Very much enjoying the story, but I think a lot of the character exposition for the OCs could be broken up a bit. Maybe an overview with more depth in future conversations, rather than the "this is me and everything about why I am the most awesome!" A lot of that felt out of place for an official negotiation.

I don't disagree at all. That said, it flows organically from how the RP between Patt and I goes. Denise doesn't know anything about Dispatcher other than that she wants in, very badly. Her mentor, John Fitzgerald, held her back until they got a sense of Dispatcher. Once John gave the nod, Denise could make her case. There's not a little hero worship going on. Dispatcher (Taylor) got exactly the power set Denise always dreamed of getting. Denise could either have gone down the bitter route, or she could make damn sure she could get close to Dispatcher from the very start of her adventures and secure a position at her immediate right hand. She wanted to bowl Dispatcher over with her qualifications, integrity, and enthusiasm. For her, this is no longer negotiation but rather unabashed passion. John is still speaking rationally by making sure Dispatcher knows what Denise represents and is capable of. The dynamics of this situation is colored by the romanticism felt to a certain extent by Shelley and John, and a very deep extent by Denise. Their higher ups are aware of this, but they also want to secure Dispatcher as a close, reliable and passionate ally. If Dispatcher is as she seems, it really could revolutionize rail in the US.

Think about it, and trust me Shelley and her bosses in operations and planning already are, is it possible Dispatcher could build a mag-lev line from Boston to DC? By magic/powers? They don't know and are not ready yet to ask, but these are the things they are imagining. So no, this is not a routine negotiation. Not at all.
 
Sorry for the double post but I thought I'd share we might be a bit late this week. The "Dr" in my user name is real (as is my being Yuri and a Mom) and the past two weeks have seen a very rapid and extreme rise in Covid. I've become extremely busy and when I'm not it's not easy to relax enough for my muse to play. I'll write as I am able and in the meantime I beg everyone's understanding.

Please take precautions and stay safe, folks. It's bad and getting worse. :-(
~DYM
 
The "Dr" in my user name is real (as is my being Yuri and a Mom) and the past two weeks have seen a very rapid and extreme rise in Covid. I've become extremely busy and when I'm not it's not easy to relax enough for my muse to play. I'll write as I am able and in the meantime I beg everyone's understanding.

Perfectly fine. Taking care of yourself is priority one.

And yeah, it is making a comeback. My state is going to put the restrictions back.
 
I think it was pretty much shown that the gift from Armsmaster is an accurate to life miniature train with miniscule moving parts, but I can't find any mention of what kind of train it is, so that's what'll need to be guessed on. I don't know trains, so I can't possibly comment on this. I'm just enjoying the story because it has a living Annette, and thus a more Bubbly Little Miss Taylor. And I approve of that. I came more for the Worm side of thing, but stayed because of the quality of writing and the characters written.
 
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Eh. Seems absurd she wouldn't push for a security contract, and even if she didn't Amtrak should. Pushing aside the legality/morality of having a 13 year old girl running your trainyard for nothing just because "powers" the fact that her projections won't need health/medical insurance would most likely already save Amtrak more than the cost of actually paying her to secure it.
 
Eh. Seems absurd she wouldn't push for a security contract, and even if she didn't Amtrak should. Pushing aside the legality/morality of having a 13 year old girl running your trainyard for nothing just because "powers" the fact that her projections won't need health/medical insurance would most likely already save Amtrak more than the cost of actually paying her to secure it.
The suits will likely catch that later, when some starts having conversations about liability for de facto employees, etc
 
Interlude 3: Accident Flashback
Interlude 3: Accident Flashback

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Author's note:

Welcome to this episode of The World is my Layout! I apologize for the temporary halt in content, but as you know, @DrYuriMom is a doctor. Due to sick colleagues and an overabundance of virus cases, she is quite busy and will be unable to do any writing for her characters for at least 3-4 weeks. Therefore progress on 4.1 has been halted. I did not want to put the story entirely on hiatus so for the next few weeks I will be bringing you an Interlude every Wednesday. Each interlude will covering something other than the main plot, mostly reactions to it. This particular chapter is the promised Accident Flashback. Please enjoy this chapter of The World is my Layout.

