To Nurture the Next Generation (AU Naruto Sensei Quest)

Meeting with Your Students
[X] Plan Pragmatic Team
-[X] Byako Wakatabi: A clanless boy whom his teachers noted to be "Silent but attentive". His test scores in the written are among the highest in the class and his practical scores in Taijutsu skills are noted to be good even for a Genin. Despite the lack of any Kekkei Genkai, he seems to be right up your alley.
-[X] Suijin Hozuki: A young boy from the Hozuki clan, he is noted to be a prodigy when it comes to Ninjutsu and chakra control, allowing him to use several jutsu in a row. However, his skills in other departments have been lacking according to the notes. He seems to be needing a lot of improvement in his skills.
-[X] Samuke Yuki: One of your first cousins who had just finished the academy. According to the notes, he is pretty average in combat, but was noted to be incredibly interested in the world of espionage. He is the only family member in this class, so it is natural that you would pick him, but you should be bias.


You stood in the hallway of the Kirigakure academy, a building that was very big in its size because it housed not only several classrooms, but also several large rooms for practical classes and fields that had more open space. You couldn't believe that this place was built within a time span long enough to have a class of children in it for almost 6 years.

You and the rest of the Jonin senseis had arrived to the academy by 7:50 AM sharp, just as you were instructed. Now it was around 8:24 AM, so you had waited for quite a while with four of your colleges that you didn't like waiting to just enter the class and take your students away for the first day. On the one hand, the wait was nearly unbearable. On the other hand, you were thinking about how you could upstage them all by training your Genin better than them. That was a nice thought to have.

Finally, after a long waiting period outside, you finally saw the door open as the Chunin instructor of the class opened the door to greet you and your colleges. Much like every other teacher in this building, he was a clanless shinobi who only reached the level of Chunin. Most of them ended that way because they simply started too late with no real foundations, while the clans had unknown amount of generational knowledge to build upon.

Well, sucks to be them, but it was the best most of them could do. You were hoping that thanks to the new academy system there would be more young talents who could prove themselves to be worthy of your respect. You certainly hoped that the clanless boy you decided to train would become an example of that.

"Sorry for keeping you waiting." the teacher spoke up apologetically as he gave you and the other Jonin a respecting bow. "I just finished informing them on the teams. All you have to do now is simply come into the class and pick them up." he told you as he then gave you all a piece of paper. "These papers are designated areas inside the village given to serve as your teams' training ground by Mizukage-dono. Please take your students there to perform your tests." he requested politely as he gave another bow.

"Excuse me," you heard a voice calling and looked to your right, seeing that the one speaking was Gato Michibane. "but what do you mean by tests? Haven't they passed the tests of the Academy?" he inquired from the sensei as you actually thought about it and raised an eyebrow in response before looking at the homeroom teacher for an explanation.

The man then rubbed the back of his head. "I... I'm shocked the Mizukage didn't tell you this. According to the system, after you take your Genin from the academy, you're supposed to do your own tests to judge their skills and see what they can do for yourselves. You can have whatever test you want, as long as killing or seriously harming them aren't a part of it." the man gave his explanation as you looked at him stoically and letting this information sink in.

"Tsk, of course we wouldn't know. That stupid Terumi woman that serves him probably forgot about it and caused him to forget about it as well. Those damn clan members, always forgetting where they belong." another Jonin almost whispered those words to himself, but you managed to notice that as your eyes moved to see that the sneer and snickering came from the Jonin of the Doi can.

Of course the fucking Doi clan would be a bunch of whiny assholes. They always brag about how their Kekkei Genkai is formed from the same elements as Wood Release, which means by their logic that they are the only people who can produce someone as strong as Hashirama Senju, and thus deserve to be treated as royalty. No wonder the Doi girl in that class was noted to be such a fucking brat with many members of that clan having an ego problem. Or it could just be their insecurities about being so insignificant compared to the legendary Senju clan that they even need to say those things in public.

But you don't care about whatever makes those stuck-up assholes sleep better at night. You care about other things right now.

You let your thoughts go to rest as you return your gaze to the instructor, who was giving the team numbers to the other Jonin. The numbers of this class' teams went from 1 to 5, and the number which was given to the team that you requested yesterday was 3.

You entered the room alongside the others and you stood there while the teacher went back to his podium and started telling each team to go with their sensei. When your team's number finally came up, you saw as three kids got up from their seats and walked towards you, with the only one you recognized was your cousin Samuke. When they got to were you stood, you silently and stoically gestured to them to follow you, as you looked several times at the paper that you were given just so that you would know where to take them.


Upon reaching the location, you saw that the place you were given as a training ground was one of the locations where it was planned to build a park in the future, but now it served as the place where you would train your students.

The place was good enough. It had many trees to use for whatever you needed them to be used, there was a large pond in there as well for when you would teach them water walking and had plenty of space to let them go wild with their training sessions. This place was as good as any to call a training grounds. Better than most places, actually.

As you sat down on a rock, you watched your three students as they sat in front of you on the ground.

Your cousin Samuke was a young boy with a face full of feminine features, very much like your uncle, to the point that it was probably easy for any other person to believe that he was a girl. But your clan was filled with pretty-boys, so the rest can just whine about it. He had big, blue right eye and a left black eye, as well as shoulder-length, raven-black hair that was braided, with said braids sliding on the front of his chest.
He wore a dark-blue Hanfu, much like yourself. It wasn't a big surprise though, because it was a signature clothing choice in the Yuki clan grounds. He was sitting on the ground with his legs crossed, but with a massive smile on his face and he was constantly moving a little because of how excited he was to probably be your students.

The young Hozuki boy, who was sitting on the grass with both legs extended and rising up one at a time, implying that he wasn't as patient as the other two or just more confident in himself to show less discipline than the other two. He had sharp teeth and chestnut-brown hair and red irises in his eyes. His cheekbones were long and his nose was a bit crooked.
He wore a red, baggy, silky long-shirt with a golden trim to it and a pair of baggy pants that was red of color with a golden trim as well.

And lastly the clanless boy, was sitting on the grass completely calm, in a very similar posture and temperament that you had, which got you curious. He had a short, spiky gray hair, thought it was so short that you, even with your perceptive eye, could barely notice all the small spikes of hair on his head. The only thing that was big from his hair were the long, spiky, gray bangs of hair that went down from both sides of his cheeks, framing his face.
You noticed that despite how calm and quiet he was in both terms of speaking and body language, his eyes were completely different than yours. Your blue eyes were sharp, small and cold, showing little emotion. His light brown eyes were big and inquisitive, though to others he may have seemed stoic. Of course, only someone perceptive like you would know that.
The shape of the boy's face was round and his nose was small, sharp and pointy and his expression seemed similar to yours with the exception of the eyes.
What he was wearing were dull clothes colored green with a bit of brown, holding tight to his frame. A long-sleeved shirt that was colored aqua-green with some brown lines on the sleeves themselves and a tight pair of pants colored the same way.

