To Nurture the Next Generation (AU Naruto Sensei Quest)

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The shinobi war is a horrid place to live in. People are used as tools and they dedicate their lives to protect the village they grew up in from a young age.

Death is always a possibility, yet can come unexpectedly when striking from the dark.

In this world, it is your duty to train, cultivate and nurture the next generation of shinobi and kunoichi who will serve the village. It is up to you to help them grow to become fine ninjas and to make sure that they don't die quickly.

You are the sensei of a new team coming straight from the academy. Their career as shinobi, their personal development and their lives are on your hands.
Time Period and Village Choice
Location
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The world of a shinobi is a dangerous one. In this world a child grows and learns the art of a soldier, learns to bring death upon those his commanders deem their, and by extension his enemies. That child grows and becomes a shinobi: an infiltrator, an assassin, a spy, a soldier, a commander, an agent of the shadows of intrigue. Their targets will either be shinobi and higher-ups of enemy nations or enemies of the shinobi within their own nation, conspiring the decrees the might, influence and independence of the villages.

Most who enter this life do not live long. If they are caught, they are tortured, interrogated and executed with their nation renouncing them or starting a war for them. They fight in bloody wars that fill the battlefields with blood and destruction from weapons and jutsu that are thrown everywhere.
Orphanages are built in the dozen in the villages and house hundreds if not thousands of children who lost their parent or never knew them. These are the minds most easily molded into those of a weapon.

Indeed, the life of a shinobi was a hard one. And it is your job to make sure that the next generation would live and grow to become great shinobi.

..........

You are a shinobi who had managed to advance to the rank of Jonin. You are someone who had worked hard to earn your promotion into this high level classification. However, as a Jonin you had a duty to your village to become a sensei for three young Genin who had just graduated out of the academy.

It is your job to make them stronger, train them and guide them on how to improve their skills, how to gain new ones, to teach them how to act as a well-oiled machine that could spill the blood of the village's enemies on the battlefield, teach them how to infiltrate into a nobleman's court and assassinate people of value.

You will have to learn how to deal with their personalities and make sure that rifts between the members do not happen. You have to consider their personalities when training them and how one might understand things better than another. Will you train them by giving each a task to work on? Will you teach them all simultaneously, which will cause them to grow and advance at different rates? All of it is up to you.

Just remember, you have to mold them into a fine team of shinobi and make sure that as many of them survive this harsh life for as long as possible.

But before we talk any further about your job and your sad life story, let's talk about the when and where. From which village you hail?

[ ] Konohagakure: You are from Konohagakure, the village hidden in the leaf. Founded by Hashirama Senju and Madara Uchiha in the Land of Fire, the village has been known for its founders and for having the biggest amount of clans who possess some sort of Kekkei Genkai, giving them the largest pool of powerful bloodline abilities from all the great villages.

[ ] Kirigakure: You are from Kirigakure, the village hidden in the mist. Founded by several clan leaders in the Land of Water several years after the founding of Konohakagure, the village is renowned for its ruthlessness, its legendary swords and a plethora of powerful clans who possess varied Kekkei Genkai. Their swordsmen are the best among all the villages, maybe capable of matching some of the best samurai.

[ ] Iwagakure: You are from Iwagakure, the village hidden in the rocks. Founded by many of the clans of the Land of Earth to match Konohagakure, the village is renowned for its many powerful secret jutsu and Kekkei Genkai, but are famous the most for possessing several clans with a Kekkei Tota. The power of these abilities are feared across the lands.

[ ] Kumogakure: You are from Kumogakure, the village hidden in the cloud. Founded by the First Raikage who takes upon him the name A in the Land of Lighting to match Konohagakure's rising power. The village is known for having very few clans with powerful Kekkei Genkais, as well as a fighting style called Nintaijutsu, which incorporates ninjutsu and taijutsu together. Their hand-to-hand combatants are some of the best in the entire world.

[ ] Sunagakure: You are from Sunagakure, the village hidden in the sand. Founded by many clans in the Land of Wind to match the power of Konohagakure, it is known for having the smallest amount of Kekkei Genkai out of all of the five great villages. They make up for it in their natural defenses that is the great desert that surrounds them as well as many secret arts that is used by the shinobi there.


In which time period do you live? In what era do you become a Jonin Sensei?

[ ] The Founding Era: You were born before the founding of the village system, but not long before it happened. You grew up in the village as it was setting its foundations and now you become the teacher of the first generation born after the founding of the village.

[ ] The First Great Shinobi World War Era: All of the shinobi villages are fighting in a gigantic and massive war that has been going on for years now. You were born in a time of peace and was sucked into a bloody war unprepared. Now you are becoming a sensei and you have to train these kids to kill.

[ ] The Sorrowful Peacetime Era: The First Shinobi World War has ended with nothing but loses for everyone. Many people have lost their lives and you lost plenty of friends and loved ones in it. Now it's a time of peace and you have to train a new generation who will not have to fight in a war... or so you hope.

[ ] The Nations Warfare Era: After many years of peace war strikes again, this time between the larger nations, with the daimyo forcing the shinobi to participate. You grew at a time of peace and now you have to teach kids how to become soldiers in a war that your superiors do not desire to partake in.

[ ] The Cold Peacetime Era: With the wars between the nations finally subsiding long enough there is another time of peace, but no kage trusts the other and always prepares for the beginning of another war. In this time of tension you must train your students to be prepared.

[ ] The Second Great Shinobi World War Era: Once again in the history of the shinobi villages war has begun across a worldwide scale. It has been a few years now and it seems that no village is doing better than another. During this time you have to train the next generation to learn how to become become strong soldiers.

[ ] The Blooming Peacetime Era: The Second Shinobi World War has ended and now the villages are trying to use diplomacy more than might after the draining war, even starting a new tradition called "The Chunin Exams", in which the format for promotions from Genin to Chunin will be changed drastically. You are teaching the first generations of shinobi to go with this new Chunin exams format.

[ ] The Third Great Shinobi World War Era: Despite the best attempts of the kages to form bonds between each other and to facilitate peace for the sake of future generations, war still came to be and now you have to train a new generation of shinobi to fight in a war, something you never experienced yourself.

[ ] The Fragile Peacetime Era: Another war has gone into the history books, but the war and its consequences are still fresh in the minds of the shinobi. The nations are very cautious of one another and do not forgive easily. It's a tough political climate but you still have a somewhat relaxed environment to nurture your students.


Now, are you an existing character or are you an original character?

[ ] An existing character (next post will focus on picking a character)
[ ] An original character (next post will be character creation)



Hello everyone, here is a new quest by me with a lot of help from @Dark as Silver on the mechanics. I have my own Naruto AU setting and I welcome a lot of you to participate in it and help out this idea I had and maybe make something out of it.
 
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Character Sheets
Your Character:

Name: Susumu Yuki
Gender: Male
Age: 19

Personality: Stern and cold. You are tough, but you are fair. You have a harsh exterior that is hard to crack and you are a person of few words. But when that exterior does break, people will find the hidden depths within you.

Likes: Ice Sculpting.
Dislikes: People who make low effort ice puns.