Saturday, August 23, 2008

This Saturday had started out like any other in the Hebert or Barnes households, with Taylor and Emma sprawled out on the fold-out living room couch of whichever building was hosting their weekly sleep-over. In this case, it was Taylor's house.

The morning sun playing through the drawn curtains and the scent of bacon frying in the kitchen soon awakened both however. A few minutes later the pajama-wearing girls were once again on the couch watching the Saturday Morning Cartoons they enjoyed every weekend while they wolfed down the bacon, eggs and hash browns lovingly cooked up by Danny.

Normally the pair would stay pajama bound and glued to the TV till noon when the Saturday programming changed. Taylor and Emma had other commitments today, however. Today was Arcadia Middle School's orientation day and Annette would be taking them to get their schedules sorted out and their ID cards printed. Afterwards, Emma would be leaving with her family to go camping up in the mountains for the next week.

So around 10 o'clock, the girls were dressed, brushed and prepared to go. The drive was pleasant and the school activities caused excitement for the new school year to well up inside them. As they waited in line for their ID cards, Taylor and Emma could only chatter about their future classes, what they would learn in them and how they couldn't wait to see how acquaintances made in previous years were doing.

Once this was done around 12 noon and new IDs were clutched in hand, the two girls separated at the Barnes' car but not without a quick farewell hug first. They waved to each other as they parted until each was in their separate vehicle.

As the Barnes family car drove off, Taylor turned to her mother who was starting up her car. "Alright Mom, now that that is done, can we go back home so we can finish the Lord of the Rings marathon? I'm excited to see how they represent the ghost army that refused to serve."

Annette smiled while shaking her head, "While I'm glad that you want to experience Tolkien's works in the medium of film, we need to go out and do some errands. For example, we need to get you some new school supplies. That Alexandria backpack of yours has gotten ragged and the Armsmaster lunchbox is dented and it's paint is peeling off. On top of those needing replaced, we need to get everything else too."

Taylor's face and voice became petulant. "But Mooomm. Can't that wait till next week when Emma is back? There will still be supplies and we can shop together."

As Annette turned the car out of the school parking lot, she shook her head more firmly. "And get caught in the last minute school shopping rush? No Taylor, we need to get it done now, before the selection gets too poor. And don't take that tone young lady or I will let you stay in suspense about The Return of the King."

Taylor's eyes widened. "You wouldn't!" She protested.

"Yes, I would." Annette proceeded to drive the car towards the nearest shopping center. "While educating yourself about English Literature in its many forms is something I will always applaud, sometimes there will be other things that are more important. Like shopping for necessities. Besides, school supply shopping is supposed to be fun."

Taylor grumbled a little but nodded her assent. As she thought about it, she had to agree that her mom had a point. "I suppose picking out a new backpack and a new lunchbox would be fun," she said, some excitement entering her voice.

"That's my girl!" Annette encouraged Taylor as she began to go through the next intersection on the way to her preferred shopping center.

Annette and Taylor would not get to do the 13-year-old's school shopping that day. Danny would have to do it later next week while both were laid up. For in the next second, a certain driver on their latest high in an invisible car filled with drugs shot through the red light and t-boned Annette's car on the driver's side.

There was a tremendous crash and the Hebert's car was violently pushed into the crosswalk of the lane to the right and up onto the curb. Taylor felt something in her lower right leg snap. She screamed in pain and nearly blacked out, but managed to stay conscious. Through heavily lidded eyes and a sudden killer headache, she looked over to see if her mom was okay.

Annette had made no sound during the crash. She hadn't had time. The crash had immediately knocked her unconscious. Taylor could see that the driver's door was partially caved in and the glass in both doors on that side were shattered. She lifted her left arm, which was weak from the shock and shook her mom's right shoulder. "Mom, are you okay?"

There was no answer. Annette's eyes were closed and Taylor saw that her mother's breathing was shallow. Too shallow for it to be healthy. She also saw that Annette's left leg and left arm were bent at unnatural angles.