"Welcome to your new training grounds, Team 3." you started talking, barely showing any emotions in your tone. "This is were we will meet everyday at 8:00 AM sharp, so I hope that you memorized the way here." you told them as you decided to make this your team's permanent training spot. If anyone but the Mizuke doesn't like it, they can shove it.

You then gestured at yourself. "I am your Jonin-sensei, Susumu Yuki." you introduced yourself to the team officially and did so with the courteous manners that were drilled into your head as a child. "You will refer to me as Susumu-Sensei from now on until I deem you worthy enough to drop the "sensei" honorific." you told them as your voice was stoic and cold, not showing any emotions from it, simply speaking in a monotone straight and to the point.

At that point Samuke raised his hand. "But Susume-sama, wouldn't it be awkward if I call you sensei on clan grounds?" your cousin asked you, clearly perplexed.

You didn't even sigh or made anything to show how stupid you thought this question to be. "I do not believe so, Samuke. However, if it makes you feel more comfortable, you may refer to me as "Susumu-sama" only on our clan's grounds. Outside of that, I want you to always call me "Susumu-sensei". Do you understand?" you instructed the Yuki boy, though you didn't think you were too harsh with him. At least you hope so, since he really seemed excited to train under you.

Anyway, you decided to continue as you stood up and focused your gaze on all the three boys and continued speaking. "Despite having a member of my family on this team, I want you all to remember these words: I will have no favorites. You will know that I am harsh, but I am also fair. You all have to equal prove yourselves to me as a shinobi. I only care about results. Remember that." you said now more sternly than before as you slowed the pacing of your talking to emphasize and hammer know the importance of the words that you've just said to the three 12 year olds.

The boys nodded and looked like they were listening to your words carefully. Good. You sat down and continued on talking. "Now, before I test your skills, I want you to introduce yourselves. Tell me your names, what you like, what you dislike and what is your dream." you instructed them as you patiently with with not a lot of interest in your eyes. "You, Hozuki boy, let's start with you." you said as you looked with your emotionless stare at the boy.

The brat gave a pretty wide smirk before talking. "Starting with best, eh?" he asked and you could tell that he was only half-joking about that. Good, confidence never killed anyone, and he wasn't exactly wrong if it came to combat skills, only highly debatable.

He shrugged before continuing. "What can I say, really? The name Suijin Hozuki, a member of one of the small branch families of the Hozuki clan. Fourth son in the family. I like swimming and practicing on my Ninjutsu, I dislike people who can't help pull the weight and drag others down with them, and my dream is to become the Mizukage, much like how dad's cousin is the current Mizukage." the boy spoke, showing a lot of confidence in himself and spoke to you nonchalantly, not bothered by sharing the information at all.

You gave him a nod while keeping your stoic expression. "Very well. We will see how far I can push you." you told him as your glare changed from him to the clanless boy. "What about you?" you asked the boy with a seemingly emotionless monotone.

The boy's eyes widened slightly as he looked at you, pointed at himself and blinked several time. You gave him a nod as you wanted to sigh. He simply looked into your eyes and started talking. "My name is Byako Wakatabi. I am simply a kid, without a clan or anything to make me really important, but from what you said, I think you don't really care about where I come from as long as I can rise up to your expectations, as low as they are, right?" he started talking and you noticed how he was starting to analyze you by the surface-level meaning of your words, and attempting to go deeper.

He then continued. "The fact that you also have an order for each of us speak means that you do have a bias of sort, right, sensei?" he asked, which did take you aback a bit. Well, he wasn't wrong. "If you have Samuke speak last means that you either hate other clans and prefer your own clan, or the other way around. Which means you don't have a really positive or negative opinion on a clanless nobody like me. Am I wrong, sensei?" he inquired inquisitively in a bit of innocence in his voice.

In your mind he got your attention, but if he continued talking like this, he might come across to the others as innocently insensitive.

However, his eyes quickly widened slightly with concern as he seemed to mentally take a step back, so maybe he noticed it too. "I apologize, I shouldn't have asked that." he said before continuing. "I like the quiet. It lets me focus on the important things around me, I don't have to be distracted by noise. I don't like... talking." he said as his cheeks heated up. "If I ever begin talking, I get too caught up in it. I don't like the looks I get from other kids around me when I do." he said as he lowered his head. "My dream is to become a strong shinobi who would bring pride to the village." he said after raising his head to meet your eyes once more, this time with more determination.

So damn ordinary. Sure, he was pretty attentive, but surprisingly had some confidence issues. Not something you can't work work with. Maybe also try to help him become more ambitious.

You then gave the clanless boy a nod and looked over at your cousin, who's smile grew from one ear to another. "My name's Samuke Yuki, second son of the first branch family of the Yuki clan and twin of the first son." he said as showing that he was a ball of energy simply trying not to explode with excitement. "I like reading in the shade of the gardens of the Yuki clan compound. I dislike loud and egotistical people who think they are better than everyone else." he continued talking as you simply listened quietly. "And my dream is to become the greatest spy in the world." he said with a lot of pride in his voice as he looked at you without even blinking.

Espionage wasn't really your forte, but you knew that you could at least give him the basics and some instructions on how to become better enough.

You gave a nod to your cousin and stood up. "Alright. Now that we've got the introductions out of the way, I want to test your skills and see where you are at." you told them with the same deadpan, monotone that you talked with thus far, not changing your expression in any way.

In all honesty, you had to think of a test for your students on the way to the training grounds, but you had managed to be creative enough to come up with a test quick enough that you could accurately test what they are capable of right now.

What kind of test did you have in mind?

[ ] You would have them all fight you using every tool at their disposal.
-[ ] Write-In the details of your test. What are the win and lost conditions of the combat scenarios? Give as many details as possible.

[ ] You will have them test each other's mettle against one another by pitting them against one another in a series of small tests, testing their physical abilities, their combat skills and their noncombat skills.
-[ ] Write-In the details of each of the short tests. How are your going to have them test their skills?


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Hey everyone. It has been a while, but this update was 3,000 words long, so it was a really hard one to write. it also included characterization for our students and giving a first impression of them.

When it comes to the tests, I want you guys to bring forth your imagination to think of how you want to test your students, rather than me coming up with something bland.

Until next update, stay safe, stay healthy and have a great day.[/hr]
 
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Changes From Canon to AU
Hello everyone, this is a post in which I will talk about as much changes in the AU as I can think of in my head to canon and explain them to you all as calmly as I can. I will also try to be as informative and clear as possible, but there might be points that even my explanation makes no sense.