Appearance:
Skill Chart:

Skill GroupSkillSkill Sub-GroupPoints
Combat​
Ninjusu​
Water Release
Wind Release​
20​
Combat​
Taijutsu​
15​
Combat​
Genjutsu​
15​
Combat​
Bukijutsu​
Kenjutsu (Sword Techniques)​
20​
Combat​
Fuinjutsu​
15​
Combat​
Kekkei Genkai (Ice Release)​
24​
Social​
Acting​
15​
Social​
Persuasion​
15​
Social​
Intimidation​
15​
Social​
Perception​
20​
Social​
Information Gathering​
17​
Social​
Cold Reading​
17​
Espionage​
Code Mastery​
15​
Espionage​
Sabotage​
15​
Espionage​
Stealth​
15​
Espionage​
Trap Making​
15​
Espionage​
Poison Making​
15​
Espionage​
Chakra Sensing​
17​

Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Substitution Jutsu
Body Flicker Jutsu
Wind Release:
Wind Release: Great Breakthrough Jutsu
Wind Release: Wind Slash Jutsu
Wind Release: Wind Dragon Jutsu
Wind Release: Focused Stream Jutsu
Wind Release: Air Bullet Jutsu
Wind Release: Thunder Clap Jutsu

Water Release:
Water Release: Water Clone Jutsu
Water Release: Water Prison Jutsu
Water Release: Water Torrent Jutsu
Water Release: Rising Wave Jutsu
Water Release: Underwater Coating Jutsu
Water Release: Water Mirror Jutsu
Water Release: Water Shuriken Jutsu

Ice Release (Kekkei Genkai):
Ice Release Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals Jutsu
Ice Release: Ice Weapon Creation Jutsu
Ice Release: Ice Shuriken Jutsu
Ice Release: Spear Eruption Field Jutsu
Ice Release: Ice Prison Jutsu
Ice Release: Ice Clone Jutsu
Ice Release: Freezing Breeze Jutsu
Ice Release: Ice Senbon Jutsu
Ice Release: Freezing Wind Blast Jutsu
Ice Release: Crystal Fortress Jutsu
Ice Release: Crystal Wall Jutsu
Ice Release: Frozen Capturing Field Jutsu
Ice Release: Ice Arrow Rain Jutsu
Ice Release: Freazing Touch Jutsu
Ice Release: Ice Dragon Jutsu
Blade Art: Dance of the Flowing Water
Blade Art: Moon Fang Hellish Smite
Blade Art: Dance of the Dual Feathers
Blade Art: Dance of the Two-Handed Leaf Blade
Blade Art: Drilling Sword Thrust
Moment of Bliss Jutsu
Temple of Nirvana Jutsu
Demonic Illusion: Horrific Vision Jutsu
Demonic Illusion: Eternal Ice Prison Jutsu
False Surrounding Jutsu
Demonic Illusion: One Thousand Frozen Dead Men Jutsu
Item Storage Seal Jutsu
Ice Crystal Protection Barrier Jutsu
Five Point Protection Jutsu
Ninjutsu Absorption and Counter-Attack Seal Jutsu

Your Genin:
Name: Samuke Yuki
Gender: Male
Age: 12

Personality: Young and easily excitable, Samuke is very eager and shows it a lot despite his politeness. He loves his family greatly and usually tries to act courtly around his closest family members, while showing his more casual side around those he admires.

Likes: Reading in the shade of the garden of the Yuki compound.
Dislikes: Loud and egotistical people who think they are better than everyone else.
Dream: Become the greatest spy in the world.

Appearance: Has a face with feminine features, braided shoulder-length raven black hair that slides on the front of his shoulders. Has a right blue eye and a left black eye. Wears a dark-blue Hanfu.

Skill Chart:

Skill GroupSkillSkill Sub-GroupPoints
Combat​
Ninjutsu​
Water Release
Wind Release​
5​
Combat​
Taijutsu​
5​
Combat​
Genjutsu​
5​
Combat​
Bukijutsu​
5​
Combat​
Fuinjutsu​
5​
Combat​
Kekkei Genkai (Ice Release)​
6​
Social​
Acting​
6​
Social​
Persuation​
5​
Social​
Intimidation​
5​
Social​
Perception​
5​
Social​
Information Gathering​
5​
Social​
Cold Reading​
5​
Espionage​
Code Mastery​
5​
Espionage​
Sabotage​
5​
Espionage​
Stealth​
7​
Espionage​
Trap Making​
6​
Espionage​
Poison Making​
5​
Espionage​
Chakra Sensing​
5​

Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Substitution Jutsu
Water Release:
Water Release: Trick of Water Jutsu
Water Release: Water Torrent Jutsu

Wind Release:
Wind Release: Moving Air Wall Jutsu

Ice Release:
Ice Release: Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals Jutsu
Ice Release: Freezing Touch Jutsu
Name: Byako Wakatabi
Gender: Male
Age: 12

Personality: Silent and attentive, Byako is the kind of person who listens very carefully to everything and tries to think more deeply about them and look underneath the underneath. When he does starts talking, he has a very hard time stopping himself, which embarrasses him and causes him to become a bit more introverted. However, he has confidence in himself and his skills and knows what he is good at.

Likes: Silence, lets him focus more.
Dislikes: Talking or the looks people give him when he can't stop talking.
Dream: Become a strong shinobi who would bring pride to the village.

Appearance: Short, spiky gray hair with two large gray bangs that go down both cheeks, framing his face. He has a pair of big, light-brown eyes. He wears a long-sleeved shirt, aqua-green shirt with brown lines on the sleeves and a tight pair of pants colored the same way.

Skill Chart:

Skill GroupSkillSkill Sub-GroupPoints
Combat​
Ninjutsu​
5​
Combat​
Taijutsu​
7​
Combat​
Genjutsu​
5​
Combat​
Bukijutsu​
5​
Combat​
Fuinjutsu​
5​
Combat​
Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai​
0​
Social​
Acting​
5​
Social​
Persuation​
5​
Social​
Intimidation​
5​
Social​
Perception​
7​
Social​
Information Gathering​
6​
Social​
Cold Reading​
7​
Espionage​
Code Mastery​
5​
Espionage​
Sabotage​
5​
Espionage​
Stealth​
5​
Espionage​
Trap Making​
5​
Espionage​
Poison Making​
5​
Espionage​
Chakra Sensing​
5​

Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Substitution Jutsu
Name: Suijin Hozuki
Gender: Male
Age: 12

Personality: Suijin is a confident and proud boy, mostly in the skills that he is good at. However, when he feels like he is overwhelmed or in a situation that he can't win, he will immediately run and act out of fear. Whatever insecurities he has, he will cover it up as best as he can with bravado. He is also a bit impatient.

Likes: Practicing Ninjutsu and swimming.
Dislikes: People who can't pull their weight and pull down others with them.
Dream: Become the Mizukage.

Appearance: Has sharp teeth, short, chestnut-brown hair, red eyes, long cheekbones and a slightly crooked nose. He wears a baggy, silky, long-sleeved red shirt with a golden trim and a pair of baggy pants with the same coloring and golden trim.