Not caring for her own injury, Taylor shook her mother's shoulder again. "Mom, wake up. Please wake up. Don't leave me alone here!" She shouted in distress. Only later would she realize that Annette may have gotten a concussion and it may have been a bad idea to move her mother at all.

It was at this point that there was a strange whirring noise, and a heavily built car flickered into existence. Taylor forgot her mother for a moment and stared at the now-visible car that was lodged in the driver's side of the Hebert's car.

Another woman stared right back at her, her face almost albino white in shock. Taylor noted that she was dressed shoddily and had a poorly crafted mask that used some kind of visor as a base. The woman was holding one arm gently, as if it was broken, or at least sprained.

An invisible car, a woman with a mask? Is that Squealer? Taylor instantly became incensed, despite how slowly her thoughts were moving. How dare she!

Taylor was prepared to go on with a mental diatribe, but the woman seemed to recover and reversed her vehicle out of the wreck and turned it away before driving off. Taylor could see that the front end was damaged, but not severely enough to disable the car. Grumbling in a very upset manner, Taylor turned back to her mother, who had still not awoken.

"Come on Mom, wake up. Don't leave me alone. Please," begged the girl. Out of the corner of her eye she spotted her mom's phone, still sitting in the center cup holder, undamaged. Slowly reaching for it, her hand shaking in sudden fatigue, she dialed 9-1-1.

A kindly sounding feminine voice answered almost at once. "Brockton Bay Dispatch, what is your emergency?"

Taylor tried not to let any emotion influence her voice but somewhat failed as she heard her anxiousness and pain speak."This is Taylor Hebert, H-e-b-e-r-t. I-I, I need an ambulance and something to help us out of our car. I don't know if they'll be able to get my Mom out of the car without the Jaws of Life or something." She took a breath, tears beginning to well up in her eyes as she stared at her unconscious mother.

The voice on the other end was immediately all business but was still kind in tone. "Where are you dearie? And what happened that you need help?"

Taylor sniffled, "We were crossing the intersection of Arcadia Boulevard and 12th Avenue when one of Squealer's invisible cars t-boned our vehicle. Mom's door is smashed in and she is unconscious. It looks like she has a broken left arm and left leg. My right leg is broken as well. Please, can you send help," Taylor pleaded desperately, "My Mom won't wake up."

Taylor could hear shouting in the background as people reacted to her report. Did the dispatcher have her on speaker?

The woman's voice came back on the line. "An ambulance, fire engine, and police car have been dispatched to your location, Taylor. You are in a good part of town so they will get there within 3 minutes."

"T-Thank you."

"Please stay on the line until they get there dear." The voice on the other line almost sounded like a concerned grandmother, "Now, what's this about Squealer crashing into you?"

Taylor shifted in her seat, trying to relieve the stress in her body. The movement only caused pain to shoot up her leg. "Ow, ow, ow." She exclaimed, clenching her teeth to stave off a scream. "Mmm… One second we were driving through the intersection and the next we were t-boned and pushed up on the curb. There was no warning at all. Then the other car appeared out of thin air. The person inside matched Squealer's general description." Taylor whimpered at the memory and the pain welling up inside her leg.

Through another painful exclamation, she could hear the Dispatch woman mutter something about reporting the incident to the PRT. "Thank you, sweetheart. I'll get that to the people who need to know. Stay strong Taylor and try not to move, we don't want you to aggravate your injuries."

"Yes ma'am. Thank you." Taylor could hear sirens and they were rapidly coming closer. She began to feel the adrenaline caused by the crash wear off. "I don't know if I can stay awake Ma'am. I'm trying, but everything hurts. My leg, my head…"

"Try not to fall asleep dear. If you have a concussion too, you need to stay awake." The dispatcher's tone was urgent, "Tell me about your parents, Taylor. What do they do for a living?" The woman was attempting to keep Taylor awake by making small talk.

Taylor smiled, her mind shifting away from the accident for just a moment, "Mom's an English Professor at the college. She's a nut for J.R.R. Tolkien. Dad's the Head of Hiring at the Dockworkers Union. That's his title anyway. He practically runs the place single-handedly."