Let's start with something that I've already talked about:

Bijuu/Tailed

Now, the Bijuu themselves in essence are no different than they are in canon, with the exception that Matatabi (Two-Tails) and Chomei (Seven-Tails) are female rather than male.

What is different is their level of power, abilities and what they give their Jinchuriki.

In terms of power, they are all relatively equal to each other, with no one exponentially stronger to the point that all the other Bijuu become utterly useless. While they are the strongest beings on the planet (as long as there are no people who can use Six Path Chakra), they can still be defeated in a fight and be other giant animals can push them back and hold their own against them.

Now here are their traits and what chakra cloaks/armors they give to their Jinchuriki:

Shukaku: He is capable of sand manipulation and sealing with Magnet Release. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is basically a monk rob made of sand (a nod to the original backstory of Shukaku as a monk turned monster). The perfect jinchuriki state gives an additional tail.
The Jinchuriki gets in the chakra cloak mode the ability to use Magnet Release to control sand, to float and create powerful sealing techniques.

Matatabi: She (I decided to make Matatabi a female) is capable of producing psychokinetic flames, i.e. she can control her flames with her mind. She is also the most agile Bijuu. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets a chakra cloak that is like Kurama's chakra cloak in canon, but with blue and black flames covering the body instead of yellow and orange, and the perfect Jinchuriki state gives two tails and cat ears.
The Jinchuriki in the chakra coak mode also gets a danger sense through enhanced senses of sound and smell.

Isobu: He has the ability to create powerful corals, has the best defenses of all the Bijuu, can swim really fast and breath underwater. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is basically a coral armor that makes him look like a mini Isobu, with the three tails added in the Perfect Jinchuriki state.
The Jinchuriki can also create powerful corals and breath underwater in the chakra mode.

Son Goku: Possesses the Lava Release kekkei genkai. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is basically having his body be covered by hot magma, while the perfect Jinchuriki state also creates four tails made from the rock and magma.
The Jinchuriki can also use Laca Release in all of its forms.

Kokuo: He has the Boil Release kekkei genkai and is the physically fastest Bijuu. His horns are deadly as well. The chakra cloak that the jinchuriki gets is having the body become a cloud of corrosive steam. The perfect Jinchuriki state stabilizes the cloud and creates five tails made from the steam.
The Jinchuriki can also use Boil Release.

Saiken: Can produce corrosive acid from his body to damage opponents. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is also very basic: having his body covered by the corrosive acid and creates six tails made of the acid for a perfect Jinchuriki.

Chomei: Also a female in this AU, Chomei only has the special ability to fly, which is in itself a very useful ability. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is a green armor that covers their body with wings, which becomes more insect-like in the perfect Jinchuriki state.
The Jinchuriki also gets the ability to spit blinding scales.

Gyuki: The physically strongest out of all the Bijuu, he can produce ink that he can use to seal others and blind opponents. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is an armor with ox helmet while the perfect Jinchuriki state adds eight octopus legs.

Kurama: The Bijuu with the largest pool of chakra, he can super-charge his attacks, making them much more powerful than usual. The chakra cloak that the Jinchuriki gets is a bit different than canon (and I will explain why). Instead of being covered by a yellow cloak, the fiery cloak is an orange cloak, with the perfect Jinchuriki state giving it nine tails, black whiskers and two big fox ears made of fiery chakra.
The Jinchuriki also gets the ability to sense malicious intent when using the chakra mode.

The Otsutsuki Clan

Okay, this one is quite easy to explain and quite short as well:

I never liked the Otsutsuki that much, especially because they are aliens. In this setting, the Otsutsuki clan are the descendants of the first man who discovered how to mold chakra.

They are 100% human.

Over time they had many leaders and they both split into two separate clans after the battle between Ashura and Indra, each half following a different brother. As time went on, what remained from the Otsutsuki clan simply became four clans who were the descendants of Ashura and Indra:

Ashura - Senju clan and Uzumaki clan.
Indra - Uchiha and Hyuga clan.

Because of that there is not just a rivalry between the Senju and the Uchiha, but now there is more of a history that brings a rivalry between all four clans. This leads to the next subject.

Oh, and one other thing: No Ashura or Indra reincarnations. None of that in this AU. I cannot stand the whole reincarnation twist.

Changes to the Dojutsu

Now, I am merely talking about five Dojutsu in here: The Sharingan, the Byakugan, the Mangekyou Sharingan (and its Eternal upgrade), the Tenseigan and the Rinnegan. We will start with the shringan and its evolved state.

The base sharingan in this AU will be portrayed as it did in Part 1 of Naruto: An eye that is capable of enhanced perception of movement to the point that the brain processes things moving at a much faster pace as it sees them, even if the body can't keep up with the movement speed itself. The user is also capable of copying movements and jutsu perfectly, though it cannot copy Kekkei Genkai. It also possesses incredible genjutsu capabilities.

The sharingan can first be unlocked under an immense amount of stress, beginning with only having one tomoe in the red eye and slowly developing until it reaches 3 tomoe in the eyes.

Abilities that the sharingan in this AU do not possess are the Izanagi and Izanami because I don't like these hax techniques. That is the sole reason.

The Mangekyou Sharingan is the evolved state of the sharingan and can only be obtained by one killing his or her best friend. Each person has a different Mangekyou design and each person has a difference in how their powers work. It also still deteriorates and causes blindness unless one takes the eyes of a close relative and implants them into his own, creating the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan. The explanation to all of this is quite complex, so I will try my best to explain it:

The Mangekyou Sharingan has three base powers that each eye is responsible for: The left eye is responsible for a powerful genjutsu, the right eye is responsible for the usage of the ninjutsu Amaterasu and both eyes are required in order to use Susanoo. However, each person's Mangekyou is different and thus someone might one of the base techniques stronger at the cost of reducing the power and effectiveness of the other two or have a unique ability to replace one or two of the base techniques. Here are two examples of that:

Example of the former: Madara Uchiha's Mangekyou in this AU vastly improves the power of his Susanoo at the cost of making his unique genjutsu and Amaterasu very weak in comparison to others. However, his Armored Susanoo can have legs, getting rid of its mobility disadvantage. While it is not the same as Perfect Susanoo, it is still incredibly mighty.

Example of the latter: Kamui is a space-time ninjutsu that replaces both the genjutsu of the left eye and the Amaterasu of the right eye, while still keeping an average-level Susanoo. A weakness I decided to add is that Kamui is very quick to make the user blind.

I also decided to do a major change to Susanoo: There is no Perfect Susanoo. It can normally only evolve until the level shown by Itachi in his fight with Sasuke and in Sasuke's fight with Kakashi in the Kage Summit arcs. Only someone like Madara can evolve it further to have legs (as explained why above). But Susanoo also has a smaller version to it, in which the user can put the chakra armor of Susanoo in a smaller version around their body, like wearing a samurai armor. Here is an example of an image that kinda fits what I imagine it to be like.
This version is not as durable as the normal, large-size version of the Susanoo and does not share the same level of destructive potency, but it still enhances the physical traits and power of the user and gives them all the mobility that the normal version lacks. It also consumes much less chakra than the normal version.