Skill Chart:

Skill GroupSkillSkill Sub-GroupPoints
Combat​
Ninjutsu​
Water Release​
9​
Combat​
Taijutsu​
4​
Combat​
Genjutsu​
5​
Combat​
Bukijutsu​
4​
Combat​
Fuinjutsu​
4​
Combat​
Clan Art (Water Body)​
7​
Social​
Acting​
6​
Social​
Persuation​
6​
Social​
Intimidation​
6​
Social​
Perception​
4​
Social​
Information Gathering​
5​
Social​
Cold Reading​
5​
Espionage​
Code Mastery​
4​
Espionage​
Sabotage​
5​
Espionage​
Stealth​
5​
Espionage​
Trap Making​
4​
Espionage​
Poison Making​
4​
Espionage​
Chakra Sensing​
5​

Clone Jutsu
Transformation Jutsu
Substitution Jutsu
Water Release:
Water Release: Trick of Water Jutsu
Water Release: Water Bullet Jutsu
Water Release: Water Wave Jutsu
Water Release: Water Torrent Jutsu

Clan Arts:
Secret Art: Hydrification Jutsu
Water Release: Water Gun Jutsu
Secret Art: Body Puddle Jutsu
Secret Art: Water Body Gigantification Jutsu

Other Teams:

Notable Members of the Yuki Clan:

Other Notable Characters:

To Be Added
 
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Quest Mechanics
First of all, before I begin the explanation, I want to thank @Dark as Silver for helping me with making the mechanics of this quest. You were a ton of help and I appreciate that.

Now, the mechanics are as followed. You are playing as a sensei, but the ones who do the rolls are the students (except for missions where you also participate in a more active manner). The way this will work is that students will given either individual or group tasks to perform based on skills, with the mechanic of how it will roll will be based on this formula:
[Skill +1d10]

With this formula, there are ranks that determine the DC checks that they would have to pass:

Civilian/Untrained: 0 (5 DC on checks)
Genin: 5 (10 DC on checks)
Chunin: 10 (15 DC on checks)
Jonin: 15 (20 DC on checks)
High Jonin: 20 (25 DC on checks)
Kage: 25 (30 DC on checks)

These ranks will not only determine the DC check that they will have to pass, but also the level range of every skill that every character will have.

Here is a chart of a character's skills:

Skill GroupSkillSub-SkillsPoints
CombatNinjutsuElemental Ninjutsu (fire, water, earth, lightning, air)
Medical Ninjutsu
Time-Space Ninjutsu
CombatTaijutsu (hand-to-Hand combat arts)
CombatGenjutsu ((illusion arts)
CombatBukijutsu (weapons arts)Shurikenjutsu (shuriken and kunai techniques)
Kenjutsu (sword techniques)
Bojutsu (Bo staff techniques)
Puppet Techniques (Sunagakure only)
Tessenjutsu (war-fan techniques)
Kyujutsu (bow and arrow techniques)
Senbon
CombatFuinjutsu (sealing arts)
CombatClan Arts or Kekkei Genkai/Kekkei Tota
SocialActing
SocialPersuation
SocialIntimidation
SocialPerception
SocialInformation Gathering
SocialCold Reading
EspionageCode Mastery
EspionageSabotage
EspionageStealth
EspionageTrap Making
EspionagePoison Making
EspionageChakra Sensing
 
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AU Timeline
This is the "Timeline Information Post". In here you will find the events of the timeline which details the events of this timeline, with the terms of the time eras being BKF (Before Konohagakure's Founding) and AKF (After Konohagakure's Founding). While there are different periods, this is just the simplest way to write it.

Also, know that I'm making the timeline work by CK2 logic: The moment you start, the timeline changes. While I have a complete timeline written in Google Docs, here things change just because it's a fun thing I always loved in CK2.
Logically and narratively, it can be written as things such as a character who is the ancestor of a named character that we know is killed in battle or something like that.

Now I know you must be asking: "But Quadrim, why fuck up your own timeline like that if you have one already set for us to live in?". The answer to that has a short ad long answer.
Short answer: Because I can.
Long answer: The major events such as the time in which the First Shinobi World War breaks doesn't change. What can change are, as stated above, which characters live and die. For all I know (and I do) you or your students can fight the war and kill the father or mother of Onoki or the Great-Great-Great-Great-Great Grandfather of Naruto or something like that. For the most part there aren't may big chances (well, aside from what results I will get on the secret dice rolls that aren't related to the team :evil:), so while I have the CK2 way of things in mind, I also have some EU4 way of thinking as well.

Either way, time to show you the timeline.

Legends Era:

1500 BKF: According to legends, a monk discovered how to mold chakra and taught it to his family.

1100 BKF: In continuation of that legend, the descendants of the man, known as the Otsutsuki clan, began searching ways to achieve the ultimate form of chakra, Six Path Chakra.

1050 BKF: In continuation of the legend, a couple of Otsutsuki clan members by the name of Kaguya and Isshiki ate from the fruit of the divine tree, which forcibly gave them Six Path Chakra, which resulted in them having absolute power and a longer lifespan, but also slowly corrupted their minds.

1020 BKF: In the legend of Kaguya, 30 years after receiving the power, Isshiki's mind had been completely consumed with greed and madness, which forced a battle between the husband and wife duo, resulting in the death of Isshiki Otsutsuki. by the end of that year, Kaguya had a son, who will become the Sage of Six Paths. His were purple and looked bizarre, which would later be known as the Rinnegan.

1010 BKF: In the legend of the Sage of Six Paths, the divine tree became the monstrous Juubi (Ten Tails) and killed Kaguya, taking her Six Path Chakra back. That's when the Sage of Six Paths, still a child then, ran away and began training in order to confront the beast.

1000 BKF: In continuation of the legend, after a decade of the Juubi causing mass destruction across the world, the young Sage of Six Paths fights and defeats the monster using Six Path Senjutsu, then sealing the monster within himself, becoming the first Jinchuriki.

1000 BKF - 920 BKF: The life of the Sage of the Six Paths.
-1000 BKF onward: According to the legend, after his victory over the Juubi, the Sage began traveling around the world and taught people all over the land how to mold chakra and invented the philosophy of Ninshu.
-950 BKF: The Sage of Six Paths started a family in his later years with a woman from the Otsutsuki clan, having two boys: Indra and Asura. Indra was said to be born with the "Eyes of the Sage", sharing the same purple eyes known as the Rinnegan, while Ashura was said to be born with the "Body of the Sage", which was his enhanced physiology.
-920 BKF: The Sage of Six Paths passes away, but not before splitting the body and chakra of the Juubi into 9 parts, resulting in the creation of the Bijuu. He also picks Ashura as his successor, much to the dismay of the older Indra.

919 BKF: According to legends, a year after the death of the Sage, Ashura and Indra had a battle over the succession of the their father's work, with Ashura claiming victory. This caused a split within the Otsutsuki clan as half followed Ashura and half followed Indra, which would later not only result in a long lasting blood feud, but the remnants of the Otsutsuki clan and descendants of Ashura and Indra would late split into four clans: Senju clan, Uzumaki clan, Uchiha clan and Hyuga clan.

771 BKF: The Four Tails Monkey known as Son Goku ruled over a large piece of land as a monarch, demanding worship and gifts from the human. According to legends, he was challenged by an extraordinary human into a fight, which the monkey gladly accepted. In the legends, the battle lasted for 10 days until the human came out victorious and chased the Bijuu away. That man is considered the ancestor of the Kanazomo clan, which are renowned for their Lava Release.

747 BKF: According to the legends, an old sage had managed in her old age to achieve enlightenment, gaining Six Path Chakra. In the tales, she spent the last decade of her life changing the landscape around her, creating the Land of Waterfalls with her own powers, causing life to spread across the land. She was named "The Life Bringer" upon her death.

Rise of Nations Era:

644 BKF: Around the world warlords begin to amass wealth, power and military might with the intentions of conquering as much land as possible and create their own empires. Some desire to rule the entire world.

