This Is Your Only Purpose [Destiny] [Alt!Power]

She walks around with a suit of tank armor, and a massive tower shield. I imagine she would be quite muscular, indeed.
No, i think she has her canon thin build.

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My Guardian—this woman only just reborn in the Light—grabbed the Beast clamping down on her arm by the hind legs, Lifted, and brought her entire weight down on the creature's spine, knee first.

The sound—cracked bone and a sudden, sharp yelp—caused the other Beasts to halt and the Cabal to quell their laughter.

She resumed her charge. No hesitation. The Beast's limp body was still locked on her arm. She pulled it free—I could hear the flesh tear, but she did not flinch. Instead she closed the distance, rushing the Cabal, the Beast held tight in her good arm's grip.

The Cabal raised his weapon, but too late. The other Beasts charged as my Guardian pummeled the Legionary with the corpse of his pet. It was brutal, swift.

Lightbearers don't depend on strength of their body.
This story downplays capabilities of Risen a lot.
 
II. Aggressive, Vicious (Eliksni)
II. Aggressive, Vicious (Eliksni)

Ixis could see the hairline fractures in bonds grow, day by day. Arguments happened over smaller and smaller disagreements. Some were stealing from human encampments for supplies. Others left, a seeping wound continuing to drip out ether.

He knew where they went. They followed the strength their Kell had lacked. Red banners and ceaseless rage, murderous fury lashing out against the enemies of the Eliksni. It was the slow death after death of Mraksiskel, to watch her idealism crushed not once but a hundred times over. Each new desertion widened the cracks further.

Grayris eagerly brought a hammer down upon the fragile bonds. "We don't need to live in this squalor," she said. "Yalsis left, and Nulsis followed. We do not need to keep their path, we can choose a new one, of blue cloaks and prosperity. Winter will accept us."

The protests of the others grew weaker every day, as their stores grew slimmer, and their resolve was worn away. Ixis saw through her faux-loyalty, her vengeance cloaked in justice's mantle. She wished to dissolve bonds and scoop up the pieces in her hands, making an offering to Winter to elevate herself in their eyes. She wanted their servitor, to force any who would not join to follow.

Ixis was clever, but not strong. He knew his weakness, and could not strike back. Instead, he did his best to remind others of Mraksiskel. To elevate her, replace the temptation of Grayris with the image of their dead Kell.

He spun stories of how Mraksiskel had saved them, reminding them of who she had been. The Gentle Kell, he named her, abusing her legacy. It was a steady stream of kind truths interwoven with lies to combat the harsh grinding edge of Grayris. But an ideologue would be tuned out. The stories were appreciated, but were also cutting reminders of better times.

Ixis made no speeches. Any such speech could be cut down by Grayris, who would have loved a chance to dismantle any such open dissenters, to prove her worth. Mraksiskel's inherited message of self-sacrifice would fall on deaf ears as times grew ever more difficult.

Even worse, Grayris could pervert them, twist the tale into an ending with a moral.

This is what happens to those who are kind. This is how those who trust are destroyed. There is only one truth, and we must follow it in order to live.

In lieu of such an obvious option, Grayris continued to preach false moderation. They did not need to join Devils or Rain. Winter would welcome them with open arms. More joined along in her chorus.

Every human attack proved Grayris right. Sometimes, a clutchmate would not come back from a supply run, attempting to steal from humans. Ixis mourned their loss, but it was just another weapon in Grayris' arsenal. She could recount their deaths, talk about those who had left in glowing terms. Heroes, she called them.

Ixis despaired.
 
No, i think she has her canon thin build.

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My Guardian—this woman only just reborn in the Light—grabbed the Beast clamping down on her arm by the hind legs, Lifted, and brought her entire weight down on the creature's spine, knee first.

The sound—cracked bone and a sudden, sharp yelp—caused the other Beasts to halt and the Cabal to quell their laughter.

She resumed her charge. No hesitation. The Beast's limp body was still locked on her arm. She pulled it free—I could hear the flesh tear, but she did not flinch. Instead she closed the distance, rushing the Cabal, the Beast held tight in her good arm's grip.