When it comes to EMS (Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan), there is a large boost in power to all of its abilities, but the main thing that makes it dangerous is the fact that the user cannot go blind, even if the abilities require an immense amount of chakra to use and sustain.

Time to talk about the Byakugan. Now the base Byakugan has the same abilities that it does in canon, mostly because it was never changed or advanced to keep up with the Sharingan. What is important is that in this AU it can evolve into the Tenseigan (the dojutsu from The Last).

The way that the Byakugan evolves is incredibly dangerous, very risky and almost never works. In order for a Byakugan to evolve into a Tenseigan, a Hyuga member must sacrifice himself to protect the person that they love most, nearly die but still survive and heal from their near-fatal wound.

After a full recovery, the user's Byakugan will slowly start to deteriorate until the person becomes blind (the more the Byakugan is used, the faster it loses its light), all the while there would be azure-blue flashes appearing in the white eyes, signaling the beginning of the evolution. When the person is now fully blind, they will fall into a coma for an entire month, only to awaken with now their sight restored and the Tenseigan replacing their Byakugan.

The Tenseigan is capable of powerful telekinesis, allowing the user to push and pull things as well as allowing themselves to fly. Their eyesight is also improved, capable of seeing 5 times further than they could with their Byakugan. They also can create the Tenseigan Chakra Cloak, which increases their physical traits and power on a level that is equal to the Susanoo Body Armor. In this state they also have two (in its immature state) to four (in its mature state) Truth-Seeking Orbs.

Now, Tenseigan, unlike the Mangekyou Sharingan, does not deteriorate over time, but becomes more powerful the more it is used. It starts in what's called the "Immature State", in which the powers are not properly developed and thus not at their full potential, but as time goes on and it is used more, the stronger it becomes until it becomes "Mature". A "Mature Tenseigan" is equal in power to an Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan.

The Rinnegan works in a very similar way that was used by Nagato/Pain. It only has the Seven Paths used in the Pain Arc of Naruto (even the resurrection one, yes) and it is not an evolved form of the Sharingan... at least not in the same way that it was in canon.
One person can use all six paths without having six different bodies, but doing so is extremely exhausting on the user's chakra pools and that is why using bodies connected by chakra rods to serve as paths is considered better.

I hope you all somewhat understand all of this, though more questions are always welcomed. But now I want to discuss another matter.

The Uchiha, Hyuga, Senju and Uzumaki

This is not really much about anything different in the clans themselves, but what a relationship between them results in.

As mentioned here and in the timeline post, all of these four clans are descendants of the Otsutsuki clan and of Ashura and Indra, both of which shared half of the power of their father (Indra having the Rinnegan while Ashura had a very powerful body with regeneration, immense strength, vitality, Wood Release, Adamantine chains etc.), which are considered the Yin Six Paths chakra and the Yang Six Paths chakra.

Because of that, the Uchiha and the Hyuga each possess half of the Yin Six Paths chakra, which manifests in the advanced forms of their Dojutsu while the Senju and Uzumaki clans possess half of the Yang Six Paths chakra, which manifests in abilities such as Wood Release and Adamantine chains as well as a powerful life force and chakra reserves.

If an Uchiha and a Hyuga would have a kid, the offspring would be born with both the Sharingan and the Byakugan. However, if their eyes were to evolve, they would turn into the Rinnegan instead of the Mangekyou Sharingan and the Tenseigan. If a Uzumaki and a Senju were to have a kid, the offspring would have the combined powers of both clans and a the ability to use Yang Six Paths Chakra.

If either an Senju/Uzumaki and an Uchiha/Hyuga would have a kid, the Offspring would be born with an immense chakra pool and immediately would have the Rinnegan. However, the Rinnegan that this offspring would possess would never be as strong as the Rinnegan of an offspring of an Uchiha and Hyuga, but it would cost less chakra to use the Six Paths.

In my mind the very weird logic goes like this:
First Offspring- [Uchiha (1/2 Yin) + Hyuga (1/2 Yin) = Yin Six Paths Chakra (Indra)]
Second Offspring- [Senju (1/2 Yang) + Uzumaki (1/2 Yang) = Yang Six Path Chakra (Ashura)]
Third Offspring- [Uchiha/Hyuga (1/2 Yin) + Senju/Uzumaki (1/2 Yang) = 1/2 Sage of Six Paths]
Offspring of the first and second offsprings- [First Offspring (Yin) + Second Offspring (Yang) = Sage of Six Paths]

With that off my chest, let's get to the next subject.

Six Paths Chakra

Six Paths chakra is a form of chakra that is much more potent that the regular fusion of physical and spiritual energies. Six Paths Chakra is formed by a mind that had truly understood the world entirely, as if they had become one with the world. While the precise is vague, surviving being almost dead is something that is a must in achieving the "enlightement" that elevates the spiritual energy of the person.

Six Paths chakra gives the user complete control over the elements, including Yin and Yang Release, allowing them to create Truth-Seeking Orbs. They can also freely manipulate raw chakra to create powerful constructs and beings made of chakra, use powerful telekinesis to allow things from flight to manipulation of non-living matter.

Six Paths Senjutsu is the fusion of Six Paths chakra and Senjutsu, enhancing both forms of energy to brand new heights and enhancing their own traits.

There are ways to gain Six Paths chakra, which include eating the fruit of the Divine Tree at the cost of your sanity or training, meditating and studying in order to try and understand how to achieve it. The second method very seldomly works.

Another way is to basically be born to a union of offsprings of the four clans (as mentioned above) or have all the Tailed beasts' chakra inside a single person.

Power Scailing/Tiers

There are several tiers of power in this AU that are somewhat smaller in scale to canon, with most of them being capable of defeating or fighting one another with the right amount of power, strategy, skill and luck. These are the top tiers:
  • Six Paths Tier: This tier of power belongs to those who possess Six Paths Chakra, the "God Tier". The weakest of them can fight at least two Bijuu at once, with the strongest of them being capable of defeating all the Bijuu at once with ease. On par with canon Hashirama and Madara.
  • Bijuu Tier: This tier of power belongs to the Tailed Beasts and the Perfect Jinchuriki who can use Bijuu Mode. Those on this tier can fight four to five Kage-level shinobi at once and have the upper hand, even with a lot of difficulty.
  • High Kage Tier: This tier of power belongs to the strongest Shinobi in the world, which include Hashirama Senju, Madara Uchiha and any Perfect Jinchuriki using the Perfect Chakra Mode, Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan and Mature Tenseigan users. People on this tier can fight on equal grounds with two or three Kage-level shinobi with high difficulty and be able to fight a Bijuu 1v1 and survive.
  • Mid Kage Tier: This tier of power belongs to most kage in the world. Those who are in this tier can fight on equal grounds with another person on this tier and they would both have an equal chance of living or dying.
  • Low Kage Tier: This tier of power belongs to shinobi who are almost on the same level as a regular kage, but not quite yet. If they were to fight a Mid-tier kage, they would have 40% chance of winning rather than 50%.