640 BKF - 473 BKF: Around the entire world the ambitious and now rich and powerful warlords begin a war that will last for over a century and will end shaping the world into the large nations of the world that stand until modern day.
-551 BKF: The Land of Water is founded.
-533 BKF: The Land of Iron is founded.
-509 BKF: The Land of Lightning is founded.
-504 BKF: The Land of Wind is founded.
-496 BKF: The Land of Earth is founded.
-490 BKF: The Land of Fire is founded.
-489 BKF - 473 BKF: Smaller regions with desire for a nationality start a large independent war that causes chaos across the six lands, resulting in the independence of every small nation that is formed afterwards, among them being: Land of Grass, Land of Rice Fields, Land of Waves, Land of Whirlpools, Land of Waterfalls, Land of Hot Waters and many, many more.

Warring States Era:

365 BKF - 360 BKF: A large scale conflict ensues between the Uchiha clan and the Kaguya clan in the Land of Iron, with half of each clan dying in the process. The Uchiha clan start traveling towards the Land of Earth while the remaining half of the Kaguya clan spits apart, with a third of them staying in the Land of Iron while the other two thirds begin traveling towards the Land of Water.

357 BKF: The Senju clan settle in the Land of Fire.

344 BKF: In the Land of Water the Hoshigaki clan and the Kurry clan meet for the first time. When a young girl from the Kurry clan is found dead, the two clans begin a war that would turn into generations-lasting blood feud.

305 BKF: While traveling in the Land of Grass, the Hyuga clan are attacked by the Yojikan clan, who specialized in illusions. While the Hyuga clan managed to defend themselves and escape, a few dozen men and women were separated from the rest of the clan and were hunter for weeks. A fourth of them, mostly the women and girls, were captured by the Yojikan clan to become slaves and breeding mares, while the rest were saved by an ancient group of monks known as the Acolytes of the Moon, who protected a hidden cove of knowledge about the history of the Era of Legends.

305 BKF - 303 BKF: The Hakako clan, who were renown for creating unique swords and using them in battle, were given an ultimatum by the daimyo of the Land of Water: serve him as blacksmiths for his army or die. The Hakako clan chose the later and a conflict began that ended with the enslavement of the Hakako clan. They were tortured until every piece of forging knowledge that they had and then forced to work as slaves.

309 BKF - 300 BKF: The Yuki clan fight a clan known as the Seimemoto clan, which were able to create golem out of trees, rocks and even elements such as fire and water. The result of this long lasting war was the total extinction of the Seimemoto clan.

285 BKF: The Hyuga clan tracks down the location of the settlement of the Yojikan clan, who now had dozens of Byakugan users. In their desire for vengeance for the attack their suffered twenty years prior, the Hyuga clan burned down the entire settlement and killed every man, woman and child in the camp. They also adopted every infant and toddler under the age of five that was born with the Byakugan into the Hyuga clan, thus bringing the Yujikan clan to total extinction.

262 BKF: The Hyuga clan settles in the Land of Fire.

264 BKF - 256 BKF: A long war occurred in the Land of Earth, where the Ginoka clan, who had the ability to create, manipulate and shape silver, the Kamizuru clan, the Aburame clan and the Uchiha clan fought in a four-way war over territory in the Land of Earth. The Kamizuru clan came out the victors, with the Aburame and Uchiha clans fleeing in the direction of the Land of Grass and the Ginoka clan escaping to the Land of Iron.

255 BKF: The Uchiha clan reaches the Land of Fire. They also meet the Senju clan and begin a rivalry that will go for hundreds of years until modern day.

238 BKF: The Hozuki clan wipes out the Hoshiari clan, who were known for their Light Release Kekkei Genkai.

150 BKF: ??? is born.

121 BKF: ??? invents a jutsu that allows him to take over a body, allowing him to live until modern day by jumping from one body to the next.

29 BKF: Suiiki Hozuki is born.

22 BKF: Hashirama Senju and Madara Uchiha are born.

14 BKF: Tobirama Senju and Izuna Uchiha are born.

4 BKF: Susumu Yuki is born.

1 BKF: Izuna Uchiha dies.

1 AKF: Battle of the Valley of the End occurs.
-Hashirama and Madara fight for hours, but the fight is interrupted by the Kyuubi. The two shinobi join forces to fight the Tailed Beast. Eventually, after many hours of fighting they manage to cause him to leave. After the fight the Uchiha clan and Senju clan decide to stop the fighting and join forces.

The Hidden Villages Era:

1 AKF: Konohagakure is founded.
-Hashirama Senju (22) becomes the Hokage.
--Hashirama Senju marries Mito Uzumaki (22) and makes a deal with the Uzunaki clan that a third of the clan would move to Konoha.
-Madara Uchiha (22) becomes the Hokage's adviser and Leader of the ANBU.
--Tobirama Senju (14) joins the ANBU.

2 AKF: The Uzumaki clan arrives at the Land of Whirlpools.

3 AKF: Kirigakure is founded.
-Suiiki Hozuki (31) becomes the Mizukage.
-Kumogakure is founded.
--A/Ay (19) becomes Raikage.
-Sunagakure is founded.
--Kazui "Of the Desert" (31) becomes the Kazekage.
-Iwagakure is founded.
--Mosu Ishida (28) becomes the Tsuchikage.
-Most clans of Konohagakure join the village.
-After an attack close to the capital of the Land of Fire, Hashirama Senju and Madara Uchiha track down and defeat the Kyuubi, sealing him inside Mito Uzumaki.

4 AKF: The Konohagakure Academy is founded.

5 AKF: The First Kage Summit occurs.

6 AKF: The Sunagakure Academy is founded.

8 AKF: The Kirigakure Academy is founded.
-The Kumogakure Academy is founded.

9 AKF: The Iwagakure Academy is founded.

15 AKF: Current year.
 
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Character Creation
[X] Plan: Mystic Harmony
-[x] Kirigakure: You are from Kirigakure, the village hidden in the mist. Founded by several clan leaders in the Land of Water several years after the founding of Konohakagure, the village is renowned for its ruthlessness, its legendary swords and a plethora of powerful clans who possess varied Kekkei Genkai. Their swordsmen are the best among all the villages, maybe capable of matching some of the best samurai.
-[x] The Founding Era: You were born before the founding of the village system, but not long before it happened. You grew up in the village as it was setting its foundations and now you become the teacher of the first generation born after the founding of the village.
-[x] An original character (next post will be character creation)


You are a Jonin of the village of Kirigakure. It has been 12 years since the founding of the village and you have been a shinobi in its ranks since you were a child.

The Land of Water was a very small country in comparison to the other great nations and had a large amount of clans fighting for dominance for many years. However, the rise of Konohagakure chanced all of that and forced the clans to join forces to make a hidden village, led by the First Mizukage Suiiki Hozuki.

Despite only setting the foundations of the village in the last decade, Kirigakure was having a very good defensible position in the misty mountains of the Land of Water and was getting plenty of supplies from both fishing villages and merchants from the capital and the daimyo.

For the last 12 years you have been training and working to become a great shinobi who could be used as a tool for whatever mission the Mizukage sent you to perform. But who are you, really?

What is your first name?
[ ] Write-In

What is your gender?
[ ] Man
[ ] Woman


What is your age (Must be between 18-26)
[ ] Write-In Age

Now that we got this out of the way, we can get to a more complicated matter. What is your background?