There was more muttering or something like it from the phone. Somewhat deliriously now she considered that the cops and firefighters had their own unions so they probably knew of her dad. The blast of a Fire Engine's horn came, and Taylor could finally see the flashing lights of the vehicle coming from the direction of the nearest station. A police car rounded the same corner Annette's car was pushed onto. It deftly avoided the bits of metal and glass that were in the street.

While the police car blocked off the road to prevent civilian cars from passing through the accident zone, an ambulance screamed up to the scene from the opposite direction. Taylor looked back at her Mom, and tried one final time to wake her up with her desperate words. "Help is here Mom! Please, wake up."

Yet there was still no movement from Annette besides her shallow breathing. Frustrated, scared and in great pain, Taylor called out as another shock of pain went through her leg. It was finally enough to overwhelm her. As the fire truck pulled up and men streamed from it with the tools to help her and her mother out of the car, Taylor finally gave in, the sensation and grief too much for her.

The last thing she heard was the dispatcher lady telling her to stay awake and emergency workers trying to open the car doors.

Destination

Agreement
 
Thank you for this wonderful interlude! It really does give an insight to the accident and helps building and evolving the characters and the world. Stay safe!
 
Oh dear. I hope the author hasn't accidentally shot themselves in the foot there.

I thought there were hints in previous chapters that we were leading up to Squealer coming to eventually work under Dispatcher (given that she broke away from her gang and was last seen headed for Trainyard territory). But now that we've established that Taylor knows/is-pretty-sure that Squealer was the one that hit them, the team-up is looking a lot less likely.
 
Oh dear. I hope the author hasn't accidentally shot themselves in the foot there.

I thought there were hints in previous chapters that we were leading up to Squealer coming to eventually work under Dispatcher (given that she broke away from her gang and was last seen headed for Trainyard territory). But now that we've established that Taylor knows/is-pretty-sure that Squealer was the one that hit them, the team-up is looking a lot less likely.
Yeah, I can see Taylor being pissed when Squealer shows up.
"Remember that hit and run you did a little while ago? Yeah, so do I."
 
ScottotheUnwise: Taylor gives Squealer a job
Yeah, I can see Taylor being pissed when Squealer shows up.
"Remember that hit and run you did a little while ago? Yeah, so do I."

"Oh, no worries. I'm not one to hold a grudge. A TRAIN, but never a grudge."

Shadow falling across Squealer makes her look up. Freezing. "That is a very big engine. I'd really like to get under it and do some work..."
The train expands in Squealer's vision as it comes down. "Why is it covered in muck?"

Taylor shakes a few hundred pounds of Boat Graveyard material, green algae and crab infested muck, onto Squealer. Then she sets it down on the track VERY close to where Squealer is. "No particular reason. But if you ever hurt my family --scratch that-- anyone in the Bay again, I will pick up whatever car you are in and put it into the Boat Graveyard. They might even find it some day if they dredge." Significant pause. "Your first job is to clean up this mess."
 
-No. This is dead wong. If someone with a concussion can hold a conversation, sleep is one of the better things for them to do. The only reason to keep her awake is medical history, which she probably wouldn't know.-
True, but it is in line with training that may be expected in era.
Also of note is that an entrapped person in wreckage, may not be aware of the degree, or indeed that they are bleeding, so it might be nessercery to keep them talking, to ensure you are able to react to changes in level of conciousness.
No good having them die whilst you are cutting steel after all
 
Just read the first chapter, here's my opinion so far-

"This is pretty awesome," words said aloud, at approximately 7:29 AM, the Twenty-Sixth of August 2021.
 