This has been my information post prior to the next update. I hope that you mostly understood everything and I would gladly answer questions tomorrow, after I've had my nightly rest. Until the update please enjoy.
 
The Test: Explanation and Preperation
[X] Plan 'Fort' Sabotage Mission
- [X] You would have them all fight you using every tool at their disposal.
--[X] Win Condition: Plant Kunai at a dozen locations around the training area before sunset. Loss Condition: Get Caught or 'KIA'
--[X] You make various Water clones and have them patrol the area and basically act like regular guards to simulate the team infiltrating a fort to sabotage it. If the Guards spot a Kunai the alarm will be raised and the amount of clones double.


You thought on a test to test their skills on the way to the grounds, and knowing your students more now on a personal level, it was time for you to get to know what they were capable of in terms of their skills as shinobi.

"Alright students, listen up." you spoke as you got up, which got their attention as well. You performed a hand sign and immediately created three clones made of water. You looked at your clones and gave them a nod, which they returned to you. It was easy acting with them on the same thought when they were simply clones of you with the same idea.

As the clones started moving away at high speed towards the west, you continued talking to your students. "Your test will be one of subterfuge simulation. You will have to infiltrate an enemy camp and plant a kunai in specific marked locations to simulate putting explosive tags in strategically important locations." you began explaining the test, to which they just nodded as you carried on.

"The clones I just created will form the makeshift enemy campsite that will include nine large tents and sixteen smaller tents that is surrounded by a large fence surrounding it. They will then create more water clones to act as guards." you told your three Genin as you performed a few hand signs, using your Kekkei Genkai to create three objects: an apple, a helmet and a target mark.

You had all three items orderly organized on the ground as they looked at you with confused expression. "Excuse me, Susumu-sa- I mean sensei, what are those?" Samuke asked as he nervously switched honorifics mid-sentence upon remembering your order. Good, at least he understood that quickly.

"They are markers for you to identify your targets." you spoke as you continued your explanation, first pointing at the apple. "Three of the nine tents will be marked with an apple, meaning that they are supposed to represent food stores." you said as you then pointed at the helmet. "Three other tests will be marked by a helmet, meaning they are supposed to represent armories." you kept on with your explanation as you pointed at the last item. "The last three tents with the target mark represent barracks. Are we clear?" you asked after finishing this part of the explanation.

All of your students nodded silently as it seemed like both the Hozuki brat and Samuke were getting a bit impatient, with the former finding this a bit boring and the latter just being overexcited in general. You never saw your cousin acting like that in front of your uncle or father, so it was just a bit strange for you.

Anyway, you needed to keep explaining, so you didn't linger on that feeling for long. "The camp area will be half-a-kilometer wide, meaning that you will have some room to move around. It will also be split into three strategic points, each having one of each tent and four water clones guarding each of the strategic points." you tell them as you see that the clanless boy suddenly raised his hand. "Yes?" you asked.

"Sensei," the clanless boy started talking as he lowered his hand. "isn't this unfair to compete against four of your clones?" he inquired while looking at you with noticeable curiosity and concern in his eyes, despite his voice remaining calm and barely showing any of it. "I mean, not only do you vastly outclass us to the point that all three of us won't be able to scratch you even when working together, but you most likely worked for years on bettering your senses to find smaller and more nuanced changes in your surrounding environment, which without a doubt each of your clones will have. Thus it is literally nearly impossible to either sneak around without being spotted or defeat your clones in combat, dooming us to fail." he rambled as he brought up some very good points.

However, as good as those points were, you had already thought about them before you even created your first three clones. You also noticed that he started rambling on about other parts of the test.

You raised a hand to gesture to him to stop him from talking and drifting from his first question as you answered him. "Yes, you are right about all of that." you told him, which didn't surprised him at all, but it did make Suiijin Hozuki a bit unnerved, which was a good way to make sure that he wouldn't try to do things on his own. But it would take only a true idiot to think that a Genin can defeat a Jonin in a one-on-one fight.

"Because of these facts I will tell you that not only are the clones are only 10% of my power, but they will hold back or not try as hard to find you as I usually would, giving you a fair and equal chance of passing or failing." you told them as you crossed your arms in front of your chest. Your students understood it immediately and all of them let a sigh of relief.

At that point the Hozuki brat opened his mouth. "So what are the failing conditions and what happens if we fail? Just so that we know what we will be missing." he inquired with much more obvious bravado than before, showing that he wasn't as confident was he was trying to be, which was good in your eyes.

You looked at the three with your regular stoic expression as you explained. "The losing conditions are simple: either all three of you get captured or KO. Being captured means being caught in my Ice Cage Jutsu, meaning you have been captured by the enemy, while knock out will equal death. If you all fail the test, then for the next two weeks we will train for 14 hours from dawn." you explained to them as they all gulped nervously in unison.

"To succeed the test, you have to gain 6 points, with each large tent mark giving you a point. If you gain more than 6 points, you will have bonuses to your training like longer breaks or more jutsu to learn." you told them as you went to another part of the test. "There are also be a system that gives or takes away points. In the small tents there are 4 paper tags that represent classified information, and you will get a point for each one that you manage to steal." you explained to them as you saw that them perk up immediately.

"However, there is always an alarm to be weary of, which will be raised if you are spotted. If that happens, you will lose 2 points, as well as lose a point for every member of the team that is captured or KOd." you said, which worried them a bit.

At that point the Byako raised his hand again. "Sensei, will you be watching us from afar to evaluate us, or will you act as the leader of the clones?" he asked you curiously as he tilted his head.

"That I will not tell you. Now go, the camp must have already been set. Your test begins now."

As you said that, all three Genin got up quickly and ran towards the forested area, which was the same direction that your clones went. You simply waited a moments before going in the same direction, easily seeing them jump ahead on trees not too far away.

You had decided to observe them from afar and you always kept some distance. After nearly 10 minutes, you stopped as you saw your students jumping down from the trees as the encampment was right up ahead.

You landed on a tree that was just far enough for them not to notice you while you were able to see them between the trees and bushes and underneath the undergrowth of the area.