The Cabal raised his weapon, but too late. The other Beasts charged as my Guardian pummeled the Legionary with the corpse of his pet. It was brutal, swift.

Lightbearers don't depend on strength of their body.
This story downplays capabilities of Risen a lot.
Every Knight is hundreds of years old, battleforged, a huge threat. Every Spider Tank is considered potential final death. You are overrating most Guardians. I have read literally all of the Destiny lorebooks in Ishtar Collective for this project, all the exotics/legendaries with lore, and most of the tinier blurbs on the weapons/armor to gather information because I want to present a growing world derived from Worm/Destiny. Most Guardians are not the Young Wolf or the Guardian presented in Into the Fray. Most Guardians are infinite cannon fodder, grasping at power. Shaxx is at the far end of the bell curve, not an example of what most exist as. Canonically, every time you die in a darkness zone, you are dead forever. That was it. You all wiped in a raid? You're done. The Hive feast on your light, and expand their throne world. Or you're erased from reality, defined as a figment of imagination, made into a literal unperson. Or your corpse is resurrected as a vessel for SIVA and you are a shambling horror, bones broken again and again as SIVA deforms you into a perfect weapon, eyes kept only as long as they are convenient sensors wired to an imperfect husk.

Crota slaughtered thousands of able-bodied Guardians, including many we view as legends. We kill him with relative ease and roll our eyes. Nine Guardians went into a strike we consider to be a joke and permanently died.

I have a lot of examples of Risen who just ended up dead or on their final life because they fucked up or weren't powerful enough. According to Variks, Phylaks ended Risen at Twilight Gap. Final deaths. SIVA ended the Iron Lords, picking people off as they went in a final attempt to shut it down. If every Risen is like the one in Into the Fray, the system should have been free of incursion by now.

The answer is everything we do in-game is built off of what other people have already accomplished.
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The Guardians of today are not gods. Nor where those who came before. We are all simply links on a chain reaching back to the dawn of time, and forward to the end of existence. Each link gaining strength from the others. Each link stronger than the last. Just as I was "stronger" than Yor, you are stronger than me. The whole working to solidify the parts and growing sturdier as the harsh truths of reality stretch and strain to break us—to break the chain, sever our individual links.
Some Guardians/Risen are stronger and more capable. But this does not mean everyone is on this level. Many will never reach this level, especially in the Dark Age. We are the Main Character of Destiny.

I've stated my desire for her to grow into her strength. She's killed Warlords stronger than her by abusing her abilities and coming into her own. She's fought off larger numbers by dividing them and picking them off. She has slowly assembled an arsenal based off what has worked in the past. I apologize but while I enjoy the lore of Into the Fray it's not a good indicator of what everyone faces or can do when they are resurrected. Wei Ning is not going to have the same experience as Eriana-3. Saint-14 the person getting shot out of the sky by a spider tank while trying to pull a Ward of Dawn and failing because he'd just popped Sentinel Shield isn't the same person who goes on a genocidal crusade against all Eliksni in the solar system, regardless of affiliation. He is clearly faster and more powerful in one than the other. Glint can't heal the wounds given to Crow by an angry sunbreaker, and he dies hours later. Is this story license or Glint not knowing how to heal him? Certain story elements seem to suggest death/resurrection is faster than repairing injuries. Others can heal swiftly, like Ana when she is shot by a sniper rifle. But even she takes a long time and is probably running -10 recovery for how long it takes. She's still injured for the majority of the fight. How do I translate this? I need to try to balance this. My depiction is as accurate as I can make it, and is supported by lore.
Actually, how far have you planned for this story to go? Will there be time skips once the Warlord era settles down? Are we actually going to go all the way to current canon (barring changes made by characters of course)?
I have up to the (very different) Deep Stone Crypt outlined. Some elements may change as the story progresses, and I haven't yet finalized how bad the Hive will end up being for humanity. There will be timeskips once things settle down, but I do want to make chapters which accompany timeskips as breathers once there is time for respite.
I will admit im somewhat terrified that thing with the children and the shield is a setup. It reminded me viscerally of The Child's Standard from the Malazan novels.

