance put the Orcs into internment camps they specifically broke the clans up and spread them out across different camps to discourage revolts. Thus, by the time Thrall created his New Horde, the influence and importance of the clans had heavily degraded, and for the most part the Orcs of the New Horde were one people under one centralized leader rather than a conglomeration of member states each with their own leaders.

From that starting point, it makes sense that when the Darkspears, the Tauren, the Forsaken, the Blood Elves and the Bilgewater Cartel each joined the Horde individually, particularly the first two setting the precedent by being rescued by the Orcs and joining out of gratitude, that the Horde didn't instantly transition its government into a decentralized federation but rather the newcomers just swore the same blood-oaths as the Orcs did and moved on. The Horde becoming a dictatorship makes sense because it started as a dictatorship, was taken over by an enlightened leader who didn't abuse those powers but didn't abolish them either, and when a revanchist leader took over there was nothing stopping him from exercising those dictatorial powers. Thrall was very much not an experienced statesman or diplomat, and the Tauren and the Darkspears had lived in isolation before meeting the Orcs, so it's only natural that none of them quite knew how to set up a stable federal government with checks and balances that didn't rely on the moral character of its leader.

What doesn't make sense is multiple established and independent nations with their own strong identities suddenly starting to call Varian their king while he lectures ten-thousand year old veterans about patience and basic military tactics.
 
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During the Third War, the combination of the Scourge and Burning Legion invasions caught the Alliance so off-guard that there wasn't any coordinated response by the Alliance, nor a chance to appoint a unified military commander.
I feel the need to point out there was a coordinated response. It wasn't even that bad of one, shipping troops into South Shore like its the second war all over again, and putting them under the command of Garithos the last real commander of the Lorderon military, which is the real place it became a horrible fuckin response. Between those forces, Kael'thas, the complete disintegration of Scourage command structure and the legion leaving west, the response would have been far better in a different time... Alas... Well, why say it when someone else did far better;

"For pure, unstinting stupidity, for superb incompetence to command, for ignorance combined with bad judgement - in short, for the true talent for catastrophe - Garithos stood alone. Others abide our question, but Garithos outshines them all as the greatest military idiot of our own or any other day. Only he could have led the men of Lordaeron to such a ruinous defeat. It was not easy: he started with a good army, a secure position, some excellent officers, a feral, soon-to-be divided enemy, and repeated opportunities to save the situation. But Garithos, with the touch of true genius, swept aside these obstacles with unerring precision, and out of order wrought complete chaos. We shall not, with luck, look upon his like again."*
*With all regards to Flashman.
 
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Like I said before, there's pretty much no chance of the Alliance detecting her

They might not really need to - not if she ends up giving herself away.

Nzaria's infiltrations so far have largely been smash and grab (and/or stab) affairs that succeeded because her cover only needed to last a day or two at most and was always ultimately disposable. What she seems to be planning on here is going to test her, not least because she's going to have to pretend to be a mortal for far longer than she ever has before. She could probably style herself as an adventurer to buy some leeway for behavioural quirks, but I still wonder just how well she'd hold such a front together over a long period.

All of this has the potential to be obviated, though, if any of the prisoners in that camp survived and can report back that there's a rogue twilight dragon hostile to the Twilight Hammer on the loose.

Verifying the report and seeing if that dragon could be worked with seem like prime tasks to give to any adventurers that might be wandering by the Alliance camps.
 
Nzaria's clever, but she's young. And her brain has been thoroughly washed. And she doesn't know enough about being or acting like a humanoid of any stripe to not get found out long term. I give her two weeks before someone figures out she's a dragon.

Still great to read another chapter of this, both my favorite Warcraft stories updated this month!
 
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It would be deeply funny if Nzaria got given the task of investigating the existence and trustworthiness of herself as one of her first adventuring gigs.
 
Doing a reread, I noticed this little parallel:
A strangled noise escaped Nzaria's throat, prompting the elf to spin around to face her, as though only now becoming aware of her presence, and also allowing her to see her face for the first time.

The elf was horrifically disfigured, nearly every inch of her skin covered in putrid, yellow-gray burn marks.

No, that was not entirely accurate. Her skin was not marked by burns, it was still burning, sizzling and popping softly in the silence of the cavern.
She wore the guise of a purple-robed cultist, a hood covering her short black hair. Angry burn-marks lined her hands and throat- no matter what form she tried to take, the scars remained.

Perhaps that was only proper. A reminder, of Father's betrayal, of the first time she defied an order.
It seems there are some noticeable limits to the dragons' shapeshifting. Significant injuries remain. Which I suppose makes sense with how visages work. My WoW knowledge is very incomplete, but if visages are a sort of persona of the dragon (like how Chromie's gnomeness isn't just an illusion but part of who she is) then defining traumas passing from one to the other makes sense.

As an aside, just how big is our protagonist at the moment? I'd imagined her not too huge (though still fairly substantial) but her breaking the big pillar of evil makes me wonder if I've been underestimating her size.
 
In this story Varian is not the High King of the Alliance, whoever came up with that title at Blizzard should feel bad.
That'd be Chris Metzen as he voiced Varian Wrynn in the Alliance and gave him a lot of favoritism like way he did with Thrall whom he also voiced in the Horde.

he lectures ten-thousand year old veterans about patience and basic military tactics.
In fairness, those said veterans are not always right in the head sometimes (the consequence of living so long they can be out of touch with mortals and don't want to move on and clung on to the past) and not all long lived individuals are mature and wise like Fandral Staghelm for example.
 
Also Tyrande specifically being hot headed has been a thing pretty much from her inception. There's her destruction of the orcish human camp in the first mission of her campaign in WC3, there's freeing Illidan and there's her deciding to take on the undead by herself on that bridge during Frozen Throne.
 
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