You sat down on a branch and waited to see what they would do while taking out your binoculars, intending to use the tree as your vantage point to scout and check on the progress of the three Genin. From what you saw beneath you, it was obvious that they were talking to one another, which was quite possibly showing them working together, or arguing about working together.

Cooperation was key for missions like this, as much as you hated working with people not from your clans, and if those three figured that already then you had a good team with good heads on their shoulders. Seriously, a team that wouldn't try to cooperate from the start are doomed to die quickly if it wasn't hammered into them by their sensei.

At first a minute passes and the conversation between the students started to be filled with incoherent shouts and arguing, but after another minute it stops and they seemed to talk things out with a lot more thought into it. Then some more time passed and they were still deep in their discussion. Eventually, after it felt like forever since they started talking to one another, they headed out towards the ice encampment. At that point you noticed that they...

[ ] Stayed together and moved slowly.
[ ] Split up and ran in three different directions around the marked circular area.


You then raised an eyebrow and started viewing the test through your binoculars.

Do you want to switch to students POV?
[ ] Yes
[ ] No


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So despite how long this took me, it wasn't much to really advance the plot so far. However, the next few parts will be focused on the test itself and how your students perform. Anyway, voting isn't very complex here, so until next time stay healthy, stay safe and have a great day.

Voting is open for the next 24 hours!
 
The Test Part 1: Camp Infiltration
[X] Split up and ran in three different directions around the marked circular area.
[X] No


You sat on a tall tree while watching your students as they suddenly all started to split up and move across the encampment to try and find the target that they had to sabotage. You were a bit disappointed that they decided to split up and take their changes apart rather than try and see if they could build a team synergy and work together to try and pass the test, but you knew that in reality it was too much to expect of them to work as a unit from the get go.

However, even though they weren't working together, they still had some sort of agreement on a plan: most likely each member was going on his own to try and infiltrate a different part of the encampment to not draw as much attention as they would as a group, which you had to agree was smart. They were a small group infiltrating a large encampment, so drawing less attention was most likely the smartest move.

Despite that, you knew that if one of them was discovered, then he would be overwhelmed quite quickly unless he would take down the guards before they could set off the alarm. It was risky and unlikely to happen, but it was still a good way to evaluate what your students were capable of.

When you created your clones, you had in mind the idea that they would all create ice masks to cover their faces. You came up with that idea to help your Genin get used to the idea as to not see the faces of the enemy, so it would be easier for them to go for the kill. Plus, seeing your face as they would kill the clone might hurt their desensitization to death, especially your cousin.

When you looked at the guards that were set across the encampment, you saw that they all indeed had ice masks in the shape of Onis covering their faces. You certainly hoped that it was going to do the trick.

As you searched for your students, you saw not too far on your right how Samuke crawling slowly in areas that had large bushes and as kept on searching for the areas across the ice fence that were the best covered up so that it would be hard to notice him. He certainly worked on that a lot, but he still had room to grow. He also didn't mind getting dirty to move around stealthily.

Ugh, you could already imagine the headache you were going to get from listening to all the complaints coming from your father and uncle... how exquisite...

You then moved your binoculars to your left as you saw Byako, your clanless student was simply walking slowly along the ice fence, quickly moving to try to hide behind tree trunks and doing his best to be stealthy. Well... he was doing an okay job.

The Hozuki brat, Suijin, was also trying his best to stay hidden from the guards by staying close to the fence and the forest while also behind the closest to you, as he was moving towards the left slowly from the point where the team separated.

The ice fence that your clones created were made the have holes large enough in them so that people might pass through and enter the camp, and it seemed like all three students finally decided to try and get in by sneakily crawl under one of the openings in said fence while the other two were still inspecting the area.

Suijin was probably the least patient of your students since he crawled at the quickest pace, but he was still doing pretty well when it came to moving stealthily.

Suiijin: 3 + 5 = 8
FAILURE

Byako: 4 + 5 = 9
FAILURE

Samuke: 4 + 7 = 11
SUCCESS

You watched as your binoculars moved from side to side across the encampment to watch your students move under the holes in the fence, trying to stay as quiet as possible.

As you watched on your students, you saw how the Suijin tried his best and managed to pass the fence and crawl into the encampment, but unfortunately he picked an area to sneak in where there was a clone on a tree branch guarding that the Genin didn't notice, and unfortunately said clone looked down and saw the young boy after he got up.

You couldn't hear what the clone was saying as it turned to shout something towards another clone in the area, but you figured it was the "Intruder, raise the alarm!" line that you thought of when you conceived the test.

You then looked a bit farther and noticed that Byako just finished getting from under the fence at just the worst time when a clone walked by and noticed him, making that clone to also call for the alarm to be raised.

You then quickly noticed that a few clones were heading towards the directions of your two students, allowing for Samuke to slowly sneak around without being detected, which he used to then move around the camp close to the tents.

Seeing that one of your students had some luck, you returned to watch at how both of your other students were doing, seeing as now Suijin was standing in front of one of your clones, who had entered a battle stance and oozing with confidence, while your student looked unsure, shaking as he put on a brave and determined. Then another clone ran towards them and the young Hozuki's eyes were filled with terror, causing him to bolt in fear, jumping onto a tree and started moving as fast as he could, with the two clones chasing after him as he was starting to make hand seals.

You then returned to look and see how your clanless student was handling the situation, but you couldn't find him within the compound, meaning that he had also ran away with some clones going after him.

Since it was now harder to follow and evaluate all of your students, you needed to create some clones to scout the area and try to find them so that you could continue evaluating them or otherwise the test would be worthless because you wouldn't have the info.

Because of that you performed several hand seals and the air around you became cold as by your side two ice clones were formed. "Find my two students and analyze their performance. Once you're done, return here and tell me all the details that are important for me to know." you ordered the two clones as you looked at them with your stoic expression, which they also wore.

Both of your clones gave you a serious nods of acceptance of their mission before moving to the last direction you saw either the Hozuki brat or the clanless boy while you decided to keep a close eye on your cousin.

Change Perspective?

[ ] No, keep showing the POV of Susumu and his newly formed clones.
[ ] Yes, change perspective to the students' POV.


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Here is another chapter with no real vote. It was shorter than expected, but the whole battle section will probably be the next update. Also, I updated the character sheets, adding Susumu's jutsu list and am currently working on our Genins' character pages.

Until the next update I hope that you stay healthy, stay safe and have a great day.
 
The Test Part 2: Combat and Sneaky Plans
[X] Yes, change perspective to the students' POV.


POV: Byako

You had managed to get into the encampment like you were asked by sensei, using all what you learned in the academy about staying hidden. You just had the bad luck of having a bad timing, since the moment you got up, a water clone of sensei wearing an ice mask to cover his face simply passed by you and managed to take notice. You knew that there was no way other than running and luring the clone away. So when the clone turned around to shout to another clone to raise the alarm, you turned around and jumped over the fence and ran into the forest behind you. When you did, the clone started chasing after you without waiting for backup.