Re-reading this while I wait for the next non-interlude chapter and found a typo in chapter 2.1
Hmm?" Danny looked from the small window in the front door towards the living room entry where his daughter stood. The man was in his pajamas but looked ready to blast anything that tried to break in.5"
There's a random 5. Not a big deal, but I'm trying to be constructive and DrYuriMom doesn't normally leave me anything to point out. :D

In an effort to be more relevant- rather than have a "protection" take, like Skidmark, what are the odds of Taylor asking for no more pay than what an Amtrak intern makes? Taylor's got a fair bit of learning ahead of her in regards to operating a functional rail road. If the Amtrak Management are willing, that pay could go towards a purchasing fund. When they realize that any rail kit Taylor manifests is permanently stable, they're going to LOSE THEIR MINDS! A full size passenger car can cost up to a million dollars, depending on the materials used, but I just saw a N-scale P70 passenger car on sale for $53.99 on a website.
 
Well, thank you for posting this chapter, Gen. Patton. It helps to the first causes at the start of the story.

Thank you for this wonderful interlude! It really does give an insight to the accident and helps building and evolving the characters and the world. Stay safe!

Thank you both for the comments. I've had this in mind for a while, though not the exact details. I'm glad I was able to get it out.

Oh dear. I hope the author hasn't accidentally shot themselves in the foot there.

I thought there were hints in previous chapters that we were leading up to Squealer coming to eventually work under Dispatcher (given that she broke away from her gang and was last seen headed for Trainyard territory). But now that we've established that Taylor knows/is-pretty-sure that Squealer was the one that hit them, the team-up is looking a lot less likely.

There will be a little drama for sure, but Sherrel has two gifts to help Taylor forgive her. They won't entirely wipe away the potential enmity there, but they will help.

"Oh, no worries. I'm not one to hold a grudge. A TRAIN, but never a grudge."

Shadow falling across Squealer makes her look up. Freezing. "That is a very big engine. I'd really like to get under it and do some work..."
The train expands in Squealer's vision as it comes down. "Why is it covered in muck?"

Taylor shakes a few hundred pounds of Boat Graveyard material, green algae and crab infested muck, onto Squealer. Then she sets it down on the track VERY close to where Squealer is. "No particular reason. But if you ever hurt my family --scratch that-- anyone in the Bay again, I will pick up whatever car you are in and put it into the Boat Graveyard. They might even find it some day if they dredge." Significant pause. "Your first job is to clean up this mess."

Have an Apocypha entry! Thank you for the post!

Just read the first chapter, here's my opinion so far-

"This is pretty awesome," words said aloud, at approximately 7:29 AM, the Twenty-Sixth of August 2021.

Thank you! I'm glad you like it so far. I appreciate your readership.

Re-reading this while I wait for the next non-interlude chapter and found a typo in chapter 2.1 There's a random 5. Not a big deal, but I'm trying to be constructive and DrYuriMom doesn't normally leave me anything to point out. :D

In an effort to be more relevant- rather than have a "protection" take, like Skidmark, what are the odds of Taylor asking for no more pay than what an Amtrak intern makes? Taylor's got a fair bit of learning ahead of her in regards to operating a functional rail road. If the Amtrak Management are willing, that pay could go towards a purchasing fund. When they realize that any rail kit Taylor manifests is permanently stable, they're going to LOSE THEIR MINDS! A full size passenger car can cost up to a million dollars, depending on the materials used, but I just saw a N-scale P70 passenger car on sale for $53.99 on a website.

Random 5 fixed. Thanks for the spot. Yep, they will definitely have their minds boggled, especially when Taylor's manifestation limits go up. I mean, she can already hold together a few good-sized trains already. Emma's crafting skills plus cheap model train cars will really make them lose it. As for the pay, I'm sure we will revisit that when the time comes, but I'm amenable to it.
 
Interlude 4: Villainous Reactions
Interlude 4: Villainous Reactions

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Author's Note:

Welcome to another installment of The World is my Layout. Here is another Interlude for you all, this one placed after the Press conference that Taylor held. As the title suggests, some relevant area villains are putting their two cents in. Please enjoy this chapter of The World is my Layout.



Sunday, August 31st, 2008
Following the Dispatcher Press Conference

Medhall Tower Penthouse


Max Anders, the man known to the public as the CEO of Medhall Pharmaceuticals and to certain others as Kaiser of the Empire 88, threw the TV remote down on the coffee table of his living room with a huff and a clatter. The offending television he had just turned off sat silently in the corner of the room. He turned his gaze to his new wife, Kayden, otherwise known as Purity, who was sitting beside him on the couch.