[ ] You were a clanless civilian who moved in into the village after its founding. You had to learn the arts of the shinobi and you worked very hard, managing to show an extreme talent for it that pushed you all the way to Jonin rank.
-[ ] Write-In Surname

[ ] You are a member of one of the many clans who had been around in the Land of Water, constantly fighting one another in the hopes of wiping each other out. But with the rise of Kirigakure things had to change, and although you still had the biases towards other clans, you learned to make them your comrades-in-arms. (Pick one clan from the list below)
-[ ] You are a member of the Hozuki Clan, the clan which the First Mizukage belongs to. This clan is known for its secret Water Release art of being able to liquefy their on bodies, making them impervious to physical damage.
-[ ] You are a member of the Doi Clan, a powerful and renowned clan. This clan possesses the Mud Release Kekkei Genkai, though it is much less heard of than the likes of Wood Release, yet this ability is indeed very powerful.
-[ ] You are a member of the Hoshigaki Clan, a very terrifying clan. This clan is known for its genetic mutation which has its members looking like a hybrid of human and fish, mostly sharks. They have great physical strength and lots of chakra.
-[ ] You are a member of the Terumi Clan, a clan with a lot of political power in the village. This clan is known for its Boil Release Kekkei Gnekai, an incredibly powerful ability that can melt off their foes.
-[ ] You are a member of the Chinoike Clan, one of the most feared clans in the Land of Water. They are known for their Kekkei Genkai, the Ketsuryugan, an eye power that can control blood, making them a terrifying foe to fight.
-[ ] You are a member of the Kaguya Clan, one of the most feared clans in the Land of Water. They are known for their fearless attitude towards battle, their barbaric bloodlust and their Kekkei Genkai of Dead Bone Pulse. While the clan are affiliated with the village, you know that they hate it.
-[ ] You are a member of the Kurry Clan, a clan that is usually looked down upon. This clan is known for having a clan art that allows them to communicate and control all forms of sea creatures, an ability that is extremely powerful in the right hands.
-[ ] You are a member of the Yuki Clan, a powerful and renowned clan. This clan is infamous for its Ice Release Kekkei Genkai, which makes the masters of this bloodline into a chilling and deadly foe on the battlefield.


What type of person are you?

[ ] The laid-back kind. You don't really get nervous or stressed easily and you take your time as much as possible. People are just too eager to do stuff and they die without appreciating life. You, on the other hand, get to appreciate every second.
[ ] The stern and cold type. You are tough, but you are fair. You have a harsh exterior that is hard to crack and you are a person of few words. But when that exterior does break, people will find the hidden depths within you.
[ ] The fun-loving partying type. You love to party, you love to drink, you love to hang out with friends, you like everything that the evening night throws your way. Live is usually so depressing that you need to take a time off and really have as much fun as you can. The only problem is that you wouldn't know who you will wake up next to in the morning.
[ ] The deadpan and snarky type. Everyone around you is an idiot and you can't stand them doing stupid things around you. If you don't comment them on their stupidity, then who will. That's the only way that they will learn. Well... aside from death that is.
[ ] Write-In your personality.


Finally, and most importantly, what are your skills?
[NOTE: You have to put in a certain amount of points into each one of the skills below. The minimum must be 15 points and the maximum being 20 points. You have only one skill that you can put 24 points into, so think about that skill carefully.
There is a special exception with Kekkei Genkai. If you chose your background as not being a member of a clan, you can put 0 points in the Clan Arts/Kekkei Genkai skill.
Aside from that, you have to pick two nature elements in the sub-skills category (unless you are from a clan which has a Kekkei Gekai in which fuses two elements) and you can also pick a Bukijutsu specialty. However, it is not mandatory and if you don't, then Shurikenjutsu would be your natural go-to weapons.
To follow the skills and sub-skills list, please refer to the chart in the Quest Mechanics Post. Thank you very much.
You have 300 points.]

[ ] Write-In Points Distribution Plan
-[ ] Ninjutsu:
--[ ] Write-In Two Elemental Natures
-[ ] Taijutsu:
-[ ] Genjutsu:
-[ ] Bukijutsu:
--[ ] Optional: Write-In Weapon Specialty
-[ ] Fuinjutsu:
-[ ] Clan Art/Kekkei Genkai:
-[ ] Acting:
-[ ] Persuasion:
-[ ] Intimidation:
-[ ] Perception:
-[ ] Information Gathering:
-[ ] Cold Reading:
-[ ] Code Mastery:
-[ ] Sabotage:
-[ ] Stealth:
-[ ] Trap Making:
-[ ] Poison Making:
-[ ] Chakra Sensing:


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Phew, that was a really hard and long one to write. I hope that you like the character creation that I made for you guys, because you have plenty to work with here. Voting will be open until Wednesday. Until then stay safe, stay healthy and have a great day.:D👍

I want to see you guys being creative and remember: All votes must be in Plan Format.

VOTING WILL BE CLOSED IN 48 HOURS
 
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A Little Bit of Ranting
Hello everyone, I am here to talk a little bit about some important and unimportant things about specific subjects and how they work in my AU, as well as rant about Naruto related stuff and the Boruto anime/manga because I can.

Let's start with the big guys in the room: The Bijuu.

One thing that I massively hated in the war arc was how Kurama was not only revealed to be split in half, but also massively more powerful than any other Bijuu in existence, making all the others completely obsolete. I mean come on! Naruto with half of Kurama defeats 7 Bijuu working together under Obito's control!
Sure, a perfect Jinchuriki should be more powerful than a wild Bijuu, but that was just absurd.

Therefore I had in mind a change that I was going to implement in this AU no matter what: All Bijuu are relatively comparable in power. Yes, Kurama the Kyubii is the strongest, but the difference isn't very noticeable. In a fight between Bijuu, there is always a 50% chance for one to win the other.

Another note is that every Jinchuriki who defeats his Bijuu and gains its chakra has a chakra cloak like Naruto does, but different for every beast. And another detail is that all Bijuu modes are the same, with the Jinchuriki becoming the Bijuu themselves and not having some chakra avatar instead.

They also have are attributes that allow them to fight one another on equal terms. Here is the list:

Shukaku: He is capable of sand manipulation and sealing with Magnet Release. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is basically a monk rob made of sand (a nod to the original backstory of Shukaku as a monk turned monster). The perfect jinchuriki state gives an additional tail.

Matatabi: She (I decided to make Matatabi a female) is capable of producing psychokinetic flames, i.e. she can control her flames with her mind. She is also the most agile Bijuu. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets a chakra cloak that is like Kurama's chakra cloak in canon, but with blue and black flames covering the body instead of yellow and orange, and the perfect Jinchuriki state gives two tails and cat ears.

Isobu: He has the ability to create powerful corals, has the best defenses of all the Bijuu, can swim really fast and breath underwater. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is basically a coral armor that makes him look like a mini Isobu, with the three tails added in the Perfect Jinchuriki state.

Son Goku: Possesses the Lava Release kekkei genkai. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is basically having his body be covered by hot magma, while the perfect Jinchuriki state also creates four tails made from the rock and magma.

Kokuo: He has the Boil Release kekkei genkai and is the physically fastest Bijuu. His horns are deadly as well. The chakra cloak that the jinchuriki gets is having the body become a cloud of corrosive steam. The perfect Jinchuriki state stabilizes the cloud and creates five tails made from the steam.