You weren't sure whether or not the clones had agreed to act in such a way in order to give you and your teammates a more fair chance by letting the clone slip up more, just like the fact that he probably had them wear ice masks to either intimidate you or to make sure that you didn't recognized sensei's face in them so that you'd be less intimidated, but you knew that even if the clone would hold back, he would catch up to you and you'd have to fight it with everything you'd have.

You heard from behind you sounds that indicated to you that the clone was quickly catching up. You knew that if you had to continue the test, you had to defeat the clone somehow, even though your best skill was taijutsu, meaning that you had to get close. You could've only assumed by your sensei's desire to give you a fair chance of success that he would have his clones show more openings in a taijutsu fight, but you had to do your best to capitalize on them.

Jumping of the tree branches down to the ground, you landed and started running. You looked back several times to see if the clone was taking the bait, while also keeping your ears sharp in order to try to locate the clone.

9 + 7 = 16
SUCCESS!

You ran while looking around you as much as you could, as your ears listened carefully to the sounds that your surroundings made. Fortunately, you managed to hear the sound of leaves rustling violently over your head, which alerted you and caused you to look up and see that the clone had completely caught up and was now standing on a branch above you.

Not wanting to be caught easily, you turned around and started running in the opposite direction, back towards the encampment. This time the clone had possibly ran out of patience and you heard as he made a large jump, landing on the ground several meters in front of you.

Deciding that this was the ideal point to initiate combat, you jumped back and threw three smoke pellets at the clone's feet, which exploded and released a large, purple smokescreen.

Byako throws shuriken at the clone, performing Bukijutsu check.

DC: 15 (20 for Jonin level DC default, -5 for clone holding back)

5 + 5 = 10
FAILURE!

Byako tries to break the clone's guard, performing Taijutsu check.

DC: 15 (20 for Jonin level DC default, -5 for clone holding back)

9 + 7 = 16
SUCCESS!

Byako tries to defeat the clone in his offense phase, performing a Taijutsu check.

DC: 15 (20 for Jonin level DC default, -5 for clone holding back)

7 + 7 + 3 (clone is staggered) = 17
SUCCESS

Water Clone is defeated.

You decided to start the fight by throwing shuriken into the smokescreen, but you knew that that way you had a very wide margin of missing altogether. However, you weren't sure whether or not the clone would simply run out of the smokescreen and then the shuriken were simply a distraction for you to get close and start a taijutsu battle with the clone.

Either way you were going all in on this fight because you knew that if you'd win then you could enact a plan to infiltrate the camp and sabotage the targets, while if you'd lose the fight then the test would be over for you.

You ran forward and threw three shuriken towards the smoke screen right as the clone himself ran out of it, causing him to stop and quickly catch all three stars between his fingers while you moved in as quickly as you could to get as close as possible int his guard, just so that you could use the size difference to hit him with hits that would be too difficult to block with longer limbs because you'd be too close to his center.

As you slid under his guard, you sent a straight punch heading right towards sensei's clone's gut, but he quickly reacted and raised a knee that managed to take the hit before it reached the stomach. But you didn't gave up right away, as it did leave one of his legs open for an attack, which you capitalized by hitting said leg with a low kick just above the ankle.

The clone didn't fall or lose balance like you had hoped, but it made the clone wince and gave you an opening, which you tried your best to capitalize on. You jumped and performed a roundhouse jump kick with your left leg, but the clone quickly put down the leg he used to block your first offense to stabilize himself and raised his right forearm really close to his body to successfully block your kick.

You didn't give up and sent with your right arm a straight punch that was headed towards his face, but he used his left hand to quickly catch your fist in his hand. He then threw you down against the ground, making you cry in pain as he let go of your hand. You didn't let the pain keep you down for long and you rolled to the side and got up, but was surprised that the clone still kept a defensive stance rather than attacking. Was your sensei making sure to get a full evaluation of your capabilities by having his clones constantly on the defensive? It would certainly make sense, but you had to try to capitalize on that notion rather than stopping and thinking about it.

You ran forward as the clone sent a knee strike towards your face, which you blocked by raising your forearm. However, the strength of the strike pushed you back as you jumped away in order to not get the full damage from it.

In another attempt to rush him, you ran forward while making several hand sighs without molding your chakra, making him think that you were going to use the clone jutsu to distract him, so when he tried to kick you with a straight kick, you crouched as you ran, moving under his leg and pushing it away with your right arm while you sent a feint in the for of a left hook towards his stomach.

Sensei's clone acted quickly by putting his leg down and trying to catch your fist again, but this time you surprised him by jumping forward with all of your might, slamming your skull against his stomach, staggering him while you fell down on your hands and knees so that you wouldn't be flattened on the ground.

You used this moment to get back up on your feet and started attacking with everything you had. You jumped and performed a spin kick to the water clone's gut, causing him to take a few steps back as it was still staggered. You then rushed in with your strongest right hook straight towards his left kidney. He tried to performed a move to block or stop you, but you raised your left forearm to stop that motion in the middle as you landed your right hook into the kidney, making the clone grunt in pain.

As you prepared to hit him once again, your noticed that the clone suddenly fell apart and dispersed into a puddle of water, which confused you. It took you a few seconds, but you finally remembered how you were taught in class about the clone jutsu and its more upgraded versions. From what that class taught you about water clones in particular was that after taking a sufficient amount of damage, the clone would fall apart into water.

So you managed to make the clone suffer enough damage to defeat it? It was obvious that it could have beaten you the moment you went for the leg by switching which leg was raised, which you knew could be done instantly. He also never really tried to attack, so that was a big reason why you were able to do it. All of those openings that you had must have been the openings that you assumed the clones would give you if sensei wanted you to have a chance.

Anyway, now that luck, your skills and the fact that your opponent went easy on you meant that you could start your plan of getting into the encampment once again and this time successfully.

You intended to use the transformation jutsu in order to impersonate a clone, but you didn't have the time to notice every little nuance in the mask that the clone was wearing, meaning that if you failed to do remake the mask correctly, then there was a good possibility that you would be noticed again by sensei's clones.

Well, you had to try.

6 + 5 = 11
SUCCESS!

You made the right hand seal for the transformation jutsu and imagined the image of sensei with his clothes and the ice mask on the clone's face with what you had seen of it during the quick fight that you've had with it. You didn't know if you had succeeded, but you were going to find out either way.

If it was a success, then you were going to have an easier time getting into the encampment and sabotage the targets to pass the test. The only problem that you had to deal with was a likely contingency from your sensei to make sure no students tried transforming into clones. Most likely a trick question with a secret answer or a request for the instructions that he gave them in his mind when he created them.