Though im pretty sure if that happens there wont be any Fallen left by the time the City is up and running... Saint-14 is a hard boy at times but hes no Taylor in full escalation mode.
I reassure you it is not a setup, I haven't read the Malazan novels. I wanted a glimpse of hope for her. This one will not be brought crashing down into despair.
Probably meant flora which is plants since Fauna means animals.
Whoops! Thank you for the correction.
 
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Well thank fuck for that. One gets tired of authors who perpetually grind the grimdark without understanding you need meaningful ups to go with the downs. Kudos to you.

I can agree with that.

Here is to some hoping that Taylor can do what the Iron Lords couldn't, and successfully get through to Rasputin and get the Old Warmind off his digital behind and doing something much sooner then canon.
 
Here is to some hoping that Taylor can do what the Iron Lords couldn't, and successfully get through to Rasputin and get the Old Warmind off his digital behind and doing something much sooner then canon.
I bet Russias Greatest Love Machine would recognize the Queen of Escalation and give out some kind of a reaction.
 
I apologize but while I enjoy the lore of Into the Fray it's not a good indicator of what everyone faces or can do when they are resurrected.
Young Wolf is basically unmatched murderblender (seriously, only one other character comes to mind who deals with same scale of paranormal - Doom Marine).
I'm in no way suggest that anyone else should be as capable. [Technically speaking, there are at least 5 other dudes who come close, besides named characters]
Most lore and feats we have are about exceptional people and, naturally, protagonist(s) of any story mostly expected to also be exceptional. Moreover, we know that this is Taylor, and expect outstanding capability.
Your creative choice is to "take it slow" and write about lesser power level. I respect it.
[But, frankly, when i first read Into the Fray, i thought that it sounds like perfect lore bit to use as Taylor insertion point for crossover.]

As a side note, it be interesting to see outside perspective at a person who soloed Taken King's physical body and then... just stopped talking. But it's clearly not a subject for this story.

She may have when she was first rezzed, but it has been a while since then, in which she was likely building muscle.
I think Risen don't grow or age - each healing and resurrection resets them, at very least.
 
Here is to some hoping that Taylor can do what the Iron Lords couldn't, and successfully get through to Rasputin and get the Old Warmind off his digital behind and doing something much sooner then canon
Since this a Worm fusion, the Tyrant might not be the only AI kicking around (though he's almost certainly the most powerful). With the way she's been looking into the expanded endvringer shelter networks and comms systems, there's pretty good odds that The Girl is gonna wind up on Dragon's radar if she's still alive and relatively free. While I imagine that would be a good thing, it seems like it would short circuit the story a fair bit unless it happens well after the Girl solidifies her identity.
 
Shards of the Disastrous Bark
Shards of the Disastrous Bark

They picked a path carefully. Others glanced their way. Some scoffed. All were preparing. The range of weaponry was enormous. Revolvers, rifles, swords, submachine guns, shotguns, grenade launchers, the list went on and on. Weapons of different styles and sizes. Some even looked as if they'd been hand assembled, kitbashed together out of spare parts and solder.

Stalker nudged the girl, inclining her head at another person. The girl had already seen her, but she looked again. It was a short woman whose gauntlets were a mixture of intertwined circuitry and wiring, and she was stringing a massive warbow. It hummed, and she turned to the side to inspect it, revealing her back and the sharpened lengths of rebar she kept in a quiver.

They toured through the camp. So many others. They all had powers, abilities no normal person could ever dream of. What would it be like if they all worked together? If they set aside their differences and worked for the common good?

She hoped the Iron Lords were doing well. Their success would mean so much. To show the world it was possible.

But for now, it was a contest. A frantic struggle.

Some had entire arsenals. One man had a sword nearly larger than the girl's shield. One woman seemed to have no weapons at all. She sat there, wrapping her fists in bandages, flexing her fingers before nodding to herself.

Soon, they would all be enemies. "We have to find allies quickly," she murmured.

"Could always join up with the lady who was more interested in your shield than us," said Stalker.

The girl was already approaching a prospect she'd been watching. A woman who had a sword and shield, both better maintained than her armor. She was seated, gazing off at the tower, her brow furrowed. She looked over at the girl, and her eyes widened.