"Well there goes the neighborhood dear. We're going to have to write off the Trainyards, Boat Graveyard and the Docks entirely. I'm happy that that degenerate Skidmark is gone but the new management up there will make it impossible to make any inroads."

Kayden frowned in confusion at Max, "Why is that Max? She's only one girl with a handful of projections. I don't see how she could resist a full assault if we deigned to make one."

"Because we don't know her limitations honey. She wasn't very forthcoming on that front," Max explained. "She could be able to summon whole companies of railroad police to defend her lands and assets. And believe me, you don't want to mess with people like those. Father told me that in the old days that he gave the Railroad a wide berth. They had the forces to resist our advances, and they could be quite nasty if they wanted to be. And in conjunction with the DWU, they were like the Rock of Gibraltar. At least it was like that up till they went bankrupt following the closure of the port in 1996. After that, the Trainyards were abandoned, the Dockworkers shrank in numbers and the precursors to the Merchants started moving in."

"But shouldn't we do something to prevent another alliance like that at least? Lung probably won't be sitting on his laurels trying to move in the Merchant's former territory," Kayden asked with great concern.

"It's probably too late," Max reasoned sourly, "Daniel Hebert is not a man to rest on his laurels himself when it comes to the interests of his members and their job prospects. He will be all over this Dispatcher and mark my words, he will latch onto her to prevent anyone else getting their claws onto her. Still," He mused, "It might be a good idea to wait a few days to see what happens, then send an expedition out to gather information and knock some heads together, or threaten to, if they get any ideas."

Max's phone buzzed as a text message came through. Looking at the message, he sighed in exasperation. "And Brad is already asking when he and his guys can go down to the Docks or the Trainyards to establish our dominance. That man does not know the meaning of restraint."

Kayden watched as Max tapped out a reply to the man known as Hookwolf. "So what are we going to do if we aren't immediately interfering?"

"Withdrawing our people three blocks from the tracks closest to our territory" Max said as he sent the message. "Not that any run directly through our portion of town, but it would pay to be safe. Dispatcher will want to secure all the tracks she can as soon as possible and that means she will run into Lung's goons first. They hold the Docks areas nearest the DWU building and the tracks up there. We don't want to be anywhere nearby when that fight goes down."

Kayden nodded in agreement, "I understand. It makes sense to me." Her expression changed to a sultry grin, "Now, where were we before we were so rudely interrupted?"

Max shook his head, "I'm sorry dear, I'm not in the mood anymore."

"Aww."


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Somewhere in Chinatown,
South Docks, Brockton Bay,

Eased back in his La-z-boy recliner, the villain known as Lung put down his own remote, resting it on the arm of his recliner. The television was muted but still playing the news, which was still going on about this Dispatcher girl who had dismembered the foul-mouthed black man's sorry excuse for a gang.

A picture of the strange projection in the shape of a girl showed on the screen and he studied it closely. He softly rumbled a thought to the statue-like man guarding the door. "Do you think this girl is Asian Lee? She has the hair for it."

Oni Lee, his mask on his belt, peered at the image, "I do not believe she is Kenta-dono. While her hair is the right color, it does not appear to be the same texture as ours. Her eyes are the wrong color and her skin is the wrong tone as well."

Kenta considered that, then nodded. "Hmm. You may be right Lee. It's a shame. It would be simpler to add her to our ranks if she was."

"Is that your plan Kenta-dono?" Lee inquired, "Adding such a parahuman to your forces who can do what she does would finally give us the power to drive the Empire out of the city."

Kenta shook his head, "If we made any overt moves, the Empire would fall upon us at the first opportunity. I may be able to gradually transform into a dragon, but the full force of the E88 would be too troublesome to overcome. No, if we do anything, it should be undercover, not out in the open."

There was silence for a few minutes as Kenta thought to himself and Lee stood by waiting for his master's pronouncement.