Saiken: Can produce corrosive acid from his body to damage opponents. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is also very basic: having his body covered by the corrosive acid and creates six tails made of the acid.

Chomei: Also a female in this AU, Chomei only has the special ability to fly, which is in itself a very useful ability. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is a green armor that covers their body with wings.

Gyuki: The physically strongest out of all the Bijuu, he can produce ink that he can use to seal others and blind opponents. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is an armor with ox helmet while the perfect Jinchuriki state adds eight octopus legs.

Kurama: The Bijuu with the largest pool of chakra, he can super-charge his attacks, making them much more powerful than usual. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is a bit different than canon (and I will explain why). Instead of being covered by a yellow cloak, the fiery cloak is an orange cloak, with the perfect Jinchuriki state giving it nine tails, black whiskers and two big fox ears made of fiery chakra.

Now, the reason that I decided to change the color of Kurama's chakra cloak is because as much as I love the design in canon, it always bothered me that the cloak is gold instead of making Naruto be orange. Yeah, I know, it was meant to be a marketable Super Saiyan copy form, but that's what Six Path Sage Mode could be.
It's my AU and thus I decided to only have Six Path Sage Mode gold-colored and thus make KCM orange-colored.

Okay, now that I've got that out of the way, I want to discuss something I have mixed feelings about. And by discuss, I mean rant like a raging bull. I warn you all, there will be a ton of swearing because when I'm angry and ranting, I swear more that usual.

I want to talk about Post-retcon Hashirama Senju and Madara "My Gary-Stu plot armor is as invincible as Aizen "Kyoka Suigetsu goes brrr" Sosuke's" Uchiha. Let's start with our favorite villain, Madara.

Madara is an utter badass and is really cool and really fun to hate him. You can't get your eyes off of him. However, his power was way too bullshit in my opinion. This is what caused the power escalation go beyond control and that really ruined my enjoyment on the world in retrospective.

Every ubber badass legend was seen of having a tangible chance of losing. Pain was an absolute monster and would have won against Naruto without outside interference, but he was shown to have weaknesses and capable of losing if there was enough info on him, having someone strong enough fight him while having an insane amount of prep time. Point is, Pain/Nagato was shown capable of losing.

Itachi was shown capable of losing to Sasuke, who didn't have a Mangekyou, even though he almost won despite holding back, going blind and dying from illness. But without Susanoo he would have died to Kirin. Itachi was seen as someone beatable.

The Third Raikage seemed untouchable and one who you would think couldn't be defeated, yet he did die against 3,000 shinobi and fought against the Gyuki. Naruto managed to find a strategy to defeat him.

Madara couldn't be defeated no matter what was thrown at him. He never showed to be dropping a sweat against anyone and he was so goddamn invincible that there was the need for the whole reincarnation and Ridoku power-up crap just to keep up with the damn Uchiha. Then another left-field shitty twist got him killed.
Nothing could faze him when he was either an Edo Tensei or alive. Numbers? Just fodder to him, 5 kages included. Power? Nobody could fucking compete with him in power. Strategy? Who needed that when basically every potential plan the alliance could create would be shat on by this fucking asshole.

Point is nothing would work against him. His power was way too high to work in the Naruto world. Even Hashirama, the guy Madara wouldn't shut the fuck up about got stomped by a Madara with no eyes! WHILE IN SAGE MODE, FOR FUCK SAKE!

Now let's talk about Hashirama. While I don't like the retcon in which Hashirama was the God of Shinobi and strongest Hokage, despite earlier in the manga it was stated somewhere that Sarutobi was the strongest, that is something I can live with. The fact that he has Mastered Sage Mode I can live with. The fact that Wood Release can somehow contain Bijuu chakra I can live with.

What I can't live with is that he was an uber god who spanks all 9 Bijuu combined like they are fucking house pets! Because Madara had such impressive feats, Hashirama had to look even better so that Madara's constant praise justified. By beating both Madara and Kurama with perfect Susanoo, all other Bijuu became as completely invalid as the shinobi alliance.

What my ranting has been trying to get to other than releasing my steam, is to say that my major decision in this AU was to heavily, and I mean heavily nerf those two. I will ow describe how much.

Even though they are the strongest in their era, both Madara and Hashirama can hold their own in a 1v1 fight with a single Bijuu and live to tell the tale, whereas other kages need a lot of help and support just to survive a fight with a single Bijuu. They do not possess as much raw power as a Bijuu, but their many techniques and skills manage to close the gap enough to hold their own.

That is how strong Hashiram Senju and Madara Uchiha are in this setting.

Sorry for all the ranting and I hope you all have a great day.
 
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Picking Your Students
Plan Stoic Yuuki


Your name was Susumu Yuki, the sixth son of the clan head of the Yuki clan and Jonin of Kirigakure, the village hidden in the mist. You were now standing in the personal office of the Mizukage alongside fifteen other Jonin, with the village leader being flanked on both sides by a man and a women. The man was around the same age as the Mizukage himself and looked like a personal bodyguard, while the woman was barely older than you and seemed not that skilled in combat, as shown by how nervous she was.

Your eyes darted around as you examined each of the Jonin in the room, all belonging to the different clans in the village. Knowing each and every one of them as your "comrades" (a word which you and everyone else there gagged from simply thinking about), you respected all of them, disliked almost all of them, hated some of them and tolerated very few of them.

You had known that right now almost all of the Jonin belonged to the clans, with only very few being clanless. Sure, it wasn't the fault of the clanless for being ordinary, unlike people like yourself who were extraordinary. That's why it was more impressive when one of them gained that rank. At least they were not meant to act like stepping stones for your clan, so they couldn't really be in your way, unlike the rest of them.

There were constant murmurs while you and the other Jonin watched the Mizukage looking through some files, so you allowed your mind to wander to different thoughts while the leader of the village and its strongest shinobi was working.

Those thoughts being all the plots that each clan was trying to pursue in order to gain political power in the Land of Water. Knowing that the Mizukage was already married to a third cousin of his, your father and any clan leader with a functioning brain in their head decided that in order to gain more political power and strengthen their position was to gain power in the court of the daimyo, the one who actually made sure that the village had a way to make enough money to maintain itself.

Unfortunately for your father's ambitions, the Terumi clan had managed to get one of their daughters to spread her legs in the daimyo's bed first, and later was upgraded into first wife when she got pregnant. This gave the Terumi clan a lot of influence over the Mizukage, a fact that the Mizukage himself hated since he was the head of the Hozuki clan, plus the fact that many of their members kept rubbing it in your face. Probably in the faces of any other clan member that they meet as well.

Now your father wanted your eldest sister to be the wife of the daimyo's spymaster just so your clan could plan the assassination of the daimyo and his entire bloodline in order to put said spymaster and the Yuki clan in the position of power. No doubt every clan had a similar plan but using a different noble in mind.

You were cut out of your thoughts when the Mizukage closed the last folder and you stood straight, as did everyone else.

"Good evening and apologies for keeping you all waiting." the man started talking as you opened your ears listening to every word. "As many or probably most of you know, today was the final exam for the first batch of graduates to ever come out of the academy." he started speaking as you didn't move a muscle. Of course you knew that, you had a little sister and two first cousins who finished their exams today, not to mention all the cousins and your nephew who were still studying in the academy.