She leapt up, clapping the girl on the shoulder, a relief and awe on her face. "You made it," she said, words coming out machine-gun quick. "I always knew you would. Wow, you're carrying a big shield around now, huh? Big one as the table, small one for a plate? Smart, must be heavy, still got both your arms and both your legs, so it's worth it."

"I-" the girl blinked, the woman's patter throwing her off. "Did I know you?"

"Oh," said the woman, her face falling. "Oh no. You're a Risen now, aren't you. I'm so sorry."

"You knew me?" the girl leaned forward.

"Yeah, of course, of course," said the woman. "You and me, we went way back. I'm sorry I left. I had to. I knew you'd be harmed if I stuck around, and when you've been around as long as I have, well we just keep losing friends, you know what I'm saying, Daisy?"

Stalker covered her mouth, trying to contain her mirth.

"Daisy?" the girl asked. "That was my name?"

"Yes," said the woman. "Gwendolyn Daisy Pepperjack. You went by Daisy. You must have been only twenty when you died. You should have lived a full life. Hundreds of years ahead of you. But instead, reduced to this. I'll always wonder if it was my fault, you know? A cloud of guilt forever over my head. At least you have a nice table and a little hat or plate now."

"You're screwing with me," said the girl.

"Honest, hand to my heart," said the woman, slapping a hand to her collarbone. "Daisy, I'd never lie to you. How could you even suggest such an awful thing. Your mother would be ashamed of you."

The girl stared at the woman, and she burst out laughing, a quick peal of noise extending into panting chuckles.

"I think I'm going to cry," she said after another wheeze. "Too easy. Every time. I'm gonna add another name for the next one, I'm taking suggestions."

"Are you going to go in alone?" the girl asked.

"That's the heroic way to do it, isn't it?" said the woman, a sunny smile on her face. "A solo raid on the tower. Legends would speak of me and myself. Why, you still looking? Showed up late without a proper team?" The woman poked and prodded with her questions, either trying to provoke the girl or get her to go away. It was difficult to tell. It made the girl more stubborn, wanting this woman on her team. "You going in with a shield on each arm, or is this a formal occasion? Does that mean I'm underdressed? Didn't think I'd need an entire armoire wearing an armory, but here you are."

"Here I am," said the girl.

"You're a good audience," said the woman. "Some call me 'fuck off and go away,' but you can call me anytime."

"You seem pretty intent on doing this solo," said the girl.

"Yup," said the woman. "Yup. That's me. Solo act." she dropped her voice to a gravelly whisper. "I work alone."

"We're stronger together," said the girl.

"Oh you've never worked with some real losers, have you?" said the woman. "It's a doozy, it is. Everyone's staring over each other's shoulder, trying to figure out which Light's the good Light, and how to properly point their guns. You need any hints?"

"Sure," said the girl.

The woman sighed, rolling her eyes. "You're no fun."

The girl smiled.

"Why do you want it?" the woman asked in a breathy stage whisper, leaning forward conspiratorily, looking the girl up and down. The girl couldn't tell if it was feigned or not. "What'll you do once you get it? Get yourself a harem of guys? Gals? Force people to bow to your whim? More guns? Shields?"

"I want to shut it down," said the girl.

"You're preserving the status quo?" said the woman, her voice losing its jocular tone. "That's what you think is right?"

"No," said the girl. "I think it's a prize we can't avoid. One we can't afford to have on the playing field, especially in the wrong hands. It's tempting. But I don't think we can harness it, not right now. We aren't willing to work together, so anyone who has it will be attacked for it."

The woman's eyes shone with renewed interest. "Ooh, good story," she said. "I like it. I really like it. Okay. Okay, okay, okay. You got me. I'll come and join your fool's crusade. The underdog story, it's just so satisfying."

"I thought you were going in solo," said the girl.

"Me too!" said the woman. "But here you are, and here I am, and you look like you're a few members short of a team. I am down to destroy. Shut down, seal away."

"This is a bad idea," said Stalker.

"I am," said the woman. "But I won't stab you in the back. I promise. No fronts, either. I'll see this through to the end. What's your name?"

"Stalker," said Stalker. "She doesn't have one."