"I think," Lung finally said, "that the first thing we should do is let Dispatcher have some peace of mind. Issue orders to our men in the Docks area to withdraw a few blocks from the tracks there. She wants to reopen the port facilities and hire people to manage it and the Railroad. I say we should let her. Without our men out in the streets nearby, she will rest easy.

Once that is done, I want some of our people, regular civilians mind you, not gang members, to go to the Trainyards to seek employment. I want them to profit off Dispatcher's new venture the proper way. Send her men and women skilled in construction and engineering. If we can capitalize on her need for workers, we can bring more money into the community without stooping to criminality."

"Improving our community's condition by gaining honorable employment under another parahuman is not a plan I think others would believe us capable of making. Especially the E88," Oni Lee declared with satisfaction. "Truly, this is a good plan. Let the racists be the violent ones. We shall empower our community by helping this Dispatcher who shall help us in return."

"Exactly, Lee. You understand my plan well." Lung said approvingly. "Still, let us give the young one a few days to get settled before sending out people to ask about work. We wouldn't want her to get suspicious."

"It will be as you say Lung-dono."

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Somewhere in Boston

Two men sat across a desk from each other. There was a masked 5 foot tall man in a white suit and a tall skinny man in a black bodysuit with a white snake stencil coiled down the garment. Each stared at the freshly turned off television one corner.

The short masked man spoke up after a few moments of silence. "So my friend. Do you still plan to move to Brockton Bay to set up your own operations or has this news set that back?"

The main in the bodysuit twitched in a held back motion of frustration. "It might. Starting a base there would have been risky before, but this Dispatcher girl has set the whole city in an uproar. It could be even more risky if the gangs and PRT are more alert."

"It could also be easier Thomas. If the other groups are distracted keeping an eye on her, they may not notice another new parahuman moving in if you are quiet enough," the masked man pointed out.

"That may be so Phil, but," the man called Thomas paused while his mind worked at the problem then continued speaking, "I think I'd rather not take the risk. If it is alright with you, I'd prefer to wait here and see what happens. What do you plan on doing yourself, since this girl wants to revive the Boston and Maine?"

"Of course, my friend. That is fine with me." The man in the white suit pondered the question asked by his close comrade. "It is true that railroads figure into many of my plans. Their efficiency is without question the greatest of all land-bound transportation methods. Perhaps once she reaches Boston, I will inquire if I could invest in her company and assist in making plans for her expansion. I am sure she would appreciate my interest."

Thomas nodded in understanding, "That sounds like something that could be profitable, both in regards to your plans and portfolio." He stood up, "Thank you for informing me about this news. I wish you good luck if you decide to invest in Dispatcher's venture."

"Thank you. On your way out could you send in Citrine? There is something I need to go over with her."

"Of course."

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Elsewhere in Brockton Bay


"We haven't done anything with Railroad Tycoon yet have we Leet?" Uber asked his close friend and partner, who sat tinkering on something at a workbench across the room from Uber, who was watching television.

Leet looked up at the question. "No, we haven't. I'm familiar with the title but I've never been into Tycoon games in general. Why? Is that something we should look into?"

"Maybe. I'd like to welcome the new girl if we can. Maybe we can stage a train robbery, Wild West style?"

Leet shook his head, "Unless we script one out with her, I'd rather not Uber. She's just a kid."

Uber nodded, "You've got a point there. Well, put a pin in it and think about something we can do with her. We can't let the opportunity slip past us to do something fun with her."

"I'll work on it after I finish putting this new drone together. It's going to do wonders for our recording and live-streaming," Leet replied with a grin.

"Awesome. I'm sure we could use the boost in that department."

The two gamers, the subject changed, began chattering about their next show.
 
It's good to see a smart Lung who actually invests in the community instead of just being a flat warlord. We're waiting on a side rail till DrYuriMom is back, but the content is still excellent.

No Coil after Dinah, so what does this mean for her and the Undersiders?
 
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So, the entire purpose of this interlude was to explicitly de-escalate the threat of villains interfering in Taylor's pet project so you could focus on aspects of the story you'd find more enjoyable to write about, without that potential complication hanging over everyone's heads like the Sword of Damocles?
 
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