The Mizukage continued speaking. "They are our first batch of shinobi in this new system that was founded by Konohagakure. Tomorrow onward, all of you in this room will teach this year's 45 academy graduates." he stated his declaration with nothing but a serious look in his eyes. "We will follow the Konohagakure system for now: a 15 man platoon composed of five Gennin squads lead by a single Jonin sensei each." he explained to everyone in the room while you gave an obedient nod.

Suddenly one of the other Jonin raised his hand as he started to speak. His very light, greenish-blonde hair was an indicator of him being of the Chinoike clan. Isshijin Chinoike, fourth son of the brother of the Chinoike clan's head and your junior by one year. A total psycho from what you remember, not unlike the rest of his clan, but more extreme than the rest.

"Excuse me, Mizukage-sama," he started speaking as all eyes in the room were now on him. "but why do have to go by the rules set by Konohagakure?" he asked with a bit of a disgruntled tone to his voice. "Why shouldn't we carve our own path in our teaching method by making them kill each other to create more quality shinobi?" he inquired with some questions.

Honestly, you weren't sure whether you liked the idea or not. Sure, it put a smile on your face to think of being allowed to kill members of other clans inside the village, but it was also a risk to your own clan, something you didn't want.

You then saw that the Mizukage's face darkened upon hearing this. He looked angry. "Because, Isshijin Chinoike, our shinobi forces are only at the hundreds right now. Quantity is just as important as quality, and as the first leader of this village, we must increase the number of our forces to the thousands." the man started answering the question, clearly upset, but he managed to keep his cool. Yeah, he definitely didn't like the idea.

The strongest shinobi in the village then looked over at his assistant. "Konuki, please assign the teachers the student files based on classes." he ordered a brown-haired woman who stood to his left.

The woman nodded and took fifteen specific files from the Mizukage's table and stood between it and all of the Jonin in the room. "I will now call all the Jonin who had been assigned to Class 1. You will be allowed to look at all fifteen files of the class's graduates and pick three of them to assemble as your team. Is that understood?" she explained the procedure to everyone as you just rolled your eyes silently.

Of course you understood, you weren't an idiot nor a child.

The woman, whom you knew as Mira Terumi, who was probably forced into the role by her family pushing the Mizukage around with their new political power. "Yakumo Hoshigaki, Izurame Kurry, Gato Michibane, Susumu Yuki and Kisame Doi, please step forward." the girl who worked as the leader's assistant and barely a year older than you spoke, nervously calling the names of five Jonin, you among them.

When you and the others who were called took a step forward, the Mizukage then performed several hand seals and finished by clapping his hands together, causing a long stone table to form between you and the Terumi girl, which startled her and caused her to nearly drop the files in her hands.

After a few seconds she somewhat calmed down enough to quickly put all of the fifteen files on the table in an orderly fashion. "Y-you may now look at the files and p-pick your students. Hehehe." she said as she rubbed the back of her head sheepishly before running back to the side of the Mizukage's table.

You simply rolled your eyes at the silly way that nervous wreck was displaying herself and walked towards the files alongside your other four compatriots, studying the files and carefully.



Students of Class 1 of the first class of the academy (Pick 3 to form your team):

[ ] Byako Wakatabi:
A clanless boy whom his teachers noted to be "Silent but attentive". His test scores in the written are among the highest in the class and his practical scores in Taijutsu skills are noted to be good even for a Genin. Despite the lack of any Kekkei Genkai, he seems to be right up your alley.

[ ] Suijin Hozuki: A young boy from the Hozuki clan, he is noted to be a prodigy when it comes to Ninjutsu and chakra control, allowing him to use several jutsu in a row. However, his skills in other departments have been lacking according to the notes. He seems to be needing a lot of improvement in his skills.

[ ] Samuke Yuki: One of your first cousins who had just finished the academy. According to the notes, he is pretty average in combat, but was noted to be incredibly interested in the world of espionage. He is the only family member in this class, so it is natural that you would pick him, but you should be bias.

[ ] Fuyumi Hinamori: A clanless girl from a merchant family who has been noted to be above average in both Genjutsu and with weapons. However, the notes also say that she is below average in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, as well as having a kind and bubbly personality.

[ ] Ruruka Doi: A girl from the Doi clan who is noted to be a prodigy and a jack-of-all-traits, but it's also said that she is a spoiled, egotistical, petty, disrespectful brat. While she seems like a pain, putting a halt on her attitude problem would do wonders for her and her team. Plus, embarrassing a Doi is going to be fun.

[ ] Izumi Kanon: A clanless girl who is noted to be completely average on all fronts, be it in written or practical exams. The only exception to that being that she has a great amount of charisma and is easy to make friends with. Maybe even that part of her personality could be cultivated into an effective weapon as well?

[ ] Yoko Kaguya: A boy from the Kaguya clan. The notes all appear to imply that he is skilled but also terrified everyone around him, which isn't surprising. Anyway, he is good about using his Kekkei Genkai with Taijutsu, but is below average in terms of Ninjutsu ad Genjutsu.

[ ] Mei Ubonaga: A clanless girl who was noted to have potential in many fields. while she is very hard to judge simply because her tests results are all over the place, she is noted to be a quick learner. That's a good thing that you want to have in a student.

[ ] Aio Chinoike: A boy from the Chinoike clan, he is noted as above average with the Ketsuryugan, but aside from that he is completely average in combat skill. Knowing the kind of cruel personality those people possess is not something you'd like to deal with, but he does have potential and that's what counts.


[ ] Torukane Kurry: A boy from the Kurry clan. His results in written exams are rather below average, but all of his skills in combat are above average. He definitely has skills and could be nurtured further, but he is also rash and headstrong according to his teachers' notes.

[ ] Miyu Hoshigaki: A girl from the Hoshigaki clan who was noted by her teachers to be interested in Bukijutsu, especially in the branch of Bojutsu. You might have been a perfect teacher for her because of your skills, but you do not specialize in Bojutsu. Unfortunately she has allowed her other skills to grow simply to be average. That can be fixed.

[ ] Ryunosuke Momoka: A clanless boy who is noted to have a "bright and optimistic" personality. He is noted to have a harder time understanding things, but also appears to try and specialize in Kenjutsu. He might be a good fit after all.

[ ] Shota Koruzumi: A clanless boy who is noted to study a lot of Fuinjutsu on his own and has shown a lot of interest in it. While he is below average in Taijutsu, he is a very interesting prospect.

[ ] Chie Chinoike: The twin sister of Aio Chinoike, she is also a member of Chinoike clan. She is also noted to be more skilled with other skills rather than her own Kekkei Genkai, which is unique.

[ ] Akane Kurry: A boy from the Kurry clan and second cousin of Torukane Kurry, he is noted by his teachers to be a "lazy and laid-back boy with a lot of skill and no interest whatsoever". From those notes he seems like someone who was forced into the academy, but he still has the highest scores in the class in written exams and is a prodigy in Genjutsu.

Looking at the files, you took the three that seemed to be the ones that you liked the most, not caring if anyone else wanted some of those that you picked, and walked to the Mizukage's table, putting the files on it.

"That's my team." you told him with an emotionless expression on your face as you waited his response.

The only response that you got was simply an eyebrow raise from the man before he spoke. "That's interesting indeed. You will report to the academy tomorrow at 7:50 AM sharp. Dismissed." he told you as you simply gave him a salute and left the office.

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And that's the update. I know that there isn't much on the students thus far, but you will have more information on them after meeting them, with a list of skills included.