"Nameless hero," said the woman, rubbing her hands together. "I'm calling you Pansy, Daisy, Rose, or Shield. Take your pick."

"What's yours?" the girl asked.

"I've accumulated a few, most unflattering," said the woman. "I'm going by Mynah right now, but I've been called a rat before."

Stalker glanced away. "We're out of time," she said.

The girl looked from her wraith. They were. More teams were moving out, and others were following in their wake, refusing to be left behind.

"Let's go," said Mynah. "I'm ready. You ready?"

"No," said the girl.

"Good answer," said Mynah, pulling on a helmet, brown with gold outlining where her eyes would be.

It was easier and harder.

There were walls of still cooling glass in the dust storm, created by the people ahead, as they channeled Solar Light. But sometimes the walls would detonate, showering them with glass shards. Traps for those attempting to use them? Or just trying to ensure nobody used them at all? They pushed onward, and the girl saw something, flecks of gold catching the light.

In a split second, she whipped her tower shield off her back, and it skidded into the ground as she halted its momentum, holding it in place. The projectiles hit a moment later. Glass spat, sizzled, and cracked as it splashed against it, then fell away.

"Someone must have used Solar to splash the ground," she said. "They're trying to take out competitors."

They pressed forward, but the girl kept her shield out, ready to stop any more projectiles. They made their own walls, the girl empowering her tower shield, Mynah flicking flame into the ground with a white hot knife, causing the ground to crest into a wave, catching the dust until it finally cooled into a makeshift barricade.

"Gunshots," said Mynah, glancing off to the left.

"Didn't think the fighting would start this soon," said the girl. "Thought they'd at least get to the foot of the tower."

"Visibility getting worse," said Stalker. "Potshots at enemies ahead of you when they can't respond. Walls provide cover from the front, but if you're taking shelter…"

The dust storm slowed. They were confused for a moment. But there was a larger, still red hot wall, slowly being covered in detritus. Too hot to scale, they had to go around.

"Someone else must have had the same idea," said the girl.

"The wind is picking up!" shouted Mynah. She yelled something else, but the girl was already throwing her barrier down. She'd seen what was coming.

Someone in front had lit the air on fire. A rolling wave of flaming detritus came their way, a crackling slap against the barricade they had to weather.

Then the ground shook. Huge shadows crashed down, slamming into the earth. It felt like the world was ending, an earthquake and fiery death all in one, protected by a soap bubble in a hellscape. Was it another attack?

One crashed down closer, a giant rectangle, twisted almost in two. Plating from the spire. It grew from the earth, casting the area behind it in shadow. The storm was forced to curve around it.

"We can use it as shelter!" shouted the girl, pointing, trying to raise her voice above the storm. "We can't stay here!"

They moved together.
 
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Huh, Wei Ning, Mouse Protector, and our Protagonist all on the same field. Assuming of course that IS Wei Ning and not some nameless Risen that got by on just punching.
 
I am having a horrified thought. If ANY machine intelligence could figure out paracausality, it would be the Machine Army. Since they understand and make use of dimensional shenanigans. Them linking up with the Vex?

That might be End Game.
 
I am having a horrified thought. If ANY machine intelligence could figure out paracausality, it would be the Machine Army. Since they understand and make use of dimensional shenanigans. Them linking up with the Vex?

That might be End Game.
I get the feeling they'd get pre-empted by the vex before that happens, unless they saw a way to integrate it.
 
"Nameless hero," said the woman, rubbing her hands together. "I'm calling you Pansy, Daisy, Rose, or Shield. Take your pick."

If you want the most Dredgen Yor/Jaren Ward connection, Rose is probably the best of these.

It's got a lot of meaning. Rose, the legendary hand cannon that became Thorn. Rose, like Taylor's mother's middle name. Rose, the past tense of rise, as she is among the first Risen, and certainly among the first to go from warlord to protector.

A lot of the girl's problems with Solar are reminding me a lot of Rezyl Azzir and his problems with Light as referenced in the Heart of Inmost Light lore.

Also, the girl's refusal to take a name? Mirrors the Drifter, who Taylor is on a collision course with if she does end up meeting the Iron Lords properly. My god, but she sure is wrapped up in it, isn't she?
 
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