Now that you were heading there, it was time to try and think carefully on which counter strategy he was planning.


POV: Samuke

You had hid yourself the moment you heard the alarm, which was simply a loud whistle that one of the clones of Susumu-san (no, sensei, sensei! You have to call him sensei here!) blew. You had entered one of the small tents before you were noticed and hid as close to the wall as possible as you saw that the clones were now moving around the perimeter in groups and were looking with a lot more dedication than before.

Leave it to Susume-san to do something so amazing to push you to your limits. And he wasn't being mean about his methods like father or uncle were when he didn't manage to reach their expectations with Ice Release. Unlike them, Susumu-san was trying to test him and still made sure to go easy on you, like having the clones wear ice masks so that you wouldn't be afraid and actually try.

Oooohh... calling Susumu-san "sensei" was so frustrating! You knew that his cousin wanted to keep things fair and not give any special privileges, but simply calling him by a different honorific on the field and at the compound was making it so complex in your mind.

Okay, okay, you need to calm down. Remember what father ingrained into your head. You need to calm down with the admiration and pedestal placement and act like a Yuki: calm, cold, calculated and emotionally detached. Susumu-sensei (Phew, you managed to do it) probably wanted you to act like this as well. You still needed to pass this test and you couldn't do that if you hid yourself.

What you had to do was to move quietly and not be noticed at all by the clones, because it was a known fact that you stood no chance against them because not only did they had all the skills and experience of Susumu-sensei, but they were also in groups, so they were going to overwhelm you either way. That was the only way that you could find your targets and sabotage them.

You had two options on how to evade the clones: one was simply try your best to not be seen by them by keeping track of the patrol routes and try to maneuver when their backs were turned, which was pretty risky.

The other option that you had to achieve your goal was to use the transformation jutsu in order to transform into a clone, which was going to be easy since you had watched for a while and noticed what you needed about the masks that Susumu-sensei made that you could easily copy it as well.

The problem with the second idea was the contingency plan that your cousin and sensei had just for that case, because impersonating someone as amazing as him was impossible for someone like you and if you were going to be questioned by some secret riddle or something, then you were going to be caught.

No, no, the best way was the first way. You just needed you be careful, that's all.

You let you head a bit into the light outside to see if any clones were close, noticing that there was another small tent nearby. Unfortunately you saw a group of three clones, which forced you to quickly crouch back into the shade and get as close to the ice wall as you could, which you were noticing was starting to melt, even if very, very slowly. You needed to get back out there, but you needed to move very cautiously, but not too slowly.

9 + 7 = 15
SUCCESS!

You peeked threw the tent to see if anymore clones were in the area and when you were sure that you didn't see anymore clones, you peeked your head out even further, making even more sure that you wouldn't going to be spotted when you'd go out, and fortunately for you, there were no clone group in sight.

You then ran out of the small tent as quickly and as quietly as you could, which was difficult with how you had to keep your breathing consistent in order for stress and the physical drain on your lungs to cause to to whiz and huff loudly, which was something that could get you caught.

It didn't take you too long until you reached the other small tent and went inside it, you crouched and pressed your back against the wall. Just then you heard a clone scream "We need to double or triple check for the third one, he must have made it into camp! Find him!" in a voice that was somewhat like your cousin's, but with enough vocal chance to make it unclear.

Woah, was Susumu-san even had the clones act like different characters for the sake of immersion? That was really awesome!

You looked around the tent and noticed that there was a little piece of paper that looked like a tag that was used in sealing classes in the academy and on the regular explosive tags that they saw in the armory of the village.

You waited as the shadows of the clones covered the light when they passed by before you decided to make your move. You quickly reached your hand and grabbed the paper, earning the team 1 point. Now you had to gain more points for the team in order to succeed in passing the test.


POV: Suijin

Shit, shit, shit! This was really bad. You had the worst of luck being spotted by one of sensei's clones, which brought another one to face you. The only thing that you could've done was escape, but even then they were still chasing after you. You had to hide, wait them out and once they were gone, you were going to go back to the camp area without holding anything back and use your entire arsenal to take as many clones down.

But first you needed to hide well. You performed a few hand signs to use the Hydrification jutsu that your clan was famous for, which made your body into water. When you looked on ahead, you saw that to your left was a big bush with several smaller bushes around it, giving you the idea that you needed to hide.

You changed directions and quickly reached the bushes, only to then turn your body into a puddle of water and crawled underneath them, focusing all of the water to move underneath the smaller bushes, where it would be easier to hide and harder to find.

Just in the nick of time that you had finished, you heard that the clones had arrived in the area and stopped.

1 + 5 + 3 (good cover) + 5 (body puddle form) = 14
SUCCESS!

"Over there in the bushes, he has to be there." one of the clones said as you heard the noise getting closer and closer to the bushes, but they only seemed to check the big bush, as the smaller bushes would have been too small to hide the entire body of a boy your age. Fortunately they forgot or ignored the fact that you were a Hozuki, a clan of badasses who could turn into water and defeat their enemies in versatile and unique ways.

Yeah... way better than stupid Ruruka and her stupid mud. You'll teach her. Thinks she's so high and mighty just because she turned you into a puddle of mud that one time... and knocked you on your ass those three other times. Stupid mud girl...

"He's not there. Perhaps he simply didn't want to hide in such an obvious spot. Let's move on and catch up to him." the second clone said, which you figured out because he was talking with a different intonation to his voice, which was probably sensei showing off his acting chops or some shit.

You then heard as they jumped ahead in the straight direction you were going at before going to hide inside the smaller bushes. After what seemed like eternity, you finally formed back into one body and got up. You undid your Hydrification jutsu to save chakra as you started running in the direction of the encampment, jumping back high in order to reach the trees.

It was time to go there and raise all hell in the best way that you knew how: with your ninjutsu.

Switch perspective back to Susumu?
[ ] Yes.
[ ] No.


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Okay, sorry for the long wait and the fact that some is a little less than another in this chapter parts, but as you can see, this is quite long and it's hard trying to finish an update before the website deletes the entire draft and I'd have to start over again.

Anyway, I decided to add bonuses and reductions to checks by having some elements really assist the checks, such as having a body turned into a puddle of water really helping in stealth checks or a staggered/stunned opponent serves as a good bonus while holding back decreases the DC heavily.

The bonuses and reductions only go from 1 to 5, so do not worry too much about it, even if it does need improvement (which I would most likely discuss with my mechanics helper @Dark as Silver).

On a different note, I have decided that if there is anyone who would like to create a Naruto Quest/Fanfiction using my universe, please contact me and I would be happy to assist in any way I can.

So what did you think on how I flavored our students' personalities? Did you enjoy it? Do you think that the kids are endearing or annoying? But no matter what, stay safe, stay healthy and have a great day.:D👍
 
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