Until then, I do not want you to start voting just yet. Instead I want you to discuss among yourselves who you want for the team and why. What could be the pros and cons of each student as you are still in the dark about their actual skills.

Also, what do you think about everything else in the update?

I will open the vote tomorrow in about 9-10 hours from now. Until then stay healthy, stay safe and have a great day.
 
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mmm .. we can seduce one of our students and make her our wife you know for political reasons and that?.

Absolutely, categorically not. Humbert Humbert was a cautionary tale, not an ideal to aspire to. You have been infracted 50 points under Rule 6 and given a three-day threadban. Further sanctions may follow after review for potential violation of the Terms of Service.
 
Voting Tally- Day Before Closing
The current votes will be closed in 24 hours. You have until then to really get a plan for the win, otherwise it's basically one of many plans that will win.

Here is the tally:
Adhoc vote count started by Qudrim8054 on May 9, 2021 at 3:22 PM, finished with 53 posts and 13 votes.

  • [X] Plan Pragmatic Team
    -[X] Byako Wakatabi: A clanless boy whom his teachers noted to be "Silent but attentive". His test scores in the written are among the highest in the class and his practical scores in Taijutsu skills are noted to be good even for a Genin. Despite the lack of any Kekkei Genkai, he seems to be right up your alley.
    -[X] Suijin Hozuki: A young boy from the Hozuki clan, he is noted to be a prodigy when it comes to Ninjutsu and chakra control, allowing him to use several jutsu in a row. However, his skills in other departments have been lacking according to the notes. He seems to be needing a lot of improvement in his skills.
    -[X] Samuke Yuki: One of your first cousins who had just finished the academy. According to the notes, he is pretty average in combat, but was noted to be incredibly interested in the world of espionage. He is the only family member in this class, so it is natural that you would pick him, but you should be bias.
    [X] Balanced Combat Team
    -[X]Ruruka Doi
    -[X]Torukane Kurry
    -[X]Ryunosuke Momoka
    [X] Plan Clanless
    -[X] Byako Wakatabi
    -[X] Mei Ubonaga
    -[X] Shota Koruzumi
    [X] Plan for Teaching
    -[x] Byako Wakatabi: A clanless boy whom his teachers noted to be "Silent but attentive". His test scores in the written are among the highest in the class and his practicdal scores in Taijutsu skills are noted to be good even for a Genin. Despite the lack of any Kekkei Genkai, he seems to be right up your alley.
    -[x] Ruruka Doi: A girl from the Doi clan who is noted to be a prodigy and a jack-of-all-traits, but it's also said that she is a spoiled, egotistical, petty, disrespectful brat. While she seems like a pain, putting a halt on her attitude problem would do wonders for her and her team. Plus, embarrassing a Doi is going to be fun.
    -[x] Shota Koruzumi: A clanless boy who is noted to study a lot of Fuinjutsu on his own and has shown a lot of interest in it. While he is below average in Taijutsu, he is a very interesting prospect.
    [X] Plan: Great potential.
    -[X] Miyu Hoshigaki
    -[X] Mei Ubonaga
    -[X]Ruruka Doi
    [X]Plan Top of the Class
    -[X] Samuke Yuki
    -[X] Byako Wakatabi
    -[X]Ruruka Doi
    [X] Plan: Personalities and mostly generalist
    -[X] Fuyumi Hinamori: A clanless girl from a merchant family who has been noted to be above average in both Genjutsu and with weapons. However, the notes also say that she is below average in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, as well as having a kind and bubbly personality.
    -[x] Ruruka Doi: A girl from the Doi clan who is noted to be a prodigy and a jack-of-all-traits, but it's also said that she is a spoiled, egotistical, petty, disrespectful brat. While she seems like a pain, putting a halt on her attitude problem would do wonders for her and her team. Plus, embarrassing a Doi is going to be fun.
    -[X] Izumi Kanon: A clanless girl who is noted to be completely average on all fronts, be it in written or practical exams. The only exception to that being that she has a great amount of charisma and is easy to make friends with. Maybe even that part of her personality could be cultivated into an effective weapon as well?
    [X] Plan: Triple S Threat
    -[X] Byako Wakatabi
    -[X] Suijin Hozuki
    -[X]Ruruka Doi
 
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Time to see which plan has won among the many plans that you all have made.
Scheduled vote count started by Qudrim8054 on May 8, 2021 at 1:49 AM, finished with 45 posts and 19 votes.

  • [X] Plan Pragmatic Team
    -[X] Byako Wakatabi: A clanless boy whom his teachers noted to be "Silent but attentive". His test scores in the written are among the highest in the class and his practical scores in Taijutsu skills are noted to be good even for a Genin. Despite the lack of any Kekkei Genkai, he seems to be right up your alley.
    -[X] Suijin Hozuki: A young boy from the Hozuki clan, he is noted to be a prodigy when it comes to Ninjutsu and chakra control, allowing him to use several jutsu in a row. However, his skills in other departments have been lacking according to the notes. He seems to be needing a lot of improvement in his skills.
    -[X] Samuke Yuki: One of your first cousins who had just finished the academy. According to the notes, he is pretty average in combat, but was noted to be incredibly interested in the world of espionage. He is the only family member in this class, so it is natural that you would pick him, but you should be bias.
    [X] Plan Clanless
    -[X] Byako Wakatabi
    -[X] Mei Ubonaga
    -[X] Shota Koruzumi
    [X] Balanced Combat Team
    -[X]Ruruka Doi
    -[X]Torukane Kurry
    -[X]Ryunosuke Momoka
    [X] Plan for Teaching
    -[x] Byako Wakatabi: A clanless boy whom his teachers noted to be "Silent but attentive". His test scores in the written are among the highest in the class and his practicdal scores in Taijutsu skills are noted to be good even for a Genin. Despite the lack of any Kekkei Genkai, he seems to be right up your alley.
    -[x] Ruruka Doi: A girl from the Doi clan who is noted to be a prodigy and a jack-of-all-traits, but it's also said that she is a spoiled, egotistical, petty, disrespectful brat. While she seems like a pain, putting a halt on her attitude problem would do wonders for her and her team. Plus, embarrassing a Doi is going to be fun.
    -[x] Shota Koruzumi: A clanless boy who is noted to study a lot of Fuinjutsu on his own and has shown a lot of interest in it. While he is below average in Taijutsu, he is a very interesting prospect.
    [X]Plan Top of the Class
    -[X] Samuke Yuki
    -[X] Byako Wakatabi
    -[X]Ruruka Doi
    [X] Plan: Personalities and mostly generalist
    -[X] Fuyumi Hinamori: A clanless girl from a merchant family who has been noted to be above average in both Genjutsu and with weapons. However, the notes also say that she is below average in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, as well as having a kind and bubbly personality.
    -[x] Ruruka Doi: A girl from the Doi clan who is noted to be a prodigy and a jack-of-all-traits, but it's also said that she is a spoiled, egotistical, petty, disrespectful brat. While she seems like a pain, putting a halt on her attitude problem would do wonders for her and her team. Plus, embarrassing a Doi is going to be fun.
    -[X] Izumi Kanon: A clanless girl who is noted to be completely average on all fronts, be it in written or practical exams. The only exception to that being that she has a great amount of charisma and is easy to make friends with. Maybe even that part of her personality could be cultivated into an effective weapon as well?
 
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